Thanks for the mod ! I'll try to answer it and mod you back for Wednesday :3Catshy wrote:
Hello!
M4M from my queue c:General
- 04:52:391 - I think this would be better as a preview point; it's lit af and current one doesn't provide as much hype
- I feel like Beckoning Death as diff name would be better
- Imo CS=5 is really unnecessary; the map's already difficult with extremely high AR and OD
- changing BG's file name might be a good idea; I know it's for the memes but some people may not take your map seriously
- about that bell hitsound, you can check this one; it's from my other map which has pretty cool bell sliderart if you'd need one c:
Death is beckoning
It's beckoning for a mod haHAA kmsBOX BECAUSE IT'S LONG
- 00:00:847 (1) - not necessary, but you could move and rotate it like this to make it look better
- 00:04:392 (1,2,3,4) - after playing around with it for a while I found that something like this fits the best and ads some aesthetics value to spice up this intro (if you're curious, I've used x0.85 SV for first and third slider); of course thatd' require some changes to that stream before the sliders, but I'll leave it up to you c:
- 00:09:710 - you've missed a note here
- 00:09:847 (1) - this slider is too simple for the scream it represents
- 00:14:210 (1) - same as previous; spice it up;
- 00:16:392 (1) - this slider is barely visible; move it to the left
- 00:18:029 (7,8) - make the distance between them the same as (6,7) to keep it consistent;
- 00:18:165 (8,9) - I'm not exacly sure if it's doable by human's hand; on top of that, the flow is awkward here; rotate counter clockwise by 30 degrees
- 00:24:574 (8) - move slightly to the left to match sliders on the other side
- 00:25:120 (1) - due to overlaping sliders just before this might be mistaken for a slider as well; move it to the right, along with 00:25:529 (1) (something like this for aesthetics)
- 00:27:029 (11) - not necessary, but you could move it to x:194 y:110 to create a blanket with next stream (or move the stream but that'd be pain to rearrange it)
- 00:55:392 (2,1) - swap both places and nc
- 01:05:483 (1,2) - should have the same spacing as 01:05:756 (3,4)
- 01:08:347 - I highly recommend making this note clickable;
- 01:08:620 (6) - move this between 01:07:938 (2,3) and 01:08:756 (1) between 01:09:029 (2,3) for nice A E S T H E T I C S
- 01:11:074 (2,4,6) - the distance between those should be equal
- 01:15:029 (13,14,15,16) - this looks rather ugly; please reshape this stream
- 01:26:483 (3,4) and 01:26:756 (6,7) - I'd stack those on top of the sliders for an emphasis on 01:27:301 (12,13,14,1,2,3)
- 01:27:301 (12) - nc on this instead of 01:27:573 (1)
- 01:28:665 (3) - I know it's stacked with 01:27:983 (6) but without stacking it with 01:27:915 (5) as well, this looks bad
- 01:37:801 (5) - stack with 01:37:392 (3) and adjust blanket with 01:38:210 (1)
- 01:51:029 (13,14,15) - I get it, gimmicks... but you're making it so sudden it'll only cause confusion and failscreen duh; you leave 01:51:233 (16) out of stack as well which is even more confusing; and there's also the thing that you use this gimmick only twice(?)
- 01:47:210 - make it clear where's the turn; make bigger angles between turns or nc each turn; also, you should put nc here 01:47:210 (5)
- 01:52:801 (7,8) - get rid of that stack or add stack 01:54:438 (9,10) (I hope you pick 1st option tho)
- 01:56:756 (1) - hardly visible
- 02:03:301 (1,2) - ctrl+G
- 02:06:574 (8) - nc
- 02:08:074 (3,7) - this could be stacked
- 02:08:620 (5) - starting with this you should check nc since you seem to be missing few
- 02:09:574 (9,2) - blanket please
- 02:12:983 (6,9) - stack them
- 02:16:120 (1) - remove nc here (and similiar slider later on); I think you should use lower SV for those as well
- 02:23:347 (4) - this is placed at y:0, ask someone with more expirience if it's okay to keep it like that
oh my god.. I'm not even half way through the map and I'm tired already >.<- 02:25:938 (5,2) - not necessary but would be cool if you could blanket those
- 02:32:483 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - either staight or curved here, not both since it looks weird
- 02:37:665 (1,2) -
space them like 02:37:120 (1,2,3)form a spicy triangle along with 02:37:938 (3)- 03:31:665 (1,2) - why the spacing between those is the same as 03:30:574 (2,1) (or even smaller) if the gap in time is different?
- 03:39:847 (3,1,2) - spacing here should be equal
- 03:51:300 (1) - it's overlaping with previous slider; move it aside
- 03:54:027 (6,8) - blanket those
- 03:54:982 (7,8,9) - stack them like 03:55:255 (10,11,12) (this means changing the stream pattern as well)
- 04:14:209 (1,2) - space them like other circles to make it consistent
- 04:40:868 (8,2) - stack them
- 04:42:573 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is kinda flowbreaking; ignore if it was intended
- 04:43:664 (1) - "is it slider or cicle? I CANT TELL AFTER FIRST SLIDER" ~me, sighreading through playtest
- 04:51:300 (5) - nc, shorten the slider...
- 04:51:573 - ...and make this note clickable
- 05:03:299 (1) - don't put a slider here or change those 05:04:391 (1,2,3,4) into one as well
- 05:14:823 (6,4) - rotate the star to stack those
- 05:17:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since the sounds are getting higher here, the spacing should go up as well
- 05:20:209 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - "hey, it's cute little 1/4 stream between 1/3 streams" *100 50 50 50 X X X X X* "what the fuck" ~also me; don't lower the distance like this; make it clear it's still 1/3 stream
- 05:40:391 (1,2) - try not to touch those 05:39:846 (3,4) sliders
- 05:44:482 (13,14,15) - I was talking about this earlier
- 06:01:527 (3,6) - stack
- 06:06:164 (4) - slightly up so it doesn't touch
- 06:02:072 - nc check again please
- 06:07:118 (9) - move it to the left to make it aligned with 06:07:391 (11)
- 06:08:346 (5,6) - ctrl+G then stack 06:07:391 (11,5) for better flow
- 06:08:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you choose to use what I've suggested ^ here, flip this to the other side for proper flow
- 06:18:300 (2,4) - stack those in the middle of the 3 sliders
- 06:27:300 (3) - lower the SV for better emphasis on next note
- 06:28:391 (1,2) - move it to the top side of the playfield and ctrl+G each slider for better flow
- 06:39:754 (6,7) - stream jumps are fine, but not with backward movement between them
- 06:39:754 (6,7) - I want to see someone FCing this
- 07:10:935 (2) - reshape it since it looks poor
- 07:13:117 (2) - make it symetrical (move it to the middle of the map and play around with ctrl+H)
- 07:16:390 (1) - I feel like this slider is too simple compared to the others
- 07:17:481 (2,1) - with cool sliders comes great responsibility (for blankets that is)
- 07:19:663 (2) - poor shape again
- 07:21:844 (2,1) - the circle isn't exacly in the middle of that slider
- 07:25:117 (1), 07:33:844 (1) - too simple
- 07:52:321 - not sure if nc every 5th note is necessary
- 07:58:662 (2,3,4,1) - rotate it by 90 degrees counter clockwise
- 08:05:412 - this is where you could put bell sliderarts (with low SV)
- 08:14:139 - where's the last spinner for the last bell?
Sorry for the quality dropping through the mod (I'm tired af XD)
Feel free to ask me anything!
Here's a star. Good luck c:
I'll give you kd when I finish answering as a kind of notification