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steampianist - The Undertakers Daughter instrumental [OsuMan

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Surono
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haduh, yang penting juga ini clear ga ada maslah.. kalau personal gini mending move ke tempat lain
lagi pula kalau masalah orang ga bisa able ya maklumin, pake disabdain gini segala ngewe...

dah dah dramanya.. idk whats happening, if this not related with and more looks like personal yah.. move please or stop posting then
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Maxus
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AncuL wrote:

jadi ceritanya protastic ngomong ke gw kalo lu pernah ngomong ke dia kalo elu bakal pergi (meskipun dia nggak tau kapan). ditambah gara-gara elu selama beberapa hari terakhir jarang online di discord, jadi menurut gw pernyataan dia bener

gw nggak pernah ngeganggu orang-orang yang offline dengan alasan bahwa gw nggak mikir kalo orang tersebut bakal on secepatnya
Mksdnya wlaupun gw pergi bukan brrti smua apk gw off.. wa blm bs bka osu slama sminggu bkan brrti ga bisa buka discord, lu bisa tinggal sisipin message lewat discord dan selesai, ga prlu lakuin rumus trigono atau aljabar yang berhalaman2, gitu aja.

Dan klo lu emang buru2 bgt pengen ngerank blang kek klo ad bn laen yg pngen u pnggil.. jangan tiba2 nyamber gitu.. gw kget lu mau nunggu protas selama 2 minggu tapi nunggu gw 2 hari tiba2 lgsg nyamber..

Apapun lah, not my business anymore .
Eldergleam
Eldergleam
damai please OK ;)
AncuL
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Aslinya selama protas pergi gw sempet minta blocko sama nivrad tapi dua-duanya ngegantung gw doang :(
Surono
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Surono
brhtni eek postingnya njir mau ngikutin langkah q ya weka wake dah, pindah grup sblah discord si bnyk-teman :joy: plis
Maxus
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Maxus

AncuL wrote:

Aslinya selama protas pergi gw sempet minta blocko sama nivrad tapi dua-duanya ngegantung gw doang :(
Req bn laen bs dapetny wktu abis dq, bkn wktu lg nunggu qualify, logic lol.
Shurelia
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Okay okay, kalian berdua harap tenang di forum publik ini. Kalau benar-benar ingin ngelanjutin silahkan lakukan itu di PM kalian.

Lain kali untuk AncuL agar lebih sabar dalam menunggu BN yang sedang bekerja sama denganmu. Kamu tau kan discord / forum pm masih bisa mengirim pesan kepada user yang sedang offline agar bisa dibaca nanti pada saat user tersebut online ? Lakukan itu lain kali jika BN yang sedang membantumu sedang agak sulit untuk dihubungi. Harap ingat bahwa BN membantu mapmu agar bisa masuk ke qualified section itu adalah hal yang GRATIS sepenuhnya sehingga hal yang seenggaknya bisa kamu lakukan itu adalah menghargainya sebaik mungkin. Hal yang telah kamu lakukan ke Maxus ini bukanlah salah satunya. Oleh karena itu wajarlah kalau dia merasa tersinggung.

Dan untuk Maxus sendiri diharapkan agar bisa memaafkan kesalah si AncuL anggap aja sesuatu yang tidak diharapkan terjadi dan untungnya tidak fatal untukmu.

ooh Rivals juga jangan lupa bahwa BN itu adalah sebuah TIM maka bekerjalah sebagai tim, kamu tahu bahwa kamu tidak mengurus map ini sebelum di DQ maka sebaiknya kamu menghubungi BN yang bersangkutan dengan map ini sebelum di DQ. Lain kali jangan lupa tentang ini.

Cheers~
Rivals_7
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You sound like making ancul disrespect your work completely while i dont think he intent to. This is Prolly just a misscomunication between us.

Because ancul claimed that he cant contact you plus you havent been online for 8 days straight is what makes me think (and him) you might have problem with your irl or smth. Who knows what people in internet do. (Tho yes i should probably ask ancul did he even try to DM you, misyakes on my end)

Human being human i guess, mistakes often happen. And just because this is one of his first ranked map, maybe he just being overexcited to it so he forgot that he should prolly contact maxus before making any decisions to moving this forward.

No hard feelings k c: just posting this one because i just woke up lel.

Edit: wup gk liat ada shur and new page. Will keep that in my future work. Sorry y'all
Maxus
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Shurelia already covered it nicely, so I guess you can try to see what he said there.

I won't pursue this any further, but at least just try to let other BN know and discuss with them if something happens to the map they icon, and not just go through things like that like a meteor next time.

