Lapis Aoki wrote:

I guess this is the last mod before Celsius checks this.. Placeholder after 7474737289201664 years then.

Firetruck wrote:

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I guess this is the last mod before Celsius checks this.. Placeholder after 7474737289201664 years then.

I CLICKED THE NUMBERS ON MY PHONE AND ACCIDENTLY CALLED SOMEONE

Lapis Aoki wrote:

D Rank: Strong Survivor
C Rank: Proud Stream Master
B Rank: True Champion
A Rank: Legend above Legends
S Rank: Holy hot Yoongi..
SS Rank: HOLY HOT YOONGI. I bet hot Yoongi himself can't even SS this. How did you even SS this?

Krfawy wrote:

Hello Lapis, nice to see you back to the mapping industry! \:3/ A mod as requested in my *BLEEDING QUEUE*

General

1. First, personally I think you should use "soft-finish" hitsound on every sound like 00:20:587 - here or 00:22:874 - there and 00:25:159 - here and so on because the instrument really screams for to be hitsounded with this custom finish. I know your intention was to make the beginning seem interesting and emphasized in comparison to the rest of the map but it leaves players, like me, feel unsatisfied! >:o Of course, that would be great to mix those finishes with whistles! \o3o/ O sure added. owo

Easy

1. 02:30:886 (1) - I just feel this note would be played nicer as a slider so it emphasizes the vocals more. :V My version of how I see it: *CLICK* Note that the previous note and the notes after the slider and a circle (02:29:743 (4) - and 02:33:171 (3) - ) are still untouched in my version. I don't think so. In this part, I'd only like to emphasize the tick sound instead of the vocals.
2. 03:23:462 (1) - I would actually delete this note and exted the previous slider with one reversing more as the moment is really ambiguous to click as the vocals are more powerful here and it's not clear which second should be clicked exactly. x'D Yeah, you're right, fixed!

Collapsing

1. 00:53:448 - I see how beautiful blanket you've mapped there but it would be benefitial for you to map a circle here, you know. ;_; rip beautiful blanket, added a circle there.
2. 02:06:598 - As above. ^
3. 03:02:889 (1,2) - Just for the sake of readibility, I suggest you make the order of notes clearer like *HERE* fiiiiiiiiiiiixed

OMG this mapset is sooooo gorgeous. I love HQ maps SO MUCH! ♥

Good luck Lapis, get some BNs for this map! \o3o/

~ ♥ ~ ♥ ~ ♥ ~ ♥ ~

- Frontier - wrote:

sorry for late mod ;w;

[Easy]

1. 01:38:309 (3,1) - (1) is slightly not parallel with (3). You could copy this code to make them parallel. (If you fix this, you should fix (2) too) Fixed.
   

   316,260,100595,6,0,L|154:296,1,142,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Collap sing]

1. 01:22:308 (1) - maybe move this below to make it more flow Fixed.
2. 02:42:315 (1) - why there isn't decreasing volume here? Since in Easy diff there is. This is a slider, I don't think it's important.

Maybe you could put "CD2" in tags too No need.

Good map and Good song! Good luck!
Oh! And I hope you feel better soon.

Lapis Aoki wrote:

I guess this is the last mod before Celsius checks this..

1. Each and every hitsound should be at least 100ms long. This is a rle and it is done to avoid issues with soundcards. You might want to add some extra silence at the end of the following hitsounds to make them rankable:
   
   1. soft-hitclap3.wav 28.46ms
   2. soft-hitwhistle3.wav 92.34ms (this one has a delay as well, so you should cut the beginning and some silince at the end)
2. soft-hitclap3.wav has its peak volume somewhere near the end of the wav file, by the way. If I were you I would chack to make sure it is exactly the way you want it to sound.
3. I am not too hapy with the way these difficulties are named. The diffnames are not connected with each other in any way and no visible progression can be seen. While I do agree that they're rankable, I'd rather have more generic difficulty names like Easy/Advanced or fully custom ones like Sleeping/Dancing. This would just make the set seem more consistent.

1. 00:20:016 (2) - 00:29:161 (2) - 00:40:589 (3,2) - the circles here don't work with the rhythm you try to introduce. Most of the sliders are build around vocals and this is why the circles feel out of place. Moreover, circles give extra emphasis to those minor beats, whereas beats like 00:42:303 - 00:49:161 - don't even have any clickable objects.
   Note: would apply to all similar circles unsupported by the vocals.
   
   
   Not really satisfied with the way you've used circles in the parts of the song I've mentioned. Apart from that it is quite okay.

