@Kyousukee : fixed some stuff from your mod ~ (my laptop shut down automatically and i lost the reply xd)
thanks!
thanks!
Thanks for the ModWinter Story wrote:
one ok rock is bestoInsane
- 00:02:317 (2) - welp. this one ignores the clap as well Yes it ignores the clap. I'm only following the guitars considering it's calm enough.
- 00:06:862 (4,1) - not sure if the current overlap is ok. Then again I've seen worse. But maybe I'll mention this overlap, just in case
The overlap's pretty much similar to 00:15:407 (4,5) - actually but it's a reversed one.- 01:02:862 (1) - ya like i said end the spinner on the same place as hard
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thanks winter ~Winter Story wrote:
one ok rock is bestohard
- 00:02:317 (3) - REALLY noticeable clap over here. Please, fix this - considering.will fix this when someone mention this again
- 00:27:407 (3,1) - Increase spacing between these two. the spacing is not there to emphasize 00:27:771 (1) - properly - ye
- 00:30:862 (1,2) - Not sure about this spacing. I mean, yeah the guitar has 2 snares that justifies the high spacing. But I think it's not that appropriate since the section is literally the same (in terms of intensity) - ye
- 00:32:317 (1,1) - I'm not sure ignoring the guitar that you left unmapped is a good idea. Maybe you can add another spinner? - for break i guess (and i think its unnecessary too)
- 01:02:862 (1) - End it at 01:04:226 - applied to all diff
Insane
- 01:02:862 (1) - ya like i said end the spinner on the same place as hard - ye
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Thanks for ModdingLami wrote:
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00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - can be better design about Aesthetic I think the aesthetics there are fine, a square is pretty nice.
00:35:771 (2,3) - this jump is too huge. if compare with 00:41:589 (2,3) - . Yes you're right. Nerfed.
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Thanks for ModdingKocari wrote:
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[Collab Insane]00:39:407 (6) - Whistle? I think yes... Will probably ask NanoRipe for this. But I'll apply first.
00:43:226 (3) - Stacking this on the sliderend of 00:42:317 (1) - will be pretty nice. Coincides with what you have in the next following patterns and makes the jump from 00:43:407 (4,1) - have more of an impact compared to this whole section just being a snap back and forth You're right about the impact of emphasis from 00:43:407 (4,1) - but here I wanted to emphasize the strong vocals at 00:43:407 (4) - too. It just seemed really strong. Instead of making just an emphasis for a much bigger impact, I'd rather emphasis both of the strong sounds with a similar impact. Although it's not really similar as 00:43:589 (1,2,3,4) - are streams and it stands out than the others more. So I believe I don't need a bigger impact on (1)
00:44:680 (3) - Whistle for that drum beat? Will make this part stand out more Yes, fixed.
thanks for your mod kocari ~Kocari wrote:
Hello from modding queue
[Collab Insane]00:22:680 (3,1) - Spacing seems relatively close. Especially if this is a new sound component to help increase the jump pattern here. Very inconsistent when matched with 00:22:498 (2,3) - since it isn't as intense as the 3 single note pattern you have. - fixed
00:24:317 (3) - I don't think this 3/4 is necessary. I think having it as a regular 1/2 slider matches more with what you've already done. Since if this was how you mapped it according to vocals then this should be the same case but it isn't 00:27:044 (2) - It's not consistent with one another - fixed
00:31:589 (3,1) - This part doesn't need to have a spacing change yet. Since all 3 of the singles aren't the main focus to increase in intensity just yet. It's whatever either way just imo it's better to have the first 3 notes same spacing or somewhat like that - nope,on (1) theres a drum sound and the beat looks different with (3) - so it should be spaced
00:39:407 (6) - Whistle? - added
00:44:680 (3) - Whistle for that drum beat? Will make this part stand out more - added
00:47:953 (4) - This should be a whistle over a clap. It's not identical to what the clap sound that hitsounded with over in the music. Plus it makes transition sound better - okay
00:50:862 (5) - Tbh doesn't need to be stacked. It's just ruining your momentum as the song progresses. Since it's a strong clap it should be spaced or something to add at least some sort of impact to transition with. I mean there is no harm right? Ex: http://puu.sh/vYOLJ/cddb6be317.jpg - yeah you're right,fixed
01:00:498 - Skips quite an interesting sound here. Having this as a slider would make this part sound better. The pause seems unnecessary especially when you can hear the sound quite well and during that pause you're paying attention to the stream. It may confuse players when they listen to it. I can see that sort of pause working here 01:01:771 (2) - Not the other way around. Even though your way for those guitar sounds to represent the music is great. - hmm considering (will changed if someone pointing this out again)
