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Garden

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Garden 2016-01-26T08:45:33+00:00

00:46:575 (3,4,1) - a sudden smallller spacing in such high bpm songs is really hard to manage, place them a bit farther can be fine
01:47:551 (1) - curve in another way for flow?
01:47:795 (2) - nc here instead?
02:09:258 (2) - ^
04:18:411 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - i think it's better to nc the way you did here 04:37:924 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
03:19:136 (4,1,2) - i suppose it's hard to obtain combo here, maybe change to an acute angle flow or whatever

sry for such a short mod, this map is really cool, best luck on this!
And btw i think it's better to get some testplayers and listen to their opinions on playability of some parts.

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-01-26T13:56:52+00:00

fixed the very first and the last one
As for nc, as you could notice i used special CC for every part of the song, so i do believe that it's okay to not stick to the downbeats sometimes, so new combos intended to be putted in this way in case of patterns
Thank you for modding and star i'll get to your map asap!

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2016-01-26T16:17:01+00:00

Hey

00:07:795 - I think it would be awesome to lower volume a bit because the piano is more quiet here. There are more spots where you could apply this, you can try playing around with it to get some awesome effects. Not necessary tho.
00:39:990 (3,1,2,1,2) - In my opinion this NCing and the rhythm is quite weird. You can put objects everywhere, because it's in the song, but then the NCing doesn't make a lot of sense, do they? 00:40:356 - Somehow i still think this should be a long slider... I think it would fit the rhythm better but maybe you don't want that. (but it would be consistent with 00:43:892 (3,1) - )
00:46:209 (4) - It looks a bit too close. Try like 376 304
01:19:258 (6) - Put a NC here and delete it here 01:19:502 (1) - : reason is 01:03:648 (1,2) - .. I actually wanted to suggest swapping NC there but it made sense with the voice, but now it is inconsistent.
01:46:819 (2) - NC
01:46:575 (1) - remove NC (i'm really not sure abotu your NC it's always different)
02:09:014 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Now I'm a bit sad to say this because the pattern looks awesome but you need to restructure it because musically it makes no sense and feels really off. 02:09:258 (2) - This should be the start of the pattern, not 02:09:014 - .. and the hitsounding is really nice, but doesn't resemble the pattern good because the pattern is 1/2 mostly starting on white ticks, but it should sometimes start on red ticks, the way you emphasize it. There are a bit many thoughts behind this point so maybe you can write me ingame, but first try to restructure it yourself.
04:22:924 (1) - Can i suggest moving it a bit further away? The player will have so much speed, he will probably just be way too fast to enjoy it.

map is perfect, star for u

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-01-27T10:25:58+00:00

actually done everything except the very first one, because personally i like it how it sounds as it is thank you really much.

As for ncs, btw, i tried to stick ncs to the vocal changes, hovewer, there is many spots where i putted ncs to make patterns look beeter so it might look random sometimes. Thought, i believe (as i already said) that it's okay, because of different colors for every part of song

FCL

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FCL 2016-01-28T19:01:28+00:00