1. 00:20:016 (2) - the same issue as the one I have mentioned on Easy. What happens is that beats like 00:19:444 - which are strong enough get literally no emphasis, whereas something as minor as 00:20:015 - gets a circle (which requires a lot of accuracy to hit and in general gives a lot more feedback than a slidertail).
   The best way to solve this is to use 1/2 sliders like this, or just ignore the beats on red ticks completely.
2. 00:25:159 (3,1) - these are the only two overlaps, so it feels sort of random to have them. I would probably try to avoid them, unless it's done to represent some specific parts of the vocals.
   
   Some slidershapes/patterns are pretty random in terms of shaspes/consistency (take 01:01:734 (3,4) - as an example). Otherwise it's okay.

1. 00:45:733 (1,2) - minor - try perfectly aligning the tails of the sliders like this, so there is a bit of a softer transition going on.
2. 01:45:166 (1,2,5) - I don't really get what makes you change shapes. I'd rather stick to 1-2 similar shapes and keep them through the difficulty, instead of switching between many shapes.
   Note: this is more of a general comment, it just kinda stands out here, so I though I'd ask right away.
   
   Basically, just a tiny bit of visual consistency wouldn't hurt. Apart from that I am fine with everything.

1. 00:20:587 (3) - here and so on - you could use 5% volume green line to make the slidertails less audible. This would help you avoid the unwanted hitsound, as the sliders are clearly meant to represent the fading vocals.
2. 01:24:593 - there's a guideline "no slider should end on a beat stronger than the beat it starts on" and I agree with it.Essentially, you are leaving players unable to click on 01:24:593 - which is the strongest beat here.
3. 03:16:604 (3) - the vocals here clearly end on the red tick, hence, the extended slider feels very artificial. Sgorten it to end on the red tick?
   
   A thing or two here and there.

Ora wrote:

House of KARD

Bakari wrote:

EXO is still better, tbh

Strategas wrote:

alright, there's some things I'm concerned about regarding spread, rhythm and pattern variety.
[spread]

k so idk why, but you pretty much have 2 easy difficulties, I wouldn't even consider the higher diff being harder since the note density is almost exactly the same, you do use some 1/4 rhythms but that's not even close to being enough

[ez]
rhythm variety
while I get the song is slow, boring and doesn't offer much rhythms, but using constant 1/2 entire map is extremely boring, you should use more 1/1 sliders or reverse sliders or 1/1 reverse sliders, there's a lot of things you don't use, which would make your diff less monotonous The 'monotonous' style is what I'm aiming for. Because the song lacks happiness, color, etc. so, I wanted to make something that's dull, that's one. Number two is, this diff is aimed at beginner players, and by beginner players I mean the ones who recently joined the game.

other
00:58:317 - it would be cooler to just make a circle here so 00:54:888 (1,2) - pattern gets repeated Keeping this. Because there's an 'Ah' sound here, so, I want to emphasise that.
[collapsing]

rhythm
here it's a bigger issue than easy diff because:
1. you use extended sliders that end on nothing while skipping audible beats (for example 00:20:599 (3) -) . that especially sucks in normal diffs because you're supposed to be undermapping instead of overmapping. in your map stuff like 00:25:171 (3) - happens more often which is acceptable since the vocal is being followed, but you should still silence/lower volume of these slider ends since they give feedback when there's nothing on the spot you end it on.
2. I mentioned in the spread part, but you definitely need more 1/4 notes especially in sections like 01:36:035 (1) - because the vocals get pretty intense here, while you're ignoring them completely and mapping it even less dense than the easy diff. some examples where adding notes would fit pretty well: 00:27:171 - 00:29:457 - 00:40:887 - 00:42:030 - 00:43:172 - 00:58:031 - 00:55:745 - etc... there's way more you can do Lowered the volume to 25% at the end of each extended slider. Bakari also complained about this, but I wanted to keep it because I thought it could cause confusion, and didn't even try it. Anyways, fixed.

variety here is much better than easy but you could still add some more with repeat sliders or 1/1 sliders

other
02:21:182 (5) - doesn't fit as a circle that well because there's a pretty faint sound here, having it as a slider end would be better, for example if you make 02:20:610 (4) - into a 1/2 slider
02:41:756 (3) - similar to above
Fixed these two ^
you can call bakari for rebub after you fix those things and I'll qualify. if you don't understand something or need more suggestions - ask

Bakari wrote:

Okay, maybe BTS is better than EXO

Rebubbled!

Bakari wrote:

Okay, maybe EXO is better than BTS

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

please we all know exo >>>> bts