[Hard]00:16:317 (1,2,3) - Very intriguing that you didn't map the sound sound of this but covered it with a spinner when the screech sound clearly starts at 00:17:044 - move the spinner to 00:17:044 - instead
00:27:771 (1,2) - Why is spacing so far here compared to the rest? The time signature looks the same but the way you mapped it presents itself otherwise http://puu.sh/vYP0s/153b6b5b72.jpg I can see you increase spacing for the intensity buildup but it still only at that part doesn't make much sense to have such a wide spacing on something to normal. Makes these jumps seem inferior to that 00:28:680 (3,4,5) - fixed
00:31:771 (1) - Stacking like this may confuse beginners just to bring it up. Since hidden makes people sad - fixed
00:44:862 (1) - Spacing here is bigger than at 00:45:589 (1) - Seems like a forced blanket to make this place feel good even though both of them are identical to match with the music - but the pattern looks nice for me xd
00:52:498 (4,1) - Why is spacing so small here? Strong sounds strong finish to compensate for higher spacing but instead you let that part die down right after a jump pattern that is inferior in sound compared to it 00:51:953 (1,2,3,4) - It's counter intuitive imo - fixed i guess
[Normal]00:09:044 (1) - Spacing is incorrect here. Should've been ~1.5 but instead it's 1.9 away from what was previously done. - fixed all spacing stuff
00:09:771 (3,1) - Doesn't make sense to do something like this because the music at 00:09:044 (1,2) - is identical to what the slider is over. So doing them the same rhythm will suit this 100% better plus it wouldn't make your NC strange - fixed
00:16:498 (1) - Spacing is off
00:17:226 (2) - Ending on a red tick would be surprisingly effective. Since it'll match up with your last slider and adds more emphasis to the fact that the screech is ending, having no sound on that would make the repeat slider have a stronger impact in sound since it's not rushed right after the extended slider.
00:21:771 (2) - Spacing could be a little better
00:29:226 (1,2) - Same as ^
[Easy]00:28:317 (4,1) - Can polish spacing out here a tad bitPretty much about it seems rather clean just the above I wanna reread and see your thoughts but other than that it's not bad Always be positive, and stay humble. Keep the driving force of osu! this way
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no reply = fixedNeoskylove wrote:
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[Easy]
00:41:771 (2,1) - I think this stack can be hard to read for newbie players. - i dont think so.theres a some of map that used these kind of stack on their easy
00:47:589 (2,3,4,1) - how about set square for better visual? - hmm nope
00:56:317 (4) - you can end this at 00:56:680 - , strong beats should be clickable, so I think 00:55:589 (3) - circle can be better. - yeah but at 00:56:862 - have drum roll so i can't make it clickable on the tail and about the the slider (3) i will think about it ~
[Normal]
00:11:953 (2) - Add NC since it has downbeat.
00:14:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - I think this part has too long 1/2 terms, it can be difficult to play for newbie players, and this diff has BIG DS for avoid overlap. You should simplify this rhythm, - hmm about this one you're right but i dont what rhythm that should i use for make it more simplify so i will keep this for now
00:38:862 (3,1) - can be hard to read, for following this flow, many newbie players can read 00:39:407 (1) - as swapped.
00:43:953 (1,2,1) - what sounds you follow in this? I think you didn't follow neither vocal nor drum, just for downbeat? looks really wired since you didn't followed it well. [url=http://i.imgur.com/BhheBBT.jpg]my suggestion/url] - i followed drum here and i know the rhythm looks simply but i make the rhythm like that cause i want to make a break of 1/2 rhythm on kiai section
00:49:044 (1) - unnecessary NC for consistency about your NC term -
totally, 00:52:498 (3,1) - 00:38:862 (3,1) - 00:46:498 (3,1) - this overlaps can be hard to readl for newbie players, and this normal diff has too many beats comparing with Easy diff, it has too many diff and rally hard. - hmm about the overlap i think it doesnt matter and the current beat on normal it just a lot of 1/2 rhythm not 1/4 nor 1/3 which is rankable imo (theres a lot of map that on easy diff it just 1/1 rhythm but on normal theres a lot of 1/2 rhythm)
[Hard]
00:03:407 (2) - why this part has reverse? I mean, 00:03:589 - doesn't need beat fr consistency with 00:00:498 (2) - 00:06:317 (2) - - it doesnt really matter
00:14:317 (4,1) - blanket(Yes , ti is minor issue, you don't need to fix it) - ok
00:17:044 (1,1) - I think term is too short, In hard, I recommend 1/1 term after spinner.
