1. Easy (2.23 stars, 100 notes)
2. Hard (4.61 stars, 183 notes)
3. Insane (4.97 stars, 245 notes)
4. Normal (3.96 stars, 144 notes)

• 1. BPM 180 , Offset 800

wmfchris wrote:

[insane]
-unsanpped. Use grid level 3 and distance spacing (1.1x?) to resnap, such as:
0:27:799 (10,11,12) uneven spacing, same as (15,16,17)
-many combos are too long. Try to make them shorter.

[hard]
0:02:466 (4) down 1 grid
0:27:799 (1,2,3) uneven spacing
0:34:633 (3,4,5) spacing

star.

Joon wrote:

hi

my modding

Audio Volume 10 -> 6 all diff change

[Easy]
00:04:799 (5) - End Notes remove finish
00:07:466 (3) - ^
00:48:633 (6) - Insert Break Time

[Normal]
00:30:799 (2) - Start Notes remove clap
00:42:466 (3) - add wihstle
00:43:133 (1) - ^
00:43:800 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:49:133 (9) - add clap
00:49:466 (10) - remove clap
00:50:133 (13) - change finish

eveless wrote:

why mp3 is 1869 then you post you like 6918..? well this is not mod , just ask because i like 6918 too...
but i dont think this song is bl so can you delete 1st in your post?
I'm happy to see someone noticed that :3 The1869 is kind of a joke since I don't think that 18 would be the seme and 69 uke, that pairing makes me laugh but I like it too, BUT I like 6918 more :3
And about the BL thing is because of the BG on Insane, I guess is kind of suggestive but oh well ~ :3
all modding is suggestion:

[general]
how about add 6918 or 1869 in tags?
I was thinking about doing that, I'll do it for now but if people tell me that they're not useful as tags I'd remove also I don't think lot of people know about these pairings D:

[Insane]
00:02:633 (5) - delete the note Done ~
00:03:633 (8) - delete and add note in 00:03:966 will better Done ~
00:08:133 (7) - move it on top of 5 Done ~
00:13:799 (6) - New combo because of the spacing changed Done ~
00:17:633 (2) - move it to 00:17:966 Done ~
00:55:966 (7) - delete it or move it to 00:56:299 Done ~
01:05:133 (7) - new combo Done ~
01:14:966 (6) - move it to 01:14:966 and delete clap Done ~
01:19:299 (3,4,6) - move them to the 01:18:466 (7) 's position I don't understand very well what you want me to do here, so I'll leave it like how it is now

[Hard]
00:11:799 (1) - can you change a pattern? i mean , please dont placed spin in here. same as 01:13:466 (1)
00:41:966 (x) - add note
01:00:133 (6) - New combo
01:05:799 (2) - delete the whistle or change soft-wh?
All done ~

[Normal]
00:05:466 (5) - move it under the 3
00:48:133 (5) - delete the end's clap
01:25:799 (3) - delete the whistle
All done ~
[Easy]
00:27:466 (4) - delete finish
00:33:799 (5) - ^
00:38:133 (3) - delete end's finish
00:44:466 (3) - yeah..delete finish will omit others
00:55:466 (3) - k , this finish can be leave
All done~

i like this song
Me too, thanks for the mod eveless ~ <3

1. I think that the files "hit100.png" , "hit300,png", etc. are too big , you should reduce the size a bit.
2. Sliderball is hard to see, try to make it more visible by changing the colour for something a bit darker.
3. "spinner-circle.png" must be 666x666 resize please.
4. Preview time must be the same for all the difficulties. [Hard] is different.
5. Disable letterboxing during breaks.
6. Tags: "6918, 1869" these are too generic you should delete them.
7. It would be nice if you add 1 more combo colour.

1. 00:18:133 (3) - Delete this circle, then:
2. 00:18:466 (4) - Move this here: 00:18:133
3. 01:02:133 (4,5) - Unstack (5)
4. The hitsound doesn't sound good my suggestion is: Use "Clap" on every 2nd and 4th white tick. Ask me in-game if you don't understand me :3

1. 00:53:300 (6) - Delete this note.Then:
2. 00:53:133 (X) - Add a note here.
3. 00:53:466 (X) - ^
4. 01:10:799 (1,2,3,4) - Align (4) with (2) ?

