[General]
- Only the top diff may have a custom diff name, so J.A.K.A and K.Y.A.F.A must be renamed to something that describes their actual difficulty.
- 02:46:880 - Why is the preview point 1/4 before the actual kiai? It'd make more sense to just put it at 02:46:948 - imo
- The background is .png which is cool and all but it's also 1.65 mb, so I've changed it to jpg for you to reduce file size http://puu.sh/uuqvq.jpg
- chork.wav is unrankable as it is less than 100 ms, so here's the fix http://puu.sh/uuqOm.wav
- Feel like you could use a harder bass kick for this. Try this sample instead? http://puu.sh/uurst.wav
- Your soft-hitnormal is really difficult to hear, so I amplified it a bit here http://puu.sh/uYvFs.wav
- In all difficulties that have a note at 00:17:970 - , it should be moved up to the 1/6 above at 00:17:993 -
- 02:28:880 - Same as above, all difficulties that have a note here should be moved up to 02:28:902 -
[Normal]
00:18:039 - Since this is a normal diff, I would try to make this pattern a bit more linear so that it's easier to read for lower leveled players, like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/748502500:27:311 - Add another note here for the crash
01:00:039 (60039|0) - Feel like you should move this to 3 to avoid the 3 note stack at 01:00:039 (60039|0,60584|0,61130|0) -
01:05:766 (65766|1,65902|0) - I would flip note direction here and make it 1 - 2 so that the 2/3 starting at 01:06:039 - looks visually different from the 1/2
01:18:311 - Starting here, I would consider using 1/2 ministacks to represent the repetitive alarm kind of sound, like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/752528501:40:675 (100675|1) - I'd put this note on the other hand so that it physically feels different from 01:40:402 (100402|0) - , like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/752529501:54:311 (114311|0,114584|0) - I don't really see the point of having this stack here.
02:28:948 - Since this is 220 bpm 1/3, I would definitely make the roll here a bit more linear so that it's easier to hit and flows a bit more naturally for the player at this level, like so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/752531002:46:948 (166948|0,166948|3,166948|1) - Despite this being the entrance to the kiai and thus really accented, you've used mostly singles up until this point, with minimal usage of jumps, so you can't honestly expect to place a triple and have the player hit it. It's unexpected because you've never once hinted at using larger chords in this chart.
03:11:766 - Similarly to what I suggested a while ago, I would also use some ministacks here to represent the repetitive synth, like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/752532303:17:698 (197698|0,197766|2) - Tbh, at this tempo, I don't think using 1/4 is a good idea in the normal. The highest snap you've used so far has simply been 1/3, and that only occurred once, so the player is most likely not going to be expecting this 1/4 here. I'd just remove it and keep the 1/1 note at 03:17:766 (197766|2) - , but moved to 1
03:18:789 (198789|3,198857|1,199198|0,199266|1,199880|0,199948|3,200425|3,200493|2) - Similar to the above. It makes reading confusing due to the 3/4 spaces that the player isn't expecting.
03:26:016 (206016|3) - I would consider putting this in 1 to avoid what looks like a linear roll with 03:25:675 (205675|1,205811|2,206016|3) - but isn't
03:34:539 (214539|2) - Similar to the above, I would put this in 1 and 03:34:743 (214743|1) - in 3
03:52:948 (232948|2,233220|1) - Control H to keep the note at 03:52:948 (232948|2) - solely contained on the left hand
Hitsounds00:18:311 (18311|1) - Missing bassS
00:18:584 (18584|1) - Add crash2
00:36:039 (36039|3) - ^
00:44:766 (44766|3) - ^
01:10:948 (70948|3) - ^
01:18:311 (78311|2) - Missing bassS
01:28:402 (88402|3) - add crash2
02:25:539 (145539|1,146357|1,147720|0) - add clap
02:29:493 (149493|2) - Add crash2
03:11:493 (191493|0,191766|1,192039|1) - Missing bassS
03:13:948 (193948|2) - add crash2
03:39:311 (219311|3) - ^
03:39:311 (219311|3) - add bassS
[Hana's Hard]
00:14:220 (14220|3) - I'd remove a note here since the current structure of this section has been only jumps + singles
00:33:857 - This whole burst is kind of an ass to hit due to all the direction changes imo. I'd try something like this instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/765755501:01:675 (61675|0) - I would make this a single note only to emphasize the "silence" of that beat.
02:43:402 (163402|2,163470|3,163539|2,163607|1,163675|0,163743|1,164493|1,164561|0,164630|1) - Direction changes at walls are rather annoying to hit imo because the player has already gathered up some momentum just by playing a single directional roll, and the one handed minitrill at the outer columns just brings that to a sudden halt. I'd try this instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/765759703:00:448 (180448|2,180516|3,180584|2,180925|1,180993|0,181061|1,181539|1,181607|0,181675|1,182016|2,182084|3,182152|2) - All these direction changes aaaa. I would really try using a more linear pattern here instead where the notes all flow in one direction, i.e all notes flow from 1 -> 4 or 4 -> 1 in a single burst.
[Insane]
00:17:698 (17698|1,17970|3) - I would remove these notes since the bursts all end on the 1/2 after they start.
00:31:130 (31130|1) - Would consider moving to 3 to make this a complementary chord with 00:31:311 (31311|0,31311|1,31493|0,31493|1) -
01:08:766 - The first half of this burst is pretty good imo, but I think the second half starts to break momentum which makes it harder than necessary to hit.
I'd try this instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/765764401:33:175 (93175|3,93243|1,93311|3,93311|2) - I would try to connect these notes together since the first two beats of this 1/4 burst give a fluid structure kind of feel to the player. So maybe try this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/765765301:34:402 - Ok, second half of the burst here. STAIRS! No one likes them because of how many direction turns there are so the player can never just start rolling their fingers. I'd do this instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/765766103:00:448 (180448|2,180516|3,180584|2,181539|2,181607|3,181675|2) - Similarly, I'd try to avoid these too. Maybe something like this might work
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/765769103:46:539 (226539|3) - Dont think this note is necessary? There's no real sound to justify it being there imo