Coeur de pirate - From a Flock of Crows [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

celerih

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2016-12-29T01:25:00+00:00

_Stan wrote:
Dakini's Normal
SV in this diff is 1.1x but EZ is 1.2x, I think NM's SV should large than EZ, right?
I didn't mention this in my mod reply earlier because I wasn't sure who would be changing sv, but I will be the one to do it. The SV on the easy diff is now 1x. Thanks for bringing this up

MBomb

MBomb 2016-12-29T02:20:38+00:00

guess i'm modding cup here because i've got a few minutes free and why not

[General]

Either make cup HP3 or increase my salad to HP5, your choice, honestly I don't mind either way.

[Cup]

Try doing a consistent NC pattern, such as an NC every downbeat. The current NCs feel strange because they feel randomly placed.

00:03:620 (3,4) - Lack of emphasis both to 3 and 5 here, for the chime on 3 and stronger piano sound on 5, maybe try moving 00:02:068 (1,2) - to the left, like x:32, and then 3 on x:432 and 4 on x:496.
00:04:655 (6) - Seems weird because the stronger sound is the slider end here, which makes it feel very underemphasised.
00:07:758 (3,4) - Stronger distances to 3 and 5 again for the stronger sounds here, I'd try putting this section on x:128.
00:11:379 (2) - Having basically no movement from the next note here sounds strange, because x:80 would be nice.
00:16:034 (3) - Sound feels kinda underemphasised as a slider end, maybe take off the repeat and have a circle where the end currently is with slightly higher distance.
00:21:206 (4) - Would feel nice with a higher distance for high pitch here, x:296 would be great.
00:23:275 (2) - Maybe make this slider to the left to avoid repetitive movements with the previous combo?
00:24:827 (4,5) - Since piano is slightly louder here, maybe do a higher distance to 4 with something like x:256.
00:26:896 (1) - Music change here is definitely worth a higher distance, even with the timeline difference here. Ctrl+H and putting it on x:480 would be cool.
00:28:965 (3,4,5) - Pitch on 3 should have more emphasis considering how strong it is, but then decreasing distances for the decreasing pitch would sound pretty cool, something like 3 on x:160, 4 on x:328 and 5 on x:208.
00:32:586 (4) - More emphasis for the end of the section would be good, try x:296. Also, remember that the downbeat here is on a strong note so same as earlier, try a 1/2 slider followed by a circle instead, with a higher distance to circle for more emphasis.

Song repeats, so issues here repeat, so I'm done here for now.

Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2016-12-29T03:05:24+00:00

h

Easy

00:07:758 (3) - I would Ctrl-G this and bring it straight into line between (2,4) like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6921560 so the pattern flows a lot better for players around this level.

00:39:827 (4,1) - Kinda iffy flow from the end of (4) to the start of (1), consider rotating (4) a little further around 3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6921570

Rain's Normal

00:31:034 (1) - I would change this into a normal slider instead of a repeat, there are only really two sounds playing here, repeat slider sounds iffy because of it.

Aurora

00:07:241 (3,1) - Make these stack

Sorry for short mod ;w; GL

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2016-12-30T14:34:31+00:00

hitsounds are dumb, remind me to redo them later

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-01-15T17:26:30+00:00

Weber wrote:
h

Easy

00:07:758 (3) - I would Ctrl-G this and bring it straight into line between (2,4) like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6921560 so the pattern flows a lot better for players around this level. Done

00:39:827 (4,1) - Kinda iffy flow from the end of (4) to the start of (1), consider rotating (4) a little further around 3: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6921570 Did that and then I rearranged everything behinf it to keep DS at 1x

Aurora

00:07:241 (3,1) - Make these stack This is a kind of overlap I use later in the map, so changing it wouldn't fit 00:15:517 (3,2) - 00:31:551 (3,2) - 00:41:896 (2,4) -

Sorry for short mod ;w; GL

Thanks for the mod

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
guess i'm modding cup here because i've got a few minutes free and why not

[General]

Either make cup HP3 or increase my salad to HP5, your choice, honestly I don't mind either way.

[Cup]

Try doing a consistent NC pattern, such as an NC every downbeat. The current NCs feel strange because they feel randomly placed.

00:03:620 (3,4) - Lack of emphasis both to 3 and 5 here, for the chime on 3 and stronger piano sound on 5, maybe try moving 00:02:068 (1,2) - to the left, like x:32, and then 3 on x:432 and 4 on x:496.
00:04:655 (6) - Seems weird because the stronger sound is the slider end here, which makes it feel very underemphasised.
00:07:758 (3,4) - Stronger distances to 3 and 5 again for the stronger sounds here, I'd try putting this section on x:128.
00:11:379 (2) - Having basically no movement from the next note here sounds strange, because x:80 would be nice.
00:16:034 (3) - Sound feels kinda underemphasised as a slider end, maybe take off the repeat and have a circle where the end currently is with slightly higher distance.
00:21:206 (4) - Would feel nice with a higher distance for high pitch here, x:296 would be great.
00:23:275 (2) - Maybe make this slider to the left to avoid repetitive movements with the previous combo?
00:24:827 (4,5) - Since piano is slightly louder here, maybe do a higher distance to 4 with something like x:256.
00:26:896 (1) - Music change here is definitely worth a higher distance, even with the timeline difference here. Ctrl+H and putting it on x:480 would be cool.
00:28:965 (3,4,5) - Pitch on 3 should have more emphasis considering how strong it is, but then decreasing distances for the decreasing pitch would sound pretty cool, something like 3 on x:160, 4 on x:328 and 5 on x:208.
00:32:586 (4) - More emphasis for the end of the section would be good, try x:296. Also, remember that the downbeat here is on a strong note so same as earlier, try a 1/2 slider followed by a circle instead, with a higher distance to circle for more emphasis.

Song repeats, so issues here repeat, so I'm done here for now.

I'm not ready to go for mod on this ctb diff, so I decided to remove it. Thanks for the mod, sorry to remove the diff right after you mod it, but you helped me realise this

Sharkie

343 posts

Joined May 2014

Sharkie 2017-01-15T19:16:49+00:00

Howdy! Great mapset!

[Easy]

00:10:344 (1,3) - I feel that these are too close, you can keep the blanket, but maybe space them a bit more?
00:26:896 (1,3) - These aren't perfectly stacked, unless that's intentional.

[Rain's Normal]

00:35:172 - I wish you mapped this, very strong guitar strum!
00:55:862 (1) - I'd actually use note here, then use a slider thereafter.

[Aurora]

00:05:689 - It'd be nice if you mapped the other softer piano parts. Since this is a hard and you'd want a more note density, this applies to other parts of rest as well.
00:11:379 (3,5) - Fix blanket asdf
00:21:465 (3) - This has very small spacing but at the same time, has a strong guitar strum on it. I'd make 00:21:206 (2,3) - bigger spacing than 00:21:465 (3,4) - .
00:55:862 (1) - I'd actually use note here, then use a slider thereafter.