00:31:771 (1,2) - you can make jump this, 00:31:953 (2,3) - for make triangle with it. - but at 00:31:953 (2) - the sound looks low so thats why i reduced the ds and not make triangle pattern
00:40:135 (3,1,2) - looks weird flow - but it works well
00:44:862 (1) - doesn't need NC here.- consistency with 00:45:589 (1) -
01:01:044 (1,2) - swap NC here, down beat is in 01:01:407 -
[Insane]
00:19:589 (3,4) - DS should be bigger than 00:19:226 (1,2,3) - since 00:19:771 (4) - can be emphasized
00:20:135 (5,1) - stack
01:01:044 (1) - ^ - but the sv changed here
GL
Neoskylove wrote:
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[Insane]
00:08:317 (4) - how about ctrl HJ for better flow? this flow looks lilttle bit hard I'm maintaining the up and down movement from 00:07:589 (1,2,3) - here. And the flow break is also for an emphasis to the vocals.
00:43:589 (1) - doesn't need NC Will look for more opinions here. Currently I wanted to mark the streams and separate it from the jumps.
GL
no reply = fixedeeezzzeee wrote:
heya
nm from my queue sry so late
[Insane]
- I would suggest AR 8.7 or 8.8 i mean 165 bpm isn't that slow - 8,5 is enough imo for 165 bpm
[Hard]
- 00:25:407 (3) - maybe ctrl+g would flow better
- 00:48:680 (1) - dont need NC - for consistency nc
- 00:52:680 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - nice, this is very well done. the spacing is perfect c: - thanks!
- 00:52:680 - add a clap here i think it would sound much better because the rest of the sliders
- 00:59:226 (1) - 01:00:317 (2,1) - compared these two one of them is 1/2 and the other is 1/1 but both have NC for some reason. so i would recommend the first one not to use NC -
- 01:02:135 (1) - ^also no NC here if you do that - i think the nc stuff its totally fine imo xd
- 00:11:044 (3,4) - this rhythm is not very good imo, vocal on 00:11:407 - lost emphasis because of the slider tail and instead emphasis on 00:11:771 - which is a very soft sound. maybe try something like this instead http://puu.sh/w2II7/5c203b83b9.jpg - considering
- 00:14:317 (4,1) - blanket can be better
- 00:25:953 (4) - maybe 1/2 slider + circle would be better so you can get the snare drum at 00:26:135 - but im prefer the vocal here than the drum
- 00:26:498 (6,1) - switch NC - i want to emphatize the vocal on (1)
- 00:28:498 - this 1/1 space doesn't really make much sense to me, it has the same kick as 00:28:680 (3) - so why is this empty? maybe you can try 1/2 slider to get both of them? - but the kick on red tick its not really strong imo so im put 1/1 space there
- 00:31:589 (3,1,2,3) - ehh idk i think currently the flow is too weak to get any emphasis. maybe something like this would have a better effect here? http://puu.sh/w2J6M/03b483d4ef.jpg - i like the current flow so keep
- 00:46:498 (3) - check DS i think you wanted to use all 1.5 to make it neater
- 00:52:680 - add clap since its the same as 00:54:135 -
- 00:55:226 (4,5) - try putting them in the middle of previous and next object for neatness
seems like a pretty good map, just some stuff i think it can be polished more
ok that's all from me, good luck!
Thanks for modeeezzzeee wrote:
heya
nm from my queue sry so late
[Insane]
I would suggest AR 8.7 or 8.8 i mean 165 bpm isn't that slowseems like a pretty good map, just some stuff i think it can be polished more
- 00:00:317 - try lowering the volume here because there is so many whistles it sounds very loud imo Yes, lowered to 40%
- 00:09:044 (1) - i think it would flow better by moving more to the right, because of the angle of the next slider http://puu.sh/w2HY3/f08d4f06d8.jpg The flow's actually similar to up-and-down movement here. Just the difference is the note before is a slider. For a flowbreak, the flow's pretty nice imo.
