00:27:249 (27249|1) - you could add a note here since it's the same sound as 00:28:620 (28620|1) -
00:27:592 (27592|2) - consider moving this to 00:27:420 (27420|2) - because the sound seems to be more important
00:28:792 (28792|2) - you could add a note here
00:31:706 (31706|3) - is this for the vocals? if not you should delete it
00:36:506 (36506|2) - ^
00:39:077 (39077|1) - add a note
00:50:220 (50220|3) - i don't think this note is needed
00:52:963 (52963|0) - ^
00:55:706 (55706|3) - ^
00:56:220 (56220|0) - move this to column 3 for pitch
01:09:163 (69163|1,69163|0,69249|3,69249|2,69420|1,69592|3,69592|2,69677|0,69677|1,69935|0,69935|1,70106|3,70106|2,70277|1,70277|0,70535|1,70535|0,70620|3,70620|2) - this part seems quite weird
01:11:049 (71049|2) - delete this note
01:11:306 (71306|1,71306|0,71477|3,71477|2) - change those into singles
01:16:620 (76620|3) - add a note
01:20:049 - add a LN here
01:21:249 (81249|2,81249|3) - delete the LN since it's the same sound as 01:20:563 (80563|3) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8447946 i think snapping like this would fit better since the gap between the first and the second sound is bigger
01:23:992 (83992|2,83992|3) - delete the LN here
01:30:335 (90335|2,90335|3,90506|1,90506|0) - change those into singles
01:31:020 (91020|3) - change this into an LN
01:40:363 (100363|3) - delete this note
01:50:392 (110392|1,110392|3) - delete a note