solfa feat.nao - Love Love Sensation short ver, · forum

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Log Off Now 2017-03-01T23:54:40+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
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General
-could skin in the default drum sampleset, got confused cuz i was hearing my customs over the default rip

Easy
-at least the first break should be mapped imo. theres still kick drum, and its much more intense than the second break. fine ill map the fkin break z
00:02:812 (4) - suggestion: move the red anchor point to the midpoint of the slider to bring out the bell (whatever that instrument thing is idk). you could add a red anchor in this slider 00:00:887 (2) - for the same reason i like the curve aesthetic tb h
00:04:256 (1) - spinner too short imo, reaction time too short and noobs are gonna miss it. Normal and Hard have longer spinners (but dont map 00:04:096) ok ya double chek with bn and its too short so changed

Rizen's Normal
00:06:342 - add cymbal crash hitsound here? ya
01:11:796 (2) - add clap ya
(rest is rizen stuff)

Happy Weed
00:06:342 - add cymbal crash hitsound here? ya
00:11:315 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - not sure why you decided to do slightly spaced for the first triple, then stacked for the second. (actually idk how you decided on the triple patterns throughout the diff, an explanation would be nice Dx) did this for more emphasis on the motion the player takes to help emphasise the music more, which imo is more important than being a little more consistent with some note placements (and i am consistent with the changes i make anyway, so i think they're ok)
01:22:223 (3) - 01:22:544 (2) - 01:22:865 (4) - these notes are given too much emphasis through the jumps imo, they sound pretty much the same as the other kick drums before this. did some stuff, hopefully it gives clearer emphasis for what i was going for now
01:22:384 (1) - has less DS from the preceding circle than to the next circle, even though this note has both drum and vocals. ya
01:36:501 (1,1,2) - remove overlap for a e s t h e t i c s :^) ya (how tf did i not notice this stuff like this triggers me to fk lel)

took a quick look at Left's Insane and it seems fine
Good luck~

thanks for the mod!

walaowey

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walaowey 2017-03-02T02:25:44+00:00

Hi nm from my queue

Happy wedding

abit higher ar maybe? 9.1/9.2 is nice imo
-01:16:608 (1) - this slider could use some bigger jump, to emphasize the strong beats here
-00:23:347 (1) - for some reason, this pattern is hard to read for me. I keep on thinking 00:22:705 (3) - slider tail is the head of 00:23:347 (1) -

Left's Insane

00:00:246 (1,2,3) - (2,3) is same spacing with (1), but they have different gaps, its quite confusing at first. try place (2,3) further to differentiate them?
01:25:432 (1) - why u use anchor here? the rhythm was not that different though

it's similar to 00:07:144 (1,2,1) - imo and u use straight slider for that

.

Mochi's Hard

00:42:278 (3,1) - blanket

01:12:437 (4,1) - (4) flowing to (1) was quite hard imo. try something like this? just some suggestion, just that i feels the flow was not that nice there

01:28:801 - maybe map this part too? the beat was strong

Rizen's Normal

01:05:058 (4) - stack is off

01:11:956 (3) - ^
01:16:608 (1) - ^
err they're a few more stacks off, oh wait, is it intentional? or is it a mistake lol

That's all from me, Good Luck

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Log Off Now 2017-03-02T03:36:40+00:00

walaowey wrote:
Hi nm from my queue

Happy wedding
abit higher ar maybe? 9.1/9.2 is nice imo i think ar9 is good, the map doesnt benefit from a higher ar
-01:16:608 (1) - this slider could use some bigger jump, to emphasize the strong beats here agree
-00:23:347 (1) - for some reason, this pattern is hard to read for me. I keep on thinking 00:22:705 (3) - slider tail is the head of 00:23:347 (1) - uh, idk what you want me to do xd, nobody else has had trouble reading this section in testplays so i dont know whats up with it xd

That's all from me, Good Luck

thanks for the mod!

Bluekrait

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Bluekrait 2017-03-02T15:39:46+00:00

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[Easy]

Fine as is

[Rizen's Normal]

00:15:647 (4,5,6,7) - Consider spacing these out more or adjusting direction. They may be spaced 1.00x technically, but when played with slider leniency, they're more like half that which can lead to players hitting the notes prematurely.
01:17:250 (3) - Consider adding another circle in this spot and moving the reverse forward. http://puu.sh/uqVvJ/2e7204c735.jpg
01:19:817 (3) - ^

[Mochi's Hard]

01:04:737 (3) - This note is hard to read because you hid it under 01:03:774 (1)

[Left's Insane]

01:16:448 (6,1) - Fix blanket
Great diff!

[Happy Wedding]

00:16:449 (7) - Remove this
00:33:294 (7,1) - Fix blanket

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Log Off Now 2017-03-02T15:44:19+00:00

Bluekrait wrote:
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[Easy]
Fine as is fixed a few missing hitsounds
[Happy Wedding]
00:16:449 (7) - Remove this there is a clear bass drum hit here
00:33:294 (7,1) - Fix blanket xd it blankets the middle of the stack perfectly

thanks for the mod!

Left

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Left 2017-03-03T12:16:52+00:00

o sorry quite busy with school, code first feedback soon

Left's Insane

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Title:Love Love Sensation short ver,
TitleUnicode:らぶらぶセンセーション short ver,
Artist:solfa feat.nao
ArtistUnicode:solfa feat.nao
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:Left's Insane
Source:らぶらぶシスターズ ～花嫁＆姉妹達とのドキドキハーレム生活～
Tags:Love Love Sisters ~Hanayome & Shimai-tachi to no Doki Doki Harem Seikatsu~ Pajamas EX eroge visual novel opening left momochikun rizen
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Gokateigo wrote:
Hello from the carpal tunnel q o/
Left's insane
00:02:491 (3) - Do the same angle than the previous combo well dont have to
00:02:812 (1,2,3,4,1) - Look at the end ?
01:06:341 (1,2) - Jump here well
01:06:822 (3,4) - NCdont have to
gl

thx for mod~

pkhg wrote:
why her boobs are that big

[Left's Insane]
00:28:481 (10,1) - nc should be on 10 instead. not a big issue ok
00:41:957 (3,4,5) - 00:44:524 (3,4,5) - jumps can reflect way better the intensity of the snares I like stack cuz same sound with no tension here
00:47:090 (3,4,5) - 00:49:657 (3,4,5) - ^ at least here you didnt stacked them here but larger spacing would be cool stacked
00:58:000 (1) - this slider isnt following anything, a pause like the highest diff or following vocals like mochi is much betterwanna show no bass
01:05:058 (1,1,1) - might look cool but its lame doing that kind of stuff when the music doesnt support it. mapping it normally is more fitting melody
i luv ur maps owo

Stars obtained so far: None

thx for mod~

teaMblack19 wrote:
My first rand
[Left's Insane]
00:14:844 (2) - move to (x=337, y=267). It's close to this 00:14:042 (4) nobody will notice in when play
The rest is perfect

Very cool map, I like it. Good luck to rank it!

thx for mod!

Arf wrote:
Hello, M4M from your queue. My map once more: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/522233

Left's Insane
00:36:823 (3,4) - Make it a bit more symmetrical (move 4 down a bit?) as 1 and 2 look good symmetrically but 3/4 are a little lopsided yeah

thx for mod~

_orange wrote:
Hey, another M4M

[Left's Insane]

00:11:155 (3,4,5) - The triplets sound the same as here 00:11:636 (6,7,1) - so why not make it the same spacing? according to flow
00:13:080 (1,2) - Stack 2 on the tail of one like you did here 01:30:726 (1,2) -
00:14:844 (2) - 00:15:165 (3,4,5) - Thesee sound the same too but you mapped them differently two triplet in a row is too hard for easier insane
01:23:667 (5,6,7) - Space this out more like the jumps on the other notes in the combo, there's no reason to emphasize this less than the other jumpsit's triplet, and low sound
01:28:801 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same thing I said earlier about the spacing of the triplets ^

Great map gl!

thx for mod~

walaowey wrote:
Hi nm from my queue

Left's Insane
00:00:246 (1,2,3) - (2,3) is same spacing with (1), but they have different gaps, its quite confusing at first. try place (2,3) further to differentiate them? antijump
01:25:432 (1) - why u use anchor here? the rhythm was not that different though it's similar to 00:07:144 (1,2,1) - imo and u use straight slider for that . well no reason to..

That's all from me, Good Luck

thx for mod~

Bluekrait wrote:
Log Off Now's free #modhelp request

[Left's Insane]
01:16:448 (6,1) - Fix blanket yeah
Great diff!owo

thx for mod~

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-03-03T18:36:08+00:00

From Queue

[Happy Wedding]

00:00:887 (2,3,2,3) - How about copying?
image
00:40:513 (4) - I will use NC
00:56:716 (1,2,3) - This part is puzzled
00:56:716 (1) - remove NC 00:56:877 (2) - Add NC

I'm sorry.
I could hardly modulate your map

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-03-03T19:31:04+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
From Queue

[Happy Wedding]
00:00:887 (2,3,2,3) - How about copying? ok
image
00:40:513 (4) - I will use NC i dont think its needed, i understand why but if i nc here then i need to nc 00:40:994 (7) - this too
00:56:716 (1,2,3) - This part is puzzled i think its ok, nobody has had problems reading this so far
00:56:716 (1) - remove NC 00:56:877 (2) - Add NC ok
I'm sorry.
I could hardly modulate your map

thanks for the mod!