m4m4m

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00:45:843 (3) - стакни с концом 00:45:112 (4) - , будет чище выглядеть
00:46:575 (3) - тут было бы логично нк, т.к. ты его используешь чуть позже в похожем месте, ну или убери нк в 00:47:063 (1) -
01:09:990 (3) - мне кажется, что тут лучше будет две ноты вместо слайдера, т.к. на красном тике есть вполе сильный барабан-удар, что-то вроде такого должно быть нормально http://puu.sh/mN4EC/f5f5d6a7e6.jpg
01:15:112 (4) - может его на 320 160, чтобы создать бланкет? Правда тогда и (2) надо будет сместить на 248 96, ну или в другое место
01:18:038 (3) - слайдер тут смотрится хорошо, но можно опять таки заменить его на 2 круга для увеличения напряжения. Тоже с небольшим спейсингом, как я писал ранее
01:24:624 (2,3) - а с ctrl+g флоу тут смотрится гораздо лучше
01:25:721 (3,1) - какой-то странный спесинг, на (1) нормал с клапом, а на (3) ничего, но при этом расстояние от (2) до (3) больше, чем (3) до (1)
01:51:453 (4,4) - стакни для большей аккуратности (хотя я не знаю, возможно ты это намеренно делаешь)
02:08:160 (5) - на 316 184 выглядит приятнее и с намеком на бланкет
02:12:673 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - насколько я помню ты далее 1/3 стримы нк спамом выделял, но тут этого нет
02:16:209 (2,1) - очень странное расстояние перед нк, сделай больше, ну или убери его. Тут я не вижу в нем смысла
02:27:795 (2,3) - лучше будет заменить на слайдер, т.к. он идеально бы выделил вокал здесь
02:28:282 (2) - а тут тогда наоборот, две ноты
02:35:965 (2) - я вообще здесь ничего не слышу, могу предположить что это овермап, ну или как минимум этот бит недостоин ноты, максимум окончания слайдера. Было бы неплохо его удалить и стакнуть 02:36:087 (1) - с 02:35:843 (1) - . Получился бы достаточно веселый антиджамп
02:36:819 - опять же, тут есть звук, но ты его пропускаешь
02:42:429 (2) - что?
03:02:429 (3) - на 366 189 смотрится приятнее
04:18:777 (2,1) -странный спейсинг между нк, думаю что должно быть больше, примерно такой же, как ранее
04:20:485 (3,4,5,6) - не вижу смыла в этих 4 нотах вообще, звучит все как и прежде. Будет лучше 2 слайдера ну или слайдер+две ноты
04:33:655 (1,2) - ctrl+g мне больше нравится, т.к. идет большее выделение последующего нк, ну и флоу приятнее
04:37:802 - не думаю, что хорошая идея пропускать этот бит, т.к. тут есть сильный вокал+где-то там драм удар
04:41:582 (2,1) - также как и ранее, не понимаю такого маленького спесинга

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2016-01-29T00:06:58+00:00

M4M from your queue.

• Honestly, the AR should definitely be higher because it's so damn hard to read it with AR9.3. I even had problems when playing this map with relax. ;_;
• 00:45:112 (4,3) - Stack them?
• 00:47:307 (1) - I'm not sure if it's intended that this whole pattern is damn hard to move because of the DS changes. I think this pattern would be a bit easier and better flow-wise like this. Also a good final for a jump pattern imo due the high spacing.
• 01:17:551 (3,1,2,3) - Just a minor thing, maybe make a better custom stack by placing it slightly higher? Or just stack it, but I guess you didn't stack it on purpose so...
• 01:54:624 (1) - Place it a bit higher to make a normal triangle out of 01:54:624 (1,2,3) . This way you break the flow a bit stronger which also feels better.
• 02:57:429 (6,7,8) - This low DS makes this part so unpredictable and is also very weird movement wise.
• 03:16:575 (1,3) - Bad blanket intended? Never noticed any bad overlaps yet so idk.
• 03:18:892 (2,3,4,1,2) - Maybe place it like this? (but a bit better, make (3) + (4) and (1)+ (2) parallel). You could even use a 1/8 kickslider 03:19:258 here to cover the very short syllable (or word idk lol).
• 03:50:112 - 03:50:356 - 03:50:477 - These are 1/4 drum beats in the middle of this 1/3 stream. Maybe you should map it a bit different and cover them.
• 04:18:046 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Making an NC spam makes this 1/1 gap here completely unreadable. I know that you want to emphasize it this way, but playability is definitely cooler.
• 04:37:314 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same as above.
• 04:51:582 - Feels so empty. o_o

I hope you are satisfied with this mod. D:

Deppyforce

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Deppyforce 2016-01-29T17:08:27+00:00

m4m from your queue yas

nazi mod inc

[General]
lead in 1000ms
ik its not really important but maybe make first part 123 bpm or even 61.5 bpm cuz its slow as hell

