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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Beatmap Nominator

Joined April 2016

Hi, my name is Jeff
Let's start
0|1|2|3

00:33:925 (33925|3) - Make this LN end in 00:34:249
00:41:222 (41222|3) - Add a note here cause this part is strongly stressed by the song
00:44:222 (44222|2) - Add a note here because the sound hasn't changed from there
00:44:303 (44303|2) - 2 notes here are enough. Remove this
00:53:303 (53303|0) - You missed a note here
01:09:276 (69276|3,69357|2,69438|1,69519|0) - Recommend changing these to LNs
01:21:600 (81600|1) - Remove this note because the sound here is not that stressed to be a triple
01:43:330 (103330|0) - Add a note here because this part background (bg) sound is stressed
02:19:006 (139006|0) - Remove this note
02:22:087 (142087|2) - Remove this LN because this part is softer than other part
02:22:411 (142411|3) - ^
02:27:276 (147276|2,147600|3) - ^

V's present

00:05:384 (5384|1) - Add a note here
00:24:844 (24844|0) - Remove this note because this part is softer than others
00:27:438 (27438|3) - ^
00:30:033 (30033|2) - ^
I won't mention that prob again ^
00:48:519 (48519|2) - Change this to LN cause there is still piano in the bg
00:53:303 (53303|1) - Add a note here cause piano in the bg
01:00:033 (60033|2) - This slider should be started at 00:59:871
01:07:168 (67168|3) - Miss a note here
01:08:384 (68384|0) - Ghost note
01:17:546 (77546|0) - Miss a note
01:26:141 (86141|3) - This slider should be ended in 01:26:303
01:27:762 (87762|3,87925|2,88087|1) - Make these LNs 1/2 long
The rest is OK or having the same problem as i mentioned before

Hope this help and GL

Last edited by AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 8 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

[B A D] wrote:
Hi, my name is Jeff
Let's start
0|1|2|3
Future
00:33:925 (33925|3) - Make this LN end in 00:34:249 i set it 1/2 only so it's consistent
00:41:222 (41222|3) - Add a note here cause this part is strongly stressed by the song mapped crash as 2 notes as the intro also this is not the hardest diff
00:44:222 (44222|2) - Add a note here because the sound hasn't changed from there i avoid mini jacks :')
00:44:303 (44303|2) - 2 notes here are enough. Remove this crash sound is 3 or 4 for the entire map except burst and streams and intro
00:53:303 (53303|0) - You missed a note here no more space.....
01:09:276 (69276|3,69357|2,69438|1,69519|0) - Recommend changing these to LNs it's 1/4 ln before but i think it looks weird and pretty hard to time and i want to keep the inverse feeling
01:21:600 (81600|1) - Remove this note because the sound here is not that stressed to be a triple 01:20:952 (80952|1,81600|1,82249|1,82898|1) - all claps are 3 notes
01:43:330 (103330|0) - Add a note here because this part background (bg) sound is stressed 01:41:384 - starting from this part, all doubles are actually for piano
02:19:006 (139006|0) - Remove this note I intentionally making it denser than the intro because this is 4,7*
02:22:087 (142087|2) - Remove this LN because this part is softer than other part ^
02:22:411 (142411|3) - ^ ^
02:27:276 (147276|2,147600|3) - ^
V's present
00:05:384 (5384|1) - Add a note here
00:24:844 (24844|0) - Remove this note because this part is softer than others
00:27:438 (27438|3) - ^
00:30:033 (30033|2) - ^
I won't mention that prob again ^
00:48:519 (48519|2) - Change this to LN cause there is still piano in the bg
00:53:303 (53303|1) - Add a note here cause piano in the bg
01:00:033 (60033|2) - This slider should be started at 00:59:871
01:07:168 (67168|3) - Miss a note here
01:08:384 (68384|0) - Ghost note
01:17:546 (77546|0) - Miss a note
01:26:141 (86141|3) - This slider should be ended in 01:26:303
01:27:762 (87762|3,87925|2,88087|1) - Make these LNs 1/2 long
The rest is OK
Hope this help and GL

thanks for mod!!!

Ginshu

1,052 posts

Joined May 2014

Ginshu 8 years ago

M4M

Column : 1|2|3|4

[V's Presnet]
00:22:573 - ~ - 00:23:546 - suggest pattern, cocok buat piano nya

click

00:58:898 (58898|3,58898|0,59060|1,59222|2,59222|3) - ctrl+H sama nada dengan sebelumnya
01:03:762 - ~ 01:05:060 - suggest pattern, cocok sama pianyo nya

click

01:11:871 (71871|3) - ganti ke normal note
01:26:141 (86141|3) - end LN here 01:26:303 -
01:48:519 (108519|0,108600|2,108681|1,108762|3,108844|0,108925|2) - ganti ke normal note aja, biarin bisa bedain nada pianonya

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Virtue-

1,112 posts

Joined March 2015

Virtue- 8 years ago

[B A D] wrote:
Hi, my name is Jeff hi, my name is virtue
Let's start let's gooo >w<
0|1|2|3
V's present
00:05:384 (5384|1) - Add a note here why? it's the same like the other, except the crash here 00:07:979 (7979|1,7979|0,7979|2) -
00:24:844 (24844|0) - Remove this note because this part is softer than others heh?
00:27:438 (27438|3) - ^ heh?
00:30:033 (30033|2) - ^ heh?
I won't mention that prob again ^ heh?
00:48:519 (48519|2) - Change this to LN cause there is still piano in the bg don't hear any piano here
00:53:303 (53303|1) - Add a note here cause piano in the bg nope
01:00:033 (60033|2) - This slider should be started at 00:59:871 whoops, mistake here
01:07:168 (67168|3) - Miss a note here there's a LN here
01:08:384 (68384|0) - Ghost note hear it with 25% pls
01:17:546 (77546|0) - Miss a note there's a LN here
01:26:141 (86141|3) - This slider should be ended in 01:26:303 it's a modification
01:27:762 (87762|3,87925|2,88087|1) - Make these LNs 1/2 long it's a modification
The rest is OK or having the same problem as i mentioned before
Hope this help and GL

LNP- wrote:
M4M w lupa mod map mu, gomen mamah (

Column : 1|2|3|4

[V's Presnet]
00:22:573 - ~ - 00:23:546 - suggest pattern, cocok buat piano nya well, no problem with the pattern. mungkin akan w pikir" lagi
click

00:58:898 (58898|3,58898|0,59060|1,59222|2,59222|3) - ctrl+H sama nada dengan sebelumnya sure, flip this and re-arrange some of them
01:03:762 - ~ 01:05:060 - suggest pattern, cocok sama pianyo nya ummm..... w pikir" dlu :'v
click

01:11:871 (71871|3) - ganti ke normal note gamauuu >w< but wait.... mungkin ini bagus
01:26:141 (86141|3) - end LN here 01:26:303 - sama seperti alasan sebelumny, ini modifikasi.... tapi w akan mencoba utk mengganti setelah bnyk yg negur :'v
01:48:519 (108519|0,108600|2,108681|1,108762|3,108844|0,108925|2) - ganti ke normal note aja, biarin bisa bedain nada pianonya tidakkkkkk maaauuuuuuuuuuuuu

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thanks for the mod jeff and LNP >w<)b

UPDATE

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

UPDATEEEDDDD OWO

Sandalphon

1,470 posts

Joined May 2013

Sandalphon 8 years ago

Marked

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

YaHao wrote:
Marked

marked as nuke?

Another Lie

Another Lie 8 years ago

Shiet

Ok start mod. Oh ternyata lu toh ExUsagi = ajeepahit -_-

Usagi's Apocalypse

00:51:600 (51600|1,51600|0,51681|2,51762|0,51762|3,51844|1,51925|3,51925|2,52006|1,52087|3,52087|0,52168|1,52249|2,52330|3,52492|0) - coba ctrl + h, saia ngikut pitch disana [dan agak ke arah better gameplay :3]
00:53:060 - add 1 note lg? konsistensi
02:37:168 (157168|0,157168|3,157168|1,157249|0,157249|1,157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|2,157573|3,157654|2,157654|3,157735|2,157735|3,157817|0,157817|1,157898|0,157898|1,157979|0,157979|1,158060|0,158060|1,158141|3,158141|2,158222|2,158222|3,158303|2,158303|3,158384|3,158384|2) - truly cancer. Beethoven be like. Coba di split jadi 2 2, gini https://puu.sh/v84Y5.png

Future

01:38:627 (98627|2,98627|0,98789|2) - Coba pindah tempat, LN di 3 & notenya di col 1, dan ini 01:39:114 (99114|1) - col 4 [for better gameplay & reverse consistency note diatas]
02:06:762 (126762|3,126925|3,127087|3,127249|3) - del? gw ga paham sama itu, cuma fokus main sound nya.

Mungkin itu aja mod singkat, tapi dalemnya padat :v

Damaree

632 posts

Joined May 2015

Damaree 8 years ago

Hii hii. . M4M request

I'll mod 4 diffs since the last 2 can only see some & mostly suggestions. . .
If I do suggest the mov & ctrl thing, that mostly for the balance purposes & alternation(avoiding repeat pattern)

Past

00:04:735 (4735|0) - mov col2 for alternation you ur pattern here 00:02:790 (2790|0,2790|1,3276|2,3276|0,3762|1,3762|3) -
00:09:925 (9925|3,9925|0,10249|3,10249|1,10573|2,10573|3) - ctrl + h, you already did this here 00:07:330 (7330|3,7330|0,7654|3,7654|1,7979|2,7979|3) -
00:31:168 (31168|1) - mov col4
01:17:384 (77384|3) - mov col2, mov col4 & 01:17:871 (77871|1) - col3
01:26:303 - 01:31:492 - 01:43:168 - remove 1 note, just only bell sound (up to u if will apply this, since most of same sound like this are double)
^ and this 01:43:168 (103168|3,103168|2) - and 01:43:492 (103492|1,103492|0) - are not same sound
02:07:979 (127979|2) - mov col1?
02:12:519 - maybe do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734754
02:19:492 - maybe this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734760 for alternation of this 02:20:789 (140789|0,140789|3,141114|0,141114|2,141438|1,141438|0) -

Future

00:11:871 (11871|2) - mov col1, 00:12:195 (12195|0) - col3 & 00:12:357 (12357|1) - col1
01:06:600 (66600|0,67249|3,67898|2) - not sure about the LN, but isnt the note should be at the white lines 01:06:681 - 01:07:330 - 01:07:979 - ? since the crash sound comes from there (here's the difference https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734851 *left the Future diff, * right the Apcalypse diff)
01:08:303 - add note maybe double
01:13:087 (73087|0) - same asnt the 2nd
01:23:222 - look at this part, 01:23:546 (83546|0,83708|0,83871|0,84033|0) - for the left hand & 01:23:222 (83222|3,83384|3,83546|3,83871|3,84033|3,84195|3) - for the right, consider to rearrange for balance
That's all I can see

Apocalypse

01:14:789 (74789|1,74789|0,74789|2,74952|0,74952|1,75033|2,75114|1,75114|0,75276|2,75276|1,75276|0) - maybe just move this 1step to right since would be too much hard coz of 01:14:141 (74141|0,74384|0,74627|0,74789|0,74952|0,75114|0,75276|0) -
01:26:789 (86789|1,87114|0) - maybe ctrl + h
01:31:654 - double?
02:23:222 - 02:28:411 - col1 feels empty here, consider rearrange some notes
Especially this, sorry

Beginning

00:05:384 (5384|3) - mov col3 & 00:05:871 (5871|0,6357|1,6844|2,7330|1,7654|0) - ctrl + h
00:10:573 - col4 here soo empty, consider rearrange some
00:13:168 - also the col1
00:42:033 (42033|1) - remove, since you only follow bell sound here, and not even a bell
00:49:979 (49979|1) - remove? not bell-sound
01:48:844 (108844|3) - ^
02:36:195 (156195|1) - remove

Well that's all I can see, hope it helps. . . my map is in your queue.

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

Another Lie wrote:
Shiet
Ok start mod. Oh ternyata lu toh ExUsagi = ajeepahit -_-
Usagi's Apocalypse
00:51:600 (51600|1,51600|0,51681|2,51762|0,51762|3,51844|1,51925|3,51925|2,52006|1,52087|3,52087|0,52168|1,52249|2,52330|3,52492|0) - coba ctrl + h, saia ngikut pitch disana [dan agak ke arah better gameplay :3]
00:53:060 - add 1 note lg? konsistensi
02:37:168 (157168|0,157168|3,157168|1,157249|0,157249|1,157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|2,157573|3,157654|2,157654|3,157735|2,157735|3,157817|0,157817|1,157898|0,157898|1,157979|0,157979|1,158060|0,158060|1,158141|3,158141|2,158222|2,158222|3,158303|2,158303|3,158384|3,158384|2) - truly cancer. Beethoven be like. Coba di split jadi 2 2, gini https://puu.sh/v84Y5.png
Future
01:38:627 (98627|2,98627|0,98789|2) - Coba pindah tempat, LN di 3 & notenya di col 1, dan ini 01:39:114 (99114|1) - col 4 [for better gameplay & reverse consistency note diatas] 1st. itu buat ascending piano...jdi tiap kolom beda, 2nd. knp hrus 4 jdi better gameplay...udh balance menurut gw
02:06:762 (126762|3,126925|3,127087|3,127249|3) - del? gw ga paham sama itu, cuma fokus main sound nya.1st. ini 4,7* bukan chant du cygne yg cuman 4,4* jdi spike dkit itu mnurut gw gk masalah. 2nd. suara kick yang bgitu jelas
Mungkin itu aja mod singkat, tapi dalemnya padat :v

makasih udh mod :'))) gotta mod urs soon 2 diffs

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

JooF12 wrote:
Hii hii. . M4M request

I'll mod 4 diffs since the last 2 can only see some & mostly suggestions. . .
If I do suggest the mov & ctrl thing, that mostly for the balance purposes & alternation(avoiding repeat pattern)

Past
00:04:735 (4735|0) - mov col2 for alternation you ur pattern here 00:02:790 (2790|0,2790|1,3276|2,3276|0,3762|1,3762|3) - ok
00:09:925 (9925|3,9925|0,10249|3,10249|1,10573|2,10573|3) - ctrl + h, you already did this here 00:07:330 ok(7330|3,7330|0,7654|3,7654|1,7979|2,7979|3) -
00:31:168 (31168|1) - mov col4 keep for pitch
01:17:384 (77384|3) - mov col2, mov col4 & 01:17:871 (77871|1) - col3 keep for stair effect, to differentiate from the one before
01:26:303 - 01:31:492 - 01:43:168 - remove 1 note, just only bell sound (up to u if will apply this, since most of same sound like this are double) iidx style, every melody = 2 notes
^ and this 01:43:168 (103168|3,103168|2) - and 01:43:492 (103492|1,103492|0) - are not same sound ?
02:07:979 (127979|2) - mov col1? re-arranged
02:12:519 - maybe do something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734754 re-arranged, thanks for suggestion
02:19:492 - maybe this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734760 for alternation of this 02:20:789 (140789|0,140789|3,141114|0,141114|2,141438|1,141438|0) - ok!