Mir

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2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-03-03T22:41:39+00:00

Hi M4M for Log.~

[

General]

Could get a higher resolution background honestly.

[]

[

Easy]

01:19:175 (1) - Slider would fit better here - the song is still at its peak and having a break this long on an NC that also skips a noticeable snare feels off in multiple ways.

[

Rizen's Normal]

A CS 4 normal? That's pretty edgy dude. xd
00:16:609 (6,7) - Hmm, the 7 here is clearly stronger, so why not show that somehow. I would maybe cause a direction change of sorts on the 7, perhaps like so: http://i.imgur.com/NtPZ4dd.png You might need to do some repositioning if you do this though.
00:51:582 - Map this sound maybe? Sounds nice for a finishing note into the break.

[

Mochi's Hard]

00:08:267 (2) - Strong note on slider end feels really weird, especially since there's nothing different about this note than 00:11:155 (3).
00:15:807 (2,3,4) - Triangle is slightly off.
00:16:770 (1) - Seems like a strong note to have on a slider end, especially when notes of similar strength where active at 00:16:128 (3,4). Maybe make 1 a 1/2 slider and add a circle after it?
00:19:336 (3,1,2) - Visual spacing between 1 and the repeat of 2 is a bit off. Center it a bit?
00:42:278 (3,1) - Holy blanket.
00:50:941 (2) - Maybe a triple instead of just a static repeat slider? It's right after a reverse slider too, so it's much more doable here.
00:51:903 (2) - Feels like you can space this out a tiny bit more to make the pattern 00:51:582 (1,2,3,4) - look more even.
00:56:877 (2,3) - The two here could definitely use more emphasis, especially since you use a lot of spacing emphasis in this diff already, and the 1 is spaced the same before it but is way weaker.
01:02:330 (1) - Space this out more like 01:01:689 (3) - is?
01:10:512 (3,4,5) - Why not make the 4 curved too in order to complete this pattern? Eg: http://i.imgur.com/AhlKMsh.png or something.
01:27:999 (1,2) - Fix blanket?

[

Left's Insane]

00:12:278 - Why leave a gap here but not at 00:13:561? The sounds are fairly similar and the musical phrasing is almost identical. Applies for 01:29:924 - as well.
00:25:433 (2,3,4) - Only time you use perfectly linear flow.
00:28:481 (1) - Doesn't really get much emphasis does it. Maybe try making 00:28:320 (8,9) - a kickslider and spacing out the 1. But then again this is completely up to you.
00:58:000 (1) - This feels really really really weird. It feels like you're mapping the silence. Could you at least end it on the white tick?

Everything else I'd point out would be changing the style of the map. That's the only thing that was really noticeable.

[

Happy Wedding]

00:02:812 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - uwu Imperfect hexaflop. Fix 00:04:096 (1) - a bit?
00:08:106 (1,2,3,4) - You could tidy this pattern a bit by moving 00:08:427 (3) - closer.
00:09:550 (2,3,4) - Visual spacing looks kinda weird, but not a big issue.
00:12:759 (5,2) - Space equally from 00:13:080 (1) - maybe?
00:20:780 (1,3) - Blanket seems a little close compated to stuff like 00:34:898 (1,3) - don't you think?
00:25:433 (4) - If you fiddle with this note a bit, you can make 00:24:951 (2,3,4,5) - a nicer star pentagon.
00:30:727 (5) - You could move this in a bit for a cleaner shape overall with 00:30:245 (3,4,5,6,1) - http://i.imgur.com/MJADzyz.png
00:36:663 (2) - You could try making this two circles since the end of this has a kick and the beginning has no vocal note like 00:37:144 (4).
00:38:106 (3,5,1) - Space equally?
00:39:229 (2) - Same as 00:36:663 (2).
01:09:710 (4,5,1,2) - Could fiddle with 01:10:031 (1) - to make this pattern a bit nicer. Like so: http://i.imgur.com/QwOTl8a.png
01:12:919 (2,4,6) - Space equally?
01:17:090 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is fairly unorthodox flow considering this is probably the only time you use somewhat straight-forward flow instead of angular/circular flow. Plays a bit weird considering that and feels out of place in the map in general.

This seems ready for BNs tbh. I really had to be nitpicky to find things here so I expect a redwall back. xD

Good luck!

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-03-03T22:58:46+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi M4M for Log.~

[ General]
Could get a higher resolution background honestly. couldnt find a 1080 ver and waifux2 messes this one up a lot when pushed to 1080

[]

[ Easy]
01:19:175 (1) - Slider would fit better here - the song is still at its peak and having a break this long on an NC that also skips a noticeable snare feels off in multiple ways. made this a circle because it gives more emphasis that this is a new part of the kiai and on the guitar note, also makes it consistent with 01:19:175 (1) - and gives easy players a bit of a break instead of constant clicking

[ Happy Wedding]
00:02:812 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - uwu Imperfect hexaflop. Fix 00:04:096 (1) - a bit? unintentional shape but ya xd
00:08:106 (1,2,3,4) - You could tidy this pattern a bit by moving 00:08:427 (3) - closer. a little
00:09:550 (2,3,4) - Visual spacing looks kinda weird, but not a big issue. i think its ok, i didnt wanna overlap (2)
00:12:759 (5,2) - Space equally from 00:13:080 (1) - maybe? ok
00:20:780 (1,3) - Blanket seems a little close compated to stuff like 00:34:898 (1,3) - don't you think? i think its ok
00:25:433 (4) - If you fiddle with this note a bit, you can make 00:24:951 (2,3,4,5) - a nicer star pentagon. if i do that i lose the the easy circular motion i have here (+ this is another unintentional shape xd)
00:30:727 (5) - You could move this in a bit for a cleaner shape overall with 00:30:245 (3,4,5,6,1) - http://i.imgur.com/MJADzyz.png ya
00:36:663 (2) - You could try making this two circles since the end of this has a kick and the beginning has no vocal note like 00:37:144 (4). this note follows the guitar
00:38:106 (3,5,1) - Space equally? ya
00:39:229 (2) - Same as 00:36:663 (2). ya
01:09:710 (4,5,1,2) - Could fiddle with 01:10:031 (1) - to make this pattern a bit nicer. Like so: http://i.imgur.com/QwOTl8a.png makes the angle too tight on (2)
01:12:919 (2,4,6) - Space equally? would have to change blanket or make a super tight angle on (2)
01:17:090 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is fairly unorthodox flow considering this is probably the only time you use somewhat straight-forward flow instead of angular/circular flow. Plays a bit weird considering that and feels out of place in the map in general. this is intentional as this is the only time that the vocals and guitar have a much more different feeling and 'jumpy' nature about them, so i changed how the map flows here to represent that better

This seems ready for BNs tbh. I really had to be nitpicky to find things here so I expect a redwall back. xD

Good luck!

thanks for the mod!

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-03-03T23:44:30+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi M4M for Log.~
[ Left's Insane]
00:12:278 - Why leave a gap here but not at 00:13:561? The sounds are fairly similar and the musical phrasing is almost identical. Applies for 01:29:924 - as well. you can hear sound carefully
00:25:433 (2,3,4) - Only time you use perfectly linear flow. why not?
00:28:481 (1) - Doesn't really get much emphasis does it. Maybe try making 00:28:320 (8,9) - a kickslider and spacing out the 1. But then again this is completely up to you. now is ok i sure
00:58:000 (1) - This feels really really really weird. It feels like you're mapping the silence. Could you at least end it on the white tick?I showed silence
Everything else I'd point out would be changing the style of the map. That's the only thing that was really noticeable.
Good luck!

thx for mod!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-03-04T06:59:06+00:00

my laptop is broken (in repair shop) for like a week longer... sorry about that @LoN

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-03-04T14:00:58+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
ooo, sup

[Hard]
00:27:037 (1) - not really a fan of this kind overlap plays. i mean, I thought this is a circle lol , probably should do other patterns? I guess changed
00:11:395 (4) - bad stack nah its fine
00:22:545 (2,3) - dunno why you suddenly give a sudden DS change at here even thought there's no sudden loud sound that need to be emphasized idk, random jump ?
00:28:802 (2) - can you unstack this? I mean all of the other stacks on a slider that I saw before have 1/4 rhythms on it while this one is different. you can just try to make normal triangle movement using this circle
00:41:957 (2) - same reason like first line. Don't really like this kind of overlap on hard diff since it's kinda hard to read. (also it's kinda miss-stacked)
00:47:090 (2) - probably diz iz ur stlye , afterall yes
01:08:427 (3,4,5) - tumben nggak di stack , stack ae mas/mba soalnya cuma triplet ini doang yang ga distack wkwkw ok ini aku space jg 00:28:000 (4,5,6) -

gl gl gl

thanks

Metaku wrote:
[General]