Great work! Sorry I can't mod CtB!

squirrelpascals

982 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2017-01-16T02:39:55+00:00

Hi

Aurora

• 00:02:068 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the default whistle sounds worse than the sound of fingernails scraping a block of concrete

• 00:04:655 (2,1) - Space?

• 00:15:000 (2,1) - Move these farther from eachother?

• 00:21:206 (2,3,4) - Dont understand this spacing choice in a hard

• 00:22:758 (1,4) - The way these overlap is strange

• 00:26:896 (1,2,3,4) - You can do the slidertail overlap thing, just do it with a different slider that doesn't clutter everything

• 00:39:310 (1) - Move this up a little?

• 00:47:068 (4,1,2) - This is just aesthetic, but 4 isn't lined up perfectly with 1,2

cool bro

Rain Normal

• 00:21:206 (2) - Surve this less so it just looks a little nicer of a short slider

• 00:47:068 (2,3,1) - I don't feel like this aesthetic works here. I would try putting 1 in line with 3 or try pointing the reverse arrow of 1 toward 3 (the latter is probably the best option because of the next circle)

• 00:55:344 - why not move the sv point here? :p

Easy

:thinking: This plays a lot similarly to the normal. It's probably okay as it is but maybe consider making this purley with a 1/1 rhythm. It will probably be under a star lol

• 00:18:620 (4) - nc

MBomb's salad

• needs lettuce :dying:

Good luck guys!

StanDaMan809

41 posts

Joined April 2016

StanDaMan809 2017-01-16T17:21:30+00:00

Hello it is I !

Aurora + General

There's a large timing problem here, at 00:04:137 (1,2,3) - 00:12:413 (1,2,3) - the strong notes start before that. You need new timing sections! 00:41:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also here

00:08:275 (1,2,3) - I find it odd you use this pattern when you never use it again.

00:14:482 (1,2,3) - This is uncomfortable movement, and I'm pr. sure it's not intentional, as the rest of the map is comfortable movement.

00:18:620 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:26:896 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders whistle

00:47:586 (1,2,3,4) - Make these whistle too

Be sure to add more whistles, I felt it would make the map sound better. The whistle and timing problem apply to all difficulties, so be sure to fix that. I like the spacing, and I couldn't find much wrong with the other difficulties, which is why it's so short.

Lastly, in the Easy difficulty, I couldn't help but notice you didn't use 1/1 beat snap, but that's probably a conscious decision you made.
But good map!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-01-18T00:45:16+00:00

wew ~~hitsounds~~ keysounds done

leave it as hitsounds in the description

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-01-19T01:51:28+00:00

Sharkie wrote:
Howdy! Great mapset! Thanks!

[Easy]
00:10:344 (1,3) - I feel that these are too close, you can keep the blanket, but maybe space them a bit more? Done
00:26:896 (1,3) - These aren't perfectly stacked, unless that's intentional. It wasn't, fixed
[Aurora]
00:05:689 - It'd be nice if you mapped the other softer piano parts. Since this is a hard and you'd want a more note density, this applies to other parts of rest as well. It wasn't my intention to map those sounds, and I prefer keeping it to the sounds I mapped currently
00:11:379 (3,5) - Fix blanket asdf Fixed
00:21:465 (3) - This has very small spacing but at the same time, has a strong guitar strum on it. I'd make 00:21:206 (2,3) - bigger spacing than 00:21:465 (3,4) - . Done
00:55:862 (1) - I'd actually use note here, then use a slider thereafter. I prefer the way it is with a spinner across all diffs
Great work! Sorry I can't mod CtB! No worries, thanks for the mod!

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi

Aurora
• 00:02:068 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the default whistle sounds worse than the sound of fingernails scraping a block of concrete The map is now keysounded

• 00:04:655 (2,1) - Space? I increased spacing a bit

• 00:15:000 (2,1) - Move these farther from eachother? Done and I neatly lined them up

• 00:21:206 (2,3,4) - Dont understand this spacing choice in a hard Changed pattern

• 00:22:758 (1,4) - The way these overlap is strange Fixed by doing some nice slider end overlaping

• 00:26:896 (1,2,3,4) - You can do the slidertail overlap thing, just do it with a different slider that doesn't clutter everything Took me some time to see how but I fixed it

• 00:39:310 (1) - Move this up a little? I think the pattern looks fine as is

• 00:47:068 (4,1,2) - This is just aesthetic, but 4 isn't lined up perfectly with 1,2 Fixed

cool bro

Easy
:thinking: This plays a lot similarly to the normal. It's probably okay as it is but maybe consider making this purley with a 1/1 rhythm. It will probably be under a star lol Normal is being remapped, so maybe this will change. Also, for the 2 1/2 usage I kept the reseve sliders that are still in 1/1, but I did remove the 1/2 slider to avoid issues. Even though this is 116 bpm

• 00:18:620 (4) - nc NC'ed

MBomb's salad
• needs lettuce :dying: HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHahah ecks DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Good luck guys!Dank u mr squarel

StanDaMan809 wrote:
Hello it is I ! Hello I, I'm celerih

Aurora + General
There's a large timing problem here, at 00:04:137 (1,2,3) - 00:12:413 (1,2,3) - the strong notes start before that. You need new timing sections! 00:41:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - Also here Nope, these spots are on downbeats. Even though it might seem like it at first, when you listen you can here a guitar strum on everydoeanbeat, and for the first two it is present. Now on the last one, this isn't a case where a new timing section is needed, these is just a more silent note there. The timing stays constant for the whole map

00:08:275 (1,2,3) - I find it odd you use this pattern when you never use it again. Similar patterns are used on 00:16:024 (1,2,3) - 00:21:196 (2,3,4) - 00:25:334 (2,3,4) - 00:32:576 (1,2,3) - 00:38:783 (4,5,1) - 00:51:714 (1,2,3) -

00:14:482 (1,2,3) - This is uncomfortable movement, and I'm pr. sure it's not intentional, as the rest of the map is comfortable movement. It was intentional, even though I don't think the movement is that incomfotable. It's also reused here 00:37:231 (1,2,3) - kinda similarly

00:18:620 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:26:896 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders whistle Hitsounds were redone by Sinnoh after this mod was posted

00:47:586 (1,2,3,4) - Make these whistle too Same as above

Be sure to add more whistles, I felt it would make the map sound better. The whistle and timing problem apply to all difficulties, so be sure to fix that. I like the spacing, and I couldn't find much wrong with the other difficulties, which is why it's so short. Thank mr sinnoh for making half this mod not apply -___-

Lastly, in the Easy difficulty, I couldn't help but notice you didn't use 1/1 beat snap, but that's probably a conscious decision you made. It was, but ultimately I decided to change the 1/2 sliders, while keeping the reverse ones
But good map!Thank you very much!