1. 00:10:633 (5,6,7,8,1) - You should move (1) so it ends in the same place as (5)
2. Check your combos carefully.

1. I guess it's Ok.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General:

1. I think that the files "hit100.png" , "hit300,png", etc. are too big , you should reduce the size a bit. I'll keep it for now, if someone else complains then I'd change it ~
2. Sliderball is hard to see, try to make it more visible by changing the colour for something a bit darker. I'll keep it for now, if someone else complains then I'd change it ~
3. "spinner-circle.png" must be 666x666 resize please. Done ~
4. Preview time must be the same for all the difficulties. [Hard] is different. Done ~
5. Disable letterboxing during breaks. Done ~
6. Tags: "6918, 1869" these are too generic you should delete them. Done ~
7. It would be nice if you add 1 more combo colour. I'd have to say no to this ~

Easy

1. 00:18:133 (3) - Delete this circle, then:
2. 00:18:466 (4) - Move this here: 00:18:133
3. 01:02:133 (4,5) - Unstack (5)
4. The hitsound doesn't sound good my suggestion is: Use "Clap" on every 2nd and 4th white tick. Ask me in-game if you don't understand me :3

Done ~

Normal

1. 00:53:300 (6) - Delete this note.Then:
2. 00:53:133 (X) - Add a note here.
3. 00:53:466 (X) - ^
4. 01:10:799 (1,2,3,4) - Align (4) with (2) ?

Done ~

Hard

1. 00:10:633 (5,6,7,8,1) - You should move (1) so it ends in the same place as (5)
2. Check your combos carefully.

Done ~

Insane

1. I guess it's Ok.

Yay ~

Good job, keep it up, Good Luck.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy]
00:02:133 (1) - Finish at end.
00:36:799 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent.
00:43:799 (1) - ^
00:44:466 (4) - Add finish.
00:57:799 (1) - Remove NC? Just feels better. And it goes better with the song.
All done ~

[Normal]
00:02:133 (3) - Finish a start.
00:43:133 (1) - Remove NC. New Combo doesn't fit.
00:55:799 (8) - Finish at slider end.
01:05:466 (1) - Pretty soon after the spinner don't you think? Maybe move end the spinner 01:04:799 ?
All done ~

[Hard]
00:02:133 (3) - Finish. (This is just a suggestion. Same for all diffs.)
00:31:466 (1) - Random NC. Remove it.
00:32:299 (1) - Remove NC? This one can probably stay.
All done ~ except for the last one since the combo will be too long for a hard if I took away the NC

[Insane]
00:02:133 (3) - Finish.
00:39:466 (5) - Align with 4?
All done ~


Overall: Solid map. Nice and clean. Not much to say.

Have a STAR~

Astom wrote:

Wenas~

[Skin]
-BG4.png <-- kill xD Opps ~ Listo xD
-scorebar-colour-0.png cambiale el nombre a scorebar-colour.png Okk ~

[SB]
-Agregale fade a los lyrics al aparecer y desaparecer Okk, me voy a poner a trabajar en eso ahora mismo

Esop :>
Star~

Colin Hou wrote:

Nothing to compain about. (Insane is indeed a Hard-like diff with higher spacing, but fine )

So star~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Ohai Lovhin Heey ~ :3

[General]
read this thread for a delicious slider viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 :3 Thanks :3 I fixed some of my sliderbut I think most of them are good
remember the video maximum size is 800x600, 640x400 is better if you can find a good one with that size
sorry I can't help you with the vid ;_; Just for you, I spent almost 2 hours trying to make the video fit the reqs and stay with the same quality xD
the hitcirlce colors are way too blinding whether on kiai time or not, maybe change/darken it B-but sakura flowers are those colors D: Well, I changed one color and made it darker :3

[Skin & SB]
no combo burst? You know, is hard to find good image of these guys so I'll leave it with no comboburs until I find good ones :3
hmm can you add some kind of border around the score-bg ? the current one is kinda plain with only white on it maybe a pink feathered border is good Added a pink glow around it ~
the pause-retry is bigger then the other two pause menu, it looks weird. I suggest you to make it the same size Okk ~ They should be the same size now :3
umm I still got BG4.png have you re-full submit it? or maybe just me? I'm pretty sure I full-sub but just in case, I'd do it again xD

