Orangestar - Kimi no Yozora Shoukaihan · forum

-Keitaro

Joined October 2013

-Keitaro 2017-05-10T08:24:54+00:00

from my queue
~~M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/584575~~ just take this as NM

Im going to be kinda nazi here :p

[Easy]
00:02:077 (2,1) - Fix blanket
00:12:131 (2) - x:288 y:160 would flow better
00:13:104 (4,1) - Fix blanket
00:17:644 (3) - make it simmiliar with 00:16:347 (1) - ?
00:34:509 (1) - This feels kinda, late, maybe move to 00:34:347 ?
00:37:104 (1) - You seems doesn't use the while anchor, remove it?
01:38:077 (3) - Well you can create a blanket with 01:39:374 (1) -
01:41:320 (1,2,3) - These doesn't reflect any parts of the music imo
01:46:509 (2,3) - Fix blanket
02:43:590 (5,1) - ^

[Normal]
00:29:239 (1) - starts 00:29:320
00:31:671 (1) - Is this really necessary? even so its starts 00:31:915 and ends 00:33:212
02:05:239 (1) - starts 02:05:320

sry cant mod anything in this diffs except the spinners, im suck at modding normal and the diff is good xd

[Hard]
00:25:915 (3) - Make it a bit upper in the tail so it will looks good with 00:26:401 (4) - and move it a bit so the blanket wont get ruined
00:45:536 (3,2) - imo, stack them?
01:40:509 (1,3) - fix them a bit

[Insane]
01:26:401 (1,4) - fix stack
01:39:374 (1,3) - fix the parallel, its not completely perfect
02:17:807 (4,2) - Fix blanket xd
02:51:536 (1,1) - Dont NC them

[Starlight]
00:35:158 (3) - x:196 y:244?
00:45:536 (3) - x:244 y:72?
01:14:726 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:43:915 (4,1) - similliar plz
01:48:617 (2,4) - ^
02:17:320 (2,1) - ^

sry if this is too nazi
anywy good map, gl!

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2017-05-10T08:54:50+00:00

hi
from my modding q

hard:
00:01:266 (3,1) - stack it properly
00:36:942 (1) - remove nc
00:37:104 (2) - nc
00:43:590 (2) - put an object here because of the drums?
02:02:563 (1) - lagay mo yan dito? 02:02:725 - . Siguro i match mo na lang sa instrumental parang ang weird kasi kapag dyan naka lagay
02:24:455 (4,1) - unstack mo para emphasize yung 1/1 slider
02:26:401 (2) - clap?
02:43:428 (2) - remove clap. nakakalito na yung rhythm

Insane:
01:09:374 (1) - ctrl+j tapos ibalik mo nalang sa dating pwesto ? para umayos ng onti yung flow
01:53:807 (2,3) - stack mo nalang toh dito 01:52:834 (5,6,7) -
02:02:563 (1) - same don sa hard diff
02:37:104 (3,4,5) - remap? wala naman akong naririnig na 1/4 dito
02:38:401 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:46:671 (1) - ilayo mo don sa previous note para ma emphasize yung finish at yung 1/1 slider

that's all
parang sabog yung mp3 ng ginagamit mo
good luck
ganda ng map mo

Last edited by Shishou 2017-05-10T13:09:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Shishou 2017-05-10T08:55:50+00:00

hi
from my modding q

hard:
00:01:266 (3,1) - stack it properly
00:36:942 (1) - remove nc
00:37:104 (2) - nc
00:43:590 (2) - put an object here because of the drums?
02:02:563 (1) - lagay mo yan dito? 02:02:725 - . Siguro i match mo na lang sa instrumental parang ang weird kasi kapag dyan naka lagay
02:24:455 (4,1) - unstack mo para emphasize yung 1/1 slider
02:26:401 (2) - clap?
02:43:428 (2) - remove clap. nakakalito na yung rhythm

Insane:
01:09:374 (1) - ctrl+j tapos ibalik mo nalang sa dating pwesto ? para umayos ng onti yung flow
01:53:807 (2,3) - stack mo nalang toh dito 01:52:834 (5,6,7) -
02:02:563 (1) - same don sa hard diff
02:37:104 (3,4,5) - remap? wala naman akong naririnig na 1/4 dito
02:38:401 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:46:671 (1) - ilayo mo don sa previous note para ma emphasize yung finish at yung 1/1 slider

that's all
btw palitan mo siguro mp3 mo? parang sabog yung audio
good luck
ganda ng map mo

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-10T10:26:09+00:00

Error- wrote:
from my queue
~~M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/584575~~ just take this as NM

Im going to be kinda nazi here :p

[Normal]
00:29:239 (1) - starts 00:29:320 fixed
00:31:671 (1) - Is this really necessary? even so its starts 00:31:915 and ends 00:33:212 it's to emphasize the new vocal, also so the spinner wont be too long lol (+ ranking criteria if youre wondering about spinner length)
02:05:239 (1) - starts 02:05:320 also fixed

sry cant mod anything in this diffs except the spinners, im suck at modding normal and the diff is good xd

[Hard]
00:25:915 (3) - Make it a bit upper in the tail so it will looks good with 00:26:401 (4) - and move it a bit so the blanket wont get ruined i think it looks fine, i can see where youre coming from tho
00:45:536 (3,2) - imo, stack them? sure
01:40:509 (1,3) - fix them a bit if by fix you mean the blanket then yeah

[Insane]
01:26:401 (1,4) - fix stack oops
01:39:374 (1,3) - fix the parallel, its not completely perfect nice eye
02:17:807 (4,2) - Fix blanket xd balls
02:51:536 (1,1) - Dont NC them it's for emphasis sort of, also to show off colorhax (since the top 2 are 1 color and the bottom 2 are another)

[Starlight]
00:35:158 (3) - x:196 y:244? 00:35:158 (3,5,1) - is supposed to form a straight line
00:45:536 (3) - x:244 y:72? same reasoning except this time it's 00:45:536 (3,5,1) -
01:14:726 (3,4) - fix blanket fixed whoops
01:43:915 (4,1) - similliar plz made parallel (im assuming this is what you mean)
01:48:617 (2,4) - ^ yeah
02:17:320 (2,1) - ^ yeah, tho in this case it was a stack issue instead of overlap problems

sry if this is too nazi dw i fix all nazimods usually lmao
anywy good map, gl! thanks!

Shishou wrote:
hi
from my modding q nice doublepost

hard:
00:01:266 (3,1) - stack it properly they are stacked tho :thinking:
00:36:942 (1) - remove nc oops lol fixed
00:37:104 (2) - nc yeah
00:43:590 (2) - put an object here because of the drums? the transition from vocal to percussion would be too harsh imo if i did this, i feel that the current version transitions between them smoother
02:02:563 (1) - lagay mo yan dito? 02:02:725 - . Siguro i match mo na lang sa instrumental parang ang weird kasi kapag dyan naka lagay parang mas malakas ang vocal dito kesa sa instrumental eh
02:24:455 (4,1) - unstack mo para emphasize yung 1/1 slider sige
02:26:401 (2) - clap? oshit
02:43:428 (2) - remove clap. nakakalito na yung rhythm ok

Insane:
01:09:374 (1) - ctrl+j tapos ibalik mo nalang sa dating pwesto ? para umayos ng onti yung flow sure
01:53:807 (2,3) - stack mo nalang toh dito 01:52:834 (5,6,7) - may stack naman sa sliderend
02:02:563 (1) - same don sa hard diff same reasoning sa hard
02:37:104 (3,4,5) - remap? wala naman akong naririnig na 1/4 dito 1/4 yung guitar
02:38:401 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:46:671 (1) - ilayo mo don sa previous note para ma emphasize yung finish at yung 1/1 slider sure

that's all
btw palitan mo siguro mp3 mo? parang sabog yung audio idk, ok naman ang audio imo
good luck
ganda ng map mo thx uwu

edit: ive edited this post tons of times fixing text color inconsistencies in replies kms

thanks for modding!

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-05-10T15:21:47+00:00

Error- wrote:
from my queue
~~M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/584575~~ just take this as NM

Im going to be kinda nazi here :p

[Easy]
00:02:077 (2,1) - Fix blanket
00:12:131 (2) - x:288 y:160 would flow better It's okay imo
00:13:104 (4,1) - Fix blanket
00:17:644 (3) - make it simmiliar with 00:16:347 (1) - ? yes
00:34:509 (1) - This feels kinda, late, maybe move to 00:34:347 ? yes
00:37:104 (1) - You seems doesn't use the while anchor, remove it? yes
01:38:077 (3) - Well you can create a blanket with 01:39:374 (1) -
01:41:320 (1,2,3) - These doesn't reflect any parts of the music imo Still following Vocals :V
01:46:509 (2,3) - Fix blanket
02:43:590 (5,1) - ^

sry if this is too nazi
anywy good map, gl!

Didn't changed any from the Blanket Points because Blanket are not necessary (at least for me xd)
thank!

