hello...
since i cant really judge anything below 4* ill be modding the last 2 diffs
i played light insane and extra
light insane is really good, extra a bit overmapped in my opinion, rhythm and spacing wise
extra:
00:03:806 (4) - i think it shud be reverted to keep the flow, the jump between 00:03:461 (3,4) - is unnecessary, so if u ctrl+g (4) u will also have an emphasis for the 00:03:806 (4,1) - jump as well
00:04:841 (2,6) - i missed 6 two times in a row, its really hard to read for some reason, can u make some slight overlap, for now its kinda meh
overlaps are good when justified
i think that is the case here.
00:10:186 (2,6) - either make an overlap or stack them, for now its ugly
00:10:875 (6,7) - i honestly dont hink that the spacing here shud be increasing, at least that much. its just too spaced even tho u can hear the increasing intensity on the background
00:10:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i also think that this stuff can be more structured, try to use hexagon or something, i dont really like that "flow-inclined" structure.
00:11:220 (1,2) - ok so this stuff, it should be either like this 00:12:427 (1) - (that u are doing in each sound phrase next up) or you get rid of 00:12:427 (1,1,3) - and map stuff like 00:12:599 - which i prefer, cuz its an extra.
for now its a bit messy rhythm wise
00:15:013 (4,2) - make them not stacked please, it really break the reading
00:19:323 (1,3,1) - you can make it more structured i think, just copy them with angle scaling for 25* or something
00:22:082 (5) - this stuff shud be ending here 00:22:341 - , the vocal starts on 00:22:427 - , you should fix this undermap.
00:36:910 (4,5,6) - spacing issue, the difference between 4,5 and 5,6 should be more tangible, for now its 10%, decrease the distance between 4,5 should be better
00:38:117 (3) - this is a strong beat, it should be spaced more from 00:37:772 (2) - like u did here 00:38:634 (6,1) -
00:39:151 (2,3) - ^
00:39:841 (5,1) - ^
00:40:530 (3,4) - ^
00:41:220 (6,2) - i dont feel like this overlap is good
00:41:910 (2,3,4,5) - reconsider spacing here
00:43:979 (6) - nc here to emphasze the new vocal phase, remove nc 00:44:323 (1) - then
01:02:599 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think spacing here is too wide, i mean huh, this song can not have such high spacing in first place, its calm and has not much to emphasize in terms of pitches.
01:07:772 (1,2,3,4) - dude its too much xd
01:13:634 (2,3,4,5,6) - thats kiinda nice spacing wise, but i would make this structure better, i mean the gap between the 01:13:634 (2,3,5,7) - shud be the same
01:17:772 (2,3) - plaase no, no that much
01:25:530 (1) - i dont think it shud have nc, 01:26:048 (2) - this shud be nc'ed.
uh also i think that this CS is kinda too har for such jumps. maybe lower it to 4.5 at least. it plays not that cool cause of this in first place.
light insane:
this one is much better in my opinion
00:18:461 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think u can apply some pattern here, it seems not that good structure wise
00:25:702 (4,5,6) - these are the strong beats, i dont understand why u decided to not emphasize them
00:27:082 (4,5,6) - ^
01:02:082 (5,6,1) - cmon dude stack them, its ugly
01:24:151 (1) - nuke this slider, just make it as normal sliders like u did before in the whole diff
01:25:186 (7,8) - i think its a mistake in terms of rhythm, you got a strong sound on
http://puu.sh/uS7MS/c958818c5d.jpg try this, the 01:25:530 (1) - should be blanket to 01:26:048 (2) - i think.
alright thats it gl
since i cant really judge anything below 4* ill be modding the last 2 diffs
i played light insane and extra
light insane is really good, extra a bit overmapped in my opinion, rhythm and spacing wise
extra:
00:03:806 (4) - i think it shud be reverted to keep the flow, the jump between 00:03:461 (3,4) - is unnecessary, so if u ctrl+g (4) u will also have an emphasis for the 00:03:806 (4,1) - jump as well
00:04:841 (2,6) - i missed 6 two times in a row, its really hard to read for some reason, can u make some slight overlap, for now its kinda meh
overlaps are good when justified
i think that is the case here.
00:10:186 (2,6) - either make an overlap or stack them, for now its ugly
00:10:875 (6,7) - i honestly dont hink that the spacing here shud be increasing, at least that much. its just too spaced even tho u can hear the increasing intensity on the background
00:10:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i also think that this stuff can be more structured, try to use hexagon or something, i dont really like that "flow-inclined" structure.
00:11:220 (1,2) - ok so this stuff, it should be either like this 00:12:427 (1) - (that u are doing in each sound phrase next up) or you get rid of 00:12:427 (1,1,3) - and map stuff like 00:12:599 - which i prefer, cuz its an extra.
for now its a bit messy rhythm wise
00:15:013 (4,2) - make them not stacked please, it really break the reading
00:19:323 (1,3,1) - you can make it more structured i think, just copy them with angle scaling for 25* or something
00:22:082 (5) - this stuff shud be ending here 00:22:341 - , the vocal starts on 00:22:427 - , you should fix this undermap.
00:36:910 (4,5,6) - spacing issue, the difference between 4,5 and 5,6 should be more tangible, for now its 10%, decrease the distance between 4,5 should be better
00:38:117 (3) - this is a strong beat, it should be spaced more from 00:37:772 (2) - like u did here 00:38:634 (6,1) -
00:39:151 (2,3) - ^
00:39:841 (5,1) - ^
00:40:530 (3,4) - ^
00:41:220 (6,2) - i dont feel like this overlap is good
00:41:910 (2,3,4,5) - reconsider spacing here
00:43:979 (6) - nc here to emphasze the new vocal phase, remove nc 00:44:323 (1) - then
01:02:599 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think spacing here is too wide, i mean huh, this song can not have such high spacing in first place, its calm and has not much to emphasize in terms of pitches.
01:07:772 (1,2,3,4) - dude its too much xd
01:13:634 (2,3,4,5,6) - thats kiinda nice spacing wise, but i would make this structure better, i mean the gap between the 01:13:634 (2,3,5,7) - shud be the same
01:17:772 (2,3) - plaase no, no that much
01:25:530 (1) - i dont think it shud have nc, 01:26:048 (2) - this shud be nc'ed.
uh also i think that this CS is kinda too har for such jumps. maybe lower it to 4.5 at least. it plays not that cool cause of this in first place.
light insane:
this one is much better in my opinion
00:18:461 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think u can apply some pattern here, it seems not that good structure wise
00:25:702 (4,5,6) - these are the strong beats, i dont understand why u decided to not emphasize them
00:27:082 (4,5,6) - ^
01:02:082 (5,6,1) - cmon dude stack them, its ugly
01:24:151 (1) - nuke this slider, just make it as normal sliders like u did before in the whole diff
01:25:186 (7,8) - i think its a mistake in terms of rhythm, you got a strong sound on
http://puu.sh/uS7MS/c958818c5d.jpg try this, the 01:25:530 (1) - should be blanket to 01:26:048 (2) - i think.
alright thats it gl