[Easy]
kinda tricky for an easy Really ?? D:
Can you find another BG for easy? the current one is kinda blurry That’s the point xD Well like I said is really hard to find good pics of these guys, and I quite like this BG :3
00:21:133 (4) - remove this then make 00:20:799 (3) into long slider that ends on 00:21:799
00:32:799 (4,5) - unstack these 2 novice aren't good at slider end stack like this
00:53:800 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:466 (1,2) - ^
01:11:466 (3) - all slider before this follows the vocal (01:08:800 (3) - ), so better make this the same length too. Add a circle on the empty space as you see fit
01:19:799 (3) - might as well make this follow the vocal too, cause most of the notes here follow vocal
01:21:799 (2) - ah this works very well
01:26:133 (1) - end the spinner on 01:27:466
All done ~

[Normal]
umm did you follow the vocals or rythem?
01:26:133 (1) - end the spinner on 01:27:466
I’m following the vocals the most and done ~

[Hard]
00:50:300 (6) - remove this?
01:03:466 (1) - the 0.5 don't fit cause even the music doesn't indicate any slowing maybe make it into spinner
Aww I liked that 0.5 slider oh well, done ~

[Insane]
01:05:133 (1) - the 0.5 don't fit cause even the music doesn't indicate any slowing maybe make it into spinner
Bye 0.5 slider, done ~

Easy and normal is preety good, but hard and insane are kinda random. I can't understand what you're following
also try using more slider it'll make the map more easier to read and also give a good flow (if it used right)
Aww, well, I will try to re-map some parts of hard and insane + use more sliders in them and try to follow the vocals more since they’re more easy to follow than the beat :3

Good Luck~

Lovely Crab wrote:

[Easy]
01:08:466(2) - add a whistle?
01:11:133(2) - ^
01:13:799(2) - ^
Seems fine.
Done ~

[Normal]
00:05:466(5,6) - exchange
00:07:466(3,4) - ^
00:18:799(5,6) - ^
use more whistle.(just a suggestion)
Done ~

[Hard]
00:21:799(x) - add a note
00:21:966(5) - del
00:35:133(1) - make a symmetry
00:57:299(2) - move it to 00:57:466
Done ~

[Insane]
so similar with Hard,why not use more 1/4 in the map?i know the song's real bpm is 90,but i still suggest you should use 1/4 in 180.
such like

SPOILER

00:05:799(5) - 1 grid up
00:32:799(5) - ^ like (7,8)
00:44:466(6) - 1 grid down
00:53:466(x) - add a note?
01:22:133(3) - 1 grid right
01:24:133(1) - this slide is ugly,and not fit the rhythm,do like this

SPOILER

Done ~

my star

lovhin456 wrote:

* I'd be very very VERY grateful if someone could lower the size of the video <3

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Artist: Should be "Kondou Takashi & Iida Toshinobu" as you can see here
Tags: Add "Katei kyoushi" and "Tutor"

lovhin456 wrote:

* I'd be very very VERY grateful if someone could lower the size of the video <3

I'll see what I can do, if osu! will let me download the map

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Here is the video

Sakura Addiction

Just a suggestion:
[Normal]
Decrease "Circle Size" by 1? (that is make the circle bigger).

P.S. There are two video in this archive.
"Sakura Addiction" has 6 MB~
"Sakura Addiction (better)" has 8 MB~

I suggest to put the first, because is smaller and there is a minimum difference with the other video.
Btw, I leave the choose to you


Star

kuyukiP wrote:

Ahhh, sorry for being so late, I've been slacking off xD
Saving a place for mod~
(But take my star first, I have seen this map before and I love it )

KenezzEdward wrote:

Hola Lovhin! o/

Me gusto bastante tú mapa y me di la tarea de darle una pequeña revision....
Solamente algunas recomendaciones~

General

Que linda Diff Easy =D
Hit300k y Hit300g son muy parecidos, no es un problema para mi pero para algunos talvez ><

Easy

-01:19:466 (2,3) - Se oye mejor si el 3 va en el lugar del 2...