[Hard]

00:03:454 (4) - ctrl j? no
00:04:096 (1,1) - This just feels a bit weird imo. You should just skip the spinner and include both drumrolls
00:11:155 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 2 triples like this in a row might be a bit difficult for a hard (well double and a triple but anyway) and you don't use that in kiai anyway so might as well drop it its fit spread, not general hard diff
00:16:770 (1) - I think the end should be clickable, there's even a finish there so it clearly is a powerful sound
00:18:213 (1,2,3,1,2) - uhh kinda weird rhythm choice since first you focus vocals but then ignore them here 00:20:139 - imo should be clickable for consistency as it's the main focus here anyway so maybe do it like here? 00:24:631 (1,2,3) -
00:28:962 (3) - might want to get the vocals in the middle of the slider since most of the time you prioritize vocals over other instrument anyway like here 00:30:245 (3) -
00:31:048 (1) - might want to make the end clickable for vocals
00:34:256 (3,4) - ctrl g ?
00:39:711 (3) - maybe a 3/4 or smtng? not sure if it's a good idea to end it on dowbeat nope, 3/4 dont fit here
00:50:941 (2) - maybe 1 less repeat and a circle?
00:56:716 (1,2) - could use a bit more spacing here
00:56:877 (2,3,4,5) - also why is the spacing between 2 3 and 4 5 different?
01:03:132 (3,4) - isn't the spacing a bit too high compared to the rest of the map?
01:04:576 (2,3) - maybe try something different, 3 is a bit too hard to read for a hard diff
01:10:512 (3,4,5) - if you're doing something like this make all the sliders the same or at least make the one without vocals the different one
01:15:967 (3,4,5) - broken stack ikr fixed

pretty okay I guess

be more reasonable dude

CanadianBaka wrote:
hi! m4m

[mochi's hard]
may wanna raise ar a bit because patterns like 01:03:774 (1,3) - this and 01:20:138 (4,2) - are difficult to read 8 already high dude lmao

00:20:780 (1) - would look better if both nodes were red, like this
01:05:378 (2,3) - make these identical nah
01:06:822 (3) - why not just a subtle curve? I know you did this shape a few times but I don't think in that specific place it fits well idk i just feel like it tbh
01:09:229 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing, or I don't really see a need to raise it jump for vocal
01:10:512 (3,4,5) - 2.3x spacing really hard for a hard diff, I don't know, I would keep these patterns for light insane > yeah changed
01:26:876 (1) - just make this a curve or straight slider, the current shape looks really awkward nah
01:29:443 (1) - I don't know why for some reason you started to use these shapes more often hmm is it ?

nice set gl ranking it

thanks

pkhg wrote:
why her boobs are that big

[Mochi's Hard]
od6 pls seems misslick, ya
01:38:266 (5,6) - what about increasing spacing just a bit just feel like making them all same space for pattern, idk
cute
Stars obtained so far: None

xXRosalineXx wrote:
uhhh ill mod till hard since i cant pass insanes or higher yet cause im not dat gud

Hard:

i just want you to know that i said ill only playtest each map once but it took me 4 retries to finish this once rip me

00:11:155 (3,4,5) - the first 2 times i played this part over, i didn't even know there were circles underneath this slider they were really hard to read i thnk its fine with default stack

00:56:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - these sv changes seem really random and should maybe be toned down a bit it plays good imo. gonna consider it

01:15:967 (3,4,5) - didn't see the circles either here uwu

01:24:790 (2,3,1) - why is 1 farther away than 3 than 2 was from 1 downbeat

aaaaaaaa why is this map so gud then its harder to find problems

Arf wrote:
Hello, M4M from your queue. My map once more: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/522233

Mochi's Hard
00:08:267 (2) - Hmm in my opinion, the rhythm at 00:10:352 (1,2) - is better than the one used here. both works fine imo
00:19:818 (2) - Hmm are you sure about the jump? There isn't much change in the music to support it imo idk, will change if i got pattern idea
01:10:833 (4) - I was expecting a windmill of curved sliders, a random straight one? lol
01:22:063 (2,3,4,1,2) - I reckon the general movement of this pattern can be improved a bit. 01:22:063 (2) - can be Ctrl+G'd, same with 01:22:384 (3) - and I think the result is more satisfactory. Some of the others can be ctrl+g'd too but i think those two alone change theflow for the better

Pretty clean, not much to find

I'm sorry for my poor attempt at modding the Insanes. but they are very good already and I have no words of improvement to offer that haven't already been rejected for whatever reasons. Hope it was somewhat useful, Good Luck!

_orange wrote:
Hey, another M4M

[Easy]

[Mochi's Hard]

00:05:379 - Personally not a fan of not mapping these drums when you did here 00:05:860 (1) - I think you could probably replace the spinner with a slider and map both the drums prefer to keep it like thsi tbh
00:12:438 (4,5) - I think this would look better if both the sliders were identical, it wouldn't really affect the flow so why not
00:19:497 (1,2) - The gap in between these is too big and looks like its 1/1. Look at the gaps between these 00:19:818 (2,1) - 00:18:213 (1,2) - the current spacing looks too much like 1/1
01:05:699 (3) - It might look better if this was a copy of 01:05:378 (2) -
00:56:877 (2,3) - Make this the same spacing as this 00:57:358 (4,5) - okay
01:10:512 (3,4,5) - why not this? Looks prettier imo i changed this pattern before
a

[Left's Insane]
Great map gl!

Yahuri wrote:
meme4meme

Mochi's Hard
00:42:278 (3,1) - blanket D:
00:12:438 (4,5) - aesthetics look weird because the curvature of these 2 sliders are different, make them the same?
00:19:497 (1,2) - DS is needlessly high, theres nothing really special here. its even higher than 00:16:770 (1,2) with the cymbal crash fixed
00:36:181 (1,2,3) - i think DS of 1-2 should be lower than 2-3, not the other way around. 2 has kick, 3 has snare+vocals
00:57:358 (4,5) - DS inconsistent with 00:56:877 (2,3) - 00:57:518 (5,6) - theyre all the same intensity/sound yes
01:27:999 (1,2) - blanket
01:38:266 (5,6) - add jump? nah, keeping pattern

took a quick look at Left's Insane and it seems fine
Good luck~

Bluekrait wrote:
Log Off Now's free #modhelp request

[Mochi's Hard]
01:04:737 (3) - This note is hard to read because you hid it under 01:03:774 (1) i think hard level player can read this already
/quote]

walaowey wrote:
Hi nm from my queue

Mochi's Hard
00:42:278 (3,1) - blanket ok
01:12:437 (4,1) - (4) flowing to (1) was quite hard imo. try something like this? just some suggestion, just that i feels the flow was not that nice there nope, its fine imo
01:28:801 - maybe map this part too? the beat was strong

That's all from me, Good Luck
Mir wrote:
Hi M4M for Log.~

[ Mochi's Hard]
00:08:267 (2) - Strong note on slider end feels really weird, especially since there's nothing different about this note than 00:11:155 (3). the slider start also following instrument so both fine imo
00:15:807 (2,3,4) - Triangle is slightly off. ok
00:16:770 (1) - Seems like a strong note to have on a slider end, especially when notes of similar strength where active at 00:16:128 (3,4). Maybe make 1 a 1/2 slider and add a circle after it? 1/2 slider play weird when the end is offbeat
00:19:336 (3,1,2) - Visual spacing between 1 and the repeat of 2 is a bit off. Center it a bit? changed
00:42:278 (3,1) - Holy blanket. how2blanket
00:50:941 (2) - Maybe a triple instead of just a static repeat slider? It's right after a reverse slider too, so it's much more doable here. nope,
00:51:903 (2) - Feels like you can space this out a tiny bit more to make the pattern 00:51:582 (1,2,3,4) - look more even.
00:56:877 (2,3) - The two here could definitely use more emphasis, especially since you use a lot of spacing emphasis in this diff already, and the 1 is spaced the same before it but is way weaker.
01:02:330 (1) - Space this out more like 01:01:689 (3) - is?
01:10:512 (3,4,5) - Why not make the 4 curved too in order to complete this pattern? Eg: http://i.imgur.com/AhlKMsh.png or something.
01:27:999 (1,2) - Fix blanket? okk

Good luck!

holy so much mod in a few days lol
thanks a bunch guys !

