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Hatsune Miku - Sweet*Drops After the Rain

posted 2010-08-31T01:11:18+00:00

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NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2010-10-08T11:39:21+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
unused .osb file..
comboburst.png can not be more than 500 pxs width, a resize is needed.
seems a heat discussion about offset here... what i got is 2225 or about...

[Easy]
it's Normal.. but at least it gets <3.25 stars...(though mostly because of the difficulty set w)
map the full song maybe. now here's a score gap between Easy and Normal.
01:09:116 - add a note.

[Normal]
OD+1
00:50:227 (1,2,3,4) - move them down a bit and right a bit, then after stacking it gets a nicer spacing.
00:58:672 (3) - remove.
02:07:561 (4) - don't know what is this following.. maybe change to sth like this?

[Hard]
00:42:894 (8,1,2) - emm.. the spacing is about the same but different beats.. consider change the spacing... though there's a new combo.
01:41:339 (9,1) - a bit far for a after triple jump..= =...
02:42:005 (8) - new combo.
02:43:561 (1,2) - switch new combo

[Taiko]
fine to me.

Last edited by NatsumeRin 2010-10-08T15:37:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Leorda

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2010-10-08T13:14:04+00:00

Ahai

[General]
1) Your comboburst is too large, maximum is 500x500 (current 553x579)
2) I think would be nice if sun face at score-kidanger.png is changed from sad face into neutral face

[Easy]
*) The spacing is way too high for easy diff
*) Don't stack the object, because begginer player (not all, lol) is hard to read the stack. Example 00:19:561 (2,3)
*) The slider velocity is a little bit high, I think
*) As other modder said, half-mapping is inconsistent mapping. Please map it full

00:23:339 (4) - Remove whistle from slider slider please, it's feel awkward (I guess~)
01:11:561 (1,2,3,4) - Way to horrid for new player......
01:23:783 (2) - Remove whistle from slider slider please, it's feel awkward (I guess~)

[Normal]
00:19:783 (3) - Remove whistle from slider slider please, it's feel awkward (I guess~)
00:21:339 (5) - Make symetric?
00:27:561 (3,4,5) - These whistle are little bit not relaxing, I guess~ Maybe remove whistle at 00:27:783 (4)?
01:06:227 (3) - Make symetric?
01:25:783 (1) - Remove whistle from slider slider. It's very loud for me (I guess~)
01:26:672 (2) - ^

[Taiko]
Fine~

[Hard]
00:19:783 (1) - Remove whistle from slider slider please, it's feel awkward (I guess~)
01:36:894 (1,2,3,4) - Please fill the object between these, otherwise, the HP Drain will fall apart

Nice song
STAR

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

Yes_old 2010-10-08T16:05:33+00:00

Thanks.

I don't see the need to map Easy all the way to the end. Also.. although this is probably something like Easy+, I don't think it's too difficult for a beginner to pass.

banvi

Joined June 2009

banvi 2010-10-08T20:52:24+00:00

i like

Firo Prochainezo

Joined June 2010

Firo Prochainezo 2010-10-09T06:00:27+00:00

Easy:
00:56:894: (4) Start the combo here?
01:28:894: (2) Remove this slider and start the spinner there?

Normal:
00:33:116: (1) Remove the hitcircle?
01:09:561: (3) Move this slider to a white tick.
01:18:672: (1) Start the combo here.
02:00:894: Add a hitcircle here?
02:30:225: (2) Add hitclap?

Hard:
00:46:339: (6) Remove hitclap.

I don't see any problems! Good map too

star'd

Lissette

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Lissette 2010-10-09T22:09:31+00:00

Hard
00:43:450 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - sounds better triplets instead of doubles here
01:42:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - plays better if you lay this combo like this http://puu.sh/heP this way 1 will be farther from prev 1, just like in time line ^^ that's my opinion
01:43:778 - useless timing section ><
01:54:561 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - sounds better triplets instead of doubles here too

Normal
01:25:667 - useless timing section

Easy
I found this a bit hard for easiest diff ><
00:22:556 - useless timing section
01:20:778 - same
01:27:222 - same

I don't mod taiko ><

Pretty map!!
Star!