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osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 33779
Countdown: 0
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

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Title:Kimi no Yozora Shoukaihan
TitleUnicode:キミノヨゾラ哨戒班
Artist:Orangestar
ArtistUnicode:Orangestar
Creator:newton-
Version:Kanan's Easy
Source:
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-Zeraora

654 posts

Joined November 2014

-Zeraora 2017-05-11T03:52:02+00:00

- - Normal Mod from Queue - -

[Kanan's Easy]

00:00:780 (1) - I find it weird how this is the only slider with this length considering that the other similarly patterned (by sound) parts (00:03:374 (1,2,1,2) - ) are mapped in a different manner.
00:02:077 (2,1) - Blanket is a bit off at the tail.
00:08:563 (1) - Hm... I feel like the reverse isn't representing much of the song here. It's okay I guess for transition, but I think it's a bit undermapped.
00:13:752 (1) - Same with the reverse thing above. It feels out of place considering the adjacent parts.
00:20:239 - Just a suggestion for pattern. I think it'll represent the song more to have a 1/1 reverse slider at 00:20:239 (2) - , circle then another one.
00:34:509 (1) - The vocal hits at 00:34:347 - . I'm pretty sure there's nothing wrong with starting there. Also how it starts at the white tick is really jarring.
00:44:725 - to 00:49:428 - I'd really recommend to have more consistency in mapping here (in relation to the start of the first kiai). Nothing much has changed in the song.
00:48:779 (3,1) - Awkward pause imo
01:00:293 (1) - For flow, I suggest putting this at (368,160).
01:41:320 (1) - This part feels undermapped , and also unfitting with the current section.
01:44:239 (3) - same as above.
02:10:509 - and onwards - I really like the rhythm choice here tbh
02:44:239 (1,2) - imo, flows like this would only work best in emphasizing sounds. Situations where it is used otherwise just make the flow poor.

I think this diff could be improved more. Especially in the first parts, since the last ones seem okay.

[Starlight]

I'm not sure about that 2 stack leniency.
00:02:725 (4) - Hm... This seems emphasized but not 00:04:023 (4) - as well. The two parts have similar rhythm so I feel like you should emphasize the other one as well.
00:36:445 (4) - Really off time to put a reverse slider. imo, it would make sense more if you were to put in at 00:36:121 (2) - . (But maybe you're mapping the faint sound in the background idk lol)
00:41:310 (4) - If you're mapping the faint thing in the background, I feel like it would be best to unstack these since the stacks were used for vocals.
01:07:266 (4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe map this the same way as 01:02:077 (4,5,6,7,8) - and 01:12:455 (4,5,6,7,8) - for consistency? I mean, similar sounds hit at these parts.
01:57:536 - I feel like this section of the map should have lower intensity, DS-wise. Right now, it just kinda feels like the same as the next section, which is weird.
02:39:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I can't seem to hear where you're basing the jumps from. With the current jumps, it fits on 02:39:698 (1,2,3,4) - , but for the others, not really. Like, 02:39:212 (2) - . This feels emphasized but it isn't really mapped to a really significant sound in the song.
02:51:374 (1,1,1,1) - No need for a NC spam.

Good luck!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-11T04:07:36+00:00

-Harpuia- wrote:
- - Normal Mod from Queue - -

[Starlight]
I'm not sure about that 2 stack leniency. it's not unrankable + it makes stacks look neater so
00:02:725 (4) - Hm... This seems emphasized but not 00:04:023 (4) - as well. The two parts have similar rhythm so I feel like you should emphasize the other one as well. i agree, fixed
00:36:445 (4) - Really off time to put a reverse slider. imo, it would make sense more if you were to put in at 00:36:121 (2) - . (But maybe you're mapping the faint sound in the background idk lol) the reverse slider was more to act as filler rhythm, since there's a pause in the vocals which im following at that part
00:41:310 (4) - If you're mapping the faint thing in the background, I feel like it would be best to unstack these since the stacks were used for vocals. there's a vocal on the head so i think the stack should stay
01:07:266 (4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe map this the same way as 01:02:077 (4,5,6,7,8) - and 01:12:455 (4,5,6,7,8) - for consistency? I mean, similar sounds hit at these parts. nah, the concept on this instrumental part is that every cymbal crash, the rhythm gets denser while still being viable. that's why parts of this section differ from each other.
01:57:536 - I feel like this section of the map should have lower intensity, DS-wise. Right now, it just kinda feels like the same as the next section, which is weird. i feel it's already less intense due to the sudden lack of those kicksliders
02:39:050 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I can't seem to hear where you're basing the jumps from. With the current jumps, it fits on 02:39:698 (1,2,3,4) - , but for the others, not really. Like, 02:39:212 (2) - . This feels emphasized but it isn't really mapped to a really significant sound in the song. im pretty sure the cymbal/snare 1/2s in the bg last until 02:40:834 - which are what i'm mapping to
02:51:374 (1,1,1,1) - No need for a NC spam. a lot of people were complaining about this so yeah sure, did the same on insane

Good luck!

thanks for modding!

Aximes

52 posts

Joined February 2016

Aximes 2017-05-11T08:48:40+00:00

Hello from queue.
Sorry for late respond. Had to wait due to internet problems.

Easy

SPOILER

00:08:563 (1) - Maybe notes like this is a bit of a huge skip.
Could'nt find much more in this diff so lets move on.

Normal

SPOILER

general: Idk if you mind circular flow that much, but you change directions like every 2 seconds.

00:02:563 (4,2,5,4,2,2,4,5,2) - Notes like this. Ofc you can use 1/2 Notes in Normal difficulty, but you should'nt overuse it. In my opinion you have many of these and that could easily overwhelm new Players / Players who usually play normal diff.
But thats just a personal opinion. For me its a bit too much.

00:38:239 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - In Parts like this im not 100% wich beat you following. I think its a mix of vocals and somewhat else. I think that could confuse normal players while playing alot.

Hard

SPOILER

00:00:617 (1,2) -
00:01:266 (3,1) -
00:04:509 (1,2) -
00:05:320 (3,1) - Why you stack here but stop it completly on notes like 00:10:671 (3,4) - for example. Its still in the same part of the song

01:47:320 (2,3,4,5) - Sound don't change here so this is a bit surprising and not intuitive. Can you explain your intentions here?
01:52:509 (2,3,4,5) - ^

Btw I noticed something general here... I wonder if the part in the very end (starts at 02:35:807 (1) - ) isn't a kiai part too? I mean. Its pretty intense, don't you think?

Insane

SPOILER

Could'nt find anything here what I haven't already pointed out in hard

In the end its a pretty good map. I hope it'll get ranked. Good luck and have a nice day! c:

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-11T12:25:40+00:00

Aximes wrote:
Hello from queue.
Sorry for late respond. Had to wait due to internet problems.

Normal
SPOILER
general: Idk if you mind circular flow that much, but you change directions like every 2 seconds. stuff like mouse drift is effectively nonexistent in low diffs since the notes are so close together on the playfield and far enough on the timeline

00:02:563 (4,2,5,4,2,2,4,5,2) - Notes like this. Ofc you can use 1/2 Notes in Normal difficulty, but you should'nt overuse it. In my opinion you have many of these and that could easily overwhelm new Players / Players who usually play normal diff.
But thats just a personal opinion. For me its a bit too much. this is par for the course for normal tho, you often see stuff like this in ranked normals nowadays

00:38:239 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - In Parts like this im not 100% wich beat you following. I think its a mix of vocals and somewhat else. I think that could confuse normal players while playing alot. clarified rhythm in this part and parts like this (because there were ugly 3/2 gaps that didnt follow vocals clearly), im supposed to be following vocals (except for the part where there are no vocals, in which case i switch to percussion)

Hard
SPOILER
00:00:617 (1,2) -
00:01:266 (3,1) -
00:04:509 (1,2) -
00:05:320 (3,1) - Why you stack here but stop it completly on notes like 00:10:671 (3,4) - for example. Its still in the same part of the song
all stacks represent 1/1 gaps in the rhythm (00:00:617 (1,2) - is 1/2 so i unstacked that tho)
01:47:320 (2,3,4,5) - Sound don't change here so this is a bit surprising and not intuitive. Can you explain your intentions here? vocals are 1/4, plus this is supposed to be a hypebuilding section before the calm part
01:52:509 (2,3,4,5) - ^ yep

Btw I noticed something general here... I wonder if the part in the very end (starts at 02:35:807 (1) - ) isn't a kiai part too? I mean. Its pretty intense, don't you think? that's actually a good idea, tho i'll probably reserve it for the jumps on the highest diff to make it feel special

Insane
SPOILER
Could'nt find anything here what I haven't already pointed out in hard

In the end its a pretty good map. I hope it'll get ranked. Good luck and have a nice day! c: thanks for the kind words

thanks for modding!

