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Team Grimoire - Sheriruth [OsuMania]

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DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, June 7, 2017 at 12:52:57 PM

Artist: Team Grimoire
Title: Sheriruth
Source: Arcaea
Tags: lowiro Grimoire of Darkness Eternal Core Conflict(対立) Tairitsu M3-2016 TG-005. Tofu1222 ajeemaniz Arzenvald ExUsagi Virtue-
BPM: 185
Filesize: 5309kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Apocalypse - 4Key (4.7 stars, 2034 notes)
  2. Arzenvald's EXtinction - 4Key (5.34 stars, 2523 notes)
  3. Future - 4Key (4.01 stars, 1754 notes)
  4. Past - 4Key (2.06 stars, 957 notes)
  5. Tofu's Beginning - 4Key (1.36 stars, 462 notes)
  6. V's Present - 4Key (3.32 stars, 1571 notes)
Download: Team Grimoire - Sheriruth
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2b <3
50 favourites before qualified?!?!?!?!?!1!1!1!!!
Last edited by DoNotMess , edited 119 times in total.
Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503
kudos gratis
22:48 DoNotMess: bang
22:48 DoNotMess: tes map
22:48 DoNotMess: donggg
22:49 Frim4503: ?
22:50 DoNotMess: tes map
22:51 Frim4503: np
22:52 *DoNotMess is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1249423 Team Grimoire - Sheriruth]
22:58 DoNotMess: kwakwakawakw
22:59 Frim4503: ga bisa stream gw
23:00 DoNotMess: :'vv
23:00 Frim4503: nonton auto aja
23:00 DoNotMess: bole
23:03 Frim4503: beberapa part kurang konsisten
23:03 Frim4503: kesannya nanggung
23:03 DoNotMess: dimana
23:03 DoNotMess: emng gonta gnti instrumen sih mapnya...gw gk trlalu suka sama smua
23:04 Frim4503: kudos gratis nih :v
23:05 DoNotMess: o_O?!
23:05 Frim4503: ntar gw post di thread
23:06 DoNotMess: hory sheeet
23:06 DoNotMess: mod?
23:08 DoNotMess: btw ln msh blom fix itu..gw msh bngung mw gnti apa
23:08 DoNotMess: emng playabilitynya ccd itu di tengah susah di acc..
23:08 Frim4503: 00:51:114 (51114|1) - mungkin tambah 1/2 ln disini
23:09 Frim4503: 00:51:276 (51276|0) - trus 1/1 ln
23:09 DoNotMess: 00:51:114 (51114|0,51276|0) - ini udh gw ksh kek gni buat piano yg suara kcil
23:09 DoNotMess: oo itu
23:09 DoNotMess: ok
23:10 Frim4503: bukannya itu suaranya panjang ?
23:10 DoNotMess: nggk, kan gw timpa :'v
23:10 Frim4503: 00:54:033 (54033|3) - ganti ln
23:10 DoNotMess: 00:51:600 (51600|1,51925|2) - smacem kek gni tpi yg pendeknya kan ada 2, jdi gw kgk ksih ln yg prtama
23:11 Frim4503: 00:54:033 (54033|3) - ganti ln
23:11 Frim4503: ^suaranya sama kaya 00:54:195 (54195|0,54357|1,54519|2) - 
23:11 DoNotMess: ok
23:12 DoNotMess: kgk kdengeran , gw map pake 100% playback :VVV
23:12 Frim4503: 01:06:844 (66844|0) - hrsnya berhenti di 01:07:249 -  imo
23:13 Frim4503: salah om
23:13 Frim4503: 01:07:168 - maksudnya sini
23:14 Frim4503: 01:07:006 (67006|1) - ini juga
23:14 Frim4503: 01:07:168 (67168|3) - move ke 4
23:14 DoNotMess: 01:06:844 (66844|0,67006|1) - gw pisahin jdi 2 ;w;
23:14 Frim4503: 01:07:330 (67330|3) - 1
23:14 Frim4503: ga
23:14 DoNotMess: 01:07:168 (67168|0,67411|1) - ini yg kcil kcil transisinya.. ambigu sih tpi demi pattern bagus aja kwakwakawk
23:14 Frim4503: coba denger lagi
23:15 DoNotMess: iya gw ngerti
23:15 DoNotMess: itu yg kosongnya
23:15 DoNotMess: msh gw lanjutin tambahin 1/4 cuman bkin pattern doang di transisinya ke melodi lain
23:15 DoNotMess: jdinya yah gitu deh
23:16 DoNotMess: kek furioso yg kdua
23:16 DoNotMess: ada ghost note banyak
23:16 Frim4503: 01:08:952 - bagus dikasih ln nih
23:16 DoNotMess: ranked yg kdua maksud gw..
23:16 DoNotMess: ok
23:16 Frim4503: end disini 01:09:600 - 
23:16 DoNotMess: gw playback 100% ;w;
23:17 Frim4503: trus yg 1/4 ln jadiin not aja
23:17 Frim4503: 01:09:600 - yg dari sini keep aja tetep 1/4 ln
23:17 Frim4503: biar bervariasi :v
23:23 Frim4503: at least di kiai kedua smua drum sama clap di jadiin dobel
23:23 Frim4503: biar sama kaya 02:01:817 (121817|0,121817|1,121979|0,121979|1) - 
23:23 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/uY13t/560fe9c644.png
23:23 DoNotMess: gni bole gk :'vvvvv
23:24 DoNotMess: itu
23:24 DoNotMess: ktebelan
23:24 DoNotMess: kalo dijdiin double
23:24 DoNotMess: chant du cygne aja pada kelenger di bagian ln stream
23:24 DoNotMess: + 1 note lg tiap kick
23:24 DoNotMess: jdi mokad...
23:24 DoNotMess: pdhl 4,6 doang..
23:25 Frim4503: ganti 5k makanya xD
23:25 DoNotMess: kalo neo treason ada kek gni tpi tmbhh kick, tpi kan 5* jjd wajar...
23:25 DoNotMess: wado beda jurusan
23:25 Frim4503: udh gitu aja kayaknya
23:25 Frim4503: sisanya random pattern aja
23:25 DoNotMess: itu yg gw ksh screenshot gmn
23:26 DoNotMess: gw tes sih enak ..
23:26 Frim4503: sebelah mana sih?
23:26 DoNotMess: 01:08:952 -
23:27 Frim4503: ok
23:28 DoNotMess: 01:06:681 (66681|0,67006|2,67330|3,69276|3) - kalo ini gw ilangin, jd ksepian gk ya..
23:28 Frim4503: gpp sih
23:28 Frim4503: disini fokus ma synthnya ln
23:29 Frim4503: ntar di kiai diubah lagi
23:29 DoNotMess: ilangin aja kali?
23:29 DoNotMess: jd gmn
23:29 DoNotMess: gw mw fokus ln doang sih soalnya pada 200 disini
23:29 DoNotMess: trmasuk gw orz
23:29 Frim4503: ilangin aja
23:29 DoNotMess: pada susah hit
23:29 Frim4503: contoh aja map gw yg reliance
23:29 Frim4503: itu kan fokusnya berubah ubah
23:30 Frim4503: streamnya kadang dobel kadang single
23:31 DoNotMess: iya
23:33 Frim4503: posting...
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Frim4503 wrote:

kudos gratis
22:48 DoNotMess: bang
22:48 DoNotMess: tes map
22:48 DoNotMess: donggg
22:49 Frim4503: ?
22:50 DoNotMess: tes map
22:51 Frim4503: np
22:52 *DoNotMess is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1249423 Team Grimoire - Sheriruth]
22:58 DoNotMess: kwakwakawakw
22:59 Frim4503: ga bisa stream gw
23:00 DoNotMess: :'vv
23:00 Frim4503: nonton auto aja
23:00 DoNotMess: bole
23:03 Frim4503: beberapa part kurang konsisten
23:03 Frim4503: kesannya nanggung
23:03 DoNotMess: dimana
23:03 DoNotMess: emng gonta gnti instrumen sih mapnya...gw gk trlalu suka sama smua
23:04 Frim4503: kudos gratis nih :v
23:05 DoNotMess: o_O?!
23:05 Frim4503: ntar gw post di thread
23:06 DoNotMess: hory sheeet
23:06 DoNotMess: mod?
23:08 DoNotMess: btw ln msh blom fix itu..gw msh bngung mw gnti apa
23:08 DoNotMess: emng playabilitynya ccd itu di tengah susah di acc..
23:08 Frim4503: 00:51:114 (51114|1) - mungkin tambah 1/2 ln disini
23:09 Frim4503: 00:51:276 (51276|0) - trus 1/1 ln
23:09 DoNotMess: 00:51:114 (51114|0,51276|0) - ini udh gw ksh kek gni buat piano yg suara kcil
23:09 DoNotMess: oo itu
23:09 DoNotMess: ok
23:10 Frim4503: bukannya itu suaranya panjang ?
23:10 DoNotMess: nggk, kan gw timpa :'v
23:10 Frim4503: 00:54:033 (54033|3) - ganti ln
23:10 DoNotMess: 00:51:600 (51600|1,51925|2) - smacem kek gni tpi yg pendeknya kan ada 2, jdi gw kgk ksih ln yg prtama
23:11 Frim4503: 00:54:033 (54033|3) - ganti ln
23:11 Frim4503: ^suaranya sama kaya 00:54:195 (54195|0,54357|1,54519|2) - 
23:11 DoNotMess: ok
23:12 DoNotMess: kgk kdengeran , gw map pake 100% playback :VVV
23:12 Frim4503: 01:06:844 (66844|0) - hrsnya berhenti di 01:07:249 -  imo
23:13 Frim4503: salah om
23:13 Frim4503: 01:07:168 - maksudnya sini
23:14 Frim4503: 01:07:006 (67006|1) - ini juga
23:14 Frim4503: 01:07:168 (67168|3) - move ke 4
23:14 DoNotMess: 01:06:844 (66844|0,67006|1) - gw pisahin jdi 2 ;w;
23:14 Frim4503: 01:07:330 (67330|3) - 1
23:14 Frim4503: ga
23:14 DoNotMess: 01:07:168 (67168|0,67411|1) - ini yg kcil kcil transisinya.. ambigu sih tpi demi pattern bagus aja kwakwakawk
23:14 Frim4503: coba denger lagi
23:15 DoNotMess: iya gw ngerti
23:15 DoNotMess: itu yg kosongnya
23:15 DoNotMess: msh gw lanjutin tambahin 1/4 cuman bkin pattern doang di transisinya ke melodi lain
23:15 DoNotMess: jdinya yah gitu deh
23:16 DoNotMess: kek furioso yg kdua
23:16 DoNotMess: ada ghost note banyak
23:16 Frim4503: 01:08:952 - bagus dikasih ln nih
23:16 DoNotMess: ranked yg kdua maksud gw..
23:16 DoNotMess: ok
23:16 Frim4503: end disini 01:09:600 - 
23:16 DoNotMess: gw playback 100% ;w;
23:17 Frim4503: trus yg 1/4 ln jadiin not aja
23:17 Frim4503: 01:09:600 - yg dari sini keep aja tetep 1/4 ln
23:17 Frim4503: biar bervariasi :v
23:23 Frim4503: at least di kiai kedua smua drum sama clap di jadiin dobel
23:23 Frim4503: biar sama kaya 02:01:817 (121817|0,121817|1,121979|0,121979|1) - 
23:23 DoNotMess: https://puu.sh/uY13t/560fe9c644.png
23:23 DoNotMess: gni bole gk :'vvvvv
23:24 DoNotMess: itu
23:24 DoNotMess: ktebelan
23:24 DoNotMess: kalo dijdiin double
23:24 DoNotMess: chant du cygne aja pada kelenger di bagian ln stream
23:24 DoNotMess: + 1 note lg tiap kick
23:24 DoNotMess: jdi mokad...
23:24 DoNotMess: pdhl 4,6 doang..
23:25 Frim4503: ganti 5k makanya xD
23:25 DoNotMess: kalo neo treason ada kek gni tpi tmbhh kick, tpi kan 5* jjd wajar...
23:25 DoNotMess: wado beda jurusan
23:25 Frim4503: udh gitu aja kayaknya
23:25 Frim4503: sisanya random pattern aja
23:25 DoNotMess: itu yg gw ksh screenshot gmn
23:26 DoNotMess: gw tes sih enak ..
23:26 Frim4503: sebelah mana sih?
23:26 DoNotMess: 01:08:952 -
23:27 Frim4503: ok
23:28 DoNotMess: 01:06:681 (66681|0,67006|2,67330|3,69276|3) - kalo ini gw ilangin, jd ksepian gk ya..
23:28 Frim4503: gpp sih
23:28 Frim4503: disini fokus ma synthnya ln
23:29 Frim4503: ntar di kiai diubah lagi
23:29 DoNotMess: ilangin aja kali?
23:29 DoNotMess: jd gmn
23:29 DoNotMess: gw mw fokus ln doang sih soalnya pada 200 disini
23:29 DoNotMess: trmasuk gw orz
23:29 Frim4503: ilangin aja
23:29 DoNotMess: pada susah hit
23:29 Frim4503: contoh aja map gw yg reliance
23:29 Frim4503: itu kan fokusnya berubah ubah
23:30 Frim4503: streamnya kadang dobel kadang single
23:31 DoNotMess: iya
23:33 Frim4503: posting...
kalo diksh kudosu blng apa hayo
Crono
227 posts
Joined April 2014
Crono
Short mod for [Future]

Scrub mod from Crono
All are just suggestions. Feel free to reject. Suggestions in paragraphs (if any) are meant to be looked at together.

00:27:925 (27925|1,28249|2) - shift left for different pitch to 00:26:627 (26627|1,26952|2) ? If acceptable make reasonable adjustments to repeated LNs here.

01:12:519 (72519|2) - Add note to 0? It's a powerful sound.

01:35:789 (95789|1,95830|0) - ctrl+j? feels better in my opinion.
01:36:114 (96114|2,96154|3) - ^

01:43:979 01:46:898 - Too much stairs here imo. Also there is alot of anchoring on 0, personally I don't mind it. but other modders may have an opinion on it.

Honestly this suggestion is not that comfortable so feel free to just ignore this.
SPOILER
01:51:762 (111762|3,111844|2,111925|1,112006|3,112087|2,112168|1,112249|3,112330|2) - These piano sounds deserve more recognition, the notes for these sounds are identical to these 01:49:573 (109573|3,109654|2,109735|1,109817|0).
@01:51:762 have a jumping pitch so I suggest adding a broken stair pattern.
Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7658296

If accepted do the reverse @01:53:060

02:16:006 (136006|2,136046|3) - ctrl+j would make this section more comfortable I think.

02:17:425 (137425|3,137465|2,137506|1,137546|0,137546|3,137587|2,137627|1,137668|0) - I think these are 1/6 but get a second opinion on that.

02:37:330 (157330|0,157330|3,157492|0,157492|3,157654|3,157654|0,157817|3,157817|0,157979|3,157979|0,158141|3,158141|0,158303|0,158303|3,158465|0,158465|3) - wow! any chance of altering this section? It's heavy on anchoring. I strongly suggest having different jumps and hands to lessen anchoring and make it more comfortable to play.

02:38:465 (158465|1,158465|3,158465|0) - Ending here would give that epic feel. 8-)

I like this song! Best of luck!
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Crono wrote:

Short mod for [Future]

Scrub mod from Crono
All are just suggestions. Feel free to reject. Suggestions in paragraphs (if any) are meant to be looked at together.