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Saileach 2017-01-19T08:04:20+00:00

I would respond to mods but im remapping, sorry for wasting your time

Edit: Never mind im too lazy, ill respond a bit later

nextplay

976 posts

Joined December 2015

nextplay 2017-01-21T18:10:49+00:00

Hi~
Just a little Thing (no kds)

Why are the AR,OD and HP in the easy Diff higher then from Normal?
I would change the current AR OD and HP from Easy to Normal and the Stats from Normal to Easy

Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Riari 2017-01-29T22:31:01+00:00

[Cup]

00:16:541 (4) - Although there is a slight spacing increase, I feel like it doesn't represent the sound of this note enough. The player can choose to sit 00:16:024 (2,3) - or 00:16:283 (3,4) - by making a minor adjustment, moving 00:16:541 (4) - to the left, to a point around x:297 creates a spacing where the movement is forced to 00:16:541 (4) - rather than giving the player options for what to do. This also better represents the note as the spacing change is barely visable when playing.
00:31:541 (2) - Change this so the slider goes to the right instead of the left? I don't like the follow on from the previous note here, notes such as 00:25:334 (5) - have similar emphasis on the third note with direction changes, and I feel that changing the slider direction so that the droplets are the direction change instead of the note itself is a fine change, although making the sliderhead a direction change would also be an option here.
00:32:576 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion here as 00:16:541 (4) - .

[Salad]

00:05:938 (4) - In a peaceful song like this one, notes such as 00:05:938 (4) - sound really prominent and awkward. They keep a consistent timeline going but do not offer anything to the song, breaking the immersion of the mapset. Other notes include 00:14:214 (4) - . Notes such as these make the timeline sound inconsistent, I personally prefer how the Cup sounds due to notes like these.
00:19:127 (2,3) - Consider reducing the distance slightly? This felt like a tricky walk here and it feels a lot safer to dash. With a strong set of directional changes in 00:18:610 (1,2,3) - I feel that this distance is a bit too much for the player so I would reduce it to allow them more space to work with instead of making ambiguous distances for them.

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-02-08T23:36:22+00:00

Riari wrote:
[Cup]
00:16:541 (4) - Although there is a slight spacing increase, I feel like it doesn't represent the sound of this note enough. The player can choose to sit 00:16:024 (2,3) - or 00:16:283 (3,4) - by making a minor adjustment, moving 00:16:541 (4) - to the left, to a point around x:297 creates a spacing where the movement is forced to 00:16:541 (4) - rather than giving the player options for what to do. This also better represents the note as the spacing change is barely visable when playing. I applied this
00:31:541 (2) - Change this so the slider goes to the right instead of the left? I don't like the follow on from the previous note here, notes such as 00:25:334 (5) - have similar emphasis on the third note with direction changes, and I feel that changing the slider direction so that the droplets are the direction change instead of the note itself is a fine change, although making the sliderhead a direction change would also be an option here. Done
00:32:576 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion here as 00:16:541 (4) - .Done

Thanks a lot for this mod. Everything was very clearly explained.

nextplay wrote:
Why are the AR,OD and HP in the easy Diff higher then from Normal?
I would change the current AR OD and HP from Easy to Normal and the Stats from Normal to Easy

This is now fixed, I adjusted the settings on all three diffs to create a better spread

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Saileach 2017-02-12T03:42:03+00:00

Sharkie wrote:
Howdy! Great mapset!

[Rain's Normal]
00:35:172 - I wish you mapped this, very strong guitar strum! While i would love to, the constrictions of a normal wouldnt allow me to put a spinner as it would be too short and a slider would have to be positioned really awkard to fit in, good point tho
00:55:862 (1) - I'd actually use note here, then use a slider thereafter.is just a spinner to fit in with the consistency of the aurora and the easy else i would too
Great work! Sorry I can't mod CtB!

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi

Rain Normal
• 00:21:206 (2) - Surve this less so it just looks a little nicer of a short slider Done

• 00:47:068 (2,3,1) - I don't feel like this aesthetic works here. I would try putting 1 in line with 3 or try pointing the reverse arrow of 1 toward 3 (the latter is probably the best option because of the next circle) took the 2nd option

• 00:55:344 - why not move the sv point here? :p Green points were not up to me, they were up to whoever was doing hitsounding

Good luck guys!

A Single Pigeon

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-02-16T14:40:24+00:00

sup

Cup

00:08:265 (5) - Considering the pitch is increasing here, and higher than 00:04:127 (5) - I would make this horizontal to offer a bit more movement. Splitting into 3 circles would also be a nice way to emphasize the distinction
00:21:196 (4,1) - Even though there's a 2/1 spacing, this back and forth movement is still a little awkward for this level of difficulty. Making 00:21:196 (4) - into a straight line of 3 circles might work, though Ctrl+H 00:18:610 (1,2,3,4) - and move all to x-264 would also improve flow
00:43:438 (5) - Same as 00:08:265 (5) if you decide to change anything there
00:47:576 (4,5) - A little more spacing here would be good for emphasis on the strong sound, e.g. x-168
00:51:714 (3,4) - Given that the tails are mapping stronger sounds than the heads here, circle / slider / circle might be a better option

MBomb's Salad

00:02:058 (1,2) - Personal preference maybe, but I feel starting out with antiflow on a weak sound detracts from the following antiflow use to emphasize 00:03:093 (3,4) - . Since you didn't want to put a jump there, everything is walkable and antiflow doesn't seem to serve much purpose. It's more acceptable to use as the song continues e.g. 00:06:714 (2,3) - 00:10:334 (1,2) - etc. to build intensity, but I'd avoid it here
00:20:421 (5,1) - Surely this should have a jump considering 00:18:610 (1,3) - also had jumps since it's a stronger sound. Same applies to 00:28:438 (4,1) -
00:22:490 (5,1) - I'd consider a jump here, the sound is somewhat strong and having only walkable patterns throughout 00:20:162 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - feels quite repetitive to play
00:32:834 (6,1) - Would be nice to have a jump here for the climax before the break

Good luck! (:

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-02-16T16:27:45+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
sup

Cup
00:08:265 (5) - Considering the pitch is increasing here, and higher than 00:04:127 (5) - I would make this horizontal to offer a bit more movement. Splitting into 3 circles would also be a nice way to emphasize the distinction Done
00:21:196 (4,1) - Even though there's a 2/1 spacing, this back and forth movement is still a little awkward for this level of difficulty. Making 00:21:196 (4) - into a straight line of 3 circles might work, though Ctrl+H 00:18:610 (1,2,3,4) - and move all to x-264 would also improve flow I did the ctrl-H thing but I also moved back 00:22:748 (1,2) - so you would have a bit more movement between the breaks
00:43:438 (5) - Same as 00:08:265 (5) if you decide to change anything there
00:47:576 (4,5) - A little more spacing here would be good for emphasis on the strong sound, e.g. x-168 Done
00:51:714 (3,4) - Given that the tails are mapping stronger sounds than the heads here, circle / slider / circle might be a better optionDone

Good luck! (:

Thanks a lot for the mod

MBomb

MBomb 2017-02-18T19:24:59+00:00

Riari wrote:
[Salad]
00:05:938 (4) - In a peaceful song like this one, notes such as 00:05:938 (4) - sound really prominent and awkward. They keep a consistent timeline going but do not offer anything to the song, breaking the immersion of the mapset. Other notes include 00:14:214 (4) - . Notes such as these make the timeline sound inconsistent, I personally prefer how the Cup sounds due to notes like these. - I actually like how these sound due to fitting the slightly increasing volume from the previous background note.
00:19:127 (2,3) - Consider reducing the distance slightly? This felt like a tricky walk here and it feels a lot safer to dash. With a strong set of directional changes in 00:18:610 (1,2,3) - I feel that this distance is a bit too much for the player so I would reduce it to allow them more space to work with instead of making ambiguous distances for them. - Increased slightly instead of decreased, dash was intended here.