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-05-11T18:16:44+00:00

-Harpuia- wrote:
- - Normal Mod from Queue - owo -

[Kanan's Easy]
00:00:780 (1) - I find it weird how this is the only slider with this length considering that the other similarly patterned (by sound) parts (00:03:374 (1,2,1,2) - ) are mapped in a different manner. changed to Slider + Circle
00:02:077 (2,1) - Blanket is a bit off at the tail.
00:08:563 (1) - Hm... I feel like the reverse isn't representing much of the song here. It's okay I guess for transition, but I think it's a bit undermapped. yeahj it's for transition lo
00:13:752 (1) - Same with the reverse thing above. It feels out of place considering the adjacent parts.
00:20:239 - Just a suggestion for pattern. I think it'll represent the song more to have a 1/1 reverse slider at 00:20:239 (2) - , circle then another one. Changed to 1/1 reverse But I keep the thing with the second slider because it should end on the big white tick
00:34:509 (1) - The vocal hits at 00:34:347 - . I'm pretty sure there's nothing wrong with starting there. Also how it starts at the white tick is really jarring. newton- didn't update my Diff to this moment :V
00:44:725 - to 00:49:428 - I'd really recommend to have more consistency in mapping here (in relation to the start of the first kiai). Nothing much has changed in the song. It's using some Slider that has a reverse on a red tick and the Part is very strong tho /color]
00:48:779 (3,1) - Awkward pause imo
01:00:293 (1) - For flow, I suggest putting this at (368,160). Current one is okay
01:41:320 (1) - This part feels undermapped , and also unfitting with the current section. Remapped this section
01:44:239 (3) - same as above. ^
02:10:509 - and onwards - I really like the rhythm choice here tbh wo w i did something gud
02:44:239 (1,2) - imo, flows like this would only work best in emphasizing sounds. Situations where it is used otherwise just make the flow poor. changed this
I think this diff could be improved more. Especially in the first parts, since the last ones seem okay.

Good luck!

Aximes wrote:
Easy
SPOILER
00:08:563 (1) - Maybe notes like this is a bit of a huge skip. Explained in previous mod
Could'nt find much more in this diff so lets move on.

In the end its a pretty good map. I hope it'll get ranked. Good luck and have a nice day! c:

Thx for mods!

upudatu~

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Bokkie

276 posts

Joined June 2014

Bokkie 2017-05-12T10:45:59+00:00

Hi from my modding queue :3

General

00:21:536 - I feel like you should lower the hitsounds volume even more; Can I get 60% here? c:
01:57:536 - same here, but with volume rises on louder notes
02:39:050 - definitelly lower volume of those bells as they're kinda obnoxious if spammed like this
The map's great, but the audio quality made me cry a little (picture of me playtesting, colorized)

Insane

00:08:239 (4,3) - you seem to like stacking a lot; why doing something like this then?
00:10:834 (5,4) -, 00:11:482 (2,1) - ,00:25:266 (1,5) - ,00:43:428 (6) and 00:44:401 (3) - , 00:44:401 (3,2) - , 02:20:563 (5,2) - , 02:21:212 (2,1) - ,
00:20:563 (3,4) - blanket could be better here
00:49:104 (3) - take the clap of that sliderend
02:09:050 (6) - I think you should ctrl+G this (and move (5), obviously) + nc on (5) to be consistent with 02:05:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)
02:23:158 (5,3) - move (3) slightly to the right to prevent that small overlap (and adjust following sliders)
02:39:050 (1,2,3,4) - they should overlap the same way
02:51:860 (1) - not sure why nc here

Starlight

00:10:023 - I feel like this note should be clickable
00:20:077 (6,1) - I'd emphasize the vocals on (1) here
00:27:536 (4) - not really big issue but since some people use fancy hp bars I'd recommend moving it down a little (I guess along with whole pattern)
00:44:239 - overmapping huh? I can't hear a thing on blue ticks
00:48:293 (7,1) - fix the blanket here
00:50:725 (4) - imo this slider should go the other way or at least have silder tail going up
01:26:239 (3,3) - try move them so they don't touch each other
01:36:131 (3,4,5,6,7) - why is this a stream again?
02:15:536 (1,2) - blanket isn't perfect
02:25:266 (3) - you're missing important sound here (and with the snare hitsound at the end it sounds kinda weird)

Good luck c:

Einja

652 posts

Joined February 2015

Einja 2017-05-12T22:57:37+00:00

mod queue

[light of stars]
0.2 stack leniency looks ugly imo

00:11:482 (2) - should not be here, extend 00:11:158 (1) - to where circle 2 was to follow lyrics.

00:37:023 (2) - I don't here any 1/4 beat here
00:47:401 (2) - ^

01:11:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you forgot to hitsound these notes

01:30:131 (1,4) - I would blanket these if I were you

01:43:752 (3) - Ctrl + g?

01:47:644 (4) - I would put a NC here, because it's a sudden change in circle/slider pattern.
01:52:834 (4) - ^

02:01:428 (1) - match the guitar in the song by doing this instead http://prntscr.com/f771pz

[normal]
01:04:185 (3,4) - fix ds here, that's all

[kanan]
00:12:131 (2,3) - perfect opportunity to blanket, and fix ds

good luck!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-13T00:57:45+00:00

Catshy wrote:
Hi from my modding queue :3

General
00:21:536 - I feel like you should lower the hitsounds volume even more; Can I get 60% here? c: sure why not
01:57:536 - same here, but with volume rises on louder notes
02:39:050 - definitelly lower volume of those bells as they're kinda obnoxious if spammed like this sure
The map's great, but the audio quality made me cry a little (picture of me playtesting, colorized) the map has a new mp3 now yeeeeee

Insane
00:08:239 (4,3) - you seem to like stacking a lot; why doing something like this then?
00:10:834 (5,4) -, 00:11:482 (2,1) - ,00:25:266 (1,5) - ,00:43:428 (6) and 00:44:401 (3) - , 00:44:401 (3,2) - , 02:20:563 (5,2) - , 02:21:212 (2,1) - , most of these have the previous object faded out entirely anyway, i think ignoring the stack is fine
00:20:563 (3,4) - blanket could be better here hopefully better now
00:49:104 (3) - take the clap of that sliderend there's a snare sound on white tick, which is what im representing with hitsounds
02:09:050 (6) - I think you should ctrl+G this (and move (5), obviously) + nc on (5) to be consistent with 02:05:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) ctrlg isnt necessary since i want to focus movement in one direction but i did nc
02:23:158 (5,3) - move (3) slightly to the right to prevent that small overlap (and adjust following sliders) again, 5 is fully faded out, so it's fine
02:39:050 (1,2,3,4) - they should overlap the same way how did i miss this
02:51:860 (1) - not sure why nc here whoops

Starlight
00:10:023 - I feel like this note should be clickable i dont really wanna end a slider on the downbeat tho ;;
00:20:077 (6,1) - I'd emphasize the vocals on (1) here opted to emphasize thru uncomfy flow instead of spacing
00:27:536 (4) - not really big issue but since some people use fancy hp bars I'd recommend moving it down a little (I guess along with whole pattern) eh it's fine
00:44:239 - overmapping huh? I can't hear a thing on blue ticks it's for emphasis, just like how youd use a triple except this time its the entire stream
00:48:293 (7,1) - fix the blanket here i didnt even realize the blanket was off until now lol, thanks
00:50:725 (4) - imo this slider should go the other way or at least have silder tail going up second option
01:26:239 (3,3) - try move them so they don't touch each other they don't touch it's fine
01:36:131 (3,4,5,6,7) - why is this a stream again? if you listen closely there's a ringing sound start starts around here up until the calm bit. the start of this sound is what i'm trying to emphasize with the burst (this is also why you see a bunch of kicksliders after this part
02:15:536 (1,2) - blanket isn't perfect theyre not meant to blanket exactly, just look like they blanket while maintaining the generic overlap thing (also this ruins the overlap with the wave slider)
02:25:266 (3) - you're missing important sound here (and with the snare hitsound at the end it sounds kinda weird) im following vocals so it should be fine

Good luck c:

Einja wrote:
mod queue

[light of stars]
0.2 stack leniency looks ugly imo but i hate stacks :c

00:11:482 (2) - should not be here, extend 00:11:158 (1) - to where circle 2 was to follow lyrics. there's a p strong vocal on 2 tho

00:37:023 (2) - I don't here any 1/4 beat here emphasis and consistency with insane
00:47:401 (2) - ^ ^

01:11:969 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you forgot to hitsound these notes shit

01:30:131 (1,4) - I would blanket these if I were you yeah probably but that overlaps it with the 1 on next combo

01:43:752 (3) - Ctrl + g? this is easier to follow unctrlged since players will only aim the sliderheads and the way its arranged makes the sliderheads arranged linearly

01:47:644 (4) - I would put a NC here, because it's a sudden change in circle/slider pattern. yeah sure
01:52:834 (4) - ^ ^

02:01:428 (1) - match the guitar in the song by doing this instead http://prntscr.com/f771pz good idea!

[normal]
01:04:185 (3,4) - fix ds here, that's all how did this happen

good luck!

thanks for modding!

Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Lulu- 2017-05-13T03:47:25+00:00

hi nm because i'M gAy
now with 98% less capital letters

[general]
offset is 779 (you tried xd)

[starlight]
00:24:779 (3) - circle on white tick and move this onto red?