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

Yes_old 2010-10-10T07:09:49+00:00

Updated. Thanks!

thekillerhjkhjk

Joined October 2008

thekillerhjkhjk 2010-10-11T09:30:44+00:00

i really can't find anything wrong with this map, your patterns are all well-made and organized, the notes are not cluttered or too sparse, and the song, skin and combo colours are all upbeat and make me happy

big star

Bass

Joined January 2009

Bass 2010-10-12T14:37:18+00:00

Hey :3

[Hard]
00:58:227 (3) - move this to y: 256? to make a perfect triangle with (1) and (2)
01:22:894 (2) - circle is overlapping slider a bit, move it

Easy, Normal, and Taiko seems fine

Star :3

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

Yes_old 2010-10-12T20:58:47+00:00

Thanks~

Doomsday

Featured Artist

Joined July 2008

Doomsday 2010-10-12T22:06:45+00:00

Hi

Your offset feels like it's a bit early. I got Offset: 2,236
I would put Vocaloid in the source, and OSTER Project in the tags, since most Vocaloid maps I see use Vocaloid as a source. I think It'd be nicer to keep it consistent with the other Vocaloid maps.
For ranking, your comboburst is a bit too wide. the max size for combobursts is 388x767, while yours is 477x500. Could you shrink it so it fits in the max size?
Also, I found those combo colours hard to see on the background. especially the blue (Blue circles on blue background ) Could you darken them a bit so they are easier to see on the bright background? (and change the 2/blue as well? since that is hard to see even if it's darker)

Looking at the difficulties, they look a bit too hard for their names, so what I would do is rename them:

Easy < Normal
Normal < Hard
Hard < Insane

imo, these fit the actual difficulties better.

[EASY]

I wouldn't really call it an easy (Looks like my idea of a Normal. heh), but it's a nice map, and not too tough for the easiest difficulty.
Could you map it up to the end of the song though? Since Normal and hard map to the end, this one feels incomplete.

Oh, and if you rename this to Normal, don't forget to increase the difficulty sliders (HP Drain, Overall Difficulty etc). I would increase HP Drain by 2 notches, and Overall Difficulty and Approach Rate by 1 notch.

[NORMAL]

Increase the Approach rate and Overall Difficulty by 1 notch? Looks quite low for a normal (If you rename this to hard, I would increase them by something like 3 notches instead, and HP Drain by something like 2 notches. Your call though)

Map itself is looking good. Pretty fun too.

[HARD]

00:43:450 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete (4) and (6)? Here, Only the first stack fits in properly with the lyrics imo, since you can hear 2 beats in the lyrics. There is only 1 beat in the lyrics for where you put the other stacks, so I think you only need 1 beat for those. If you do this. It might be a good idea to move (5) up a bit too since the spacing should be a bit wider with (4) gone.
01:26:672 (1,2,3,4) - I didn't like these jumps. I can't hear how they fit in, and they seem to come out of nowhere. Mind removing them?
01:40:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Mind moving these closer together. Again, the jumps don't fit in well imo. That, and the rhythm's here are awkward to do when you have to do jumps as well.
01:54:561 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Delete (2), (4) and (6)? Kinda like at 0:43, except none of them need 2 beats imo. You could leave this one though since it works as a nice pattern on it's own, but I found it awkward to play with those lyrics.

I might've had a lot to rag on with this, but I do like this diff. I found it pretty fun.

[TAIKO]

Feels a bit too random at times, but it's alright. Just one thing:

01:49:561 (1) - Could you put a long slider (drumroll) here instead of a spinner? I think it would fit better than a tiny spinner.

This is a nice little map really. Hard might have abused triplets a little, but it was still pretty fun, and Easy and Normal are great. Good stuff

Starred

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

Yes_old 2010-10-14T04:54:56+00:00

Thanks

Uploading with some fixes!

T_T.. I finally changed the difficulty names. Although I didn't really want to because Insane to me means a wtfhard beatmap

Oh. And I left the combo burst the same size because others were saying the max width is 500px. Not sure which is correct.

Sakura

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Sakura 2010-10-15T04:16:26+00:00

[General]
First Kiai time start is not snapped.
Second Kiai time start is not snapped. (Except for Insane).
Third Kiai time start is not snapped (Except for Taiko).

[Taiko]
Second Kiai time start is not snapped.

