[Timing]
- Offset seems way off. The music sounds like it starts around the blue tick before where the current offset is.
- 00:03:724 (4) - Should be moved to x:428 y:256 to keep the triangular pattern equidistant. Currently looks ugly with how its stacked on 00:02:704 (3).
- 00:21:990 (1,2,3,4) - Looks meh tbh.
- 00:27:807 (6,7,1) - ^
- 00:25:561 (1,2,3,4) - Why are you using the same spacing as the 1/4 doubles when these are 1/2?
- 00:30:255 (1) - Just stack on 00:29:847 (4). This has a 1/1 rhythm gap, while 00:29:234 (1,2,3,4) are 1/2s.
- 00:17:398 (1,2,3,4) - Uneven spacing. You can tell just by looking at the follow points.
- 00:20:765 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Green combo creates a messy overlap with blue and red combo.
- 00:21:887 (1,2,3,4) - The vocalist pauses before saying, "Nyah!" A burst doesn't really emphasize the low intensity of that pause.
- 00:21:887 (1,5) - blanket
- 00:22:296 (5) - The "nyah!" is only one line and doesn't sound like it repeats, so a double repeat doesn't work.
- 00:29:847 (2,1) - Missing beat on white tick.
- 00:30:459 (2,3) - Should be a 1/1 slider, since the vocal holds to the next measure.
- 00:31:275 (2,3) - ^
- 00:33:316 (1) - Spinner doesn't emphasize the fading vocals. It would be better to copy/paste 00:32:908 (1) on each inheriting point.