Hello,
From q,
looks really neat overall, so some thought generally minor.
[General]
Hs in kiai too loud, i don't hear beats at all , only hss. Imo 50% is fine, at least 60%.
Timing sometimes feels off, but i'm not good at this stuff so mb it's just my ears...
[Believing]
Lily
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That's it.
GL~
From q,
looks really neat overall, so some thought generally minor.
[General]
Hs in kiai too loud, i don't hear beats at all , only hss. Imo 50% is fine, at least 60%.
Timing sometimes feels off, but i'm not good at this stuff so mb it's just my ears...
[Believing]
Lily
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- i wrote already i'm not timing expert but 00:34:375 (2,3,4) - it's like 25 offset off
- 00:35:186 - also i think this sound should be clicable , cause its inconsistant with other same sounded parts wich You map like triangles
- 00:53:632 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - You could simply copy that triangle , because i don't see any reason to make them with slight differences
- 01:06:605 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - ^
- 01:02:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - might be better blanket if You care
- 01:27:889 (8,9,10) - same visual spacing? http://puu.sh/vHyUb.jpg -> https://puu.sh/vHyWP.jpg
- 01:33:767 (6,7,8) - ^
- 01:46:538 (5,1,2,3) - ^
- 01:47:754 (6) - make on 1 line with 01:46:943 (1,2,3) - as You can see on screenshot https://puu.sh/vHzls.jpg now it's a bit off (copy 01:46:943 (1,3) - move 1on 3, delete new 1 and snap new 3 on time line for making perfect line... but i guess You know how to do that hhhh... sry)
- 03:52:619 (6,7) - why did You use jump here? it sounds calm, for example 03:55:862 (6,7) - have strong instruments but haven't jump
- 03:58:294 (12,1) - might be better blanket
- 04:00:930 (1,2,4) - on 1 line? like 04:00:321 (2,3,4) -
- 04:10:659 (1,2) - tone of music goes higher but sliders becomes slower it's make less sense with 04:13:902 (1) - where it goes lower and sliders goes slower too
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- 02:17:146 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - same angle triangles, since it's sound pretty equal by vocals
- 02:48:565 (5,6) - blanket?
- 03:02:551 (1,2) - ^
- 03:08:227 (1) - imo it's unnecessary NC
- 03:06:808 (1) - ^
- 03:43:092 - make it clicable , its really strong
That's it.
GL~