hi from my queue
I totally was not slacking off
This set is actually pretty okay so gonna be a bit more nazi
[Insane]
[Easy]
That's all from me o/
Glgl
I totally was not slacking off
This set is actually pretty okay so gonna be a bit more nazi
[Insane]
- 00:01:510 (4) - extremely poor flow lmao. Kinda like wide stuff here 00:00:726 (2,3,4) - and also screw the circular flow cuz the 00:01:510 (4) -'s direction. Something like https://puu.sh/wCrQB/23575c0d71.jpg is better
- 00:04:843 (1) - tbh i will just go full melody here. I understand the slidertail is more passive thing but with everything else is so fitting with the melody except this slider is really annoying
- 00:13:079 (2) - 2 circles please. You are totally mapping the vocals here XD
- 00:18:765 (4) - also poor flow. Tbh just make 00:17:981 (2,3) - straight. I think you make them curved bcuz of variation stuff but imo no need to cuz this part is a bit like the echo so straight sliders also fit in a way.
- a bit concerned about the 1/4 spacings after sliders like 00:22:098 (1,2) - but eeh idk
- 00:27:196 (2,3,4,5) - don't rly make sense speaking about the intensity-spacing correlation. If you're mapping the vocals then the pitch just goes higher and higher and so does the intensity, but in contrast the spacing goes smaller and smaller. The music also peaks at 00:27:981 (5) - but it has the smallest spacing
- 00:30:334 (3,3) - prefer these two being larger cuz they're pretty much as intense as 00:29:941 (1,1) - are
- 00:40:922 (1) - 00:34:647 (1) - choose one. Don't do both lmao stack or spaced
- 00:38:569 (3) - too big. This is the calm part so please make the map reflect that
- 00:52:687 (1) - flow can be improved by moving this upwards. There's still the circular momentum from 00:51:902 (1,2,3) - . Maybe around 155/199 so that 00:51:902 (1,3,1) - form a triangle idk
- 00:53:667 (2,3,4) - not rly agree with these triples cuz the sound you are basing them on is almost inaudible lol. Tbh i would just go with normal 1/2 sliders but eeh at least you're consistent.
- 00:55:039 (1,2,3,4) - please keep the accelerating trend here stable lmao. Increase the spacing of 00:55:432 (3) - . Nice tbh i can see the relation of this and the vocal pitch
- 01:07:588 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 00:56:020 (5,6,7) - but here the vocals go down but the spacings go up lmao. idk what you are basing these spacings on anymore. and the spacing peaks at 00:56:608 (1) - which is the weakest beat orz
- 01:08:569 (5,6,7,1) - ^ imo 01:08:569 (5) - should be around 1.8x (01:08:177 (4) - ), 01:08:765 (6) - should be around 01:07:981 (3) - and so on
- 01:13:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - LIKE THIS why did you do it correctly here lol
- 00:56:608 (1,2,3,4) - a square, a diamond, a rhombus. choose one
- 00:59:549 (7) - this is the only kickslider in the kiais and also with a jump afterwards so ya this really stick out. 01:18:373 (10) - this doesn't count cuz it's the transition phase. Also you map those almost inaudible stuff with triples but this with kick slider xd
- 01:17:981 (6) - why does the spacing drop here orz
- 01:19:745 (2) - decrease the spacing on this one to emphasize 01:19:941 (1) - more
[Easy]
- 00:11:118 (3,4,1,2) - you definitely can improve the aesthetics here xd
- The part starting at 00:09:549 (1) - is too dense rn imo. Just change 00:15:824 (1,2,3,4) - to https://puu.sh/wCtoO/d26ac8cfdb.jpg. Doing this you also emphasize the 00:20:334 (1) - cuz of the irregular rhythm there. This is easy so you don't have many choices when it comes to emphasis but this works.
- Also I recommend that you reduce the density there more. It's on par with the part starting at 00:22:098 (1) - while it should be around the part starting at 00:34:647 (1) -
- 00:24:451 (4,1,2) - poor flow
- 00:47:196 (1,2,3) - not really a fan of this rhythm cuz it skips all important beats XD. use this 00:48:765 (1) - or https://puu.sh/wCtBx/2679c01695.jpg
- 00:50:334 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:51:902 (1) - change this to 2/1. The reverse is not snapped to anything.
That's all from me o/
Glgl