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Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-03-05T09:18:20+00:00

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Shurelia wrote:
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found this : https://shurelia.s-ul.eu/bokfNcFl , when checking the DS and it was caused by the stacks that aren't properly stacked yet. Mostly 0.02 thingy. Please do fix them all yipp done
00:16:609 (6) - should be a NC at here I guess. To make things a bit prettier imo put at 00:15:647 (4) - instead to highlight the pattern
00:18:213 - Even normal got this mapped oooo Easy diff creator, please have mercy lazy LoN
01:04:897 (3,4) - this is pretty clear un-stacked thing. Well, I already mentioned it all so you know what to do. Just in case you should check all the stacks on this diff fixerino
badstacks.osu , overall neat diff thanks! stackssuck

Metaku wrote:
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A LOT of broken stacks, won't point out each one just look through the map yourself I think i fixed most of them
00:03:133 (2) - maybe rotate 75 degrees or so? looks and feels a bit weird as it is imo sure, but by a different angle value
00:21:262 (2,3) - maybe just a 1/1 instead? that section has slightly more dense vocals hence the slightly more dense rhythm choice
00:22:705 (6) - Since you've followed vocals might want to make the sliderend here clickable instead would rather make it less click extensive (i.e. making it easier to follow because normal diff)
00:33:614 (1,2,3,4) - 3 1/2s in a row might be too click intensive here for a normal removed a circle
00:48:855 - could add something here for the vocal that section is focusing on percussion T_T
00:58:641 (1,2) - maybe ctrl g these so the clicking focus would stay on vocals like in 01:00:084 (4,5,6) - dun
01:01:207 (1,2) - same ^

CanadianBaka wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
00:43:882 (1,4) - this overlap might be too much simplified rhythm here so it should be easier to play/read
01:02:812 (5,6) - this is a pretty awkward angle to hit personally I think it's fine. the slight flow change was placed there to emphasize the slightly wavering vocals. I also don't believe that a normal should be completely easy to read as there is already an easier difficulty for them to play

pkhg wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
cs3 pls so i can hddthr this 3.3
00:15:647 (4,5,6,7) - spacing is fine but visual spacing makes it a bit misleading spaced a little bit more so it's easier to read
nothing really wrong here

teaMblack19 wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
00:11:636 (6,1) - I am a perfectionist and there are many not ideal stacks across the map. It's almost not noticeable, but it is. donezos
00:34:096 (2,3,4) - this is too weird. Fix it please. modified in prev mod

xXRosalineXx wrote:
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00:15:647 (4,5,6,7) - this part was really hard to read the first time i played it, it was unexpected to all the 1/2s that were happening right before modified in previous mod, hope it's better
01:01:047 - there should be a circle here imo disagree, there's nothing much happening in the music there. also the vocals are cut just before this bit
01:07:464 (4,5) - please try and align these positions are like that on purpose as the vocals change tone rather sharply (hence sharp flow)
01:18:373 (5) - this feels nicer to start higher than 4 rather than lower but then you would have to realign everything else so your choice i think it's fine ;d

Arf wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
00:04:096 (1) - Consider note here and then spinner 1/4 later or something? want the spinner to go the full 4/1 srry x.x
00:48:374 (5,1) - Consider mapping the note between these, bit noticeable that the vocal isn't mapped though the rhythm seems to be following the rest of them quite well fiiine i'll add it since multiple people have said to add it T_T previously didn't want to add it for consistency of that section
01:15:967 (5) -Perhaps Ctrl+J this to smooth the movement into the next slider? Up to you ok
01:20:940 (5,6) - Bit odd that 5 doesn't lead directly into 6 here with the slider flow like 01:18:373 (5,6) - does following flow as seen previously in pattern at 01:20:459 (4,5) -

_Orange wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
00:36:181 (1) - Ctrl J and move to original spot to make it flow better between the objects pattern consistency with 00:37:465 (3) - x.x
00:19:497 (4,5) - Imo it would be better if you made these identical like later in this section here 00:24:631 (4,5) - should be fine tbh, I kinda like the spreading grass blades pattern here ;;
01:33:935 (6) - Ctrl H flows better yes, it'll flow better but I'm intentionally making that rolling motion by not making it flow better for the "drum roll to the finale"

Yahuri wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
00:06:342 - add cymbal crash hitsound here? yer
00:27:839 - 00:28:160 (6) - these arent supposed to be default soft-hitclap right? change sampleset to S:C2 zzz buggy htisound copier
00:56:877 - ^ ^
01:11:796 (2) - add clap yip
01:29:282 (6,1) - restack fixed in prev mod

walaowey wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
01:05:058 (4) - stack is off fixed
01:11:956 (3) - ^ .
01:16:608 (1) - ^ .
err they're a few more stacks off, oh wait, is it intentional? or is it a mistake lol mapping with stacks on is difficult

Bluekrait wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
00:15:647 (4,5,6,7) - Consider spacing these out more or adjusting direction. They may be spaced 1.00x technically, but when played with slider leniency, they're more like half that which can lead to players hitting the notes prematurely. spaced a bit more from prev mod
01:17:250 (3) - Consider adding another circle in this spot and moving the reverse forward. http://puu.sh/uqVvJ/2e7204c735.jpg simplified rhythm so no long chains of objects are made, which are ugly and meh to play (also removed all circle to circle 1/2 rhythm in prev mod because it maaaay be a bit difficult to read/play for beginners)
01:19:817 (3) - ^ ^

Mir wrote:
[Rizen's Normal]
A CS 4 normal? That's pretty edgy dude. xd forgot to decrease zzzzzzzzzzzz (changed)
00:16:609 (6,7) - Hmm, the 7 here is clearly stronger, so why not show that somehow. I would maybe cause a direction change of sorts on the 7, perhaps like so: http://i.imgur.com/NtPZ4dd.png You might need to do some repositioning if you do this though. keepin as is to complete the flower arrangement. if I were to do anything else, it'll make the pattern seen weird because of consistent distance spacing, etc.
00:51:582 - Map this sound maybe? Sounds nice for a finishing note into the break. not a strong percussion so nty ;_;

thanks for mods everyone!

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never open this map at a netcafe

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Rizen wrote:
never open this map at a netcafe

never open up osu at a netcafe xd

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Lasse 2017-03-08T22:17:36+00:00

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judging from size your mp3 is only 128 kbps and I somehow can't open it in spek lol
would be great if you could find a better quality one

shouldnt the ending spinner be a bit longer? guitar is still pretty audible

happy wedding
00:06:262 - since you mapped to drums right before you could also map this drum beat here, maybe make the note before a 1/4 slider?
00:09:711 (3,4) - spacing here feels really underwhelming due to how people will play this with slider leniency
00:10:994 (3) - really think a lower spacing jump (or even being on a sliderend) would be nice here since it's just a weak scratch sound and takes away from guitars and drums
00:19:417 (6) - feels really unnecessary, 00:21:903 (6,7) - this one actually makes sense with guitar
00:27:117 (6) - kinda similar
00:29:443 (5,1) - 00:32:331 (1) - these kinda ruin your vocal emphasis, would change rhythm a bit here to make vocals stand out since out tend to follow them most of the time
00:40:032 (1) - how about comboing like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/qNSazeBV.jpg to match guitars/snares?
00:56:716 (5,1,2) - kinda weird to play since it's so linear with big spacing change and lots of 1/1 before. could try something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jfp5e5FE.jpg to get a better fitting angle
00:58:641 (1,2) - since you mostly follow vocals, ctrlg on this rhythm would be nice
same for 01:01:207 (1,2) - and all other occurances during the chorus. seems weird to got for drum emphasis on 2 objects when other things don't do it

left
00:04:096 (6) - shouldnt you nc this to keep it consitent with nc usage in the intro?
00:06:021 (6) - why not make this into http://lasse.s-ul.eu/nUPur5GC.jpg to follow drums better?
00:32:491 (2,4,5,6) - should check things like that with stacking enabled cause they look pretty lol http://lasse.s-ul.eu/z4bsCVYI.jpg // same for spots like 00:45:647 (2,4,5) - and more
00:58:000 (1) - how about a simple circle here? the hold doesn't fit with all insrumentals suddenly stopping and the vocals I think
01:20:940 (2,3) - really weird to suddenly use such a pattern this late into the map for no apparent reason :c
01:21:903 (2) - this shouldnt be a circle lol. no sound to really support it, either use a 1/2 or 3/4 slider on 1 or a 1/1 gap

mochi
00:11:315 - think a rhythm like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/R8QSlVpB.jpg would be nicer here to introduce the 1/4 and you also don't really have two of them in a row anywhere else
00:50:941 (2) - the last blue tick being mapped here seems weird with the drums, maybe try http://lasse.s-ul.eu/cEoFMh4n.jpg ?

rizen
00:15:647 (1,3) - I think these (or maybe even all of them) could be turned into stacked1/2 circles. you have a lower diff anyways and that would match the song so well
00:20:780 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm seems a bit too dense compared to other parts with more intensity. could probably replace one or both of the 1/2 sliders with 1/1 circles, similar for 00:26:395 (2,3) -

easy
00:06:663 (1) - think spots like this would work nicer with a rhythm that follow guitars properly like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/hg2piXLW.jpg cause they stand out so much more, same for other spots in this part like 00:09:229 (1) - and also the 01:24:309 - part
00:13:721 (1,2,3) - part here seems so slider heavy, could probably use more circles, like for example http://lasse.s-ul.eu/gMrqlnJt.jpg (but there are many solutions) slider spam is pretty straining for new players due to having to hold+follow the thing unlike just clicking it when having circles
00:17:090 (2) - still not really liking 1/2 sliders in easy diffs, but since this has bigger gaps before/after it might be alright
00:24:631 (2) - similar for the slider thing in this part, when 2 here for example could be 2 circles