Gl
ArcherLove
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Maxus wrote:

hebat banget si, ga percaya gw.
sugoi, shinjirarenai

selamat pak ancul.. lain kali sabar yaa
aku aja sabar meski 2 tahun diphp zenkamiblokodll haaaaaaahaaa :cry:
Amiichii
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Gratz ancul for first rank 'w'

ArcherLove wrote:

aku aja sabar meski 2 tahun diphp zenkamiblokodll haaaaaaahaaa :cry:
turut berduka gan :lol: :cry:
Feerum
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Feerum
Whatever was going on here, i hope everyone did calm down a bit.

I came here because i have some concern about some snaps in this Beatmap.
Since you tried to snap most of the notes very accurate, some are wrong.

[Journey]
It begins here 00:20:345 -

The first and 3rd note are wrong. The Notes should be placed at:
00:20:352 - (1/12)
00:20:386 - (1/16) This one you have correct. It's actually 1/32 but this is not possible and this one is the most close snap.
00:20:433 - (1/12)
Don't forget to snap the LN ending here 00:19:514 (19514|2) - correct then too.

00:26:433 (26433|3,26433|2) - These are wrong. They should be on the next 1/16 line, 00:26:446 - . It's pretty audible.
00:26:379 (26379|1) - This one also to the next 1/16 line here: 00:26:386 -

00:41:946 (41946|4,42000|5) - Here again. Both should be on the next 1/16 line.

00:57:406 (57406|0) - This one is too early. Move it to 00:57:419 -

02:41:514 (161514|0) - Should be on the next 1/16 line here 02:41:527 -
03:08:865 (188865|1) - This one doesn't even have a sound so it's a Ghost Note.

03:08:892 - Here is a tom sound but this one is 1/8. If you want to map it the notes should be on 03:08:892 - , 03:08:933 - and 03:08:973 - .
04:22:217 (262217|6,262271|5,262325|4) - I am pretty sure this one is wrong snapped too because the sound for this note 04:22:325 (262325|4) - here begins way earlier.

06:00:000 (360000|5) - This is 100% a Ghost Note. These is absolute no own sound.
06:01:568 (361568|4) - Another Ghost Note. Again no own sound. Nothing.

06:39:784 (399784|0,399784|1,399865|2,399865|3) - Why are these doubles while 06:35:568 (395568|4,395649|2) - , aren't?
I don't see a reason for this inconsistency.

I think that should be all. Please tell me what you think. I am pretty sure the above mentioned notes are wrongly snapped. Additionally i would like to hear what's with these Ghost Notes.
AncuL
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Thanks for the concerns you posted! I'll try to resolve this quickly. In the mean time, i think it's alright to distinguish the fire
Feerum
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Alright then. I gonna take the Map down to fix the snaps and other things from my mod.
Please reply to it properly so that i at least know what got changed and what not!

Disqualified for now
AncuL
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AncuL

Feerum wrote:

06:39:784 (399784|0,399784|1,399865|2,399865|3) - Why are these doubles while 06:35:568 (395568|4,395649|2) - , aren't?
I don't see a reason for this inconsistency.
06:35:568 (395568|4,395649|2) - is consistent with 06:27:784 (387784|0,387865|2) - , while it's not with 06:39:784 (399784|0,399784|1,399865|2,399865|3) (this part is more consistent with a set of doubles on 06:43:514 - ) - because it's further away on the "climatic stage". though i tweaked this a bit so it wouldn't be painful for the right hand

The rest is fixed. It's just there because of my recklessness
Feerum
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AncuL wrote:

Feerum wrote:

06:39:784 (399784|0,399784|1,399865|2,399865|3) - Why are these doubles while 06:35:568 (395568|4,395649|2) - , aren't?
I don't see a reason for this inconsistency.
06:35:568 (395568|4,395649|2) - is consistent with 06:27:784 (387784|0,387865|2) - , while it's not with 06:39:784 (399784|0,399784|1,399865|2,399865|3) (this part is more consistent with a set of doubles on 06:43:514 - ) - because it's further away on the "climatic stage". though i tweaked this a bit so it wouldn't be painful for the right hand

The rest is fixed. It's just there because of my recklessness
Alright. Thanks for the reply. Yeah then i'm fine with it.
For the BNs checking this again. Take another close look at the snaps
Protastic101
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00:25:352 (25352|4,25392|5,25433|6) - This isn't three sounds, it's just two. Remove 00:25:392 (25392|5) - , and I believe 00:25:433 (25433|6) - should be at 00:25:413 -

00:40:946 - I think there's actually a note here, like a triplet. Might consider adding it but meh

00:41:953 (41953|4,42014|5) - This is probs more accurate on 1/6 tbh. Currently, it sounds like the notes are too drawn out.