01:01:590 - not sure why you mapped the blue ticks here all of a sudden, there is no constant 1/4 thing in the background like in the other version of the song and there's nothing to support them either other than filler rhythm, but even then sliders might seem like a better idea to me, especially for the streams

01:12:455 (4,5,6,7,8) - how come this is hitsounded differently than say 00:59:482 (2,3,4,5,6) - , they're the exact same

01:33:050 (2) - move clap on end, feels really weird to suddenly have it on the red tick, as it's essentially the same as 01:27:536 (1,2,3) -

01:36:131 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/4 sliders on 3 and 5 feel better to me here

01:37:590 - sudden switch to 1/4 sliders instead of circles? the 1/4 thing already starts at 01:36:131 - , so you should replace the stream on here with sliders to bring in more consistency

01:47:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is there anything to back this up?

01:56:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the drums here aren't all the same, they change at 5 so i'd alter the stream shape or hitsounds here accordingly

01:57:536 - reverse spacing emphasis with these jumps, imo the first two circles each should have much higher spacing than the other two, since the acoustic guitar is much less prominent here and there are no vocals to support this

02:01:428 (1,2,3,4) - why change the spacing this drastically

02:18:131 (1) - this thing isn't symmetrical enough, copy paste 02:17:320 (2) - , ctrl+h and rotate by -20 and do some .osu magic to fix (if you copy pasted this from another slider fix those too. also i think the sliderball doesn't hit the downbeat at the bend thing by a pixel or so can you confirm this

[insane]
00:36:942 (1,2,3) - return of the randomly mapped blue ticks :^0 you could do the same thing here 00:42:214 - or here 00:52:592 - for the same effect, either fill all the way or not at all imo

01:29:481 (3,4) - can you fix this blanket it kinda triggers me

01:57:212 (5,6,7,8) - same thing as starlight, different hitsounds for those too please, something like drum claps would work better

02:41:969 (2,4) - stacking these on top of the next slider seems less confusing to me and you do the same thing in parts like the buildup before the first kiai so it sounds pretty logical to just do it doesn't it

[hard]
00:21:212 (1) - why isn't this hitsounded the same way as in insane/starlight

00:21:536 (1,1,2) - fix blanket

00:22:509 (1,2) - fix stacking

[normal]
hitsounding sounds really messy here, try increasing the tick rate and hitsounding the sliderticks to maintain a more consistent rhythm

[kanan's easy]
~~hi wheres love marginal jk prolly going to grave bc it's s h i t~~

check aimod for spacing

00:02:077 (3,1) - blanket

00:04:671 (3,1) - ^

00:07:915 (4,1,2) - ^ (ok this is a blanket mod now lmao)

00:13:104 (4,1) - ^

00:29:320 (1) - can you make this curve in the middle a bit flatter would look a lot better that way

01:15:698 (1) - i'd just have this as a 1/2 slider

01:38:077 (3,1) - fix blanket or move 1 away

01:46:509 (5,1) - this blanket is off by a few pixels

02:10:509 - rhythm in this kiai feels really weird, just do it like you did it in the first kiai

hitsounding thing from normal applies here too, please try hitsounding the sliderticks as well

that's it i guess another cool map by dad

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-13T08:19:47+00:00

Lulu- wrote:
hi nm because i'M gAy same tbh
now with 98% less capital letters lowercase master race

[general]
offset is 779 (you tried xd) at first i thought this was an easy fix but then i realized i had to move all my timing points 1 ms backwards fml

[starlight]
00:24:779 (3) - circle on white tick and move this onto red? ok sure

01:01:590 - not sure why you mapped the blue ticks here all of a sudden, there is no constant 1/4 thing in the background like in the other version of the song and there's nothing to support them either other than filler rhythm, but even then sliders might seem like a better idea to me, especially for the streams im pretty sure i can hear drum fills being 1/4 tho, plus this is so the rhythm gets denser every cymbal crash

01:12:455 (4,5,6,7,8) - how come this is hitsounded differently than say 00:59:482 (2,3,4,5,6) - , they're the exact same i forgot a clap fuk im stupid

01:33:050 (2) - move clap on end, feels really weird to suddenly have it on the red tick, as it's essentially the same as 01:27:536 (1,2,3) - im retarded

01:36:131 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/4 sliders on 3 and 5 feel better to me here yeah fair point, changed stream to kicksliders

01:37:590 - sudden switch to 1/4 sliders instead of circles? the 1/4 thing already starts at 01:36:131 - , so you should replace the stream on here with sliders to bring in more consistency as mentioned above, also the 1/4 is because of the twinkly sounds that kick in

01:47:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is there anything to back this up? the vocals are repeating 1/4 bursts + twinkly sounds, also this is easier to play than triplets + kicksliders so i opted for this instead

01:56:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the drums here aren't all the same, they change at 5 so i'd alter the stream shape or hitsounds here accordingly lowered hs volume on the second half of stream

01:57:536 - reverse spacing emphasis with these jumps, imo the first two circles each should have much higher spacing than the other two, since the acoustic guitar is much less prominent here and there are no vocals to support this the slider parts of rhythms like this are higher spaced since theyre the ones with higher pitch guitar sounds

02:01:428 (1,2,3,4) - why change the spacing this drastically ok i decided to forego the spacing

02:18:131 (1) - this thing isn't symmetrical enough, copy paste 02:17:320 (2) - , ctrl+h and rotate by -20 and do some .osu magic to fix (if you copy pasted this from another slider fix those too. also i think the sliderball doesn't hit the downbeat at the bend thing by a pixel or so can you confirm this i did a thing hopefully it's symmetrical now

[insane]
00:36:942 (1,2,3) - return of the randomly mapped blue ticks :^0 you could do the same thing here 00:42:214 - or here 00:52:592 - for the same effect, either fill all the way or not at all imo it's for emphasis tho :/

01:29:481 (3,4) - can you fix this blanket it kinda triggers me fuk

01:57:212 (5,6,7,8) - same thing as starlight, different hitsounds for those too please, something like drum claps would work better i really hope lower volume works

02:41:969 (2,4) - stacking these on top of the next slider seems less confusing to me and you do the same thing in parts like the buildup before the first kiai so it sounds pretty logical to just do it doesn't it ur write

[hard]
00:21:212 (1) - why isn't this hitsounded the same way as in insane/starlight because im gya

00:21:536 (1,1,2) - fix blanket yes daddy

00:22:509 (1,2) - fix stacking they are stacked properly tho :thonkang:

[normal]
hitsounding sounds really messy here, try increasing the tick rate and hitsounding the sliderticks to maintain a more consistent rhythm if more people complain maybe but i think the hsing is fine since it makes the rhythm feel less dense than it actually is (also wait you can hitsound sliderticks wtf i did not know about this)

that's it i guess another cool map by dad thank

thanks for modding!

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-05-13T09:09:20+00:00

too lazy to replay lo

@Lulu- Fixed the Blankets
@Einja fixed this one aswell

thx 5 mods

resnapped and stuff

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gary00737

593 posts

Joined February 2015

gary00737 2017-05-13T11:10:31+00:00

Hello , From #modreqs , my Eng not good :< , i will short mod

first , i think the offset is wrong , i think it is 675

Kanan's Easy

00:02:076 (3,1) - blanket it better
00:04:670 (3,1) - ^ &the DS?
00:07:914 (4,1) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8074712 you can CTRL+G to check it
00:08:562 (1,2) - ^
00:13:103 (4,1) - ^https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8074723
all of this problem (? i think

Normal+Hard

i feel good , but is offset problem

Insane

00:14:238 (3,4) - i think it can jump? such as 00:14:400 (4,6) - ctrl+G
00:14:887 (1) - ^ ctrl+G if you change please change it too
00:15:211 (2) - ^ctrl+G

Starlight

sorry 5* i am newbie

but i will try it

02:17:320 (2,3,4) - @0@?

i hope it can help you , GL

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-13T13:05:22+00:00

gary00737 wrote:
Hello , From #modreqs , my Eng not good :< , i will short mod

first , i think the offset is wrong , i think it is 675 it's the way it is because this way the finishes can land on the downbeat

Insane
00:14:238 (3,4) - i think it can jump? such as 00:14:400 (4,6) - ctrl+G nah id want a more horizontal movement focused pattern here
00:14:887 (1) - ^ ctrl+G if you change please change it too i didnt change so not applying
00:15:211 (2) - ^ctrl+G ^

Starlight
sorry 5* i am newbie but i will try it

02:17:320 (2,3,4) - @0@? how did i miss this aaaaa

i hope it can help you , GL

thanks for modding!

sakebi

243 posts

Joined October 2015

sakebi 2017-05-14T19:26:22+00:00

from queue

[Kanan's Easy]
00:44:784 (2) - new combo
01:14:460 (2) - should blanket 01:13:163 (1) sliderend
- 01:15:757 (1) - if ^ is applied, move this with 01:14:460 (2)
01:34:244 (4) - movement for this slider will be awkward for new players

[Normal]
00:02:622 (4) - avoid stacks in normals

good map barely any issues

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-15T03:41:33+00:00

lilligantEX wrote:
from queue

[Normal]
00:02:622 (4) - avoid stacks in normals i'm using them consistently for 1/2 so it should be fine

good map barely any issues thanks!

thanks for modding!

