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Hello Mage!
Requested Mod from the Featured Artist Modding Queue running by the Staff.
I'm here to help you with your Map!
General
Artist: Correct
Title: Correct
Source:
Wrong! // All Featured Artist Songs must have the Source "osu!"
Tags: You can add following Tags: "Power Up", "Dragonball", "Featured Artist"
AiMod: No Problems
Background: To save some space (1Mb) You can replace your BG with this file:
clickBPM/Offset: Correct
mp3/Hitsounds: Some of your hitsounds were a bit imbalanced and had a lot of unnecessary silence. To save some space i fixed all for you. You can get the fixes here:
click. Just replace them with your current one.
Other: -
Easy
00:06:079 (6079|0,6246|2,6413|1,6579|3) - Can i suggest to arrange the pattern a bit different? They have clearly a higher pitch than the Pattern 00:05:413 (5413|0,5579|2,5746|1,5913|3) - and you can emphasize this with arrange them a bit different. How about 2-1-3-4 ? (Follows even perfect the pitch!)
00:16:746 (16746|0,16913|1,17079|3,17246|2) - If you did apply my suggestion above please arrange these here too to something different.
00:26:413 (26413|3) - This one should be a Long Note, according to 00:31:746 (31746|1) - . Same sound.
Also 00:26:913 (26913|3,27246|0) - should be deleted because you didn't map it 00:32:246 - 00:32:579 - here too.
Nothing more to say.
Pretty solid Easy difficulty!
OWJI's Normal
00:02:746 (2746|3) - Add additionally a F hitsound here.
00:09:413 (9413|2,9746|0,9746|1,9913|3,9996|2,10079|1) - I would suggest to CTRL+H the Pattern here. That's mainly to change the triple more to PR and different from 00:04:579 (4579|3,4663|2,4746|1) - .
00:18:579 - Either Add here a note or remove a note from 00:07:913 (7913|3,7913|2) - to make it consistent.
00:24:079 - Hmm.. i am not sure if i can agree with the notespread here to the Easy. I mean, just take a look:
You have 2/1 Notes in the Easy and directly 1/4 pattern in the Normal. That's really not a good spread. Simply way to dense here.
My suggestion would be: use 1/2 notes! And to make a different to the following sounds i suggest you to jack these notes 00:24:746 (24746|0,24913|1) - and 00:25:079 (25079|2,25246|3) - . As example 4-4 1-1. Same you can do with notes from 00:25:413 (25413|0,25413|1,25579|2) - and 00:26:079 (26079|2,26246|1) - and so on. You understand what i mean? You doesn't need denser notes to emphasize the difference to the music!
00:29:579 (29579|1,29663|0,29746|2,29829|1,29913|3,29996|2,30079|0) - Same goes for here.
00:30:413 (30413|2,30413|3) - Remove one note from here. You didn't had a chord at 00:25:079 - too.
Overall you really should look more for a less denser note spread to the Easy in this difficulty. The spread is really really strange here.
01:00:079 (60079|2) - I suggest you to make this note a 1/1 Long Note. The sound belongs to 01:00:413 (60413|0,60579|2,60746|1,61079|3) - .
Also 01:00:746 (60746|1) - should be 1/2 beat longer.
01:04:746 - ??? What happens here? Why is this suddenly empty? xD
The Part here is basically like the very beginning of the Song. Like 00:02:746 - .
And here we have again the same like before. You mapped 00:07:913 - with a jump but 01:09:246 - not.
01:15:246 (75246|3) - And why you mapped this Sound here when you didn't Mapped it before ever?
01:20:246 (80246|2,80579|1) - And suddenly you begin to map here hihat's while you didn't map them before either.
Okay overall the Difficulty is not bad. But i have a problem that the note spread is simply too high to the Easy difficulty. (No i do not pay the SR attention)
Also you have a big problem with lack of consistency here. You should check the complete difficulty again.
Hard
00:10:746 (10746|3,10746|2,10913|1,10913|0) - and 00:11:413 (11413|2,11413|3,11579|1,11579|0) - . I highly suggest that you jack these too. The music is way more louder and noticeable than the kicks you did jack later. It simply feels like something is missing here.