JBHyperion wrote:
sup

MBomb's Salad
00:02:058 (1,2) - Personal preference maybe, but I feel starting out with antiflow on a weak sound detracts from the following antiflow use to emphasize 00:03:093 (3,4) - . Since you didn't want to put a jump there, everything is walkable and antiflow doesn't seem to serve much purpose. It's more acceptable to use as the song continues e.g. 00:06:714 (2,3) - 00:10:334 (1,2) - etc. to build intensity, but I'd avoid it here - Changed it up a bit.
00:20:421 (5,1) - Surely this should have a jump considering 00:18:610 (1,3) - also had jumps since it's a stronger sound. Same applies to 00:28:438 (4,1) - - Done.
00:22:490 (5,1) - I'd consider a jump here, the sound is somewhat strong and having only walkable patterns throughout 00:20:162 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - feels quite repetitive to play - Alright, done.
00:32:834 (6,1) - Would be nice to have a jump here for the climax before the break
Good luck! (:

Thanks for the mods!

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Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

3,090 posts

Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-02-18T19:50:46+00:00

hello

[aurora]

mostly aesthetic things

00:07:231 (3,4,5,1) - it'd be nice to spread this pattern out across the playfield more, it seems rather cramped.

00:10:334 (1,3) - is there a reason these sliders aren't the same it looks really weird

00:10:852 (2,5) - this pixel overlap tho

00:25:852 (4) - looks weird cuz it's very close to the slider body.

00:28:955 (1) - why is rhythm here different from 00:20:679 (1,2,3,4) - ? it sounds very similar to me in the song.

00:41:369 (1)- this pattern has inconsistent visual spacing all across which means that it looks rather disorganized and cramped imo.

also the entire second half only uses about a third of the screen, i think spreading stuff out more would be better since you can then use that room to make more equal and aesthetically pleasing patterns.

[normal]
00:06:196 (1,2,1) - can u line up the sliders o.o

00:35:138 - there's a break here in the top diff, i think this one should have it too.

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7360509 i think this rhythm is better at the end. the repeat slider ends at a really awkward moment but this way it seems like the spinner continues that last flute note properly.

[easy]
00:15:507 (2,3) - might be easier to read if you move 3 away from 1 body since atm 3 is closer to 1 and noobs might misread and go there.

00:24:300 (3,4) - same thing here.

00:38:265 (2,3) - same thing here.

same thing about rhythm at the end

idk shit about ctb so tell me when that is finished lol

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-02-18T20:49:14+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
hello hello

[aurora]

mostly aesthetic things

00:07:231 (3,4,5,1) - it'd be nice to spread this pattern out across the playfield more, it seems rather cramped. done

00:10:334 (1,3) - is there a reason these sliders aren't the same it looks really weird that last one was a mistake, fixed

00:10:852 (2,5) - this pixel overlap tho fixed

00:25:852 (4) - looks weird cuz it's very close to the slider body. changed and I changed the orientation of the sliders that come after top make sure thispart flows nicely

00:28:955 (1) - why is rhythm here different from 00:20:679 (1,2,3,4) - ? it sounds very similar to me in the song. For00:20:679 (1,2,3,4) - these is a noticeable difference with the piano in the background like you can hear on 00:21:455 - , that is not present on the first one. That's why I mapped it differently. I did change the 1/2 slider to a 1/1 slider so it does look more like the first one

00:41:369 (1)- this pattern has inconsistent visual spacing all across which means that it looks rather disorganized and cramped imo. changed

also the entire second half only uses about a third of the screen, i think spreading stuff out more would be better since you can then use that room to make more equal and aesthetically pleasing patterns. I've rearranged the second part as it was really cramped in the top right

[easy]
00:15:507 (2,3) - might be easier to read if you move 3 away from 1 body since atm 3 is closer to 1 and noobs might misread and go there. Done

00:24:300 (3,4) - same thing here. done

00:38:265 (2,3) - same thing here.done

same thing about rhythm at the end I kept it as is. The current repeat slider ends on the last note of the instrumentals followed for the whole song. I don't think following the flute just at the end would be a good idea

idk shit about ctb so tell me when that is finished lol

Thanks for the mod!

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Saileach 2017-02-18T23:34:39+00:00

Nao Tomori wrote:
hello hello

[normal]
00:06:196 (1,2,1) - can u line up the sliders o.o Sure

00:35:138 - there's a break here in the top diff, i think this one should have it too. Accident, was meant to be there, fixed now

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7360509 i think this rhythm is better at the end. the repeat slider ends at a really awkward moment but this way it seems like the spinner continues that last flute note properly. Sure

idk shit about ctb so tell me when that is finished lol I love fruit ninja! /s

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-02-23T19:07:31+00:00

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nm slave at your service

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edit: slightly fixed one

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celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-02-23T19:18:46+00:00

Updated with new diff

Aurele

osu! Alumni

7,408 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2017-02-25T04:36:03+00:00

mod for normal

Normal

00:16:541 (3) - Inconsistent combos. You should be adding a new combo here to follow your previous combos.
00:20:679 (1,2,3) - If you were looking for perfect blankets, you should consider moving both of these circles to make a better blanket with the previous slider.
00:47:576 (3) - Inconsistent combo as well. Add a new combo to this object.
00:54:300 (2,3,4) - I was looking at the rhythm of these objects, and I couldn't find any reason why you've decided to put a 1/1 slider here: It's not following anything in the song. It more like a self-predicted rhythm in this case. I would like to suggest you to delete the circle (2) and move the slider where there circle was before. By doing this, you'll emphasize the sound represented by the end of the two previous sliders and this circle 00:55:334 (3) - .

I enjoyed the way you managed to make this difficulty. the flow is awesome and so is the rhythm. nice job!

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-02-26T22:13:56+00:00

fixed all

d

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 37231
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 18620
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:From a Flock of Crows
TitleUnicode:From a Flock of Crows
Artist:Coeur de Pirate
ArtistUnicode:Cœur de Pirate
Creator:celerih
Version:Ultima Fox's Normal
Source:Child of Light
Tags:Original Soundtrack Piano Beatrice Béatrice Martin MBomb - Magic Bomb - Ultima Fox Ubisoft
BeatmapID:1221590
BeatmapSetID:536563

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

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-Sh1n1-

3,402 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2017-03-20T08:07:41+00:00

General

Unnused file: free-wallpaper-5.jpg
Hitsounds with possible delay:
.- soft-hitclap15.wav
.- soft-hitclap4.wav
.- soft-hitclap5.wav
00:18:600 - unnecessary green line but first of all because it is unsnapped.
00:21:445 - unsnapped too
I'm a bit wonder why Stack Leniency is 3 at ctb/osu!catch difficulties, is it at all necessary?