Kirylln

412 posts

Joined October 2015

Kirylln 2017-05-15T12:37:40+00:00

Hi o/! A small mod form nowhere.

mod

General
The volume overall is a bit high imo. Consider lowering it?
Combo colors a quite similar to each other the blue ones that is. I don’t know if it is a problem or not. It just really bugs me.
Oh man the aesthetics, I love it came <3
Starlight
00:33:433 (1,2) – there’s a different sound here, why map it the same as the previous ones?
00:29:055 (5) –Why a clap here?
01:28:893 (1) –This is pretty out of place considering what you’re following here, I think a ½ slider with a circle would be much better
01:57:271 (5,6,7,8,1) –Different sound here in the stream, I think it is better if you change the stream’s shape here, or at least NC it.
01:57:595 -02:02:622 –the rhythm is this section is unnecessarily dense considering the low number of instruments actually playing, also I have no clue what you are following or emphasizing in this section. For example: 01:57:595 (1,2) –These 2 represent the guitar, which is also the strongest sound in the section, but 01:57:920 (3) –somehow have the same ds as the previous ones even though it represent basically nothing.
The only things that make sense to me are sliders like this 01:58:082 (4) –which actually represent the softer sound really nicely
02:02:622 –I know you want to follow the vocal here, but the instrument is too strong to be ignored, try something like this maybe ?
02:10:082 (4,1) –The spacing is pretty high for such a soft vocal, lowering it would be better imo, also Nc 02:10:082 (4) - this?
02:36:514 –The stream starts here
02:40:406 (1,2,3,4) –There’s an obvious stream here, why continuing the jump pattern?
00:44:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –I think kick sliders with muted end would suit this much more considering there’s no sound in the blue tick, Or just a jump. Btw, 02:20:298 (3,4,5) –Why different representation here? They’re technically the same sound, even the vocal doesn’t change.
01:15:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –Overmap, no sound on the blue ticks
Insane
Some problems are the same with Starlight
02:30:676 (3,4,5,6) –It’s just literally screaming for a stream, isn’t it? :>
02:40:406 (1,2,3,4) -^
02:51:920 –A slider all the way 02:52:730 –here would be nice
01:28:893 (1) –This ignores the vocal in the white tick for some reasons even though you’re following the vocal, change it to 3 circles or sth?
I may have repeated myself lel :3

note

I'm a really bad modder, so if you see that my mod goes against the style you're going for, pls feel free to take this with a grain of salt ignore it basically

GL~

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-15T14:06:23+00:00

edit: mod reply yay

Kirylln wrote:
Hi o/! A small mod form nowhere.
mod
General
The volume overall is a bit high imo. Consider lowering it? nah i think it's fine
Combo colors a quite similar to each other the blue ones that is. I don’t know if it is a problem or not. It just really bugs me. theyre noticable different, should be ok
Oh man the aesthetics, I love it came <3 thanks
Starlight
00:33:433 (1,2) – there’s a different sound here, why map it the same as the previous ones? oh wow i didnt notice this, thanks for pointing it out
00:29:055 (5) –Why a clap here? oops
01:28:893 (1) –This is pretty out of place considering what you’re following here, I think a ½ slider with a circle would be much better i really dont wanna end the slider on a downbeat tho, would feel weird
01:57:271 (5,6,7,8,1) –Different sound here in the stream, I think it is better if you change the stream’s shape here, or at least NC it. nced
01:57:595 -02:02:622 –the rhythm is this section is unnecessarily dense considering the low number of instruments actually playing, also I have no clue what you are following or emphasizing in this section. For example: 01:57:595 (1,2) –These 2 represent the guitar, which is also the strongest sound in the section, but 01:57:920 (3) –somehow have the same ds as the previous ones even though it represent basically nothing.
The only things that make sense to me are sliders like this 01:58:082 (4) –which actually represent the softer sound really nicelyit's way less dense than the previous section, plus there are guitar sounds on stuff like 3 (which im following)
02:02:622 –I know you want to follow the vocal here, but the instrument is too strong to be ignored, try something like this maybe ? yeah but the vocal is the strongest out of everything else mentioned imo so it's fine
02:10:082 (4,1) –The spacing is pretty high for such a soft vocal, lowering it would be better imo, also Nc 02:10:082 (4) - this? it's to give more emphasis to the low sv slider, also nc on 4 would be overdone imo
02:36:514 –The stream starts here whoops my bad
02:40:406 (1,2,3,4) –There’s an obvious stream here, why continuing the jump pattern? there are pretty prominent drum sounds on every half beat
00:44:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –I think kick sliders with muted end would suit this much more considering there’s no sound in the blue tick, Or just a jump. Btw, 02:20:298 (3,4,5) –Why different representation here? They’re technically the same sound, even the vocal doesn’t change. the stream works the same way triples do for emphasis, also the drums are way more prominent imo the second time this vocal comes around, so theyre jumps instread of a continuous stream that time
01:15:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –Overmap, no sound on the blue ticks emphasis again, also the concept for this instrumental section is that it gets more rhythmically dense each cymbal crash
Insane
Some problems are the same with Starlight i see
02:30:676 (3,4,5,6) –It’s just literally screaming for a stream, isn’t it? :> i think the kicksliders work because they feel less awkward when you also have 1/1 sliders thrown in the mix (as opposed to starlight, where it was fully 1/4 rhythm)
02:40:406 (1,2,3,4) -^ yeah
02:51:920 –A slider all the way 02:52:730 –here would be nice
01:28:893 (1) –This ignores the vocal in the white tick for some reasons even though you’re following the vocal, change it to 3 circles or sth? the vocal on the downbeat can be interpreted as part of the vocal on the red tick (hon as opposed to ho~n) so i think it's fine
I may have repeated myself lel :3
note
I'm a really bad modder, so if you see that my mod goes against the style you're going for, pls feel free to take this with a grain of salt ignore it basically nah dw compared to some other mods i've seen yours are actually p good
GL~

thanks for modding!

Last edited by newton- 2017-05-16T03:34:03+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-05-15T14:14:47+00:00

newton- wrote:
dont mod until this is done thx

Mod:
Remap
Kds pls

now for real

@lilligantEX Fixed first and last point
@gary00737 The Ctrl+g things you suggest don't make sense because it would break the ds

pls don't only mod blankets thx

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430,56,73163,70,0,B|443:114|443:114|425:266,1,210,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,341,74460,2,0,P|384:364|290:281,1,210,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,198,75757,6,0,B|228:215|228:215|144:177,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,102,86460,6,0,P|369:169|355:242,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,283,87433,1,8,0:0:0:0:
203,286,87757,2,0,B|122:296|122:296|95:282,2,105,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,213,89055,6,0,B|289:182|289:182|329:181|329:181|374:158,2,140,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,187,90676,2,0,P|161:140|230:79,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,98,91649,70,0,B|366:97|366:97|398:120|398:120|443:119,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,182,93271,2,0,B|316:221|316:221|308:257,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,310,93920,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,240,94244,2,0,B|155:182|155:182|145:42,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,70,95541,6,0,B|290:51|290:51|370:69,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,128,96514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
471,193,96838,70,0,B|479:274|479:274|452:335,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,318,97811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,300,98136,2,0,B|212:282|177:315|134:331|73:297,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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204,255,101055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,216,101379,2,0,L|393:210,2,105
229,147,102676,2,0,L|225:74,1,70
276,10,103325,6,0,L|129:14,1,140
68,64,104298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,145,104622,2,0,L|46:288,2,140
125,110,106244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,115,106568,2,0,L|206:195,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,244,107217,6,0,P|206:268|131:230,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,260,108838,2,0,L|350:335,2,70,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,175,109811,70,0,B|348:39|348:39|421:54,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,136,111109,2,0,P|466:194|439:271,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,261,112082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
277,253,112406,6,0,L|172:246,2,105,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,334,113703,2,0,L|474:347,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,262,115001,2,0,P|432:199|451:133,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
495,61,115974,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,54,116298,6,0,L|259:47,2,140,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,110,122784,70,0,L|69:260,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,252,123757,2,0,L|155:108,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,54,124730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
293,87,125055,2,0,P|312:143|494:123,2,280,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,127974,12,0,129271,0:0:0:0:
439,69,130568,54,0,L|441:225,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
501,267,131541,2,0,P|439:293|372:256,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,197,132514,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,222,132838,6,0,L|97:217,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,133,133811,2,0,L|245:139,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,117,134784,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,60,135109,2,0,L|463:61,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,144,135757,70,0,L|448:297,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,161,137379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,194,137703,2,0,P|230:178|155:199,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,242,138676,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,288,139001,2,0,P|234:307|307:288,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,241,139974,5,8,0:0:0:0:
417,175,140298,2,0,P|440:130|443:98,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,46,140947,70,0,L|341:45,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,85,141920,2,0,L|133:83,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,104,142893,1,2,0:0:0:0:
34,183,143217,6,0,P|21:233|61:309,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,289,144190,2,0,L|295:289,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,283,145163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,208,145487,2,0,L|328:123,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,80,146136,70,0,P|325:51|266:82,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,151,147109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
139,166,147433,2,0,L|62:166,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,250,148082,2,0,L|152:249,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,275,148730,6,0,P|297:289|352:250,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,195,149703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,122,150028,2,0,P|251:77|159:124,1,210,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
99,160,151325,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,151487,12,0,155217,0:0:0:0:
392,126,156514,70,0,P|402:185|361:260,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,254,157487,2,0,L|141:249,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,305,158460,2,0,P|81:252|58:162,1,140,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,93,159433,1,4,0:0:0:0:
94,54,159757,2,0,L|172:55,1,70,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,98,160406,70,0,L|377:96,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,104,161379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,170,161703,2,0,L|406:315,2,140,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,200,163325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,221,163649,2,0,L|166:220,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,281,164298,6,0,P|88:219|119:146,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,77,165271,2,0,L|285:76,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,143,166244,2,0,L|476:144,1,140,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,228,167217,2,0,L|322:227,1,140,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,215,168190,69,2,0:0:0:0:
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395,122,170460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,192,170784,6,0,L|442:267,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,290,171433,2,0,L|286:286,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,315,172082,70,0,B|166:320|166:320|68:293,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by nextplay 2017-05-15T20:52:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Suissie