Future
00:11:871 (11871|2) - mov col1, 00:12:195 (12195|0) - col3 & 00:12:357 (12357|1) - col1 re-arranged
01:06:600 (66600|0,67249|3,67898|2) - not sure about the LN, but isnt the note should be at the white lines 01:06:681 - 01:07:330 - 01:07:979 - ? since the crash sound comes from there (here's the difference https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7734851 *left the Future diff, * right the Apcalypse diff) i use 2 notes for the melody, and skip all the kick claps and crash in this section for playability
01:08:303 - add note maybe double i will reconsider that after further mod
01:13:087 (73087|0) - same asnt the 2nd ^^
01:23:222 - look at this part, 01:23:546 (83546|0,83708|0,83871|0,84033|0) - for the left hand & 01:23:222 (83222|3,83384|3,83546|3,83871|3,84033|3,84195|3) - for the right, consider to rearrange for balance ok!
That's all I can see

Apocalypse
01:14:789 (74789|1,74789|0,74789|2,74952|0,74952|1,75033|2,75114|1,75114|0,75276|2,75276|1,75276|0) - maybe just move this 1step to right since would be too much hard coz of 01:14:141 (74141|0,74384|0,74627|0,74789|0,74952|0,75114|0,75276|0) -
01:26:789 (86789|1,87114|0) - maybe ctrl + h
01:31:654 - double?
02:23:222 - 02:28:411 - col1 feels empty here, consider rearrange some notes
Especially this, sorry

Beginning
00:05:384 (5384|3) - mov col3 & 00:05:871 (5871|0,6357|1,6844|2,7330|1,7654|0) - ctrl + h
00:10:573 - col4 here soo empty, consider rearrange some
00:13:168 - also the col1
00:42:033 (42033|1) - remove, since you only follow bell sound here, and not even a bell
00:49:979 (49979|1) - remove? not bell-sound
01:48:844 (108844|3) - ^
02:36:195 (156195|1) - remove

Well that's all I can see, hope it helps. . . my map is in your queue.

really helpful mod! thanks!!! will mod ur maps in 3-4 days

zero2snow

69 posts

Joined January 2016

zero2snow 8 years ago

Hihi, some random (newbie) mod here

, just came by because of the song, and arcaea.

column 0|1|2|3

future

00:23:546 (23546|0,23546|3) - change the LN to normal note? because there's no piano sound
00:49:979 - missed a piano note (LN) here,maybe some rearrangement like this? --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740740
01:05:546 - I think the LN (melody) should be started from this time, so maybe change the two following notes to LN?or sth like this?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740770
01:15:925 - ^same as above. maybe sth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740789
01:25:168 (85168|3) - missed a hitsound?
01:32:303 to 01:33:600 - I think the SVs should be similar to the SVs in 01:18:033 to 01:19:168, but more sudden? maybe sth like this?https://puu.sh/v9wNI/afabffd5b2.PNG
01:39:925 - I find a bit weird that both LNs ended while the long note of that sound still goes on, maybe some rearrangement like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740918
02:19:817 to 02:20:303 - probably rearrange this to make the pattern not too repetitive during these 8 measure. maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741074
02:24:681 to 02:25:492 - ^same as above
02:29:871 to 02:30:681 - again, making the pattern more diverse, maybe some rearrangement like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741097
02:31:006 (151006|3) - move to 2

hope these mod might help you

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

zero2snow wrote:
Hihi, some random (newbie) mod here , just came by because of the song, and arcaea.

column 0|1|2|3

future
00:23:546 (23546|0,23546|3) - change the LN to normal note? because there's no piano sound there is
00:49:979 - missed a piano note (LN) here,maybe some rearrangement like this? --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740740 00:49:817 (49817|0,49979|1) - these 2 are for the piano but i dont map as ln because too low
01:05:546 - I think the LN (melody) should be started from this time, so maybe change the two following notes to LN?or sth like this?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740770 01:05:708 - i want to emphasize it from here, but i will wait for further mod
01:15:925 - ^same as above. maybe sth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740789
01:25:168 (85168|3) - missed a hitsound? there is no kick here
01:32:303 to 01:33:600 - I think the SVs should be similar to the SVs in 01:18:033 to 01:19:168, but more sudden? maybe sth like this?https://puu.sh/v9wNI/afabffd5b2.PNG i think this one suit this section really well, no one missed when testing my map and it looks really nice already, i keep
01:39:925 - I find a bit weird that both LNs ended while the long note of that sound still goes on, maybe some rearrangement like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7740918 all of the instrument melody starting from 01:25:817 - noted as 1 beat / 1/2 beat only...so...yea, will wait for further mod
02:19:817 to 02:20:303 - probably rearrange this to make the pattern not too repetitive during these 8 measure. maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741074 i tend to map with pitch and with iidx style, so a bit repetitive but i still keep it..maybe i will rearrange with further mod
02:24:681 to 02:25:492 - ^same as above
02:29:871 to 02:30:681 - again, making the pattern more diverse, maybe some rearrangement like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7741097 this one is already diverse from the first one
02:31:006 (151006|3) - move to 2 02:31:330 (151330|0,151330|2) - this one is already here...it's awkward it becomes trill

hope these mod might help you

thank you, most of ur mod will be held until further mod...i will take it for consideration

Shima Rin

1,304 posts

Joined March 2015

Shima Rin 8 years ago

Beginning
00:05:384 (5384|3) - mov col3 & 00:05:871 (5871|0,6357|1,6844|2,7330|1,7654|0) - ctrl + h ok
00:10:573 - col4 here soo empty, consider rearrange some ok
00:13:168 - also the col1 ok
00:42:033 (42033|1) - remove, since you only follow bell sound here, and not even a bell i follow drum sound here so keep
00:49:979 (49979|1) - remove? not bell-sound there do exist one
01:48:844 (108844|3) - ^ also exist
02:36:195 (156195|1) - remove like what i mentioned i catch drum

Well that's all I can see, hope it helps. . . my map is in your queue.

Thanks for mod and

here is the changed file:

Tofu's Beginning

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63762
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Sheriruth
TitleUnicode:Sheriruth
Artist:Team Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Team Grimoire
Creator:DoNotMess
Version:Tofu's Beginning
Source:Arcaea
Tags:Grimoire of Darkness Ajeemaniz ExUsagi Virtue- Tofu1222
BeatmapID:1255678
BeatmapSetID:590341

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Lmao Serirut lagi.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
Sample,66681,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,67330,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,67979,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,68303,0,"soft-hitwhistle.wav",35
Sample,73168,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,77060,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35
Sample,77708,0,"soft-hitclap.wav",35

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192,192,128303,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,128627,128,2,129276:0:0:0:0:
192,192,129276,128,2,129925:0:0:0:0:
320,192,129600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,129925,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130249,1,10,0:0:0:0:
448,192,130573,1,10,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130735,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,192,131060,128,6,131871:0:0:0:0:
192,192,131871,128,2,132519:0:0:0:0:
448,192,132519,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,132844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,133168,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,133492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,133817,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,192,134141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,134465,128,2,134789:0:0:0:0:
64,192,134789,128,8,135114:0:0:0:0:
448,192,135114,1,6,0:0:0:0:
64,192,135438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,135762,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,192,136087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,136411,1,6,0:0:0:0:
64,192,136735,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,137060,128,6,137708:0:0:0:0:
192,192,137384,1,6,0:0:0:0:
64,192,137708,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,138195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,138519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,138844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,139492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,139817,1,12,0:0:0:0:
192,192,139817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,140141,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,140303,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,140303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,140789,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,141114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,141438,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142087,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,142411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,142898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,142898,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143384,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,143708,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,144033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,144681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145006,1,12,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,145330,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,145492,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,146303,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,146627,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147276,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,147600,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,148087,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,148087,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,148573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,148898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,149222,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,149871,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150195,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,150195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,150519,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150681,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,150681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,151168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,151492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,151817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,152465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,152789,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153114,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,153276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,153276,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,153762,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,154087,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,154411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,155384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155708,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155871,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,155871,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,156195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,156519,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,156844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,157168,128,6,158465:0:0:0:0:
320,192,157492,1,6,0:0:0:0:
192,192,157817,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,158141,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,158465,1,6,0:0:0:0:

Arzenvald

4,062 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 8 years ago

gk jadi bikin sb, lagi seret duid, fokus kerja dulu w

Sandalphon

1,470 posts

Joined May 2013

Sandalphon 8 years ago

~~Marked as nuke~~

Widescreen support
TAGs conflict with some diff
Mp3 quality higher than 192kbps

[Past]
00:15:925 (15925|1,16087|2) - 00:18:519 (18519|2,18681|1) - Suggest delete these notes, to emphasize the finish sound 00:18:357 - and 00:15:762 - , plus spam 1/2 to this whole section might be a little boring
00:44:303 - I'm confused with the patterns start from here, it seems like you ignore some of the snare drum and then somehow you add them back in the later part. Suggest you fully focus on the piano and the snare drum by using single notes (single note is enough here). And only use double at 00:57:276 - 00:58:573 - 00:59:871 - for the finish piano, you can also show the increased intensity by adding double. (if you dont get what i'm saying, there is a example img)
01:06:357 - 1/4 gap between the LNs can be very hard for normal player, using normal note will be a better idea
01:55:654 (115654|1,115654|0) - Try to CTRL + H this, try to separate the jack to different col with the previous one 01:54:844 (114844|0,115006|0) -

One mod for usagi's diff: 00:04:735 - The pattern here doesnt really fit the pitch, While you can hear the pitch change at 00:05:060 - and 00:05:384 - , using jacks couldnt really show that change, by what i mean, move 00:05:060 (5060|2,5384|1) - 1 col to the right to separate the jacks (kinda like i did in my Todestrieb

Good luck

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

YaHao wrote:
~~Marked as nuke~~

Widescreen support
TAGs conflict with some diff
Mp3 quality higher than 192kbps

[Past]
00:15:925 (15925|1,16087|2) - 00:18:519 (18519|2,18681|1) - Suggest delete these notes, to emphasize the finish sound 00:18:357 - and 00:15:762 - , plus spam 1/2 to this whole section might be a little boring considering, because i want to emphasize the kick ...
00:44:303 - I'm confused with the patterns start from here, it seems like you ignore some of the snare drum and then somehow you add them back in the later part. Suggest you fully focus on the piano and the snare drum by using single notes (single note is enough here). And only use double at 00:57:276 - 00:58:573 - 00:59:871 - for the finish piano, you can also show the increased intensity by adding double. (if you dont get what i'm saying, there is a example img) aye captain..
01:06:357 - 1/4 gap between the LNs can be very hard for normal player, using normal note will be a better idea ok
01:55:654 (115654|1,115654|0) - Try to CTRL + H this, try to separate the jack to different col with the previous one 01:54:844 (114844|0,115006|0) -

One mod for usagi's diff: 00:04:735 - The pattern here doesnt really fit the pitch, While you can hear the pitch change at 00:05:060 - and 00:05:384 - , using jacks couldnt really show that change, by what i mean, move 00:05:060 (5060|2,5384|1) - 1 col to the right to separate the jacks (kinda like i did in my Todestrieb

Good luck

lol my map is 0/10

Arzenvald

4,062 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 8 years ago

YaHao wrote:
~~Marked as nuke~~

ｉｆｅｅｌｙｏｕ

YaHao wrote:
One mod for usagi's diff: 00:04:735 - The pattern here doesnt really fit the pitch, While you can hear the pitch change at 00:05:060 - and 00:05:384 - , using jacks couldnt really show that change, by what i mean, move 00:05:060 (5060|2,5384|1) - 1 col to the right to separate the jacks (kinda like i did in my Todestrieb

applied, this is todes's remix tbh

JooF12 wrote:
Apocalypse

01:14:789 (74789|1,74789|0,74789|2,74952|0,74952|1,75033|2,75114|1,75114|0,75276|2,75276|1,75276|0) - maybe just move this 1step to right since would be too much hard coz of 01:14:141 (74141|0,74384|0,74627|0,74789|0,74952|0,75114|0,75276|0) - // the anchor are relatively easy, but did change to avoid the anchor

01:26:789 (86789|1,87114|0) - maybe ctrl + h // mm sure
01:31:654 - double? // no piano, keep
02:23:222 - 02:28:411 - col1 feels empty here, consider rearrange some notes // it was intended

Especially this, sorry // np! was helpful

Another Lie wrote:
Usagi's Apocalypse
00:51:600 (51600|1,51600|0,51681|2,51762|0,51762|3,51844|1,51925|3,51925|2,52006|1,52087|3,52087|0,52168|1,52249|2,52330|3,52492|0) - coba ctrl + h, saia ngikut pitch disana [dan agak ke arah better gameplay :3] // heu

00:53:060 - add 1 note lg? konsistensi // k
02:37:168 (157168|0,157168|3,157168|1,157249|0,157249|1,157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|2,157573|3,157654|2,157654|3,157735|2,157735|3,157817|0,157817|1,157898|0,157898|1,157979|0,157979|1,158060|0,158060|1,158141|3,158141|2,158222|2,158222|3,158303|2,158303|3,158384|3,158384|2) - truly cancer. Beethoven be like. Coba di split jadi 2 2, gini https://puu.sh/v84Y5.png // no fucking way

u noob, thanx lie

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

ajeemaniz wrote:
YaHao wrote:
~~Marked as nuke~~
ｉｆｅｅｌｙｏｕ

YaHao wrote:
One mod for usagi's diff: 00:04:735 - The pattern here doesnt really fit the pitch, While you can hear the pitch change at 00:05:060 - and 00:05:384 - , using jacks couldnt really show that change, by what i mean, move 00:05:060 (5060|2,5384|1) - 1 col to the right to separate the jacks (kinda like i did in my Todestrieb
applied, this is todes's remix tbh

JooF12 wrote:
Apocalypse

01:14:789 (74789|1,74789|0,74789|2,74952|0,74952|1,75033|2,75114|1,75114|0,75276|2,75276|1,75276|0) - maybe just move this 1step to right since would be too much hard coz of 01:14:141 (74141|0,74384|0,74627|0,74789|0,74952|0,75114|0,75276|0) - // the anchor are relatively easy, but did change to avoid the anchor

01:26:789 (86789|1,87114|0) - maybe ctrl + h // mm sure
01:31:654 - double? // no piano, keep
02:23:222 - 02:28:411 - col1 feels empty here, consider rearrange some notes // it was intended

Especially this, sorry // np! was helpful
Another Lie wrote:
Usagi's Apocalypse
00:51:600 (51600|1,51600|0,51681|2,51762|0,51762|3,51844|1,51925|3,51925|2,52006|1,52087|3,52087|0,52168|1,52249|2,52330|3,52492|0) - coba ctrl + h, saia ngikut pitch disana [dan agak ke arah better gameplay :3] // heu

00:53:060 - add 1 note lg? konsistensi // k
02:37:168 (157168|0,157168|3,157168|1,157249|0,157249|1,157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|2,157573|3,157654|2,157654|3,157735|2,157735|3,157817|0,157817|1,157898|0,157898|1,157979|0,157979|1,158060|0,158060|1,158141|3,158141|2,158222|2,158222|3,158303|2,158303|3,158384|3,158384|2) - truly cancer. Beethoven be like. Coba di split jadi 2 2, gini https://puu.sh/v84Y5.png // no fucking way
u noob, thanx lie

file???

Ibrahim

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ibrahim 8 years ago

sorry ga bisa mod, star ya!
good luck!

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

Ibrahim wrote:
sorry ga bisa mod, star ya!
good luck!

thanks XDD sorry for mistook u as BN wakwakawk

ArcherLove

1,434 posts

Joined March 2013

ArcherLove 8 years ago

2B as Arcaea BG? That's suprisingly great ..
halo~

col 1~4 ya
I will focus on playability and visualization pattern, so maybe some will seems like "unreasonable demands" bud it's just a suggestion.
image spam on the way

Tofu's Beginning

00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1,12519|2,12844|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxlm/b329bcf07d.jpg
00:25:330 (25330|2,25654|1,25654|3,25979|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxnF/a1363e7115.jpg
00:30:519 (30519|2,30844|1,30844|3,31168|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxoK/454ac54f28.jpg
00:36:033 (36033|0) - move to 4?
00:40:898 (40898|1,41222|0,41222|2,41546|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxrz/95b5cd6904.png
00:50:465 (50465|2) - volume too low? 00:50:465 (50465|2) - delete? --> if yes 00:50:627 (50627|1,50789|0) - ctrl+h --> if yes 00:51:276 (51276|2,51925|3,52087|1) - http://puu.sh/vkxuY/4b3edee22c.png (add note because melody sound is loud enough?)

01:29:546 (89546|2) - move to 2? better visual because the pattern before it (43)
01:39:925 (99925|2) - move to 1? because same position with note before while the sound is different is a bit.. awkward?
02:09:600 (129600|2,129925|3) - ctrl+J this?

Past

00:07:330 (7330|3) - either move to 3 or 2? (I think better at 2) because --> 00:06:357 (6357|3,6844|3,6844|2,7330|3,7654|3,7979|3,7979|2) - anchorrr
00:09:925 (9925|0) - move to 3? ^
00:19:817 (19817|2,19979|1,20141|0) - move 1 col to the right? same position as note before make it a bit awkward imho
01:14:627 (74627|0) - move to 4?
01:21:600 (81600|2,81925|3) - ctrl+j? --> 01:22:898 (82898|1,83222|0) - ctrl+j -->
01:59:222 (119222|1,119546|0,119871|1,120195|3,120519|2,120844|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxOr/6797ebb35b.jpg
02:02:465 (122465|1,122789|2) - ctrl+j
02:04:411 (124411|1,124735|0) - ^
02:05:708 (125708|2,126033|3) - ^
02:07:330 (127330|0,127654|2,127979|0,128303|1,128627|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxWe/3e740e4a1a.jpg
02:11:546 (131546|1,131871|3) - I think it's okay to make this (41)

V's Present

00:28:573 (28573|3) - move to 2?
00:31:006 (31006|0) - move to 3?
00:54:357 (54357|2,54519|3,54681|2,54844|0,55006|0) - how about http://puu.sh/vky4Y/9105693b1f.jpg imo pretty

good diff

Future

00:49:006 (49006|2,49168|3,49330|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkygC/09fc28c43f.jpg zz

nice LN

Rebbit diff plz

00:50:303 (50303|0,50952|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkyBr/2876ad20bb.jpg
00:54:681 (54681|2,55006|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkyCC/c16690a74e.jpg
01:09:438 (69438|3) - end it on blue tick after plz
01:26:952 (86952|2) - move to 2?

