hello, from my queue
i can see that u are quite experienced with mappin and i dont have to explain basic stuff like i usually do in my mods
so it plays very nice, even tho its 4* i enjoyed the textplay, some parts are a bit overmapped in terms of spacing, but overall the quality is acceptable
so lets see what i can suggest...
00:05:241 (4,1) - i guess stuff like this shud be spaced a bit more like u did 00:08:991 (4,1) - i mean, there are many similar places which are lacking emphasis, so u can find them urself i guess.
00:17:897 (3,4,5) - maybe make them linear (s-end, the note, and the s-start)
00:21:647 (4,5,6) - ^
00:25:397 (5,6) - isnt it too much for 4*? this diff spike in 4* is quite tangible, i mean, its just an increasing part BEFORE the intensive part, and u already putting a huge jumps which isnt nice i guess.
00:33:835 (1,2) - i guess this and 00:37:585 (1,2) - shud be similar distance wise?
00:41:335 (1,2) - same stuff^
01:10:866 (7,8) - spacing issue like in previous part
01:49:245 - hmm undermapped note? i wonder how many of them I missed...
01:58:444 - nice
02:17:897 (3,4) - isnt this spacing too wide? it is wider than 02:19:772 (3,4) - here hm
02:22:585 - this part is spaced properly i think. except this one 02:23:288 (4,5) -
02:47:194 (2,3) - spacing issue, maybe move 2 to 120/200
02:50:475 (5,1) - 02:51:413 (3,4) - i think these shud be equal
03:02:663 - i think u shud map this note, its a part of the melody u are mapping here.
03:06:940 - and this one too
03:13:210 (1) - ugly slider, lpease use some proper stuff like circle to make the curves more smooth:
http://puu.sh/uAlVp/c1e58dce35.jpg03:16:491 (6,7,8) - why these are spaced and 03:16:960 (1,2,3) - are stacked?
03:18:366 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - ^
03:22:585 (1,2,3) - ^
03:47:897 (4,5,6) - not evenly spaced
04:11:803 (2,3) - distance between them shud be higher then 04:11:335 (1,2) - i guess
04:55:631 (6,7) - distance here shud be smaller than 04:55:866 (7,8) - here i guess
04:58:444 - 04:58:913 - 04:59:381 - undermapped sounds?
i think you did the same in the previous similar part
Okay, thats it. Cool map, gl!