169 posts

Joined January 2015

Suissie 2017-05-15T17:56:32+00:00

[starlight]
00:05:541 (5) - I feel like replace this with a single note would fit better because her voice kinda stops and it would give a stronger impact on the next slider imo. Your idea is fine tho.
00:19:974 (5,6) - That spacing is kinda random.
00:22:730 (3) - Why dont replace this with a 1/2 slider. You wouldn't ignore that drum sound completely and it wouldn't either play bad. Like this http://puu.sh/vQT04/ee90501f91.jpg also just an idea
01:42:352 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I dont get this spacing at all. I tries to build up something but I dont know what and there 01:43:163 (1) - it just suddenly gets very small.
01:47:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream seems overmapped. What I suggest would be Triple there 01:47:379 - and there 01:47:703 - and then continue with 1/2 singles.
01:52:568 - same here.
01:57:595 (1,2,3) - Idk kinda weird overmapped.
02:33:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I dont get that spacing. Why does it get smaller there 02:34:568 (6,7,8) - ?

[Insane]
00:04:568 (1) - Doesn't this have to be more spaced ? you spaced the other 1/1 slider more too.
00:17:541 (1) - I feel like this one could be space more because she gets a bit louder there.
01:37:974 (1) - could be spaced more too tbh.
02:29:866 (1) - more spacing lol.
This diff has a bit of spacing problems imo. But else looks fine.

Im not good with lower diffs so I wont mod them.

Top diffs have nice structure and aesthetics.
Good luck.

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-16T04:13:27+00:00

Suissie wrote:
[starlight]
00:05:541 (5) - I feel like replace this with a single note would fit better because her voice kinda stops and it would give a stronger impact on the next slider imo. Your idea is fine tho. 1/1 would feel awkward tho ;;
00:19:974 (5,6) - That spacing is kinda random. 00:19:974 - is a more powerful vocal so it has higher spacing
00:22:730 (3) - Why dont replace this with a 1/2 slider. You wouldn't ignore that drum sound completely and it wouldn't either play bad. Like this http://puu.sh/vQT04/ee90501f91.jpg also just an idea sure tho did something different visually
01:42:352 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I dont get this spacing at all. I tries to build up something but I dont know what and there 01:43:163 (1) - it just suddenly gets very small. it's not meant to build up anything, it just sets up a pretty neat pattern
01:47:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream seems overmapped. What I suggest would be Triple there 01:47:379 - and there 01:47:703 - and then continue with 1/2 singles.since i'm also following the twinkly 1/4 sounds in the background with the kicksliders, i opted for this since this would be easier to play than triplets with kicksliders in them
01:52:568 - same here. ^
01:57:595 (1,2,3) - Idk kinda weird overmapped. there are guitar sounds there tho
02:33:920 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I dont get that spacing. Why does it get smaller there 02:34:568 (6,7,8) - ? i feel 02:34:568 (6,7,8) - is more of a continous burst of sounds more than a distinct sound so i mapped it like this

[Insane]
00:04:568 (1) - Doesn't this have to be more spaced ? you spaced the other 1/1 slider more too. visual flow is uncomfortable so i think that's emphasis enough
00:17:541 (1) - I feel like this one could be space more because she gets a bit louder there. not really, it's just pitch
01:37:974 (1) - could be spaced more too tbh. uncomfortable visual flow + i have nowhere else to put this lol
02:29:866 (1) - more spacing lol. ok fine
This diff has a bit of spacing problems imo. But else looks fine. the problem is if i fix any of those my visuals will be fucked since if i change 1 thing i break so many patterns at once lol (i think it's fine anyway since the stuff where spacing problems are are either emphasized throughuncomfortable visual flow or just pitch changes that dont need to be that emphasized)

Im not good with lower diffs so I wont mod them.

Top diffs have nice structure and aesthetics. aesthetics is the only thing i can do tbh
Good luck.

thanks for modding!

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-05-18T12:46:24+00:00

returning m4m xd

Insane

00:03:211 (1,2) - fix thy blanket
00:05:481 (4,3) - fix thy stack
00:06:778 (4) - ctrl that and 00:07:103 (1) - this for better flow
00:21:373 (2,1) - these two should be spaced more since 1 is a loud vocal sound
00:33:535 (8,1) - fix thy b l a n k e t
00:40:022 (2) - ctrl g for better flow and consistency
00:44:400 (3,2) - maybe stack 2 to 3?
01:03:373 (2) - ctrl g also for better flow xd
01:10:184 (3) - ^
01:10:508 (4,2) - slightly fix stack
01:13:265 (1,2) - fix thy blanket (2)
01:15:697 (5,6) - why is the spacing so low compared to 01:15:373 (3,4) - shouldn't it be the other way around?
01:33:049 (2) - yeaaaa i like circular flow xd
01:34:995 (4) - ^ also for consistent spacing btw since i can see you putting small spacing in strong sounds sooo yea
01:40:184 (4) - ^
01:45:535 (5,1) - spacing w
01:46:346 (4,2,3,4) - fix thy s t a c k
01:45:697 (1,4) - pretty much noticed that 1 is a much more stronger sound than 4 so fix that on ur visual spacing
01:58:833 (1,2) - f i x t h y b l a n k e t
02:14:238 (1) - high pitched sound with a somewhat downbeat slider :thonkang:
02:28:346 (4,2) - fixxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx blANC
02:31:427 (1) - wouuuuullllddd be more appropriate to start the spinner on the red tick cos it fits more for me uwu

eeeeeee im too lezy to the other diffs soooo yea also the problem i have the most in this map is that spacing is a little bit inconsistent at times but in a minor problem its flow xd

gud luk eksdee

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-18T13:29:46+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
returning m4m xd
Insane
00:03:211 (1,2) - fix thy blanket ok dad
00:05:481 (4,3) - fix thy stack yeah
00:06:778 (4) - ctrl that and 00:07:103 (1) - this for better flow the flow in 00:06:454 (3,4) - is seen a lot through the map it's fine
00:21:373 (2,1) - these two should be spaced more since 1 is a loud vocal sound fixing sliderart is painful god damn
00:33:535 (8,1) - fix thy b l a n k e t seems ok to me :/
00:40:022 (2) - ctrl g for better flow and consistency the flow is playable in a circular / back and forth pattern so its fine, also i dont see what else this could be consistent with
00:44:400 (3,2) - maybe stack 2 to 3? the intention for 00:44:724 (1,2,3) - was a triangle + the stream is fully faded out so its ok
01:03:373 (2) - ctrl g also for better flow xd again, loopy back and forth makes this comfy (also hella uncomfy flow into 4 if i do this lo)
01:10:184 (3) - ^ refer to 00:06:778 (4) -
01:10:508 (4,2) - slightly fix stack sometimes im sure that autostack hates me
01:13:265 (1,2) - fix thy blanket (2) it blankets perfectly :thonkang:
01:15:697 (5,6) - why is the spacing so low compared to 01:15:373 (3,4) - shouldn't it be the other way around? made them equal ds this time
01:33:049 (2) - yeaaaa i like circular flow xd r e p e a t e d p a t t e r n i n g
01:34:995 (4) - ^ also for consistent spacing btw since i can see you putting small spacing in strong sounds sooo yea slider leniency is a powerful tool
01:40:184 (4) - ^ :blobhyperthinkfast:
01:45:535 (5,1) - spacing w ok my dude
01:46:346 (4,2,3,4) - fix thy s t a c k fuck
01:45:697 (1,4) - pretty much noticed that 1 is a much more stronger sound than 4 so fix that on ur visual spacing theyre literally the same intensity lo
01:58:833 (1,2) - f i x t h y b l a n k e t what's a blanket
02:14:238 (1) - high pitched sound with a somewhat downbeat slider :thonkang:eh im not sure the slider looks like it looks like its supposed to be on a low pitch sound (if thats what you mean) but the vocal the slider corresponds to goes down in pitch around the bend so ye
02:28:346 (4,2) - fixxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx blANC it felt correct already + symmetry with 02:28:508 (1) - :/
02:31:427 (1) - wouuuuullllddd be more appropriate to start the spinner on the red tick cos it fits more for me uwu its fine lo, i want the spinner to start asap
eeeeeee im too lezy to the other diffs soooo yea also the problem i have the most in this map is that spacing is a little bit inconsistent at times but in a minor problem its flow xd i fixed the spacing problems you mentioned but as mentioned above the flow thing is a consistent pattern so its fine (+ slider leniency renders some of the spacing inconsistency problems fixed)

gud luk eksdee

thank

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

CucumberCuc 2017-05-20T10:32:36+00:00

Hi

Check AiMod

[Easy]
00:12:494 (3,4) do far
01:06:656 (4,1) far
01:15:737 (1) move left
01:39:413 (1,2) slightly far

