Manami Numakura - Climber's High! · forum

Kibbleru

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2017-06-02T11:57:46+00:00

lol to be completely honest i don't really feel there is anything wrong with how i did it.
nevertheless, fixed <3

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Title:Climber's High!
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Artist:Manami Numakura
ArtistUnicode:沼倉愛美
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Kyle73

356 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle73 2017-06-02T12:59:07+00:00

All updated, thanks Kibb and Sidetail :>

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-06-03T14:27:26+00:00

hello!
[General]
get rid of anime from tags as well, it gets covered already by genre

[Easy]
00:04:555 (2) - drum sounds a lot more apparent at 00:04:723 - the red tick is more of a lead in triplet, try have the slider start there instead
00:59:192 - rhythm gets a bit messy in the kiai as its a bit ambiguous as to what ur following. it seems to be following drums as the snares are prioritised over vocals like 00:59:695 - then from 01:01:203 - onwards u kinda just switch over to vocals without much change in the music. there are a few rhythms that could work to follow instruments while still giving emphasis to offbeats eg. http://puu.sh/w9xAr/6aad91e5a2.jpg

01:11:427 (4,5) - transition could also be a bit nicer here http://puu.sh/w9xSl/26d4877c58.jpg
01:24:835 (4,5,6) - should probably avoid these patterns too, as the flow could be misinterpreted as 4 -> 6

[Normal]
01:08:745 (1,5) - makes more sense to have the ncs swapped around here
01:11:259 (1) - then this nc isn't needed

[Sidetail's Hard]
why's od so hiiiiigh. 6 would be more appropriate
00:01:203 (2,3,1) - hm would be nice if you had the spacings more consistent here, using http://puu.sh/w9BYP/fc537eef1f.jpg as a reference in the top right corner
00:17:963 (2,3,4,5) - visual spacing, cos of the stack this looks much closer than you think http://puu.sh/w9C0l/72c2c03332.jpg
00:19:974 (4,5,6) - ee using a copy of 00:19:136 (1,2,3) - would look much nicer here

pishifat wrote:
00:21:148 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - did you like accidentally lower distance snap from 1.4 to 1.3 or something? song repeats the same thing and you lowered spacing by a notch lol

its 1.5 now :thinking: the sections are purely identical intensity wise so try to keep it at 1.4x so the spacing changes at 00:27:181 - are actually meaningful

00:43:103 - mapping the triplet in the music here would be a nice touch, considering you used a decent amount of triplets for the section before 00:16:287 - https://puu.sh/w9C87/d571e69b58.jpg
00:46:622 (4) - most of ur rhythms follow vocals so having the vocal on the slider end here 00:46:790 - isnt that great. could have 00:46:287 (3) - as a 1/1 to map from 00:46:790 - onward
01:02:544 (3,4) - these sliders 00:59:192 (1,4,1,4,5) - give off the impression of emphasising the vocals with sliders so i kinda expected one here too 01:02:544
01:10:924 (5) - strong sound on slider end + the double vocal

could try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/w9CEd/f62d3c4a49.jpg that also emphasises the finish a bit better
01:12:265 (4) - think the clap is misplaced here
01:16:958 (2,3) - the finishes end up on weird beats here 01:16:958 - 01:17:460 - when u originally had sliders representing them 01:15:449 (1,3,5) . u could probably just ctrl g the rhythm here to keep the finishes on clickable objects

[Insane]
00:19:807 (3) - u did a pretty good job at avoiding any filler rhythms except for here. has neither vocal/drum so u could try making 00:19:472 (2) - a 1/1, or stick with patterns similar to 00:21:818 (1,2,3) - 00:24:500 (1,2,3)
00:49:639 (4,1) - 00:52:321 (4,1) - hm personally i find stacking these snares a bit underwhelming
00:53:662 (6,7,1) - angle is quite wide here which doesn't really work well directly after sharp stuff 00:53:495 (5,6,7)

