eveless wrote:

why mp3 is 1869 then you post you like 6918..? well this is not mod , just ask because i like 6918 too...
but i dont think this song is bl so can you delete 1st in your post?
I'm happy to see someone noticed that :3 The1869 is kind of a joke since I don't think that 18 would be the seme and 69 uke, that pairing makes me laugh but I like it too, BUT I like 6918 more :3
And about the BL thing is because of the BG on Insane, I guess is kind of suggestive but oh well ~ :3
all modding is suggestion:

[general]
how about add 6918 or 1869 in tags?
I was thinking about doing that, I'll do it for now but if people tell me that they're not useful as tags I'd remove also I don't think lot of people know about these pairings D:

[Insane]
00:02:633 (5) - delete the note Done ~
00:03:633 (8) - delete and add note in 00:03:966 will better Done ~
00:08:133 (7) - move it on top of 5 Done ~
00:13:799 (6) - New combo because of the spacing changed Done ~
00:17:633 (2) - move it to 00:17:966 Done ~
00:55:966 (7) - delete it or move it to 00:56:299 Done ~
01:05:133 (7) - new combo Done ~
01:14:966 (6) - move it to 01:14:966 and delete clap Done ~
01:19:299 (3,4,6) - move them to the 01:18:466 (7) 's position I don't understand very well what you want me to do here, so I'll leave it like how it is now

[Hard]
00:11:799 (1) - can you change a pattern? i mean , please dont placed spin in here. same as 01:13:466 (1)
00:41:966 (x) - add note
01:00:133 (6) - New combo
01:05:799 (2) - delete the whistle or change soft-wh?
All done ~

[Normal]
00:05:466 (5) - move it under the 3
00:48:133 (5) - delete the end's clap
01:25:799 (3) - delete the whistle
All done ~
[Easy]
00:27:466 (4) - delete finish
00:33:799 (5) - ^
00:38:133 (3) - delete end's finish
00:44:466 (3) - yeah..delete finish will omit others
00:55:466 (3) - k , this finish can be leave
All done~

i like this song
Me too, thanks for the mod eveless ~ <3

1. I think that the files "hit100.png" , "hit300,png", etc. are too big , you should reduce the size a bit.
2. Sliderball is hard to see, try to make it more visible by changing the colour for something a bit darker.
3. "spinner-circle.png" must be 666x666 resize please.
4. Preview time must be the same for all the difficulties. [Hard] is different.
5. Disable letterboxing during breaks.
6. Tags: "6918, 1869" these are too generic you should delete them.
7. It would be nice if you add 1 more combo colour.

1. 00:18:133 (3) - Delete this circle, then:
2. 00:18:466 (4) - Move this here: 00:18:133
3. 01:02:133 (4,5) - Unstack (5)
4. The hitsound doesn't sound good my suggestion is: Use "Clap" on every 2nd and 4th white tick. Ask me in-game if you don't understand me :3

1. 00:53:300 (6) - Delete this note.Then:
2. 00:53:133 (X) - Add a note here.
3. 00:53:466 (X) - ^
4. 01:10:799 (1,2,3,4) - Align (4) with (2) ?

1. 00:10:633 (5,6,7,8,1) - You should move (1) so it ends in the same place as (5)
2. Check your combos carefully.

1. I guess it's Ok.

Gonzvlo wrote:

General:

1. I think that the files "hit100.png" , "hit300,png", etc. are too big , you should reduce the size a bit. I'll keep it for now, if someone else complains then I'd change it ~
2. Sliderball is hard to see, try to make it more visible by changing the colour for something a bit darker. I'll keep it for now, if someone else complains then I'd change it ~
3. "spinner-circle.png" must be 666x666 resize please. Done ~
4. Preview time must be the same for all the difficulties. [Hard] is different. Done ~
5. Disable letterboxing during breaks. Done ~
6. Tags: "6918, 1869" these are too generic you should delete them. Done ~
7. It would be nice if you add 1 more combo colour. I'd have to say no to this ~

Easy

1. 00:18:133 (3) - Delete this circle, then:
2. 00:18:466 (4) - Move this here: 00:18:133
3. 01:02:133 (4,5) - Unstack (5)
4. The hitsound doesn't sound good my suggestion is: Use "Clap" on every 2nd and 4th white tick. Ask me in-game if you don't understand me :3

Done ~

Normal

1. 00:53:300 (6) - Delete this note.Then:
2. 00:53:133 (X) - Add a note here.
3. 00:53:466 (X) - ^
4. 01:10:799 (1,2,3,4) - Align (4) with (2) ?

Done ~

Hard

1. 00:10:633 (5,6,7,8,1) - You should move (1) so it ends in the same place as (5)
2. Check your combos carefully.