Let's hope this is everything lol
AncuL
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Protastic101 wrote:

00:25:352 (25352|4,25392|5,25433|6) - This isn't three sounds, it's just two. Remove 00:25:392 (25392|5) - , and I believe 00:25:433 (25433|6) - should be at 00:25:413 - it's three imo. 00:25:352 (25352|4) - kick and and 00:25:392 (25392|5,25433|6) - pianos

00:40:946 - I think there's actually a note here, like a triplet. Might consider adding it but meh

i like how both of these are actually identical sounds but you suggested me differently. i make both using 3 notes grace anyways

00:41:953 (41953|4,42014|5) - This is probs more accurate on 1/6 tbh. Currently, it sounds like the notes are too drawn out. this was resolved on feerum's check @.@ i decided to keep this
Protastic101
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you should keep an icon log at this point just to show how many times this has been rebubbled because im literally an idiot :thinking:
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
wew why dq

03:49:352 (229352|1) - you might want to accent this flute with short ln
03:52:054 (232054|4) - yet this one doesn't really sensible since the last flute is in the white bar https://puu.sh/wyP65/9297055661.png

04:14:973 (254973|3) - you might want to accent another flute at 04:15:298 - in same column
04:20:487 (260487|6) - ^
04:24:379 (264379|1) - ^
04:28:271 (268271|6) - ^

because 04:23:406 (263406|2) - consistency

05:08:649 (308649|5,308811|5) - any reason to make anchor? this one could be spreaded

05:39:946 (339946|5,340109|2,340271|0,340433|4,340595|2,340757|5,340919|3,341082|1,341244|4) - could use 1/4 (or shorter than 1/2) because there's a gap between flute

05:46:919 (346919|5) - pretty sure this flute should be snapped at 05:47:082 -

06:44:757 (404757|5) - u sure with x0.75? the gap between next note a little closer, different than in x1.0 in game field

loved the way you put SV but still those anchors + LNs (and your 123 S 765 style) gives a somehow crampy feeling while playing

requal pls
AncuL
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Arzenvald wrote:

wew why dq

03:49:352 (229352|1) - you might want to accent this flute with short ln it's on the slowjam part so i think it'd be too hard

04:14:973 (254973|3) - you might want to accent another flute at 04:15:298 - in same column eh i think there's no need to do it because the flute sounds like it's extended

05:39:946 (339946|5,340109|2,340271|0,340433|4,340595|2,340757|5,340919|3,341082|1,341244|4) - could use 1/4 (or shorter than 1/2) because there's a gap between flute slowjam part `~` i don't really want to make parts like these so complicated

06:44:757 (404757|5) - u sure with x0.75? the gap between next note a little closer, different than in x1.0 in game field idk man i guess i'll consult to protastic about this

loved the way you put SV but still those anchors + LNs (and your 123 S 765 style) gives a somehow crampy feeling while playing intended lolololololololollolololololololololololololo
thanks <3
Arzenvald
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hoo i didn't look at the slowjam, if the SV still above 0.75 applying some flutes would still fairly playable, plus its an insane difficulty map?
AncuL
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AncuL
I still don't want to make it so complicated :p
Protastic101
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AncuL
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AncuL
4th bubble done in the map by protastic
i hope it doesn't go any longer
Maxus
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Maxus
well
AncuL
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AncuL
06:27:784 -

HOW THE HELL CAN THIS BE HERE
i haven't touched anything at this part
IamKwaN
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as per request
AncuL
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AncuL
fixed. but since protastic doesn't want to care about the map anymore i have to go the longer way
Bonsai
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AncuL wrote:

protastic doesn't want to care about the map anymore
weak. no stamina. smh
XeoStyle
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XeoStyle
REQUALIF THIS ALREADY AAAaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAa thx
Eldergleam
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3 times DQ :/
:thonkang:
Rivals_7
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01:11:406 - so uhh why the SNs are formed in trill instead of jacking like the pattern after ( - 01:13:352 (73352|5,73514|5,73676|0,73838|0) - ). think you can made it jacked while still maintaining the LN with pitch


01:24:054 (84054|6,84379|1) - was thinking it'd be pcool to 1/2 LNed this for guitar string. + still have the violin(?) tho