???

???
What's this? Stepmeme's re:zero pack V.999??? jk it's good

thanks for vibro based ajee.
good luck!~

If you have time, maybe you all can take a peek at my maps? 4K or 7K is okay:3 (4K preferably) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/560876
Thanks!~

Virtue-

1,112 posts

Joined March 2015

Virtue- 8 years ago

ArcherLove wrote:
2B as Arcaea BG? That's suprisingly great ..
halo~

col 1~4 ya
I will focus on playability and visualization pattern, so maybe some will seems like "unreasonable demands" bud it's just a suggestion.
image spam on the way

V's Present

00:28:573 (28573|3) - move to 2? sure, why not?
00:31:006 (31006|0) - move to 3? hey it's good, thanks :3
00:54:357 (54357|2,54519|3,54681|2,54844|0,55006|0) - how about http://puu.sh/vky4Y/9105693b1f.jpg imo pretty i think i keep my own pattern. sory

good diff

If you have time, maybe you all can take a peek at my maps? 4K or 7K is okay:3 (4K preferably) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/560876
Thanks!~

thanks for the mod
NETNOT

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

ArcherLove wrote:
2B as Arcaea BG? That's suprisingly great ..
halo~

col 1~4 ya
I will focus on playability and visualization pattern, so maybe some will seems like "unreasonable demands" bud it's just a suggestion.
image spam on the way

Tofu's Beginning

00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1,12519|2,12844|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxlm/b329bcf07d.jpg
00:25:330 (25330|2,25654|1,25654|3,25979|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxnF/a1363e7115.jpg
00:30:519 (30519|2,30844|1,30844|3,31168|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxoK/454ac54f28.jpg
00:36:033 (36033|0) - move to 4?
00:40:898 (40898|1,41222|0,41222|2,41546|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxrz/95b5cd6904.png
00:50:465 (50465|2) - volume too low? 00:50:465 (50465|2) - delete? --> if yes 00:50:627 (50627|1,50789|0) - ctrl+h --> if yes 00:51:276 (51276|2,51925|3,52087|1) - http://puu.sh/vkxuY/4b3edee22c.png (add note because melody sound is loud enough?)

01:29:546 (89546|2) - move to 2? better visual because the pattern before it (43)
01:39:925 (99925|2) - move to 1? because same position with note before while the sound is different is a bit.. awkward?
02:09:600 (129600|2,129925|3) - ctrl+J this?

Past

00:07:330 (7330|3) - either move to 3 or 2? (I think better at 2) because --> 00:06:357 (6357|3,6844|3,6844|2,7330|3,7654|3,7979|3,7979|2) - anchorrr
00:09:925 (9925|0) - move to 3? ^
00:19:817 (19817|2,19979|1,20141|0) - move 1 col to the right? same position as note before make it a bit awkward imho
01:14:627 (74627|0) - move to 4?
01:21:600 (81600|2,81925|3) - ctrl+j? --> 01:22:898 (82898|1,83222|0) - ctrl+j -->
01:59:222 (119222|1,119546|0,119871|1,120195|3,120519|2,120844|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxOr/6797ebb35b.jpg
02:02:465 (122465|1,122789|2) - ctrl+j
02:04:411 (124411|1,124735|0) - ^
02:05:708 (125708|2,126033|3) - ^
02:07:330 (127330|0,127654|2,127979|0,128303|1,128627|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxWe/3e740e4a1a.jpg
02:11:546 (131546|1,131871|3) - I think it's okay to make this (41)

V's Present

00:28:573 (28573|3) - move to 2?
00:31:006 (31006|0) - move to 3?
00:54:357 (54357|2,54519|3,54681|2,54844|0,55006|0) - how about http://puu.sh/vky4Y/9105693b1f.jpg imo pretty

good diff

Future

00:49:006 (49006|2,49168|3,49330|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkygC/09fc28c43f.jpg zz kick ama clap disini smua 2 ;w; udh enak jg visualnya itu

nice LN

Rebbit diff plz

00:50:303 (50303|0,50952|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkyBr/2876ad20bb.jpg
00:54:681 (54681|2,55006|3) - how about http://puu.sh/vkyCC/c16690a74e.jpg
01:09:438 (69438|3) - end it on blue tick after plz
01:26:952 (86952|2) - move to 2?

??? ???
What's this? Stepmeme's re:zero pack V.999??? jk it's good

thanks for vibro based ajee.
good luck!~

If you have time, maybe you all can take a peek at my maps? 4K or 7K is okay:3 (4K preferably) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/560876
Thanks!~

ASFDGKHJKL full diff mod

( thank you so much!!

Shima Rin

1,304 posts

Joined March 2015

Shima Rin 8 years ago

ArcherLove wrote:
2B as Arcaea BG? That's suprisingly great ..
halo~

col 1~4 ya
I will focus on playability and visualization pattern, so maybe some will seems like "unreasonable demands" bud it's just a suggestion.
image spam on the way

Tofu's Beginning

00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1,12519|2,12844|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxlm/b329bcf07d.jpg ok
00:25:330 (25330|2,25654|1,25654|3,25979|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxnF/a1363e7115.jpg ok
00:30:519 (30519|2,30844|1,30844|3,31168|2) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxoK/454ac54f28.jpg ok
00:36:033 (36033|0) - move to 4? ok
00:40:898 (40898|1,41222|0,41222|2,41546|1) - how about http://puu.sh/vkxrz/95b5cd6904.png ok
00:50:465 (50465|2) - volume too low? 00:50:465 (50465|2) - delete? --> if yes 00:50:627 (50627|1,50789|0) - ctrl+h --> if yes other diff all catch this sound,i will keep it

00:51:276 (51276|2.51925|3,52087|1) - http://puu.sh/vkxuY/4b3edee22c.png (add note because melody sound is loud enough?) i think it's no need in the eaisest diff

01:29:546 (89546|2) - move to 2? better visual because the pattern before it (43) ok
01:39:925 (99925|2) - move to 1? because same position with note before while the sound is different is a bit.. awkward? ok
02:09:600 (129600|2,129925|3) - ctrl+J this? ok

thanks for vibro based ajee.
good luck!~

If you have time, maybe you all can take a peek at my maps? 4K or 7K is okay:3 (4K preferably) https://osu.ppy.sh/s/560876
Thanks!~

Thanks a lot

, attached is the updated file for DoNotMess

Updated

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63762
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Sheriruth
TitleUnicode:Sheriruth
Artist:Team Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Team Grimoire
Creator:DoNotMess
Version:Tofu's Beginning
Source:Arcaea
Tags:Grimoire of Darkness Ajeemaniz ExUsagi Virtue- Tofu1222
BeatmapID:1255678
BeatmapSetID:590341

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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Hanss

129 posts

Joined August 2014

Hanss 8 years ago

Usagi's Apocalypse Mod -

00:30:519 (30519|3,30600|2,30762|2,30844|3,30925|2,31006|3) - Try to not make the pattern a right hand trill..maybe try something like this http://i.imgur.com/XmUfF6X.png

00:54:033 (54033|0,54033|3,54033|2,54195|3,54195|1,54357|0,54357|2,54519|3,54519|0,54519|1,54681|1,54681|0,54681|2) - I think this part is way over done for just a simple build up sound. Maybe one LN represent better than a LN Shield lol but is just my opinion

00:59:708 (59708|0,59708|2) - Not consistent, same sound but is double chord instead of triple. Same goes for all the 2 note chords after it.

01:01:411 (61411|2,61411|3) - Sound is too soft for a chord to hand jack lol maybe try just single notes before the hand.

01:45:276 (105276|0,105276|3,105276|1,105276|2,105357|0,105438|1,105438|3,105519|0,105519|2,105600|0,105600|2,105600|3,105600|1,105681|3,105762|0,105762|2,105844|3,105844|1,105925|1,105925|0,105925|2,105925|3) - really?..

02:09:925 (129925|0,129925|2,129925|3,129925|1) - you never charted this part as quad chords last time so maybe make all these quad chords in this section triple chords for consistency.

02:17:425 (137425|0,137465|1,137506|2,137546|3,137546|0,137587|1,137627|2,137668|3) - i hear no sound for this to even happen. try making this match the sound a little better.

02:20:222 (140222|3,140222|2) - why is this part with two notes and this part 02:25:411 (145411|2) - with one note

02:35:871 (155871|0,155871|3,155871|1,155952|2,156033|1,156033|3,156114|0,156114|2,156195|0,156195|3,156195|1,156276|2,156357|0,156357|1,156438|2,156438|3,156519|1,156519|0,156519|3,156600|2,156681|1,156681|3,156762|2,156762|0,156844|0,156844|3,156844|1) - in my opinion section doesnt sound heavy enough to be charted so densely

welp that is all the mod i have xD overall great diff was just nitpicking

hope this helped in any way, good luck with ranked c:

PiraTom

193 posts

Joined August 2012

PiraTom 8 years ago

mod for request. I'm sorry, I checked only one diff because I'm so busy

And sorry for Bad English.

[Usagi's Apocalypse]
First, I suggest only patterns, it will be easier than yours.
If you don't want to become more easier, please ignore my mods.

00:43:087 (43087|1,43087|0,43168|2,43168|3,43411|1,43411|0,43492|3,43492|2) -
I suggest Ctrl + H,
because when I consider song's excitement, I think it's better that gradually become hard pattern.

02:37:330 (157330|1,157330|0,157411|0,157411|1,157492|2,157492|3,157573|3,157573|2) -
Here is same as reason,too. I suggest Ctrl + H.

01:45:276 ~01:46:573 - Here is the most difficult place. I suggest this pattern (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7874441)
It's small change, but difficulty changes a lot.

That's all. Good Luck

Arzenvald

4,062 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 8 years ago

pira's suggestion all applied
6's too except 02:09:925 - all quads to gradually adds climax towards the end & 02:17:425 - the piano cue sound is 1/8
al's too except 00:50:303 - becuz no liek triple not in downbeat :<

thanks guys!

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

ajeemaniz wrote:
pira's suggestion all applied
6's too except 02:09:925 - all quads to gradually adds climax towards the end & 02:17:425 - the piano cue sound is 1/8
al's too except 00:50:303 - becuz no liek triple not in downbeat :<

thanks guys!

nih orng kebiasaan kgk nge drop filenya :<<<

Arzenvald

4,062 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 8 years ago

hmm di rename jadi apa ya '3'
'Arzenvald's Fluffypocalypse'

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

Arzenvald wrote:
hmm di rename jadi apa ya '3'
'Arzenvald's Fluffypocalypse'

not gonna change ur diff name

((

Arzenvald

4,062 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 8 years ago

smh kys bn bribe when :^^^^

Shima Rin

1,304 posts

Joined March 2015

Shima Rin 8 years ago

maybe u should add ajee's new username into this mapset?

MEGAtive

1,656 posts

Joined August 2013

MEGAtive 8 years ago

Metacheck

Baca sendiri ya tanpa formatting gua ngepost dari Handphon ini

Sumber

http://wikiwiki.jp/arcaea/?Sheriruth
https://www.discogs.com/Various-Grimoire-Of-Darkness/release/9340350
http://teamgrimoire.com
https://arcaea.lowiro.com/en

Title: Sheriruth
Artist: Team Grimoire
Source: Arcaea
Tags: lowiro Grimoire of Darkness Eternal Core Conflict(対立) Tairitsu M3-2016 TG-005. Tofu1222 ajeemaniz Arzenvald ExUsagi Virtue-

Rivals_7

Beatmap Nominator

2,979 posts

Joined July 2014

Rivals_7 8 years ago

Meta is there already

[General]
convert MP3 pls
~~BGya ganti tuh nama ajeemaniz nya xd~~

1|2|3|4

[Hitsound]

Timing points based on "Future" applies to ((all))

00:03:276 (3276|3,3276|2) - so. there's a ((lot)) of drums going on in the intro but why? why the heck you left it unhitsounded :<
I heard W is kinda cover the drum so use that.
00:03:762 (3762|0,3762|3) - same applies here and pretty much etc

Tofu's Beginning

looks okay

???

???

thats not okay. please be consistent with your hitsounding (i know you are into piano but using clap hitsound is completely misleading)

[Tofu's Beginning]

everything that doesnt have explanation are related to pitch relevancy

00:06:844 (6844|2,7330|1) - move to right. variating the structure you've made before
00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1) - 3|4
00:42:033 (42033|1,42357|2,42681|3) - this not even synchronized with piano. or is it intended?
00:51:600 - piano here
02:34:573 - missing a double

[Past]

"Pass(t)"ed

[V's Present]

00:28:735 (28735|0,28898|0) - pretty sure this is not even the same pitch
00:36:519 (36519|0,36681|0) - reeeeeee
00:40:898 (40898|1) - https://puu.sh/vwQGf/b4531dfa6c.jpg for variety
01:06:844 (66844|1,66844|0) - i'd say there's 2 pitch of this on the same col. split it?
01:17:222 (77222|2,77222|3) - same
01:25:168 (85168|3) - no real sound here (ghost) so people might missed this since you were doing minijack and then suddenly changes to roll. they need to atleast recover their independency first before going into next pattern
01:44:222 (104222|1) - delete? doesnt sound important to be highlighted here
01:44:627 - add a note here. crash obviously

[Future]

00:39:114 (39114|1,39276|1,39438|2,39438|1,39600|2,39762|2) - aaaaaa
pls balance - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7935802
00:40:979 (40979|2,41141|2,41303|2,41546|2,41708|2,41871|2,42033|2) - lul
00:59:546 (59546|1,59546|0) - pls be triple just like you do with that clap afterwards - 01:00:195 (60195|2,60195|0,60195|3) -
01:11:222 (71222|0) - i'd say you can extend this for transition gimmick
01:25:168 (85168|3) - obviously ghost
01:32:303 (92303|1,92789|2,93276|3) - (zoomout your timeline first so you dont assume me only highlighting one note) would move this to 3|2|3 for pitch or smth
01:49:817 (109817|3,109898|2,109979|3,110060|1) - REEEEE this piano is all going down pitched but why OH trill i dont understand

[Arzenvald's Apocalypse]

00:37:979 (37979|2) - would move this to 2. this triple stack - 00:37:817 (37817|2,37979|2,38141|2) - is somewhat doesnt interpret anything in song
00:41:708 (41708|0,41708|2,41708|3,41708|1) - lul i dont get why is this a quad. sounds the same as- 00:41:222 (41222|3,41222|0,41222|1) - and it doesnt represent anything that change in the music either
01:01:411 (61411|3,61492|3) - could get what the second minijack do but what exactly is this even represent? move to 3 pls
01:02:708 (62708|3,62708|2) - synth pls. pls no double
01:04:006 (64006|3,64087|3,64330|1,64411|1) - *sobs*
01:45:276 (105276|0,105276|3,105276|2,105276|1) - hella fuk whats with the quadstream. aiae is over lol
Might say to reduce them to at least a triple. considering the BPM is kinda too fast to handle those thing properly

Arzenvald

4,062 posts

Joined July 2013

Arzenvald 8 years ago

Rivals_7 wrote:
BGya ganti tuh nama ajeemaniz nya xd

all suggestion applied, the stream between the quads were nerf'd https://puu.sh/vy7Zl/f08d82f663.osu

danke!