[Kibb's Extra]
take a look at all those previous mods pls

00:49:974 (3) - idk about putting spacing emphasis on this lol, also ends on the snare + vocal z
00:52:488 (4,5) - ^
01:16:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - yikes why organise stuff in 4's when the music works in 3's

call me (or pishi) back

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2017-06-03T14:51:45+00:00

00:11:762 (1,2,3) - i don't really get whats wrong here

00:18:466 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - strong drum section tho so i use more circles
00:21:818 (1,2,3) - i think it is fairly intense tho, also the contrast is better if its a bigger jump

01:19:472 (1) - nc is necessary here imo

00:11:762 (1,3) - prefer not to overlap like that
00:33:131 (4,5) - nah im consistent with these

00:05:393 (5,6) - nah im not really focusing on these
01:02:544 (3) - i prefer to keep this slider structure going
01:17:460 (1,3) - this one has a slider in between

ya everything else was fixed more or less

Pentori wrote:
hello!

[Kibb's Extra]
take a look at all those previous mods pls
00:49:974 (3) - idk about putting spacing emphasis on this lol, also ends on the snare + vocal z
00:52:488 (4,5) - ^
01:16:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - yikes why organise stuff in 4's when the music works in 3's i think i was following vocals o-o

call me (or pishi) back

rest fixed

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Last edited by Kibbleru 2017-06-06T11:10:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kyle73

356 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle73 2017-06-03T17:09:48+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hello!
[General]
get rid of anime from tags as well, it gets covered already by genre Oops

[Easy]
00:04:555 (2) - drum sounds a lot more apparent at 00:04:723 - the red tick is more of a lead in triplet, try have the slider start there instead
I think that having the slider on the red tick is appropriate enough because the drum sound clearly starts there. There's a clear division between this section and the previous one (guitar and drums) this way so imo it's fine.
00:59:192 - rhythm gets a bit messy in the kiai as its a bit ambiguous as to what ur following. it seems to be following drums as the snares are prioritised over vocals like 00:59:695 - then from 01:01:203 - onwards u kinda just switch over to vocals without much change in the music. there are a few rhythms that could work to follow instruments while still giving emphasis to offbeats eg. http://puu.sh/w9xAr/6aad91e5a2.jpg The vocals are very emphasized so I think it's very justifiable to put emphasis on the vocals instead.

01:11:427 (4,5) - transition could also be a bit nicer here http://puu.sh/w9xSl/26d4877c58.jpg The transition leads to following vocals so it's fine as is imo.
01:24:835 (4,5,6) - should probably avoid these patterns too, as the flow could be misinterpreted as 4 -> 6 Oh, changed

[Normal]
01:08:745 (1,5) - makes more sense to have the ncs swapped around here Swapped NC
01:11:259 (1) - then this nc isn't needed Removed :X

[Insane]
00:19:807 (3) - u did a pretty good job at avoiding any filler rhythms except for here. has neither vocal/drum so u could try making 00:19:472 (2) - a 1/1, or stick with patterns similar to 00:21:818 (1,2,3) - 00:24:500 (1,2,3) Fixed
00:49:639 (4,1) - 00:52:321 (4,1) - hm personally i find stacking these snares a bit underwhelming Imo this representation of the snares is fine 'cause the stacking differentiates it from the rest of the section here. Showing a difference therefore implementing enough emphasis.
00:53:662 (6,7,1) - angle is quite wide here which doesn't really work well directly after sharp stuff 00:53:495 (5,6,7) Ok changed

call me (or pishi) back

Thanks for the mod :d!!

Sidetail

1,268 posts

Joined October 2012

Sidetail 2017-06-03T19:10:46+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hello!

[Sidetail's Hard]
why's od so hiiiiigh. 6 would be more appropriate fixed.
00:01:203 (2,3,1) - hm would be nice if you had the spacings more consistent here, using http://puu.sh/w9BYP/fc537eef1f.jpg as a reference in the top right corner fixed.
00:17:963 (2,3,4,5) - visual spacing, cos of the stack this looks much closer than you think http://puu.sh/w9C0l/72c2c03332.jpg fixed.
00:19:974 (4,5,6) - ee using a copy of 00:19:136 (1,2,3) - would look much nicer here fixed.

pishifat wrote:
00:21:148 (6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - did you like accidentally lower distance snap from 1.4 to 1.3 or something? song repeats the same thing and you lowered spacing by a notch lol
its 1.5 now :thinking: the sections are purely identical intensity wise so try to keep it at 1.4x so the spacing changes at 00:27:181 - are actually meaningful fixed.

