Yo again. Modding queue, as usual. (this been a backburner one?)
[General]
New measure falls in the wrong place in my opinion (NC mod put downbeats in odd places). Try moving offset to 1006 (where the first note is).
Obligatory hitsounding reminder... seems a little empty for the Easy diff. What's there works, maybe just needs a little more? Secondly, don't double up on hitsounds like at 00:15:406 (15406|0,15406|1). It can often come across as being overpowering.
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Hope this helps and best of luck!
[General]
New measure falls in the wrong place in my opinion (NC mod put downbeats in odd places). Try moving offset to 1006 (where the first note is).
Obligatory hitsounding reminder... seems a little empty for the Easy diff. What's there works, maybe just needs a little more? Secondly, don't double up on hitsounds like at 00:15:406 (15406|0,15406|1). It can often come across as being overpowering.
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Easy
Syncopation heavy, I see... (Perhaps change to OD 7 HP 6.5)
- 00:07:456 (7456|2,7906|0) - Move one col right for some sort of PR with 00:07:906 (7906|0,8206|2)?
- 00:09:856 (9856|3,9856|1) - Not too sure about this double, particularly only 1/2 beat after another. Perhaps the double should be at 00:10:606 (10606|0) instead.
- 00:19:306 (19306|2,19306|1) - Move one col left?
- 00:24:706 (24706|2,24856|0,25006|1) - Move to cols 123 instead of 201 for some PR? (Probably move 00:25:306 (25306|2) too if yes)
- 00:34:456 (34456|1,34606|0) - Move to cols 02 instead of 10 to avoid repeated note in the same column?
- 00:35:206 (35206|2,35806|0) - Pattern inconsistency? (move 1 beat earlier)
- 00:38:506 (38506|1) - col 0 to avoid minijack
- 00:49:456 (49456|3) - I'd say just follow vocals here and delete this note.
- 00:58:906 (58906|0) - I'd say move this one beat back to follow the guitar pattern instead.
- 01:00:106 - Follow vocals instead? (Positioned with PR)
- 01:09:706 - Similar to above.
- 01:19:306 (79306|1,79306|3) - A double here gives it too much emphasis imo. Consider reducing to a single.
- 01:24:556 (84556|1) - col 0 to avoid minijack
- 01:29:806 (89806|0) - Move to the red tick before to follow the guitar instead? (Would probably flow better for a mini-stream, rather than waiting a little bit for the final note)
Normal
- 00:02:206 (2206|1) - Double? (pattern inconsistency imo)
- 00:05:206 (5206|2,5506|0) - cols 01 rather than 20?
- 00:07:456 (7456|1) - Double? (pattern consistency)
- 00:08:206 (8206|2) - ^
- 00:09:106 (9106|2,9406|1) - ^
- 00:12:256 (12256|2) - To col 3?
- 00:13:006 (13006|2) - Double for consistency?
- 00:26:281 (26281|0) - On 1/1 before rather than 1/4?
- 00:29:806 (29806|2,29806|1) - Have a right-handed double instead? (cols 23) Might be a little easier to play.
- 00:33:856 (33856|3) - Perhaps col 2?
- 00:42:556 (42556|3,42556|2) - No drum like with 00:42:106 (42106|2,42106|3,42256|1,42256|0,42706|0,42706|1), so consider reducing to a single.
- 00:43:756 (43756|2,43756|3) - ^
- 00:47:356 (47356|3,47356|2) - ^
- 00:53:356 (53356|3,53356|2) - ^
- 00:58:606 - what about like this instead?
- 01:06:106 (66106|2) - Double for consistency?
- 01:10:906 - I'm struggling to see a consistent pattern here. Are you trying for [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7751280]this kind of emphasis[/url]? It's present in some places, but not all.
- 01:19:006 (79006|3,79156|2,79306|0,79306|1,79456|3,79531|2,79606|1,79756|0) - Ctrl + H for PR following it? (or just switch cols of 01:19:906 (79906|2,80056|1) around...)
- 01:24:556 (84556|3) - The LN is going though silence! I reckon you'd be better of just having this as a normal note.
- 01:29:806 (89806|1) - I know there's a drum there, but it just feels a little awkward to map it (it's like it's there simply for the sake of "there's something in the audio". Not everything needs to be mapped). Consider removing it.
Hope this helps and best of luck!