Normal

-Todo bien~

Hard

-00:17:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Esta parte se oye rara, Talvez... [attachment=0:5ffe5]lovhin2.jpg[/attachment:5ffe5]-01:11:799 (5,6,7,8,9) - Se oye mejor asi... [attachment=1:5ffe5]lovhin.jpg[/attachment:5ffe5]-01:22:466 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Insane

-Todo bien~

Estupendo Map~ ^^
Star!

Edit: Ups se me escapo poner la estrellita *.*

OngakuRemix wrote:

star!

niedzwiedz1124 wrote:

bgs are ghay,but who cares :3

kuyukiP wrote:

Sorry for such the long wait, I completely forgot ;A;
it's edited now, though!

James2250 wrote:

Your spinner is unrankable at the moment, you need something visible in the center that spins.
(Are you sure last word in source is meant to be all caps)

Easy:
I don't follow the clap rhythm some of the time but ok?
End kiai time at the same place as the other difficulties
00:27:466 (4,1) - avoid anti jump?

Normal:
Looks good

Hard:
00:19:133 (4,5,1) - spacing

Insane:
Looks good

You get a star~

ErufenRito wrote:

Skin:

I recommend using combo colours more different than the background's. Currently I'm having some trouble seeing some notes. Particularly this one 01:15:633 (9). Anyways, at least the light pink one blend a lot with the combo number as well...
Sakura flowers are pink ... light pink so I won't change the color, I tried to do something with the default numbers but it end up very bad so yeah ... I'm keeping them.


Also the combo colours... Sighs, how the hell am i going to diffenciate a 300 or a 100 withought having the need of reding them? But then, this is just a personal matter.
They are not combo colours ... they're hitbursts and I can read them perfectly fine while playing, but anyways I'll change them just in case ... Okk, I tried to change them and they looked horrible ... not changing them anymore
--------

Your mp3 file have 256 kbps bitrate, max should be 192 kbps, ask someone about it if you don't know what i'm talking about.
Okk

Your whole map is not bad, found nothing that is actually wrong, although i do recommend you to polish a little bit your sliders (specially your arcs), for that i recommend you to check this thread viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
I think my sliders are fine, but thanks.

Wait, i did find something wrong, you forgot to end your kiai time in easy.
Fixed
Thanks.

Tonoko wrote:

:) hi

only a little problems here

[Normal]
01:11:466 (3,4) - use the some style like 01:08:466 (6,7) sounds better.

[hard]
00:16:299 (6) - not really a problem here.just have a look.

[insane]
not too hard for me ><
haha

pretty good >< star

SamiPale wrote:

Hi, lovhin here's my suggestions

[General]
though I prefer unsilencing the spinner at the end... @_@

[Hard]
HP-1?
00:03:466(8) - Align with (6)?
00:14:133(5,6) - This notes end at red tick, so sounds a little unstable, add a note at 00:14:633?
00:17:133(x) - Add a note?
01:18:799(1) - Clap?
01:19:466(1) - Finish instead of Clap?

[Insane]
01:05:466(1) - Change to Normal Hitsound?

hmm...Perhaps unify the finish hitsound to all diffs will be perfect?

star~

• - Offset should +20ms

• 00:10:633 (5,7) - whislte
  00:15:799 (4,5,6,7,8) - rhythm is weird, place it with x xx xx, and add a whistle on 00:16:133 (5) -
  00:18:133 (3) - remove the sliderwhistle, it doesn't sound good
  00:20:133 (1) - finish on slider's end
  00:21:799 (5) - whistle
  00:22:133 (6) - finish
  00:32:133 - add a circle with clap here, 00:32:299 (1) - delete this one
  00:39:466 (7,8,9,10,11) - weird placement, especially when you use Doubletime.
  00:43:300 (8) - move it to 00:43:466 - , the rhythm should be more clear
  00:44:800 (6) - finish on start of the slider
  00:46:466 (2,3) - clap
  00:47:466 (4) - finish sounds more better than clap imo
  00:55:799 - add a circle with clap or whistle here
  00:57:799 (3,4,5) - xxxxx x xxx or xxx x x xxx
  
  
  
  Insane
  [list:0006e]

SapphireGhost wrote:

Easy
00:22:153 (1) Spinner here is kind of abrupt? Umm, I'll keep it
00:40:486 (1) A part of me wants to make this slider one tick earlier, but don't worry about that... Keeping this too

Normal
00:33:153 (6) The note here feels a bit weird to me, but whatever. Delete it, it felt weird you were right :3

Insane
00:13:799 (1,2,3) Feels a little strange since I don't see this pattern on the previous diffs, but it's okay. :3

Ah, by now I could not find many problems with this beatmap! So you get a star!