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Lasse wrote:
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judging from size your mp3 is only 128 kbps and I somehow can't open it in spek lol
would be great if you could find a better quality one taken it from the official website, don't think there is a better quality one out there atm since this eroge is super new

shouldnt the ending spinner be a bit longer? guitar is still pretty audible extended by a bar (in all diffs)

happy wedding
00:06:262 - since you mapped to drums right before you could also map this drum beat here, maybe make the note before a 1/4 slider? i didnt actually hear a drum note on this until now, made (5) a 1/4
00:09:711 (3,4) - spacing here feels really underwhelming due to how people will play this with slider leniency increased
00:10:994 (3) - really think a lower spacing jump (or even being on a sliderend) would be nice here since it's just a weak scratch sound and takes away from guitars and drums agree, lowered
00:19:417 (6) - feels really unnecessary, 00:21:903 (6,7) - this one actually makes sense with guitar
00:27:117 (6) - kinda similar these notes also hit on the guitar
00:29:443 (5,1) - 00:32:331 (1) - these kinda ruin your vocal emphasis, would change rhythm a bit here to make vocals stand out since out tend to follow them most of the time yeah good idea
00:40:032 (1) - how about comboing like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/qNSazeBV.jpg to match guitars/snares? originally had it like this but thought it was too much :p changed to this
00:56:716 (5,1,2) - kinda weird to play since it's so linear with big spacing change and lots of 1/1 before. could try something like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/jfp5e5FE.jpg to get a better fitting angle yea i agree
00:58:641 (1,2) - since you mostly follow vocals, ctrlg on this rhythm would be nice
same for 01:01:207 (1,2) - and all other occurances during the chorus. seems weird to got for drum emphasis on 2 objects when other things don't do it think i got em all

easy
00:06:663 (1) - think spots like this would work nicer with a rhythm that follow guitars properly like http://lasse.s-ul.eu/hg2piXLW.jpg cause they stand out so much more, same for other spots in this part like 00:09:229 (1) - and also the 01:24:309 - part i disagree here, the rhythm used atm covers most of the main guitar notes and is much easier to play, since this is the lowest diff i wanted to minimise as much clicking on red ticks as possible
00:13:721 (1,2,3) - part here seems so slider heavy, could probably use more circles, like for example http://lasse.s-ul.eu/gMrqlnJt.jpg (but there are many solutions) slider spam is pretty straining for new players due to having to hold+follow the thing unlike just clicking it when having circles made 3 into circles to help build up into the slider which catches the drum fill + doesnt take away from the held guitar note on (2) - also did same at end of map
00:17:090 (2) - still not really liking 1/2 sliders in easy diffs, but since this has bigger gaps before/after it might be alright not really sure how else i can map it whilst still being able to hit the crash cymbal on the white tick, i think it should be good
00:24:631 (2) - similar for the slider thing in this part, when 2 here for example could be 2 circles i think the gaps between each note is enough of a gap to make it not too straining for noobs

thanks for the mod!

Net0

1,238 posts

Joined October 2014

Net0 2017-03-10T02:39:18+00:00

Hey NM from my queue.

[General]

All background images that are bigger compared to yours are NSFW… Can’t help you much and I really did search since I saw a mod commenting on the quality of the current one. But the best ones are the ones from amazon.jp in case you want to check them out in case you have someone to edit them for safety.
The gap from normal to hard is a bit big, but at this point I’m not sure if you’re up to add an advanced diff. Well, I’ll just state that an advanced near 3* AR7 would make the spread, that is currently good, even better.

[

Easy]

Small suggestion for this section 00:15:647 (1,2) -
Your rhythm at this spot 00:15:647 (1,2) - is covering the same thing in 3 different ways in a really small amount of time. I’m talking about the snare and cymbals that repeats in the same rhythm in this transition; 00:16:128 - /00:16:288 - and 00:16:609 -/00:16:770 – and 00:17:090 -/00:17:251 - . The first one is a snare followed by a guitar chord 00:16:128 - /00:16:288 - then two snares, 00:16:449 - /00:16:609 - and finally two cymbal 00:17:090 - /00:17:251 - . It’s pretty hard to express this on the easy diff, even tho rhythm wise they’re the same thing on the measure. As your pattern implied you simplified it for the sale of making the easy playable. I agree with that, however, you mapped the last two cymbal with a lot of emphasis by using that 1/2 slider 00:17:090 (2) - and that really makes all the rhythm before noticiable weird.
An alternative besides making a more simplified rhythm here 00:17:090 (3) - is probably making the easy diff a bit harder, but I’ll suggest it anyway; https://puu.sh/uBVQA.jpg
Basically here we can keep all the gaps 1/1 and with the new reverse slider you can add the finish-whistle hitsound you have used to the reverse point and slider end. The only sound sacrificed in this pattern is this guitar chord 00:16:288 - , but since all drums are covered, you can justify it as following the drum.
Really well done diff, great job

[

Rizen’s Normal]

Hi Rizen, great diff as usual
00:58:641 (1,2,3) – The rhythm here mixed a bit of the vocal and instrumentals. The active clicks are 00:58:641 (1) – drum with a strong vocal passively mapped here 00:58:801 – and then drum again 00:58:961 (2) – with the hitcircle but this time the vocal line that goes afterwards is mapped actively with this slider head 00:59:122 (3) - .In this section I can see that you’re making the vocals more prioritized 00:59:122 (3,4,5,6) - , since you’re ignoring this beats here 00:59:282 - /00:59:603 - /00:59:924 - . So I suggest that the rhythm here could be done the same as the next objects 01:00:084 (4,5,6) – making the circle coming first here 00:58:641 - . Like this; https://puu.sh/uBXuc.jpg . With this you have mapped the vocal actively as well as making possible to hitsound the sliderend here 00:58:961 – with the clap.
Another rhythm suggestion for this section 01:23:026 (5,6) - . The vocal emphasis here is really strong 01:21:742 (1,2,3,4) – , probably the strongest part of the kiai, you could keep that emphasis for longer with you make this final vocal “Happy”, I think, line here 01:23:667 – clickable. You could try this rhythm https://puu.sh/uBXUy.jpg with 01:23:667 (6) - on “Ha” and 01:23:988 (7) – on “ppy”.

[

Mochi’s Hard]

The rhythm here 00:15:647 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - clearly mapped all the emphatic 1/2 sections 00:15:647 (1,2) - /00:16:128 (3,4) -/00:16:609 (5,1) – but the two final cymbal were mapped differently. One is currently a slider end 00:17:090 – while the other a hitcircle 00:17:251 (2) - . Not sure why you made the decision to make this slider 00:16:770 (1) – 1/1, since it could be mapped as 1/2 like the previous ones 00:16:288 (4) -/” 00:15:807 (2) – “
What’s your thoughts on moving this 00:22:545 (2) – slightly to the right to make the distance here 00:22:064 (1,2) - /00:22:545 (2,3) – a bit more consistent? If you want to keep the current emphasis on the transition 00:22:545 (2,3) – I’m ok with that, but it seems that actually your spacing is most of the time consistent in the patterns; 00:21:582 (3,4,1) -/00:20:780 (1,2,3) -/00:23:989 (2,3,1) - . I can really understand the spacing changes before the main beats 00:25:272 (2,3,1) – but this section I’ve mention 00:22:064 (1,2,3) - doesn’t seem to be the case.
I’m not sure why you changed the section here 00:30:727 (4,5,1) – with the next correspondent one 00:33:294 (4,5,1) - . At first you did a 1/2 stack, something you’ve been using a lot to structure this verse, and afterwards changed it 00:33:294 (4,5,1) – to make all of them spaced. What about making the first section 00:30:727 (4,5,1) – spaced as well?
The spacing here 00:40:673 (3,4,1) – between 00:40:673 (3,4) – could be a bit smaller to give more emphasis to 00:41:315 (1) - . Something like this https://puu.sh/uBZWe.jpg . This is minor stuff, feel free to only change this section if you figure a better slider alternative.
I really like what you did here 00:54:149 (1,2,3) – with this slider 00:55:433 (3) – this slight curve was really cool.
The 1/4 rhythm here 01:23:667 (3) - lasts only for the triple 01:23:667 -/01:23:747 -/01:23:828 – at the slider end 01:23:908 – there’s no drum sound to be mapped in the 1/4. It plays fine, so you could keep it without any big changes on gameplay, but I’m telling you anyway because maybe you actually heard something there, or actually did it on purpose for flow.
Really well structured spacing and rhythm, good job

[

Left’s Insane]

I’m pretty sure you forgot to mute the sliderend here 00:51:502 – since this seems to be the usual 3/4 slider pattern type not really a 1/4 mapping.
Just to confirm it, the NC’s here 01:05:058 (1,1,1) – are for the SV changes right? The pattern itself doesn’t really need that.
Flow here is pretty odd 01:15:004 (3,1,2) - . The 01:15:004 (3,1) – 1/2 slider goes to 01:15:325 (1) – in a pretty clear circular flow, making the transition to the strong beat here 01:15:325 (1) – flows in a comfortable way, while the slider shape of 01:15:325 (1) – seems to keep that movement due to how its curvature, the placement of 01:15:806 (2) – goes into a wider angle, almost as if it’s a linear movement, but really spaced, making the flow here 01:15:325 (1,2) – really different from anything else presented so far. It’s totally playable and comfortable for some players, but feels really unique for no reason.
different flow pattern
Just to show a few examples of similar sections; 01:01:047 (4,1,2) -/01:08:747 (9,1,2) -. Another part to give contrast is this one 01:31:689 (4,1,2) -
similar but with similar flow
In this one is pretty clear the circular movement even tho you have used the same slider shape.
Pretty cool diff too, great job.

