[general]
your sliders could be made much better.
Not sure how I feel about the background not being 4:3. Would this work better?
http://up.ppy.sh/files/album-alien-youth2.jpgHaving the text half showing in the gameplay screen looks kinda bad
You're using some catmull sliders. They have been removed from the editor since they are considered ugly. You don't
have to get rid of them, but it's a good idea.
A lot of times you have claps on every white tick. I think it would sound better to be on just the 2nd and 4th.
[storyboard]
reduce the transparency of the flashes please
IMO, top/bottom/left/right flashes would be better with a tweening of 1, and perhaps be a little bit shorter.
Circle.png has weird values for tweening:
C,24063,24063,25016,255,0,0,255,255,255
change the first number to 0,1, or 2
the background pulse IMO looks better when subtle. I thought it looked good with a scale from 1.3 to 1.31 and a fade tweening of 1.
This loop is more accurate for really long loops (those 40 loops get off time quick)
L,,
F,0,0,477,1,0
F,0,477,945,1,0
F,0,954,1430,1,0
F,0,1430,1907,1,0
F,0,1907,2384,1,0
You've got the flashes doubled at 107979 (it's in foreground, passing, and failing)
[gum]
00:07:852 (1,1,1,1) - symmetry about the axes would be nice
00:47:902 (3) - Either rotate the slider some or make the ends match up vertically. It looks bad 1 grid off, like you were trying for symmetry but failed.
01:16:749 (3) - an idea for some of these sliders that do not have perfectly ellipical shapes: make the 2nd node a red node to give it a sharp edge.
[gnaw]
00:09:759 (5,6) - weird spacing
AImod lists 3 spacing errors too.
[chew]
02:21:831 (3,4) - this is cruel and unusual. Make it a repeating slider.
02:23:858 (4) - remove this and put circles here: 02:23:619 and 02:24:096
02:25:050 - add
02:37:327 (4) - spirals never work well. I think they are better when you go inwards rather than out (
I also made you a delicious spiral):
296,120,157327,2,0,B|320:136|336:160|328:200|320:224|296:240|256:264|224:248|192:232|
02:39:234 (4) - you might have the first slider going in, and the second slider going out, idk. Press ctrl-R to reverse the slider.
[eat]
Should have a "devouring" difficulty
Theres a ton of places you can add 1/4 notes to map the drums. The under 10 million limit got changed to under 16, so you'll be fine.
00:20:248 (4) - end on the white tick
00:44:565 (1,2,3,4) - this is sorta boring add notes:
00:44:922, 00:45:638, 00:45:757, 00:45:876
02:06:097 (1,2) - not symmetrical
02:21:831 (3,4,5) - anti-jump triplet? that's just evil. Also, the guitarist holds the (5) note, so you should probably merge 5 and 6.
02:32:559 - I was thinking a full screen 1/2 jump would be good here, like 3.45x
03:03:074 (7) - I don't have a problem with silencing the end of a slider/spinner, but you can't silence notes.
03:18:570 (1,2) - not symmetrical