you asked for feedback
hella subjective stuff incoming waa
topdiff ofc:
- 00:02:317 (1,2,1,2) - clap thing isn't really that strong and having the 1/4 gap at the end feels a bit too dense for this part, i'd just make these 1/1 sliders
- 00:16:527 (3,1) - 1 doesnt get any emphasis really, maybe stack 3 under 00:16:265 (2) - so there's some movement?
- 00:22:711 (2,3) - since the patterning/rhythm focuses pretty heavily on the vocals ctrl+ging these could be nice. sidenote: 00:22:711 (2,3) - jump feels a little excessive for here
- 00:38:369 (1,2,3) - 3 stands out a bit being a different curve, not sure if intentional but looks weird to me
- 00:40:211 (1,1) - spacing here is a little weird and the ncing doesnt fit much either. i think if you made these stack like before 00:37:975 (3,1) - it could work or just make 00:40:211 - a 1/4 slider as well since the vocals dont really stop yet
- 00:45:606 (2,3) - movement could be more fluid if you blanketed 3 with 1 like this:
https://i.imgur.com/8P8IDgO.png. the flowbreak on 00:46:001 (1) - would also have more emphasis as a result
- 00:47:580 (4) - nc
- 00:59:948 (2,3,4,1,2) - movement here is kinda eh cuz you dont really play the slider that much and feels super linear + implied flow is ??, if you wanted something linear maybe try mirroring 01:00:738 (4) -
- 01:11:001 (2,3,1) - again movement from here is also eh, try ctrl+g 1 and adjust 01:11:790 (1,2) - accordingly? you kinda did it at 01:19:554 (2,3) -
- 01:12:843 (5) - nc
- 01:22:054 (1,2,3) - spacing seems a bit much for this pitch considering 01:17:843 (1,2) - is kinda your base spacing for it. try to nerf it i'd suggest. you can try then making the jump to 01:22:054 (1,3) - more emphatic as a result. also swap ncs for 01:22:054 (1,3) -
- 01:41:527 - 01:45:738 - normally this would be covered somehow, maybe ending the slider here and stacking 01:41:790 (1) - 01:46:001 (1) - under it could work?
- 02:02:843 (2) - ctrl+g would have 1,2,3 play more fluidly and 02:03:369 (1) - would break that fluidity stronger than current
- 02:03:369 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of how this plays either tbh, i'd ctrl+g 3 and fiddle with 02:04:422 (1) - somehow to provide a direction change or something instead: 1.
https://i.imgur.com/MzbI07c.jpg 2.
https://i.imgur.com/E4SrHJ0.jpg- 02:19:027 - pretty clear vocal being skipped here. kinda makes it feel lame cuz 02:16:790 (6,1) - has the same rhythm without a vocal there so a variation would be cool since the song is a little different there
- 02:22:317 (1,2,3) - move 3 up so the visual spacing between these is nicer?
- 02:28:369 (4,1) - unexpected 1/8 spacing tbh, especially when you sort of introduced the spacing as 02:18:896 (4,1) - which is pretty tiny comparatively
- 02:34:159 (2,3) - comparing this and 02:37:317 (2,3) - i prefer 02:37:317 (2,3) - because the stack emphasizes the vocal instead of being some weird square-ish angular movement that sort of ends up emphasizing nothing in particular. same for 02:38:369 (2,3) - and recurring ones
- 02:52:843 - the stop here isnt really getting as much emphasis as the stops you made earlier in the map. i'd probably suggest approacing it similar to 02:19:159 (1,2,3) -
- 02:53:633 (2) - 03:02:054 (2) - should be a triple cuz you mapped this hihat thing as a triple every single time so having it not a triple these times is ??
- 03:04:422 (1,1) - would be nice if the second 1 also ended on a drum since this is a drum breakdown and the hitsounds kinda imply that the rhythm should at the very least passively incorporate drums
ok thats all i got for you
nice no man's lie bg btw