01:31:838 (91838|0,92163|5) - ^

07:19:190 (439190|6) - so the violin exist like 1/6 and the guitar string ends on 1/4 so i dont really see why is this getting full 1/1

07:26:973 (446973|6) - ^

:thonk:
AncuL
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I'll apply this later. really didn't look at my emails of these i've fixed all of the issues and made a few tweaks to the patterns around the fixed part. this needs more consistency checks though, especially on the last kiai
Mordu
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The Undertakers Daughters instrumental
1) 04:48:541 (288541|6,288541|1) For those sounds I feel you have to emphasize more, add a third note in the same line, for all the sounds like that.
2. For this: 04:52:757 (292757|1,292919|1,292919|3) a similar situation happens, you have to emphasize more, but not adding more notes to both jacks, try this:


Another example: 04:54:703 (294703|2,294865|4,294865|2) - try to add this note for that one 04:54:865 (294865|0) - That can give you an idea of the type of emphasize.

I don't see nothing else wrong, but still, this mod is too short.
No Kudosu.
Mordu
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Just to clarify, in point number 1 when I said "all the sounds like that" I referred to the "hits", and also referred you have to check all the map, no only further the examples, for example: on 01:31:514 I feel you have to emphasize more that hit, other example is 01:35:406
I feel the "hits" has to be more emphasized through the map.
AncuL
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lol fuck it i'll just use 3 notes on the trumpet thing at 04:48:054 -

also on your second post, you were mentioning the first kiai, which i don't intent to be very hard because i took the theme of difficulty progression throughout the map. maybe i'll consider it if i find more complains which i won't get because nobody is looking at my map

and kudosu is given because it worths it
Litharrale
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Litharrale
hullo 1/5 (checkcount)

my turn for my icons to get destroyed

this'll mostly be a consistency/snap mod since the map looks pre good to me

1|7

00:06:865 (6865|3,6865|2) - idk how I feel about this being two LNs when the sound itself is a single piano note

00:25:352 (25352|4,25392|5,25433|6) - I'm 95% sure this is two notes and not 3 snapped in 1/6 like

It's very different to an actual triplet like 00:40:919 (40919|0,40960|1,41000|2) -

00:26:325 (26325|0,26386|1,26446|2,26446|3) - on a scale of 1-10 how certain are you that this is 1/16?

00:38:973 (38973|3) - this section is sick, having the piano on the left and the percussion on the right is an awesome theme i luv it

00:40:919 (40919|0,40960|1,41000|2) - This is too slow snapwise, 1/12 seems right to me

01:31:352 (91352|2) - Whats the justification for this being so long? It sounds like it should be 1/2 like the ones before it in the same sound pattern (extends to the other examples of this as well)

02:22:109 (142109|5,142163|4) - is a triple snapped to 1/8 like https://i.imgur.com/AEXA7BR.png

02:41:514 (161514|0,161568|1,161568|3) - more than a 2 step here but it's already kinda dense so having this simplification is ok

03:37:027 (217027|1,217190|1) - this jack does not belong. It doesn't fit with the theme. It comes right after the theme. Ree. move 03:37:190 (217190|1) - to 6

05:41:784 (341784|2) - Having this be 1/6 when everything else around for ages is 1/4 is weird, are you 500000000000% sure it's 1/6 and not on the blue tick like 30ms later?

06:52:541 (412541|3,412595|5) - Should be 3 notes

07:33:784 (453784|2,453946|2,454109|1,454271|1) - I dont think these belong as the song lacks that distinct percussion sound here
07:35:730 (455730|6,455892|6,456054|5,456217|5) - here too as well as others. I think the jacks should only be used when that sound appears like here 07:40:595 (460595|6) -

07:54:142 (474142|3,474142|5) - smh big chords only 2 notes smh smh
AncuL
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Litharrale wrote:

00:26:325 (26325|0,26386|1,26446|2,26446|3) - on a scale of 1-10 how certain are you that this is 1/16? 9/10. it's a consistently spaced 1/16 snapping (3/16)
01:31:352 (91352|2) - Whats the justification for this being so long? It sounds like it should be 1/2 like the ones before it in the same sound pattern (extends to the other examples of this as well) it doesn't really need any song-related justifications. it's there to give some uniqueness to the map

02:22:109 (142109|5,142163|4) - is a triple snapped to 1/8 like https://i.imgur.com/AEXA7BR.png changed something but not exactly like this

07:54:142 (474142|3,474142|5) - smh big chords only 2 notes smh smh kinda justified
the rest is changed i think
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Litharrale
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so this is what it feels like to place an icon thats not a pop
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