00:19:413 - You have a missing Note here according to 00:08:746 -
Maybe CTRL+H 00:20:079 (20079|2,20413|1) - to remove 00:20:413 (20413|1,20746|1,21079|1,21413|1) -
00:21:413 (21413|1,21413|0,21579|2,21579|3,22079|1,22079|0,22246|3,22246|2) - If you did apply my suggestion above to jack the jumps then do it here too for consistency.
00:25:579 (25579|2,25579|1) - And why is this one a Jump? You doesn't have here any additionally sound. Just a hihat like 00:24:913 (24913|3,25246|0) - .
Please remove 00:25:579 (25579|1) - to keep the jack consistency.
00:26:246 (26246|3,26246|2) - Same here. Suddenly a jump? There's nothing that can justify it.
00:27:579 (27579|1,27663|0) - CTRL+G here for PR and variety.
00:28:079 (28079|2,28079|3,28246|1,28246|0) - Jack these to follow the music better.
00:30:913 (30913|2,30913|1,31579|1,31579|0) - Same thing like above.
00:32:913 (32913|2,32996|3) - And again a CTRL+G here for PR and variety.
00:33:413 (33413|1,33413|0,33579|2,33579|3) - here again like above. Jack for music
// Is it me or does the 2nd Part that repeats looks copy/pasted and mirrored? xD
00:44:746 (44746|3,44913|3,45079|0,45246|0) - Please no jacks
All 4 sounds have a different pitch. The Jacks are wrong.
00:45:913 (45913|3,45913|0,47246|3,47246|0) - Can i ask for what these jumps are? No Kick.. No snare.. i just hear the melody and a hihat like 00:48:246 (48246|1,48913|2) - and these are single notes too.
00:51:246 (51246|1,51246|0,52579|2,52579|3) - Same goes for these.
01:01:579 -
The Spread to the Normal here is really badI mean look at it:
While the Normal is using 1/2 notes you use already 1/2 jumps with 1/4 pattern here.
I highly recommend you to nerf this part. Here is what i would suggest you
Use 1/4 triples with a jump at the end. I also arranged the last 4 jumps at 01:02:746 - . The single jack to the next jump represent the intensity of the ending.
01:12:079 (72079|3,72079|2,72246|1,72246|0,72746|3,72746|2,72913|1,72913|0) - If you did apply the Jack suggestion at the beginning do the same here.
01:22:746 (82746|1,82746|0,82913|2,82913|3,83413|0,83413|1,83579|2,83579|3) - And here.
Overall a pretty solid Hard but needs more work. Especially the spread to the Normal looks a bit.. harsh.
Maximum
00:03:246 (3246|3,3246|1) - 00:08:579 (8579|2,8579|3) - Why the jumps here? You have here only a hihat. And really only a hihat. That's too much. Delete a note.
00:13:913 (13913|2,13913|1) - 00:19:246 (19246|0,19246|3) - Same like above.
00:15:079 - Delete here a note. See at 00:04:413 - . Consistency~
For a better transition i suggest you to move 00:26:079 (26079|1) - to 3 and 00:26:413 (26413|2) - to 1.
00:31:413 (31413|2) - Same like above. This one to 2 and 00:31:746 (31746|1) - to 4
00:44:746 (44746|2,44913|2,45079|1,45246|1) - I think i mentioned this in Hard? The jacks here are wrong placed. All 4 notes have a different pitch so jacks doesn't fit here.
00:58:246 (58246|2,58413|2,58579|2) - That feels really weird. I highly suggest you to arrange the pattern here. Remove the triple jack.
01:02:746 - Pattern suggestion for better emphasis:
Well, i won't mod the remaining part because it's basically like the beginning and i would just repeat myself because that's the same issues like mentioned above.
Overall a pretty good diff. Yummy Noodles.
That's all. I hope my suggestions help you! Overall a good Map but i have a problem with the note spread.
Not looking at SR because SR says nothing.. The important is really the note spread.
I wish you good luck!