[Normal]
DON'T USE 1/8 - use only 1/4 (But 1/2 is better , since under these Tiki sliders and circles would be more appropriate)
and later check DS
00:29:318 (1,1) do far spinners on tick
02:05:318 (1,1) ^
00:38:116 put circle
00:40:062 ^
01:30:008 ^
01:33:900 ^
01:35:846 ^
02:09:900 ^

[Hard]
01:02:927 (1,2) do far

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-05-20T12:17:25+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi

Check AiMod

[Easy]
00:12:494 (3,4) do far Why? It's all okay with it
01:06:656 (4,1) far ?
01:15:737 (1) move left I like the current one more
01:39:413 (1,2) slightly far I want to have it like this because I like the Pattern LOL

No change still ty

Fu Xuan

Beatmap Nominator

1,430 posts

Joined September 2015

Fu Xuan 2017-05-20T12:24:26+00:00

All diffs

00:00:000 - Remap

Kds

xidorn

91 posts

Joined February 2016

xidorn 2017-05-20T13:35:56+00:00

Don't get me wrong, I'm modding this out of the kindness of my heart, not because we're good friends nor because I like the map or anything...
ANYWAYS

starlight

mouse drift simulator 2017
00:29:359 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe increase sv on every nc + increase spacing because the guitar and vocals up in pitch ~~shtud i dont need pp spacing~~
01:36:170 (3,4,5) - if mapping guitar, ignore. if mapping vocals, doushite the fuck are these 1/4 sliders when there are no sounds on blue ticks?
01:48:818 (3) - this might touch the hp bar in some skins, consider moving downward
01:49:791 (1,2,3) - why the curve when there is still pixel sounds like in 01:49:467 (5,6) - ??/
02:09:575 (2) - since 02:09:251 (1) - is mapped to same instrument as the highlighted object, make consistent slider shape gdi (i think it is, because i hear the slightly distorted pixely sound)
~~02:36:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - increase spacing for pp kappa~~
02:39:089 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this might throw people off since the 1/4 sliders suggest some sorta circular flow. ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8133624 told you... missed at those jumps and a random one)
I-I didn't have difficulty modding this nor did I think this was good, I... I'm just sparing you a wall of text, that's all.

I'm not lazy to mod the other diffs or anything, I'm just sparing you from a wall of text, that's all
G-good luck for rank, as if it ever will, dummy neeton.

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-05-20T13:56:26+00:00

-Aqua wrote:
All diffs

00:00:000 - Remap

Kds

Fixed! Thank for Mod!

My Remap

Not Today!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-20T14:12:28+00:00

CucumberCuc wrote:
Hi

Check AiMod oh no all my normal notes are unsnapped
[Normal]
DON'T USE 1/8 - use only 1/4 (But 1/2 is better , since under these Tiki sliders and circles would be more appropriate) i wasnt even using 1/8 lo (set snap divisor to 1/2 tho, not like it matters anyway)
and later check DS ds is fine :thonkang:
00:29:318 (1,1) do far spinners on tick current one seems fine
02:05:318 (1,1) ^ ^
00:38:116 put circle im mapping to vocals, + a circle there seems kinda overdone for the intensity of this section
00:40:062 ^ et cetera
01:30:008 ^ yeah no
01:33:900 ^ v o c a l s
01:35:846 ^ you get the point i hope
02:09:900 ^ ^^^^^

[Hard]
01:02:927 (1,2) do far increased ds by a bit since it wasnt equidistant

Xidorn wrote:
Don't get me wrong, I'm modding this out of the kindness of my heart, not because we're good friends nor because I like the map or anything...
ANYWAYS
starlight
mouse drift simulator 2017 u know it
00:29:359 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe increase sv on every nc + increase spacing because the guitar and vocals up in pitch ~~shtud i dont need pp spacing~~ i get what u mean for the hypebuilding but these are basically the same sound so i feel i should map them the same :/
01:36:170 (3,4,5) - if mapping guitar, ignore. if mapping vocals, doushite the fuck are these 1/4 sliders when there are no sounds on blue ticks?the twinkly sound apparently starts here so the sliders associated with them start here
01:48:818 (3) - this might touch the hp bar in some skins, consider moving downward shit ur write (i had to redo a bunch of patterns here lo)
01:49:791 (1,2,3) - why the curve when there is still pixel sounds like in 01:49:467 (5,6) - ??/ bc it looks nicer when doing the triangle thing (like almost every straight slider in the map was tilted 5 degrees from x or y axis sans the ones at the start of the pixelly sounds since they stand out to indicate a new section :/) + people will recognize every kickslider as twinkly sound anyway and these are still kicksliders
02:09:575 (2) - since 02:09:251 (1) - is mapped to same instrument as the highlighted object, make consistent slider shape gdi (i think it is, because i hear the slightly distorted pixely sound) thats just the guitar :/
~~02:36:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - increase spacing for pp kappa~~ :thonkang: (i honestly have no idea what color to put this in since if i put blue it seems like i increased spacing but i never put sidecomments in purple lmao) no spacing increase fwiw
02:39:089 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this might throw people off since the 1/4 sliders suggest some sorta circular flow. ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8133624 told you... missed at those jumps and a random one) actually yeah youre right (also now the spacing emphasis falls on the correct beats thx lol)
I-I didn't have difficulty modding this nor did I think this was good, I... I'm just sparing you a wall of text, that's all.
I'm not lazy to mod the other diffs or anything, I'm just sparing you from a wall of text, that's all
G-good luck for rank, as if it ever will, dummy neeton. tsun as always <3

thanks for modding!!

edit: words / spelling

Blobbability

126 posts

Joined November 2015

Blobbability 2017-05-21T06:39:56+00:00

Hi!

First of all, I'm very sorry I'm modding yours so late. I had a lot of stuff going on.

This isn't the mod, but I just wanted to let you know that your offset is incorrect. It should be 799.

I'm currently modding yours.

Also, I'm wondering if you are open for a GD by any chance...

Thanks!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-21T07:28:11+00:00

not open for gds currently, but yeah as promised once youre done with the mod ill give kds and mod your map in exchange.

thanks for the timing btw - helps a lot

Blobbability

126 posts

Joined November 2015

Blobbability 2017-05-21T17:11:43+00:00

A warning ahead of time, by changing your timing, your notes might become unsnapped (check AI mod). It's a hastle, but make sure you fix it.

Blobbability

126 posts

Joined November 2015

Blobbability 2017-05-22T00:38:25+00:00

Hi m4m from #modreqs

First, I'm very sorry that I'm so late, hope you will forgive me.

Mapset

Offset should be 799. BPM is correct.

Kanan's Easy

Two major points in general. First, since this is an easy difficulty, I would expect there to be a more uniform rhythm, but your rhythm switches from one pattern to another too often. I see that you're trying to follow the vocals, but the rhythm choice can get confusing for some beginners. For example:

00:11:197 - 00:13:467: A relatively dense rhythm choice here (dense is fine, too dense is not), but 00:13:791 long slider that breaks the pattern in an opposing way.

00:42:332: You again put a long slider with the rest of the chorus (kiai) being a relatively dense rhythm choice.

Second: 00:34:386 - notice how the slider head is on a red tick? Some of the other ones (00:39:413) are on white ticks. I mostly have no problems on the timing, but when playing, it becomes hard to distinguish whether to click on a red tick or white tick (especially with Hidden). One solution may be to space out the hitobjects that land on a spaced tick since the vocal has an important sound at those moments.

Finally, Some minor details:
01:05:683: I think this should start at 01:05:521.
01:06:981: Split this into 2 sliders.
02:31:305: Should belong on the red tick before.