Weezy wrote:

Really nice map lovhin
found nothing wrong here >w<

One question, what's with the pineapple on the fruit ryuuta? :S

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
Good.

[Normal]
Also good.

[Hard]
Also good, orz

[Insane]
Gaah. Good as well.


The only thing I didn't like were some of your sliders. Work on making them delicious.

but good job~

1. Well instead of using the default soft claps on the first timing section, you could use the "normal-hitnormal" from the template skin as your "soft-hitclap". Believe me, it sounds good. To download the template skin, just open "osume" on the same folder where osu! is installed, and go to the "extra" tab. Remember to set the custom overrides on.
   It's just a suggestion though Keep those soft claps if you want to.

1. 01:14:486 (4, 5) - Move these one grid left.
2. 01:19:153 (1, 2) - Even though this seems to be ok, I'd say it would look more consistent if you moved these one grid down.
3. 01:26:153 (SP) - This should end with a finish >:D Same for all difficulties.

1. 09:486 (1) - Just for you to know, there's an easier way to do these kinds of sliders:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 34:153 (9) - New combo here, and remove it from the next slider.
3. 38:819 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add it to the next slider. Then remove the new combo at 40:486.

1. 40:153 (8) - Add a clap.

1. 05:799 (5) - 1 grid left.
2. 1:09:133 (5) - 1 grid right.
3. 1:09:466 (7, 8, 9, 1) - 1 grid left and 2 grids up.
4. 1:25:466 (1) - Add a clap at the end of the slider (after the repetition).

ziin wrote:

[skin]
I really do not like this skin, background, and combo color choice. Sure, it fits and is well done, but it's blinding me. Kiai is especially blinding.
The song is about sakura flowers and sakura flowers are pink, light pink so that is what I wanted, a skin that will match the theme ._.
And I know is blinding during kiai, I will try to get a diff. bg I guess

approachcircle.png - This is very thin. Could you use the default one (from templateskin)? Is the same as the template one ._.
default numbers - There is a reason most numbers are outlined. If you weren't using such light colors, (ie dark purple, dark orange like you see in those nightcore maps with the purely white numbers) this would be fine. However it is very difficult to see as is. A slightly gray outline would help tremendously. Ok, I will make the outline or something
fruit-ryuuta.png - I think the actual plate needs to be centered perfectly. I'm going to delete the fruit-ryuutas, I don't like them anymore
hit50, etc... - This is another personal problem. I think the hits should always be different colors (so it's easier to see what hit you got). Often times I'll play these maps and find out I got a 100 when I thought I was doing perfectly. You could do a light gray for 50, light green for 100, and keep the pink ones for 300.
Maybe the gray for 50 is good but sakura flowers are not green ._. I'll think about something

So for colors, if you can find some colors you like better which are darker, that would be good. It would also be good to use the same colors on all difficulties. Easy's colors are pretty good, though they could be a little darker.
I used the same colors for all diffs, I'm changing one

[general]
can you go through and delete most/all of the claps which are on beat 1 (the long white tick)? Generally clapping patterns go best on beats 2 and 4, and since this is song is in cut time (2:2) it would be best to only put them on beat 3 (which is beat 2 in cut time). My explanation may be a little confusing, but I think it sounds better. You can keep some of the claps on beat 1 in kiai.
I'm doing 2 and 4 beat thing

[easy]
00:24:486 (1) - move over to 00:24:819 and either take off 1 repeat or delete the circle it overlaps. Pickup notes aren't worth mapping in easy.
00:35:153 (1) - http://puu.sh/11Gk
and so on. Just make sure you're hitting a note on beat 1, don't just slide over it. That's really important for easy.
Remapping this, not all Easy but some parts