[Easy]
Forgot to map the rest of the diff? sorry but i dont bubble maps that have half-mapped difficulties

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

Yes_old 2010-10-15T06:12:59+00:00

Mapped Normal until the end orz

James2250

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James2250 2010-10-16T05:57:17+00:00

Even if you did make it darker I still don't like that teal color against the background (especially doing kiai time) but might just be me

Also do you want to change what doomsday said?:
"I would put Vocaloid in the source, and OSTER Project in the tags, since most Vocaloid maps I see use Vocaloid as a source. I think It'd be nicer to keep it consistent with the other Vocaloid maps."
My mistake, this isn't a good thing to do

I guess PM me or Sakura after to check for bubble?

Last edited by James2250 2010-10-17T00:57:39+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-10-16T08:07:53+00:00

try offset 2,234 and resnap all note if you like ~
mapset look fine so far

if no then just call me again ja ~

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

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Yes_old 2010-10-16T09:27:10+00:00

Changed the colors!

James2250 wrote:
Also do you want to change what doomsday said?:
"I would put Vocaloid in the source, and OSTER Project in the tags, since most Vocaloid maps I see use Vocaloid as a source. I think It'd be nicer to keep it consistent with the other Vocaloid maps."

I'm not going to change this. My other Vocaloid map is tagged with the person who made the song. I checked other vocaloid songs and there are a lot that use the artist of the song as the source as well.

orioncomet wrote:
try offset 2,234 and resnap all note if you like ~
mapset look fine so far

if no then just call me again ja ~

Ploy <3

I am not that good at timing, but I think that the offset I have right now is more accurate. Offset checks have been inconsistent so idk u_u

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-10-16T10:04:16+00:00

It's fineeeeee ~ dont worry ><!!~

I like older combo color cuz It was cute and match with song + BG..
but w/e I like this map ~~cuz It's DTable~~.. so Bubbled

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

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Yes_old 2010-10-16T10:18:10+00:00

Thank you!!

I like older colors too ;_; But I don't want people to go blind

Edit: Okie I popped bubble because my song title was incorrect. I think this should be right now.
~~Can I shorten it to Sweet*Drops? orz~~

Soaprman

Joined January 2008

Soaprman 2010-10-16T19:25:19+00:00

Re-bubbled. Except it's a pointy bubble instead of a poofy bubble, and you have a lot of pointy bubbles already so it's really not that special.

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

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Yes_old 2010-10-16T20:19:55+00:00

Don't be silly-- all bubbles are special to me, especially pointy ones!

Thanks!

Krisom

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Krisom 2010-10-16T20:23:22+00:00

Huh? I always knew this song as Ame no Chi Sweet*Drops...

...Oh well, I'm supposing "Ame Nochi" stands for "after the rain" :v

Oh look! I can still shoot kudosu to this!

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

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Yes_old 2010-10-16T21:05:53+00:00

Huuum. Should I just keep the title as Ame no Chi Sweet*Drops then? I dunno if it's better to translate the title or leave it ._.

And thanks for another star Krisom <3

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-10-17T01:30:38+00:00

Yes-sama <3333

[General]
*I guess it really doesn't matter if you use the translated title or not (whichever you prefer) as long as you have the japanese name in the tags. (Also, I prefer the English name, but orz)
*Cute skin elements as always <3
*Actually, I hate to be a skin nazi, but there's a couple of blemishes on the hp bar which are noticeable http://puu.sh/iUE *hides*
*wtf is up with the timing (there seems to be a blip at about 02:06:450). First offset (2,228) is fine, but add a new uninherited section at 126,642 in all difficulties and resnap.

[Normal]
*Looks fine as a "normal", but seems to be a bit tricky for the easiest map in the set. Do you think that you could add an easier difficulty?

[Hard]
01:11:561 (1,2) - <3333

[Taiko]
*No countdown?

[Insane]
*Same AR as Hard (and only one OD higher)? I recommend increasing these a little bit.
00:42:894 (8,1,2,3) - spacing? (basically an anti-jump)
01:06:227 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:29:561 (1) - hmm you could actually start this on the previous blue tick
01:36:894 (1,2,1,2) - expected these to be jumps
01:41:339 (9,1) - didn't expect this jump at all
01:41:561 (1,1) - and then this is an anti-jump

Yes_old

Joined May 2009

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Yes_old 2010-10-17T03:24:18+00:00

Hi Derekku <3

Derekku wrote:
*wtf is up with the timing (there seems to be a blip at about 02:06:450). First offset (2,228) is fine, but add a new uninherited section at 126,642 in all difficulties and resnap.