Done ~

Insane

1. I guess it's Ok.

Yay ~

Good job, keep it up, Good Luck.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy]
00:02:133 (1) - Finish at end.
00:36:799 (1) - Remove NC to be consistent.
00:43:799 (1) - ^
00:44:466 (4) - Add finish.
00:57:799 (1) - Remove NC? Just feels better. And it goes better with the song.
All done ~

[Normal]
00:02:133 (3) - Finish a start.
00:43:133 (1) - Remove NC. New Combo doesn't fit.
00:55:799 (8) - Finish at slider end.
01:05:466 (1) - Pretty soon after the spinner don't you think? Maybe move end the spinner 01:04:799 ?
All done ~

[Hard]
00:02:133 (3) - Finish. (This is just a suggestion. Same for all diffs.)
00:31:466 (1) - Random NC. Remove it.
00:32:299 (1) - Remove NC? This one can probably stay.
All done ~ except for the last one since the combo will be too long for a hard if I took away the NC

[Insane]
00:02:133 (3) - Finish.
00:39:466 (5) - Align with 4?
All done ~


Overall: Solid map. Nice and clean. Not much to say.

Have a STAR~

Astom wrote:

Wenas~

[Skin]
-BG4.png <-- kill xD Opps ~ Listo xD
-scorebar-colour-0.png cambiale el nombre a scorebar-colour.png Okk ~

[SB]
-Agregale fade a los lyrics al aparecer y desaparecer Okk, me voy a poner a trabajar en eso ahora mismo

Esop :>
Star~

Colin Hou wrote:

Nothing to compain about. (Insane is indeed a Hard-like diff with higher spacing, but fine )

So star~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Ohai Lovhin Heey ~ :3

[General]
read this thread for a delicious slider viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 :3 Thanks :3 I fixed some of my sliderbut I think most of them are good
remember the video maximum size is 800x600, 640x400 is better if you can find a good one with that size
sorry I can't help you with the vid ;_; Just for you, I spent almost 2 hours trying to make the video fit the reqs and stay with the same quality xD
the hitcirlce colors are way too blinding whether on kiai time or not, maybe change/darken it B-but sakura flowers are those colors D: Well, I changed one color and made it darker :3

[Skin & SB]
no combo burst? You know, is hard to find good image of these guys so I'll leave it with no comboburs until I find good ones :3
hmm can you add some kind of border around the score-bg ? the current one is kinda plain with only white on it maybe a pink feathered border is good Added a pink glow around it ~
the pause-retry is bigger then the other two pause menu, it looks weird. I suggest you to make it the same size Okk ~ They should be the same size now :3
umm I still got BG4.png have you re-full submit it? or maybe just me? I'm pretty sure I full-sub but just in case, I'd do it again xD

[Easy]
kinda tricky for an easy Really ?? D:
Can you find another BG for easy? the current one is kinda blurry That’s the point xD Well like I said is really hard to find good pics of these guys, and I quite like this BG :3
00:21:133 (4) - remove this then make 00:20:799 (3) into long slider that ends on 00:21:799
00:32:799 (4,5) - unstack these 2 novice aren't good at slider end stack like this
00:53:800 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:466 (1,2) - ^
01:11:466 (3) - all slider before this follows the vocal (01:08:800 (3) - ), so better make this the same length too. Add a circle on the empty space as you see fit
01:19:799 (3) - might as well make this follow the vocal too, cause most of the notes here follow vocal
01:21:799 (2) - ah this works very well
01:26:133 (1) - end the spinner on 01:27:466
All done ~

[Normal]
umm did you follow the vocals or rythem?
01:26:133 (1) - end the spinner on 01:27:466
I’m following the vocals the most and done ~

[Hard]
00:50:300 (6) - remove this?
01:03:466 (1) - the 0.5 don't fit cause even the music doesn't indicate any slowing maybe make it into spinner
Aww I liked that 0.5 slider oh well, done ~

[Insane]
01:05:133 (1) - the 0.5 don't fit cause even the music doesn't indicate any slowing maybe make it into spinner
Bye 0.5 slider, done ~

Easy and normal is preety good, but hard and insane are kinda random. I can't understand what you're following
also try using more slider it'll make the map more easier to read and also give a good flow (if it used right)
Aww, well, I will try to re-map some parts of hard and insane + use more sliders in them and try to follow the vocals more since they’re more easy to follow than the beat :3

Good Luck~

Lovely Crab wrote:

[Easy]
01:08:466(2) - add a whistle?
01:11:133(2) - ^
01:13:799(2) - ^
Seems fine.
Done ~