Cup

00:02:058 (1) - I suggest you to do something like 00:50:679 (2) - cause at lower diffs I think that the first fruit should be closer to the centre, as you know, newcomers don't have enough reaction.
00:04:127 (5) - Don't you want to move to x:230 to keep a better consistency about distance with 00:08:007 (4,1) - ?
00:08:265 - why NC here and not at 00:04:127 - if 00:04:127 (5) - and 00:08:265 (1,2,3) - are 3 fruits? it isn't a big problem but I strongly recommend you to keep in mind the number of fruits instead of watching sliders and notes in editor, at this case I consider NC at 00:08:265 - unnecessary.
00:16:024 (2,3,4) - this kind of patterns looks unsightly, it feels like if you are trying to make a linear pattern but you missed the distance of 00:16:283 (3,4) -, I recommend you something different to emphasize 00:16:541 - better, for example, something mirrored, try moving 00:16:283 (3,4) - to x:472, then fix the distance between 00:16:541 (4,1) -
00:21:196 (4,5,6) - 00:32:576 (3,4,5) - 00:42:921 (3,4,1) - orz, I think that this part could be inproved for the same reason as mentioned above, I know that is my preference only but the last decision is up to you.
00:25:334 (5) - I'm a bit wonder cause you were following 00:25:852 - (this kind of sounds) with x1.30 of distance through the whole song and this part it's a simple reverse, you are breaking your consistency, I strongly recommend you to remove reverse and then add a note at 00:25:852 - with the distance mentioned before.
00:43:438 - here we go with NCs again.
00:50:679 (2,3) - don't you think that this antiflow is a little bit weird for a cup diff? as a mapper and play I was waiting for 00:51:714 (3) - to the right of 00:50:679 (2) -
I'm in doubt about some hitsounds in your map, especially on 00:25:852 - and 00:33:093 -, I think that you missed finish and whistle on your easy diff, but in the other hand I feel that this part is different to the rest of the song, so finish isn't at all necessary imo, take a look to 00:21:714 - as a reference.
00:53:265 (5) - missing clap right? try to recheck your hitsounds one more times please.
Uncheck widescreen support.

MBomb's Salad

00:21:455 (3,4) - isn't it deserve more distance? also the current transition between 00:21:196 (2,3) - is a bit weird, you are breaking your consistency here, I suggest you to move 00:21:455 (3) - a bit to the left.
Idk if you made the hitsounds, well looks like celerih's hitsounds so, ask him about his decision on 00:25:852 - and 00:33:093 -

Call me back!

MBomb

MBomb 2017-03-20T17:58:41+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
MBomb's Salad
00:21:455 (3,4) - isn't it deserve more distance? also the current transition between 00:21:196 (2,3) - is a bit weird, you are breaking your consistency here, I suggest you to move 00:21:455 (3) - a bit to the left. - Moved 3 to the left a bit, but the current distancing is fine in my opinion because the sound on 4 is weaker than on 3.
Idk if you made the hitsounds, well looks like celerih's hitsounds so, ask him about his decision on 00:25:852 - and 00:33:093 - - Celery's call.

Call me back!

@Celery: Move 00:21:455 (3) - to x:144 and fix hitsound stuff however you see fit, thanks.

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-03-23T15:51:37+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:

General
Unnused file: free-wallpaper-5.jpg Removed
Hitsounds with possible delay:
.- soft-hitclap15.wav
.- soft-hitclap4.wav
.- soft-hitclap5.wav Checked the hitsounds in Audacity, and they didn't have a delay over 5ms. In addition, these hitsounds are from LordRaika's collection
00:18:600 - unnecessary green line but first of all because it is unsnapped. Checked on all diffs and Cup was the only one with this. I removed it
00:21:445 - unsnapped too Once again cup was alone with this issue. It has been fixed
I'm a bit wonder why Stack Leniency is 3 at ctb/osu!catch difficulties, is it at all necessary? Stack Leniency does nothing in ctb, so having it at 3 doesn't do anything

Cup
00:02:058 (1) - I suggest you to do something like 00:50:679 (2) - cause at lower diffs I think that the first fruit should be closer to the centre, as you know, newcomers don't have enough reaction. Gave it a strong angle, so the start of it is very close to the beginning, but I didn't create a curved slider, since the shape at 00:50:679 (2) - was to create a distinction
00:04:127 (5) - Don't you want to move to x:230 to keep a better consistency about distance with 00:08:007 (4,1) - ? That second section is different from the first, and so I wanted to show that change with the different spacing. AS you can see, the spacing of 00:12:403 (4) - is the same as 00:04:127 (5) - since they are the same sound. So the consistency is there
00:08:265 - why NC here and not at 00:04:127 - if 00:04:127 (5) - and 00:08:265 (1,2,3) - are 3 fruits? it isn't a big problem but I strongly recommend you to keep in mind the number of fruits instead of watching sliders and notes in editor, at this case I consider NC at 00:08:265 - unnecessary. Removed the NC here, to be consistent with the NC at every other downbeat structure I have
00:16:024 (2,3,4) - this kind of patterns looks unsightly, it feels like if you are trying to make a linear pattern but you missed the distance of 00:16:283 (3,4) -, I recommend you something different to emphasize 00:16:541 - better, for example, something mirrored, try moving 00:16:283 (3,4) - to x:472, then fix the distance between 00:16:541 (4,1) - Done
00:21:196 (4,5,6) - 00:32:576 (3,4,5) - 00:42:921 (3,4,1) - orz, I think that this part could be inproved for the same reason as mentioned above, I know that is my preference only but the last decision is up to you. Done
00:25:334 (5) - I'm a bit wonder cause you were following 00:25:852 - (this kind of sounds) with x1.30 of distance through the whole song and this part it's a simple reverse, you are breaking your consistency, I strongly recommend you to remove reverse and then add a note at 00:25:852 - with the distance mentioned before. You're right, I changed it so it's the same as before
00:43:438 - here we go with NCs again. Fixed here too
00:50:679 (2,3) - don't you think that this antiflow is a little bit weird for a cup diff? as a mapper and play I was waiting for 00:51:714 (3) - to the right of 00:50:679 (2) - Removed the antiflow here
I'm in doubt about some hitsounds in your map, especially on 00:25:852 - and 00:33:093 -, I think that you missed finish and whistle on your easy diff, but in the other hand I feel that this part is different to the rest of the song, so finish isn't at all necessary imo, take a look to 00:21:714 - as a reference. I PM'ed Sinnoh about this since he made the HS. Should reply soon to this, I'll leave the HS to someone who knows what they are doing ^-^
00:53:265 (5) - missing clap right? try to recheck your hitsounds one more times please. It was missing a whistle/clap.
Uncheck widescreen support. Removed it on the Cup and on the Normal

MBomb's Salad
00:21:455 (3,4) - isn't it deserve more distance? also the current transition between 00:21:196 (2,3) - is a bit weird, you are breaking your consistency here, I suggest you to move 00:21:455 (3) - a bit to the left. Followed MBomb's instructions
Idk if you made the hitsounds, well looks like celerih's hitsounds so, ask him about his decision on 00:25:852 - and 00:33:093 -

Call me back!

