Revived!!
Thank youNoHItter wrote:
Gumming
00:40:274 (4) - New comboThis would make my combo's weird and I really like keeping them the same, not to mention the a later combo lasts just as long in terms of time, I don't see why this combo can't have four notes
01:22:947 (2) - I would suggest you not stack these. They're spaced too far away from the timeline. Fixed
01:25:808 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps H-Flip this combo. The previous combo also pointed that way.Agreed
01:29:860 (3,4,5) - All are spaced the same in the timeline but (3) and (4) have larger spacing. It's readable thoughIntended to avoid ugly slider overlap..
02:53:776 (4) - New comboLook above
Gnawing
01:22:947 (7) - Same comment as on [Gumming]. Though it is a Normal this time.Look above
01:29:145 (4) - ^^
02:02:759 (3,4) - Spacing -- It's readable thoughYou said it yourself, it's readable
02:25:884 (2,3) - Spacing. IMO it would look better like thisFixed it to that, what I had was ugly anyway
03:15:232 (3,4) - Spacing -- Readable as is.Said it yourself
Chewing
00:53:624 (1) - I would suggest moving it away further. Unless it's an intentional anti-jump?Yes it is
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - I don't recommend putting three spinners right after each other. Maybe you could remove the last one.Merged the second two
01:23:662 (x) - Add note hereCouldn't really find a good place for it.
02:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - People usually associate this with a box pattern. I suggest switching (4) and (5)'s position.I think the combo line things make it readable enough IMO
Eating
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - Same comment as in [Chewing]. Though it is an Insane...It is indeed an insane, and I think it fits rather well
01:30:218 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Why did you shift from the lyrics to the drums in the same combo. Confusing IMO.Fixed added a new combo, but had to add another so my OCD wouldn't bother me
02:03:236 (5,6) - Spacing. There's nothing to indicate an anti-jump here at all. (Like placing it in the center of two spaced notes.I don't know how I missed that, fixed
Your mod is greatly appreciated.vytalibus wrote:
<Storyboard>
01:52:747 (1) - While this part might be covered entirely by a spinner in all difficulties, it's just conventional to continue the strobes through this. Besides, in CTB they'll see this fully. Fixed.
[Gumming]
01:08:881 (1,2,3,4) - This might be my slight alignment OCD twitching, but are these intentionally mis-aligned?Fixing this is a tad hard since the slider won't behave the way I want it to, besides, it's not that bad.
[Gnawing]
01:45:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Separate (5) from the rest.Agreed
02:08:481 (5,6,7,8) - These don't look spaced-out nicely. Move (6) up a grid, if you may. All better
02:23:262 (7,8) - This is a precarious slider stack. You might want to move (8) away instead of stacking (7) on it.Yeah, I tend to use stacks in a bad way sometimes, should be better now.
03:20:954 (5,6,7,8) - Same with 02:08:481.Fixed
[Chewing]
02:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Random spacing. No-no.Just goes in a square now.
Starting from 02:15:633 to 02:28:983, the spacing seems to have changed noticeably. Specifically, it seems to have become smaller by this mark.This was kinda intentional, I didn't really want to make the spacing as large as it was for this section and to me it feels a tad more natural.
03:14:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same with 02:02:283.Same as above
[Eating]
Ugh, with the grid level at only two, the spacing seems to be wonky in random times. There's too many spacing issues here.
00:42:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here's an example. Look at the spacing between (4) and (5) and compare it to the rest.I am gonna go through the whole song and check the spacing fixing it a level 3.
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - Why three spinners?I already got a comment on this before, but considering two people complained, that might mean two more people will complain, and then two more, and then. You get the point, fixed.
01:14:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Random spacing by the second half. Doesn't look that good. I really don't know how I, or anyone else noticed this, it's so obvious.
<General>
This is more of an advice rather than a suggestion: if you have different patterns, try to space them out nicely. You don't want them to look cluttered and messy.
C,24063,24063,25016,255,0,0,255,255,255change the first number to 0,1, or 2
L,,You've got the flashes doubled at 107979 (it's in foreground, passing, and failing)
F,0,0,477,1,0
F,0,477,945,1,0
F,0,954,1430,1,0
F,0,1430,1907,1,0
F,0,1907,2384,1,0
296,120,157327,2,0,B|320:136|336:160|328:200|320:224|296:240|256:264|224:248|192:232|02:39:234 (4) - you might have the first slider going in, and the second slider going out, idk. Press ctrl-R to reverse the slider.
112,192,43607,2,0,B|112:120|184:80|184:80,1,140,0|800:53:620 (1) - move this slider's middle point to grid x:288 y:80
416,192,70546,2,0,B|432:112|336:48|224:112|252:197,1,280,0|201:13:645 (4) - why not stack it at grid x:80 y:120 ?
256,336,124186,2,0,B|320:256|176:152|256:64,2,280,0|8|002:09:192 (5) - move it out to other grid?
392,120,161137,2,0,B|328:96|248:136|256:240|336:272,1,255,0|803:19:281 (1,2,3,5,6,7,8) - dont make this style on normal diff, it will make the normal players confuse.