09:46 CookieBite: hello
09:47 CookieBite: just want to know if you are willing to check my map or not c:
09:50 MrSergio: link,cause I no longer have it
09:50 *CookieBite is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1254678 Tenacious D - BEELZEBOSS (THE FINAL SHOWDOWN)]
09:54 MrSergio: 02:04:087 (4) - this feels a bit too intense out of nowhere, since it is similar to 02:03:171 (1) - in rhythm
09:54 MrSergio: I was expecting one more 1/1 slider there too
09:55 MrSergio: 02:05:766 (3,4) - also, this part is inconsistent with the stack at 02:03:934 (3,4) - . Since it is a short part at least make it more consistent, since it is really the same rhythm twice here
09:57 MrSergio: 02:58:247 - this is kiai time o.O?
09:57 MrSergio: why lol
09:57 MrSergio: 03:14:089 (1,2) - how come this isn't on that slight guitar in backgroun too, as the rest of this part
09:58 MrSergio: it seems to me you went for vocals here, but it sounds off imo
09:59 CookieBite: the first one fixed
10:00 MrSergio: 03:14:089 (1,2) - ok, I tried fixing this one and I have no clue myself
10:00 MrSergio: it feels off, but guitar and vocals are two different things, aka two different timings
10:00 MrSergio: so I can't fix it unless there is a timing for the guitar and not for the vocal
10:01 MrSergio: out of 03:02:418 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - only 03:14:089 (1,2) - are not following that guitar in any way
10:01 MrSergio: which definitely seems strange to me
10:01 CookieBite: omg that object code
10:02 MrSergio: how that even got approved tho, it throws me off a lot omg
10:03 CookieBite: ok
10:03 CookieBite: just point me which point makes you throw off the most
10:03 CookieBite: tho i'll try to fix all of them
10:04 MrSergio: I can fix timing tho
10:04 MrSergio: if you want
10:04 MrSergio: to match the guitar I mentioned
10:05 CookieBite: ok i want that please
10:05 MrSergio: 03:13:972 - the stuff here
10:05 MrSergio: those 2 sliders
10:05 CookieBite: i know
10:08 MrSergio: oho, fixed and looks way nicer now
10:08 MrSergio: wait, lemme tell you the process
10:08 CookieBite: ok
10:09 MrSergio: take the timing points at 03:14:926 - 03:14:589 - 03:14:089 - and delete all of them
10:09 MrSergio: then.... add new timing points at 03:14:130 - 03:14:764 -
10:10 MrSergio: 03:14:130 - BPM is 94,500
10:10 MrSergio: 03:14:764 - BPM is 83,500
10:10 MrSergio: add on each of them a green timing section with x0.50 SV and you shouldn;t need much more than that
10:10 MrSergio: obviously, resnap them
10:11 MrSergio: tell me how it looks and if it fits
10:12 MrSergio: I will go ahead and check the rest meanwhile
10:12 CookieBite: i feel like the second one the bpm is early
10:12 CookieBite: im not 100% sure
10:13 MrSergio: I would say some of yours timings felt a bit late by themselves, so maybe it;s just an impression
10:13 MrSergio: that way it feels on pitch to me, but you can make it slower or faster if you think it shouldn't be there
10:13 MrSergio: I mean, the offset
10:13 CookieBite: ok
10:13 MrSergio: in any case, this change resets the bubble count, so ask the other BNs for an opinion perhaps
10:14 CookieBite: i should unstack these two right? 03:14:764 (2,3) -
10:14 CookieBite: ok
10:14 MrSergio: (yes, the timing is a huge change here and I have to make you get the bubbles again)
10:14 MrSergio: I liked the stack tbh
10:14 MrSergio: if you want to move things around, go ahead
10:14 MrSergio: I'm fine with it tho
10:15 CookieBite: ok
10:16 MrSergio: 03:41:849 (1,2,3) - rip emphasis
10:16 MrSergio: I think that 2 is the one having the most emphasis in the song here
10:16 MrSergio: so the shorter jump on 2 makes a bit "wut"
10:17 CookieBite: shouldn't make 03:41:849 (1,2) - to have larger spacing?