- 00:09:953 (4,1) - blanket could be improved Yes, improved.
- 00:12:680 (1,2) - try switching the NC Yes it's not a downbeat but the current NC is used for separating the parts. And also for aesthetics thingy.
- 00:38:680 (4) - whistle not clap Yes, fixed.
- 00:40:317 (1) - dont need this NC tbh It's needed for markings. I wanted to mark that they're jumps unlike the others. And it's also for at least removing the approach line.
- 00:42:317 (1) - try ctrl+g i think it would make the flow to the next note better Don't think it'd though. Even if CTRL+G'd make the flow from 00:42:317 (1) - to 00:42:862 (2) - better, it'd result in an overemphasis of cymbals at 00:42:135 (4,1) - which is just unaccaptable.
- 00:44:862 (4,1) - blanket is very off lol Someone complaint, fixed.
ok that's all from me, good luck!
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thanks atsuro!Atsuro wrote:
Wo sorry for being late, here's the smoll mod
NawinsaneHard
- 00:32:407 (1) - End the spinner on the previous red tick since that's when the guitar thing starts sounding - cosnsidering,will fix this when someone point this out again
- 00:59:771 (1) - I'd split this slider in two 1/2 sliders to emphasize both strong beats, this is the only instance in which you don't do this and it's a really important beat. - someone aiready pontied this out.yeah you're right beat im just feel when i split it to 2 1/2 sliders,the gameplay its not really attractive when im play it.so keep
Normal
- 00:11:589 - Consider adding a note here, the slider ended on a guitar note and you mapped the next one (00:11:771 (4) - ) so it makes sense to map this one to since it's almost the same - yee
- 00:32:317 (1) - smae as insane - same
- 00:44:862 (1,1,1) - Weird NCs, why are these new combos? It looks like spacing change but i don't think they're necessary, they just mess with the hp - yee
Ez
- 00:10:498 - This small break feels really weird, all the instruments and the singer keep going but you stop. - the rhythm on intro its quite hard imo (it cant be helped,the guitar is so intense) so im just resting the player with these
- 00:11:953 (1,2) - When you use stacks it's always a 1/2 gap except on this one so it might confuse some players. Try spacing it instead or maybe stack it differently - yee
- spinnerthing
GL
- 00:04:680 (2,1) - Nazi parallel line - okkk
ok
Thanks for ModAtsuro wrote:
Wo sorry for being late, here's the smoll mod
NawinsaneGL
- 00:04:589 (7) - I see your intention with the triples here but i think they don't really fit in this slow part. They add more rhythm complexity that makes this section's intensity feel similar to later parts of the map. Will consider this. Because there're only two choices for me here, it's either making a kickslider + a single note, or just a triplet, but sadly a kickslider doesn't really represent calm part imo. I made a triplet as I wanted to make 00:04:680 - clickable to be fair to the others at 00:04:862 (2,3,4) - .
- 00:11:862 (4) - This one feels weirder for some reason but yeah, i suggest you change them up Don't think it's weird though. I'll change this if this comes up again.
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wow big thanks for you realanzy for nice mod xdRealazy wrote:
returning m4m, sorry for the delay
[Easy]
00:35:226 (1,2) - 00:58:498 (1,2) - i don't think these overlaps are a good idea, these 2 are the only occurences of them in the whole map, and it kinda goes against the overall design of the diff which has basically no other overlaps - hmm i think its fine.as long its still playable and rankable i dont think its an issue
[Normal]
00:08:680 (2) - idk this sounds a bit too simple imo, a 1/1 slider on would be better as it would let you catch the higher pitched guitar note and the vocals better on both red ticks - yeah but im prefer focused to this rhythm 00:09:044 (1,2,3,4) - not that one
00:23:044 (3) - this feels wrong as a reverse slider because it implies that it would represent a sounds of similar intensity as 00:17:953 (1) - 00:23:771 (1) - when it's much stronger, you could maybe turn this into 3 circles or something? - hmmm im thinking about that before but yeah cause i wont to make the rhythm complicated so keep for now
00:26:498 (1) - blanket is noticeably off here compared to your other ones
[Advanced]
00:16:862 (1) - pretty noticeable how the curves aren't identical because of the blankets, can you arrange that?