[Diff]
00:02:429 - i can hear a sound here even louder than 00:03:404 (3,4,5,6) , why not map it lol
00:32:551 - should be clickable imo, theres sound there
01:30:234 (1) - this is strong, should be splitted to circles
01:40:478 (2,3) - the spacing could be bigger here
02:12:673 (3,4,5) - ^
02:50:721 (2,3) - ^
03:09:502 (4) - ctrl+g ?
03:30:965 (3,1) - undermapped imo
03:46:819 (1,2) - flow better if the slider is pointing to the circle
04:18:046 (1,2) - undermapped
04:45:851 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
04:51:704 to 04:52:070 - missing notes
05:01:826 (3,4) - maybe make this a small jump bcuz its the end of the map

i like this
its fun
gl

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2016-01-29T23:26:44+00:00

chata :p

metadata

you should rename the artist/romanised artist name to "茶太" and "Chata" i guess, because "サリー" is the circle name that provides album includes this song but not the artist.
歌:茶太(song by chata)

SSSD

01:18:282 (4) - make spacing with 01:18:038 (3) - more larger with 1.7-1.8x distance plays well imo, but current one is also good
01:41:697 (4) - put nc on this to clarify 1/3 rhythm would be fine i think
01:50:478 (4) - ctrl+g?
02:40:599 - so strong guitar sound here, why don't you put something here
02:51:941 (4) - same as 01:41:697 (4) -

can't say much, so good
good luck!

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-01-30T22:14:39+00:00

thanks people going to answer mods tomorrow

TicClick

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TicClick 2016-01-31T17:17:22+00:00

+30 ко второй точке

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-02-02T03:49:37+00:00

or not tomorrow

Satellite

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Satellite 2016-02-07T07:40:53+00:00

01:05:599 (1,2) - swap nc here ?
01:09:258 (4) - add nc better
02:12:673 (3) - add nc. because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please 01:40:721 (3,4,5) -
02:35:599 (4) - add nc. pattern 01:25:356 (1) -
02:42:429 (2) - ranklable ? lol
02:57:551 (7,8,1) - This spacing is really awkward. so changed another pattern if you can.
03:10:112 (2,3,4,1) - same as above.
03:19:014 (3,4,1,2) - This spacing is really awkward imo. so I think 03:19:258 (1,2) - ctrl+g more better flow.
04:05:119 (4) - try ctrl+g ?

elvis god xd

Tehron

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Tehron 2016-02-08T09:29:17+00:00

Do you really expect people to SS the beginning with HR? Imo a map should be playable with every mod in the game (in theory, in practice it comes down to the player's skill) no matter who mapped it or what map it is.
I demand a lower HP for this map, it is just unacceptable to require a player to SS the beginning of the song and then spin over 400spm to even pass the beginning of a map.

KogumaX

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KogumaX 2016-02-08T10:43:10+00:00

http://puu.sh/n0cB7/89535a8aa3.jpg
replay
http://puu.sh/n0da8/df9b8a388a.osr

need 450over spin?

Deppyforce

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Deppyforce 2016-02-08T12:15:10+00:00

nvm

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-02-10T12:52:47+00:00

sometimes i think subscribing to the topic just doesn't works properly
i'll decrease it to 6.5 but not more because it would be simply too easy to pass with nomod, because of object density
Thanks for feedback!
btw, nice play KogumaX
Gonna adress mods in next few days, i'm busy with other stuff so i can't give this mapset more my attention right now even if i want

I better say it before somebody will say that 0.5 isn't enough and drain rate should be nerfed more. I don't think that there is that many people who can fc this map with hr, moreover, i'm not quite sure that many people will try to, because it will worth no PP (i'll be hapy if i wrong, but thats kinda first thing what most of people thinking about these days). Also as already was said lowering it even more would make map too easy to pass, what goes against my intentions when mapping it. I believe map for this song should be challenging (at least a little bit) due to song nature, so something with 6 drain rate won't give any to people who play without mods