10:17 MrSergio: you could turn 03:42:043 (2,3) - into a slider and place it
like...https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/814115110:18 MrSergio: the strong beat is on 2, so the biggest jump should be on it, not on 1
10:18 MrSergio: but you can change things around with a proper flow, as shown in the screen
10:18 CookieBite: like this? sorry im bad at understanding things
https://puu.sh/vWMYt/742f91124d.jpg10:19 MrSergio: the jump on 1 is still bigger tho
10:19 MrSergio: 03:41:462 (5,1) - this is bigger than 03:41:849 (1,2) - this
10:19 MrSergio: but it should be that 03:41:849 (1,2) - is bigger than 03:41:462 (5,1) -
10:19 MrSergio: either do jumps as this ^ or take my screen and use it as is
10:20 MrSergio: also, I'm considering every instrument in that part, not only vocals
10:20 MrSergio: if you follow vocals it might be you feel like 1 is stronger, but it isn't
10:21 MrSergio: since there is the guitar and the drum playing way more strongly on 2
10:21 MrSergio: I would highly prefer a slider for 03:42:043 (2,3) - tho, to keep consistency with the rest
10:21 CookieBite: ok
10:21 MrSergio: that way you also fix the emphasis issue
10:22 MrSergio: 03:47:462 (5) - what do you think of stacking this on 03:47:849 (1) - ?
10:22 MrSergio: that beat is really strong, but you use a normal spacing which is meh imo
10:23 MrSergio:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141178 example
10:24 CookieBite: well that is a cool idea
10:24 CookieBite: applied
10:24 MrSergio: 03:50:365 (6,7,8) - a slight spacing increase in these would be cool to keep the spacing consistency of your combo 03:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) -
10:25 MrSergio: 03:57:913 (3,4,5,6) - this seems to be a somewhat special pattern, since it is the first time I see it, but is there anything special in the song to support it? .-.
10:25 MrSergio: if I were to listen to the song a couple of times, I would end up thinking that 03:57:913 (3,4) - could be a slider instead
10:25 CookieBite: something this is ok?
https://puu.sh/vWNcC/ebb095a215.jpg10:25 MrSergio: to follow the guitar once again
10:26 MrSergio: ye, looks good
10:26 MrSergio: you could have kept the triangle tho xD
10:26 MrSergio: it feels a bit random now
10:26 CookieBite: oh
10:26 CookieBite: im not monstraxx
10:27 CookieBite: idc
10:27 CookieBite: xd
10:27 MrSergio: lmao
10:27 MrSergio: well, try to make it more organized anyway
10:27 CookieBite: lol ok
10:27 MrSergio: maybe move 8 a bit down
10:27 MrSergio: to make the 5-tail, 6, 7 and 8 a sort of rhombus
10:28 MrSergio: or something
10:28 MrSergio: don;t give me anime patterns on rock songs please xd
10:28 MrSergio: 04:31:591 (2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - great job here
10:28 CookieBite: thx
10:28 MrSergio: the 1/3 jump part is kinda hard, but the introduction works nicely
10:29 MrSergio: so it;s pretty cool
10:29 CookieBite:
nice to hear that
10:29 MrSergio: hey, but you are not monstrata, why do you have triangles? :^)
10:29 CookieBite: so is this ok?
https://puu.sh/vWNjr/587647020f.png10:29 CookieBite: because
10:29 MrSergio: joking lol
10:29 CookieBite: im monstraxx not monstrata
10:29 CookieBite: i know d
10:30 MrSergio: and you could rotate that a little counterclock-wise imo
10:30 MrSergio: to avoide the lame visual spacing between the slider tail and 7
10:31 CookieBite: ok
10:31 MrSergio: 04:49:140 (4,5) - this jump might be a bit hard to interpret as a 1/4 snap imo, since your 1/4 jumps so far were shorter, like 04:48:078 (1,2,3) -
10:32 CookieBite: WAIT WHERES MY COLORHAX
10:32 MrSergio:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141218 just moved down that triangle a bit
10:32 MrSergio: ?
10:32 CookieBite: lol i just messed up the colorhax
10:32 CookieBite: now fixed the colorhax so yea
10:33 MrSergio: 05:19:405 - break?
10:33 MrSergio: I mean, that feels like a long pause, so maybe add a break effect?
10:34 CookieBite: hmm
10:34 CookieBite: so i want it kinda fake the person
10:35 CookieBite: and i want to have some sort of effect
10:35 CookieBite: ok you know what
10:35 MrSergio: really deep explanation right there :^)
10:35 CookieBite: is this ok?
https://puu.sh/vWNvX/74894fe730.jpg10:35 MrSergio: sure
10:35 CookieBite: sorry i don't have a wide range of vocab lol
10:35 CookieBite: :O
10:36 MrSergio: I care about the break there, mainly
10:36 MrSergio: so how you do it doesn't erally matter that much to me
10:36 MrSergio: ok... so....
10:36 CookieBite: but does it rankable
10:36 MrSergio: I should check the folder and other meta stuff, but you need to get the bubbles again
10:36 MrSergio: yes, it is rankable, sdw
10:36 MrSergio: dw*
10:37 CookieBite: ok
10:37 MrSergio: so get the bubbles back and come to me again once that's done
10:37 CookieBite: gotta
10:37 CookieBite: the meta got checked by kwan
10:37 MrSergio: I will post this log with a bubble pop icon to make the notice clear to other BNs
10:37 MrSergio: good