00:39:953 (2,3,4,5) - i think these would work pretty well if you could stack them in groups of 2, like stack 3 under 2's tail and 5 under 4 to emphasize the snares
00:51:953 (1,2,3,4,1) - this is really really hard to read for a difficulty of this level, maybe, again, stack 2 on 1 and 4 on 3 for some snare emphasis and better reading?
[Hard]
i think ar7 is enough here, would also make the spread between advanced and light insane a bit cleaner lol
00:21:226 (2) - weird how this is higher spaced than 00:23:044 (3,4,5) - which are much more noticeable, i get that the vocals are pretty high here but you could maybe tone the spacing down a bit?
00:27:407 (3) - again blanket could be better here
00:27:953 (1,2,3,4) - i don't really like how you use 2 stacks for different rhythms here, can you move 4 somewhere else so players don't mistake it for 1/2? - considering cause it works well
00:31:771 (1,2,3) - that triangle could be more regular, i guess that 3 is higher spaced for emphasis but it's barely noticeable and it looks a bit messy
00:40:680 (3,4) - these feel noticeably less spaced than 00:40:317 (1,2) - and there doesn't seem to be any relation between those 2, you could maybe just copy 00:40:317 (1,2) - and stack it on 00:41:044 (1) - ?
00:51:953 (1,2) - again here spacing is really low compared to 00:52:317 (3,4) -
00:53:044 (2,3) - same with 00:54:498 (2,3) - except that it's much more obvious here
[NaWi's Insane]
you could raise the od to 7.5 for to have +0.5 od with each insane
00:25:771 (4,5,6) - weird how the least spaced object here lands on a snare yet you have pretty large spacing on things like 00:23:044 (1,2,3) - hmm i doesnt event matter imo cause it works well
00:46:498 (1) - just like hazu's diff, this doesn't necessarily have to be NC'd
00:32:135 (3,4) - here again, spacing is pretty large when 4 actually doesn't land on a strong sound even if it's a downbeat, repeating 00:31:771 (1,2) - where 3 currently is would fit pretty well imo
00:48:135 (1,1,2,3,4) - why the whistles here but not in the first part of the kiai? - coz its william's part not mine
good luck!
Realazy wrote:
returning m4m, sorry for the delay
[NaWi's Insane]
you could raise the od to 7.5 for to have +0.5 od with each insane
00:13:771 (4) - i get the pattern you're making, but i don't think it's a good idea to pair it with 00:13:044 (2,3) - simply because the vocals on those 2 are exactly the same, but those on 00:13:771 (4) - aren't so this slider could deviate a bit i guess You're right about how the vocals pairing. But pairings doesn't really mean that it should be vocals though, also how the vocals' pitches are. Like 00:13:044 (2,3,4) - the pitches here are going up-and-down consistently and they're all pretty similar each other.
00:46:498 (1) - just like hazu's diff, this doesn't necessarily have to be NC'd Nope, I wanted to NC this for some aesthetics thingy.
00:39:407 (6,1) - i don't get why you would want to map the downbeat with a 1/1 here when the long vocal is actually on 00:39:407 - which is also stronger due to the guitar, you could ctrl+g this rhythm which would fit pretty nicely since it also lets you click the snare at 00:39:953 - The long vocals does start at 00:39:407 - but here, the vocals are like initializing at 00:39:407 - but getting higher at 00:39:589 - ... I can't explain it well omg. And moreover it's a downbeat too. (And in case if you're wondering why I didn't map 00:36:498 (1) - , the instrument in the downbeat is pretty much different from 00:36:498 (1) - because it's covered by the guitars + vocals so it's pretty faint to hear. And I wanted to emphasize the guitars there too.
00:48:135 (1,1,2,3,4) - why the whistles here but not in the first part of the kiai? Made the whistles consistent to the second kiai.
nice DT farm map
good luck!
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thanks for looking bbyRealazy wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
hey whats up bby
00:08:317 (3,4) - if you're trying to follow the vocals, they're on a 3/4 tick actually current rhythm plays more natural for calm section, and also they somehow lands on red ticks so why not
00:13:044 (5,6,1) - would've been cool to use the same rhythm or aesthetic for those to give the same feel of repetition there is in the vocals many singletaps on calm section isn't good idea for me so i did variation using slidrs w
00:20:680 (1) - til- kappa
00:32:317 (1,2,3,4) - TILTED 00:37:044 (2) - 00:38:135 (1) - 00:48:680 (2) - 00:49:771 (1) - 00:50:317 (3) - 00:53:771 (7) - 00:55:226 (7) - 01:01:407 (1,2) - 00:27:953 (1) - enjoy :^)
thanks!timemon wrote:
Hi, M4M.
