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Mirash

Nomination Assessment Team

Joined June 2013

Mirash 2017-02-17T17:32:45+00:00

особо нечего писать, мне все нравится о.о!

Collab
01:45:356 (8) - возможно ты хочешь выгнуть его немного и поднять выше, чтобы дистанс был как между 01:45:234 (7,9) - http://i.imgur.com/xB5FNEM.png
01:47:063 (6,7,1,2) - можно квадрат чуть ровнее сделать, вейв чуть правее
01:55:599 (1) - чуть ниже от 01:54:624 (1) -
02:03:404 (1) - чуть выше от 02:02:429 (1) -
02:29:502 (1) - тут нк поставил на вокал и сломал 02:28:770 (3,4,5,1) - этот патерн, а тут 01:03:648 (6) - нет. 01:03:648 (6,1) - свапни тогда!
03:00:721 (4,5) - а они не слишком близко?
03:51:749 мне кажется этот красный поинт должен быть тут 03:51:739

од не сильно низкий? на обоих дифах

AncientMario

94 posts

Joined October 2014

AncientMario 2017-02-18T10:43:17+00:00

Hi ya!

Storyboard

fix borders pls https://ancimario.s-ul.eu/n5tgDSBH

Collab

00:26:087 (1,3) - чуть-чуть меньший оверлап сделай
00:40:234 (1,2,3,4) - чуть ровнее сделай паттерн
00:43:404 (1,2) - вот тут они не равномерно на 00:43:892 (3) - наславиваются
00:48:160 (2) - слайдер меньше изгибай, а то выходит бланкет не ровный
01:52:063 (3,4,5) - может тут сделать мистера Монстрату? (треугольник)
01:56:697 (2,3) - нужен стак более ровный
02:36:087 (1,2,3,4) - Вот тут джампы сделай, будет вообще охрененно!
03:04:990 (2) - влево его немного
03:19:014 (3,4,5) - вот это что-то пиздец, сори
03:20:234 (4,1) - А что если тут вот так сделать? https://ancimario.s-ul.eu/uQaA1bi4
04:47:802 (1,2,3,4) - а вот тут я бы сделал менее ровные стаки
04:49:753 (1,2,3,4) - https://ancimario.s-ul.eu/9qgUEIuX вышло криво, но думаю ты понял

Очень хорошо сделано. Мне нравится! Ranked! Ой, я же не бн:(

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,634 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2017-02-18T11:26:25+00:00

Please check it in playing mode or cinema mode √

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Ayana Hana 2017-02-18T13:21:24+00:00

[General]

Включить опастность эпилепсии в 2 диффах? А в Starry Sky включить видскрин.
dark.jpg unused file.
Анранк разрешение бг.
Добавить в теги : enn～Abyss～茶太屋ワニ上海アリス幻樂団
SPOILER

[Collab]

01:49:746 (3) - тут точно должен быть нк, или убрать 01:49:258 (1) - тут, как тут 02:04:868 (7,8,1) -
02:06:331 (1,5) - честно я не понимаю как ты ставишь нк, как будто ты делис, он так же странно их ставит, но по моему это не логично. Больге не буду про них писать.
00:39:502 (1,1,1,2) - мне не особо втирают эти крновские недослайдеры, может им придать более волнистую форму?
03:25:356 (3,5,1) - может сделать что то такое?
03:50:396 (7,8) - разве они должны быть стакнуты?
Больше не могу найти о чем написать, все хорошо.

Cellina

Beatmap Nominator

1,023 posts

Joined March 2013

Cellina 2017-02-19T03:57:05+00:00

dat storyboard is preventing a massive lag on my pc

Kyubey

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2017-02-24T19:30:32+00:00

I wish yf_bmp made a storyboard for me some day, but sadly I don't have any mapset worthy his godlike storyboards.