Thank you so much for the mod, once the hitsound issue is checked, I will message you

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-03-23T23:08:20+00:00

some of the hitsounds are modified versions of his set with pitch lowered/raised. yes there is a delay of around 0.05 seconds on those.
will comment on finishes later

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-03-24T12:47:26+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
General
Hitsounds with possible delay: fixed
.- soft-hitclap15.wav
.- soft-hitclap4.wav
.- soft-hitclap5.wav
00:18:600 - unnecessary green line but first of all because it is unsnapped. celerih you can fix these, just resnap
00:21:445 - unsnapped too
I'm in doubt about some hitsounds in your map, especially on 00:25:852 - and 00:33:093 -, I think that you missed finish and whistle on your easy diff, but in the other hand I feel that this part is different to the rest of the song, so finish isn't at all necessary imo, take a look to 00:21:714 - as a reference.
Remove finishes at 00:21:714 (6) - 00:25:852 (7) - 00:29:990 (5) - and 00:33:093 (5) - this part is probably better without so it's different from the other section.

https://puu.sh/uWOtT/8227f8e56c.zip put these in the folder replace old hitsounds, redownload everyone

would probably be a good idea to remove some of the unused green lines, there's quite a few on the lower diffs
no kudosu
easy
there are no finishes in the second half

Normal
00:07:748 (3) - No hitclap on tail

Aurora
00:08:007 (5) - no clap (also on cup)
00:20:679 (1) - Remove the sliderslide whistle

salad
00:16:541 (1) - no finish
00:53:783 (1) - nice use of whistle, could easily apply to normal/hard. easy/cup wouldn't do.

also, for easy diffs, i just used hitsound copier to make those. Imo the usage of whistle is way too high for them, eg. in cup literally all circles have whistles, which makes it redundant and doesn't give any feedback (dq worthy issue). Just lower the frequency of whistles in lower diff a bit.

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-03-24T18:09:03+00:00

Sinnoh talks about hitsounds

Sinnoh wrote:
-Sh1n1- wrote:
General
Hitsounds with possible delay: fixed
.- soft-hitclap15.wav
.- soft-hitclap4.wav
.- soft-hitclap5.wav
00:18:600 - unnecessary green line but first of all because it is unsnapped. celerih you can fix these, just resnap
00:21:445 - unsnapped too
I'm in doubt about some hitsounds in your map, especially on 00:25:852 - and 00:33:093 -, I think that you missed finish and whistle on your easy diff, but in the other hand I feel that this part is different to the rest of the song, so finish isn't at all necessary imo, take a look to 00:21:714 - as a reference.
Remove finishes at 00:21:714 (6) - 00:25:852 (7) - 00:29:990 (5) - and 00:33:093 (5) - this part is probably better without so it's different from the other section.
https://puu.sh/uWOtT/8227f8e56c.zip put these in the folder replace old hitsounds, redownload everyone

would probably be a good idea to remove some of the unused green lines, there's quite a few on the lower diffs
no kudosu
easy
there are no finishes in the second half

Normal
00:07:748 (3) - No hitclap on tail

Aurora
00:08:007 (5) - no clap (also on cup)
00:20:679 (1) - Remove the sliderslide whistle

salad
00:16:541 (1) - no finish
00:53:783 (1) - nice use of whistle, could easily apply to normal/hard. easy/cup wouldn't do.

also, for easy diffs, i just used hitsound copier to make those. Imo the usage of whistle is way too high for them, eg. in cup literally all circles have whistles, which makes it redundant and doesn't give any feedback (dq worthy issue). Just lower the frequency of whistles in lower diff a bit.

I applied everything in there, reduced the amount of whistles in the cup, changed up the hs files, removed and added correct hs. Everything should be good to go now! Thanks a lot for rechecking stuff Sinnoh!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-03-24T22:31:13+00:00

[

General]

Difficulty Spread : +1 OD on Aurora? Cleaner OD spread from the Normal
Background Size : these are fine but why does every diff have a different bg
Unsnapped objects : none
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : good
Metadata Issues : !source
Timeline Issues : ok
Combo Colors : combo 4 looks really ugly and doesnt really fit any of the bgs :/
Unused Hitsounds : none
Hitsounds Issues :
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Avoid keysounding without hitnormal support. If hitsounds blend perfectly with the song, feedback is minimal.
In places such as 00:03:093 (2) -, there's no sound support besides the keysound, which blends in too well with the song, leaving a lack of feedback (I'm looking at the Easy for this example). Most of the time, this doesn't happen, but you'll 100% need to go through and add some sort of additional support for keysounds that aren't paired with something else, such as 00:07:231 (2) -.
Unused Files / Other : the easy looks really ugly l o l

[

Easy]

General

00:03:093 (2,4) - these almost get really touchy, I'd suggest moving 4 away a bit so that way it can't be that close to an overlap.
00:06:196 (1,1) - these are really aggressive slidershapes in comparison to ones like 00:14:472 (1) - or 00:02:058 (1) - . The different slidershapes imply that there will be some new sound there or at the very least, something worth emphasizing, but nothing actually changes. Just use standard slidershapes.
00:02:058 (1,2,3) - Very disappointed in the lack of linear flow ;c looks really ugly
00:07:748 (3) - this slider implies there will be flow to the right, but the flow goes downwards instead, which can cause flow issues for a beginner. Try to rearrange the objects in a way that properly uses the slider to redirect the flow.
00:21:196 (4) - nazi, but centralize that middle point so it doesn't look lopsided
00:22:748 (1,2) - blanket adjustment
00:39:817 (4) - has finish on tail 00:43:438 (4) - does not, consistency please
00:42:921 (3,4) - the way 3 overlaps 4 is not very good for this level. The overlap makes the flow unclear and unintuitive. Try something like this instead
00:47:058 (3,4) - This rhythm might be a bit too complex for an easy. My solution would be to turn 00:47:058 (3) - into just a circle to cut down on the rhythm density.
00:51:714 (1) - Remove NC? You have a 2 note combo lol

[

Ultima Fox's Normal]