Delis

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Joined May 2012

Delis 2016-02-12T17:25:52+00:00

00:40:965 (3,4) - you could make it symmetric because why not, this is a minor stuff but I found only this doesn't look best compared to these sliders in the map.
02:27:795 (2,3) - the sound makes me wanna play a 1/2 slider wooooow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4519270
02:29:990 (2) - a circle here and 1/1 slider at the red tick? it's more accurate rhythm as the drums and vocals provided two clicks there, only a 1/2 slider is a little shame. I would say same to other patterns in the part that you've done this rhythm like 02:30:965 (3) - here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4519249 this is what I mean, the pattern of placement is random though also, if you agreed with this there's still patterns like this one in first part, you know what I mentioned here is for second part somehow.
03:10:112 (2,3,4) - so I'm writing this after read suggestions in Satellite's post, I also think this could be hard to catch well in playing. the distance around 03:10:234 (3) - is kinda large for the flow. I would make it a tiny triangle like even distance with 03:10:112 (2,4) - I assume you wouldn't like a small triangle though, as you didn't use it in the whole map if iirc.
03:19:014 (3) - I would put a new combo here, well I have nothing special reason to do, therefore it's up to you if you liked it or no. I just feel it fits with the pattern you put nc after it, so mine looks nicer, to me at least.
03:49:990 (6) - how about a new combo as the start of a stream here.
04:22:680 (4,5,1) - this currently looks nice enough, but I thought someone would miss the change of slider speed since x1.0 to x0.5 is too much I guess. I suggest you to decrease the distance for the triangle a bit, so it makes easier to read with almost the same pattern you attempted to map here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4518961

EDIT: added a minor suggestion in 1st column, and I feel some of jumps like 00:46:331 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - / 00:54:136 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - are too hard for this as this is not a map like having random circle jumps 24/7, I mean this map is decent as a slider-jumping map so huge circle jumps are sometimes off. you could consider to nerf them a bit, if this was 246 bpm on DT, jumps would not really be hard but it's just 246 without mods, I really thought those jumps are like ruining me xD or this is what an old player thinks (wut am i old enough) also 04:02:925 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - can be snapped in 1/4, I'm not really sure about this but it plays totally fine, I suck at listening to it so I wonder if the song is actually in 1/3 or 1/4...

map is so gudd ** I post this for now but I might edit tomorrow so after having a testplay, or not tomorrow.

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-02-13T16:06:45+00:00

so i guess mod answers will be delayed since i have to map insane diff

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2016-02-13T18:51:05+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
so i guess mod answers will be delayed since i have to map insane diff

Not yet!

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-02-13T19:31:19+00:00

i'll make it anyways, personally i don't believe that new RC will be accepted by peppy, it's just Damnae made me do it

tochiii

Elite Storyboarder

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tochiii 2016-02-26T22:02:08+00:00

Not many people use the circle name Sally for a song where Chata sings.

This is optional, and u might prefer Sally, but it's more natural to have the Artist Name be Chata.

Also, nice map! ~ Mapped this long time ago, but didn't continue lol

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-02-26T22:27:54+00:00

-Tochi wrote:
Not many people use the circle name Sally for a song where Chata sings.

This is optional, and u might prefer Sally, but it's more natural to have the Artist Name be Chata.

Also, nice map! ~ Mapped this long time ago, but didn't continue lol

Was already mentoined, but since i didn't answered to the mods yet...
Well, personally i'd stick for Chata, but i wanted to discuss it with QAT team at first, it's pretty common these days to use circle name as artist so i'm not quite sure at this point.

jesus when i'll finish this lunatic

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2016-11-28T21:36:48+00:00

wow that almost year long "tomorrow"

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

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yf_bmp 2017-02-13T13:15:04+00:00

finished sb: http://puu.sh/u1gq5/5f4ec5cb1e.zip
promised to do something simple xd
but i didn't control myself
rank it pls.

Stjpa

901 posts

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Stjpa 2017-02-13T13:28:56+00:00

looks like something is gonna happen? call me if u need a bn

pw384

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pw384 2017-02-13T14:01:31+00:00

??????
10/10 storyboard
plz rank

[Mahua]

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[Mahua] 2017-02-13T14:18:40+00:00

384059043 wrote:
??????
10/10 storyboard
plz rank

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-13T16:53:10+00:00

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le ebin salt

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2017-02-14T07:26:47+00:00

http://puu.sh/u2uAT/a029387463.jpg forgot this file (SB\Purple.jpg)

Ayana Hana

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Ayana Hana 2017-02-15T09:20:06+00:00

I want to draw your attention on a story by Japanese writer of the early twentieth century Kenji Miyazawa: "Night on the galactic railroad". Full of confidence I have, but I think the whole song is a reference to this work. May be after reading this short story will be easier to understand and the text itself. And it's not just in the night Express train that is hurtling through the darkness of the starry sky. The song and the story communicates something else, namely the theme of death and the human desires that aspire to the stars along with the souls which carries the express.