00:43:103 - mapping the triplet in the music here would be a nice touch, considering you used a decent amount of triplets for the section before 00:16:287 - https://puu.sh/w9C87/d571e69b58.jpg fixed.
00:46:622 (4) - most of ur rhythms follow vocals so having the vocal on the slider end here 00:46:790 - isnt that great. could have 00:46:287 (3) - as a 1/1 to map from 00:46:790 - onward I currently think a place where i do sliderend on vocal isnt very strong compared to objects after it and also that would make 00:47:963 (3,4,5,6) - way too long and would feel bit uncomfortable to play.
01:02:544 (3,4) - these sliders 00:59:192 (1,4,1,4,5) - give off the impression of emphasising the vocals with sliders so i kinda expected one here too 01:02:544 fixed.
01:10:924 (5) - strong sound on slider end + the double vocal could try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/w9CEd/f62d3c4a49.jpg that also emphasises the finish a bit better fixed.
01:12:265 (4) - think the clap is misplaced here fixed.
01:16:958 (2,3) - the finishes end up on weird beats here 01:16:958 - 01:17:460 - when u originally had sliders representing them 01:15:449 (1,3,5) . u could probably just ctrl g the rhythm here to keep the finishes on clickable objects fixed.

the perks of mapping my first hard diff + high bpm.. rip
call me (or pishi) back

garbo

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ok back to sleep (¦3ꇤ[▓▓]

Kyle73

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle73 2017-06-03T19:29:56+00:00

All updated thanks guys :>

Pentori

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Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-06-04T13:56:23+00:00

Kyle73 wrote:
Pentori wrote:
[Easy]
00:59:192 - rhythm gets a bit messy in the kiai as its a bit ambiguous as to what ur following. it seems to be following drums as the snares are prioritised over vocals like 00:59:695 - then from 01:01:203 - onwards u kinda just switch over to vocals without much change in the music. there are a few rhythms that could work to follow instruments while still giving emphasis to offbeats eg. http://puu.sh/w9xAr/6aad91e5a2.jpg The vocals are very emphasized so I think it's very justifiable to put emphasis on the vocals instead.

01:11:427 (4,5) - transition could also be a bit nicer here http://puu.sh/w9xSl/26d4877c58.jpg The transition leads to following vocals so it's fine as is imo.

the problem is that you are following a certain track for one measure, then switch to another track in the next measure while the music remains the same. the vocals on 00:59:528 - 00:59:863 - 01:00:198 - 01:00:533 - 01:00:868 - are also there but get skipped for instruments

right your rhythms are basically
00:59:192 (1,2) - instruments
01:00:701 (3,4,1,2) - vocals
01:03:215 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - instruments
01:11:427 (4,5) - vocal

and it becomes unclear as to what ur actually following. a rhythm that sticks with the same track would be more appropriate

Kyle73

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Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle73 2017-06-04T16:36:17+00:00

Pentori wrote:
the problem is that you are following a certain track for one measure, then switch to another track in the next measure while the music remains the same. the vocals on 00:59:528 - 00:59:863 - 01:00:198 - 01:00:533 - 01:00:868 - are also there but get skipped for instruments

right your rhythms are basically
00:59:192 (1,2) - instruments
01:00:701 (3,4,1,2) - vocals
01:03:215 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - instruments
01:11:427 (4,5) - vocal

and it becomes unclear as to what ur actually following. a rhythm that sticks with the same track would be more appropriate

Fair enough, applied all changes but for 01:12:097 (5) - I opted for a 1/2 slider instead of a circle to help with polarity.

Pentori

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Pentori 2017-06-05T02:36:23+00:00