General

00:02:058 (1,2) - wanna give these slight curves for the aesthetic :d
00:03:869 (1) - Remove NC, 2 note combo. Add the NC at 00:04:127 (2) - instead or remove it entirely.
00:05:679 (4) - Uhh not really a fan of this, the noise is pretty faint and this is the only difficulty it's used in. If you're adamant about keeping something like this, try changing it to a circle and stacking it on the head of 00:06:196 (1) - .
00:12:145 (1,2) - Same NC issue
00:16:541 (1) - Could probably remove this as well
00:18:610 (1,2) - whaaaaat why? Just make it 1/1 sliders, and if you want some extra density add a circle at 00:19:386 - . This is the only diff that uses 1/2 in this part.
00:21:455 (2,3) - 00:23:524 (2) - same sound different object usages
00:26:886 (1,2) - :d
00:28:955 (1) - strong sound on the sliderend, try to readjust the rhythm somehow. Same goes for here 00:29:731 (2) -
00:32:834 (1) - remove NC and make it 2 circles for the strong stuff
00:39:300 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:438 (1) - Adjust blanket (slightly off) remove NC
00:47:576 (1) - Remove NC
the diff was nice apart from the fact i had to tell you to fix almost every new combo

[

Aurora]

General

00:04:645 (2,1) - kill this overlap
00:07:231 (3,1) - this one looks intentional but it's still ugly, just stack under tail
00:08:783 (2) - make a triangle with 00:07:748 (4,5) - ?
00:16:541 (3) - line this up with the tail of 00:15:507 (3) - ?
00:31:541 (3,2) - spacing is off from the other overlaps you used. intended or mistake?
00:38:265 (3,1) - touchy ;c
00:46:024 (2,2) - this overlap looks intended but it makes it look messy here because this area is high density. I'd stack it tbh.
00:49:645 (1,2) - aggressive slidershape vs. non-aggressive on same sounds
00:53:783 (1,2) - instead of the slider maybe make a pattern of circles that slowly decreases in spacing timeline condensed for viewing purposes

[

Cup]

General

00:07:231 (2) - x:112? seems really close to the previous object.
00:08:265 (5) - x:224 shows visible change in distance here for the strong sound. You can move 00:08:783 (6) - to x:96 after to adjust it.
00:16:541 (4) - x:368 for emphasis
00:21:714 (6) - x:184 ^ you know what to do for the rest of these patterns
00:49:645 (1,2) - aids droplets holy moly, try to reduce the curve here

[

MBomb's Salad]

General

00:05:162 (3) - seems a bit far, I'd drop this 2 grids to x:168 maybe.
00:16:283 (5,1) - Pretty strong note with not a lot of emphasis. Even though it's not as strong as the others, maybe a small dash here would be nice
00:27:921 (3) - definitely a bit too far. try x:160.

good luck!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-03-26T10:41:28+00:00

Just went over easy and cup, the circle Ascendance pointed out is the only one missing a whistle xP just add one there

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-03-26T14:32:53+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
[ Ultima Fox's Normal]

General

00:02:058 (1,2) - wanna give these slight curves for the aesthetic :d I like it better how it is, especially because the slider right after is curved (idk e lol i just like it better)
00:03:869 (1) - Remove NC, 2 note combo. Add the NC at 00:04:127 (2) - instead or remove it entirely.
00:05:679 (4) - Uhh not really a fan of this, the noise is pretty faint and this is the only difficulty it's used in. If you're adamant about keeping something like this, try changing it to a circle and stacking it on the head of 00:06:196 (1) - . I agree with this but I have no idea how to fix it LOL; ill figure something out
00:12:145 (1,2) - Same NC issue
00:16:541 (1) - Could probably remove this as well
00:18:610 (1,2) - whaaaaat why? Just make it 1/1 sliders, and if you want some extra density add a circle at 00:19:386 - . This is the only diff that uses 1/2 in this part. I think repeat 1/2 sliders are good here, because it transitions well from easy's 1/1 to aurora's 1/2 non repeat, and I feel its still easy enough for normal players to play
00:21:455 (2,3) - 00:23:524 (2) - same sound different object usages
00:26:886 (1,2) - :d x ddddddd
00:28:955 (1) - strong sound on the sliderend, try to readjust the rhythm somehow. Same goes for here 00:29:731 (2) -
00:32:834 (1) - remove NC and make it 2 circles for the strong stuff
00:39:300 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:438 (1) - Adjust blanket (slightly off) remove NC
00:47:576 (1) - Remove NC
the diff was nice apart from the fact i had to tell you to fix almost every new combo

good luck!

Fixed everything I didn't comment on
Thanks a ton!~

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edit because i forgot to put txt in code sjfgdus

MBomb

MBomb 2017-03-26T21:33:13+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
[ MBomb's Salad]

General

00:05:162 (3) - seems a bit far, I'd drop this 2 grids to x:168 maybe. - x:160 instead, 168 felt a bit too ambiguous to me.
00:16:283 (5,1) - Pretty strong note with not a lot of emphasis. Even though it's not as strong as the others, maybe a small dash here would be nice - Didn't do a dash but added slightly more distance.
00:27:921 (3) - definitely a bit too far. try x:160. - x:152 because I'm edgy.

good luck!

gya

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celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-03-26T22:08:25+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
[General]

Difficulty Spread : +1 OD on Aurora? Cleaner OD spread from the Normal I upped it to 5, since I feel 5.5 is too harsh an OD for a map of this difficulty
Background Size : these are fine but why does every diff have a different bg Why not, it's all official artwork from the game, so why not have a bit of variety with each diff. I don't think this break any rules and the diff all work together, since it's all the same art style
Unsnapped objects : none
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : good
Metadata Issues : !source Yeaaaaahhh, this one is pretty awkward. In all my research (and trust me, I've been looking before the map was uploaded, while it was and I still tried to look today) I couldn't find sources which contained the From a Flock of Crows song. Sadly, the only official source ,meaning the Coeur de Pirate album, isn't the complete album. http://musique.coeurdepirate.com/album/child-of-light
Timeline Issues : ok
Combo Colors : combo 4 looks really ugly and doesnt really fit any of the bgs :/ Changed to a more fitting green colour
Unused Hitsounds : none
Hitsounds Issues :
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Avoid keysounding without hitnormal support. If hitsounds blend perfectly with the song, feedback is minimal.
In places such as 00:03:093 (2) -, there's no sound support besides the keysound, which blends in too well with the song, leaving a lack of feedback (I'm looking at the Easy for this example). Most of the time, this doesn't happen, but you'll 100% need to go through and add some sort of additional support for keysounds that aren't paired with something else, such as 00:07:231 (2) -. Sinnoh
Unused Files / Other : the easy looks really ugly l o l

[ Easy]