00:27:925 (27925|1,28249|2) - shift left for different pitch to 00:26:627 (26627|1,26952|2) ? If acceptable make reasonable adjustments to repeated LNs here. 00:27:925 (27925|1,28249|2,28573|2,28735|3) - these are the pitch

01:12:519 (72519|2) - Add note to 0? It's a powerful sound. it's just a simple clap

01:35:789 (95789|1,95830|0) - ctrl+j? feels better in my opinion. it's the same and the current one is nicer to read
01:36:114 (96114|2,96154|3) - ^

01:43:979 01:46:898 - Too much stairs here imo. Also there is alot of anchoring on 0, personally I don't mind it. but other modders may have an opinion on it. 01:43:979 (103979|3,103979|0,104222|0,104222|3,104465|3,104465|0,104627|3,104627|0,104789|0,104789|3,104952|1,104952|0,105114|0,105114|2) - these are for piano sounds, so it is anchoring

Honestly this suggestion is not that comfortable so feel free to just ignore this.
SPOILER
01:51:762 (111762|3,111844|2,111925|1,112006|3,112087|2,112168|1,112249|3,112330|2) - These piano sounds deserve more recognition, the notes for these sounds are identical to these 01:49:573 (109573|3,109654|2,109735|1,109817|0).
@01:51:762 have a jumping pitch so I suggest adding a broken stair pattern.
Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7658296

If accepted do the reverse @01:53:060

02:16:006 (136006|2,136046|3) - ctrl+j would make this section more comfortable I think. want to keep the direction to the right for comfortable reading

02:17:425 (137425|3,137465|2,137506|1,137546|0,137546|3,137587|2,137627|1,137668|0) - I think these are 1/6 but get a second opinion on that. still ambiguous, i need to ask other modders

02:37:330 (157330|0,157330|3,157492|0,157492|3,157654|3,157654|0,157817|3,157817|0,157979|3,157979|0,158141|3,158141|0,158303|0,158303|3,158465|0,158465|3) - wow! any chance of altering this section? It's heavy on anchoring. I strongly suggest having different jumps and hands to lessen anchoring and make it more comfortable to play. this map is tested already by 20 person and only 2-3 miss at that part but i will keep track on the mods, so for now i keeep

02:38:465 (158465|1,158465|3,158465|0) - Ending here would give that epic feel. 8-)sure

I like this song! Best of luck!
thanks for mod <3
Rafnezie
9 posts
Joined October 2016
Rafnezie
:D Really love this beatmap Thumbs Up ;)
Shima Rin
1,304 posts
Joined March 2015
Shima Rin
Hey DNM Can I also donate a GD? Though I dont know what diff is suitable, and if it is ok u can tell me what kind of diff do u want, thanks! :3
Virtue-
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Virtue-
mamam ni bintang
Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Valentrixe
wooo Selulit

napa ga minta gd ama gw :(
Rido
812 posts
Joined April 2014
Rido
a
20:53 DoNotMess: wadu
20:53 DoNotMess: map test dong calon bn
20:54 Rido: wtf
20:54 Rido: ikut bn test aja kagak
20:55 Rido: wtf
20:55 Rido: ikut bn test aja kagak
20:56 DoNotMess: tes map dong :'v
20:58 Rido: np om
20:59 Rido: np om
20:59 Rido: anjir lah ccd bgt inet
21:00 *DoNotMess is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1249423 Team Grimoire - Sheriruth]
21:02 Rido: 3 hari submit favorit udh byk ya om
21:02 Rido: femes
21:03 DoNotMess: o iya 10 :'v mayan 14
21:06 Rido: COK MANTAP COK
21:06 DoNotMess: gmn
21:06 DoNotMess: :'v
21:06 DoNotMess: enak gk
21:06 Rido: MANTAP = ENAK = LEGIT
21:07 Rido: LNnya niru si usagi nih
21:07 DoNotMess: tpi ada beberapa blng terlalu aman ngemapnya ...
21:07 DoNotMess: hmm
21:07 DoNotMess: oo yg stacked itu ya
21:07 DoNotMess: itu emng gw liadnya cocok di map ini :'v jdi ya mw gmn
21:07 DoNotMess: cuman pny gw rapihan KWAOKWAOAWOKWAKOWA
21:08 Rido: hooh aman bgt
21:08 Rido: sama aja njer
21:08 DoNotMess: masa sih ;w;
21:08 Rido: rapi gak rapi ttp stacker
21:08 DoNotMess: emng gmn kalo gk aman ;w; ;w; ;w;
21:08 Rido: xDDDD
21:08 DoNotMess: kgk ngerti
21:09 DoNotMess: oawkowakoaw emng stack ;'v udh cocok bngt ama lagunya
21:09 DoNotMess: gw kira kalo aman kek lu ksh kick 2 ama clap 3 gitu gitu daong
21:09 DoNotMess: gw punya pas bagian kick 1/2 malah ngemap piano....
21:09 Rido: 00:23:546 - lu bisa kasih LN lagi di sini buat suara bass
21:09 Rido: lebih complex jadinya
21:10 DoNotMess: wadu ln gw buat piano doang..
21:10 Rido: ya itu namanya main aman om
21:10 Rido: =w=
21:11 DoNotMess: tar di ciduk gw ama modder
21:11 Rido: modder cmn ngemod, lu yg ngemap
21:11 Rido: woles :^)
21:11 DoNotMess: gk enak kalo ditolak :'v kek itu western mapper mod pnjgn pnjgn sbagian besar gw tolak lngsung kgk mw bales chat gw
21:12 DoNotMess: gr" ngemap ln sampah wakwakwak
21:12 Rido: siapa awkwkkw
21:13 DoNotMess: gk enak sbut nama
21:13 DoNotMess: :'v
21:13 Rido: :"V
21:13 DoNotMess: favorit gih biar nambah WAOKOKWAOAWK
21:13 Rido: protastic
21:13 DoNotMess: apa tu
21:13 Rido: nama BN
21:13 DoNotMess: sv nya kek nya ada masalh sih...
21:14 DoNotMess: kgk kenal :v
21:14 DoNotMess: gw gnerti pda komplen di sv
21:14 DoNotMess: pdhl dh enak bngt lwl
21:14 Rido: gada yg salah om
21:14 Rido: udh mulus
21:14 DoNotMess: 01:19:168 - ini yg disini
21:14 DoNotMess: pda komplen
21:14 DoNotMess: ktny kaget itu kick slanjutnya
21:14 Rido: td gw bisa sightread kan
21:14 Rido: `L_`
21:14 DoNotMess: makanya
21:15 DoNotMess: tpi tetep ae ada yg blng disitu hapus
21:15 DoNotMess: makasih ya udh test
21:15 DoNotMess: apalagi dibilang MANTAB dri mapper dewa....duh sneng bngt 'v
21:15 Rido: gausah dihapus eh
21:15 Rido: udh dapet gimiknya
21:15 DoNotMess: iya kgk gw apus sih
21:15 Rido: kurang polesan dikit LNnya
21:15 DoNotMess: wadooooo
21:15 DoNotMess: awkookawawko
21:15 Rido: :UUUUU
21:15 DoNotMess: bntr gw coba poles
21:16 DoNotMess: yg mana yg mw digoyang ln nya?
21:16 Rido: 01:25:817 - 
21:16 DoNotMess: yg bner tpi jgn kick jd ln lwl
21:16 DoNotMess: wadu itu udh ln
21:17 Rido: ntar
21:17 Rido: 01:29:222 (89222|0,89546|3) - 
21:17 DoNotMess: udh enak bngt lg pitch relevancy nya naronya :'v
21:17 Rido: kyk nanggung gitu ngelepas LNnya
21:17 DoNotMess: itu napa
21:17 Rido: pdhl suaranya msh panjang
21:17 Rido: 01:30:357 - extend salah satu ke sini
21:17 Rido: jd flow nya berlanjut
21:17 Rido: continuous
21:17 DoNotMess: 01:26:789 (86789|2,87114|0,89222|0,89546|3) - gw sih cuman mw ksh 1 ktuk panjangnya
21:18 DoNotMess: 01:25:817 (85817|0,86141|3,86789|2,87114|0,88411|3,88735|1,89222|0,89546|3) -
21:18 DoNotMess: ini 1 smua tpi beberapa stacked
21:18 Rido: bagian awal kan emg rapet LNnya
21:18 Rido: yg gw sebutin td kan agak longgar
21:18 Rido: apa sih anj
21:18 DoNotMess: bntr
21:21 DoNotMess: oke
21:22 DoNotMess: 01:30:925 (90925|2,99925|0,99925|3) - ini jg? ;w;
21:22 DoNotMess: 01:39:925 (99925|0,99925|3) - ini maksudnya
21:22 Rido: gausah
21:22 Rido: ada impact dr kick
21:22 Rido: 01:40:411 - 
21:25 DoNotMess: impact dri clap :v
21:25 Rido: oiya:V
21:26 DoNotMess: ada lg ?
21:26 Rido: udah om:D
21:26 Rido: tp ya itu td
21:26 Rido: kurang complex intronya
21:28 DoNotMess: 00:02:790 - ?
21:28 Rido: itu kyk nya jg perlu dicomplexin ahaha
21:28 Rido: tp udh fit kok
21:28 Rido: yg td aja
21:28 Rido: kurang LN di bass
21:29 DoNotMess: 0yg mnana intronya
21:29 DoNotMess: \ooo
21:29 DoNotMess: tar deh gw reconsider...
21:29 DoNotMess: gw keep dlu ya
21:29 DoNotMess: eh
21:29 Rido: wokee
21:29 DoNotMess: gk deh
21:30 DoNotMess: bisa gw gnti ln
21:30 DoNotMess: itu ada piano
21:30 Rido: yaa oke up to you lah om hahaha
21:30 DoNotMess: bisa gw gnti ln
21:30 Rido: kudos ya? :V
21:30 DoNotMess: FAVORIT KALO MW EZ KUDOSU :V
21:30 Rido: ANJG WKWKWK
21:30 Rido: siyap
21:31 DoNotMess: AWKWAKAWKAWK KTNY MANTAB NIH MAP BRARTI FAVORIT DONG XD
21:31 DoNotMess: srah lah cnda doang gw :'v
21:31 Rido: FAVOURITED BY 15 USER
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

Valentrixe wrote:

wooo Selulit

napa ga minta gd ama gw :(
:'v lu kgk ol kmrin kmrin, kalo ol mah jadinya Valentrixe's Present >:D
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

Valentrixe wrote:

wooo Selulit

napa ga minta gd ama gw :(
:'v lu kgk ol kmrin kmrin, kalo ol mah jadinya Valentrixe's Present >:D
dionzz99
677 posts
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dionzz99
asu bentar doang udah banyak favnya :'(
Valentrixe
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Valentrixe

DoNotMess wrote:

Valentrixe wrote:

wooo Selulit

napa ga minta gd ama gw :(
:'v lu kgk ol kmrin kmrin, kalo ol mah jadinya Valentrixe's Present >:D
kmarin nyepi goblog
huft kzl bat dah

dionzz99 wrote:

asu bentar doang udah banyak favnya :'(
1. its team grimoire
2. its 2B BG
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
bole lah di m4m sini Virtue's Present biar bisa selipin pattern original sndiri KWAKAWKAWKWA
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald


kampret awkwkwkkw
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

ajeemaniz wrote:



kampret awkwkwkkw
map lu gw dh apply mod gw, kalo emng mw keep dignti balik lg aja tar ksh gw lg :'v beberapa ln gw gnti biar rapi ama sesuai lagu, tpi revert lg aja kalo mnurut lu bagusan pny lu :'vvv
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
oiya lupa mau update, tadi dah di nerf, tetep X icon kok B)
https://puu.sh/v4oOi/70f893751e.zip
Shurelia
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Shurelia
Tolong segera perbaiki Tags yang sekarang karena banyak mengandung kata-kata yang tidak pantas DAN tidak penting untuk dimasukkan ke dalam suatu map.

Harap secepatnya anda ganti sebelum kami tindak lanjuti.
Virtue-
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Joined March 2015
Virtue-


CEPETAN WOEEEE SEBELUM DRAMA.... WOKWAOAKW
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
Perasaan waktu gw upload gd tag nya dah di benerin.. Aih
edit https://puu.sh/v59VT/3f29a7f8c1.zip by all respect gw pen pake custom bg di diff gw

buru ganti tag nya, tag di diff punya gw gk di bikin aneh aneh dari awal :T
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

ajeemaniz wrote:

Perasaan waktu gw upload gd tag nya dah di benerin.. Aih
edit https://puu.sh/v59VT/3f29a7f8c1.zip by all respect gw pen pake custom bg di diff gw

buru ganti tag nya, tag di diff punya gw gk di bikin aneh aneh dari awal :T
duh telat bngt mhanx ngomongnya...mnding ngmong dlu deh ama megative, soalnya dri awal gw dh mnta megative buat bkinin bg nya ;w; gk enak aja tar
btw sorry for tags :')
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
yodah buat element sb ae tinggal di apus, gw bikin ntar
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess

ajeemaniz wrote:

yodah buat element sb ae tinggal di apus, gw bikin ntar
EE BKIN SB OWO SASUGA
ExNeko
657 posts
Joined December 2015
ExNeko
hello~
m4m from your queue

4k col1|2|3|4

Future
00:05:871 (5871|2,6033|1) - move to col3&4
00:06:195 (6195|3) - to col2 and 00:06:357 (6357|1) - to col4
00:18:844 (18844|0) - to col3
00:33:803 (33803|2) - double here
00:48:681 (48681|2,48844|1) - ctrl+h
00:51:762 (51762|0) - to col3
00:54:033 (54033|2) - to col1

01:06:357 (66357|1) - to col4 and 01:06:519 (66519|3,66600|0) - ctrl+h
01:16:735 (76735|2,76898|0,76979|3) - ^

01:19:168 (79168|0) - move to here 01:19:330 (79330|1) -

01:20:141 (80141|2,80303|2,80465|2,80627|2) - Separate them
01:40:735 (100735|0,100898|0,101060|0,101222|0,101384|0,101546|0) - Separate them into other cols

00:59:871 (59871|2) - to col3

01:08:952 (68952|3,68952|0,69114|2,69195|1,69276|0,69276|3,69357|2,69438|1,69519|0,69600|2,69600|3,69681|1,69762|2,69844|0,69925|2,69925|3,70006|1,70087|2,70087|3,70168|0,70249|3) - ctrl+h

01:20:141 (80141|2,80303|2,80465|2,80627|2) - ^

01:24:033 (84033|0) - to col3 and 01:24:195 (84195|2) - to col2

01:50:627 (110627|0) - to col4

02:01:898 (121898|1,122060|1) - remove?
02:06:762 (126762|3,126925|3,127087|3,127249|3) - ^

02:34:898 (154898|3) - to col2
Past
00:05:871 (5871|2) - move to col4
00:10:573 (10573|2) - to col1
00:17:222 (17222|1,17384|2) - to col1&2
00:17:708 (17708|1,17871|0) - to col2&3
01:08:141 (68141|2) - to col4
01:10:735 (70735|3) - to col2
01:14:384 (74384|0) - to col2/3
01:23:789 (83789|0) - to col2
01:36:195 (96195|3) - ^
01:48:357 (108357|2) - ^
01:54:844 (114844|2,114844|1) - to col1&2 then 01:55:006 (115006|0) - to col4
02:12:844 (132844|3) - to col2

Done :)

Dont forget mod my map →here
Shima Rin
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Shima Rin
Hi DoNotMess here is my GD ;)

Tofu's Origin
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320,192,76979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79979,128,0,80303:0:0:0:0:
448,192,80303,128,0,80627:0:0:0:0:
64,192,80627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84519,128,0,85817:0:0:0:0:
448,192,85817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,89546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90357,128,0,90681:0:0:0:0:
64,192,90681,128,0,91006:0:0:0:0:
448,192,91006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,92303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,94411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95546,128,0,95871:0:0:0:0:
64,192,95871,128,0,96195:0:0:0:0:
448,192,96195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100735,128,0,101060:0:0:0:0:
64,192,101060,128,0,101384:0:0:0:0:
448,192,101384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,101871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,103979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,104952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105276,128,0,106573:0:0:0:0:
448,192,105276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,105925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,106573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,109168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,109492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,109817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,110141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,111114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,111438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,112087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,112411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,113060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,113384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,113708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,114357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,115249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115654,128,0,116952:0:0:0:0:
192,192,115654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,116303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,116952,128,0,118249:0:0:0:0:
192,192,118249,128,0,118898:0:0:0:0:
448,192,118898,128,0,119546:0:0:0:0:
320,192,119546,128,0,120195:0:0:0:0:
64,192,120195,128,0,120844:0:0:0:0:
448,192,120519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,120844,128,0,121492:0:0:0:0:
320,192,121492,128,0,122141:0:0:0:0:
448,192,122141,128,0,122789:0:0:0:0:
64,192,122789,128,0,123438:0:0:0:0:
320,192,123114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,123438,128,0,124087:0:0:0:0:
448,192,124087,128,0,124735:0:0:0:0:
320,192,124735,128,0,125384:0:0:0:0:
64,192,125384,128,0,126033:0:0:0:0:
192,192,126033,128,0,127330:0:0:0:0:
448,192,127330,128,0,128627:0:0:0:0:
192,192,128303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,128627,128,0,129276:0:0:0:0:
192,192,129276,128,0,129925:0:0:0:0:
320,192,129600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,129925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,130573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,131060,128,0,131871:0:0:0:0:
192,192,131871,128,0,132519:0:0:0:0:
448,192,132519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,132844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,133168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,133492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,133817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,134141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,134465,128,0,134789:0:0:0:0:
64,192,134789,128,0,135114:0:0:0:0:
448,192,135114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,135438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,135762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,136087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,136411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,136735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,137060,128,0,137708:0:0:0:0:
192,192,137384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,137708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,138195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,138519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,138844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,139492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,139817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,139817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,140141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,140303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,140303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,140789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,141114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,141438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,142411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,142898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,142898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,143708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,144033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,144681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,145330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,145492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,146303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,146627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,147600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,148087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,148087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,148573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,148898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,149222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,149871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,150195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,150519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,150681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,151168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,151492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,151817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,152465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,152789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,153276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,153276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,153762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,154087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,154411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,155384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,155871,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,156195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,156519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,156844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,157168,128,0,158465:0:0:0:0:
320,192,157492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,157817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,158141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,158465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

ExNeko wrote:

hello~
m4m from your queue

4k col1|2|3|4

Future
00:05:871 (5871|2,6033|1) - move to col3&4 the doubles in this section are the pitch, so i wont change the doubles
00:06:195 (6195|3) - to col2 and 00:06:357 (6357|1) - to col4 ^
00:18:844 (18844|0) - to col3 the column difference indicate the change of the melody as in the intro
00:33:803 (33803|2) - double here i think 1 note is enough because it is 1/8 and the sound is not really loud
00:48:681 (48681|2,48844|1) - ctrl+h 00:49:006 (49006|2) - if ctrl h, this becomes the jack
00:51:762 (51762|0) - to col3 avoid jack
00:54:033 (54033|2) - to col1 ok

01:06:357 (66357|1) - to col4 and 01:06:519 (66519|3,66600|0) - ctrl+h i have structured these lns to have direction, sorry no change
01:16:735 (76735|2,76898|0,76979|3) - ^

01:19:168 (79168|0) - move to here 01:19:330 (79330|1) - i want to emphasize the long and loud sound while the second one is only kick sound

01:20:141 (80141|2,80303|2,80465|2,80627|2) - Separate them ok but only the first one because i want to keep the ln like that
01:40:735 (100735|0,100898|0,101060|0,101222|0,101384|0,101546|0) - Separate them into other cols this anchor is intended for the melody, but i can change the last one

00:59:871 (59871|2) - to col3 ok but why are we back here XD

01:08:952 (68952|3,68952|0,69114|2,69195|1,69276|0,69276|3,69357|2,69438|1,69519|0,69600|2,69600|3,69681|1,69762|2,69844|0,69925|2,69925|3,70006|1,70087|2,70087|3,70168|0,70249|3) - ctrl+h why

01:20:141 (80141|2,80303|2,80465|2,80627|2) - ^ ?

