[Hard]
- 00:32:739 (4) - In my opinion, that would be better to have it a bit spaced here, 'cause the lyric is pretty strong here, somehow like you make this here: 00:34:702 (3) -
- 00:36:384 - Since you're focused on the lyrics till the begining, that would be good to map this beat, because it feels quite strange to play this beat 00:36:664 (2) - after a 1/1 break in this case.
- 00:40:029 (4) - It might be better to reduce the spacing here, and make it constant, in x1.1 like you did before, also I think that those beats 00:39:468 (3,4) - lacks of flow a bit, it could be improved.
- 00:48:440 (4,5) - Why not making those two beats as a 1/2 slider? Since they are in the same word as this slider 00:49:001 (6) - that would be cool to have those beats: 00:48:440 (4,5) - making the "ha" vocal and this one 00:49:001 (6) - "ppy" that would have a better sense in my point of view (I hope you got it owo)
- 00:53:487 (5,6) - It feel pretty strange to have those two notes stacked, since they are not making at least one same beat that could imply those notes being stacked, but I think that this point is more a personnal opinion!
- 01:43:393 (1) - Making this beat ending on an unusual sound is quite strange, you could try to make this end on a 1/1 beat;
- 02:06:945 (4,6) - The spacing here looks quite strange, the distance between those beats: 02:07:225 (5,6) - 02:06:945 (4,5) - are different, that's logic, but why the distance here 02:06:945 (4,5) - is higher than here 02:07:225 (5,6) - but the note "5" is on a downbeat, and there is no reason to make this high spaced. Making the spacing higher here 02:07:225 (5,6) - would make more sense !
- 02:25:309 (6,7) - In a gameplay view, I think that it should be better to convert this into a slider, because this part use unusual rhythm, and it can be quite "misread" by the players if they are playing the map for the first time I guess, apart from that, the rhythm use is pretty good
- 02:45:356 (5,6) - Same as I said before, that would make more sense to have a higher spacing here: 02:45:356 (5,6) - instead of here 02:45:075 (4,5) -
- 03:26:290 (5,2,3) - The overlap here can be quite misread so the player think that it might be it's an 1/4 pattern, try to separate a little bit those double not so the player could not be fool
- Maybe call this diff "Challenging" to fit with the diff name pattern?
- 00:33:860 (4) - That would be a good idea to making this a reverse slider instead, to make this quite harder, and to fit with this slider: 00:32:739 (3) - since it has the same kind of vocal rhythm, and the player would not be disoriented owo!
- 00:46:758 (4,5,6,7,8) - I tried a rhythm here, that would be interesting to me. First, you could try to make this 00:46:758 (4,5,6) - a 1/1 reverse slider, and then making those two beats 00:48:440 (7,8) - a circle on both 1/1 ticks. Indeed you'll avoid the 1/2 beat where the slider where, but I think that would make more sense, since you're following the vocal on this part.
- 00:58:533 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels strange to hear in way of rhythm use, especially for those sliders: 00:58:533 (1,3) - I think that you could try something like this https://puu.sh/vDmlR/cec0973510.png that would make more sense to use 1/1 here, because the 1/1 vocals part start here: 00:59:094 - so that would make more sense to keep this one: 00:58:533 (1) - in 1/2
- 01:19:561 (4,5,6,1) - Try to make this beat less linear so the flow would be better in that case
- 01:25:449 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - (and go on) I think you should try to use more 1/1 beats especially here because this part is pretty calm here.
- I feel that strange to have some strong beats that are not even mapped, even not on a slider, but I think it's your choice anyway
- 00:36:664 (2) - Why not shorten this slider, and adding a note here: 00:37:786 - to add some diversities
- 01:08:627 (2,3,4,5) - Try to rework this pattern as much as you can, I mean, the flow here is not pretty good, you could do much better since you're using circles here!
- 01:45:916 (1,2) - I think that you should rework the pattern use here, because making those two beats clickable as a 1/2 might be pretty hard, especially for this beat: 01:47:038 (2) - because the player will don't have idea when to click on this slider: 01:47:879 (1) - because there is a different rhythm pause gap between here: 01:45:916 (1,2) - and here: 01:47:038 (2,1) - also, you're missing a beat here: 01:47:599 - that you mapped here: 01:45:916 (1) - so it could add more issues to it in my opinion obviously.
- I'm not sure about it, but points like this 02:10:870 (2,2) - are not good to use in Easy because of the high amount of repeats.
- 02:41:991 (1,2) - Same as I said previously, this get pretty strange to play
- 03:01:898 (1,2) - This overlap is pretty meh, try arrange it in a way that could be avoided!