thx for modMitkoff wrote:
Hello,
From q,
looks really neat overall, so some thought generally minor.
[General]
Hs in kiai too loud, i don't hear beats at all , only hss. Imo 50% is fine, at least 60%.
Timing sometimes feels off, but i'm not good at this stuff so mb it's just my ears... fixed the volume also i checked the timing its fine >w<
[Believing]
Lily
[]Kalibe
- i wrote already i'm not timing expert but 00:34:375 (2,3,4) - it's like 25 offset off
- 00:35:186 - also i think this sound should be clicable , cause its inconsistant with other same sounded parts wich You map like triangles ah fixed
- 00:53:632 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - You could simply copy that triangle , because i don't see any reason to make them with slight differences they are copied lol
- 01:06:605 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - ^ same
- 01:02:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - might be better blanket if You care fixed
- 01:27:889 (8,9,10) - same visual spacing? http://puu.sh/vHyUb.jpg -> https://puu.sh/vHyWP.jpg
- 01:33:767 (6,7,8) - ^
- 01:46:538 (5,1,2,3) - ^ fixed all
- 01:47:754 (6) - make on 1 line with 01:46:943 (1,2,3) - as You can see on screenshot https://puu.sh/vHzls.jpg now it's a bit off (copy 01:46:943 (1,3) - move 1on 3, delete new 1 and snap new 3 on time line for making perfect line... but i guess You know how to do that hhhh... sry) fixed :p
- 03:52:619 (6,7) - why did You use jump here? it sounds calm, for example 03:55:862 (6,7) - have strong instruments but haven't jump fixed i ctrl g 5 and 6
- 03:58:294 (12,1) - might be better blanket fixed
- 04:00:930 (1,2,4) - on 1 line? like 04:00:321 (2,3,4) - fixed
- 04:10:659 (1,2) - tone of music goes higher but sliders becomes slower it's make less sense with 04:13:902 (1) - where it goes lower and sliders goes slower toowhat it make more sense it goes with the how tens the music is going slow and holds on to those slider by going slower :v
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- 02:17:146 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - same angle triangles, since it's sound pretty equal by vocals
- 02:48:565 (5,6) - blanket?
- 03:02:551 (1,2) - ^
- 03:08:227 (1) - imo it's unnecessary NC
- 03:06:808 (1) - ^
- 03:43:092 - make it clicable , its really strong
That's it.
GL~
edit: kalibe gave me update so updated!