01:24:033 (84033|0) - to col3 and 01:24:195 (84195|2) - to col2 rearranged

01:50:627 (110627|0) - to col4 hm ok

02:01:898 (121898|1,122060|1) - remove? it's too easy otherwise
02:06:762 (126762|3,126925|3,127087|3,127249|3) - ^

02:34:898 (154898|3) - to col2no difference i think
Past
00:05:871 (5871|2) - move to col4
00:10:573 (10573|2) - to col1
00:17:222 (17222|1,17384|2) - to col1&2
00:17:708 (17708|1,17871|0) - to col2&3
01:08:141 (68141|2) - to col4 ok
01:10:735 (70735|3) - to col2 ok
01:14:384 (74384|0) - to col2/3 ok
01:23:789 (83789|0) - to col2 ok
01:36:195 (96195|3) - ^ ok
01:48:357 (108357|2) - ^
01:54:844 (114844|2,114844|1) - to col1&2 then 01:55:006 (115006|0) - to col4 rearranged
02:12:844 (132844|3) - to col2 ok

Done :)

Dont forget mod my map →here
thanks!!
Arzenvald
4,062 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
Gw gk janji, cuma ke trigger dikit hufft
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

ajeemaniz wrote:

Gw gk janji, cuma ke trigger dikit hufft
pls bkin :((...
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Beatmap Nominator
935 posts
Joined April 2016
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hi, my name is Jeff
Let's start
0|1|2|3
Future
00:33:925 (33925|3) - Make this LN end in 00:34:249
00:41:222 (41222|3) - Add a note here cause this part is strongly stressed by the song
00:44:222 (44222|2) - Add a note here because the sound hasn't changed from there
00:44:303 (44303|2) - 2 notes here are enough. Remove this
00:53:303 (53303|0) - You missed a note here
01:09:276 (69276|3,69357|2,69438|1,69519|0) - Recommend changing these to LNs
01:21:600 (81600|1) - Remove this note because the sound here is not that stressed to be a triple
01:43:330 (103330|0) - Add a note here because this part background (bg) sound is stressed
02:19:006 (139006|0) - Remove this note
02:22:087 (142087|2) - Remove this LN because this part is softer than other part
02:22:411 (142411|3) - ^
02:27:276 (147276|2,147600|3) - ^
V's present
00:05:384 (5384|1) - Add a note here
00:24:844 (24844|0) - Remove this note because this part is softer than others
00:27:438 (27438|3) - ^
00:30:033 (30033|2) - ^
I won't mention that prob again ^
00:48:519 (48519|2) - Change this to LN cause there is still piano in the bg
00:53:303 (53303|1) - Add a note here cause piano in the bg
01:00:033 (60033|2) - This slider should be started at 00:59:871
01:07:168 (67168|3) - Miss a note here
01:08:384 (68384|0) - Ghost note
01:17:546 (77546|0) - Miss a note
01:26:141 (86141|3) - This slider should be ended in 01:26:303
01:27:762 (87762|3,87925|2,88087|1) - Make these LNs 1/2 long
The rest is OK or having the same problem as i mentioned before :)
Hope this help and GL 8-)
Last edited by AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH , edited 1 time in total.
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

[B A D] wrote:

Hi, my name is Jeff
Let's start
0|1|2|3
Future
00:33:925 (33925|3) - Make this LN end in 00:34:249 i set it 1/2 only so it's consistent
00:41:222 (41222|3) - Add a note here cause this part is strongly stressed by the song mapped crash as 2 notes as the intro also this is not the hardest diff
00:44:222 (44222|2) - Add a note here because the sound hasn't changed from there i avoid mini jacks :')
00:44:303 (44303|2) - 2 notes here are enough. Remove this crash sound is 3 or 4 for the entire map except burst and streams and intro
00:53:303 (53303|0) - You missed a note here no more space.....
01:09:276 (69276|3,69357|2,69438|1,69519|0) - Recommend changing these to LNs it's 1/4 ln before but i think it looks weird and pretty hard to time and i want to keep the inverse feeling
01:21:600 (81600|1) - Remove this note because the sound here is not that stressed to be a triple 01:20:952 (80952|1,81600|1,82249|1,82898|1) - all claps are 3 notes
01:43:330 (103330|0) - Add a note here because this part background (bg) sound is stressed 01:41:384 - starting from this part, all doubles are actually for piano
02:19:006 (139006|0) - Remove this note I intentionally making it denser than the intro because this is 4,7*
02:22:087 (142087|2) - Remove this LN because this part is softer than other part ^
02:22:411 (142411|3) - ^ ^
02:27:276 (147276|2,147600|3) - ^
V's present
00:05:384 (5384|1) - Add a note here
00:24:844 (24844|0) - Remove this note because this part is softer than others
00:27:438 (27438|3) - ^
00:30:033 (30033|2) - ^
I won't mention that prob again ^
00:48:519 (48519|2) - Change this to LN cause there is still piano in the bg
00:53:303 (53303|1) - Add a note here cause piano in the bg
01:00:033 (60033|2) - This slider should be started at 00:59:871
01:07:168 (67168|3) - Miss a note here
01:08:384 (68384|0) - Ghost note
01:17:546 (77546|0) - Miss a note
01:26:141 (86141|3) - This slider should be ended in 01:26:303
01:27:762 (87762|3,87925|2,88087|1) - Make these LNs 1/2 long
The rest is OK :)
Hope this help and GL 8-)
thanks for mod!!!
Ginshu
1,048 posts
Joined May 2014
Ginshu
M4M

Column : 1|2|3|4

[V's Presnet]
00:22:573 - ~ - 00:23:546 - suggest pattern, cocok buat piano nya
click

00:58:898 (58898|3,58898|0,59060|1,59222|2,59222|3) - ctrl+H sama nada dengan sebelumnya
01:03:762 - ~ 01:05:060 - suggest pattern, cocok sama pianyo nya
click

01:11:871 (71871|3) - ganti ke normal note
01:26:141 (86141|3) - end LN here 01:26:303 -
01:48:519 (108519|0,108600|2,108681|1,108762|3,108844|0,108925|2) - ganti ke normal note aja, biarin bisa bedain nada pianonya

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Virtue-
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Virtue-

[B A D] wrote:

Hi, my name is Jeff hi, my name is virtue
Let's start let's gooo >w<
0|1|2|3
V's present
00:05:384 (5384|1) - Add a note here why? it's the same like the other, except the crash here 00:07:979 (7979|1,7979|0,7979|2) -
00:24:844 (24844|0) - Remove this note because this part is softer than others heh?
00:27:438 (27438|3) - ^ heh?
00:30:033 (30033|2) - ^ heh?
I won't mention that prob again ^ heh?
00:48:519 (48519|2) - Change this to LN cause there is still piano in the bg don't hear any piano here
00:53:303 (53303|1) - Add a note here cause piano in the bg nope
01:00:033 (60033|2) - This slider should be started at 00:59:871 whoops, mistake here
01:07:168 (67168|3) - Miss a note here there's a LN here
01:08:384 (68384|0) - Ghost note hear it with 25% pls
01:17:546 (77546|0) - Miss a note there's a LN here
01:26:141 (86141|3) - This slider should be ended in 01:26:303 it's a modification
01:27:762 (87762|3,87925|2,88087|1) - Make these LNs 1/2 long it's a modification
The rest is OK or having the same problem as i mentioned before :)
Hope this help and GL 8-)

LNP- wrote:

M4M w lupa mod map mu, gomen mamah :((

Column : 1|2|3|4

[V's Presnet]
00:22:573 - ~ - 00:23:546 - suggest pattern, cocok buat piano nya well, no problem with the pattern. mungkin akan w pikir" lagi
click

00:58:898 (58898|3,58898|0,59060|1,59222|2,59222|3) - ctrl+H sama nada dengan sebelumnya sure, flip this and re-arrange some of them
01:03:762 - ~ 01:05:060 - suggest pattern, cocok sama pianyo nya ummm..... w pikir" dlu :'v
click

01:11:871 (71871|3) - ganti ke normal note gamauuu >w< but wait.... mungkin ini bagus
01:26:141 (86141|3) - end LN here 01:26:303 - sama seperti alasan sebelumny, ini modifikasi.... tapi w akan mencoba utk mengganti setelah bnyk yg negur :'v
01:48:519 (108519|0,108600|2,108681|1,108762|3,108844|0,108925|2) - ganti ke normal note aja, biarin bisa bedain nada pianonya tidakkkkkk maaauuuuuuuuuuuuu

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thanks for the mod jeff and LNP >w<)b

UPDATE
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess
UPDATEEEDDDD OWO
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Sandalphon
Marked
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

YaHao wrote:

Marked
marked as nuke?
Another Lie
Another Lie
Shiet
Ok start mod. Oh ternyata lu toh ExUsagi = ajeepahit -_-
Usagi's Apocalypse
00:51:600 (51600|1,51600|0,51681|2,51762|0,51762|3,51844|1,51925|3,51925|2,52006|1,52087|3,52087|0,52168|1,52249|2,52330|3,52492|0) - coba ctrl + h, saia ngikut pitch disana [dan agak ke arah better gameplay :3]
00:53:060 - add 1 note lg? konsistensi
02:37:168 (157168|0,157168|3,157168|1,157249|0,157249|1,157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|2,157573|3,157654|2,157654|3,157735|2,157735|3,157817|0,157817|1,157898|0,157898|1,157979|0,157979|1,158060|0,158060|1,158141|3,158141|2,158222|2,158222|3,158303|2,158303|3,158384|3,158384|2) - truly cancer. Beethoven be like. Coba di split jadi 2 2, gini https://puu.sh/v84Y5.png
Future
01:38:627 (98627|2,98627|0,98789|2) - Coba pindah tempat, LN di 3 & notenya di col 1, dan ini 01:39:114 (99114|1) - col 4 [for better gameplay & reverse consistency note diatas]
02:06:762 (126762|3,126925|3,127087|3,127249|3) - del? gw ga paham sama itu, cuma fokus main sound nya.
Mungkin itu aja mod singkat, tapi dalemnya padat :v
Damaree
630 posts
Joined May 2015
Damaree
Hii hii. . M4M request

I'll mod 4 diffs since the last 2 can only see some & mostly suggestions. . .
If I do suggest the mov & ctrl thing, that mostly for the balance purposes & alternation(avoiding repeat pattern)

Past
00:04:735 (4735|0) - mov col2 for alternation you ur pattern here 00:02:790 (2790|0,2790|1,3276|2,3276|0,3762|1,3762|3) -
00:09:925 (9925|3,9925|0,10249|3,10249|1,10573|2,10573|3) - ctrl + h, you already did this here 00:07:330 (7330|3,7330|0,7654|3,7654|1,7979|2,7979|3) -
00:31:168 (31168|1) - mov col4
01:17:384 (77384|3) - mov col2, mov col4 & 01:17:871 (77871|1) - col3
01:26:303 - 01:31:492 - 01:43:168 - remove 1 note, just only bell sound (up to u if will apply this, since most of same sound like this are double)
^ and this 01:43:168 (103168|3,103168|2) - and 01:43:492 (103492|1,103492|0) - are not same sound
02:07:979 (127979|2) - mov col1?
02:12:519 - maybe do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734754
02:19:492 - maybe this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734760 for alternation of this 02:20:789 (140789|0,140789|3,141114|0,141114|2,141438|1,141438|0) -

Future
00:11:871 (11871|2) - mov col1, 00:12:195 (12195|0) - col3 & 00:12:357 (12357|1) - col1
01:06:600 (66600|0,67249|3,67898|2) - not sure about the LN, but isnt the note should be at the white lines 01:06:681 - 01:07:330 - 01:07:979 - ? since the crash sound comes from there (here's the difference https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734851 *left the Future diff, * right the Apcalypse diff)
01:08:303 - add note maybe double
01:13:087 (73087|0) - same asnt the 2nd
01:23:222 - look at this part, 01:23:546 (83546|0,83708|0,83871|0,84033|0) - for the left hand & 01:23:222 (83222|3,83384|3,83546|3,83871|3,84033|3,84195|3) - for the right, consider to rearrange for balance
That's all I can see

Apocalypse
01:14:789 (74789|1,74789|0,74789|2,74952|0,74952|1,75033|2,75114|1,75114|0,75276|2,75276|1,75276|0) - maybe just move this 1step to right since would be too much hard coz of 01:14:141 (74141|0,74384|0,74627|0,74789|0,74952|0,75114|0,75276|0) -
01:26:789 (86789|1,87114|0) - maybe ctrl + h
01:31:654 - double?
02:23:222 - 02:28:411 - col1 feels empty here, consider rearrange some notes
Especially this, sorry

Beginning
00:05:384 (5384|3) - mov col3 & 00:05:871 (5871|0,6357|1,6844|2,7330|1,7654|0) - ctrl + h
00:10:573 - col4 here soo empty, consider rearrange some
00:13:168 - also the col1
00:42:033 (42033|1) - remove, since you only follow bell sound here, and not even a bell
00:49:979 (49979|1) - remove? not bell-sound
01:48:844 (108844|3) - ^
02:36:195 (156195|1) - remove

Well that's all I can see, hope it helps. . . my map is in your queue.
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Another Lie wrote:

Shiet
Ok start mod. Oh ternyata lu toh ExUsagi = ajeepahit -_-
Usagi's Apocalypse
00:51:600 (51600|1,51600|0,51681|2,51762|0,51762|3,51844|1,51925|3,51925|2,52006|1,52087|3,52087|0,52168|1,52249|2,52330|3,52492|0) - coba ctrl + h, saia ngikut pitch disana [dan agak ke arah better gameplay :3]
00:53:060 - add 1 note lg? konsistensi
02:37:168 (157168|0,157168|3,157168|1,157249|0,157249|1,157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|2,157573|3,157654|2,157654|3,157735|2,157735|3,157817|0,157817|1,157898|0,157898|1,157979|0,157979|1,158060|0,158060|1,158141|3,158141|2,158222|2,158222|3,158303|2,158303|3,158384|3,158384|2) - truly cancer. Beethoven be like. Coba di split jadi 2 2, gini https://puu.sh/v84Y5.png
Future
01:38:627 (98627|2,98627|0,98789|2) - Coba pindah tempat, LN di 3 & notenya di col 1, dan ini 01:39:114 (99114|1) - col 4 [for better gameplay & reverse consistency note diatas] 1st. itu buat ascending piano...jdi tiap kolom beda, 2nd. knp hrus 4 jdi better gameplay...udh balance menurut gw
02:06:762 (126762|3,126925|3,127087|3,127249|3) - del? gw ga paham sama itu, cuma fokus main sound nya.1st. ini 4,7* bukan chant du cygne yg cuman 4,4* jdi spike dkit itu mnurut gw gk masalah. 2nd. suara kick yang bgitu jelas
Mungkin itu aja mod singkat, tapi dalemnya padat :v
makasih udh mod :'))) gotta mod urs soon 2 diffs
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

JooF12 wrote:

Hii hii. . M4M request

I'll mod 4 diffs since the last 2 can only see some & mostly suggestions. . .
If I do suggest the mov & ctrl thing, that mostly for the balance purposes & alternation(avoiding repeat pattern)

Past
00:04:735 (4735|0) - mov col2 for alternation you ur pattern here 00:02:790 (2790|0,2790|1,3276|2,3276|0,3762|1,3762|3) - ok
00:09:925 (9925|3,9925|0,10249|3,10249|1,10573|2,10573|3) - ctrl + h, you already did this here 00:07:330 ok(7330|3,7330|0,7654|3,7654|1,7979|2,7979|3) -
00:31:168 (31168|1) - mov col4 keep for pitch
01:17:384 (77384|3) - mov col2, mov col4 & 01:17:871 (77871|1) - col3 keep for stair effect, to differentiate from the one before
01:26:303 - 01:31:492 - 01:43:168 - remove 1 note, just only bell sound (up to u if will apply this, since most of same sound like this are double) iidx style, every melody = 2 notes
^ and this 01:43:168 (103168|3,103168|2) - and 01:43:492 (103492|1,103492|0) - are not same sound ?
02:07:979 (127979|2) - mov col1? re-arranged
02:12:519 - maybe do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734754 re-arranged, thanks for suggestion
02:19:492 - maybe this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734760 for alternation of this 02:20:789 (140789|0,140789|3,141114|0,141114|2,141438|1,141438|0) - ok!

