Thanks for the modNo_sync wrote:
hi!
From my NM/M4M queue.
Columns 7K 0|1|2| 3 |4|5|6GeneralMP3: PASS
BG:MISSPASSVideo: MISS
1874x1200 isn't a good a Background size. Try to reduce it to 1366x768, 1280x720, or 1024x768.Upss! edited, more info below :3BPM & Offset: PASS
- The video has sound. You need a clean video without sound.
Diff.Spread: PASS
Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: MISSHitsound: PASS
- Few things...
- EZ: OD=8 -> OD=7 | HP=8 -> HP=7
- Ron's NM: OD=8 -> OD=7.5
Hitsound Volume: PASS
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: MISSWidescreen Support: MISS
- The original soundtrack doesn't have a TV Size version of this song: http://vgmdb.net/album/53674 , http://key.soundslabel.com/ksl_html/ksl0110/ksl0110.html
- ... and the first time that song appear neither have the TV Size ver.: http://vgmdb.net/album/53671 , http://key.soundslabel.com/ksl_html/ksl0105/ksl0105.html
- Conclusion: Erase the "TV Size" from the title but add it in the tags, also add "How-Low-Hello" and "Hatsunetsu Days" because of the single title.
Preview Point: PASS?
- Uncheck Widescreen Support on Ron's NM, Sora's HD and EZ.
AiMod Things: PASS
- I like more 00:44:421 or 00:44:618...
Mod![EZ]00:05:934 (5934|2,6131|3) - These two notes will be better arranged like: 00:05:342 (5342|4,5539|4) , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456114 <- Check the first note too: 00:05:144 (5144|2) - Move to |1|.
00:15:013 (15013|6,15407|5) - 00:15:013 (15013|6) - to |5| and 00:15:407 (15407|5) - to | 3 |
00:30:802 (30802|1) - To |2|
00:35:736 (35736|3,37315|3) - If you like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456188
00:45:802 (45802|1,45802|2,46197|5,46197|4,46592|1) - Well leaving aside the use of chords in EZ (a bit hard), i think you're using chords for snare, not for kicks: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456239 This issue repeats starting in the kiai to the end.
01:01:000 (61000|4,61197|3,61394|1,61592|5,61789|3,61986|4,61986|2,62776|5,62776|1) - If you like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456292
01:04:552 (64552|3) - I think this starts on 01:04:355 and ends 01:04:750.
01:18:763 (78763|3,78960|3) - 01:18:763 (78763|3) - to |2| and 01:18:960 (78960|3) - to |4| , because i think that stack is a bit hard.
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00:50:934 (50934|6,50934|0) - Why not Finish hitsound? (only one note because too loud)
00:57:250 (57250|4,57250|2) - ^
01:01:986 (61986|5,61986|1,62776|4,62776|2,63565|6,63565|0) - ^
01:06:723 (66723|6,66723|0) - ^
01:12:644 (72644|3,73039|1,73039|0) - ^
01:18:763 (78763|3,78960|3,79355|5,79355|1) - ^
01:24:092 (84092|5,84881|1) - ^
01:25:671 (85671|2,85671|4) - ^
01:26:855 (86855|0,86855|1) - ^
...also don't forget appling Clap hitsounds for the snares.
[Ron's NM]00:01:394 (1394|4,1394|2,1592|4,1592|2,1789|2,1789|4) - Not exactly the same actually, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456408
00:19:355 to 00:31:986 - I don't understand too much what sounds you represent with those chords... kick or snare. Is right that looks good, but check this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456504 <- Snares Highlighted.
00:35:144 (35144|2,35144|1,35342|4,35342|5,35539|1,35539|2,35736|6,35736|5,36131|3) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456543
00:37:315 (37315|1,37315|2,37710|3,37907|4,38105|2,38302|6,38302|4) - Try this too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456556
00:38:302 to 00:41:460 - Same issue as 00:19:355 to 00:31:986 with layering... I'll skip pointing this from now on.
00:43:039 (43039|2,43039|0,43236|6,43236|4,43434|2,43434|1,43631|4,43631|5,43829|1,43829|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456573
01:01:986 (61986|4,61986|0,61986|6,62776|6,62776|1,62776|3,63565|3) - Using three notes in NM is a bit hard, try to reduce to two notes for each cymbal.
[Sora's HD]I'm really strict with the layering... like always use chord for snares and never use chord for kicks (at least in the same difficulty), your map looks good besides that... so i'll shut up. xD lol, im quite picky on where to put chords here bcuz it might become harder, and so it turns out like that xD
01:24:881 (84881|3,84881|2,84881|1,85671|6,85671|5,85671|0) - Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456762 rearranged instead
01:28:730 (88730|1) - As you mapped before, only one note? Add note more on | 3 | this part is similar to 01:27:546 (87546|1,88138|5) and it doesnt have deep bass sound like 01:27:644 and 01:28:236
That's all, Good work :3
[MX]00:06:131 (6131|6,6329|6,6526|6,6723|6) - Try to spread the notes better. Too much stack of notes there.
01:27:250 to the end - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7456860
574574 Id. mapset... lol
Good Luck to all
Edit: HD Backgrounds allowed?! Like 4 months old ayy... i need to learn this now :V
update: https://puu.sh/uqTyy.txt