GriMnir - one who flies on the edge of the world.

Mirash

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Mirash 2017-02-17T17:32:45+00:00

особо нечего писать, мне все нравится о.о!

Collab
01:45:356 (8) - возможно ты хочешь выгнуть его немного и поднять выше, чтобы дистанс был как между 01:45:234 (7,9) - http://i.imgur.com/xB5FNEM.png
01:47:063 (6,7,1,2) - можно квадрат чуть ровнее сделать, вейв чуть правее
01:55:599 (1) - чуть ниже от 01:54:624 (1) -
02:03:404 (1) - чуть выше от 02:02:429 (1) -
02:29:502 (1) - тут нк поставил на вокал и сломал 02:28:770 (3,4,5,1) - этот патерн, а тут 01:03:648 (6) - нет. 01:03:648 (6,1) - свапни тогда!
03:00:721 (4,5) - а они не слишком близко?
03:51:749 мне кажется этот красный поинт должен быть тут 03:51:739

од не сильно низкий? на обоих дифах

AncientMario

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AncientMario 2017-02-18T10:43:17+00:00

Hi ya!

Storyboard

fix borders pls https://ancimario.s-ul.eu/n5tgDSBH

Collab

00:26:087 (1,3) - чуть-чуть меньший оверлап сделай
00:40:234 (1,2,3,4) - чуть ровнее сделай паттерн
00:43:404 (1,2) - вот тут они не равномерно на 00:43:892 (3) - наславиваются
00:48:160 (2) - слайдер меньше изгибай, а то выходит бланкет не ровный
01:52:063 (3,4,5) - может тут сделать мистера Монстрату? (треугольник)
01:56:697 (2,3) - нужен стак более ровный
02:36:087 (1,2,3,4) - Вот тут джампы сделай, будет вообще охрененно!
03:04:990 (2) - влево его немного
03:19:014 (3,4,5) - вот это что-то пиздец, сори
03:20:234 (4,1) - А что если тут вот так сделать? https://ancimario.s-ul.eu/uQaA1bi4
04:47:802 (1,2,3,4) - а вот тут я бы сделал менее ровные стаки
04:49:753 (1,2,3,4) - https://ancimario.s-ul.eu/9qgUEIuX вышло криво, но думаю ты понял

Очень хорошо сделано. Мне нравится! Ranked! Ой, я же не бн:(

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2017-02-18T11:26:25+00:00

Please check it in playing mode or cinema mode √

Ayana Hana

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Ayana Hana 2017-02-18T13:21:24+00:00

[General]

Включить опастность эпилепсии в 2 диффах? А в Starry Sky включить видскрин.
dark.jpg unused file.
Анранк разрешение бг.
Добавить в теги : enn～Abyss～茶太屋ワニ上海アリス幻樂団
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[Collab]

01:49:746 (3) - тут точно должен быть нк, или убрать 01:49:258 (1) - тут, как тут 02:04:868 (7,8,1) -
02:06:331 (1,5) - честно я не понимаю как ты ставишь нк, как будто ты делис, он так же странно их ставит, но по моему это не логично. Больге не буду про них писать.
00:39:502 (1,1,1,2) - мне не особо втирают эти крновские недослайдеры, может им придать более волнистую форму?
03:25:356 (3,5,1) - может сделать что то такое?
03:50:396 (7,8) - разве они должны быть стакнуты?
Больше не могу найти о чем написать, все хорошо.

Cellina

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Cellina 2017-02-19T03:57:05+00:00

dat storyboard is preventing a massive lag on my pc

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2017-02-24T19:30:32+00:00

I wish yf_bmp made a storyboard for me some day, but sadly I don't have any mapset worthy his godlike storyboards.