[

Happy Wedding]

Same point mentioned in Left’s Insane, you probably want to mute the 3/4 slider here 00:06:342 (1,1) - / 00:27:518 (2,3) -
Are you sure about this NC here 00:40:513 (1) - ? Not sure why you choose to nc this specific spot
The aesthetics here 00:56:716 (5,1,2,1,2,1) – could be improved a bit if you move 00:57:358 (1) – to x:183 y:243 and 00:57:839 (1) – to x:373 y:11. The distance will still be emphatic enough and it will also make the distance for the 1/1 gaps more consistent. Also, in case you apply this suggestion, remember to fix the stack of this circle 00:58:641 (1) – with the previous circle 00:57:839 (1) - .
This difficulty is really well done in terms of consistency and spacing with the 1/1 gaps. I really want to congratulate you for how you made the spacing and stacking of this rhythm sections; 00:41:155 (2,1,2,1) -/00:46:288 (7,1,2,1) – and 00:43:561 (6,1,2,1) -/00:48:695 (6,1,2,1) -

Sorry for taking so long to finish this mod. The diffs are all polished enough and consistent and looks all ready for moving forward into ranking. The mp3 concern is valid, but shouldn’t keep this from moving into qualified, since the audio seems fine in gameplay, there’s no weird noise, or anything.
Great mapset

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-03-10T07:49:59+00:00

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Lasse wrote:
from m4m

left
00:04:096 (6) - shouldnt you nc this to keep it consitent with nc usage in the intro? k
00:06:021 (6) - why not make this into http://lasse.s-ul.eu/nUPur5GC.jpg to follow drums better?too hard and now also ok
00:32:491 (2,4,5,6) - should check things like that with stacking enabled cause they look pretty lol http://lasse.s-ul.eu/z4bsCVYI.jpg // same for spots like 00:45:647 (2,4,5) - and more just want auto stack
00:58:000 (1) - how about a simple circle here? the hold doesn't fit with all insrumentals suddenly stopping and the vocals I think want strong movement in 00:58:000 (1,1) -
01:20:940 (2,3) - really weird to suddenly use such a pattern this late into the map for no apparent reason :c just normal pattern for me
01:21:903 (2) - this shouldnt be a circle lol. no sound to really support it, either use a 1/2 or 3/4 slider on 1 or a 1/1 gap tru

thx for mod!

Net0 wrote:
Hey NM from my queue.
[Left’s Insane]
I’m pretty sure you forgot to mute the sliderend here 00:51:502 – since this seems to be the usual 3/4 slider pattern type not really a 1/4 mapping.yea
Just to confirm it, the NC’s here 01:05:058 (1,1,1) – are for the SV changes right? The pattern itself doesn’t really need that. build up for 01:06:341 (1,2) -
Flow here is pretty odd 01:15:004 (3,1,2) - . The 01:15:004 (3,1) – 1/2 slider goes to 01:15:325 (1) – in a pretty clear circular flow, making the transition to the strong beat here 01:15:325 (1) – flows in a comfortable way, while the slider shape of 01:15:325 (1) – seems to keep that movement due to how its curvature, the placement of 01:15:806 (2) – goes into a wider angle, almost as if it’s a linear movement, but really spaced, making the flow here 01:15:325 (1,2) – really different from anything else presented so far. It’s totally playable and comfortable for some players, but feels really unique for no reason.
different flow pattern
Just to show a few examples of similar sections; 01:01:047 (4,1,2) -/01:08:747 (9,1,2) -. Another part to give contrast is this one 01:31:689 (4,1,2) -
similar but with similar flow
i thought it was ok
In this one is pretty clear the circular movement even tho you have used the same slider shape.
Pretty cool diff too, great job.

Great mapset

thx for mod!

meh

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-03-10T15:30:56+00:00

Net0 wrote:
Hey NM from my queue.
[General]
All background images that are bigger compared to yours are NSFW… Can’t help you much and I really did search since I saw a mod commenting on the quality of the current one. But the best ones are the ones from amazon.jp in case you want to check them out in case you have someone to edit them for safety. ikr, theres literally no sfw pics from this eroge, i'll take a look but i dont think i'll swap this bg
The gap from normal to hard is a bit big, but at this point I’m not sure if you’re up to add an advanced diff. Well, I’ll just state that an advanced near 3* AR7 would make the spread, that is currently good, even better. eh i think its fine, the sr might be a bit big but actual content wise it's a good spread i think

[Easy]
Small suggestion for this section 00:15:647 (1,2) -
Your rhythm at this spot 00:15:647 (1,2) - is covering the same thing in 3 different ways in a really small amount of time. I’m talking about the snare and cymbals that repeats in the same rhythm in this transition; 00:16:128 - /00:16:288 - and 00:16:609 -/00:16:770 – and 00:17:090 -/00:17:251 - . The first one is a snare followed by a guitar chord 00:16:128 - /00:16:288 - then two snares, 00:16:449 - /00:16:609 - and finally two cymbal 00:17:090 - /00:17:251 - . It’s pretty hard to express this on the easy diff, even tho rhythm wise they’re the same thing on the measure. As your pattern implied you simplified it for the sale of making the easy playable. I agree with that, however, you mapped the last two cymbal with a lot of emphasis by using that 1/2 slider 00:17:090 (2) - and that really makes all the rhythm before noticiable weird.
An alternative besides making a more simplified rhythm here 00:17:090 (3) - is probably making the easy diff a bit harder, but I’ll suggest it anyway; https://puu.sh/uBVQA.jpg
Basically here we can keep all the gaps 1/1 and with the new reverse slider you can add the finish-whistle hitsound you have used to the reverse point and slider end. The only sound sacrificed in this pattern is this guitar chord 00:16:288 - , but since all drums are covered, you can justify it as following the drum. i understand what you mean here, and i would like to swap out this slider for something more rhythm intensive to fit the drum fill, but i don't think this is the right solution. the drums and guitar here play pretty loudly in groups of three (so it goes 123,123,12,12, with the last two being the cymbals) so the slider start/repeat/end fall on each 1 of the pattern. following your rhythm it loses that emphasis because of the repeat in the middle which is something i don't want to do. i tried multiple other rhythms here as well but i couldn't match the same emphasis on the 1's, so i think i'll stick with how it is for now. (this was a big explanation for 1 slider lol)
Really well done diff, great job thanks ^^

[Happy Wedding]
Same point mentioned in Left’s Insane, you probably want to mute the 3/4 slider here 00:06:342 (1,1) - / 00:27:518 (2,3) - ya
Are you sure about this NC here 00:40:513 (1) - ? Not sure why you choose to nc this specific spot drums play in a 123 type pattern
The aesthetics here 00:56:716 (5,1,2,1,2,1) – could be improved a bit if you move 00:57:358 (1) – to x:183 y:243 and 00:57:839 (1) – to x:373 y:11. The distance will still be emphatic enough and it will also make the distance for the 1/1 gaps more consistent. Also, in case you apply this suggestion, remember to fix the stack of this circle 00:58:641 (1) – with the previous circle 00:57:839 (1) - . did a different change to 00:57:358 (1) - and left the second one since i don't think it matters that much honestly, it looks almost the same

This difficulty is really well done in terms of consistency and spacing with the 1/1 gaps. I really want to congratulate you for how you made the spacing and stacking of this rhythm sections; 00:41:155 (2,1,2,1) -/00:46:288 (7,1,2,1) – and 00:43:561 (6,1,2,1) -/00:48:695 (6,1,2,1) - thank you ^^ this was my favourite part of the song to map xd
Sorry for taking so long to finish this mod. The diffs are all polished enough and consistent and looks all ready for moving forward into ranking. The mp3 concern is valid, but shouldn’t keep this from moving into qualified, since the audio seems fine in gameplay, there’s no weird noise, or anything. no worries ^^ thanks for the compliments I had a look around for a better quality mp3 last night but couldn't find anything, and using a youtube-mp3 file is worse quality than the current one that i have from the official site (even if it is a higher bitrate)
Great mapset

thanks for the mod!