[General]
SB\dark.jpg — unused file.
Добавь тегов: doujin comiket 81 c81 abyss. Последнее — перевод кандзи в названии трека, пусть будет.
00:55:112 - 01:00:356 вот в этом куске софтвистлы какие-то странные, будто часть пропустил, так и должно быть? Звучит не особо хорошо.
[Collab]
03:25:356 (3,5,1) - раздвинь ты их чуть сильнее, пятёрка под тройкой почти незаметна из-за одинаковых цветов
[Диффнейм]
Вайдскрин саппорт включи.
02:09:990 (1,2) - если тут ctrl+g сделать то ведётся приятнее
04:14:997 (5,1) - нет здесь такого разгона в треке чтобы такой резкий джамп делать, он не в тему играется, лучше поменяй

Ayana Hana

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Ayana Hana 2017-02-26T16:40:17+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
I wish yf_bmp made a storyboard for me some day, but sadly I don't have any mapset worthy his godlike storyboards.

pls, yf

Osu Mapman

2,514 posts

Joined August 2012

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-26T17:54:50+00:00

okay, so what was fixed:
widescreen support ✔
unused file ✔
tags ✔
OD was increased on both diffs ✔
metadata ✔
several gameplay-wice changes, to mention some: those big jumps, addresed by delis, that jump thingie mentoined by kyubey (sadly i can't recall all of the changes because i'm dumb motherfucker and have no changelog (i was fixing all those year old mods last three months and now i hate my fucking job)) ✔
some nazi stuff such as blankets ✔

What wasn't fixed:
NCs ✘
hitsounds ✘
timing ✘

Thank you all people for your hardwork!

Kyubey

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2017-02-26T19:25:24+00:00

#1

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-26T19:26:35+00:00

thanks, pups

Stjpa

901 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2017-02-26T20:51:57+00:00

metadata source? just wondering because theres a spacebar between enn and ~ in romanised but not in the original title

[collab]
- 00:40:356 (2) - looks a bit weird that the slider is not blanketing 00:40:234 (1,3,4) - equally, wouldnt be much work to fix i guess
- 02:45:112 (1,2,3,4,5) - has completely different rhythm 01:34:868 - here, really weird considering that nothing much changed in the music or at least nothing that seems to be really audible
- 03:34:746 (4,5) - dont u think that the spacing here is a bit huge in context with the pattern here, as a player i definitely wouldnt expect such a large jump but rather another overlap pattern or something
- 03:36:331 (6) - personally id structure this slider a little differently to emphasize the much stronger beat on the next slider
- 03:58:090 (2) - whats ur intention of not making the flow intuitive without any jumps like u do afterwards

last diff seems fine

edit: im wondering if u should enable the storyboard strobe warning because some parts are actually really flashy and its just a warning after all, so enabling it doesnt hurt

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-26T22:38:11+00:00

everything except 03:36:331- was fixed
as for metadata, according to kyubey and delis, it's fine to use spacebars in romanisation since these are two different words (source was smoothie's mapset)

not updated yet thought (i blame my connection)

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Delis

1,443 posts

Joined May 2012

Delis 2017-02-26T22:43:39+00:00

damn I'm not actually watching one

Osu Mapman

2,514 posts

Joined August 2012

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-26T23:01:24+00:00

:^)

Updated btw

Osu Mapman

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Joined August 2012

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-01T22:25:21+00:00

Zad

Osu Mapman

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Joined August 2012

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-01T22:25:57+00:00

:-[

Stjpa

901 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2017-03-02T21:38:48+00:00

#2

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-02T21:40:25+00:00

thank

Uberzolik

osu! Alumni

291 posts

Joined January 2012

Uberzolik 2017-03-03T22:08:46+00:00

i love u for making this map

pw384

Beatmap Nominator

2,317 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2017-03-04T10:06:06+00:00

would be better if "yf_bmp" is added into tags in the next mod for qualification
love this deeply, both map and storyboard

Osu Mapman

2,514 posts

Joined August 2012

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-04T14:30:26+00:00

Ye i planned to add. Also it seems like i need another metadata check

Osu Mapman

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Joined August 2012

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-05T12:53:04+00:00

i'm dumb

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Garden

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-03-05T12:58:08+00:00

aaa i think i cannot check this today a cold is killing me rn i'll do it when i recover
well just take this as a placeholder

Osu Mapman

2,514 posts

Joined August 2012

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-05T13:09:20+00:00

alacat wrote:
I think it's wrong.
maybe same case p/3122868 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/143723

Title : enn～淵～
Romanised : enn
Source : 東方神霊廟　～ Ten Desires.
Tags : Chiisana Yokubou no Hoshizora 上海アリス幻樂団 Team Shanghai Alice

http://www16.big.or.jp/~zun/html/th13top.html
http://sally.dojin.com/SA-002b.html

Stjpa

901 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2017-03-06T17:49:27+00:00

