Cursetyl
Cursetyl wrote:
Sup dude, I nitpicked all of these pretty hard in hopes that I could find a lot of stuff to help out with, so hopefully that worked out lol
(Only Mania difs because I don't know anything about taiko :d)
[EZ]00:02:060 (2060|3,2247|0) - Same sound as 00:00:560 (560|1,747|3) but spaced differently fixed
00:07:685 (7685|1) - Maybe this should be an LN like at 00:10:685 (10685|3) ur right
00:26:810 (26810|3) - You established a stair pattern earlier, I think it could be cool to make the part after 00:26:060 (26060|0,26060|3) transition into a reverse stair (something like this) applied
00:32:810 (32810|2) - I think moving this into the 4th lane could better emphasize the sound moved
00:33:560 (33560|3) - If accepting the previous change, move this to lane 3 done
00:35:060 (35060|2,35435|3) - Because of how different the sounds are for these two, maybe separate them from the last two notes (make it 4, 3 instead of 3, 4 would be my suggestion)I agree
00:41:810 (41810|0) - Maybe move this to lane 3, as the section after this one is similarly spaced with more intensity, the spacing here kind of undermines the next section yep
00:47:810 (47810|1) - If you were mapping the LN's the humming in the background, it fades out at this one good point
00:53:622 (53622|0) - Try moving this to lane 2 sure
00:55:872 - I think this would work better here, as the stair feels a little off applied
01:03:185 (63185|2) - Move this to lane 4 and 01:03:560 (63560|3) to lane 3 ok
01:15:747 (75747|2) - This is fine where it is, but I think it could also work in lane 1, just a suggestion the 1/2 makes it kinda hard to read
01:25:872 (85872|1,86060|2) - Maybe reverse these two ok
Final thoughts: I nitpicked extra hard on this one, so hopefully you can get something out of it! Fun dif though!
[NM]00:02:060 (2060|0,2247|3) - Same as first dif, spaced differently despite same sound
00:07:685 (7685|2) - Maybe move this to lane 2, and then reverse 00:07:872 (7872|1,7966|2) so that it's kind of a mini version of this pattern 00:06:747 (6747|3,6935|0,7122|3)
00:09:185 (9185|1,9278|2,9372|3) - Maybe space this pattern further apart from 00:08:997 (8997|3)
00:12:185 (12185|0,12278|2,12372|3) - I see why you spaced it like this, but it just feels very different from the rest of the map and makes a weird disconnect, maybe just make it a basic stair
00:16:310 (16310|3,16310|0) - So in the past you used this pattern to align with the drum roll sound and used a 1,2 type pattern for the bell, but here the bell is more prominent then the drum roll, so I think this should be a 1,2 instead (also would help enhance the song's usage of drum repetition if the pattern is the same)
00:19:497 - I see that you're doing this type of pattern so that the section isn't overly repetitive, but I don't think the spacing should be so dramatic. Maybe move 00:19:685 (19685|3) to lane 3, and do the same downsizing for other patterns like this one.
00:20:997 (20997|2,21091|0,21185|1) - Make this a stair leading into the LN
00:23:997 (23997|1,24091|3,24185|2) - Same here
00:28:310 - I think you're missing a double here nah there's no cymbal in it
00:44:247 (44247|2) - This kind of downplays the importance of the sound at 00:44:060, I would either remove it or move it to the 1st lane.
00:52:310 (52310|2,52310|0) - This sound is the same as 00:53:810 (53810|1,53810|2) but mapped differently, I would change the double to be a 1,3 type of pattern so that the section is more consistent
00:57:185 (57185|1,57185|0) - I would turn this into a 1,3 type of pattern
00:59:997 (59997|3) - This LN is kind of unnecessary, maybe change it to be like this
01:05:810 (65810|2) - Maybe move this to lane 4 for a cool repetition effect with the doubles
01:11:997 (71997|2) - Unnecessary single
01:12:372 (72372|2) - Same here
Final thoughts: Good normal difficulty, a few inconsistencies but still great!