[Normal]
00:05:466(5,6) - exchange
00:07:466(3,4) - ^
00:18:799(5,6) - ^
use more whistle.(just a suggestion)
Done ~

[Hard]
00:21:799(x) - add a note
00:21:966(5) - del
00:35:133(1) - make a symmetry
00:57:299(2) - move it to 00:57:466
Done ~

[Insane]
so similar with Hard,why not use more 1/4 in the map?i know the song's real bpm is 90,but i still suggest you should use 1/4 in 180.
such like

SPOILER

00:05:799(5) - 1 grid up
00:32:799(5) - ^ like (7,8)
00:44:466(6) - 1 grid down
00:53:466(x) - add a note?
01:22:133(3) - 1 grid right
01:24:133(1) - this slide is ugly,and not fit the rhythm,do like this

SPOILER

Done ~

my star

lovhin456 wrote:

* I'd be very very VERY grateful if someone could lower the size of the video <3

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Artist: Should be "Kondou Takashi & Iida Toshinobu" as you can see here
Tags: Add "Katei kyoushi" and "Tutor"

lovhin456 wrote:

* I'd be very very VERY grateful if someone could lower the size of the video <3

I'll see what I can do, if osu! will let me download the map

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Here is the video

Sakura Addiction

Just a suggestion:
[Normal]
Decrease "Circle Size" by 1? (that is make the circle bigger).

P.S. There are two video in this archive.
"Sakura Addiction" has 6 MB~
"Sakura Addiction (better)" has 8 MB~

I suggest to put the first, because is smaller and there is a minimum difference with the other video.
Btw, I leave the choose to you


Star

kuyukiP wrote:

Ahhh, sorry for being so late, I've been slacking off xD
Saving a place for mod~
(But take my star first, I have seen this map before and I love it )

KenezzEdward wrote:

Hola Lovhin! o/

Me gusto bastante tú mapa y me di la tarea de darle una pequeña revision....
Solamente algunas recomendaciones~

General

Que linda Diff Easy =D
Hit300k y Hit300g son muy parecidos, no es un problema para mi pero para algunos talvez ><

Easy

-01:19:466 (2,3) - Se oye mejor si el 3 va en el lugar del 2...

Normal

-Todo bien~

Hard

-00:17:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Esta parte se oye rara, Talvez... [attachment=0:5ffe5]lovhin2.jpg[/attachment:5ffe5]-01:11:799 (5,6,7,8,9) - Se oye mejor asi... [attachment=1:5ffe5]lovhin.jpg[/attachment:5ffe5]-01:22:466 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^

Insane

-Todo bien~

Estupendo Map~ ^^
Star!

Edit: Ups se me escapo poner la estrellita *.*

OngakuRemix wrote:

star!

niedzwiedz1124 wrote:

bgs are ghay,but who cares :3

kuyukiP wrote:

Sorry for such the long wait, I completely forgot ;A;
it's edited now, though!

James2250 wrote:

Your spinner is unrankable at the moment, you need something visible in the center that spins.
(Are you sure last word in source is meant to be all caps)

Easy:
I don't follow the clap rhythm some of the time but ok?
End kiai time at the same place as the other difficulties
00:27:466 (4,1) - avoid anti jump?

Normal:
Looks good

Hard:
00:19:133 (4,5,1) - spacing

Insane:
Looks good

You get a star~

ErufenRito wrote:

Skin:

I recommend using combo colours more different than the background's. Currently I'm having some trouble seeing some notes. Particularly this one 01:15:633 (9). Anyways, at least the light pink one blend a lot with the combo number as well...
Sakura flowers are pink ... light pink so I won't change the color, I tried to do something with the default numbers but it end up very bad so yeah ... I'm keeping them.


Also the combo colours... Sighs, how the hell am i going to diffenciate a 300 or a 100 withought having the need of reding them? But then, this is just a personal matter.
They are not combo colours ... they're hitbursts and I can read them perfectly fine while playing, but anyways I'll change them just in case ... Okk, I tried to change them and they looked horrible ... not changing them anymore
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Your mp3 file have 256 kbps bitrate, max should be 192 kbps, ask someone about it if you don't know what i'm talking about.
Okk

Your whole map is not bad, found nothing that is actually wrong, although i do recommend you to polish a little bit your sliders (specially your arcs), for that i recommend you to check this thread viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
I think my sliders are fine, but thanks.

Wait, i did find something wrong, you forgot to end your kiai time in easy.
Fixed
Thanks.

Tonoko wrote:

:) hi

only a little problems here

[Normal]
01:11:466 (3,4) - use the some style like 01:08:466 (6,7) sounds better.

[hard]
00:16:299 (6) - not really a problem here.just have a look.

[insane]
not too hard for me ><
haha

pretty good >< star