Re-bub #1 because of sb changes and new metadata

Kyubey

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2017-03-07T18:33:31+00:00

#2

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-07T19:03:02+00:00

thanks

Garden

osu! Alumni

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Joined June 2013

Garden 2017-03-08T06:43:47+00:00

aadd touhou to tags

collab:
01:03:648 (6,1) - 01:19:258 (6,1) - you did contrary new combos for vocal in highest diff
03:45:843 (4) - the reverse is not mapped to any specific sound here maybe u wanna make 03:46:575 - clickable or sth but the idea is not consistent with highest diff either so i supposed its a mistake

extra:
01:09:258 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - suddenly bumped up spacing and continuous anti-clockwise movement here make it stand out as a quite gimmick pattern to play in this relatively calm section, compared with exact same rhythm patterns in similar sections so i suggest rearranging a bit here.
02:29:502 (6,1) - should swap nc for vocal like u did to the first part

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-08T07:19:22+00:00

there was a converstation via irc

бокс

soo, 03:45:843 (4) - i haven't fixed this in collab (whole that diff have a bit other rhythmic since i really tried to make it less complicated) and 01:09:258 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - i really tried to reduce the spacing, but i probably failed (also i wanted to emphazise vocals with those spacings)
10:06 EvilElvis: updating atm
10:10 Garden: hmm.. 03:45:843 (4,5) - dont u think combine them into one is less complicated?
10:16 EvilElvis: 03:46:575 (5) - is strong beat actually, and i want to have it clicable because otherwice whole stuff will be odd to play, because most of the strong beats would be unckicable
10:17 Garden: well okie i think i misunderstood it

also some ncs were fixed

Garden

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Garden 2017-03-08T07:31:18+00:00

qualified!

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-08T07:32:14+00:00

BEST 8 OF MARCH GIFT THANK YOU LOVE

allein

Beatmap Nominator

832 posts

Joined March 2015

allein 2017-03-08T08:08:07+00:00

Congrats, sweetie ~ <3

pw384

Beatmap Nominator

2,317 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2017-03-08T08:23:40+00:00

AWESOME

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

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Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2017-03-08T08:52:08+00:00

According to the BNG rules, you could nominate the set only 24 hours after the latest bubble. Reverted to #2 bubble.

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-08T08:53:09+00:00

so this is the same for rebubbles?
OKIE HYPE WASN'T REAL

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Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2017-03-08T08:55:25+00:00

There should be at least a 24-hour gap between qualification and the last bubble no matter what situation you are in.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

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IamKwaN 2017-03-08T08:57:29+00:00

Yes, because intention of the rule to give enough time for the public to look over your set and discuss if issues were found. Rebubbling means you have changed something in your set. You agree with the change, thus pushing the set forward again. So, with the changes, you have to give the public another 24 hours to check.

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2017-03-08T08:57:49+00:00

Ayyy Chata. I have a good song no one has from Chata if you wanna map it. Contact the mp3 god anytime

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-08T09:02:00+00:00

oookie then, thanks for poiting stuff

Garden

osu! Alumni

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Garden 2017-03-08T09:22:50+00:00

sorry for inconvenience .. didnt notice it while turning to a new page

Ayana Hana

796 posts

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Ayana Hana 2017-03-08T11:24:44+00:00

InternalLight wrote:
Congrats, sweetie ~ <3

PandaHero

677 posts

Joined November 2011

PandaHero 2017-03-08T11:56:08+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
OKIE HYPE WASN'T REAL

Enon

Beatmap Nominator

2,719 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2017-03-08T13:34:02+00:00

I T I S A W E S O M E

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riktoi

711 posts

Joined September 2014

riktoi 2017-03-08T14:02:34+00:00

Is it possible the fog image could be change to something that doesn't have a mean cut like the image currently has? It's not really that big of a deal, but since this map's qualification was postponed maybe it's possible!!!

ew

Yohanes

1,286 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2017-03-08T15:03:12+00:00

Goddamnit, how do you find lots of orgasmic music like this

and while you're at it, probably add "東方project" to the tags as well

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-09T05:30:57+00:00

As for the tag i already have it (not romanised) but ill add, it won't hurt, as for sb, well, personally i find it okay, but i'll ask yf to check it, thanks people!

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

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Seijiro 2017-03-09T09:47:13+00:00

I never heard such a soft and cute Chata voice, holy <3

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-09T17:13:02+00:00