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pinkie pie is pleased

thank you.

also note for me to fix the sv with next bn
-please fix SV in some part and adding new SV for consistency

Go update first then, so I can go check it.

You can check it anyway.
Not major issue i guess
But i will update it tonight (9 hours later from now)

done.
this map is up to date
you can check it now fc

Sorry for late, was kinda busy irl

00:22:046 - If you like to use boom! -> normal ~~~ or something, I would like to suggest this SV

00:22:046 - 5

00:22:088 - 0.85

00:36:103 - I think we need to give something different feeling here because here's a finish, Maybe suggesting 4 chords.

00:38:503 - 2 notes are over chorded here I think. There's just really tiny drums. Just 1/4 stream with one note can give different feeling enough. 00:41:588 - Look, I never think those 2 notes are consistent'd

00:55:817 - ~ 00:56:331 - SV is hard to read because 00:55:303 - ~ 00:56:331 - This empty part is really long and can't see nothing about interval. So you need to show 00:56:331 (56331|1,56331|3,56331|0,56331|4) - this notes to players first, then you can add SVs. I think

00:55:303 - 0.1
00:55:474 - 0.25
00:55:646 - 0.5
00:55:817 - 0.75
00:55:988 - 1.4
00:56:160 - 0.6

is better.

00:58:731 (58731|4,59074|0) - Finish these LNs on red line or white lines. Much comfortable to make good acc and it won't be a problem of snapping issues. Personally I like to suggest on red line.

01:06:103 - ~ 01:06:960 - Not unreadable, yes it's fine to play but I couldn't feel something powerful feeling on here. Lack of something high-light. How about to increase SVs more?

01:37:817 - Those SVs were kinda hmm..... well I can't say definite things here but 01:37:817 - 1.3 -> 1.2 is better in my personal opinion. (All of 1.3)

01:44:674 - ~ 01:45:017 - kinda hard to handle in correct timing. Just better to use 01:44:674 - 1.5 01:44:760 - 0.5 and ~~^

01:45:017 - Must be 0.59 for reading

Patterns should be fine, I just want to have consultation about SVs with you, uneven spacing is intention or not and that you have a knowledge about SVs. Call me on IRC for continue this mod

Okay
I will poke you 1 hour again if you online

fixed all and fix the other similar things
also i want to make sure about this
00:43:646 -
03:57:017 -
01:06:103 - can you give me a example for this (im not good at sv)


UPDATE

Looks like you're not good at SV as you said, now I can grasp that SVs were not intended so here's SV mod, I've onlining about 9 hours and you are still offline so posting is much better I think

00:42:960 - 0.295, because 00:43:646 - those 0.49 + 0.1 SVs show spaces like x 0.295. so doing 0.2 and became 0.295 kinda makes confusing a bit (Because this is really slow SV so even 0.1 SV could make big difference). So if you do 0.295 on here, you can make same spaces with 00:43:646 - these SVs.

00:55:303 - Seems you didn't fix this. Please reply on mod of above!

01:06:103 - If you want to keep 1.2x here, add 0.8x on 01:06:274 - here for make correct space. And 01:06:360 - remove this 0.4x

01:06:446 - (1 + 0.4) / 2 = 0.7 =/= 1. Which means unreadable.

Fix all 1x that here (01:06:446 - ~ 01:06:960 - )to 1.6

01:26:846 - Also (1.2 + 0.4) / 2 = 0.8 =/= 1.

Same. 1.2x -> 1.6x

01:44:760 - 01:44:931 - 0.5

01:45:017 - 0.295

01:54:446 - All 1.2 to 1.6 that in this section. (01:54:274 - ~ 01:55:646 - )

01:56:931 - Now you used SVs on 1/4 section, Which means 4 pieces. So should be (High SV + Lower SV) / 3 =1.

01:56:931 - Move it to 01:56:846 - here or make it to 2.6x

02:07:688 - Should be 02:07:731 - here.

02:21:703 - ^ 01:54:274 -

03:07:046 - 0.5

03:07:217 - 0.5

03:07:303 - Add 0.295 x and 03:07:560 - remove this 0.2

03:16:560 - ^ 01:54:274 -

03:19:217 - ^ 01:56:931 -

03:56:331 - 0.295

04:29:246 - ^ 01:54:274 -

04:31:903 - ^ 01:56:931 -

05:02:160 - ^ 01:54:274 -

05:09:874 - 1.6

05:10:088 - to 05:10:131 -

all fixed
i hope im not miss anything
sorry for delay cuz i mst reinstall my osu

UPDATE

Reverted to bub #1 because there was a mapper's own updating.

Good luck!

confirmed. #2

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Finally i come xd, sorry for my lateness.
Don't forget about metadata things i've said to you earlier.

00:29:931 (29931|0,30103|3) - Suggest this at col 4 and col 2 , much neater and not too bracketing

00:57:531 - 00:58:217 - ,etc. I really hope you can pull something more unique by making these and other similar synth sound with LNs.. you have strong synth sound that you can work at..