[NaWi's Insane]
why are you ignoring the sound at 00:31:044 - and 00:31:407 - but you mapped 00:31:589 (3) - .
imo you should remove the (3) circle on the white tick and map those 2 red ticks. - im prefer the drum on white tick
00:57:044 (1) - this slider looks a bit weird. why not try wave slider - but like this shape xddddd
01:00:680 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stream looks a bit too shaky and the final note has really sharp angle. should smooth it out a bit -reconsider
[Hard]
00:27:953 (1,2,3,4) - very confusing to read, you have 1/2 stack and 1/1 stack right next to each other. either unstack the 1/2 notes so the only 1/1 gap only stacks here, or simply don't stack the 1/1 and give it enough spacing to differentiate them from 1/2 notes. (or you could just map the red tick as well) - azzz okay2 xd fixed (used advanced's rhythm for this one lol)
Good luck with your mapset.
Thanks for modding~timemon wrote:
Hi, M4M.
[NaWi's Insane]
00:02:317 (2) - shouldn't extend the slider past the white tick which has audible sound imo Nope, I wanted to mark that the music is still calm and I was just following the guitars.
00:40:317 (1) - why sudden NC change? The reason here is more like why I NC-ed 00:46:135 (1,2,1,2) - , cuz it's a consecutive jumps and it's a different emphasis from the others. Currently I'm emphasizing the drums. It's also for aesthetics thingy.
Good luck with your mapset.
Realazy wrote:
returning m4m, sorry for the delay
[Hazu's Light Insane]
00:16:862 (1) - why NC here? it's pretty much in the same instrumental and vocal phrase as 00:16:317 (1) - SV changes
00:30:317 (4,5) - you could make the spacing smaller here to give more emphasis on 00:29:771 (2,3) - which are both clickable on snares I'll think about it.
00:46:498 (1,2) - would be nice if you could lower the spacing a bit here to not have too much contrast with 00:46:135 (1,2) - Fixed.
00:46:498 (1) - idk if that NC is necessary also since 00:46:135 (1,2,1,2) - basically all sound the same Fixed.
nice DT farm map
good luck!
Thanks~timemon wrote:
Hi, M4M.
[Hazu's Light Insane]
00:25:044 (1,2) - should be circles imo, 5 sliders in a row is bland and you're following the vocal anyway. I don't want to have too many circles in this part of the song.
00:37:771 (5) - could afford a stack stream here I don't like streams :p
00:43:589 (5) - ^ ^
00:49:407 (5) - ^ same as well, your map has quite a jump, stack streams are not that hard. ^
01:02:680 (5) - NC for the cool final note lol Fixed.
Good luck with your mapset.
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Nggk tau buat sb ;w;KittyAdventure wrote:
SB please ;w;
Eh bolehkah? Yeeey \o/KittyAdventure wrote:
Can I make one? xd
Thanks for the mod~[Nemesis] wrote:
Mod from my queue.
NaWi's Insane
00:03:771 (3,4,5) - I don't like it in terms of readability I like it, it's pretty challenging in terms of readability.
00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of that flow but I guess it's fine I like how it flows though, it's more like a circle flow.
00:43:589 (1,2,3,4,1) - how about a curved stream instead? it would flow a bit better I want some variation from 00:37:771 (1,2,3,4,1) - so it's not just like all curved. Will look for more opinions though.
that's all from me, good luck!
thanks for looking![Nemesis] wrote:
Mod from my queue.
NaWi's Insane
00:57:044 (1) - haven't seen that slider shape in a long time lol - but its nice isnt?
01:01:044 (1) - reattach that slider to the stream pls - for guitar,so keep
that's all from me, good luck!
thanks for looking~[Nemesis] wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane
00:44:498 (4) - curved slider would fit in better ruins the parallel things on 00:45:226 (1) -
00:48:135 (1) - this feels out of place, a shape that has never occured before, I'd just use the standard straight slider bent at the end, like this one 00:36:498 (1) - high pitch vocals suits with the slidershape and also it's not that out of place as I'm putting various kind of sliders anyway w