Virtue-

1,112 posts

Joined March 2015

Virtue- 8 years ago

Rivals_7 wrote:
Meta is there already

[V's Present]

00:28:735 (28735|0,28898|0) - pretty sure this is not even the same pitch re-arrange
00:36:519 (36519|0,36681|0) - reeeeeee wat?
00:40:898 (40898|1) - https://puu.sh/vwQGf/b4531dfa6c.jpg for variety sure, 10/10 xD
01:06:844 (66844|1,66844|0) - i'd say there's 2 pitch of this on the same col. split it? maybe, i'm gonna keep it like this although there's 2 pitch.
01:17:222 (77222|2,77222|3) - same maybe, i'm gonna keep it like this although there's 2 pitch.
01:25:168 (85168|3) - no real sound here (ghost) so people might missed this since you were doing minijack and then suddenly changes to roll. they need to atleast recover their independency first before going into next pattern re-arrange it somehow
01:44:222 (104222|1) - delete? doesnt sound important to be highlighted here there's sound there, but i think i'm gonna focus the kick.
applied that
01:44:627 - add a note here. crash obviously whoops, miss here owo

THANKS RIVAL FOR THE CHECK

UPDATE OWO NGENG UWU

Shima Rin

1,304 posts

Joined March 2015

Shima Rin 8 years ago

Rivals_7 wrote:
[Tofu's Beginning]

everything that doesnt have explanation are related to pitch relevancy
00:06:844 (6844|2,7330|1) - move to right. variating the structure you've made before ok
00:11:546 (11546|0,12033|1) - 3|4 ok
00:42:033 (42033|1,42357|2,42681|3) - this not even synchronized with piano. or is it intended? it was, but after u suggest i think maybe catch piano would be better
00:51:600 - piano here ok
02:34:573 - missing a double ok

and together with some small self-changes, here is the updated one

Tofu's Beginning

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63804
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.099999

[Metadata]
Title:Sheriruth
TitleUnicode:Sheriruth
Artist:Team Grimoire
ArtistUnicode:Team Grimoire
Creator:DoNotMess
Version:Tofu's Beginning
Source:Arcaea
Tags:lowiro Grimoire of Darkness Eternal Core Conflict(対立) Tairitsu M3-2016 TG-005. Tofu1222 ajeemaniz Arzenvald ExUsagi Virtue-
BeatmapID:1255678
BeatmapSetID:590341

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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448,192,148129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,148615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,148940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,149264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,149913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150237,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,150237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,150561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,150723,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,151210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,151534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,151859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,152507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,152831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,153318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,153318,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,153804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,154129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,154453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,154615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,154615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,155426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,155913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,155913,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,156561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,157210,128,4,158507:0:0:0:0:
320,192,157534,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,157859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,158183,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,158507,1,2,0:0:0:0:

thanks rival, reallly helps

Rivals_7

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Rivals_7 8 years ago

inb4 someone will nuke hard that quad in arzenvald's xd

lets try to push this one then

DoNotMess

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DoNotMess 8 years ago

MUCH THANKS!!!!!
<3 Rivals_7 <3

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

wow i didn't see that coming

tolong nama gw di backgroundnya edit la ; ;

Ibrahim

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Ibrahim 8 years ago

Arzenvald wrote:
wow i didn't see that coming

tolong nama gw di backgroundnya edit la ; ;

delete aja map nya please .
asik gw bikin drama bagus gak? :"D

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

^ delet dis

DoNotMess

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DoNotMess 8 years ago

h3h3 rip dis map </3
smua garagara ibrahim >:D

Rivals_7

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Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

#blameibrahim2k17

Maxus

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Maxus 8 years ago

Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]

none

Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[Tofu's Easy]

00:03:804 (3804|1,4291|2,4777|1) - To follow the correct pitch, you need to make these notes at column 3-2-3
00:06:399 (6399|1,7372|1) - suggest to move these notes to col 3 for balance, the way you arrange the pattern is not balance (too much on the left column.) this will make the pattern balance while still follow pitch.
00:11:102 (11102|1,11588|3,12075|1) - Should be at col 3, col 2 and col 4 to follow pitch properly.
00:19:859 (19859|0,20345|2) - Should be at col 4 and col 1 to also follow the pitch.
00:34:453 (34453|1,34777|2,37048|2,37372|1,39642|1,39967|2,42237|1,42561|2) - I really suggest Ctrl+H all of these, to make the differences with the one at 00:24:075 - , because the pattern being same for too long, it can give variation.
00:44:831 (44831|3) - Move to col 2 for the balance here.
00:49:534 - almost nothing in col 4, you should balance it more here, i suggest to do http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093007
00:53:426 (53426|0) - move to col 4 because of this being lower pitch than 00:53:264 -
00:56:183 - Aside from not being balance, felt like the PR also wrong here, it should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093016
01:08:507 - Also the same here, the balance in col 4 is lacking here, you should use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093022
01:12:075 (72075|1,72561|1,73129|1,73615|1,74021|1) - this is too much lol, the spread of the notes are uneven .. should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093035
01:15:156 (75156|0,75804|1) - You need to switch column between these 2 notes, the note at 01:15:156 (75156|0) - doesn't synchronize well with 01:14:183 (74183|0,74426|3,74669|0,74831|3) - because of not being a repeatable pitch.
01:17:021 - quite sure you can make more balance jack here, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093047
01:25:859 (85859|3,86831|2) - Switch column make much more balance and pitch relevance.
01:28:777 - you can also sort of balancing this by http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093065 because of 01:29:264 - being higher pitch than 01:28:777 - , and more balance as well.
01:32:183 (92183|1) - Move this to col 1, this doesn't fit to be trill with 01:32:345 (92345|3,92831|1,93318|3,93642|1) - because this is only soft sound, while the other 4 notes are hard sound.
01:33:967 - For the melody, you need to form a bit trill for pitch. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093083
01:38:831 - not sure why this massive double note suddenly comes out, felt like a huge diff spike.
01:56:345 - Personally since there's a change of pitch melody and roll sound suddenly coming, you can sort of make another LN like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093092
02:08:345 (128345|1) - i don't understand what is this note for, you also didn't use it at 01:57:967 - , so i don't really get how the consistency works here.
02:09:318 (129318|1) - better turn this into normal note, this is kinda too forcing it with 02:09:642 (129642|2) -

[Normal]

00:55:048 (55048|1,55372|2,55696|1) - I suggest making these col 3-2-3 to avoid jack between 00:54:723 (54723|1,55048|1) - because the pattern motion become quite awkward imo.
01:00:399 - somehow here you can actually make mirror pattern like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093199 for 2 reason:
1.you use double at right hand like 00:58:291 (58291|2,58291|3,58940|2,58940|3,59913|3,59913|2) - for too many times, the note amount and motion become unbalanced by itself because of it.
2.the mirror pattern actually structured the pattern to be much neater and a bit more differently because this is the section where the drum get pronounced more loudly.
01:19:696 (79696|3) - suggest move this to col 3, you got too much stuffs at col 4 at 01:18:075 (78075|3,78399|3,78723|3,79210|3,80507|3,80994|3) -
02:24:723 - You should make jack pattern that concentrated at col 4 similar to how you did at 02:19:534 - , seems structurically inconsistent here.
This diff is really good tbh, really great job.

[V's Present]

00:25:372 (25372|0,25696|1,26021|2) - I'm a bit curious why the LN is in the exact same column as 00:24:075 (24075|0,24399|1,24723|2) - despite those 2 piano having distinct pitch differences. i suggest something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093271 to differentiate both.
00:33:886 (33886|0) - don't think this need to be mapped, it's kinda ambiguous if you compared this with other diff.
00:40:453 (40453|1,40615|2) - Switch column would be better to mirror 00:41:426 -
00:50:507 (50507|3) - Don't know why this LN started here, it should be started at 00:50:345 - , same problem with future diff.
00:56:994 - the pattern somehow becoming obnoxious to hit here.. I figure you can try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093330 instead to solve that, the pitch of LN between 00:56:831 - until 00:57:642 - also becoming more apparent if you make them trill due to repeating piano either way.
01:01:453 (61453|2,61534|3,62102|2,62183|3) - although this is maybe the style of the diff, i can't help but realize that how the col 4 stack becoming too tricky to hit considering the jack AND LN cramping the pattern, the one solution is to make one of the LN not cramping the jack pattern, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093341
01:08:669 (68669|0,68750|1,68831|2,68913|0) - mehh.. i'm kinda sad seeing this.. if you want to put tricky 1/4 note in the middle of LN, it's usually encouraged to structure it in more linear way without too many difficult transitions, you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093356 instead.
01:11:102 (71102|3,71426|0) - It's much preffered at col 1 and col 3. jack at 01:11:426 - is too unbalanced considering how tricky the pattern and note compositions being too left handed at 01:11:588 (71588|0,71913|1,72075|1,72237|0,72399|0) -
01:29:588 - kinda awkward that this is a single LN when you use double at 01:39:967 - , talking bout inconsistency.
01:33:642 (93642|2,93804|1) - Suggest to switch column here, not sure what the shield for.
01:44:669 - I do think you need extra note here, this part is really underwhelming when the drum is really intense and building up here.
01:48:561 (108561|0,108642|2,108723|1,108804|3,108886|0,108967|2) - all these LN felt really out of place when there isn't distinct synth sound to be heard here, I do think you don't need to make full LN either, for this kind of sound, just make it into normal note is good enough to make the distinct pitch more prominent.
01:50:831 (110831|0,110913|1) - Same as above, make it into normal note.
01:55:210 (115210|1,115372|2) - Kinda don't get what are these LN for.. you can clearly see that the pitch isn't at the mentioned line.
02:27:804 (147804|2,147967|1,148291|2) - Better to Ctrl+H these, don't really get what the LN trill at 02:27:318 (147318|1,147642|0,147967|1) - for, when the other LN doesn't be made trill as well.

[Future]

So, the thing that i want to mention, is the gap is big here.. transition between 1/2 note beat to 1/4 dense jumpstream is the cause of this i think, you need to restructure the gap for the spread to be safe.

00:33:967 (33967|2) - i think you can delete this, you don't need to quad this sound when this isn't the highest diff. it also makes the 1/8 mini pattern before easier to hit.
00:41:750 - this is the one that i'm talking about about when mentioning about spread, i think instead of making dense jumpstream, you can make triple pattern for every 1/2 beat (don't make stream) , it will emphasize the drum and make better spread.
00:43:048 - i suggest to nerf the jumptrill to be dense 1/2 jumpstream (double for every 1/2 beat) for better spread with present diff. or try buff the present diff, either way, i need you to find some way to make the spread between present and future diff more balance.
01:01:453 - 01:02:102 - you can basically add note for each of these blue line to make the rythm more concise and interesting with the song
01:02:507 - same as my suggestion at 00:41:750 - , you can basically make 1/2 triple triple instead of full dense jumpstream for more approriate spread.
01:03:804 - basically more or less the same with 00:43:048 - . and apply it on similar part, you know where.
01:23:672 (83672|1) - I think this should be at 01:23:756 - because for consistency with 01:18:393 -
01:45:318 - I also think you can sort of nerf the handstream because this is also kinda really dense compared with present's diff.
I'm not really sure how to mod this diff for now as what i really want to mention now is the diff gap between the 2 mentioned difficulty i said earlier, generally i think having 1 more difficulty would be approriate here, but it seems like it's too late for that, so for the least i can ask is to nerfed this diff so the spread will be more balance (you can also buff the present's diff, but not really much, otherwise you will ended up having big gap between normal and present diff).

[Arzenvald's Apocalypse]

00:54:886 (54886|1) - suggest move to col 2 here , don't really see any reason to stack the jack there.
00:59:588 (59588|0,59913|3) - Try switch notes column between these 2 notes? this way you get 5 notes stack that mirroring 01:00:561 (60561|3,60723|3,60886|3,61048|3,61210|3) -
01:20:831 (80831|0) - kinda think you can move this to col 2 so that the transition between ln shield to stack jack notes here aren't too tricky
01:45:723 (105723|3,105886|2) - I do think you can switch column here, so the jack will be at col 1-2-3-4 (if combined with 01:45:318 (105318|0,105399|0,105561|1,105642|1) - ) will gives smooth transition considering that the pattern diff already rough to begin with. (maybe seem small, but this makes quite huge impact)
01:53:021 (113021|2,113102|2) - this is extremely rough in the middle of really dense patterning, i mean, when combined with the burst at 01:52:615 - causing player to kinda mis-hit because the rough pattern still continue until the quad pattern, i suggest to switch column between 01:52:940 (112940|0,113021|2) - these 2 notes, the flow of direction will makes the pattern much better to hit.
01:54:196 (114196|2) - I'm sure there isn't burst sound in this one, and i also think this part kinda too rough to hit considering how dense col 2 and col 3 is, so combined with my mod to delete that one 1/8, i will suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8095033 so that it will spreaded the burst more balancely.
01:54:967 (114967|2,115048|2) - Is this jack intentionally being at the same column with the jack at 01:55:615 - ? personally their each respective jack piano does have quite a noticeable difference pitch here, prefer 01:54:967 (114967|2) - at col 2.
02:07:372 - kinda find it hard to transition of because the pattern flow to the left, i think you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8095135 instead, it mirroring a bit of 02:08:183 - , should be a bit easier.
02:16:453 - well.. tbh, although structurically the jack spreaded well and well-thought, i am not really sure how the players will see the pattern, well, if you really sure with this, i'm fine, just wanna say what i thought.
:Thumbs up: , really solid diff, i'm kinda worried about some pattern, but i think it can still be acceptable, enjoying play this diff numerous times already

Call me back if you're done, The thing that i really wanna get addressed is the spread issues of H and I icon diff first.

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

boi oh boi..

DoNotMess

485 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

Maxus wrote:
Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
none
Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[Tofu's Easy]
00:03:804 (3804|1,4291|2,4777|1) - To follow the correct pitch, you need to make these notes at column 3-2-3
00:06:399 (6399|1,7372|1) - suggest to move these notes to col 3 for balance, the way you arrange the pattern is not balance (too much on the left column.) this will make the pattern balance while still follow pitch.
00:11:102 (11102|1,11588|3,12075|1) - Should be at col 3, col 2 and col 4 to follow pitch properly.
00:19:859 (19859|0,20345|2) - Should be at col 4 and col 1 to also follow the pitch.
00:34:453 (34453|1,34777|2,37048|2,37372|1,39642|1,39967|2,42237|1,42561|2) - I really suggest Ctrl+H all of these, to make the differences with the one at 00:24:075 - , because the pattern being same for too long, it can give variation.
00:44:831 (44831|3) - Move to col 2 for the balance here.
00:49:534 - almost nothing in col 4, you should balance it more here, i suggest to do http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093007
00:53:426 (53426|0) - move to col 4 because of this being lower pitch than 00:53:264 -
00:56:183 - Aside from not being balance, felt like the PR also wrong here, it should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093016
01:08:507 - Also the same here, the balance in col 4 is lacking here, you should use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093022
01:12:075 (72075|1,72561|1,73129|1,73615|1,74021|1) - this is too much lol, the spread of the notes are uneven .. should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093035
01:15:156 (75156|0,75804|1) - You need to switch column between these 2 notes, the note at 01:15:156 (75156|0) - doesn't synchronize well with 01:14:183 (74183|0,74426|3,74669|0,74831|3) - because of not being a repeatable pitch.
01:17:021 - quite sure you can make more balance jack here, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093047
01:25:859 (85859|3,86831|2) - Switch column make much more balance and pitch relevance.
01:28:777 - you can also sort of balancing this by http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093065 because of 01:29:264 - being higher pitch than 01:28:777 - , and more balance as well.
01:32:183 (92183|1) - Move this to col 1, this doesn't fit to be trill with 01:32:345 (92345|3,92831|1,93318|3,93642|1) - because this is only soft sound, while the other 4 notes are hard sound.
01:33:967 - For the melody, you need to form a bit trill for pitch. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093083
01:38:831 - not sure why this massive double note suddenly comes out, felt like a huge diff spike.
01:56:345 - Personally since there's a change of pitch melody and roll sound suddenly coming, you can sort of make another LN like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093092
02:08:345 (128345|1) - i don't understand what is this note for, you also didn't use it at 01:57:967 - , so i don't really get how the consistency works here.
02:09:318 (129318|1) - better turn this into normal note, this is kinda too forcing it with 02:09:642 (129642|2) -
[Normal]
00:55:048 (55048|1,55372|2,55696|1) - I suggest making these col 3-2-3 to avoid jack between 00:54:723 (54723|1,55048|1) - because the pattern motion become quite awkward imo.
01:00:399 - somehow here you can actually make mirror pattern like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093199 for 2 reason:
1.you use double at right hand like 00:58:291 (58291|2,58291|3,58940|2,58940|3,59913|3,59913|2) - for too many times, the note amount and motion become unbalanced by itself because of it.
2.the mirror pattern actually structured the pattern to be much neater and a bit more differently because this is the section where the drum get pronounced more loudly.
01:19:696 (79696|3) - suggest move this to col 3, you got too much stuffs at col 4 at 01:18:075 (78075|3,78399|3,78723|3,79210|3,80507|3,80994|3) -
02:24:723 - You should make jack pattern that concentrated at col 4 similar to how you did at 02:19:534 - , seems structurically inconsistent here.
This diff is really good tbh, really great job. ALL APPLIED BECAUSE I WENT FULL RETARD WHEN MAKING THIS DIFF
[V's Present]
00:25:372 (25372|0,25696|1,26021|2) - I'm a bit curious why the LN is in the exact same column as 00:24:075 (24075|0,24399|1,24723|2) - despite those 2 piano having distinct pitch differences. i suggest something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093271 to differentiate both.
00:33:886 (33886|0) - don't think this need to be mapped, it's kinda ambiguous if you compared this with other diff.
00:40:453 (40453|1,40615|2) - Switch column would be better to mirror 00:41:426 -
00:50:507 (50507|3) - Don't know why this LN started here, it should be started at 00:50:345 - , same problem with future diff.
00:56:994 - the pattern somehow becoming obnoxious to hit here.. I figure you can try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093330 instead to solve that, the pitch of LN between 00:56:831 - until 00:57:642 - also becoming more apparent if you make them trill due to repeating piano either way.
01:01:453 (61453|2,61534|3,62102|2,62183|3) - although this is maybe the style of the diff, i can't help but realize that how the col 4 stack becoming too tricky to hit considering the jack AND LN cramping the pattern, the one solution is to make one of the LN not cramping the jack pattern, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093341
01:08:669 (68669|0,68750|1,68831|2,68913|0) - mehh.. i'm kinda sad seeing this.. if you want to put tricky 1/4 note in the middle of LN, it's usually encouraged to structure it in more linear way without too many difficult transitions, you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093356 instead.
01:11:102 (71102|3,71426|0) - It's much preffered at col 1 and col 3. jack at 01:11:426 - is too unbalanced considering how tricky the pattern and note compositions being too left handed at 01:11:588 (71588|0,71913|1,72075|1,72237|0,72399|0) -
01:29:588 - kinda awkward that this is a single LN when you use double at 01:39:967 - , talking bout inconsistency.
01:33:642 (93642|2,93804|1) - Suggest to switch column here, not sure what the shield for.
01:44:669 - I do think you need extra note here, this part is really underwhelming when the drum is really intense and building up here.
01:48:561 (108561|0,108642|2,108723|1,108804|3,108886|0,108967|2) - all these LN felt really out of place when there isn't distinct synth sound to be heard here, I do think you don't need to make full LN either, for this kind of sound, just make it into normal note is good enough to make the distinct pitch more prominent.
01:50:831 (110831|0,110913|1) - Same as above, make it into normal note.
01:55:210 (115210|1,115372|2) - Kinda don't get what are these LN for.. you can clearly see that the pitch isn't at the mentioned line.
02:27:804 (147804|2,147967|1,148291|2) - Better to Ctrl+H these, don't really get what the LN trill at 02:27:318 (147318|1,147642|0,147967|1) - for, when the other LN doesn't be made trill as well.
[Future]