[General]
SB\dark.jpg — unused file.
Добавь тегов: doujin comiket 81 c81 abyss. Последнее — перевод кандзи в названии трека, пусть будет.
00:55:112 - 01:00:356 вот в этом куске софтвистлы какие-то странные, будто часть пропустил, так и должно быть? Звучит не особо хорошо.
[Collab]
03:25:356 (3,5,1) - раздвинь ты их чуть сильнее, пятёрка под тройкой почти незаметна из-за одинаковых цветов
[Диффнейм]
Вайдскрин саппорт включи.
02:09:990 (1,2) - если тут ctrl+g сделать то ведётся приятнее
04:14:997 (5,1) - нет здесь такого разгона в треке чтобы такой резкий джамп делать, он не в тему играется, лучше поменяй

Ayana Hana

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Ayana Hana 2017-02-26T16:40:17+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
I wish yf_bmp made a storyboard for me some day, but sadly I don't have any mapset worthy his godlike storyboards.

pls, yf

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-26T17:54:50+00:00

okay, so what was fixed:
widescreen support ✔
unused file ✔
tags ✔
OD was increased on both diffs ✔
metadata ✔
several gameplay-wice changes, to mention some: those big jumps, addresed by delis, that jump thingie mentoined by kyubey (sadly i can't recall all of the changes because i'm dumb motherfucker and have no changelog (i was fixing all those year old mods last three months and now i hate my fucking job)) ✔
some nazi stuff such as blankets ✔

What wasn't fixed:
NCs ✘
hitsounds ✘
timing ✘

Thank you all people for your hardwork!

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2017-02-26T19:25:24+00:00

#1

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-26T19:26:35+00:00

thanks, pups

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2017-02-26T20:51:57+00:00

metadata source? just wondering because theres a spacebar between enn and ~ in romanised but not in the original title

[collab]
- 00:40:356 (2) - looks a bit weird that the slider is not blanketing 00:40:234 (1,3,4) - equally, wouldnt be much work to fix i guess
- 02:45:112 (1,2,3,4,5) - has completely different rhythm 01:34:868 - here, really weird considering that nothing much changed in the music or at least nothing that seems to be really audible
- 03:34:746 (4,5) - dont u think that the spacing here is a bit huge in context with the pattern here, as a player i definitely wouldnt expect such a large jump but rather another overlap pattern or something
- 03:36:331 (6) - personally id structure this slider a little differently to emphasize the much stronger beat on the next slider
- 03:58:090 (2) - whats ur intention of not making the flow intuitive without any jumps like u do afterwards

last diff seems fine

edit: im wondering if u should enable the storyboard strobe warning because some parts are actually really flashy and its just a warning after all, so enabling it doesnt hurt

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-26T22:38:11+00:00

everything except 03:36:331- was fixed
as for metadata, according to kyubey and delis, it's fine to use spacebars in romanisation since these are two different words (source was smoothie's mapset)

not updated yet thought (i blame my connection)

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Delis

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Delis 2017-02-26T22:43:39+00:00

damn I'm not actually watching one

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-02-26T23:01:24+00:00

:^)

Updated btw

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-01T22:25:21+00:00

Zad

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-01T22:25:57+00:00

:-[

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2017-03-02T21:38:48+00:00

#2

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-02T21:40:25+00:00

thank

Uberzolik

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Uberzolik 2017-03-03T22:08:46+00:00

i love u for making this map

pw384

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pw384 2017-03-04T10:06:06+00:00

would be better if "yf_bmp" is added into tags in the next mod for qualification
love this deeply, both map and storyboard

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-04T14:30:26+00:00

Ye i planned to add. Also it seems like i need another metadata check

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-05T12:53:04+00:00

i'm dumb

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Garden

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Garden 2017-03-05T12:58:08+00:00

aaa i think i cannot check this today a cold is killing me rn i'll do it when i recover
well just take this as a placeholder

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-05T13:09:20+00:00

alacat wrote:
I think it's wrong.
maybe same case p/3122868 or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/143723

Title : enn～淵～
Romanised : enn
Source : 東方神霊廟　～ Ten Desires.
Tags : Chiisana Yokubou no Hoshizora 上海アリス幻樂団 Team Shanghai Alice

http://www16.big.or.jp/~zun/html/th13top.html
http://sally.dojin.com/SA-002b.html

Stjpa

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Stjpa 2017-03-06T17:49:27+00:00