Future
00:11:871 (11871|2) - mov col1, 00:12:195 (12195|0) - col3 & 00:12:357 (12357|1) - col1 re-arranged
01:06:600 (66600|0,67249|3,67898|2) - not sure about the LN, but isnt the note should be at the white lines 01:06:681 - 01:07:330 - 01:07:979 - ? since the crash sound comes from there (here's the difference https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734851 *left the Future diff, * right the Apcalypse diff) i use 2 notes for the melody, and skip all the kick claps and crash in this section for playability
01:08:303 - add note maybe double i will reconsider that after further mod
01:13:087 (73087|0) - same asnt the 2nd ^^
01:23:222 - look at this part, 01:23:546 (83546|0,83708|0,83871|0,84033|0) - for the left hand & 01:23:222 (83222|3,83384|3,83546|3,83871|3,84033|3,84195|3) - for the right, consider to rearrange for balance ok!
That's all I can see

Apocalypse
01:14:789 (74789|1,74789|0,74789|2,74952|0,74952|1,75033|2,75114|1,75114|0,75276|2,75276|1,75276|0) - maybe just move this 1step to right since would be too much hard coz of 01:14:141 (74141|0,74384|0,74627|0,74789|0,74952|0,75114|0,75276|0) -
01:26:789 (86789|1,87114|0) - maybe ctrl + h
01:31:654 - double?
02:23:222 - 02:28:411 - col1 feels empty here, consider rearrange some notes
Especially this, sorry

Beginning
00:05:384 (5384|3) - mov col3 & 00:05:871 (5871|0,6357|1,6844|2,7330|1,7654|0) - ctrl + h
00:10:573 - col4 here soo empty, consider rearrange some
00:13:168 - also the col1
00:42:033 (42033|1) - remove, since you only follow bell sound here, and not even a bell
00:49:979 (49979|1) - remove? not bell-sound
01:48:844 (108844|3) - ^
02:36:195 (156195|1) - remove

Well that's all I can see, hope it helps. . . my map is in your queue.
really helpful mod! thanks!!! will mod ur maps in 3-4 days :)
zero2snow
69 posts
Joined January 2016
zero2snow
Hihi, some random (newbie) mod here :) , just came by because of the song, and arcaea. :P

column 0|1|2|3

future
00:23:546 (23546|0,23546|3) - change the LN to normal note? because there's no piano sound
00:49:979 - missed a piano note (LN) here,maybe some rearrangement like this? --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740740
01:05:546 - I think the LN (melody) should be started from this time, so maybe change the two following notes to LN?or sth like this?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740770
01:15:925 - ^same as above. maybe sth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740789
01:25:168 (85168|3) - missed a hitsound?
01:32:303 to 01:33:600 - I think the SVs should be similar to the SVs in 01:18:033 to 01:19:168, but more sudden? maybe sth like this?https://puu.sh/v9wNI/afabffd5b2.PNG
01:39:925 - I find a bit weird that both LNs ended while the long note of that sound still goes on, maybe some rearrangement like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740918
02:19:817 to 02:20:303 - probably rearrange this to make the pattern not too repetitive during these 8 measure. maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741074
02:24:681 to 02:25:492 - ^same as above
02:29:871 to 02:30:681 - again, making the pattern more diverse, maybe some rearrangement like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741097
02:31:006 (151006|3) - move to 2

hope these mod might help you ;)
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

zero2snow wrote:

Hihi, some random (newbie) mod here :) , just came by because of the song, and arcaea. :P

column 0|1|2|3

future
00:23:546 (23546|0,23546|3) - change the LN to normal note? because there's no piano sound there is
00:49:979 - missed a piano note (LN) here,maybe some rearrangement like this? --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740740 00:49:817 (49817|0,49979|1) - these 2 are for the piano but i dont map as ln because too low
01:05:546 - I think the LN (melody) should be started from this time, so maybe change the two following notes to LN?or sth like this?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740770 01:05:708 - i want to emphasize it from here, but i will wait for further mod
01:15:925 - ^same as above. maybe sth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740789
01:25:168 (85168|3) - missed a hitsound? there is no kick here
01:32:303 to 01:33:600 - I think the SVs should be similar to the SVs in 01:18:033 to 01:19:168, but more sudden? maybe sth like this?https://puu.sh/v9wNI/afabffd5b2.PNG i think this one suit this section really well, no one missed when testing my map and it looks really nice already, i keep
01:39:925 - I find a bit weird that both LNs ended while the long note of that sound still goes on, maybe some rearrangement like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740918 all of the instrument melody starting from 01:25:817 - noted as 1 beat / 1/2 beat only...so...yea, will wait for further mod
02:19:817 to 02:20:303 - probably rearrange this to make the pattern not too repetitive during these 8 measure. maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741074 i tend to map with pitch and with iidx style, so a bit repetitive but i still keep it..maybe i will rearrange with further mod
02:24:681 to 02:25:492 - ^same as above
02:29:871 to 02:30:681 - again, making the pattern more diverse, maybe some rearrangement like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741097 this one is already diverse from the first one
02:31:006 (151006|3) - move to 2 02:31:330 (151330|0,151330|2) - this one is already here...it's awkward it becomes trill

hope these mod might help you ;)
thank you, most of ur mod will be held until further mod...i will take it for consideration :lol:
Shima Rin
1,304 posts
Joined March 2015
Shima Rin
Beginning
00:05:384 (5384|3) - mov col3 & 00:05:871 (5871|0,6357|1,6844|2,7330|1,7654|0) - ctrl + h ok
00:10:573 - col4 here soo empty, consider rearrange some ok
00:13:168 - also the col1 ok
00:42:033 (42033|1) - remove, since you only follow bell sound here, and not even a bell i follow drum sound here so keep
00:49:979 (49979|1) - remove? not bell-sound there do exist one
01:48:844 (108844|3) - ^ also exist
02:36:195 (156195|1) - remove like what i mentioned i catch drum

Well that's all I can see, hope it helps. . . my map is in your queue.
Thanks for mod and

here is the changed file:

Tofu's Beginning
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63762
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Sheriruth
TitleUnicode:Sheriruth
Artist:Team Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Team Grimoire
Creator:DoNotMess
Version:Tofu's Beginning
Source:Arcaea
Tags:Grimoire of Darkness Ajeemaniz ExUsagi Virtue- Tofu1222
BeatmapID:1255678
BeatmapSetID:590341

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Lmao Serirut lagi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
Sample,66681,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,67330,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,67979,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,68303,0,"soft-hitwhistle.wav",35
Sample,73168,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,77060,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,77708,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35

[TimingPoints]
2790,324.324324324324,4,2,1,50,1,0
65060,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
85817,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
116952,-100,4,2,1,50,0,1
137708,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0


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320,192,4249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,4735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,5060,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,5384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,5384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,6357,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,6844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,7330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,7979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,7979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,8952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,9925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,10249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,12844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,14141,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,15114,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,15762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,151492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,151817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,152465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,152789,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,153276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,153276,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,153762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,154087,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,154411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,155384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155708,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155871,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,155871,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,156195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,156519,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,156844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,157168,128,6,158465:0:0:0:0:
320,192,157492,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,192,157817,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,158141,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,158465,1,6,0:0:0:0:
Arzenvald
4,062 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
gk jadi bikin sb, lagi seret duid, fokus kerja dulu w :(
Sandalphon
1,470 posts
Joined May 2013
Sandalphon
Marked as nuke

Widescreen support
TAGs conflict with some diff
Mp3 quality higher than 192kbps

[Past]
00:15:925 (15925|1,16087|2) - 00:18:519 (18519|2,18681|1) - Suggest delete these notes, to emphasize the finish sound 00:18:357 - and 00:15:762 - , plus spam 1/2 to this whole section might be a little boring
00:44:303 - I'm confused with the patterns start from here, it seems like you ignore some of the snare drum and then somehow you add them back in the later part. Suggest you fully focus on the piano and the snare drum by using single notes (single note is enough here). And only use double at 00:57:276 - 00:58:573 - 00:59:871 - for the finish piano, you can also show the increased intensity by adding double. (if you dont get what i'm saying, there is a example img)
01:06:357 - 1/4 gap between the LNs can be very hard for normal player, using normal note will be a better idea
01:55:654 (115654|1,115654|0) - Try to CTRL + H this, try to separate the jack to different col with the previous one 01:54:844 (114844|0,115006|0) -

One mod for usagi's diff: 00:04:735 - The pattern here doesnt really fit the pitch, While you can hear the pitch change at 00:05:060 - and 00:05:384 - , using jacks couldnt really show that change, by what i mean, move 00:05:060 (5060|2,5384|1) - 1 col to the right to separate the jacks (kinda like i did in my Todestrieb

Good luck
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

YaHao wrote:

Marked as nuke

Widescreen support
TAGs conflict with some diff
Mp3 quality higher than 192kbps

[Past]
00:15:925 (15925|1,16087|2) - 00:18:519 (18519|2,18681|1) - Suggest delete these notes, to emphasize the finish sound 00:18:357 - and 00:15:762 - , plus spam 1/2 to this whole section might be a little boring considering, because i want to emphasize the kick ...
00:44:303 - I'm confused with the patterns start from here, it seems like you ignore some of the snare drum and then somehow you add them back in the later part. Suggest you fully focus on the piano and the snare drum by using single notes (single note is enough here). And only use double at 00:57:276 - 00:58:573 - 00:59:871 - for the finish piano, you can also show the increased intensity by adding double. (if you dont get what i'm saying, there is a example img) aye captain..
01:06:357 - 1/4 gap between the LNs can be very hard for normal player, using normal note will be a better idea ok
01:55:654 (115654|1,115654|0) - Try to CTRL + H this, try to separate the jack to different col with the previous one 01:54:844 (114844|0,115006|0) -

One mod for usagi's diff: 00:04:735 - The pattern here doesnt really fit the pitch, While you can hear the pitch change at 00:05:060 - and 00:05:384 - , using jacks couldnt really show that change, by what i mean, move 00:05:060 (5060|2,5384|1) - 1 col to the right to separate the jacks (kinda like i did in my Todestrieb

Good luck
lol my map is 0/10
Arzenvald
4,062 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald

YaHao wrote:

Marked as nuke
ｉ ｆｅｅｌ ｙｏｕ

YaHao wrote:

One mod for usagi's diff: 00:04:735 - The pattern here doesnt really fit the pitch, While you can hear the pitch change at 00:05:060 - and 00:05:384 - , using jacks couldnt really show that change, by what i mean, move 00:05:060 (5060|2,5384|1) - 1 col to the right to separate the jacks (kinda like i did in my Todestrieb
applied, this is todes's remix tbh

JooF12 wrote:

Apocalypse

01:14:789 (74789|1,74789|0,74789|2,74952|0,74952|1,75033|2,75114|1,75114|0,75276|2,75276|1,75276|0) - maybe just move this 1step to right since would be too much hard coz of 01:14:141 (74141|0,74384|0,74627|0,74789|0,74952|0,75114|0,75276|0) - // the anchor are relatively easy, but did change to avoid the anchor

01:26:789 (86789|1,87114|0) - maybe ctrl + h // mm sure
01:31:654 - double? // no piano, keep
02:23:222 - 02:28:411 - col1 feels empty here, consider rearrange some notes // it was intended

Especially this, sorry // np! was helpful :D :D

Another Lie wrote:

Usagi's Apocalypse
00:51:600 (51600|1,51600|0,51681|2,51762|0,51762|3,51844|1,51925|3,51925|2,52006|1,52087|3,52087|0,52168|1,52249|2,52330|3,52492|0) - coba ctrl + h, saia ngikut pitch disana [dan agak ke arah better gameplay :3] // heu

00:53:060 - add 1 note lg? konsistensi // k
02:37:168 (157168|0,157168|3,157168|1,157249|0,157249|1,157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|2,157573|3,157654|2,157654|3,157735|2,157735|3,157817|0,157817|1,157898|0,157898|1,157979|0,157979|1,158060|0,158060|1,158141|3,158141|2,158222|2,158222|3,158303|2,158303|3,158384|3,158384|2) - truly cancer. Beethoven be like. Coba di split jadi 2 2, gini https://puu.sh/v84Y5.png // no fucking way
u noob, thanx lie
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

ajeemaniz wrote:

YaHao wrote:

Marked as nuke
ｉ ｆｅｅｌ ｙｏｕ

YaHao wrote:

One mod for usagi's diff: 00:04:735 - The pattern here doesnt really fit the pitch, While you can hear the pitch change at 00:05:060 - and 00:05:384 - , using jacks couldnt really show that change, by what i mean, move 00:05:060 (5060|2,5384|1) - 1 col to the right to separate the jacks (kinda like i did in my Todestrieb
applied, this is todes's remix tbh

JooF12 wrote:

Apocalypse

01:14:789 (74789|1,74789|0,74789|2,74952|0,74952|1,75033|2,75114|1,75114|0,75276|2,75276|1,75276|0) - maybe just move this 1step to right since would be too much hard coz of 01:14:141 (74141|0,74384|0,74627|0,74789|0,74952|0,75114|0,75276|0) - // the anchor are relatively easy, but did change to avoid the anchor

01:26:789 (86789|1,87114|0) - maybe ctrl + h // mm sure
01:31:654 - double? // no piano, keep
02:23:222 - 02:28:411 - col1 feels empty here, consider rearrange some notes // it was intended

Especially this, sorry // np! was helpful :D :D

Another Lie wrote:

Usagi's Apocalypse
00:51:600 (51600|1,51600|0,51681|2,51762|0,51762|3,51844|1,51925|3,51925|2,52006|1,52087|3,52087|0,52168|1,52249|2,52330|3,52492|0) - coba ctrl + h, saia ngikut pitch disana [dan agak ke arah better gameplay :3] // heu

00:53:060 - add 1 note lg? konsistensi // k
02:37:168 (157168|0,157168|3,157168|1,157249|0,157249|1,157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|2,157573|3,157654|2,157654|3,157735|2,157735|3,157817|0,157817|1,157898|0,157898|1,157979|0,157979|1,158060|0,158060|1,158141|3,158141|2,158222|2,158222|3,158303|2,158303|3,158384|3,158384|2) - truly cancer. Beethoven be like. Coba di split jadi 2 2, gini https://puu.sh/v84Y5.png // no fucking way
u noob, thanx lie
file??? >:(
Ibrahim
1,202 posts
Joined July 2013
Ibrahim
sorry ga bisa mod, star ya!
good luck!
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Ibrahim wrote:

sorry ga bisa mod, star ya!
good luck!
thanks XDD sorry for mistook u as BN wakwakawk
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
ArcherLove
2B as Arcaea BG? That's suprisingly great ..
halo~

col 1~4 ya
I will focus on playability and visualization pattern, so maybe some will seems like "unreasonable demands" bud it's just a suggestion.
image spam on the way


Tofu's Beginning

00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1,12519|2,12844|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxlm/b329bcf07d.jpg
00:25:330 (25330|2,25654|1,25654|3,25979|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxnF/a1363e7115.jpg
00:30:519 (30519|2,30844|1,30844|3,31168|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxoK/454ac54f28.jpg
00:36:033 (36033|0) - move to 4?
00:40:898 (40898|1,41222|0,41222|2,41546|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxrz/95b5cd6904.png
00:50:465 (50465|2) - volume too low? 00:50:465 (50465|2) - delete? --> if yes 00:50:627 (50627|1,50789|0) - ctrl+h --> if yes 00:51:276 (51276|2,51925|3,52087|1) - http://puu.sh/vkxuY/4b3edee22c.png (add note because melody sound is loud enough?)

01:29:546 (89546|2) - move to 2? better visual because the pattern before it (43)
01:39:925 (99925|2) - move to 1? because same position with note before while the sound is different is a bit.. awkward?
02:09:600 (129600|2,129925|3) - ctrl+J this?


Past

00:07:330 (7330|3) - either move to 3 or 2? (I think better at 2) because --> 00:06:357 (6357|3,6844|3,6844|2,7330|3,7654|3,7979|3,7979|2) - anchorrr
00:09:925 (9925|0) - move to 3? ^
00:19:817 (19817|2,19979|1,20141|0) - move 1 col to the right? same position as note before make it a bit awkward imho
01:14:627 (74627|0) - move to 4?
01:21:600 (81600|2,81925|3) - ctrl+j? --> 01:22:898 (82898|1,83222|0) - ctrl+j -->
01:59:222 (119222|1,119546|0,119871|1,120195|3,120519|2,120844|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxOr/6797ebb35b.jpg
02:02:465 (122465|1,122789|2) - ctrl+j
02:04:411 (124411|1,124735|0) - ^
02:05:708 (125708|2,126033|3) - ^
02:07:330 (127330|0,127654|2,127979|0,128303|1,128627|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxWe/3e740e4a1a.jpg
02:11:546 (131546|1,131871|3) - I think it's okay to make this (41)


V's Present

00:28:573 (28573|3) - move to 2?
00:31:006 (31006|0) - move to 3?
00:54:357 (54357|2,54519|3,54681|2,54844|0,55006|0) - how about http://puu.sh/vky4Y/9105693b1f.jpg imo pretty

good diff


Future

00:49:006 (49006|2,49168|3,49330|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkygC/09fc28c43f.jpg zz

nice LN


Rebbit diff plz

00:50:303 (50303|0,50952|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkyBr/2876ad20bb.jpg
00:54:681 (54681|2,55006|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkyCC/c16690a74e.jpg
01:09:438 (69438|3) - end it on blue tick after plz
01:26:952 (86952|2) - move to 2?