00:59:417 - the SVs here are really2x strong.. really recommend to make it softer by 0,60x and 1,40x instead.

01:23:417 - Make this LN here , so that it can bring out more proper and unique gimmick, do it on similar synth sound.

01:24:103 - tbh, considering that the clap sound is constant solid strong here, i would consider using stack pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7903856

01:26:846 - Same issues as before, make the sv softer too..

01:36:617 (96617|0,96788|2) - Better switch column here, current one feels a bit too forced.

01:43:303 - The clap here feels really underemphasized with just 2 notes.. i mean, the beat here actually quite heavy in terms of intensity here.

01:50:331 (110331|2,110503|4,110674|3) - There's 1/2 synth sound here, i figure you can use 1/2 LN so this part will be more spiced.

01:54:274 - Same SV issues, please fix it at all similar parts. I won't mention it again.

01:57:360 - 01:58:046 - ,etc. I think you already realize the big clap sound here judging by how you manage the Hitsound here, so what i wanna ask here, why not trying to bring triple here? i know that you feel it will be cramped because of the LN, but honestly, the overall pattern diff if you added triple chord here, still coherent with the rest of the map.. and this clap section here is rather short too, i don't see the reason not to use triple here, because otherwise, you will ended up mapping it the same way as 01:46:046 -

02:08:846 - Same thing as the one i mentioned at 00:57:531 - regarding the LN, trying to map the synth in more versalite way to bring out the song in more proper way.

02:16:217 - 02:16:560 - 02:16:903 - , and so on, it would be really good to bring LN for repeating vocal here (maybe you can make it jack LN? up to you), i do think the music properties actually allow you to do more xd

02:41:417 (161417|4,161760|4,162103|4,162446|4) - I notice you kinda stack this one, is this for any purpose? if yes, i recommend you do the similar stick in col 1 at 02:42:617 - , mirroring it to make the pattern more rigid and structured.

03:12:617 (192617|4,192788|1,192960|0) - Same one as i mention at 01:50:331 (110331|2,110503|4,110674|3) -

03:19:646 - Same again as i mentioned before about the clap being triple.

03:33:017 - This part is a bit too dense for fairly "calm" part after the kiai, and yet i think this part almost the same with kiai in terms of patterning although the intensity of music is actually differ by quite huge of a margin. My recommendation is to reduce the number of note you have at 03:34:217 - 03:34:731 - 03:35:760 - ,etc (all the one that have W) into single note. they are a quite kick in the first place, bringing them into single will retain the calmness of the song

04:06:274 (246274|1,246446|4) - Bring this into 1/2 LN will emphasis the vocal better here.

04:14:160 - I still prefer you did something similar like 02:02:503 - , although i know you may want to emphasis the beat clap there, but having LN pattern there won't ruin the clap emphasis, but the reverse, will complement the part section of the song well.

04:25:303 (265303|4,265474|3,265646|0) - Same again as 01:50:331 (110331|2,110503|4,110674|3) -

04:49:303 - Yeah, pretty much same again as what i mention regarding the LN things.

05:10:388 - This part becomes bland considering that this is suppose to be the outro part of the song. I know you don't really want to do 1/4 like the beginning because of the amount of three chords the pattern uphold into, that's why i'm proposing to cover the 1/4 with LN instead, it proposes variety and emphasizing song more.

Yeah, call me back after you done with addressing the mod, if you apply my pattern mod, please do it on similar part (since this song is actually repeating..)

done.
fix all and add some new pattern

01:02:331 (62331|2,62417|3,62588|1,62760|4) - Ah i never meant ask you to use 1/4 LN here, i mean, you can make something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7920456 , using 1/2 LN to emphasize the synth, but not 1/4 ...

01:23:931 - For this part, you better follow the layering you did at 02:46:217 - , the one you did at 02:46:217 - is already correct, you just need to follow that.

02:07:988 - for this part, i didn't say mix vocal with synth.. i guess it's better to use screenshot afterall..

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7920502 = 02:07:988 -

02:10:731 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7920544

02:13:474 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7920559

02:16:217 - For this part, what i meant is, follow vocal separately here so that the focus in the vocal for this section only , like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7920575

02:18:960 - And then go back again to follow synth, btw for this, you can just follow the one i screenshot at 02:07:988 - , it's practically the same.

04:08:846 - I didn't say anything in mod to change this tbh .. I only ask to change 04:14:160 - ... ah, if you want to keep this, it's also fine either way, i just said, i never said to mix anything to make complicated LN..

for the rest of the similar section, you can see and follow my screenshot if you confused about the layering.

Btw, for the metadata, should be Shine!!(you Remix) , looking at https://soundcloud.com/you_bootleg/shineyou-remix

fix all mentioned problem
hope im not miss anything cuz you screenshots is make me confused

UPDATE

all good enough here.
approved!

thank you

gratz bang, itu kata2 postnya di atur ntar dikira apa sama orang2. U":