So, the thing that i want to mention, is the gap is big here.. transition between 1/2 note beat to 1/4 dense jumpstream is the cause of this i think, you need to restructure the gap for the spread to be safe.
00:33:967 (33967|2) - i think you can delete this, you don't need to quad this sound when this isn't the highest diff. it also makes the 1/8 mini pattern before easier to hit.
00:41:750 - this is the one that i'm talking about about when mentioning about spread, i think instead of making dense jumpstream, you can make triple pattern for every 1/2 beat (don't make stream) , it will emphasize the drum and make better spread.
00:43:048 - i suggest to nerf the jumptrill to be dense 1/2 jumpstream (double for every 1/2 beat) for better spread with present diff. or try buff the present diff, either way, i need you to find some way to make the spread between present and future diff more balance.
01:01:453 - 01:02:102 - you can basically add note for each of these blue line to make the rythm more concise and interesting with the song
01:02:507 - same as my suggestion at 00:41:750 - , you can basically make 1/2 triple triple instead of full dense jumpstream for more approriate spread.
01:03:804 - basically more or less the same with 00:43:048 - . and apply it on similar part, you know where.
01:23:672 (83672|1) - I think this should be at 01:23:756 - because for consistency with 01:18:393 -
01:45:318 - I also think you can sort of nerf the handstream because this is also kinda really dense compared with present's diff.
I'm not really sure how to mod this diff for now as what i really want to mention now is the diff gap between the 2 mentioned difficulty i said earlier, generally i think having 1 more difficulty would be approriate here, but it seems like it's too late for that, so for the least i can ask is to nerfed this diff so the spread will be more balance (you can also buff the present's diff, but not really much, otherwise you will ended up having big gap between normal and present diff).i think the jumpstream patterns i put on this diff are extremely easy despite it being 4,69* (i put it accordingly to the music itself), also it's because of the trill i made with 1/4 ln and the only things that are tricky here are in 01:05:102 - and 01:51:318 - .. if u think the gap u mentioned caused by the star rating, i can actually nerf the trills but otherwise i would suggest V's diff to be buffed.. i will discuss with virtue- then
[Arzenvald's Apocalypse]
00:54:886 (54886|1) - suggest move to col 2 here , don't really see any reason to stack the jack there.
00:59:588 (59588|0,59913|3) - Try switch notes column between these 2 notes? this way you get 5 notes stack that mirroring 01:00:561 (60561|3,60723|3,60886|3,61048|3,61210|3) -
01:20:831 (80831|0) - kinda think you can move this to col 2 so that the transition between ln shield to stack jack notes here aren't too tricky
01:45:723 (105723|3,105886|2) - I do think you can switch column here, so the jack will be at col 1-2-3-4 (if combined with 01:45:318 (105318|0,105399|0,105561|1,105642|1) - ) will gives smooth transition considering that the pattern diff already rough to begin with. (maybe seem small, but this makes quite huge impact)
01:53:021 (113021|2,113102|2) - this is extremely rough in the middle of really dense patterning, i mean, when combined with the burst at 01:52:615 - causing player to kinda mis-hit because the rough pattern still continue until the quad pattern, i suggest to switch column between 01:52:940 (112940|0,113021|2) - these 2 notes, the flow of direction will makes the pattern much better to hit.
01:54:196 (114196|2) - I'm sure there isn't burst sound in this one, and i also think this part kinda too rough to hit considering how dense col 2 and col 3 is, so combined with my mod to delete that one 1/8, i will suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8095033 so that it will spreaded the burst more balancely.
01:54:967 (114967|2,115048|2) - Is this jack intentionally being at the same column with the jack at 01:55:615 - ? personally their each respective jack piano does have quite a noticeable difference pitch here, prefer 01:54:967 (114967|2) - at col 2.
02:07:372 - kinda find it hard to transition of because the pattern flow to the left, i think you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8095135 instead, it mirroring a bit of 02:08:183 - , should be a bit easier.
02:16:453 - well.. tbh, although structurically the jack spreaded well and well-thought, i am not really sure how the players will see the pattern, well, if you really sure with this, i'm fine, just wanna say what i thought.
:Thumbs up: , really solid diff, i'm kinda worried about some pattern, but i think it can still be acceptable, enjoying play this diff numerous times already
Call me back if you're done, The thing that i really wanna get addressed is the spread issues of H and I icon diff first.

Shima Rin

1,304 posts

Joined March 2015

Shima Rin 8 years ago

Maxus wrote:
Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
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Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[Tofu's Easy]
00:03:804 (3804|1,4291|2,4777|1) - To follow the correct pitch, you need to make these notes at column 3-2-3
00:06:399 (6399|1,7372|1) - suggest to move these notes to col 3 for balance, the way you arrange the pattern is not balance (too much on the left column.) this will make the pattern balance while still follow pitch.
00:11:102 (11102|1,11588|3,12075|1) - Should be at col 3, col 2 and col 4 to follow pitch properly.
00:19:859 (19859|0,20345|2) - Should be at col 4 and col 1 to also follow the pitch.
00:34:453 (34453|1,34777|2,37048|2,37372|1,39642|1,39967|2,42237|1,42561|2) - I really suggest Ctrl+H all of these, to make the differences with the one at 00:24:075 - , because the pattern being same for too long, it can give variation.
00:44:831 (44831|3) - Move to col 2 for the balance here.
00:49:534 - almost nothing in col 4, you should balance it more here, i suggest to do http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093007
00:53:426 (53426|0) - move to col 4 because of this being lower pitch than 00:53:264 -
00:56:183 - Aside from not being balance, felt like the PR also wrong here, it should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093016
01:08:507 - Also the same here, the balance in col 4 is lacking here, you should use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093022
01:12:075 (72075|1,72561|1,73129|1,73615|1,74021|1) - this is too much lol, the spread of the notes are uneven .. should be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093035
01:15:156 (75156|0,75804|1) - You need to switch column between these 2 notes, the note at 01:15:156 (75156|0) - doesn't synchronize well with 01:14:183 (74183|0,74426|3,74669|0,74831|3) - because of not being a repeatable pitch.
01:17:021 - quite sure you can make more balance jack here, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093047
01:25:859 (85859|3,86831|2) - Switch column make much more balance and pitch relevance.
01:28:777 - you can also sort of balancing this by http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093065 because of 01:29:264 - being higher pitch than 01:28:777 - , and more balance as well.
01:32:183 (92183|1) - Move this to col 1, this doesn't fit to be trill with 01:32:345 (92345|3,92831|1,93318|3,93642|1) - because this is only soft sound, while the other 4 notes are hard sound.
01:33:967 - For the melody, you need to form a bit trill for pitch. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093083 yep, but i think the right one should be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8101673 which the two notes with the same pitch put in the same column for pitch relevance?
01:38:831 - not sure why this massive double note suddenly comes out, felt like a huge diff spike.
01:56:345 - Personally since there's a change of pitch melody and roll sound suddenly coming, you can sort of make another LN like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093092
02:08:345 (128345|1) - i don't understand what is this note for, you also didn't use it at 01:57:967 - , so i don't really get how the consistency works here. i did use it. when 01:57:967 - here it is really my fault, but i use it in these part like 02:00:561 - 02:03:156 - and a few others. Now I change all of them into normal notes since i dont think LNs always will be a good idea in the easiest diff. So I accept your mod but made a little bit change
02:09:318 (129318|1) - better turn this into normal note, this is kinda too forcing it with 02:09:642 (129642|2) -

no reply=fixed. Thanks for your mod

Now maybe I can get the idea about the balance thing u wanna express alll over your mod XD

And also make some other little changes. Plz check the following files

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192,192,95264,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95588,128,2,95913:0:0:0:0:
64,192,95913,128,8,96237:0:0:0:0:
448,192,96237,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,96561,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,96723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,97210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,97534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,98345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,98507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,98669,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,98831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,99156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,99480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,99642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,99967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,100777,128,2,101102:0:0:0:0:
64,192,101102,128,8,101426:0:0:0:0:
448,192,101426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,101750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,101913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,102237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,102723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,103210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,103534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104021,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,104264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,104669,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,104831,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,104994,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,105156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,105318,128,4,106615:0:0:0:0:
448,192,105318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,105967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,106615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,106940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107264,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,107588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,107913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,108237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,108561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,108886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,109210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,109534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,109859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,110183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,110507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,110831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,111156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,111480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,111804,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,112129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,112453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,112777,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,113102,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,113426,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,113750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114075,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,114399,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,114886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,115291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,115534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,115696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,115696,128,0,116345:0:0:0:0:
320,192,116345,128,0,116994:0:0:0:0:
64,192,116994,128,0,117967:0:0:0:0:
448,192,117967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,118291,128,2,118940:0:0:0:0:
448,192,118940,128,2,119588:0:0:0:0:
320,192,119588,128,2,120237:0:0:0:0:
64,192,120237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,120561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,120886,128,2,121534:0:0:0:0:
320,192,121534,128,2,122183:0:0:0:0:
448,192,122183,128,2,122831:0:0:0:0:
64,192,122831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,123156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,123480,128,2,124129:0:0:0:0:
448,192,124129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,124453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,124777,128,2,125426:0:0:0:0:
64,192,125426,128,2,126075:0:0:0:0:
192,192,126075,128,2,127372:0:0:0:0:
448,192,127372,128,0,128345:0:0:0:0:
192,192,128345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,128669,128,2,129318:0:0:0:0:
192,192,129318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,129642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,129967,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,130615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,130777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,131102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,131264,128,0,131913:0:0:0:0:
192,192,131913,128,2,132561:0:0:0:0:
448,192,132561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,132886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,133210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,133534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,133859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,192,134183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,134507,128,2,134831:0:0:0:0:
64,192,134831,128,8,135156:0:0:0:0:
448,192,135156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,135480,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,192,135804,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,136129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,136453,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,136777,1,6,0:0:0:0:
448,192,137102,128,2,137750:0:0:0:0:
192,192,137426,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,137750,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,138237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,138561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,138886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,139534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,139859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,140183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,140345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,140345,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,140831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,141156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,141480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,142453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,142777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,142940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,142940,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,143426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,143750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,144075,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,144723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,145048,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,145372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,145534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,145534,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,146021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,146345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,146669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,147642,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,147967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,148129,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,148129,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,192,148615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,148940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,149264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,149913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,150237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,150561,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,150723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,150723,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,192,151210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,151534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,151859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,152507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,152831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,153318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,153318,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,153804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,154129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,154453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,192,154615,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,155102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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192,192,155750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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320,192,157534,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,158183,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,158507,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Maxus

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Maxus 8 years ago

i think the jumpstream patterns i put on this diff are extremely easy despite it being 4,69* (i put it accordingly to the music itself), also it's because of the trill i made with 1/4 ln and the only things that are tricky here are in 01:05:102 - and 01:51:318 - .. if u think the gap u mentioned caused by the star rating, i can actually nerf the trills but otherwise i would suggest V's diff to be buffed.. i will discuss with virtue- then

I'm not talking about the SR, if it's only that, I can take the consideration of the gap, however, you are going from single stream in present's diff, to make it full dense jumpstream, and then going to jumptrill that also alternate to 14-23 jumptrill like https://puu.sh/vRN3V/05843bae22.png , which is really worrying because the level of concentration and skill to pulled the pattern off is considerably huge for both side. (the jumpstream pattern itself isn't linear, but rather tortuous , which is what makes up the diff.)

and for http://puu.sh/vRNgJ/19300d6c0f.jpg , while you may argue that the jumptrill LN is only simple jumptrill pattern, It is still different with ordinary jumptrill whatsoever, messed up hitting the pattern is as easy as fall from a single narrow rope especially when you combined it with stream and LN at 01:56:994 - , it messing up the hand's control of the pattern for the player of the mentioned diff, moreover for player that can play Hard diff well, but not this.

also at 01:45:318 - , it's literally single stream to handstream at 185 bpm. handstream is famous for being tricky even for top player (even people say jumptrill > handstream for the level of diff.)
the burst at 01:51:237 - you mentioned is probably what will throw people try to catch the gap of difficulties lol, if its burst in isolated area, it's okay, but it's in the middle of jumpstream which makes thing a chaos.

As i said before, from the beginning you should know that making one more diff is preferred because of how the song works, it's actually not that hard to fill the gaps in-between, If you wanna keep the 5 diff as it is, nerfing the I diff is much more prefered. saying that "it is because how the music sounds" isn't gonna work, if you aim for rank you should know from the start how to spread each of the difficulties well.

if you really want to have the gap as it is now, you should convince me how the pattern works in your diff can actually be played reasonably for the H player that can play H well, but can catch to I diff and isn't that far out of reach for them. Because i'm really not convinced by your explanation right now.

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

DoNotMess wrote:
Maxus wrote:
Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
none
Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[Arzenvald's Apocalypse]
01:45:723 (105723|3,105886|2) - I do think you can switch column here, so the jack will be at col 1-2-3-4 (if combined with 01:45:318 (105318|0,105399|0,105561|1,105642|1) - ) will gives smooth transition considering that the pattern diff already rough to begin with. (maybe seem small, but this makes quite huge impact) // i ain't sure whether https://puu.sh/vRQpp/8da17305ae.png this being Harder yet smoother, or just way harder to read & play.. the reason why i made 1 2 4 3 is because somehow its more sightreadable and more hand-balanced even with my relatively lower playing skill, yet still had more combo with it compared with your suggestion, need your thought with this, i made it more of 2 - 1 - 4 - 3 - 1 - 2 - 4 - 3 and its sightly easier to play through when i testplay

:Thumbs up: , really solid diff, i'm kinda worried about some pattern, but i think it can still be acceptable, enjoying play this diff numerous times already // holy flying furball
Call me back if you're done, The thing that i really wanna get addressed is the spread issues of H and I icon diff first.

the rest is applied, while the one i replied is kind of, moving some notes accordingly to avoid awkward anchor like the screenie i put

thankies <3 i got some suggestion from Chrubble as well, some weird jacks, anchors & trills were sightly more balanced

Maxus wrote:
if you really want to have the gap as it is now, you should convince me how the pattern works in your diff can actually be played reasonably for the H player that can play H well, but can catch to I diff and isn't that far out of reach for them. Because i'm really not convinced by your explanation right now.

as for the Gap between H to I being big, take a look at I to X too, to be fair they are also evenly as big as from H to I or even bigger if you counts that glorious jacks in the end XD

in this case, a 2:40 sec song could have a sightly bigger gap like E - N -- H ---- I ------- X (just like in my Blue Dragon) to make a linear + ascending spread such in those other popular rhythm game outside osu!, instead of being simple linear one
i personally think to reduce the I diff just making the spread between I & X even more bigger than the current one.. '_J'

thought?

Maxus

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Maxus 8 years ago

as for the Gap between H to I being big, take a look at I to X too, to be fair they are also evenly as big as from H to I or even bigger if you counts that glorious jacks in the end XD

in this case, a 2:40 sec song could have a sightly bigger gap like E - N -- H ---- I ------- X (just like in my Blue Dragon) to make a linear + ascending spread such in those other popular rhythm game outside osu!, instead of being simple linear one
i personally think to reduce the I diff just making the spread between I & X even more bigger than the current one.. '_J'

thought?