??? :D ???
What's this? Stepmeme's re:zero pack V.999??? jk it's good

thanks for vibro based ajee.
good luck!~

If you have time, maybe you all can take a peek at my maps? 4K or 7K is okay:3 (4K preferably) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/560876
Thanks!~
Virtue-
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Virtue-

ArcherLove wrote:

2B as Arcaea BG? That's suprisingly great ..
halo~

col 1~4 ya
I will focus on playability and visualization pattern, so maybe some will seems like "unreasonable demands" bud it's just a suggestion.
image spam on the way


V's Present

00:28:573 (28573|3) - move to 2? sure, why not?
00:31:006 (31006|0) - move to 3? hey it's good, thanks :3
00:54:357 (54357|2,54519|3,54681|2,54844|0,55006|0) - how about http://puu.sh/vky4Y/9105693b1f.jpg imo pretty i think i keep my own pattern. sory

good diff

If you have time, maybe you all can take a peek at my maps? 4K or 7K is okay:3 (4K preferably) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/560876
Thanks!~
thanks for the mod
NETNOT
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

ArcherLove wrote:

2B as Arcaea BG? That's suprisingly great ..
halo~

col 1~4 ya
I will focus on playability and visualization pattern, so maybe some will seems like "unreasonable demands" bud it's just a suggestion.
image spam on the way


Tofu's Beginning

00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1,12519|2,12844|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxlm/b329bcf07d.jpg
00:25:330 (25330|2,25654|1,25654|3,25979|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxnF/a1363e7115.jpg
00:30:519 (30519|2,30844|1,30844|3,31168|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxoK/454ac54f28.jpg
00:36:033 (36033|0) - move to 4?
00:40:898 (40898|1,41222|0,41222|2,41546|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxrz/95b5cd6904.png
00:50:465 (50465|2) - volume too low? 00:50:465 (50465|2) - delete? --> if yes 00:50:627 (50627|1,50789|0) - ctrl+h --> if yes 00:51:276 (51276|2,51925|3,52087|1) - http://puu.sh/vkxuY/4b3edee22c.png (add note because melody sound is loud enough?)

01:29:546 (89546|2) - move to 2? better visual because the pattern before it (43)
01:39:925 (99925|2) - move to 1? because same position with note before while the sound is different is a bit.. awkward?
02:09:600 (129600|2,129925|3) - ctrl+J this?


Past

00:07:330 (7330|3) - either move to 3 or 2? (I think better at 2) because --> 00:06:357 (6357|3,6844|3,6844|2,7330|3,7654|3,7979|3,7979|2) - anchorrr
00:09:925 (9925|0) - move to 3? ^
00:19:817 (19817|2,19979|1,20141|0) - move 1 col to the right? same position as note before make it a bit awkward imho
01:14:627 (74627|0) - move to 4?
01:21:600 (81600|2,81925|3) - ctrl+j? --> 01:22:898 (82898|1,83222|0) - ctrl+j -->
01:59:222 (119222|1,119546|0,119871|1,120195|3,120519|2,120844|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxOr/6797ebb35b.jpg
02:02:465 (122465|1,122789|2) - ctrl+j
02:04:411 (124411|1,124735|0) - ^
02:05:708 (125708|2,126033|3) - ^
02:07:330 (127330|0,127654|2,127979|0,128303|1,128627|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxWe/3e740e4a1a.jpg
02:11:546 (131546|1,131871|3) - I think it's okay to make this (41)


V's Present

00:28:573 (28573|3) - move to 2?
00:31:006 (31006|0) - move to 3?
00:54:357 (54357|2,54519|3,54681|2,54844|0,55006|0) - how about http://puu.sh/vky4Y/9105693b1f.jpg imo pretty

good diff


Future

00:49:006 (49006|2,49168|3,49330|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkygC/09fc28c43f.jpg zz kick ama clap disini smua 2 ;w; udh enak jg visualnya itu

nice LN


Rebbit diff plz

00:50:303 (50303|0,50952|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkyBr/2876ad20bb.jpg
00:54:681 (54681|2,55006|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkyCC/c16690a74e.jpg
01:09:438 (69438|3) - end it on blue tick after plz
01:26:952 (86952|2) - move to 2?



??? :D ???
What's this? Stepmeme's re:zero pack V.999??? jk it's good

thanks for vibro based ajee.
good luck!~

If you have time, maybe you all can take a peek at my maps? 4K or 7K is okay:3 (4K preferably) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/560876
Thanks!~
ASFDGKHJKL full diff mod :(( thank you so much!!
Shima Rin
1,304 posts
Joined March 2015
Shima Rin

ArcherLove wrote:

2B as Arcaea BG? That's suprisingly great ..
halo~

col 1~4 ya
I will focus on playability and visualization pattern, so maybe some will seems like "unreasonable demands" bud it's just a suggestion.
image spam on the way


Tofu's Beginning

00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1,12519|2,12844|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxlm/b329bcf07d.jpg ok
00:25:330 (25330|2,25654|1,25654|3,25979|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxnF/a1363e7115.jpg ok
00:30:519 (30519|2,30844|1,30844|3,31168|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxoK/454ac54f28.jpg ok
00:36:033 (36033|0) - move to 4? ok
00:40:898 (40898|1,41222|0,41222|2,41546|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxrz/95b5cd6904.png ok
00:50:465 (50465|2) - volume too low? 00:50:465 (50465|2) - delete? --> if yes 00:50:627 (50627|1,50789|0) - ctrl+h --> if yes other diff all catch this sound,i will keep it

00:51:276 (51276|2.51925|3,52087|1) - http://puu.sh/vkxuY/4b3edee22c.png (add note because melody sound is loud enough?) i think it's no need in the eaisest diff

01:29:546 (89546|2) - move to 2? better visual because the pattern before it (43) ok
01:39:925 (99925|2) - move to 1? because same position with note before while the sound is different is a bit.. awkward? ok
02:09:600 (129600|2,129925|3) - ctrl+J this? ok



thanks for vibro based ajee.
good luck!~

If you have time, maybe you all can take a peek at my maps? 4K or 7K is okay:3 (4K preferably) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/560876
Thanks!~
Thanks a lot ;) , attached is the updated file for DoNotMess

Updated
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63762
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Sheriruth
TitleUnicode:Sheriruth
Artist:Team Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Team Grimoire
Creator:DoNotMess
Version:Tofu's Beginning
Source:Arcaea
Tags:Grimoire of Darkness Ajeemaniz ExUsagi Virtue- Tofu1222
BeatmapID:1255678
BeatmapSetID:590341

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Hanss
129 posts
Joined August 2014
Hanss
Usagi's Apocalypse Mod -

00:30:519 (30519|3,30600|2,30762|2,30844|3,30925|2,31006|3) - Try to not make the pattern a right hand trill..maybe try something like this http://i.imgur.com/XmUfF6X.png

00:54:033 (54033|0,54033|3,54033|2,54195|3,54195|1,54357|0,54357|2,54519|3,54519|0,54519|1,54681|1,54681|0,54681|2) - I think this part is way over done for just a simple build up sound. Maybe one LN represent better than a LN Shield lol but is just my opinion

00:59:708 (59708|0,59708|2) - Not consistent, same sound but is double chord instead of triple. Same goes for all the 2 note chords after it.

01:01:411 (61411|2,61411|3) - Sound is too soft for a chord to hand jack lol maybe try just single notes before the hand.

01:45:276 (105276|0,105276|3,105276|1,105276|2,105357|0,105438|1,105438|3,105519|0,105519|2,105600|0,105600|2,105600|3,105600|1,105681|3,105762|0,105762|2,105844|3,105844|1,105925|1,105925|0,105925|2,105925|3) - really?..

02:09:925 (129925|0,129925|2,129925|3,129925|1) - you never charted this part as quad chords last time so maybe make all these quad chords in this section triple chords for consistency.

02:17:425 (137425|0,137465|1,137506|2,137546|3,137546|0,137587|1,137627|2,137668|3) - i hear no sound for this to even happen. try making this match the sound a little better.

02:20:222 (140222|3,140222|2) - why is this part with two notes and this part 02:25:411 (145411|2) - with one note

02:35:871 (155871|0,155871|3,155871|1,155952|2,156033|1,156033|3,156114|0,156114|2,156195|0,156195|3,156195|1,156276|2,156357|0,156357|1,156438|2,156438|3,156519|1,156519|0,156519|3,156600|2,156681|1,156681|3,156762|2,156762|0,156844|0,156844|3,156844|1) - in my opinion section doesnt sound heavy enough to be charted so densely

welp that is all the mod i have xD overall great diff was just nitpicking :D hope this helped in any way, good luck with ranked c:
PiraTom
193 posts
Joined August 2012
PiraTom
mod for request. I'm sorry, I checked only one diff because I'm so busy :o :o
And sorry for Bad English.

[Usagi's Apocalypse]
First, I suggest only patterns, it will be easier than yours.
If you don't want to become more easier, please ignore my mods.

00:43:087 (43087|1,43087|0,43168|2,43168|3,43411|1,43411|0,43492|3,43492|2) -
I suggest Ctrl + H,
because when I consider song's excitement, I think it's better that gradually become hard pattern.

02:37:330 (157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|3,157573|2) -
Here is same as reason,too. I suggest Ctrl + H.

01:45:276 ~01:46:573 - Here is the most difficult place. I suggest this pattern (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7874441)
It's small change, but difficulty changes a lot.

That's all. Good Luck :) :)
Arzenvald
4,062 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
pira's suggestion all applied
6's too except 02:09:925 - all quads to gradually adds climax towards the end & 02:17:425 - the piano cue sound is 1/8
al's too except 00:50:303 - becuz no liek triple not in downbeat :<

thanks guys!
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

ajeemaniz wrote:

pira's suggestion all applied
6's too except 02:09:925 - all quads to gradually adds climax towards the end & 02:17:425 - the piano cue sound is 1/8
al's too except 00:50:303 - becuz no liek triple not in downbeat :<

thanks guys!
nih orng kebiasaan kgk nge drop filenya :<<<
Arzenvald
4,062 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
hmm di rename jadi apa ya '3'
'Arzenvald's Fluffypocalypse'
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Arzenvald wrote:

hmm di rename jadi apa ya '3'
'Arzenvald's Fluffypocalypse'
not gonna change ur diff name :(((
Arzenvald
4,062 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald
smh kys bn bribe when :^^^^
Shima Rin
1,304 posts
Joined March 2015
Shima Rin
maybe u should add ajee's new username into this mapset? :)
MEGAtive
1,656 posts
Joined August 2013
MEGAtive
Metacheck

Baca sendiri ya tanpa formatting gua ngepost dari Handphon ini

Sumber
  1. http://wikiwiki.jp/arcaea/?Sheriruth
  2. https://www.discogs.com/Various-Grimoire-Of-Darkness/release/9340350
  3. http://teamgrimoire.com
  4. https://arcaea.lowiro.com/en
Title: Sheriruth
Artist: Team Grimoire
Source: Arcaea
Tags: lowiro Grimoire of Darkness Eternal Core Conflict(対立) Tairitsu M3-2016 TG-005. Tofu1222 ajeemaniz Arzenvald ExUsagi Virtue-
Rivals_7
Beatmap Nominator
2,979 posts
Joined July 2014
Rivals_7
Meta is there already

[General]
convert MP3 pls
BGya ganti tuh nama ajeemaniz nya xd

1|2|3|4

[Hitsound]

Timing points based on "Future" applies to ((all))

00:03:276 (3276|3,3276|2) - so. there's a ((lot)) of drums going on in the intro but why? why the heck you left it unhitsounded :<
I heard W is kinda cover the drum so use that.
00:03:762 (3762|0,3762|3) - same applies here and pretty much etc

Tofu's Beginning


looks okay

??? :D ???

thats not okay. please be consistent with your hitsounding (i know you are into piano but using clap hitsound is completely misleading)

[Tofu's Beginning]

everything that doesnt have explanation are related to pitch relevancy
  1. 00:06:844 (6844|2,7330|1) - move to right. variating the structure you've made before
  2. 00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1) - 3|4
  3. 00:42:033 (42033|1,42357|2,42681|3) - this not even synchronized with piano. or is it intended?
  4. 00:51:600 - piano here
  5. 02:34:573 - missing a double
[Past]

"Pass(t)"ed

[V's Present]

  1. 00:28:735 (28735|0,28898|0) - pretty sure this is not even the same pitch
  2. 00:36:519 (36519|0,36681|0) - reeeeeee
  3. 00:40:898 (40898|1) - https://puu.sh/vwQGf/b4531dfa6c.jpg for variety
  4. 01:06:844 (66844|1,66844|0) - i'd say there's 2 pitch of this on the same col. split it?
  5. 01:17:222 (77222|2,77222|3) - same
  6. 01:25:168 (85168|3) - no real sound here (ghost) so people might missed this since you were doing minijack and then suddenly changes to roll. they need to atleast recover their independency first before going into next pattern
  7. 01:44:222 (104222|1) - delete? doesnt sound important to be highlighted here
  8. 01:44:627 - add a note here. crash obviously
[Future]

  1. 00:39:114 (39114|1,39276|1,39438|2,39438|1,39600|2,39762|2) - aaaaaa
    pls balance - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7935802
  2. 00:40:979 (40979|2,41141|2,41303|2,41546|2,41708|2,41871|2,42033|2) - lul
  3. 00:59:546 (59546|1,59546|0) - pls be triple just like you do with that clap afterwards - 01:00:195 (60195|2,60195|0,60195|3) -
  4. 01:11:222 (71222|0) - i'd say you can extend this for transition gimmick
  5. 01:25:168 (85168|3) - obviously ghost
  6. 01:32:303 (92303|1,92789|2,93276|3) - (zoomout your timeline first so you dont assume me only highlighting one note) would move this to 3|2|3 for pitch or smth
  7. 01:49:817 (109817|3,109898|2,109979|3,110060|1) - REEEEE this piano is all going down pitched but why OH trill i dont understand
[Arzenvald's Apocalypse]

  1. 00:37:979 (37979|2) - would move this to 2. this triple stack - 00:37:817 (37817|2,37979|2,38141|2) - is somewhat doesnt interpret anything in song
  2. 00:41:708 (41708|0,41708|2,41708|3,41708|1) - lul i dont get why is this a quad. sounds the same as- 00:41:222 (41222|3,41222|0,41222|1) - and it doesnt represent anything that change in the music either
  3. 01:01:411 (61411|3,61492|3) - could get what the second minijack do but what exactly is this even represent? move to 3 pls
  4. 01:02:708 (62708|3,62708|2) - synth pls. pls no double
  5. 01:04:006 (64006|3,64087|3,64330|1,64411|1) - *sobs*
  6. 01:45:276 (105276|0,105276|3,105276|2,105276|1) - hella fuk whats with the quadstream. aiae is over lol
    Might say to reduce them to at least a triple. considering the BPM is kinda too fast to handle those thing properly
Arzenvald
4,062 posts
Joined July 2013
Arzenvald

Rivals_7 wrote:

BGya ganti tuh nama ajeemaniz nya xd
all suggestion applied, the stream between the quads were nerf'd https://puu.sh/vy7Zl/f08d82f663.osu

danke!
Virtue-
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Virtue-

Rivals_7 wrote:

Meta is there already

[V's Present]

  1. 00:28:735 (28735|0,28898|0) - pretty sure this is not even the same pitch re-arrange
  2. 00:36:519 (36519|0,36681|0) - reeeeeee wat?
  3. 00:40:898 (40898|1) - https://puu.sh/vwQGf/b4531dfa6c.jpg for variety sure, 10/10 xD
  4. 01:06:844 (66844|1,66844|0) - i'd say there's 2 pitch of this on the same col. split it? maybe, i'm gonna keep it like this although there's 2 pitch.
  5. 01:17:222 (77222|2,77222|3) - same maybe, i'm gonna keep it like this although there's 2 pitch.
  6. 01:25:168 (85168|3) - no real sound here (ghost) so people might missed this since you were doing minijack and then suddenly changes to roll. they need to atleast recover their independency first before going into next pattern re-arrange it somehow
  7. 01:44:222 (104222|1) - delete? doesnt sound important to be highlighted here there's sound there, but i think i'm gonna focus the kick.
    applied that
  8. 01:44:627 - add a note here. crash obviously whoops, miss here owo
THANKS RIVAL FOR THE CHECK