Fixed (but I don't really understand xD)

I raised the difficulty levels in Insane a bit, but I don't want to make the map THAT hard so I didn't raise it by much. I also left the jumps, as I feel that they are not out of place and add a bit of spice into the map.

I think my Normal is sufficient as the easiest map in the set so I won't be making an easier map.

I read in the Taiko guideline thread somewhere that the countdown isn't recommended so I removed it.

Thanks for your mod

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-10-17T03:37:29+00:00

Yes wrote:
Derekku wrote:
*wtf is up with the timing (there seems to be a blip at about 02:06:450). First offset (2,228) is fine, but add a new uninherited section at 126,642 in all difficulties and resnap.
Fixed (but I don't really understand xD)

The timing is off by about 30ms at that point which is why I said to add a new uninherited section. It looks like you added it in the wrong spot, so please change that to the 126,642 offset I mentioned and resnap.

As for 00:42:894 (8,1,2,3) and 01:41:561 (1,1): These are anti-jumps aka spacing that doesn't make sense and is confusing. I'd consider myself a pretty good player, but these spots confused me and broke my combo even AFTER seeing them in the editor first. Also, I didn't mind that the OD was lower in Insane, but I'd at least like to see the Approach Rate raised a tick so that the notes don't fade in so slowly. =x

I still think that Normal is a bit tough with its midly high slider velocity, distance spacing, and offbeats, so perhaps you could ask if anyone wants to make an easier diff? s:

Nice job though, nonetheless! ps dont kd this

orioncomet

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orioncomet 2010-10-17T04:08:20+00:00

those jump are fine to me, I FC'd at first try and also DT

~~and BPM/offset is off~~ rawwrr ~ now we know why

Alace

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Alace 2010-10-17T07:00:19+00:00

well mp3 is broken in 02:05:33, so the timing is off

Here is a new mp3 (192kps cut by james lazy guy)
BPM:135.00
offsst:2260

you may have a hard time to move green lines, (for now) you can just move lines for kiai and custom SV,
when you finish those work
i will reDL and make a full mod post
(in fact, the mapset is really overmodded, but no one found that the mp3 is broken? ROFL)

Download: Hatsune Miku.rar

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-10-17T18:03:58+00:00

Thanks Alace and James for the help ^^

I uploaded new mp3 so everyone please remember to re-dl!

Krisom

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Krisom 2010-10-17T22:07:37+00:00

Well, at least you got the mp3 cut as I suggested...

...I think I'll do a modpost on this one once again before Alace checks it. I don't know if I'll bubble since, well, he seems to be intrested in bubbling this :<

Sooooooo, let's see....

General-
· The new skin is lovely! though the spinner background doesnt fit too much imo. I still love it!
· Tags seems to be the same on all diffs, though you might want to add "vocaloid2" (It's a minor thing, I seriously don't know who would search for vocaloid2, but everyone seems to add it on tags, so meh, your choice :/)
· Why is letterboxing just enabled on taiko diff?
· All diffs: Kiai Time ending timing sections should go at 01:31:148 and at 02:54:704
· Everything else seems to be fine, let's mod this baby!

Normal-
Nothing to poke at.

Hard-
01:28:259 (3) - Since (1)'s start has a normal hitfinish, you might want to make (3)'s start a normal hitfinish as well
Nothing serious to poke at.

Taiko-
Not a great taiko player, but everything seems to be ok here x:

Insane-
Nothing to poke at.

...hopefully this modpost will speed up the ranking process, though I said said before, I'm not willing to bubble just because alace will recheck this. If he just gives you a bubble, then I'll regret not bubbling this :<

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2010-10-17T23:06:53+00:00

new YES's map XD ~

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-10-18T01:38:06+00:00

Fixed some of Krisom's stuff. Thanks

I didn't cut it at 2:05, I swear

Thanks siriru for star <3!!