I also aware of the patterning of X icon which is harsh (well, i do play it afterall) , however, from what i see, Player that have capabilities to play I diff well, can also play apocalypse decently even with all the glorious anchor pattern that makes onion in my eyes (I am kinda the proof of that).. while i don't really see the same for H player to I diff.

Why is that? because imo, player that have skill range of I icon (maybe 98% the diff?) already mastering how to play the game quite decently (you can say, already involved in the game deeper) that they can afford to play and having much complex patterning within the density that's not so far different (albeit the anchor). While in H diff case, the density and the patterning are rising up more looking at not only density, but complexity of pattern involved., considering it's H player that still not have deep and involved in the game long enough to have more diverse and tolerance of certain pattern to begin with, it will be much harder for the specified range of said players.

I do think this is also the reason why some people make the gap of lower diff much closer, but can afford to make huge gap in higher diff like from I icon to X icon.. idk, i just want to make sure that it's fine tbh, I don't really ask to make the spread really balance, but i do hope at least it's still within the range of reasonable.

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

btw i was helping DnM to reduce some stuff in I earlier while making sure the I-X gap still friendly
either way in my opinion the range between H - I - X should be fine, either both keeping the current one or making sightly closer from H to I, its up to BN discretion though 'w'

Maxus

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Maxus 8 years ago

In the past many map get dq over the gap issues (well you know which map) so i need to make sure it's alright.

But sure, thanks for helping out :3 , Sorry if i'm being a bit too skeptical over the issues.

DoNotMess

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Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

added NEW future diff (im sorry the map overall seems forced but thats all of my idea atm)
moved the OLD future diff into Apocalypse
changed Arzenvald's Apocalypse to Arzenvald's Sheriruth
well time mod again X)

NOW the problem is, i think X diff should be buffed to be 5,5* at least

and slight nerf to the H diff to compensate with the N diff.

Sandalphon

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Sandalphon 8 years ago

:thinking:

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

kampret sia

[Future]
compare both Apocalypse & Future pls, don't make easier diff with slightly heavier & denser pattern >:C

00:45:804 (45804|3) - ain't this one feels harder than Apocalypse
00:46:453 (46453|1,46615|0,46615|3,46777|2,46940|0,46940|3) - fucken copas, somehow i hate literal copy pasting rn >:C
00:49:859 (49859|0,50021|1) - i'd make this in apocalypse instead
00:51:156 (51156|2,51318|3) - same
00:54:075 (54075|3) - h
01:27:804 (87804|1) - w
01:30:723 (90723|2) - P
01:38:183 (98183|1) - 9

02:18:237 (138237|1) - LN won't hurt, variation

[Apocalypse]
02:37:210 (157210|3) - i'd buff this one tbh

DoNotMess

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DoNotMess 8 years ago

Arzenvald wrote:
kampret sia

[Future]
compare both Apocalypse & Future pls, don't make easier diff with slightly heavier & denser pattern >:C
astaga ampun
00:45:804 (45804|3) - ain't this one feels harder than Apocalypse hmm emng feature nya di diff gw bedain..
00:46:453 (46453|1,46615|0,46615|3,46777|2,46940|0,46940|3) - fucken copas, somehow i hate literal copy pasting rn >:C sbenarnya kgk copas T_T gw ngemap kgk pake reference itu, cuman pop dri kepala dngerin musiknya T_T
00:49:859 (49859|0,50021|1) - i'd make this in apocalypse instead ok
00:51:156 (51156|2,51318|3) - same udh pas patternnya T_T
00:54:075 (54075|3) - h apa sih
01:27:804 (87804|1) - w gajelas
01:30:723 (90723|2) - P banget
01:38:183 (98183|1) - 9 deh

02:18:237 (138237|1) - LN won't hurt, variation keep dlu until further mod

[Apocalypse]
02:37:210 (157210|3) - i'd buff this one tbh I don't see the reason.. quite fit, also comfy to play and this is variation of 01:45:318 - this part

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

gw lupa, lu coba edit Future, sambil open Apocalypse diff as Reference

DoNotMess

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DoNotMess 8 years ago

Arzenvald wrote:
gw lupa, lu coba edit Future, sambil open Apocalypse diff as Reference

gw mnta mod lg deh dri beberapa orng
gw tw agak mirip.. soalnya ya emng style mapping gw ya gtu :/ tpi gw wktu ngemap emng gk pake reference.. gw coba bedain lg deh

Virtue-

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Virtue- 8 years ago

DoNotMess wrote:
Maxus wrote:
Hi, sorry for delay donald bebek dkk

[General]
none
Please reply to my mod if you reject, with proper reason.

[V's Present]
00:25:372 (25372|0,25696|1,26021|2) - I'm a bit curious why the LN is in the exact same column as 00:24:075 (24075|0,24399|1,24723|2) - despite those 2 piano having distinct pitch differences. i suggest something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093271 to differentiate both.
00:33:886 (33886|0) - don't think this need to be mapped, it's kinda ambiguous if you compared this with other diff.
00:40:453 (40453|1,40615|2) - Switch column would be better to mirror 00:41:426 -
00:50:507 (50507|3) - Don't know why this LN started here, it should be started at 00:50:345 - , same problem with future diff.
00:56:994 - the pattern somehow becoming obnoxious to hit here.. I figure you can try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093330 instead to solve that, the pitch of LN between 00:56:831 - until 00:57:642 - also becoming more apparent if you make them trill due to repeating piano either way.
01:01:453 (61453|2,61534|3,62102|2,62183|3) - although this is maybe the style of the diff, i can't help but realize that how the col 4 stack becoming too tricky to hit considering the jack AND LN cramping the pattern, the one solution is to make one of the LN not cramping the jack pattern, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093341
01:08:669 (68669|0,68750|1,68831|2,68913|0) - mehh.. i'm kinda sad seeing this.. if you want to put tricky 1/4 note in the middle of LN, it's usually encouraged to structure it in more linear way without too many difficult transitions, you can use http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8093356 instead.
01:11:102 (71102|3,71426|0) - It's much preffered at col 1 and col 3. jack at 01:11:426 - is too unbalanced considering how tricky the pattern and note compositions being too left handed at 01:11:588 (71588|0,71913|1,72075|1,72237|0,72399|0) -
01:29:588 - kinda awkward that this is a single LN when you use double at 01:39:967 - , talking bout inconsistency.
01:33:642 (93642|2,93804|1) - Suggest to switch column here, not sure what the shield for.
01:44:669 - I do think you need extra note here, this part is really underwhelming when the drum is really intense and building up here.
01:48:561 (108561|0,108642|2,108723|1,108804|3,108886|0,108967|2) - all these LN felt really out of place when there isn't distinct synth sound to be heard here, I do think you don't need to make full LN either, for this kind of sound, just make it into normal note is good enough to make the distinct pitch more prominent.
01:50:831 (110831|0,110913|1) - Same as above, make it into normal note.
01:55:210 (115210|1,115372|2) - Kinda don't get what are these LN for.. you can clearly see that the pitch isn't at the mentioned line.
02:27:804 (147804|2,147967|1,148291|2) - Better to Ctrl+H these, don't really get what the LN trill at 02:27:318 (147318|1,147642|0,147967|1) - for, when the other LN doesn't be made trill as well.
all the mods are applied, but some of them are re-arrange in due of unconsistency, awkward patterns, and some errors that make this diff even more cancer.

Call me back if you're done, The thing that i really wanna get addressed is the spread issues of H and I icon diff first.

thanks for the mod, maxus >w<)b updated owo
i think u need to re-check this diff again lol =w=

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

wao anteq anteq damaniaq gd mana

MEGAtive

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MEGAtive 8 years ago

Musical Conflict apaan jing

Maxus

Elite Nominator II

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Maxus 8 years ago

Secara personal sih "Arzenvald's Extinction" lebih cocok klo mw ikutin progression difficulty sblmny

Tapi yg skrg jg kren kok wkwk, terserah sih itu

Ryzen_old_1

Ryzen_old_1 8 years ago

Cuma pengirim pesan dari si Lie

Another Lie wrote:
Sorry, gw kena restrict sama peppy. 1 day after silenced, open osu in browser, red notification (~~ok fuck~~)
Color Text just for comment
comment & mod for Arzenvald
[comment] 01:02:507 (62507|1,62507|0,62669|1,62669|0,62831|0,62831|1,62994|1,62994|0,63156|0,63156|1,63318|1,63318|0,63480|1,63480|0,63642|1,63642|0) - GG left hand pak, continue nya -_- 01:03:804 (63804|1,63804|0,63886|3,63886|2,63967|0,63967|1,64048|3,64048|2,64129|3,64129|0,64210|2,64210|1,64291|3,64291|0,64372|2,64372|1,64453|0,64453|1,64534|3,64534|2,64615|0,64615|1,64696|2,64696|3,64777|3,64777|0,64859|2,64859|1,64940|3,64940|0,65021|2,65021|1) - (nvm that, just comment)
[mod] 01:03:075 (63075|3,63075|2,63723|2,63723|3) - i think this terlalu berlebihan, delete 1 note (suaranya ga kenceng om). Kalo suara kenceng, 01:03:642 - add triplet jg
01:09:156 (69156|3,69237|2,69399|2,69480|3) - ini perasaan aja / gw nya emang bingung? 01:09:156 (69156|3,69480|3) - same sound but different hold length?
01:35:913 - not gonna add note there? if not, 01:35:264 (95264|1,95264|3,95264|0) - why 3?
01:43:372 - should be 2 here
02:37:210 (157210|1,157210|2,157210|0,157291|0,157291|1,157372|2,157372|3,157453|3,157453|2,157534|1,157534|0,157615|0,157615|1,157696|2,157696|3,157777|2,157777|3,157859|0,157859|1,157940|1,157940|0,158021|1,158021|0,158102|1,158102|0,158183|2,158183|3,158264|3,158264|2,158345|3,158345|2,158426|3,158426|2,158507|0,158507|3,158507|1,158507|2) - oh dear god?!! such creation (aiae thing) why not make it harder since some place has loud sound? 02:37:210 - 02:37:534 - 02:37:859 - 02:38:183 - 4 notes (to make them equal & harder like 02:38:183 (158183|2,158183|3,158264|3,158264|2,158345|2,158345|3,158426|3,158426|2,158507|3,158507|2) - )
gw tunggu balesan modnya :3

Last edited by Ryzen_old_1 8 years ago, edited 2 times in total.

DoNotMess

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Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

Jdi ini ksih kudosunya gmn

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

tar reply nya

bark!

DoNotMess wrote:
Jdi ini ksih kudosunya gmn

ya nda bisa D:

Ryzen wrote:
Cuma pengirim pesan dari si Lie
Another Lie wrote:
Sorry, gw kena restrict sama peppy. 1 day after silenced, open osu in browser, red notification (~~ok fuck~~)
Color Text just for comment
[box=comment & mod for Arzenvald][comment] 01:02:507 (62507|1,62507|0,62669|1,62669|0,62831|0,62831|1,62994|1,62994|0,63156|0,63156|1,63318|1,63318|0,63480|1,63480|0,63642|1,63642|0) - GG left hand pak, continue nya -_- 01:03:804 (63804|1,63804|0,63886|3,63886|2,63967|0,63967|1,64048|3,64048|2,64129|3,64129|0,64210|2,64210|1,64291|3,64291|0,64372|2,64372|1,64453|0,64453|1,64534|3,64534|2,64615|0,64615|1,64696|2,64696|3,64777|3,64777|0,64859|2,64859|1,64940|3,64940|0,65021|2,65021|1) - (nvm that, just comment)

[mod] 01:03:075 (63075|3,63075|2,63723|2,63723|3) - i think this terlalu berlebihan, delete 1 note (suaranya ga kenceng om). Kalo suara kenceng, 01:03:642 - add triplet jg//ok

01:09:156 (69156|3,69237|2,69399|2,69480|3) - ini perasaan aja / gw nya emang bingung? 01:09:156 (69156|3,69480|3) - same sound but different hold length? // myO2 ln that's why

01:35:913 - not gonna add note there? if not, 01:35:264 (95264|1,95264|3,95264|0) - why 3? // downbeat = stronger

01:43:372 - should be 2 here // bukan piano, ngemep perkusi & kick mulu jelek, konsep mapping gw anti mainstream

02:37:210 (157210|1,157210|2,157210|0,157291|0,157291|1,157372|2,157372|3,157453|3,157453|2,157534|1,157534|0,157615|0,157615|1,157696|2,157696|3,157777|2,157777|3,157859|0,157859|1,157940|1,157940|0,158021|1,158021|0,158102|1,158102|0,158183|2,158183|3,158264|3,158264|2,158345|3,158345|2,158426|3,158426|2,158507|0,158507|3,158507|1,158507|2) - oh dear god?!! such creation (aiae thing) why not make it harder since some place has loud sound? 02:37:210 - 02:37:534 - 02:37:859 - 02:38:183 - 4 notes (to make them equal & harder like 02:38:183 (158183|2,158183|3,158264|3,158264|2,158345|2,158345|3,158426|3,158426|2,158507|3,158507|2) - ) // make it easier instead, somebody you know is watching your every move :V
gw tunggu balesan modnya :3

Maxus wrote:
Secara personal sih "Arzenvald's Extinction" lebih cocok klo mw ikutin progression difficulty sblmny

Tapi yg skrg jg kren kok wkwk, terserah sih itu

ok, biar gk di nuke karena diff Insane pakai custom diff juga

update : https://puu.sh/vZQRC/9f30d5a655.zip

DoNotMess

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Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