UPDATE OWO NGENG UWU
Shima Rin
1,304 posts
Joined March 2015
Shima Rin

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Tofu's Beginning]

everything that doesnt have explanation are related to pitch relevancy
  1. 00:06:844 (6844|2,7330|1) - move to right. variating the structure you've made before ok
  2. 00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1) - 3|4 ok
  3. 00:42:033 (42033|1,42357|2,42681|3) - this not even synchronized with piano. or is it intended? it was, but after u suggest i think maybe catch piano would be better
  4. 00:51:600 - piano here ok
  5. 02:34:573 - missing a double ok
and together with some small self-changes, here is the updated one

Tofu's Beginning
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 63804
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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SpecialStyle: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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[Metadata]
Title:Sheriruth
TitleUnicode:Sheriruth
Artist:Team Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Team Grimoire
Creator:DoNotMess
Version:Tofu's Beginning
Source:Arcaea
Tags:lowiro Grimoire of Darkness Eternal Core Conflict(対立) Tairitsu M3-2016 TG-005. Tofu1222 ajeemaniz Arzenvald ExUsagi Virtue-
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448,192,46940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,47426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,47913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,48886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,49210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,49534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,50021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,50507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,50669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,50831,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,51318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,51642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,51967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,52129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,52940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,53264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,53426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,54075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,54237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,54399,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,54561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,54723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,55210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,56345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,56507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,56831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,57156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,57318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,58940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,59913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,60399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,60886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,61210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,61453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,61696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,61859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,62102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,62507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,62507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,62831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,63156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,63804,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,64129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,64453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,64777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,65102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,65426,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,65750,128,2,66075:0:0:0:0:
64,192,66075,128,8,66399:0:0:0:0:
448,192,66399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,66886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,67048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,67534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,67696,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,68669,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,68831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,68994,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,69318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,69642,128,2,69967:0:0:0:0:
320,192,69967,128,8,70291:0:0:0:0:
64,192,70291,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,70777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,71264,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,71588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,72561,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,72886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,73372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,73615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,73859,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,74021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,74669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,74831,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,75480,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,75804,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,76129,128,2,76453:0:0:0:0:
64,192,76453,128,8,76777:0:0:0:0:
448,192,76777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,77426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,77669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,77913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,78399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,78723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,78886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,80021,128,2,80345:0:0:0:0:
448,192,80345,128,8,80669:0:0:0:0:
64,192,80669,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,80994,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,81318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,81642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,81967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,82291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,82615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,82940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,83264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,83588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,83913,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,84237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,84561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,84561,128,4,85859:0:0:0:0:
448,192,85859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,86345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,86831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,87804,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,89588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90399,128,2,90723:0:0:0:0:
64,192,90723,128,8,91048:0:0:0:0:
448,192,91048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91372,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,91534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,91859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,92345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,92831,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,93318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,93642,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,93967,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,94291,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,94453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95264,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95588,128,2,95913:0:0:0:0:
64,192,95913,128,8,96237:0:0:0:0:
448,192,96237,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96561,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98669,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98831,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99967,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100777,128,2,101102:0:0:0:0:
64,192,101102,128,8,101426:0:0:0:0:
448,192,101426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,101913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104021,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104669,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104831,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,104994,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105318,128,4,106615:0:0:0:0:
448,192,105318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,105967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,106615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,109210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,109534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,109859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,110183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,111156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,111480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111804,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,112129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,112453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,113102,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,113426,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,113750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,114399,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,115291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115696,128,6,116994:0:0:0:0:
192,192,115696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,116345,1,6,0:0:0:0:
64,192,116994,128,2,118291:0:0:0:0:
192,192,118291,128,2,118940:0:0:0:0:
448,192,118940,128,2,119588:0:0:0:0:
320,192,119588,128,2,120237:0:0:0:0:
64,192,120237,128,2,120886:0:0:0:0:
448,192,120561,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,120886,128,2,121534:0:0:0:0:
320,192,121534,128,2,122183:0:0:0:0:
448,192,122183,128,2,122831:0:0:0:0:
64,192,122831,128,2,123480:0:0:0:0:
320,192,123156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,123480,128,2,124129:0:0:0:0:
448,192,124129,128,2,124777:0:0:0:0:
320,192,124777,128,2,125426:0:0:0:0:
64,192,125426,128,2,126075:0:0:0:0:
192,192,126075,128,2,127372:0:0:0:0:
448,192,127372,128,6,128669:0:0:0:0:
192,192,128345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,128669,128,2,129318:0:0:0:0:
192,192,129318,128,2,129967:0:0:0:0:
320,192,129642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,129967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,130615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,131102,128,2,131913:0:0:0:0:
192,192,131913,128,2,132561:0:0:0:0:
448,192,132561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,132886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,133210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,133534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,133859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,134183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,134507,128,2,134831:0:0:0:0:
64,192,134831,128,8,135156:0:0:0:0:
448,192,135156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,135480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,135804,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,136129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,136453,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,136777,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,137102,128,2,137750:0:0:0:0:
192,192,137426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,137750,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,138237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,138561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,138886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,139534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,139859,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,139859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,140183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,140345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,140345,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,140831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,141156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,141480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,142453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,142940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,142940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,143750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,144075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,144723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,145372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,145534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145534,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,146021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,146345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,146669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,147642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,148129,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,148129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,148615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,148940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,149264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,149913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150237,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,150237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,150561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,150723,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,151210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,151534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,151859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,152507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,152831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,153318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,153318,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,153804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,154129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,154453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,154615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,154615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,155426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,155913,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,156561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,157210,128,4,158507:0:0:0:0:
320,192,157534,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,157859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,158183,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,158507,1,2,0:0:0:0:

;) thanks rival, reallly helps
Rivals_7
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Rivals_7
inb4 someone will nuke hard that quad in arzenvald's xd

lets try to push this one then
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
MUCH THANKS!!!!!
<3 Rivals_7 <3
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
wow i didn't see that coming

tolong nama gw di backgroundnya edit la ; ;
Ibrahim
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Ibrahim

Arzenvald wrote:

wow i didn't see that coming

tolong nama gw di backgroundnya edit la ; ;

delete aja map nya please .
asik gw bikin drama bagus gak? :"D
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
^ delet dis
DoNotMess
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DoNotMess
h3h3 rip dis map </3
smua garagara ibrahim >:D
Rivals_7
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Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
#blameibrahim2k17
Maxus
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Maxus
Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
  1. none
Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[Tofu's Easy]
  1. 00:03:804 (3804|1,4291|2,4777|1) - To follow the correct pitch, you need to make these notes at column 3-2-3
  2. 00:06:399 (6399|1,7372|1) - suggest to move these notes to col 3 for balance, the way you arrange the pattern is not balance (too much on the left column.) this will make the pattern balance while still follow pitch.
  3. 00:11:102 (11102|1,11588|3,12075|1) - Should be at col 3, col 2 and col 4 to follow pitch properly.
  4. 00:19:859 (19859|0,20345|2) - Should be at col 4 and col 1 to also follow the pitch.
  5. 00:34:453 (34453|1,34777|2,37048|2,37372|1,39642|1,39967|2,42237|1,42561|2) - I really suggest Ctrl+H all of these, to make the differences with the one at 00:24:075 - , because the pattern being same for too long, it can give variation.
  6. 00:44:831 (44831|3) - Move to col 2 for the balance here.
  7. 00:49:534 - almost nothing in col 4, you should balance it more here, i suggest to do http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093007
  8. 00:53:426 (53426|0) - move to col 4 because of this being lower pitch than 00:53:264 -
  9. 00:56:183 - Aside from not being balance, felt like the PR also wrong here, it should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093016
  10. 01:08:507 - Also the same here, the balance in col 4 is lacking here, you should use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093022
  11. 01:12:075 (72075|1,72561|1,73129|1,73615|1,74021|1) - this is too much lol, the spread of the notes are uneven .. should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093035
  12. 01:15:156 (75156|0,75804|1) - You need to switch column between these 2 notes, the note at 01:15:156 (75156|0) - doesn't synchronize well with 01:14:183 (74183|0,74426|3,74669|0,74831|3) - because of not being a repeatable pitch.
  13. 01:17:021 - quite sure you can make more balance jack here, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093047
  14. 01:25:859 (85859|3,86831|2) - Switch column make much more balance and pitch relevance.
  15. 01:28:777 - you can also sort of balancing this by http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093065 because of 01:29:264 - being higher pitch than 01:28:777 - , and more balance as well.
  16. 01:32:183 (92183|1) - Move this to col 1, this doesn't fit to be trill with 01:32:345 (92345|3,92831|1,93318|3,93642|1) - because this is only soft sound, while the other 4 notes are hard sound.
  17. 01:33:967 - For the melody, you need to form a bit trill for pitch. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093083
  18. 01:38:831 - not sure why this massive double note suddenly comes out, felt like a huge diff spike.
  19. 01:56:345 - Personally since there's a change of pitch melody and roll sound suddenly coming, you can sort of make another LN like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093092
  20. 02:08:345 (128345|1) - i don't understand what is this note for, you also didn't use it at 01:57:967 - , so i don't really get how the consistency works here.
  21. 02:09:318 (129318|1) - better turn this into normal note, this is kinda too forcing it with 02:09:642 (129642|2) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:55:048 (55048|1,55372|2,55696|1) - I suggest making these col 3-2-3 to avoid jack between 00:54:723 (54723|1,55048|1) - because the pattern motion become quite awkward imo.
  2. 01:00:399 - somehow here you can actually make mirror pattern like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093199 for 2 reason:
    1.you use double at right hand like 00:58:291 (58291|2,58291|3,58940|2,58940|3,59913|3,59913|2) - for too many times, the note amount and motion become unbalanced by itself because of it.
    2.the mirror pattern actually structured the pattern to be much neater and a bit more differently because this is the section where the drum get pronounced more loudly.
  3. 01:19:696 (79696|3) - suggest move this to col 3, you got too much stuffs at col 4 at 01:18:075 (78075|3,78399|3,78723|3,79210|3,80507|3,80994|3) -
  4. 02:24:723 - You should make jack pattern that concentrated at col 4 similar to how you did at 02:19:534 - , seems structurically inconsistent here.
    This diff is really good tbh, really great job.
[V's Present]
  1. 00:25:372 (25372|0,25696|1,26021|2) - I'm a bit curious why the LN is in the exact same column as 00:24:075 (24075|0,24399|1,24723|2) - despite those 2 piano having distinct pitch differences. i suggest something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093271 to differentiate both.
  2. 00:33:886 (33886|0) - don't think this need to be mapped, it's kinda ambiguous if you compared this with other diff.
  3. 00:40:453 (40453|1,40615|2) - Switch column would be better to mirror 00:41:426 -
  4. 00:50:507 (50507|3) - Don't know why this LN started here, it should be started at 00:50:345 - , same problem with future diff.
  5. 00:56:994 - the pattern somehow becoming obnoxious to hit here.. I figure you can try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093330 instead to solve that, the pitch of LN between 00:56:831 - until 00:57:642 - also becoming more apparent if you make them trill due to repeating piano either way.
  6. 01:01:453 (61453|2,61534|3,62102|2,62183|3) - although this is maybe the style of the diff, i can't help but realize that how the col 4 stack becoming too tricky to hit considering the jack AND LN cramping the pattern, the one solution is to make one of the LN not cramping the jack pattern, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093341
  7. 01:08:669 (68669|0,68750|1,68831|2,68913|0) - mehh.. i'm kinda sad seeing this.. if you want to put tricky 1/4 note in the middle of LN, it's usually encouraged to structure it in more linear way without too many difficult transitions, you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093356 instead.
  8. 01:11:102 (71102|3,71426|0) - It's much preffered at col 1 and col 3. jack at 01:11:426 - is too unbalanced considering how tricky the pattern and note compositions being too left handed at 01:11:588 (71588|0,71913|1,72075|1,72237|0,72399|0) -
  9. 01:29:588 - kinda awkward that this is a single LN when you use double at 01:39:967 - , talking bout inconsistency.
  10. 01:33:642 (93642|2,93804|1) - Suggest to switch column here, not sure what the shield for.
  11. 01:44:669 - I do think you need extra note here, this part is really underwhelming when the drum is really intense and building up here.
  12. 01:48:561 (108561|0,108642|2,108723|1,108804|3,108886|0,108967|2) - all these LN felt really out of place when there isn't distinct synth sound to be heard here, I do think you don't need to make full LN either, for this kind of sound, just make it into normal note is good enough to make the distinct pitch more prominent.
  13. 01:50:831 (110831|0,110913|1) - Same as above, make it into normal note.
  14. 01:55:210 (115210|1,115372|2) - Kinda don't get what are these LN for.. you can clearly see that the pitch isn't at the mentioned line.
  15. 02:27:804 (147804|2,147967|1,148291|2) - Better to Ctrl+H these, don't really get what the LN trill at 02:27:318 (147318|1,147642|0,147967|1) - for, when the other LN doesn't be made trill as well.
[Future]

  • So, the thing that i want to mention, is the gap is big here.. transition between 1/2 note beat to 1/4 dense jumpstream is the cause of this i think, you need to restructure the gap for the spread to be safe.
  1. 00:33:967 (33967|2) - i think you can delete this, you don't need to quad this sound when this isn't the highest diff. it also makes the 1/8 mini pattern before easier to hit.
  2. 00:41:750 - this is the one that i'm talking about about when mentioning about spread, i think instead of making dense jumpstream, you can make triple pattern for every 1/2 beat (don't make stream) , it will emphasize the drum and make better spread.
  3. 00:43:048 - i suggest to nerf the jumptrill to be dense 1/2 jumpstream (double for every 1/2 beat) for better spread with present diff. or try buff the present diff, either way, i need you to find some way to make the spread between present and future diff more balance.
  4. 01:01:453 - 01:02:102 - you can basically add note for each of these blue line to make the rythm more concise and interesting with the song
  5. 01:02:507 - same as my suggestion at 00:41:750 - , you can basically make 1/2 triple triple instead of full dense jumpstream for more approriate spread.
  6. 01:03:804 - basically more or less the same with 00:43:048 - . and apply it on similar part, you know where.
  7. 01:23:672 (83672|1) - I think this should be at 01:23:756 - because for consistency with 01:18:393 -
  8. 01:45:318 - I also think you can sort of nerf the handstream because this is also kinda really dense compared with present's diff.
    I'm not really sure how to mod this diff for now as what i really want to mention now is the diff gap between the 2 mentioned difficulty i said earlier, generally i think having 1 more difficulty would be approriate here, but it seems like it's too late for that, so for the least i can ask is to nerfed this diff so the spread will be more balance (you can also buff the present's diff, but not really much, otherwise you will ended up having big gap between normal and present diff).
[Arzenvald's Apocalypse]
  1. 00:54:886 (54886|1) - suggest move to col 2 here , don't really see any reason to stack the jack there.
  2. 00:59:588 (59588|0,59913|3) - Try switch notes column between these 2 notes? this way you get 5 notes stack that mirroring 01:00:561 (60561|3,60723|3,60886|3,61048|3,61210|3) -
  3. 01:20:831 (80831|0) - kinda think you can move this to col 2 so that the transition between ln shield to stack jack notes here aren't too tricky
  4. 01:45:723 (105723|3,105886|2) - I do think you can switch column here, so the jack will be at col 1-2-3-4 (if combined with 01:45:318 (105318|0,105399|0,105561|1,105642|1) - ) will gives smooth transition considering that the pattern diff already rough to begin with. (maybe seem small, but this makes quite huge impact)
  5. 01:53:021 (113021|2,113102|2) - this is extremely rough in the middle of really dense patterning, i mean, when combined with the burst at 01:52:615 - causing player to kinda mis-hit because the rough pattern still continue until the quad pattern, i suggest to switch column between 01:52:940 (112940|0,113021|2) - these 2 notes, the flow of direction will makes the pattern much better to hit.
  6. 01:54:196 (114196|2) - I'm sure there isn't burst sound in this one, and i also think this part kinda too rough to hit considering how dense col 2 and col 3 is, so combined with my mod to delete that one 1/8, i will suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8095033 so that it will spreaded the burst more balancely.
  7. 01:54:967 (114967|2,115048|2) - Is this jack intentionally being at the same column with the jack at 01:55:615 - ? personally their each respective jack piano does have quite a noticeable difference pitch here, prefer 01:54:967 (114967|2) - at col 2.
  8. 02:07:372 - kinda find it hard to transition of because the pattern flow to the left, i think you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8095135 instead, it mirroring a bit of 02:08:183 - , should be a bit easier.
  9. 02:16:453 - well.. tbh, although structurically the jack spreaded well and well-thought, i am not really sure how the players will see the pattern, well, if you really sure with this, i'm fine, just wanna say what i thought.
    :Thumbs up: , really solid diff, i'm kinda worried about some pattern, but i think it can still be acceptable, enjoying play this diff numerous times already
Call me back if you're done, The thing that i really wanna get addressed is the spread issues of H and I icon diff first.
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess
boi oh boi..
DoNotMess
485 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
DoNotMess

Maxus wrote:

Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
  1. none
Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[Tofu's Easy]
  1. 00:03:804 (3804|1,4291|2,4777|1) - To follow the correct pitch, you need to make these notes at column 3-2-3
  2. 00:06:399 (6399|1,7372|1) - suggest to move these notes to col 3 for balance, the way you arrange the pattern is not balance (too much on the left column.) this will make the pattern balance while still follow pitch.
  3. 00:11:102 (11102|1,11588|3,12075|1) - Should be at col 3, col 2 and col 4 to follow pitch properly.
  4. 00:19:859 (19859|0,20345|2) - Should be at col 4 and col 1 to also follow the pitch.
  5. 00:34:453 (34453|1,34777|2,37048|2,37372|1,39642|1,39967|2,42237|1,42561|2) - I really suggest Ctrl+H all of these, to make the differences with the one at 00:24:075 - , because the pattern being same for too long, it can give variation.
  6. 00:44:831 (44831|3) - Move to col 2 for the balance here.
  7. 00:49:534 - almost nothing in col 4, you should balance it more here, i suggest to do http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093007
  8. 00:53:426 (53426|0) - move to col 4 because of this being lower pitch than 00:53:264 -
  9. 00:56:183 - Aside from not being balance, felt like the PR also wrong here, it should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093016
  10. 01:08:507 - Also the same here, the balance in col 4 is lacking here, you should use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093022
  11. 01:12:075 (72075|1,72561|1,73129|1,73615|1,74021|1) - this is too much lol, the spread of the notes are uneven .. should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093035
  12. 01:15:156 (75156|0,75804|1) - You need to switch column between these 2 notes, the note at 01:15:156 (75156|0) - doesn't synchronize well with 01:14:183 (74183|0,74426|3,74669|0,74831|3) - because of not being a repeatable pitch.
  13. 01:17:021 - quite sure you can make more balance jack here, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093047
  14. 01:25:859 (85859|3,86831|2) - Switch column make much more balance and pitch relevance.
  15. 01:28:777 - you can also sort of balancing this by http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093065 because of 01:29:264 - being higher pitch than 01:28:777 - , and more balance as well.
  16. 01:32:183 (92183|1) - Move this to col 1, this doesn't fit to be trill with 01:32:345 (92345|3,92831|1,93318|3,93642|1) - because this is only soft sound, while the other 4 notes are hard sound.
  17. 01:33:967 - For the melody, you need to form a bit trill for pitch. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093083
  18. 01:38:831 - not sure why this massive double note suddenly comes out, felt like a huge diff spike.
  19. 01:56:345 - Personally since there's a change of pitch melody and roll sound suddenly coming, you can sort of make another LN like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093092
  20. 02:08:345 (128345|1) - i don't understand what is this note for, you also didn't use it at 01:57:967 - , so i don't really get how the consistency works here.
  21. 02:09:318 (129318|1) - better turn this into normal note, this is kinda too forcing it with 02:09:642 (129642|2) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:55:048 (55048|1,55372|2,55696|1) - I suggest making these col 3-2-3 to avoid jack between 00:54:723 (54723|1,55048|1) - because the pattern motion become quite awkward imo.
  2. 01:00:399 - somehow here you can actually make mirror pattern like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093199 for 2 reason:
    1.you use double at right hand like 00:58:291 (58291|2,58291|3,58940|2,58940|3,59913|3,59913|2) - for too many times, the note amount and motion become unbalanced by itself because of it.
    2.the mirror pattern actually structured the pattern to be much neater and a bit more differently because this is the section where the drum get pronounced more loudly.
  3. 01:19:696 (79696|3) - suggest move this to col 3, you got too much stuffs at col 4 at 01:18:075 (78075|3,78399|3,78723|3,79210|3,80507|3,80994|3) -
  4. 02:24:723 - You should make jack pattern that concentrated at col 4 similar to how you did at 02:19:534 - , seems structurically inconsistent here.
    This diff is really good tbh, really great job. ALL APPLIED BECAUSE I WENT FULL RETARD WHEN MAKING THIS DIFF
[V's Present]
  1. 00:25:372 (25372|0,25696|1,26021|2) - I'm a bit curious why the LN is in the exact same column as 00:24:075 (24075|0,24399|1,24723|2) - despite those 2 piano having distinct pitch differences. i suggest something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093271 to differentiate both.
  2. 00:33:886 (33886|0) - don't think this need to be mapped, it's kinda ambiguous if you compared this with other diff.
  3. 00:40:453 (40453|1,40615|2) - Switch column would be better to mirror 00:41:426 -
  4. 00:50:507 (50507|3) - Don't know why this LN started here, it should be started at 00:50:345 - , same problem with future diff.
  5. 00:56:994 - the pattern somehow becoming obnoxious to hit here.. I figure you can try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093330 instead to solve that, the pitch of LN between 00:56:831 - until 00:57:642 - also becoming more apparent if you make them trill due to repeating piano either way.
  6. 01:01:453 (61453|2,61534|3,62102|2,62183|3) - although this is maybe the style of the diff, i can't help but realize that how the col 4 stack becoming too tricky to hit considering the jack AND LN cramping the pattern, the one solution is to make one of the LN not cramping the jack pattern, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093341
  7. 01:08:669 (68669|0,68750|1,68831|2,68913|0) - mehh.. i'm kinda sad seeing this.. if you want to put tricky 1/4 note in the middle of LN, it's usually encouraged to structure it in more linear way without too many difficult transitions, you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093356 instead.
  8. 01:11:102 (71102|3,71426|0) - It's much preffered at col 1 and col 3. jack at 01:11:426 - is too unbalanced considering how tricky the pattern and note compositions being too left handed at 01:11:588 (71588|0,71913|1,72075|1,72237|0,72399|0) -
  9. 01:29:588 - kinda awkward that this is a single LN when you use double at 01:39:967 - , talking bout inconsistency.
  10. 01:33:642 (93642|2,93804|1) - Suggest to switch column here, not sure what the shield for.
  11. 01:44:669 - I do think you need extra note here, this part is really underwhelming when the drum is really intense and building up here.
  12. 01:48:561 (108561|0,108642|2,108723|1,108804|3,108886|0,108967|2) - all these LN felt really out of place when there isn't distinct synth sound to be heard here, I do think you don't need to make full LN either, for this kind of sound, just make it into normal note is good enough to make the distinct pitch more prominent.
  13. 01:50:831 (110831|0,110913|1) - Same as above, make it into normal note.
  14. 01:55:210 (115210|1,115372|2) - Kinda don't get what are these LN for.. you can clearly see that the pitch isn't at the mentioned line.
  15. 02:27:804 (147804|2,147967|1,148291|2) - Better to Ctrl+H these, don't really get what the LN trill at 02:27:318 (147318|1,147642|0,147967|1) - for, when the other LN doesn't be made trill as well.
[Future]

  • So, the thing that i want to mention, is the gap is big here.. transition between 1/2 note beat to 1/4 dense jumpstream is the cause of this i think, you need to restructure the gap for the spread to be safe.
  1. 00:33:967 (33967|2) - i think you can delete this, you don't need to quad this sound when this isn't the highest diff. it also makes the 1/8 mini pattern before easier to hit.
  2. 00:41:750 - this is the one that i'm talking about about when mentioning about spread, i think instead of making dense jumpstream, you can make triple pattern for every 1/2 beat (don't make stream) , it will emphasize the drum and make better spread.
  3. 00:43:048 - i suggest to nerf the jumptrill to be dense 1/2 jumpstream (double for every 1/2 beat) for better spread with present diff. or try buff the present diff, either way, i need you to find some way to make the spread between present and future diff more balance.
  4. 01:01:453 - 01:02:102 - you can basically add note for each of these blue line to make the rythm more concise and interesting with the song
  5. 01:02:507 - same as my suggestion at 00:41:750 - , you can basically make 1/2 triple triple instead of full dense jumpstream for more approriate spread.
  6. 01:03:804 - basically more or less the same with 00:43:048 - . and apply it on similar part, you know where.
  7. 01:23:672 (83672|1) - I think this should be at 01:23:756 - because for consistency with 01:18:393 -
  8. 01:45:318 - I also think you can sort of nerf the handstream because this is also kinda really dense compared with present's diff.
    I'm not really sure how to mod this diff for now as what i really want to mention now is the diff gap between the 2 mentioned difficulty i said earlier, generally i think having 1 more difficulty would be approriate here, but it seems like it's too late for that, so for the least i can ask is to nerfed this diff so the spread will be more balance (you can also buff the present's diff, but not really much, otherwise you will ended up having big gap between normal and present diff).i think the jumpstream patterns i put on this diff are extremely easy despite it being 4,69* (i put it accordingly to the music itself), also it's because of the trill i made with 1/4 ln and the only things that are tricky here are in 01:05:102 - and 01:51:318 - .. if u think the gap u mentioned caused by the star rating, i can actually nerf the trills but otherwise i would suggest V's diff to be buffed.. i will discuss with virtue- then
[Arzenvald's Apocalypse]
  1. 00:54:886 (54886|1) - suggest move to col 2 here , don't really see any reason to stack the jack there.
  2. 00:59:588 (59588|0,59913|3) - Try switch notes column between these 2 notes? this way you get 5 notes stack that mirroring 01:00:561 (60561|3,60723|3,60886|3,61048|3,61210|3) -
  3. 01:20:831 (80831|0) - kinda think you can move this to col 2 so that the transition between ln shield to stack jack notes here aren't too tricky
  4. 01:45:723 (105723|3,105886|2) - I do think you can switch column here, so the jack will be at col 1-2-3-4 (if combined with 01:45:318 (105318|0,105399|0,105561|1,105642|1) - ) will gives smooth transition considering that the pattern diff already rough to begin with. (maybe seem small, but this makes quite huge impact)
  5. 01:53:021 (113021|2,113102|2) - this is extremely rough in the middle of really dense patterning, i mean, when combined with the burst at 01:52:615 - causing player to kinda mis-hit because the rough pattern still continue until the quad pattern, i suggest to switch column between 01:52:940 (112940|0,113021|2) - these 2 notes, the flow of direction will makes the pattern much better to hit.
  6. 01:54:196 (114196|2) - I'm sure there isn't burst sound in this one, and i also think this part kinda too rough to hit considering how dense col 2 and col 3 is, so combined with my mod to delete that one 1/8, i will suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8095033 so that it will spreaded the burst more balancely.
  7. 01:54:967 (114967|2,115048|2) - Is this jack intentionally being at the same column with the jack at 01:55:615 - ? personally their each respective jack piano does have quite a noticeable difference pitch here, prefer 01:54:967 (114967|2) - at col 2.
  8. 02:07:372 - kinda find it hard to transition of because the pattern flow to the left, i think you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8095135 instead, it mirroring a bit of 02:08:183 - , should be a bit easier.
  9. 02:16:453 - well.. tbh, although structurically the jack spreaded well and well-thought, i am not really sure how the players will see the pattern, well, if you really sure with this, i'm fine, just wanna say what i thought.
    :Thumbs up: , really solid diff, i'm kinda worried about some pattern, but i think it can still be acceptable, enjoying play this diff numerous times already
Call me back if you're done, The thing that i really wanna get addressed is the spread issues of H and I icon diff first.
Shima Rin
1,304 posts
Joined March 2015
Shima Rin

Maxus wrote:

Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
  1. none
Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[Tofu's Easy]
  1. 00:03:804 (3804|1,4291|2,4777|1) - To follow the correct pitch, you need to make these notes at column 3-2-3
  2. 00:06:399 (6399|1,7372|1) - suggest to move these notes to col 3 for balance, the way you arrange the pattern is not balance (too much on the left column.) this will make the pattern balance while still follow pitch.
  3. 00:11:102 (11102|1,11588|3,12075|1) - Should be at col 3, col 2 and col 4 to follow pitch properly.
  4. 00:19:859 (19859|0,20345|2) - Should be at col 4 and col 1 to also follow the pitch.
  5. 00:34:453 (34453|1,34777|2,37048|2,37372|1,39642|1,39967|2,42237|1,42561|2) - I really suggest Ctrl+H all of these, to make the differences with the one at 00:24:075 - , because the pattern being same for too long, it can give variation.
  6. 00:44:831 (44831|3) - Move to col 2 for the balance here.
  7. 00:49:534 - almost nothing in col 4, you should balance it more here, i suggest to do http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093007
  8. 00:53:426 (53426|0) - move to col 4 because of this being lower pitch than 00:53:264 -
  9. 00:56:183 - Aside from not being balance, felt like the PR also wrong here, it should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093016
  10. 01:08:507 - Also the same here, the balance in col 4 is lacking here, you should use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093022
  11. 01:12:075 (72075|1,72561|1,73129|1,73615|1,74021|1) - this is too much lol, the spread of the notes are uneven .. should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093035
  12. 01:15:156 (75156|0,75804|1) - You need to switch column between these 2 notes, the note at 01:15:156 (75156|0) - doesn't synchronize well with 01:14:183 (74183|0,74426|3,74669|0,74831|3) - because of not being a repeatable pitch.
  13. 01:17:021 - quite sure you can make more balance jack here, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093047
  14. 01:25:859 (85859|3,86831|2) - Switch column make much more balance and pitch relevance.
  15. 01:28:777 - you can also sort of balancing this by http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093065 because of 01:29:264 - being higher pitch than 01:28:777 - , and more balance as well.
  16. 01:32:183 (92183|1) - Move this to col 1, this doesn't fit to be trill with 01:32:345 (92345|3,92831|1,93318|3,93642|1) - because this is only soft sound, while the other 4 notes are hard sound.
  17. 01:33:967 - For the melody, you need to form a bit trill for pitch. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093083 yep, but i think the right one should be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8101673 which the two notes with the same pitch put in the same column for pitch relevance?
  18. 01:38:831 - not sure why this massive double note suddenly comes out, felt like a huge diff spike.
  19. 01:56:345 - Personally since there's a change of pitch melody and roll sound suddenly coming, you can sort of make another LN like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093092
  20. 02:08:345 (128345|1) - i don't understand what is this note for, you also didn't use it at 01:57:967 - , so i don't really get how the consistency works here. i did use it. when 01:57:967 - here it is really my fault, but i use it in these part like 02:00:561 - 02:03:156 - and a few others. Now I change all of them into normal notes since i dont think LNs always will be a good idea in the easiest diff. So I accept your mod but made a little bit change
  21. 02:09:318 (129318|1) - better turn this into normal note, this is kinda too forcing it with 02:09:642 (129642|2) -
no reply=fixed. Thanks for your mod ;) Now maybe I can get the idea about the balance thing u wanna express alll over your mod XD

And also make some other little changes. Plz check the following files
Tofu's Beginning
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192,192,113750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,114399,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,115291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,115696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115696,128,0,116345:0:0:0:0:
320,192,116345,128,0,116994:0:0:0:0:
64,192,116994,128,0,117967:0:0:0:0:
448,192,117967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,118291,128,2,118940:0:0:0:0:
448,192,118940,128,2,119588:0:0:0:0:
320,192,119588,128,2,120237:0:0:0:0:
64,192,120237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,120561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,120886,128,2,121534:0:0:0:0:
320,192,121534,128,2,122183:0:0:0:0:
448,192,122183,128,2,122831:0:0:0:0:
64,192,122831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,123156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,123480,128,2,124129:0:0:0:0:
448,192,124129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,124453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,124777,128,2,125426:0:0:0:0:
64,192,125426,128,2,126075:0:0:0:0:
192,192,126075,128,2,127372:0:0:0:0:
448,192,127372,128,0,128345:0:0:0:0:
192,192,128345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,128669,128,2,129318:0:0:0:0:
192,192,129318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,129642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,129967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,130615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,131102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,131264,128,0,131913:0:0:0:0:
192,192,131913,128,2,132561:0:0:0:0:
448,192,132561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,132886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,133210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,133534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,133859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,134183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,134507,128,2,134831:0:0:0:0:
64,192,134831,128,8,135156:0:0:0:0:
448,192,135156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,135480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,135804,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,136129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,136453,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,136777,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,137102,128,2,137750:0:0:0:0:
192,192,137426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,137750,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,138237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,138561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,138886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,139534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,139859,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,139859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,140183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,140345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,140345,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,140831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,141156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,141480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,142453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,142940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,142940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,143750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,144075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,144723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,145372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,145534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145534,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,146021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,146345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,146669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,147642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,148129,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,148129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,148615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,148940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,149264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,149913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150237,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,150237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,150561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,150723,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,151210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,151534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,151859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,152507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,152831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,153318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,153318,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,154129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,154453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,154615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,154615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,155426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,155913,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,156561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,157210,128,4,158507:0:0:0:0:
320,192,157534,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,157859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,158183,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,158507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
Maxus
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Maxus
i think the jumpstream patterns i put on this diff are extremely easy despite it being 4,69* (i put it accordingly to the music itself), also it's because of the trill i made with 1/4 ln and the only things that are tricky here are in 01:05:102 - and 01:51:318 - .. if u think the gap u mentioned caused by the star rating, i can actually nerf the trills but otherwise i would suggest V's diff to be buffed.. i will discuss with virtue- then
I'm not talking about the SR, if it's only that, I can take the consideration of the gap, however, you are going from single stream in present's diff, to make it full dense jumpstream, and then going to jumptrill that also alternate to 14-23 jumptrill like https://puu.sh/vRN3V/05843bae22.png , which is really worrying because the level of concentration and skill to pulled the pattern off is considerably huge for both side. (the jumpstream pattern itself isn't linear, but rather tortuous , which is what makes up the diff.)

and for http://puu.sh/vRNgJ/19300d6c0f.jpg , while you may argue that the jumptrill LN is only simple jumptrill pattern, It is still different with ordinary jumptrill whatsoever, messed up hitting the pattern is as easy as fall from a single narrow rope especially when you combined it with stream and LN at 01:56:994 - , it messing up the hand's control of the pattern for the player of the mentioned diff, moreover for player that can play Hard diff well, but not this.

also at 01:45:318 - , it's literally single stream to handstream at 185 bpm. handstream is famous for being tricky even for top player (even people say jumptrill > handstream for the level of diff.)
the burst at 01:51:237 - you mentioned is probably what will throw people try to catch the gap of difficulties lol, if its burst in isolated area, it's okay, but it's in the middle of jumpstream which makes thing a chaos.