[normal]
same as easy, don't slide over beat 1.
00:51:153 (1) -

[hard]
00:10:153 (3,4,5,6,7) - these beats never make any sense to me, and you mapped it differently in insane too (and I don't like it there either). If you want to map the vibrato in the vocals, just use a slider.
00:13:653 (4,6,7) - ^
00:16:320 (6,7) - ^
00:26:819 (8) - move back 1/2 to red tick, shorten by 1, fill in the empty space with circles.
00:29:653 - add note
00:38:486 (4) - delete this
00:38:986 - add note
00:41:819 - ^
00:44:153 (4,5) - make these 1/2 sliders.
00:45:820 (1,2,3) - this is boring
00:48:819 - add note
01:06:153 - if you map the bass guitar's rhythm, you'll get most of the drum's rhythm, and all of the vocals. I have no idea why you put your sliders where you did. Here's the first measure: http://puu.sh/11Ha
Remapping some parts ~

[insane]
00:22:799 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - no.
00:23:466 - so this whole section has a really nice guitar section. Could you map that?
Remapping this ~
I can't mod anymore, It's got too many rhythms which don't make any sense to me.
Umm, thanks. Your comments actually motivated me to remap this

1. Timing on every stage is 820. Why here it's 800? o_O (way too early) Fix it please.
2. 00:14:236 (5) - Note is out of rhythm, put it on white tick (on the left of course).

1. Some sliders don't look symmetrical. Examples: slider at 00:41:819 (2), 00:47:153 (4), 00:58:153 (4). Other than that, nothing to complain.

1. Just like in easy a couple of sliders that are not symmetrical, however these are alot harder to spot with naked eye. I won't say which ones since you probably wouldn't even notice until you look at the grid closely. Nobody is perfect. :p Nothing to complain here.

1. 00:05:486 (4) - Why not change this slider into a triplet + 1 circle like it is in the previous combo?
2. 00:35:153 (1,2) - I suggest to curve this slider better and make it symmetrical. Currently this doesn't look nice to me. Try something like this. I think this looks much better, just don't forget to re-align other notes in the combo so they are in line with the previous ones (move 3 to the same height as 2 is now, etc).
3. 00:37:486 (4) - Move this note to 00:37:319 so it follows the voice properly.

1. 00:32:486 (5) - Clap on the start of the slider.
2. 01:05:153 (1) - ^
3. I am not sure if this is intentional but there are places where you can put more claps after the times above.

Dragvon wrote:

<Hard>
• 00:29:653 (X) - Maybe a note here? To sound like 00:34:153 (1,2,3,4) ~ Done ~
• 00:37:319 (4) - I would put this one a bit farther.Okk ~
• 00:59:153 (5) - +2 repeats? I see why you did it like this but, i just had to say it I'll keep it for now ;3
Comments: Fun hard :>

<Insane>
• 00:22:403 (6,7,8,9) - Those kick-sliders scared me at first due to their speed but, since this is an insane i think it's okay to keep them.Keeping them ~
• 00:41:986 (3) - Imo a 1/2 slider with one repeat would sound better here.Done ~
• 00:48:486 (X) - Adding a note here with Claps sounds nice and keeps a constant flow~ Yessss ~
Comments: I see what you did there...lol I didn't notice until now I swear xD

Okay... i think that's it for now :3
Star!

Combo1 : 255,100,100
Combo2 : 251,187,203

180,224,84153,6,0,B|112:312|-24:192|112:72|184:164,1,300,0|8

Mafiamaster wrote:

I couldn't see my cursor at all during the spinner. Consider doing something about it.
Okk ~ Added a custom cursor, I hope is better now ;~;

[Insane]
00:22:403 (6,7,8) - This is unnecessary. It doesn't sound good either. Changed to something else

For consistency, uncheck letterboxing from this difficulty. Done ~

Sandpig wrote:

star -w-

Insane

00:24:653 (1) - end it on a white tick or a red tick. the note on blue tick doesn't follow the music and has a bad effect on your flow.
Oh! I missed that, thanks for pointing that out, fixed ~

no kds Are you sure ? Anyways, thanks for the mod ~