bole tweak hpnya jdi 8,5 gk? 8 seems too forgiving for X diff

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

yawes

Rivals_7

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Rivals_7 8 years ago

Masa depan

2017-05-25 21:03 Rivals_7: yg baru apocalypse?
2017-05-25 21:05 DoNotMess: yg future lama gnti apocalypse
2017-05-25 21:05 DoNotMess: future nya baru jjdi 4*
2017-05-25 21:05 DoNotMess: entah..skilas kliatan sama sih T_T orz
2017-05-25 21:07 Rivals_7: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1295745 Team Grimoire - Sheriruth [Future]]
2017-05-25 21:07 Rivals_7: 00:13:210 (13210|2,13534|2,13859|2,14183|2,14507|2) -
2017-05-25 21:07 Rivals_7: hmmmm
2017-05-25 21:07 Rivals_7: rada kurang ena ngeliatnya
2017-05-25 21:08 DoNotMess: ok udh
2017-05-25 21:09 Rivals_7: 00:15:804 (15804|1,16129|1,16453|1,16777|1,17102|1) - ini juga keknya
2017-05-25 21:09 DoNotMess: udh gw ubah jg
2017-05-25 21:09 Rivals_7: o sip
2017-05-25 21:10 Rivals_7: 00:20:021 (20021|1,20021|0,20183|1,20183|0) - ada rasa2 pen w pindahin ni ke 3|4 krn - 00:18:886 (18886|0,19048|0,19210|0,19372|1,19534|1,19696|1,19859|0,20021|0,20183|0) -
2017-05-25 21:10 Rivals_7: pattern ke atasnya mungkin perlu rada di rearrange lagi
2017-05-25 21:11 DoNotMess: udh juga itu
2017-05-25 21:11 DoNotMess: baru aja gw pindahin
2017-05-25 21:11 DoNotMess: 00:20:994 - ini/
2017-05-25 21:11 DoNotMess: ?
2017-05-25 21:12 Rivals_7: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8175167 yg ini to
2017-05-25 21:13 DoNotMess: ok udh
2017-05-25 21:13 DoNotMess: tar di cek lg aja mas ronde 2
2017-05-25 21:13 Rivals_7: okeh
2017-05-25 21:14 Rivals_7: 00:33:480 (33480|3,33521|2,33561|0,33602|1,33642|2) - satu arah aja la streamnya :u yg kek gini di apocalypse aja keknya
2017-05-25 21:14 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:17 Rivals_7: 00:41:913 (41913|1,41913|2) - rada2 di rearrang sekitar sini supaya disitu gk ada triple jack https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8175203
2017-05-25 21:17 Rivals_7: krn habis itu stream jadi rada unbalance gitu
2017-05-25 21:18 DoNotMess: dh
2017-05-25 21:18 DoNotMess: iya udh ilang triplenya
2017-05-25 21:21 Rivals_7: 01:35:750 (95750|3,95791|2,95831|0,95872|1,95913|2,96075|0,96115|1,96156|3,96196|2) - stream satu arah kek tadi lagi mungkin?
2017-05-25 21:21 DoNotMess: bisa diatur mas kawkawkaw
2017-05-25 21:21 DoNotMess: gw sih sngaja gituin biar beda ajja gitu ama apocalypse
2017-05-25 21:21 DoNotMess: tar takud kesannya copas nerf doang ;'v
2017-05-25 21:21 DoNotMess: udh
2017-05-25 21:22 Rivals_7: *ngueng*
2017-05-25 21:24 Rivals_7: 02:17:426 (137426|0,137467|1,137507|3,137548|2,137588|1,137629|0,137669|2,137710|3) - dem son
2017-05-25 21:24 Rivals_7: di apocalypse simple kali disini menggilas
2017-05-25 21:25 DoNotMess: spam doang :'v
2017-05-25 21:25 DoNotMess: dirapiin ajja?
2017-05-25 21:25 Rivals_7: rapiin aja da. berhubung star cuma 4* lel
2017-05-25 21:25 DoNotMess: siap
2017-05-25 21:25 DoNotMess: 12 43 12 43 gpp kan hrusnya?
2017-05-25 21:25 Rivals_7: y bisa sih
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: gw gmw stairs, kgk cocok
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:26 Rivals_7: kalo gk mau stair apocalypse ubah juga dong lel
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: kalo stair apocalypse
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: udah rapih
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: :v
2017-05-25 21:27 Rivals_7: :v
2017-05-25 21:27 DoNotMess: 02:17:588 - kalo diubah ini jdi masalah
2017-05-25 21:28 Rivals_7: diubah apanya? arah streamnya?
2017-05-25 21:28 Rivals_7: update dulu deh
2017-05-25 21:28 DoNotMess: hooh
2017-05-25 21:29 DoNotMess: kalo gw ubah jdi no stair
2017-05-25 21:29 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:29 DoNotMess: udh
2017-05-25 21:30 Rivals_7: gini lumayan juga si
2017-05-25 21:31 Rivals_7: btw - 02:17:264 (137264|3,137345|2) - pindahin ini ke 2|4 aja biar player gk salah baca sama stream 1/8nya lel
2017-05-25 21:31 DoNotMess: okok
2017-05-25 21:31 DoNotMess: 2|3 bole gk?
2017-05-25 21:31 DoNotMess: biar nempel
2017-05-25 21:31 Rivals_7: 23 bisa la
2017-05-25 21:32 DoNotMess: 02:15:967 - ini gk di komen? :V:V:V:V
2017-05-25 21:32 Rivals_7: lel ubh ubh aja la wkwk
2017-05-25 21:32 Rivals_7: biar konsisten juga si
2017-05-25 21:32 DoNotMess: ij
2017-05-25 21:32 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:34 Rivals_7: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1249423 Team Grimoire - Sheriruth [Apocalypse]]
2017-05-25 21:34 Rivals_7: sekalian lel
2017-05-25 21:34 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:36 Rivals_7: 00:18:399 (18399|0,18561|0,18723|0,18886|0) - hmm di sekitaran sini jacknya rada kurang konsisten keknya
2017-05-25 21:36 Rivals_7: disitu ada 4 tapi disini - 00:19:048 (19048|1,19210|1,19372|1) - cuma 3
2017-05-25 21:36 Rivals_7: disini malah cuma 2 - 00:20:021 (20021|1,20183|1) -
2017-05-25 21:37 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:38 DoNotMess: udh gw ubah tar coba liad lg
2017-05-25 21:38 Rivals_7: ku mencoba speedmodding
2017-05-25 21:38 Rivals_7: mulai ngantuk wk
2017-05-25 21:38 DoNotMess: :v
2017-05-25 21:40 Rivals_7: diff ini tuh yg dulu kan cuma ente buff doang?
2017-05-25 21:40 DoNotMess: iya
2017-05-25 21:40 DoNotMess: buff dkit bngt ~_~
2017-05-25 21:41 DoNotMess: ini dh pernah di cek kok
2017-05-25 21:41 DoNotMess: yg td yg baru
2017-05-25 21:42 Rivals_7: 00:49:534 (49534|2) - uhhh https://puu.sh/w0KXp/cff1fafef9.jpg
2017-05-25 21:43 Rivals_7: ntar rada bingung juga ni soalnya pianonya susah banget didengerinnya
2017-05-25 21:43 DoNotMess: iya barusan gw baru notice dh gw pndekin
2017-05-25 21:43 DoNotMess: jdi 1 ktuk
2017-05-25 21:43 Rivals_7: o lel ntap
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: aku kan peka OwO
2017-05-25 21:44 Rivals_7: o ya harus map sendiri gk peka piye to :v
2017-05-25 21:44 Rivals_7: pekerjaan kami cuma molish doang
2017-05-25 21:44 Rivals_7: lelelel
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: betul betul
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: itu diff name arzenvald
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: cek jg tuh
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: hp od
2017-05-25 21:45 DoNotMess: 8,5 ok kan hrusnya
2017-05-25 21:45 Rivals_7: OD 8,5 bisa aja sih
2017-05-25 21:45 Rivals_7: tergantung dianya
2017-05-25 21:45 DoNotMess: tadi dia 8.. keknya trlalu ez buat X diff kalo 8 doang
2017-05-25 21:45 DoNotMess: gw ubah sndiri -.-
2017-05-25 21:46 DoNotMess: uyaudah balikin 8 ajja?
2017-05-25 21:47 Rivals_7: LNnya gk terlalu byk sih tapi rada tricky juga
2017-05-25 21:47 Rivals_7: sekitaran 8,3 juga mungkin bisa sih
2017-05-25 21:47 Rivals_7: 8 terlalu gampang
2017-05-25 21:47 DoNotMess: gw blom discuss ama dia :v balikin dlu deh, tar kena omel
2017-05-25 21:47 Rivals_7: wkwkw
2017-05-25 21:47 DoNotMess: makanya ;v
2017-05-25 21:48 DoNotMess: 8,5 udh pas bngt justru
2017-05-25 21:48 DoNotMess: 01:51:156 - disini spammable
2017-05-25 21:48 DoNotMess: 8,5 hp disini di spam masih bisa lewad
2017-05-25 21:49 Rivals_7: maso quadstream weee
2017-05-25 21:49 DoNotMess: namanya juga "X" diff :v
2017-05-25 21:49 DoNotMess: duh mw bab
2017-05-25 21:49 DoNotMess: ini msh ada gk :v'v'v'v'v'v
2017-05-25 21:49 Rivals_7: yha wkwk
2017-05-25 21:49 DoNotMess: ACTION 3 hari gk bab
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: gr gr diet uwu
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: masih mau diskusiin lagi kan sama arzen? sampe sini aja dulu dah wkwk
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: ku juga ngantuk si :v
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: okok
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: besok ae
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: yaudah tar gw kabarin lg kaloudah
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: siap mas
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: sep
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: makasih bnyk ya
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: npnp o/
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: "tukang poles" ^^

[Apocalypse]

00:49:859 (49859|0) - kalo dipikir kurang yakin sih kalo ada piano disini. ganti jadi note?

01:05:669 - 01:16:048 - add note to connect the stream instrument

01:09:561 (69561|0) - LN mungkin?

01:15:075 - hilang 1 kick (kalo add note. add W juga. di arzenvald's juga add W)

[Arzenvald's EXtinction]

02:11:264 - agar apa coba ni quad cuma buat kick lole. reduce or riot

pemabagian kiainya juga gk konsisten sih but w/e

DoNotMess

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Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

Rivals_7 wrote:
Masa depan
2017-05-25 21:03 Rivals_7: yg baru apocalypse?
2017-05-25 21:05 DoNotMess: yg future lama gnti apocalypse
2017-05-25 21:05 DoNotMess: future nya baru jjdi 4*
2017-05-25 21:05 DoNotMess: entah..skilas kliatan sama sih T_T orz
2017-05-25 21:07 Rivals_7: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1295745 Team Grimoire - Sheriruth [Future]]
2017-05-25 21:07 Rivals_7: 00:13:210 (13210|2,13534|2,13859|2,14183|2,14507|2) -
2017-05-25 21:07 Rivals_7: hmmmm
2017-05-25 21:07 Rivals_7: rada kurang ena ngeliatnya
2017-05-25 21:08 DoNotMess: ok udh
2017-05-25 21:09 Rivals_7: 00:15:804 (15804|1,16129|1,16453|1,16777|1,17102|1) - ini juga keknya
2017-05-25 21:09 DoNotMess: udh gw ubah jg
2017-05-25 21:09 Rivals_7: o sip
2017-05-25 21:10 Rivals_7: 00:20:021 (20021|1,20021|0,20183|1,20183|0) - ada rasa2 pen w pindahin ni ke 3|4 krn - 00:18:886 (18886|0,19048|0,19210|0,19372|1,19534|1,19696|1,19859|0,20021|0,20183|0) -
2017-05-25 21:10 Rivals_7: pattern ke atasnya mungkin perlu rada di rearrange lagi
2017-05-25 21:11 DoNotMess: udh juga itu
2017-05-25 21:11 DoNotMess: baru aja gw pindahin
2017-05-25 21:11 DoNotMess: 00:20:994 - ini/
2017-05-25 21:11 DoNotMess: ?
2017-05-25 21:12 Rivals_7: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8175167 yg ini to
2017-05-25 21:13 DoNotMess: ok udh
2017-05-25 21:13 DoNotMess: tar di cek lg aja mas ronde 2
2017-05-25 21:13 Rivals_7: okeh
2017-05-25 21:14 Rivals_7: 00:33:480 (33480|3,33521|2,33561|0,33602|1,33642|2) - satu arah aja la streamnya :u yg kek gini di apocalypse aja keknya
2017-05-25 21:14 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:17 Rivals_7: 00:41:913 (41913|1,41913|2) - rada2 di rearrang sekitar sini supaya disitu gk ada triple jack https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8175203
2017-05-25 21:17 Rivals_7: krn habis itu stream jadi rada unbalance gitu
2017-05-25 21:18 DoNotMess: dh
2017-05-25 21:18 DoNotMess: iya udh ilang triplenya
2017-05-25 21:21 Rivals_7: 01:35:750 (95750|3,95791|2,95831|0,95872|1,95913|2,96075|0,96115|1,96156|3,96196|2) - stream satu arah kek tadi lagi mungkin?
2017-05-25 21:21 DoNotMess: bisa diatur mas kawkawkaw
2017-05-25 21:21 DoNotMess: gw sih sngaja gituin biar beda ajja gitu ama apocalypse
2017-05-25 21:21 DoNotMess: tar takud kesannya copas nerf doang ;'v
2017-05-25 21:21 DoNotMess: udh
2017-05-25 21:22 Rivals_7: *ngueng*
2017-05-25 21:24 Rivals_7: 02:17:426 (137426|0,137467|1,137507|3,137548|2,137588|1,137629|0,137669|2,137710|3) - dem son
2017-05-25 21:24 Rivals_7: di apocalypse simple kali disini menggilas
2017-05-25 21:25 DoNotMess: spam doang :'v
2017-05-25 21:25 DoNotMess: dirapiin ajja?
2017-05-25 21:25 Rivals_7: rapiin aja da. berhubung star cuma 4* lel
2017-05-25 21:25 DoNotMess: siap
2017-05-25 21:25 DoNotMess: 12 43 12 43 gpp kan hrusnya?
2017-05-25 21:25 Rivals_7: y bisa sih
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: gw gmw stairs, kgk cocok
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:26 Rivals_7: kalo gk mau stair apocalypse ubah juga dong lel
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: kalo stair apocalypse
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: udah rapih
2017-05-25 21:26 DoNotMess: :v
2017-05-25 21:27 Rivals_7: :v
2017-05-25 21:27 DoNotMess: 02:17:588 - kalo diubah ini jdi masalah
2017-05-25 21:28 Rivals_7: diubah apanya? arah streamnya?
2017-05-25 21:28 Rivals_7: update dulu deh
2017-05-25 21:28 DoNotMess: hooh
2017-05-25 21:29 DoNotMess: kalo gw ubah jdi no stair
2017-05-25 21:29 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:29 DoNotMess: udh
2017-05-25 21:30 Rivals_7: gini lumayan juga si
2017-05-25 21:31 Rivals_7: btw - 02:17:264 (137264|3,137345|2) - pindahin ini ke 2|4 aja biar player gk salah baca sama stream 1/8nya lel
2017-05-25 21:31 DoNotMess: okok
2017-05-25 21:31 DoNotMess: 2|3 bole gk?
2017-05-25 21:31 DoNotMess: biar nempel
2017-05-25 21:31 Rivals_7: 23 bisa la
2017-05-25 21:32 DoNotMess: 02:15:967 - ini gk di komen? :V:V:V:V
2017-05-25 21:32 Rivals_7: lel ubh ubh aja la wkwk
2017-05-25 21:32 Rivals_7: biar konsisten juga si
2017-05-25 21:32 DoNotMess: ij
2017-05-25 21:32 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:34 Rivals_7: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1249423 Team Grimoire - Sheriruth [Apocalypse]]
2017-05-25 21:34 Rivals_7: sekalian lel
2017-05-25 21:34 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:36 Rivals_7: 00:18:399 (18399|0,18561|0,18723|0,18886|0) - hmm di sekitaran sini jacknya rada kurang konsisten keknya
2017-05-25 21:36 Rivals_7: disitu ada 4 tapi disini - 00:19:048 (19048|1,19210|1,19372|1) - cuma 3
2017-05-25 21:36 Rivals_7: disini malah cuma 2 - 00:20:021 (20021|1,20183|1) -
2017-05-25 21:37 DoNotMess: ok
2017-05-25 21:38 DoNotMess: udh gw ubah tar coba liad lg
2017-05-25 21:38 Rivals_7: ku mencoba speedmodding
2017-05-25 21:38 Rivals_7: mulai ngantuk wk
2017-05-25 21:38 DoNotMess: :v
2017-05-25 21:40 Rivals_7: diff ini tuh yg dulu kan cuma ente buff doang?
2017-05-25 21:40 DoNotMess: iya
2017-05-25 21:40 DoNotMess: buff dkit bngt ~_~
2017-05-25 21:41 DoNotMess: ini dh pernah di cek kok
2017-05-25 21:41 DoNotMess: yg td yg baru
2017-05-25 21:42 Rivals_7: 00:49:534 (49534|2) - uhhh https://puu.sh/w0KXp/cff1fafef9.jpg
2017-05-25 21:43 Rivals_7: ntar rada bingung juga ni soalnya pianonya susah banget didengerinnya
2017-05-25 21:43 DoNotMess: iya barusan gw baru notice dh gw pndekin
2017-05-25 21:43 DoNotMess: jdi 1 ktuk
2017-05-25 21:43 Rivals_7: o lel ntap
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: aku kan peka OwO
2017-05-25 21:44 Rivals_7: o ya harus map sendiri gk peka piye to :v
2017-05-25 21:44 Rivals_7: pekerjaan kami cuma molish doang
2017-05-25 21:44 Rivals_7: lelelel
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: betul betul
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: itu diff name arzenvald
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: cek jg tuh
2017-05-25 21:44 DoNotMess: hp od
2017-05-25 21:45 DoNotMess: 8,5 ok kan hrusnya
2017-05-25 21:45 Rivals_7: OD 8,5 bisa aja sih
2017-05-25 21:45 Rivals_7: tergantung dianya
2017-05-25 21:45 DoNotMess: tadi dia 8.. keknya trlalu ez buat X diff kalo 8 doang
2017-05-25 21:45 DoNotMess: gw ubah sndiri -.-
2017-05-25 21:46 DoNotMess: uyaudah balikin 8 ajja?
2017-05-25 21:47 Rivals_7: LNnya gk terlalu byk sih tapi rada tricky juga
2017-05-25 21:47 Rivals_7: sekitaran 8,3 juga mungkin bisa sih
2017-05-25 21:47 Rivals_7: 8 terlalu gampang
2017-05-25 21:47 DoNotMess: gw blom discuss ama dia :v balikin dlu deh, tar kena omel
2017-05-25 21:47 Rivals_7: wkwkw
2017-05-25 21:47 DoNotMess: makanya ;v
2017-05-25 21:48 DoNotMess: 8,5 udh pas bngt justru
2017-05-25 21:48 DoNotMess: 01:51:156 - disini spammable
2017-05-25 21:48 DoNotMess: 8,5 hp disini di spam masih bisa lewad
2017-05-25 21:49 Rivals_7: maso quadstream weee
2017-05-25 21:49 DoNotMess: namanya juga "X" diff :v
2017-05-25 21:49 DoNotMess: duh mw bab
2017-05-25 21:49 DoNotMess: ini msh ada gk :v'v'v'v'v'v
2017-05-25 21:49 Rivals_7: yha wkwk
2017-05-25 21:49 DoNotMess: ACTION 3 hari gk bab
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: gr gr diet uwu
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: masih mau diskusiin lagi kan sama arzen? sampe sini aja dulu dah wkwk
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: ku juga ngantuk si :v
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: okok
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: besok ae
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: yaudah tar gw kabarin lg kaloudah
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: siap mas
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: sep
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: makasih bnyk ya
2017-05-25 21:50 Rivals_7: npnp o/
2017-05-25 21:50 DoNotMess: "tukang poles" ^^

[Apocalypse]

00:49:859 (49859|0) - kalo dipikir kurang yakin sih kalo ada piano disini. ganti jadi note?