As i said before, from the beginning you should know that making one more diff is preferred because of how the song works, it's actually not that hard to fill the gaps in-between, If you wanna keep the 5 diff as it is, nerfing the I diff is much more prefered. saying that "it is because how the music sounds" isn't gonna work, if you aim for rank you should know from the start how to spread each of the difficulties well.

if you really want to have the gap as it is now, you should convince me how the pattern works in your diff can actually be played reasonably for the H player that can play H well, but can catch to I diff and isn't that far out of reach for them. Because i'm really not convinced by your explanation right now.
Arzenvald
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DoNotMess wrote:

Maxus wrote:

Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
  1. none
Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[Arzenvald's Apocalypse]
  1. 01:45:723 (105723|3,105886|2) - I do think you can switch column here, so the jack will be at col 1-2-3-4 (if combined with 01:45:318 (105318|0,105399|0,105561|1,105642|1) - ) will gives smooth transition considering that the pattern diff already rough to begin with. (maybe seem small, but this makes quite huge impact) // i ain't sure whether https://puu.sh/vRQpp/8da17305ae.png this being Harder yet smoother, or just way harder to read & play.. the reason why i made 1 2 4 3 is because somehow its more sightreadable and more hand-balanced even with my relatively lower playing skill, yet still had more combo with it compared with your suggestion, need your thought with this, i made it more of 2 - 1 - 4 - 3 - 1 - 2 - 4 - 3 and its sightly easier to play through when i testplay

    :Thumbs up: , really solid diff, i'm kinda worried about some pattern, but i think it can still be acceptable, enjoying play this diff numerous times already // holy flying furball
Call me back if you're done, The thing that i really wanna get addressed is the spread issues of H and I icon diff first.
the rest is applied, while the one i replied is kind of, moving some notes accordingly to avoid awkward anchor like the screenie i put

thankies <3 i got some suggestion from Chrubble as well, some weird jacks, anchors & trills were sightly more balanced

Maxus wrote:

if you really want to have the gap as it is now, you should convince me how the pattern works in your diff can actually be played reasonably for the H player that can play H well, but can catch to I diff and isn't that far out of reach for them. Because i'm really not convinced by your explanation right now.
as for the Gap between H to I being big, take a look at I to X too, to be fair they are also evenly as big as from H to I or even bigger if you counts that glorious jacks in the end XD

in this case, a 2:40 sec song could have a sightly bigger gap like E - N -- H ---- I ------- X (just like in my Blue Dragon) to make a linear + ascending spread such in those other popular rhythm game outside osu!, instead of being simple linear one
i personally think to reduce the I diff just making the spread between I & X even more bigger than the current one.. '_J'

thought?
Maxus
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as for the Gap between H to I being big, take a look at I to X too, to be fair they are also evenly as big as from H to I or even bigger if you counts that glorious jacks in the end XD

in this case, a 2:40 sec song could have a sightly bigger gap like E - N -- H ---- I ------- X (just like in my Blue Dragon) to make a linear + ascending spread such in those other popular rhythm game outside osu!, instead of being simple linear one
i personally think to reduce the I diff just making the spread between I & X even more bigger than the current one.. '_J'

thought?
I also aware of the patterning of X icon which is harsh (well, i do play it afterall) , however, from what i see, Player that have capabilities to play I diff well, can also play apocalypse decently even with all the glorious anchor pattern that makes onion in my eyes (I am kinda the proof of that).. while i don't really see the same for H player to I diff.

Why is that? because imo, player that have skill range of I icon (maybe 98% the diff?) already mastering how to play the game quite decently (you can say, already involved in the game deeper) that they can afford to play and having much complex patterning within the density that's not so far different (albeit the anchor). While in H diff case, the density and the patterning are rising up more looking at not only density, but complexity of pattern involved., considering it's H player that still not have deep and involved in the game long enough to have more diverse and tolerance of certain pattern to begin with, it will be much harder for the specified range of said players.

I do think this is also the reason why some people make the gap of lower diff much closer, but can afford to make huge gap in higher diff like from I icon to X icon.. idk, i just want to make sure that it's fine tbh, I don't really ask to make the spread really balance, but i do hope at least it's still within the range of reasonable.
Arzenvald
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btw i was helping DnM to reduce some stuff in I earlier while making sure the I-X gap still friendly
either way in my opinion the range between H - I - X should be fine, either both keeping the current one or making sightly closer from H to I, its up to BN discretion though 'w'
Maxus
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In the past many map get dq over the gap issues (well you know which map) so i need to make sure it's alright.

But sure, thanks for helping out :3 , Sorry if i'm being a bit too skeptical over the issues.
DoNotMess
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added NEW future diff (im sorry the map overall seems forced but thats all of my idea atm)
moved the OLD future diff into Apocalypse
changed Arzenvald's Apocalypse to Arzenvald's Sheriruth
well time mod again X)

NOW the problem is, i think X diff should be buffed to be 5,5* at least :D and slight nerf to the H diff to compensate with the N diff.
Sandalphon
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:thinking:
Arzenvald
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kampret sia

[Future]
compare both Apocalypse & Future pls, don't make easier diff with slightly heavier & denser pattern >:C

00:45:804 (45804|3) - ain't this one feels harder than Apocalypse
00:46:453 (46453|1,46615|0,46615|3,46777|2,46940|0,46940|3) - fucken copas, somehow i hate literal copy pasting rn >:C
00:49:859 (49859|0,50021|1) - i'd make this in apocalypse instead
00:51:156 (51156|2,51318|3) - same
00:54:075 (54075|3) - h
01:27:804 (87804|1) - w
01:30:723 (90723|2) - P
01:38:183 (98183|1) - 9

02:18:237 (138237|1) - LN won't hurt, variation

[Apocalypse]
02:37:210 (157210|3) - i'd buff this one tbh
DoNotMess
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Arzenvald wrote:

kampret sia

[Future]
compare both Apocalypse & Future pls, don't make easier diff with slightly heavier & denser pattern >:C
astaga ampun
00:45:804 (45804|3) - ain't this one feels harder than Apocalypse hmm emng feature nya di diff gw bedain..
00:46:453 (46453|1,46615|0,46615|3,46777|2,46940|0,46940|3) - fucken copas, somehow i hate literal copy pasting rn >:C sbenarnya kgk copas T_T gw ngemap kgk pake reference itu, cuman pop dri kepala dngerin musiknya T_T
00:49:859 (49859|0,50021|1) - i'd make this in apocalypse instead ok
00:51:156 (51156|2,51318|3) - same udh pas patternnya T_T
00:54:075 (54075|3) - h apa sih
01:27:804 (87804|1) - w gajelas
01:30:723 (90723|2) - P banget
01:38:183 (98183|1) - 9 deh

02:18:237 (138237|1) - LN won't hurt, variation keep dlu until further mod

[Apocalypse]
02:37:210 (157210|3) - i'd buff this one tbh I don't see the reason.. quite fit, also comfy to play and this is variation of 01:45:318 - this part
Arzenvald
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gw lupa, lu coba edit Future, sambil open Apocalypse diff as Reference
DoNotMess
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Arzenvald wrote:

gw lupa, lu coba edit Future, sambil open Apocalypse diff as Reference
gw mnta mod lg deh dri beberapa orng
gw tw agak mirip.. soalnya ya emng style mapping gw ya gtu :/ tpi gw wktu ngemap emng gk pake reference.. gw coba bedain lg deh
Virtue-
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DoNotMess wrote:

Maxus wrote:

Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
  1. none
Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[V's Present]
  1. 00:25:372 (25372|0,25696|1,26021|2) - I'm a bit curious why the LN is in the exact same column as 00:24:075 (24075|0,24399|1,24723|2) - despite those 2 piano having distinct pitch differences. i suggest something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093271 to differentiate both.
  2. 00:33:886 (33886|0) - don't think this need to be mapped, it's kinda ambiguous if you compared this with other diff.
  3. 00:40:453 (40453|1,40615|2) - Switch column would be better to mirror 00:41:426 -
  4. 00:50:507 (50507|3) - Don't know why this LN started here, it should be started at 00:50:345 - , same problem with future diff.
  5. 00:56:994 - the pattern somehow becoming obnoxious to hit here.. I figure you can try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093330 instead to solve that, the pitch of LN between 00:56:831 - until 00:57:642 - also becoming more apparent if you make them trill due to repeating piano either way.
  6. 01:01:453 (61453|2,61534|3,62102|2,62183|3) - although this is maybe the style of the diff, i can't help but realize that how the col 4 stack becoming too tricky to hit considering the jack AND LN cramping the pattern, the one solution is to make one of the LN not cramping the jack pattern, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093341
  7. 01:08:669 (68669|0,68750|1,68831|2,68913|0) - mehh.. i'm kinda sad seeing this.. if you want to put tricky 1/4 note in the middle of LN, it's usually encouraged to structure it in more linear way without too many difficult transitions, you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093356 instead.
  8. 01:11:102 (71102|3,71426|0) - It's much preffered at col 1 and col 3. jack at 01:11:426 - is too unbalanced considering how tricky the pattern and note compositions being too left handed at 01:11:588 (71588|0,71913|1,72075|1,72237|0,72399|0) -
  9. 01:29:588 - kinda awkward that this is a single LN when you use double at 01:39:967 - , talking bout inconsistency.
  10. 01:33:642 (93642|2,93804|1) - Suggest to switch column here, not sure what the shield for.
  11. 01:44:669 - I do think you need extra note here, this part is really underwhelming when the drum is really intense and building up here.
  12. 01:48:561 (108561|0,108642|2,108723|1,108804|3,108886|0,108967|2) - all these LN felt really out of place when there isn't distinct synth sound to be heard here, I do think you don't need to make full LN either, for this kind of sound, just make it into normal note is good enough to make the distinct pitch more prominent.
  13. 01:50:831 (110831|0,110913|1) - Same as above, make it into normal note.
  14. 01:55:210 (115210|1,115372|2) - Kinda don't get what are these LN for.. you can clearly see that the pitch isn't at the mentioned line.
  15. 02:27:804 (147804|2,147967|1,148291|2) - Better to Ctrl+H these, don't really get what the LN trill at 02:27:318 (147318|1,147642|0,147967|1) - for, when the other LN doesn't be made trill as well.
all the mods are applied, but some of them are re-arrange in due of unconsistency, awkward patterns, and some errors that make this diff even more cancer.

Call me back if you're done, The thing that i really wanna get addressed is the spread issues of H and I icon diff first.
thanks for the mod, maxus >w<)b updated owo
i think u need to re-check this diff again lol =w=
Arzenvald
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wao anteq anteq damaniaq gd mana
MEGAtive
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Musical Conflict apaan jing
Maxus
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Maxus
Secara personal sih "Arzenvald's Extinction" lebih cocok klo mw ikutin progression difficulty sblmny

Tapi yg skrg jg kren kok wkwk, terserah sih itu
Ryzen_old_1
Ryzen_old_1
Cuma pengirim pesan dari si Lie :D

Another Lie wrote:

Sorry, gw kena restrict sama peppy. 1 day after silenced, open osu in browser, red notification (ok fuck)
Color Text just for comment
comment & mod for Arzenvald
[comment] 01:02:507 (62507|1,62507|0,62669|1,62669|0,62831|0,62831|1,62994|1,62994|0,63156|0,63156|1,63318|1,63318|0,63480|1,63480|0,63642|1,63642|0) - GG left hand pak, continue nya -_- 01:03:804 (63804|1,63804|0,63886|3,63886|2,63967|0,63967|1,64048|3,64048|2,64129|3,64129|0,64210|2,64210|1,64291|3,64291|0,64372|2,64372|1,64453|0,64453|1,64534|3,64534|2,64615|0,64615|1,64696|2,64696|3,64777|3,64777|0,64859|2,64859|1,64940|3,64940|0,65021|2,65021|1) - (nvm that, just comment)
[mod] 01:03:075 (63075|3,63075|2,63723|2,63723|3) - i think this terlalu berlebihan, delete 1 note (suaranya ga kenceng om). Kalo suara kenceng, 01:03:642 - add triplet jg
01:09:156 (69156|3,69237|2,69399|2,69480|3) - ini perasaan aja / gw nya emang bingung? 01:09:156 (69156|3,69480|3) - same sound but different hold length?
01:35:913 - not gonna add note there? if not, 01:35:264 (95264|1,95264|3,95264|0) - why 3?
01:43:372 - should be 2 here
02:37:210 (157210|1,157210|2,157210|0,157291|0,157291|1,157372|2,157372|3,157453|3,157453|2,157534|1,157534|0,157615|0,157615|1,157696|2,157696|3,157777|2,157777|3,157859|0,157859|1,157940|1,157940|0,158021|1,158021|0,158102|1,158102|0,158183|2,158183|3,158264|3,158264|2,158345|3,158345|2,158426|3,158426|2,158507|0,158507|3,158507|1,158507|2) - oh dear god?!! such creation (aiae thing) why not make it harder since some place has loud sound? 02:37:210 - 02:37:534 - 02:37:859 - 02:38:183 - 4 notes (to make them equal & harder like 02:38:183 (158183|2,158183|3,158264|3,158264|2,158345|2,158345|3,158426|3,158426|2,158507|3,158507|2) - )
gw tunggu balesan modnya :3
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DoNotMess
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Jdi ini ksih kudosunya gmn :o :o
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Arzenvald
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bark!

DoNotMess wrote:

Jdi ini ksih kudosunya gmn :o :o
ya nda bisa D:

Ryzen wrote:

Cuma pengirim pesan dari si Lie :D

Another Lie wrote:

Sorry, gw kena restrict sama peppy. 1 day after silenced, open osu in browser, red notification (ok fuck)
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[box=comment & mod for Arzenvald][comment] 01:02:507 (62507|1,62507|0,62669|1,62669|0,62831|0,62831|1,62994|1,62994|0,63156|0,63156|1,63318|1,63318|0,63480|1,63480|0,63642|1,63642|0) - GG left hand pak, continue nya -_- 01:03:804 (63804|1,63804|0,63886|3,63886|2,63967|0,63967|1,64048|3,64048|2,64129|3,64129|0,64210|2,64210|1,64291|3,64291|0,64372|2,64372|1,64453|0,64453|1,64534|3,64534|2,64615|0,64615|1,64696|2,64696|3,64777|3,64777|0,64859|2,64859|1,64940|3,64940|0,65021|2,65021|1) - (nvm that, just comment)


[mod] 01:03:075 (63075|3,63075|2,63723|2,63723|3) - i think this terlalu berlebihan, delete 1 note (suaranya ga kenceng om). Kalo suara kenceng, 01:03:642 - add triplet jg//ok

01:09:156 (69156|3,69237|2,69399|2,69480|3) - ini perasaan aja / gw nya emang bingung? 01:09:156 (69156|3,69480|3) - same sound but different hold length? // myO2 ln that's why

01:35:913 - not gonna add note there? if not, 01:35:264 (95264|1,95264|3,95264|0) - why 3? // downbeat = stronger

01:43:372 - should be 2 here // bukan piano, ngemep perkusi & kick mulu jelek, konsep mapping gw anti mainstream :P

02:37:210 (157210|1,157210|2,157210|0,157291|0,157291|1,157372|2,157372|3,157453|3,157453|2,157534|1,157534|0,157615|0,157615|1,157696|2,157696|3,157777|2,157777|3,157859|0,157859|1,157940|1,157940|0,158021|1,158021|0,158102|1,158102|0,158183|2,158183|3,158264|3,158264|2,158345|3,158345|2,158426|3,158426|2,158507|0,158507|3,158507|1,158507|2) - oh dear god?!! such creation (aiae thing) why not make it harder since some place has loud sound? 02:37:210 - 02:37:534 - 02:37:859 - 02:38:183 - 4 notes (to make them equal & harder like 02:38:183 (158183|2,158183|3,158264|3,158264|2,158345|2,158345|3,158426|3,158426|2,158507|3,158507|2) - ) // make it easier instead, somebody you know is watching your every move :V
gw tunggu balesan modnya :3

Maxus wrote:

Secara personal sih "Arzenvald's Extinction" lebih cocok klo mw ikutin progression difficulty sblmny

Tapi yg skrg jg kren kok wkwk, terserah sih itu
ok, biar gk di nuke karena diff Insane pakai custom diff juga


update : https://puu.sh/vZQRC/9f30d5a655.zip
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