General

00:03:093 (2,4) - these almost get really touchy, I'd suggest moving 4 away a bit so that way it can't be that close to an overlap. Move a bit higher up so it wasn't so close
00:06:196 (1,1) - these are really aggressive slidershapes in comparison to ones like 00:14:472 (1) - or 00:02:058 (1) - . The different slidershapes imply that there will be some new sound there or at the very least, something worth emphasizing, but nothing actually changes. Just use standard slidershapes. Fixed
00:02:058 (1,2,3) - Very disappointed in the lack of linear flow ;c looks really ugly Redid this part slightly
00:07:748 (3) - this slider implies there will be flow to the right, but the flow goes downwards instead, which can cause flow issues for a beginner. Try to rearrange the objects in a way that properly uses the slider to redirect the flow. Fixed
00:21:196 (4) - nazi, but centralize that middle point so it doesn't look lopsided Fixed
00:22:748 (1,2) - blanket adjustment Fixed
00:39:817 (4) - has finish on tail 00:43:438 (4) - does not, consistency please Changed
00:42:921 (3,4) - the way 3 overlaps 4 is not very good for this level. The overlap makes the flow unclear and unintuitive. Try something like this instead Did the change, but not exactly the same way since your suggestion doesn't indicate the direction of the next section at all, and this could be confusing
00:47:058 (3,4) - This rhythm might be a bit too complex for an easy. My solution would be to turn 00:47:058 (3) - into just a circle to cut down on the rhythm density. Fixed
00:51:714 (1) - Remove NC? You have a 2 note combo lol Foxed lol

I also went back and did a bunch of small fixes to make the diff more aesthetically appealing. Basically just a bunch of angle rearrangements and slider shape changes

[ Aurora]

General

00:04:645 (2,1) - kill this overlap
00:07:231 (3,1) - this one looks intentional but it's still ugly, just stack under tail Fixed
00:08:783 (2) - make a triangle with 00:07:748 (4,5) - ? H I G H L E V E L A E S T H E T I C S
00:16:541 (3) - line this up with the tail of 00:15:507 (3) - ? imo doing that wouldn't be a big enough spacing to correctly emphasize the beat on 00:16:541 - Instead I overlapped correctly 00:15:507 (3,2) - and lined up the 00:16:541 (3) -
00:31:541 (3,2) - spacing is off from the other overlaps you used. intended or mistake? overlapped to be consistent with the rest
00:38:265 (3,1) - touchy ;c Touch me ;c
00:46:024 (2,2) - this overlap looks intended but it makes it look messy here because this area is high density. I'd stack it tbh.
00:49:645 (1,2) - aggressive slidershape vs. non-aggressive on same sounds changed the first shape
00:53:783 (1,2) - instead of the slider maybe make a pattern of circles that slowly decreases in spacing timeline condensed for viewing purposes Good idea, applied

[ Cup]

General

00:07:231 (2) - x:112? seems really close to the previous object. x:124 because I don't want the spacing to be very high here
00:08:265 (5) - x:224 shows visible change in distance here for the strong sound. You can move 00:08:783 (6) - to x:96 after to adjust it. v
00:16:541 (4) - x:368 for emphasis v
00:21:714 (6) - x:184 ^ you know what to do for the rest of these patterns Changed all of them to have 1.5ds over 1.2 so that they stand out more
00:49:645 (1,2) - aids droplets holy moly, try to reduce the curve here reduced the curve

good luck!

Thanks a lot for the last minute mod assdongles. You are finally relieved from your debt to me

Sinnoh wrote:
Just went over easy and cup, the circle Ascendance pointed out is the only one missing a whistle xP just add one there Fixed

Wew, seems like everything is ready now. Let's see what happens ^_^

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined December 2014

Nao Tomori 2017-03-27T20:11:03+00:00

re

[auroru]
00:02:058 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - u can make this more consistent with visual spacing, like 00:02:576 (2,3) - are pretty far apart but 00:04:127 (1,2) - very close together. other parts are more consistent

00:10:334 (1,2,3) - imo make this farther apart too and the next part with the diagonal sliders
00:11:369 (3,5) - this kind of spacing is fine

00:26:886 (1,2,3,4) - u could make this blanket better

00:41:369 (1,2,3) - ?_? make it even

00:46:541 (3,4) - same here make 4 even with 3-2 spacing

00:55:852 - dunno if i said this last time but note here is cute

yeah just go through the map and make ur visual spacings more even cuz theyre rly weird atm

[normal]
00:05:679 (6) - this is quiet to have a 1/2 slider on it, imo 00:05:162 (5) - should be 1/1 since then all your clickable stuff will be on the bell sounds

00:49:386 (1) - 00:51:455 (1) - kinda same thing but imo fine here cuz its like the finale

00:52:748 (3) - ds is off

[easy]
00:51:714 (3) - this one is too far or smth

00:57:921 - imo u shd end ur spinners here cuz theres no sound lol

aibat stuff
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
soft-hitclap15.wav
soft-hitclap4.wav
soft-hitclap5.wav

apparently cup has unsnapped timing lines so make sure theyre in front of the note and not behind the note

free-wallpaper-5 appears unused

change the - magic bomb - tag to -_magic_bomb_- or its repeating - technically

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

celerih 2017-03-30T20:18:28+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
re

[auroru]
00:02:058 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - u can make this more consistent with visual spacing, like 00:02:576 (2,3) - are pretty far apart but 00:04:127 (1,2) - very close together. other parts are more consistent Changed spacing so they aren't so close, while keeping overlaps

00:10:334 (1,2,3) - imo make this farther apart too and the next part with the diagonal sliders fixed the spacing
00:11:369 (3,5) - this kind of spacing is fine

00:26:886 (1,2,3,4) - u could make this blanket better done

00:41:369 (1,2,3) - ?_? make it even Made sure spacing and angles were even

00:46:541 (3,4) - same here make 4 even with 3-2 spacing I wanted to change spacing since the song changes here, that's why I stopped using sliders. I did try to move things around a bit to have it more even

00:55:852 - dunno if i said this last time but note here is cute I prefer just having the spinner here

yeah just go through the map and make ur visual spacings more even cuz theyre rly weird atm

[easy]
00:51:714 (3) - this one is too far or smth Fixed DS to 1x

00:57:921 - imo u shd end ur spinners here cuz theres no sound lol The sound actually completely fades out at 00:59:472 - adn that's where all the spinners end currently

aibat stuff
Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms: u DiDnT re~dowenlode x d
soft-hitclap15.wav u DiDnT re~dowenlode x d
soft-hitclap4.wav u DiDnT re~dowenlode x d
soft-hitclap5.wav u DiDnT re~dowenlode x d

apparently cup has unsnapped timing lines so make sure theyre in front of the note and not behind the note They were fixed in a last mod, but just to be sure I rechecked and there were none

free-wallpaper-5 appears unused u DiDnT re~dowenlode x d

change the - magic bomb - tag to -_magic_bomb_- or its repeating - technically Fixed

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-03-31T01:54:12+00:00

change the -_Magic_Bomb_- tag to just Magic Bomb because no one does that
t/436452
t/347164

Ultima Fox

621 posts

Joined August 2013

Ultima Fox 2017-03-31T02:59:50+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
re

[easy]
00:51:714 (3) - this one is too far or smth Pretty sure that's an AiMod error, because it's the same as everything else fdshbfaifugfsbnigu

00:57:921 - imo u shd end ur spinners here cuz theres no sound lol fixd

thanks dad

:thinking:

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