[HD]00:01:872 (1872|1,2060|3,2247|3) - Shift these to the left 1 to make it more repetitive
00:09:185 (9185|1,9185|3) - Maybe make this just a single
00:18:185 (18185|3,18185|1) - Maybe make this a 1,4 pattern again to further emphasize the repetition
00:18:560 (18560|3,18560|2,18560|0) - Maybe make this a double i think the sound is quite strong here
00:19:310 (19310|0,19310|3) - Make this less spaced
00:19:310 (19310|0,19310|3) - Make these singles connected to match the sound same timing code as previous one xD
00:27:935 (27935|0,27935|1) - Same pattern as 00:27:560 (27560|1,27560|0) despite being far less important in the music, try making 00:27:560 (27560|0,27560|1) these be triples instead of doubles
00:32:997 (32997|2,33091|1) - The singles here and 00:33:372 (33372|1,33466|2) here I feel like reduce the impact of the triples, so maybe remove them
00:36:278 (36278|0,36372|2,36466|1) - Connect these together
00:42:372 (42372|1,42372|0) - Why a double here? to emphasize the snare roll
00:42:560 (42560|1,42560|0,42560|2) - This could work just as well as a double imo, but the triple works fine
00:44:997 (44997|2,44997|3) - Once again double feels pointless
00:51:185 (51185|1,51185|2,51372|2,51372|3) - These doubles don't really have a reason to be doubles, I would just change them into singles
00:52:122 (52122|2,52122|3) - Change to a single
00:53:622 (53622|3,53622|1) - Change to a single
00:58:872 (58872|0,59060|0) - Why the same lane here but none of the others in this section are? because vocal thingy
01:06:560 (66560|0,66560|2) - Maybe find a way to make this a 1,2 pattern on the right side, to emphasize the previous doubles
01:09:560 (69560|0,69560|1) - Make this a 1,3 pattern to fit with the previous two doubles
01:12:372 (72372|2,72372|1) - Change to a single
01:12:560 (72560|1) - Move to lane 3
01:23:622 - Should have a double here
01:23:997 - And here
01:26:060 - Maybe add a single to lane 4 so it ends with a lot of impact
Final thoughts: Very cool difficulty, I enjoyed it a lot and I think if it had some more consistency in it's patterns it could be really great!
[MX]00:00:560 (560|2,560|0,2060|0,2060|3) - I know it's the highest dif but imo the doubles in this beginning section don't fit well to the song
00:08:060 (8060|3,8060|0,8060|1) - Triple feels a bit much, maybe just make it a 1,2 pattern e m p h a s i z e
00:09:560 (9560|3,9560|2,9560|0) - Same for this, maybe just turn it into a 1,4 type pattern (I won't mark any of the rest of these two, I feel it applies to the whole section though)
00:24:185 (24185|0,24185|1,24372|0,24372|1,24560|1,24560|0) - I think this is a bit anchored, maybe flip 00:24:278 (24278|3,24372|0,24372|1) these
00:28:310 (28310|3,28310|0) - There's an extra sound here, so maybe differentiate it from the rest of the pattern, I say make it into a jack by using 00:28:216 (28216|1,28216|2) again
00:30:185 (30185|2,30185|0,30185|3) - Triple feels useless, maybe turn it into a single and make this section reflect the piano in the background
00:31:310 (31310|3,31310|1) - Why is this and 00:32:060 (32060|1,32060|0) this doubles while 00:31:685 (31685|3,31685|2,31685|0,32435|2,32435|3,32435|1) are both triples (perhaps I'm not hearing it, but it appears that they are all the same sound), this problem also extends into the next sections because this 00:31:685 (31685|3,31685|2,31685|0) - has cymbal
00:50:435 (50435|3,50435|0) - This could be a triple (I understand why it's a double though, so this one is up in the air)
00:55:310 (55310|2,55310|1,55310|0,55310|3) - Using a quad here feels good, but this isn't the most important part of the song, so using a quad for the first and last time here doesn't make much sense, maybe make it a triple, or just a jacked double
00:58:872 (58872|3,59060|3) - Separate these, or make the entire slow section like these which I think could be cool
01:20:622 - These types of sounds were represented by triples before, but in the most intense section of the song their done with doubles
01:26:060 (86060|3) - I would make the LN in the 1st lane, and then put the single in the 4th lane, to emphasize that final sound
Final thoughts: Lots of potential here, I had a lot of fun with this difficulty, but I would look into some of the inconsistencies
Overall final thoughts: Great set! I had a lot of fun with each difficulty, even if I felt they were a bit inconsistent with their patterning. Good luck with rank bud!
Sur
everything unreplied is applied/accecpted thxSurono wrote:
numpang ngepuz lagi U":
lama ga ngepainos, mau ga kasih gambar kursi kebalik lagi gak? biar menandakan angka 4. atau meja kebalik!??!?!
>MX
* 00:15:091 - tydack ada notes gimana nich?!?! emang tydack di folouwch?? oke oce :oke_oce:
* 00:12:935 - kolom 3 ke 2 gimana
* 00:45:372 (45372|3,45466|2) - kalau ini buat follow instrumennya, 00:45:278 - ini juga isi dong pls
* 01:26:060 (86060|3) - anjir LN cuma ini doang, lu ngemap tekos di mania ya kwokqwokqwokwq??!?!?! mania rasa taiko
>HD
* 00:06:372 (6372|1) - ke 4, 00:06:466 - ke 2
>NM
* 00:41:060 - ke 4 teyuz 00:41:435 - 4 ke 2 biar 00:41:060 - dari sini hitnya jadi 14 23 24 13 *balance atau cacadas? saya tydack tau ngemod apaan ini* kwok
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