Re-bub #1 because of sb changes and new metadata

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2017-03-07T18:33:31+00:00

#2

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-07T19:03:02+00:00

thanks

Garden

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Garden 2017-03-08T06:43:47+00:00

aadd touhou to tags

collab:
01:03:648 (6,1) - 01:19:258 (6,1) - you did contrary new combos for vocal in highest diff
03:45:843 (4) - the reverse is not mapped to any specific sound here maybe u wanna make 03:46:575 - clickable or sth but the idea is not consistent with highest diff either so i supposed its a mistake

extra:
01:09:258 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - suddenly bumped up spacing and continuous anti-clockwise movement here make it stand out as a quite gimmick pattern to play in this relatively calm section, compared with exact same rhythm patterns in similar sections so i suggest rearranging a bit here.
02:29:502 (6,1) - should swap nc for vocal like u did to the first part

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-08T07:19:22+00:00

there was a converstation via irc

бокс

soo, 03:45:843 (4) - i haven't fixed this in collab (whole that diff have a bit other rhythmic since i really tried to make it less complicated) and 01:09:258 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - i really tried to reduce the spacing, but i probably failed (also i wanted to emphazise vocals with those spacings)
10:06 EvilElvis: updating atm
10:10 Garden: hmm.. 03:45:843 (4,5) - dont u think combine them into one is less complicated?
10:16 EvilElvis: 03:46:575 (5) - is strong beat actually, and i want to have it clicable because otherwice whole stuff will be odd to play, because most of the strong beats would be unckicable
10:17 Garden: well okie i think i misunderstood it

also some ncs were fixed

Garden

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Garden 2017-03-08T07:31:18+00:00

qualified!

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-08T07:32:14+00:00

BEST 8 OF MARCH GIFT THANK YOU LOVE

allein

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allein 2017-03-08T08:08:07+00:00

Congrats, sweetie ~ <3

pw384

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pw384 2017-03-08T08:23:40+00:00

AWESOME

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2017-03-08T08:52:08+00:00

According to the BNG rules, you could nominate the set only 24 hours after the latest bubble. Reverted to #2 bubble.

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-08T08:53:09+00:00

so this is the same for rebubbles?
OKIE HYPE WASN'T REAL

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Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2017-03-08T08:55:25+00:00

There should be at least a 24-hour gap between qualification and the last bubble no matter what situation you are in.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2017-03-08T08:57:29+00:00

Yes, because intention of the rule to give enough time for the public to look over your set and discuss if issues were found. Rebubbling means you have changed something in your set. You agree with the change, thus pushing the set forward again. So, with the changes, you have to give the public another 24 hours to check.

Winnie

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Winnie 2017-03-08T08:57:49+00:00

Ayyy Chata. I have a good song no one has from Chata if you wanna map it. Contact the mp3 god anytime

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-08T09:02:00+00:00

oookie then, thanks for poiting stuff

Garden

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Garden 2017-03-08T09:22:50+00:00

sorry for inconvenience .. didnt notice it while turning to a new page

Ayana Hana

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Ayana Hana 2017-03-08T11:24:44+00:00

InternalLight wrote:
Congrats, sweetie ~ <3

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PandaHero 2017-03-08T11:56:08+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
OKIE HYPE WASN'T REAL

Enon

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Enon 2017-03-08T13:34:02+00:00

I T I S A W E S O M E

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riktoi

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riktoi 2017-03-08T14:02:34+00:00

Is it possible the fog image could be change to something that doesn't have a mean cut like the image currently has? It's not really that big of a deal, but since this map's qualification was postponed maybe it's possible!!!

ew

Yohanes

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Yohanes 2017-03-08T15:03:12+00:00

Goddamnit, how do you find lots of orgasmic music like this

and while you're at it, probably add "東方project" to the tags as well

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-09T05:30:57+00:00

As for the tag i already have it (not romanised) but ill add, it won't hurt, as for sb, well, personally i find it okay, but i'll ask yf to check it, thanks people!

Seijiro

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Seijiro 2017-03-09T09:47:13+00:00

I never heard such a soft and cute Chata voice, holy <3

Osu Mapman

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Osu Mapman 2017-03-09T17:13:02+00:00