Normal

Your rhythm choice is quite weird in many areas, which makes this difficulty something that needs a LOT of work, unfortunately. You need to utilize something called "filler rhythm", which makes playing some patterns with substantial amounts of time gaps in between less awkward to play. I'll walk through most of them:

00:10:224 - 00:10:710: The gap isn't too long, but is long enough to make playing slider #4 weird. One option for filler rhythm would be to put a hitcircle at 00:10:548.

00:37:143 - 00:37:954: Very awkward rhythm due to hitsounding. The snare at 00:37:954 really belongs at 00:38:116 according to the music, but the way you've mapped it does not match the song at all.

Regarding the snares, you need to fix this throughout the kiai section. No snare should really be on a red tick.

00:39:575: Why a hitcircle? The vocal is singing an important note here, so I would expect a slider. One reccomendation to fix it is to have slider from 00:39:575 to 00:40:062, then remove hitcircle at 00:40:224. It at least fits the music better, but the change is up to you.

00:59:846: I like how you stick to a pattern for a while. Simple, but very good rhythm choice.

01:28:710: Filler rhythm pls.

01:30:170: Snare hitsounds on red ticks? Doesn't sound right at all.

Hopefully you're starting to get the idea by now.

Hard

Minor details:
00:54:636: Try a repeating kick slider here to match the snares in the song.
01:35:826 - 01:36:474: Felt like the slider pattern is getting too repetitive, try maybe using hitcircles instead for variation.
02:22:528 - 02:23:663: I tested this, and it plays a little weird, the flow is not really comfortable, and it doesn’t match the song. Probably the hitcircle (4) is feeling a little out of place. It might be better to place it somewhere else imo.
Solid map!

Insane

00:01:791 (5): Doesn't really belong.

00:28:853 (4, 5, 6, 1): I don't understand the intentions of the jumps, especially the spacing difference between (5, 6). There is no change in music, so I don't understand why spacing is changing here.

00:54:474: IMO, this note should be spaced out much farther from the stream.

01:10:123 (1, 2, 3): This is an issue that pops up frequently. The general flow of the map is based on quick and snappy cursor movement. But the jump, especially between (1, 2) is small and follows a different flow style (slow and circular), which contrasts the rest in a bad way. Choose the flow that you want, and complement it with other flows that do support the general flow, but don't contradict it. One solution to this instance is to reverse the slider heads on (2, 3) individually.

02:22:042 - 02:23:177 vs. 02:23:339 - 02:24:474: The rhythm choices between these two sections are reflecting two completely different concepts (snappy vs. smooth), and the sections are right next to each other. Make your rhythm choice uniform.

Starlight

Sections of the song have very poor rhythm choice. The sections with 1/4 slider jumps do not have streamlike sounds like 1/16 snares or drums, yet you utilize them. Imo, making them hitcircle jumps is better.

Second, the same flow issue as the one pointed out in your Insane diff pops up. It needs to be taken care of.

Hope this helps. Good luck mapping!

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

newton- 2017-05-22T04:52:20+00:00

srijanfromsd wrote:
Hi m4m from #modreqs

First, I'm very sorry that I'm so late, hope you will forgive me. nah it's fine lo

Mapset
Offset should be 799. BPM is correct. fixed

Normal
Your rhythm choice is quite weird in many areas, which makes this difficulty something that needs a LOT of work, unfortunately. You need to utilize something called "filler rhythm", which makes playing some patterns with substantial amounts of time gaps in between less awkward to play. I'll walk through most of them: most of these are fine, it's a normal diff after all so 2/1 pauses in the music should be expected (i fixed most of them though)

00:10:224 - 00:10:710: The gap isn't too long, but is long enough to make playing slider #4 weird. One option for filler rhythm would be to put a hitcircle at 00:10:548. i did this one because 3/2 gaps suck

00:37:143 - 00:37:954: Very awkward rhythm due to hitsounding. The snare at 00:37:954 really belongs at 00:38:116 according to the music, but the way you've mapped it does not match the song at all. looking back on this yeah my hitsounds suck what was i doing

Regarding the snares, you need to fix this throughout the kiai section. No snare should really be on a red tick. yep

00:39:575: Why a hitcircle? The vocal is singing an important note here, so I would expect a slider. One reccomendation to fix it is to have slider from 00:39:575 to 00:40:062, then remove hitcircle at 00:40:224. It at least fits the music better, but the change is up to you. ranking criteria says to avoid long slider-only sections in a map, which is what i'm trying to avoid. i did change the former circle to a 1/1 slider to fill in the gap in rhythm though.

00:59:846: I like how you stick to a pattern for a while. Simple, but very good rhythm choice. low diffs are repetitive so yeah

01:28:710: Filler rhythm pls. yeah

01:30:170: Snare hitsounds on red ticks? Doesn't sound right at all. also fixed

Hopefully you're starting to get the idea by now. yeah i went back and polished some stuff

Hard
Minor details:
00:54:636: Try a repeating kick slider here to match the snares in the song. good idea!
01:35:826 - 01:36:474: Felt like the slider pattern is getting too repetitive, try maybe using hitcircles instead for variation. i don't really want to inflate sr higher than it already is through 1/2 hitcircle sections so nah
02:22:528 - 02:23:663: I tested this, and it plays a little weird, the flow is not really comfortable, and it doesn’t match the song. Probably the hitcircle (4) is feeling a little out of place. It might be better to place it somewhere else imo. the flow is already circular/comfortable so it's fine imo, ive played this on dt and hit it perfectly
Solid map! thanks!

Insane
00:01:791 (5): Doesn't really belong. a 1/1 gap would feel awkward so i settled for this

00:28:853 (4, 5, 6, 1): I don't understand the intentions of the jumps, especially the spacing difference between (5, 6). There is no change in music, so I don't understand why spacing is changing here. a previous mod said i should emphasize the "wa" in "kimi wa" to build intensity for the stack things (which i did through spacing)

00:54:474: IMO, this note should be spaced out much farther from the stream. i don't want to introduce variable stream spacing in an insane, imo that sort of thing only works with extras

01:10:123 (1, 2, 3): This is an issue that pops up frequently. The general flow of the map is based on quick and snappy cursor movement. But the jump, especially between (1, 2) is small and follows a different flow style (slow and circular), which contrasts the rest in a bad way. Choose the flow that you want, and complement it with other flows that do support the general flow, but don't contradict it. One solution to this instance is to reverse the slider heads on (2, 3) individually. made the flow sharper, though not in this way

02:22:042 - 02:23:177 vs. 02:23:339 - 02:24:474: The rhythm choices between these two sections are reflecting two completely different concepts (snappy vs. smooth), and the sections are right next to each other. Make your rhythm choice uniform. now that you point it out yeah this seems weird. changed

Starlight
Sections of the song have very poor rhythm choice. The sections with 1/4 slider jumps do not have streamlike sounds like 1/16 snares or drums, yet you utilize them. Imo, making them hitcircle jumps is better. this has been covered in previous mods - starting from 01:36:150 - you can hear a noticable twinkly sound in the background. this sound isnt intense enough to be mapped as a stream, so i mapped it using kicksliders. as for the sliderjumps after the final kiai, those had 1/16 guitar sounds on them.

Second, the same flow issue as the one pointed out in your Insane diff pops up. It needs to be taken care of. in this case, you'll notice that i use unconventional flow concepts - sharp angles at low intensity (eg 00:25:771 (2,3,1,2,3) - ) and wide angles / linear flow at kiais (eg 00:36:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - ), which is the opposite of what you'd expect. this is intentional.

Hope this helps. Good luck mapping!

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-05-22T18:14:43+00:00

srijanfromsd wrote:
Hi m4m from #modreqs

First, I'm very sorry that I'm so late, hope you will forgive me.

Mapset
Offset should be 799. BPM is correct.

Kanan's Easy
Two major points in general. First, since this is an easy difficulty, I would expect there to be a more uniform rhythm, but your rhythm switches from one pattern to another too often. I see that you're trying to follow the vocals, but the rhythm choice can get confusing for some beginners. For example:

00:11:197 - 00:13:467: A relatively dense rhythm choice here (dense is fine, too dense is not), but 00:13:791 long slider that breaks the pattern in an opposing way. The long sliders are there for undermapping i wanted to keep the sr under 1,5

00:42:332: You again put a long slider with the rest of the chorus (kiai) being a relatively dense rhythm choice. ^

Second: 00:34:386 - notice how the slider head is on a red tick? Some of the other ones (00:39:413) are on white ticks. I mostly have no problems on the timing, but when playing, it becomes hard to distinguish whether to click on a red tick or white tick (especially with Hidden). One solution may be to space out the hitobjects that land on a spaced tick since the vocal has an important sound at those moments. This is obviously on the strong sound and it should be clickable

Finally, Some minor details:
01:05:683: I think this should start at 01:05:521. 1/2 rhythm is forbidden in easy
01:06:981: Split this into 2 sliders. It's fine imo
02:31:305: Should belong on the red tick before.as the first point from these 3 points

Hope this helps. Good luck mapping!

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Winnie

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Winnie 2017-05-25T04:32:14+00:00

Hello from Queue seems relatively clean doesn't really need much of my input. Plus this looks like a map Monstrata can help you take a look at

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