1. 00:45:733 (1,2) - minor - try perfectly aligning the tails of the sliders like this, so there is a bit of a softer transition going on.
2. 01:45:166 (1,2,5) - I don't really get what makes you change shapes. I'd rather stick to 1-2 similar shapes and keep them through the difficulty, instead of switching between many shapes.
   Note: this is more of a general comment, it just kinda stands out here, so I though I'd ask right away.
   
   Basically, just a tiny bit of visual consistency wouldn't hurt. Apart from that I am fine with everything.

1. 00:20:587 (3) - here and so on - you could use 5% volume green line to make the slidertails less audible. This would help you avoid the unwanted hitsound, as the sliders are clearly meant to represent the fading vocals.
2. 01:24:593 - there's a guideline "no slider should end on a beat stronger than the beat it starts on" and I agree with it.Essentially, you are leaving players unable to click on 01:24:593 - which is the strongest beat here.
3. 03:16:604 (3) - the vocals here clearly end on the red tick, hence, the extended slider feels very artificial. Sgorten it to end on the red tick?
   
   A thing or two here and there.

Ora wrote:

House of KARD

Bakari wrote:

EXO is still better, tbh

Strategas wrote:

alright, there's some things I'm concerned about regarding spread, rhythm and pattern variety.
[spread]

k so idk why, but you pretty much have 2 easy difficulties, I wouldn't even consider the higher diff being harder since the note density is almost exactly the same, you do use some 1/4 rhythms but that's not even close to being enough

[ez]
rhythm variety
while I get the song is slow, boring and doesn't offer much rhythms, but using constant 1/2 entire map is extremely boring, you should use more 1/1 sliders or reverse sliders or 1/1 reverse sliders, there's a lot of things you don't use, which would make your diff less monotonous The 'monotonous' style is what I'm aiming for. Because the song lacks happiness, color, etc. so, I wanted to make something that's dull, that's one. Number two is, this diff is aimed at beginner players, and by beginner players I mean the ones who recently joined the game.

other
00:58:317 - it would be cooler to just make a circle here so 00:54:888 (1,2) - pattern gets repeated Keeping this. Because there's an 'Ah' sound here, so, I want to emphasise that.
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rhythm
here it's a bigger issue than easy diff because:
1. you use extended sliders that end on nothing while skipping audible beats (for example 00:20:599 (3) -) . that especially sucks in normal diffs because you're supposed to be undermapping instead of overmapping. in your map stuff like 00:25:171 (3) - happens more often which is acceptable since the vocal is being followed, but you should still silence/lower volume of these slider ends since they give feedback when there's nothing on the spot you end it on.
2. I mentioned in the spread part, but you definitely need more 1/4 notes especially in sections like 01:36:035 (1) - because the vocals get pretty intense here, while you're ignoring them completely and mapping it even less dense than the easy diff. some examples where adding notes would fit pretty well: 00:27:171 - 00:29:457 - 00:40:887 - 00:42:030 - 00:43:172 - 00:58:031 - 00:55:745 - etc... there's way more you can do Lowered the volume to 25% at the end of each extended slider. Bakari also complained about this, but I wanted to keep it because I thought it could cause confusion, and didn't even try it. Anyways, fixed.

variety here is much better than easy but you could still add some more with repeat sliders or 1/1 sliders

other
02:21:182 (5) - doesn't fit as a circle that well because there's a pretty faint sound here, having it as a slider end would be better, for example if you make 02:20:610 (4) - into a 1/2 slider
02:41:756 (3) - similar to above
Fixed these two ^
you can call bakari for rebub after you fix those things and I'll qualify. if you don't understand something or need more suggestions - ask

Bakari wrote:

Okay, maybe BTS is better than EXO

Rebubbled!

Bakari wrote:

Okay, maybe EXO is better than BTS

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

please we all know exo >>>> bts