01:05:669 - 01:16:048 - add note to connect the stream instrument

01:09:561 (69561|0) - LN mungkin? flownya ilang kalo ksh ln situ.. keep bole ya

01:15:075 - hilang 1 kick (kalo add note. add W juga. di arzenvald's juga add W)

[Arzenvald's EXtinction]

02:11:264 - agar apa coba ni quad cuma buat kick lole. reduce or riot dripada riot gw gnti sndiri yak (

pemabagian kiainya juga gk konsisten sih but w/e fixed

Rivals_7

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Rivals_7 8 years ago

1234

[Tofu's Beginning]

01:19:210 (79210|0) - think you can heard how big the emphasis is. might have doubled this and add F

01:21:967 (81967|0) - 01:23:264 (83264|0) - F

01:31:048 (91048|3) - W
like........... you know, i guess you already know that we can add more than 1 HS in a single note so yea i didnt see what encourages you from doing so

It happens on and on and on (refer the others)

02:05:426 (125426|0) - think you forgot add note around here. well refer to - 02:03:156 (123156|2) - 02:00:561 (120561|3) - i guess

02:36:561 (156561|2) - no WF wtf lul

[Past]

02:16:696 (136696|0,136696|3,136940|0,136940|3) - not sure but this is kinda painful to read for those whose still progressing from EZ. the pattern before focus on percussion but then suddenly transitioned into piano is kinda awkward. would recommend it to make it consistent

[V's Present]

00:17:913 (17913|3,18237|0) - 1|3 respectively. its no different from - 00:15:156 (15156|3,15156|2,15318|3,15480|0,15480|1,15642|0) - so why the layering structure got changed?

01:34:453 (94453|0) - got feeling this should be extended to - 01:34:940 (94940|0) -

01:43:048 (103048|1) - the layering got different here. shorten that LN and add another LN here

[Arzenvald's EXtinction]

00:04:777 (4777|3) - move to 1 or smth. i mean why is there a quad jack on col 4 while - 00:06:886 (6886|3,7048|3,7210|3,7372|2) - this is not despite rhythmically similar

01:47:021 - intendedly missing or note or nah?

pls check HS carefully once more

DoNotMess

485 posts

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Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

Rivals_7 wrote:
1234

[Tofu's Beginning]

01:19:210 (79210|0) - think you can heard how big the emphasis is. might have doubled this and add F

01:21:967 (81967|0) - 01:23:264 (83264|0) - F

01:31:048 (91048|3) - W
like........... you know, i guess you already know that we can add more than 1 HS in a single note so yea i didnt see what encourages you from doing so

It happens on and on and on (refer the others)

02:05:426 (125426|0) - think you forgot add note around here. well refer to - 02:03:156 (123156|2) - 02:00:561 (120561|3) - i guess

02:36:561 (156561|2) - no WF wtf lul
fixed hitsound not pattern

[Past]

02:16:696 (136696|0,136696|3,136940|0,136940|3) - not sure but this is kinda painful to read for those whose still progressing from EZ. the pattern before focus on percussion but then suddenly transitioned into piano is kinda awkward. would recommend it to make it consistent agree, changed pattern to follow crash sound

[V's Present]

00:17:913 (17913|3,18237|0) - 1|3 respectively. its no different from - 00:15:156 (15156|3,15156|2,15318|3,15480|0,15480|1,15642|0) - so why the layering structure got changed?

01:34:453 (94453|0) - got feeling this should be extended to - 01:34:940 (94940|0) -

01:43:048 (103048|1) - the layering got different here. shorten that LN and add another LN here

[Arzenvald's EXtinction]

00:04:777 (4777|3) - move to 1 or smth. i mean why is there a quad jack on col 4 while - 00:06:886 (6886|3,7048|3,7210|3,7372|2) - this is not despite rhythmically similar

01:47:021 - intendedly missing or note or nah?

pls check HS carefully once more

hitsound fixed

Last edited by DoNotMess 8 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

btw thanks dah di updatin, hdd windows gw nge crash asdfagfasgdgasfdg

Virtue-

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Virtue- 8 years ago

Rivals_7 wrote:
1234

[V's Present]

00:17:913 (17913|3,18237|0) - 1|3 respectively. its no different from - 00:15:156 (15156|3,15156|2,15318|3,15480|0,15480|1,15642|0) - so why the layering structure got changed? why? it's the same as 00:15:156 (15156|3,15156|2,15318|3,15480|0,15480|1,15642|0) - so i wanna apply those change same as those... why not owo? =

01:34:453 (94453|0) - got feeling this should be extended to - 01:34:940 (94940|0) - sure owo
01:43:048 (103048|1) - the layering got different here. shorten that LN and add another LN here sure owo [2]

pls check HS carefully once more

and very very short chat

12:20 Virtue-: pony :vv
12:20 *Rivals_7 is away: later
12:20 Virtue-: =w=
12:20 Virtue-: cek diff w bntr dong, http://puu.sh/w6ho4/b0304a4852.rar --> dah w otak atik
12:21 Rivals_7: leh g diupload aja dulu kah. ribet :v
12:21 Virtue-: ya ntar pas di upload, lgsg kualeh
12:24 Rivals_7: 00:16:453 (16453|3,16940|0) - ni kalo mau jgn ngejack dah biar konsisten sama - 00:13:859 (13859|3,14345|0) -
12:24 Virtue-: diapain then? :v
12:25 Virtue-: indah? http://puu.sh/w6hz5/491a782c34.png
12:25 Rivals_7: pindahin la yg 00:16:453 nya
12:25 Rivals_7: yowes :v
12:25 Virtue-: zeeb
12:25 Virtue-: lanjut gan
12:27 Rivals_7: 01:34:453 (94453|0) - ni g diextend?
12:27 Virtue-: astaga, kelewat :v
12:27 Virtue-: 01:35:102 (95102|2) - w pindah ke 2 yg ini
12:27 Rivals_7: reeeeeeeeee
12:28 Rivals_7: ok
12:28 Virtue-: ok apa nih :v
12:28 Virtue-: kuali? :v
12:28 Rivals_7: bub juga blm kampret
12:28 Virtue-: D:
12:28 Virtue-: udh nih ya
12:28 Rivals_7: ngeng
12:28 Virtue-: indah kn diff w hehe :3
12:28 Rivals_7: ntar
12:28 Virtue-: =W=
12:29 Virtue-: msh ada D;
12:29 Rivals_7: g tau w nlm liat sampe akhir le
12:29 Rivals_7: blm*
12:29 Virtue-: oki" 
12:29 Rivals_7: o udh deng
12:30 Virtue-: w mw coba test 1x lagi

UPDATED

DoNotMess

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Topic Starter

DoNotMess 8 years ago

updated both GD diff with my own malicious hands

permission from tofu

permission from the furry guy

Rivals_7

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Rivals_7 8 years ago

nuke

Surono

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Surono 8 years ago

"dengan tangan kotorku"

tangan anda kotor!
bank sad cow.

GoodLucknut ya, noempang ngesetpastheng aza. karna bg dan lagu mengiqe

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

ngentit sur

Maxus

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Maxus 8 years ago

Will qualify tommorow, as i already have my cap today

21:33 *Maxus is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1249737 Team Grimoire - Sheriruth [Past]]
21:33 DoNotMess: yum irc?
21:33 Maxus: dayum iya, naikin dkit SR nya dan done 
21:34 DoNotMess: ok
21:34 DoNotMess: naikin trus send filenya ke gw AWKAWKWAKWAKAWKAWKAWK
21:34 DoNotMess: jk
21:35 Maxus: anyingggg ;vvvvv 
21:36 DoNotMess: udh siap nih
21:36 Maxus: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8278695 nah wa mw saranin kira2 bgini buat 00:20:994 - 
21:36 Maxus: soalny diff ini sepi tp virtue ngestream 
21:39 DoNotMess: http://img02.imgland.net/nPFlnL.png
21:39 Maxus: 00:24:886 - trus buat tiap tiap white line, cma add 1 note buat kick dah
21:39 DoNotMess: gni bole kah?
21:40 Maxus: boleh kok itu wkkw
21:40 DoNotMess: gw kalo bkin map NM diff slalu pake iidx style gitu
21:41 Maxus: 00:23:913 - 00:24:886 - dstny, buat kick tanpa piano, add 1 note buat lbih dense
21:41 DoNotMess: jdi cuman ngemap melody kbnyakan :'v
21:41 Maxus: buatlah style lu sndiri lahhh :vv
21:41 Maxus: soalny hardny bukan bkinan u tp GD,jdiny spreadny agk bgitu wkwk
21:41 DoNotMess: okok
21:42 DoNotMess: done
21:43 Maxus: kyk gmn? let me see
21:43 DoNotMess: tar aje pas udh slese, update, biar liadnya gmpng kawkwakawkwa
21:44 Maxus: 01:20:669 - u yakin ini mw 1/1 note ja bukan mw fokus kick ja?
21:44 Maxus: rda dominan soalny
21:44 DoNotMess: http://img03.imgland.net/T6FkdM.png gw ubah di 01:01:210 -
21:45 DoNotMess: pngn fokus di melodinya sih >.>
21:45 Maxus: fkus di melodi bkin noteny jd ga dense enough :<
21:45 DoNotMess: 01:22:615 (82615|3) - ini gw panjangin ya
21:46 Maxus: 01:20:669 - u bkin 1/2 1/2 SR nya naik sbrp byk?
21:46 DoNotMess: :'v kalo gw campur kesusahan gk?
21:46 DoNotMess: ok bntr gw coba campur
21:46 Maxus: pas sih buat gw, easy pake 1/1 , normal 1/2 , hard pke 1/2 double
21:49 DoNotMess: okok udh gw ubah
21:49 DoNotMess: tpi yg panjang melodinya itu gw keep
21:49 DoNotMess: yg 01:23:264 -
21:49 DoNotMess: tar liad aja lg deh
21:49 Maxus: itu ja sih, sisanya dah rata wkwk
21:49 DoNotMess: kalo gk puas aku bkin puas
21:49 Maxus: anjirr :vv
21:49 Maxus: buat map u pa ja deh /run
21:50 DoNotMess: ew
21:50 DoNotMess: kwakwakwa
21:51 DoNotMess: updated
21:51 DoNotMess: coba liad :v yg td lu tunjukkin
21:52 Maxus: perfect :p
21:53 Maxus: 00:29:102 - ilang tp noteny 
21:53 DoNotMess: o iya lupa 1
21:53 DoNotMess: h3h3
21:53 DoNotMess: brarti aku gk perfect di mata kamu dong ._.
21:54 DoNotMess: elah hitsound jjuga salah, bru nyadar
21:54 DoNotMess: yg bru gw tambahin hrusnya clap >.>
21:54 Maxus: najis njir :v
21:54 Maxus: iya, lu malah nambahinny whistle :v
21:54 DoNotMess: maafin aku kgk perfect sperti yg kamu harapkan uwu
21:55 DoNotMess: done
21:55 DoNotMess: ada lg?
21:55 Maxus: anyinggg :vv
21:55 Maxus: hitsoundny udah? 
21:55 DoNotMess: 01:03:804 - hmm , ada saran lbh bagus? gw ngerasa trill kgk cocok :'v
21:55 DoNotMess: udh
21:55 Maxus: 01:20:669 - sbnrny gapa2 sih klo lu mw campur LN lg 
21:56 DoNotMess: gjd deh gw ubah sndri :v
21:56 DoNotMess: 01:08:345 - ini perlu tmbahin note gk
21:56 Maxus: jadi LN trill lebih cocok imo, kan piano
21:56 DoNotMess: tkud ksusahan @_@
21:56 DoNotMess: gw cobain ae krasa hard diff
21:56 DoNotMess: kalo tmbh ln
21:56 Maxus: ga usah kalo kiai pertama
21:56 Maxus: soalny dh krasa dense
21:56 Maxus: lgipula kan variasi, dh boleh beda
21:56 DoNotMess: okok
21:57 Maxus: kan emng atmosphereny intense, gpp si imo wkkw
21:57 DoNotMess: h3h3 siap siap kena badai "pls make ur map consistent" XD
21:57 DoNotMess: gw ngemap amphisbaena
21:57 DoNotMess: ngakak
21:57 DoNotMess: gw variasiin, di mod "consistent pls"
21:57 DoNotMess: pas gw map consistent di blng "need more variation"
21:57 DoNotMess: tfw
21:57 Maxus: trgntung konsisten yg dmksd 
21:58 Maxus: klo misalny lu tiap 3 detik brubah pattern beda crita
21:58 Maxus: tapi klo misalny perbedaan dari kiai 1 ama kiai 2, ya gapa2
21:58 DoNotMess: hooh , gw kan map kgk trlalu dedikasi ke perkusi, lbh ke melodi
21:58 Maxus: yang penting beda section ja
21:58 DoNotMess: liad aja map ajee :'vv lbh gila lg wakawkawkawk
21:58 DoNotMess: ini udh done?
21:58 DoNotMess: hasil : nambah 0,02
21:58 DoNotMess: mantaf
21:59 Maxus: sip :D
21:59 DoNotMess: 01:01:453 (61453|2,61534|1,62102|1,62183|2) - eh ini bner bner gpp kan =w=
21:59 DoNotMess: tkud kena cyduk
22:00 DoNotMess: soalnya di kiai bnyk yg hrus diginiin
22:00 DoNotMess: :'v
22:00 Maxus: ga pa2 imo wkwk
22:00 Maxus: sante ja :v
22:01 Maxus: kiai u mw bkin 1/4 grace? :v
22:04 DoNotMess: ngggkkkk
22:05 DoNotMess: 02:06:723 (126723|3,126886|2,127048|3,127210|2,127372|3) -  ini jg gpp kan :V:V:V:V
22:06 Maxus: ga pa2 itu one hand trill mah wkwk

Maxus

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Maxus 8 years ago

Now it's ready.
Kepunahan Arzenvald intensify.

Surono

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Surono 8 years ago

cacadas dua ngepoz wkkwqwkowkqokwqokqw

gratz wibus <3

DoNotMess

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DoNotMess 8 years ago

Arcaea intensifies XD

Virtue-

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Virtue- 8 years ago

Ty maxus dah masukin ke panci WeKaWeKaWeKa
Gratz vic

Frim4503

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Frim4503 8 years ago

ga kerasa udh quali aja xD
grats

salam dari wkwkw land

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

who is ajeemaniz

quit w

Surono

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Surono 8 years ago

wong edan weka weka kawe

Aras

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Aras 8 years ago

Surono wrote:
wong edan weka weka kawe

lebih edan ini lah

n serigala muncul setelah 8 bulan :u dan menghylank lagi

Surono

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Surono 8 years ago

gebeleg malah baper disini

edit:
taik >:^C

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Aras

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Aras 8 years ago

shitpost intensifies ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)9

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

1/4 185 bpm > 1/3 200 bpm

Surono

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Surono 8 years ago

yeah ikr smfh gblg stufud aras.....

Akasha-

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Akasha- 8 years ago

Wasn't the title should be Sheriruth(from.Arcaea)

From what I know, this song ogirinally from "Grimoire of Darkness" and it's owned by Team Grimoire , plus, it was released in last M3-2016 event.

So with that, these informations they gave are official and should follow respectively.

Source: http://teamgrimoire.com
https://diverse.direct/team-grimoire/tg-005/

TL;DR:

Artist: Team Grimoire
Title: Sheriruth(from.Arcaea)

Maxus

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Maxus 8 years ago

However, the official game content stating Team Grimoire - Sheriruth

From https://i.ytimg.com/vi/yK_iOiAqYgM/maxresdefault.jpg or https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yK_iOiAqYgM

From https://i.ytimg.com/vi/QDDp5ylp_0I/maxresdefault.jpg or https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QDDp5ylp_0I Where in this one, You can see the song named "Sheriruth" instead.

According to current metadata draft rule, if there's 2 official metadata source, the mappers can choose any one of them, so the current one is fine.

Aras

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Aras 8 years ago

It's the same like anime tv size, for ex, they can simply put "Peace Sign (TV size/TV edit)" or just "Peace Sign"

DoNotMess

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DoNotMess 8 years ago

i dont know but i play arcaea and these songs dont show (from arcaea) or something...
if it's a serious dank meme big problem i will change it instead, but otherwise, like Maxus said, i can pick one of the meta so i prefer to keep

Arzenvald

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Arzenvald 8 years ago

dq because 2b bg

Surono

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Surono 8 years ago

Arzenvald wrote:
dq because 2b bg

dw, non-weebs songs are mostly using animu gurl bg.

Aras

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Aras 8 years ago

Surono wrote:
Arzenvald wrote:
dq because 2b bg
dw, non-weebs songs are mostly using animu gurl bg.

DQ for using monstrata BG with different color filter

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