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-03-15T16:26:35+00:00

Net0 wrote:
[Mochi’s Hard]
The rhythm here 00:15:647 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - clearly mapped all the emphatic 1/2 sections 00:15:647 (1,2) - /00:16:128 (3,4) -/00:16:609 (5,1) – but the two final cymbal were mapped differently. One is currently a slider end 00:17:090 – while the other a hitcircle 00:17:251 (2) - . Not sure why you made the decision to make this slider 00:16:770 (1) – 1/1, since it could be mapped as 1/2 like the previous ones 00:16:288 (4) -/” 00:15:807 (2) – “ that works fine imo, i just dont want made 00:16:770 (1) - a 1/2 because there's no sound at downbeat
What’s your thoughts on moving this 00:22:545 (2) – slightly to the right to make the distance here 00:22:064 (1,2) - /00:22:545 (2,3) – a bit more consistent? If you want to keep the current emphasis on the transition 00:22:545 (2,3) – I’m ok with that, but it seems that actually your spacing is most of the time consistent in the patterns; 00:21:582 (3,4,1) -/00:20:780 (1,2,3) -/00:23:989 (2,3,1) - . I can really understand the spacing changes before the main beats 00:25:272 (2,3,1) – but this section I’ve mention 00:22:064 (1,2,3) - doesn’t seem to be the case. well fixed
I’m not sure why you changed the section here 00:30:727 (4,5,1) – with the next correspondent one 00:33:294 (4,5,1) - . At first you did a 1/2 stack, something you’ve been using a lot to structure this verse, and afterwards changed it 00:33:294 (4,5,1) – to make all of them spaced. What about making the first section 00:30:727 (4,5,1) – spaced as well? perhaps i made the next one spaced because it has drum clap while the previous only has normal snare ?
The spacing here 00:40:673 (3,4,1) – between 00:40:673 (3,4) – could be a bit smaller to give more emphasis to 00:41:315 (1) - . Something like this https://puu.sh/uBZWe.jpg . This is minor stuff, feel free to only change this section if you figure a better slider alternative. both has cymbal and strong sound, so i think its fine
I really like what you did here 00:54:149 (1,2,3) – with this slider 00:55:433 (3) – this slight curve was really cool. thanks !!
The 1/4 rhythm here 01:23:667 (3) - lasts only for the triple 01:23:667 -/01:23:747 -/01:23:828 – at the slider end 01:23:908 – there’s no drum sound to be mapped in the 1/4. It plays fine, so you could keep it without any big changes on gameplay, but I’m telling you anyway because maybe you actually heard something there, or actually did it on purpose for flow. fixed
Really well structured spacing and rhythm, good job

@lasse : i keep the first one since i'd like a double triplet smh, it gives more gameplay pressure for this part. fixed the second

thanks both

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Rizen

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Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-03-16T04:49:25+00:00

Lasse

rizen
00:15:647 (1,3) - I think these (or maybe even all of them) could be turned into stacked1/2 circles. you have a lower diff anyways and that would match the song so well changed the last two sliders to two circles each instead
00:20:780 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm seems a bit too dense compared to other parts with more intensity. could probably replace one or both of the 1/2 sliders with 1/1 circles, similar for 00:26:395 (2,3) - ok, simplified to slider -> circle for both ones

Net0

[Rizen’s Normal]
[list:1337][*]Hi Rizen, great diff as usual

thankss
[*]00:58:641 (1,2,3) – The rhythm here mixed a bit of the vocal and instrumentals. The active clicks are 00:58:641 (1) – drum with a strong vocal passively mapped here 00:58:801 – and then drum again 00:58:961 (2) – with the hitcircle but this time the vocal line that goes afterwards is mapped actively with this slider head 00:59:122 (3) - .In this section I can see that you’re making the vocals more prioritized 00:59:122 (3,4,5,6) - , since you’re ignoring this beats here 00:59:282 - /00:59:603 - /00:59:924 - . So I suggest that the rhythm here could be done the same as the next objects 01:00:084 (4,5,6) – making the circle coming first here 00:58:641 - . Like this; https://puu.sh/uBXuc.jpg . With this you have mapped the vocal actively as well as making possible to hitsound the sliderend here 00:58:961 – with the clap. aaa meant to do this because of previous mod.. fixed
[*]Another rhythm suggestion for this section 01:23:026 (5,6) - . The vocal emphasis here is really strong 01:21:742 (1,2,3,4) – , probably the strongest part of the kiai, you could keep that emphasis for longer with you make this final vocal “Happy”, I think, line here 01:23:667 – clickable. You could try this rhythm https://puu.sh/uBXUy.jpg with 01:23:667 (6) - on “Ha” and 01:23:988 (7) – on “ppy”. did 1/2 sliders into a circle instead of the 1/1 repeat slider. I also wanted to emphasize those strong drums in the music hence this rhythm choice[/list]

thanks for the mods!

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[Metadata]
Title:Love Love Sensation short ver,
TitleUnicode:らぶらぶセンセーション short ver,
Artist:solfa feat.nao
ArtistUnicode:solfa feat.nao
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:Rizen's Normal
Source:らぶらぶシスターズ ～花嫁＆姉妹達とのドキドキハーレム生活～
Tags:Love Love Sisters ~Hanayome & Shimai-tachi to no Doki Doki Harem Seikatsu~ Pajamas EX eroge visual novel opening left momochikun rizen
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BeatmapSetID:565367

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Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,643 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-03-16T22:15:06+00:00

recheck

check your forum messages for bg stuff

is that soundcloud stuff actually official lol
better get someone to confirm metadata

01:38:106 - probably shouldnt have a clap cause snare is only on red tick, but keeping it also sounds alright so up to you. the way it's hitsounded on mochi's diff seems nicer to me

top diff
00:33:294 (8,1) - I usually don't point these things out, but blanketing this would look so cute http://lasse.s-ul.eu/6VMJyaGA.jpg
00:47:572 (1) - how about curving this cause of 00:45:005 (1,2) - 00:42:438 (1,2) - doing the same thing?
01:37:464 (1,2) - unlike the following stacks this has guitar/melody on both, so mapping it differently would be nice. maybe http://lasse.s-ul.eu/9wBj5kUS.jpg or unstack the this and keep the 3-4 and 5-6 stacks
chorus rhythm is much better now

left
stack leniency 2"fixed" most of the patterns broken by autostack, but also kinda makes rhythm harder to read in some spots, would've preferred if you just fixed it by moving things a bit lol. anyways it should still be alright readability for an Insane so I guess it's fine either way...

easy
00:06:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - still disagree with rhythm here. red ticks aren't harder to play or anything, it's about gaps and polarity and the other solution that doesn't mix two layers (drums+guitar) I posted gives you the same gaps (all 1/1 or 2/1) but is actually much better to play for beginners cause it's more clear what is being followed and guitars stand out so much here // 01:24:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too
would also differentiate this a bit from the chorus (where drum rhythm seems alright cause vocal rhythm is kinda lol with drums there for an easy)
but guitars here stand out so much more

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-03-16T23:33:40+00:00

Lasse wrote:
recheck

check your forum messages for bg stuff ty

is that soundcloud stuff actually official lol
better get someone to confirm metadata pm'd you with the sauce, will get a double check with kwan and shadow1and

01:38:106 - probably shouldnt have a clap cause snare is only on red tick, but keeping it also sounds alright so up to you. the way it's hitsounded on mochi's diff seems nicer to me oops, was a hitsound mistake xd, mochi's is using the right ver, changed all diffs to copy it

top diff
00:33:294 (8,1) - I usually don't point these things out, but blanketing this would look so cute http://lasse.s-ul.eu/6VMJyaGA.jpg ya (altho it blanketed the middle of the stack before xd) (also fixed a missing hitsound in the triple)
00:47:572 (1) - how about curving this cause of 00:45:005 (1,2) - 00:42:438 (1,2) - doing the same thing? ya
01:37:464 (1,2) - unlike the following stacks this has guitar/melody on both, so mapping it differently would be nice. maybe http://lasse.s-ul.eu/9wBj5kUS.jpg or unstack the this and keep the 3-4 and 5-6 stacks i agree, went with the first option since im not sure how i can unstack without making it hard to read or feel strange to play
chorus rhythm is much better now yay!

easy
00:06:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - still disagree with rhythm here. red ticks aren't harder to play or anything, it's about gaps and polarity and the other solution that doesn't mix two layers (drums+guitar) I posted gives you the same gaps (all 1/1 or 2/1) but is actually much better to play for beginners cause it's more clear what is being followed and guitars stand out so much here // 01:24:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too
would also differentiate this a bit from the chorus (where drum rhythm seems alright cause vocal rhythm is kinda lol with drums there for an easy)
but guitars here stand out so much more ok i changed it, i agree it makes the guitar stand out more, was just unsure on whether it would be too much :p

redl for new bg and metadata update (removed a space from source)

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Joined October 2014

Left 2017-03-17T03:26:50+00:00

@lasse that's also nice but I don't like messy things in editor.. and also nice in now. if it's 'should' one i'll fix it, if not wanna keep this one

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,643 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-03-18T12:34:42+00:00

bubbled, gl

RyoKazuka

Elite Mapper

669 posts

Joined April 2015

RyoKazuka 2017-03-18T12:58:24+00:00

gogogogo

Graffin

131 posts

Joined June 2014

Graffin 2017-03-18T13:53:51+00:00

hello lon woo bubble gl

Log Off Now

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Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-03-18T14:50:20+00:00

thank you

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,090 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-03-19T08:01:10+00:00

this bg lol
her arm looks so fucked up

[extra]
00:38:427 (5,1) - lol blanket
01:37:785 - weird to have pretty strong drums and sliders here, circle fitting better imo. not like you don't have circle spam jumps in earlier part so shouldn't be a problem.