Alace

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Alace 2010-10-19T07:41:43+00:00

mapset is nicely playable (Taiko is good too)

<Hitsounds>
I can understand what you want to try in this mapset
slidertick will sounds a bit louder than other hitsounds if you use the same sample
if you use the custom tick in your whole map, you may notice that some parts have toooooo many whistles (in normal and hard)
softwhistles are good when they are put on red ticks, so it`s better to use green lines to control the slidertick sounds
ex:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/5444 and http://osu.ppy.sh/s/6099 they are the oldest maps to use this tech

Normalwhistle sounds are really too loud for this song, you use soft hitsounds in most parts, those normalwhistle sound a bit suddenly
if you really like those whistles, i suggest to use 60~75% volume for them

i make a short hitsounds .osu sample here, it sounds like light song lol
feel free to ask me helping you online

EDIT:I like your finish patterns XD

Download: Hatsune Miku - SweetDrops After the Rain (Yes) [TEST].osu

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-10-21T19:56:31+00:00

THANKS! I changed some hitsounds~

_lolipop

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_lolipop 2010-10-22T17:30:11+00:00

> <

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-10-22T19:34:11+00:00

Thanks <3!!!

Aenna

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Aenna 2010-10-23T03:08:36+00:00

No

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-10-23T06:54:18+00:00

THANKS

RE-DOWNLOAD AGAIN PLEASE ._.

abalee

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abalee 2010-10-25T12:19:37+00:00

O_o it is fine now?

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-10-25T19:07:50+00:00

oh thanks !!!

i asked Alace to recheck it yesterday for more hitsounds feedback!

Sure

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Sure 2010-10-26T09:32:32+00:00

I missed your map

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-10-26T18:47:39+00:00

Aww thanks ykcarrot

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-11-03T04:59:54+00:00

Pop! Added storyboard. Re-dl please

Sorryy

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Verdisphena 2010-11-04T01:30:26+00:00

YES!

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-11-04T02:14:27+00:00

Thankssssss

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-11-14T03:03:13+00:00

*fixes star icon*

Cute new storyboard and skin elements! <3 However, I have a concern:

*The max sizes for storyboard images (when using tall or wide ones) are 1200x480 and 640x1500. rain2.png is 800x2000, which is unacceptable. Please scale this down, fix the sb, and resubmit.
*Other than that, I think the couple full-screen-size images should be fine. The sb load doesn't get too high, so that's good.
*Also, I don't think I said this before, but how about using your default-numbers for the score ones as well? You'd obviously need the dot, x, and percent-sign to go with them, though.

Fixed those couple little blemises on your scorebar-bg as well. <3

EDIT: mp3 fades out strangely at the end, but it's still better than the previous one that was cut strangely in the middle. xp

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-11-15T04:16:49+00:00

Thanks Derekku <3

Fixed, fixed and fixed! (except it's the same mp3)

Krisom

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Krisom 2010-11-15T12:17:36+00:00

Since derek naziied the SB, I'll bubble
(btw, rechecked everything at nothing seems to be poke-able)
(~*w*)~

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-11-15T17:05:04+00:00

Thanks for all the rechecking and bubbling, Krisom!!

Alace

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Alace 2010-11-15T19:04:39+00:00

ranked

Krisom

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Krisom 2010-11-15T20:38:39+00:00

o/ Congratulations on the rank Yes-Sama! Please continue making awesome beatmaps :D!

Derekku

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Derekku 2010-11-15T20:49:26+00:00

Yes-sama *-*

Congrats <3

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-11-15T20:57:09+00:00

Thank you so muchh!!

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-11-15T21:21:24+00:00

Heart fixed.

lovhin456

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lovhin456 2010-11-16T02:30:08+00:00

Congrats Yes ~ :3

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-11-16T03:22:45+00:00

Thank youuu lovhin456 and osuplayer >u<

GabrielRKF

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GabrielRKF 2010-11-16T13:12:21+00:00

Yesu, epic as always >w<

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-11-16T15:47:35+00:00

Congratz ~

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-11-16T21:43:22+00:00

Thanks roxy!! Thanks Verdisphena!! *feels loved*

GREATTEACHER_old

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GREATTEACHER_old 2010-11-16T23:46:31+00:00

Nice to play on easy mode

Yes_old

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Yes_old 2010-11-18T01:40:33+00:00

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