[left's insane]
can't say i'm a fan of this perfect stacking lol

00:40:513 (1,2,3,4) - weird pattern imo, goes from sharp angle to pretty wide angle on 00:40:673 (2,3,4) - which is a bit uncomfortable imo.
[mochi's hard]
00:04:096 - imo spinner here is kinda bad, you miss out on this really loud drum stuff the first time it happens but then follow it at 00:05:860 (1) - so it's kinda inconsistent. just making note at 00:04:096 - and following drums normally is much better to me

01:35:860 (1) - rly minor but putting jump here like 01:36:501 (2,3,1) - could make sense

[normal]
01:24:790 (2,3) - unrankable blanket
01:35:218 - not really a fan of the slider ends being "overmapped" in a normal, but w/e

[easy]
fine

pm me when responded

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Left 2017-03-20T07:13:58+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
this bg lol
her arm looks so fucked up

[left's insane]
can't say i'm a fan of this perfect stacking lol maybe i should consider it next time lol

00:40:513 (1,2,3,4) - weird pattern imo, goes from sharp angle to pretty wide angle on 00:40:673 (2,3,4) - which is a bit uncomfortable imo. 00:40:513 (1,2,3) - soft flow for next one and 00:40:834 (3,4) - here, slider direction makes this pattern a bit hard, so i expressed beat in 00:40:994 (4) - . and i thought it shouldn't have too strong flow cuz 00:41:315 (1,2) - is super strong sound.

pm me when responded

thx for mod!

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-03-20T12:20:13+00:00

applied all (blanket adjusted, sliders replaced with circles)

thank

upd

osu file format v14

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Mode: 0
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Title:Love Love Sensation short ver,
TitleUnicode:らぶらぶセンセーション short ver,
Artist:solfa feat.nao
ArtistUnicode:solfa feat.nao
Creator:Log Off Now
Version:Rizen's Normal
Source:らぶらぶシスターズ ～花嫁＆姉妹達とのドキドキハーレム生活～
Tags:Love Love Sisters ~Hanayome & Shimai-tachi to no Doki Doki Harem Seikatsu~ Pajamas EX eroge visual novel opening left momochikun rizen
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Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Log Off Now 2017-03-20T12:31:06+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
this bg lol
her arm looks so fucked up natural pose kek

[extra]
00:38:427 (5,1) - lol blanket aaa
01:37:785 - weird to have pretty strong drums and sliders here, circle fitting better imo. not like you don't have circle spam jumps in earlier part so shouldn't be a problem. talked in pm, kept for guitar

[easy]
fine

pm me when responded ya

thanks for the mod!

IamKwaN wrote:
i don't see any issues with current meta

only thing i could point out is that a space between feat. and nao can be added, i.e. solfa feat. nao

according to https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P9cL7hXsSSw

good luck then

metadata confirmed, although im going to leave the space out of the artist field because it shows up without a space on the main website, will update when gd's are ready

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2017-03-20T13:37:13+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
[mochi's hard]
00:04:096 - imo spinner here is kinda bad, you miss out on this really loud drum stuff the first time it happens but then follow it at 00:05:860 (1) - so it's kinda inconsistent. just making note at 00:04:096 - and following drums normally is much better to me fixed

01:35:860 (1) - rly minor but putting jump here like 01:36:501 (2,3,1) - could make sense the next stacks would be weird imo, also for that one i made jumps also because its changing spacing

pm me when responded

thanks

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Creator:Log Off Now
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Source:らぶらぶシスターズ～花嫁＆姉妹達とのドキドキハーレム生活～
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Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-03-20T13:52:26+00:00

Needs a remap if you're going for ranked. Full or diagonal, perfectly vertical or horizontal sliders, no jumps, or patterns in insane. Lots of overmapping and way too many obtuse angles. Background is low quality, and no custom hitsounds. Every possible blanket is butchered as well. Sorry for such a harsh comment, but hopefully you'll look out for the things I pointed out next time!

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Log Off Now 2017-03-20T13:53:46+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
Needs a remap if you're going for ranked. Full or diagonal, perfectly vertical or horizontal sliders, no jumps, or patterns in insane. Lots of overmapping and way too many obtuse angles. Background is low quality, and no custom hitsounds. Every possible blanket is butchered as well. Sorry for such a harsh comment, but hopefully you'll look out for the things I pointed out next time!

Hello!

Well, I gotta say i am disappointed, this mod had potential to be really helpful, but what i read, it just wasn't how it was supposed to be... Unfortunately, i have to say that you don't have enough skill as a modder to help me out, and here is why:

- The mod style for this really isn't fitting for any map by any mapper, even if it has a good intention behind it, it's really just not got any useful information inside of it. It was also really offensive.
- The words which you used are very hurtful, and can damage a mappers motivation to make more.
- What do you think happens if mappers stop mapping? You have no maps. If you have no maps, you have no game to play.
- Also there appears to be some underlying meme here, places like the opening paragraph where its just plain rudeness for no apparent reason (none other than making the mapper feel more ashamed of their creation that is.).

Lastly, it needed some actual mod content, but probably an even better idea: an actual mod. If made properly, the mod could be something really helpful that helps the mapper progress not only in this map, but for all other future maps yet to come from them. Or simply something more more simple such as pointing something out which you don't like and saying why :\

Well I'll just have to say this: If you really want to continue with modding, i suggest practicing alot more on your people skills, mostly friendliness, creating a better experience for all mappers, and most importantly, making more maps. Because if you can mod this map with a better attitude, it's even easier to get your point across.

Sorry if I wasn't helpful at all, i tried ;_;

thanks!

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_Meep_ 2017-03-20T14:19:20+00:00

nvm. Im lazy af
maybe i will look at the hard

Mir

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Mir 2017-03-20T15:27:21+00:00

The finish spam hitsounding is really annoying to play, could you fix it perhaps by using the kick as whistle and the finish as finish and the snare as clap or something? If you need all four use normal-hitnormal as your kick and only use the normal sampleset for kicks and switch to soft when you don't need it. That way you don't even need multiple sets for hitsounds.

Just my two cents, map isn't bad but the hitsounds could be improved.

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Log Off Now 2017-03-20T15:35:16+00:00

Mir wrote:
The finish spam hitsounding is really annoying to play, could you fix it perhaps by using the kick as whistle and the finish as finish and the snare as clap or something? If you need all four use normal-hitnormal as your kick and only use the normal sampleset for kicks and switch to soft when you don't need it. That way you don't even need multiple sets for hitsounds.

Just my two cents, map isn't bad but the hitsounds could be improved.

This is something that I will definitely look into doing in the future as I never though of hitsounding that way.

edit: will ask for a dq and will fix the hs even tho im not sure its worth

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Mir

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Mir 2017-03-20T15:41:41+00:00

Log Off Now wrote:
Mir wrote:
The finish spam hitsounding is really annoying to play, could you fix it perhaps by using the kick as whistle and the finish as finish and the snare as clap or something? If you need all four use normal-hitnormal as your kick and only use the normal sampleset for kicks and switch to soft when you don't need it. That way you don't even need multiple sets for hitsounds.

Just my two cents, map isn't bad but the hitsounds could be improved.
This is something that I will definitely look into doing in the future as I never though of hitsounding that way, but for this I think it'll be ok since it's already qualified and doesn't directly effect the playability of the map. If something were to happen in the future then yes I will consider changing them.

It doesn't directly affect the playability, that is true. What the map is basically asking is "use custom hitsounds unless you want to be spammed with finishes" which to be honest isn't too nice to players that prefer playing with their skin's hitsounds. For me it was hard to concentrate when I first played the map because all I was hearing were finishes, and on top of that the emphasis you put with actual finishes with custom hitsounds are lost because if you don't play with them everything is a finish. I feel that it actually detracts from gameplay experience as it is despite not directly affecting playability.

Edit: nvm you requested literally as i posted this

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