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Demetori - Fall of Fall ~ The Door Into Summer

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neonat
01:20:171 (1) - can you remove the whistle on the slider end, having the whistle on the body is enough
01:22:837 (1) - ^ nothing to really accent the whistle at the end of the slider (in the music)
01:24:837 (4) - whistle on slider start? Feels like it's being left out, since 01:26:171 (4) has one
01:30:837 (1) - same thing about the slider end whistle
01:33:504 (1) - ^
01:41:337 (6,7) - seems more like a slider here for the music? Something like the pair of 01:40:671 (3,4) -
02:36:171 (1) - and 02:38:837 (1) - so on so forth in the kiais (04:29:504 (1) - 04:32:171 (1) - 04:40:337 (1) - 04:42:837 (1) - )
02:40:837 (4) - same as 01:24:837 (4) - so on so forth for any remaining ones in kiai too (04:34:170 (4) - )
02:45:671 (1) - whistle
03:18:171 (3,5) - sudden whistles? Only place here with them
03:21:671 (1,2,3,4) - I find the rhythm here a little odd, the music still tends towards the rhythm of 03:16:337 (1,2,3,4) - though, not really seeing where the start of 03:21:837 (2,4) - lands on
03:25:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - seems like the whistles here go more with the lower pitch playing guitar, the one not playing the melody, but then the parts after have the whistles folowing that guitar part, I think you should just follow one of them all the way instead
04:28:671 (3,4) - more distance between them?
04:28:337 (1) - whistle
04:39:004 (1) - ^

Well just trying to make sense of the hitsounding lol, if I am understanding what you are trying to highlight..
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jonathanlfj

neonat wrote:

01:20:171 (1) - can you remove the whistle on the slider end, having the whistle on the body is enough these are a way of additive hitsounding - it creates emphasis and helps to bridge into the drum-heavy section right after
01:22:837 (1) - ^ nothing to really accent the whistle at the end of the slider (in the music) similar to above, I am using the same hitsounding pattern for consistency
01:24:837 (4) - whistle on slider start? Feels like it's being left out, since 01:26:171 (4) has one yes
01:30:837 (1) - same thing about the slider end whistle
01:33:504 (1) - ^
01:41:337 (6,7) - seems more like a slider here for the music? Something like the pair of 01:40:671 (3,4) - the guitar plays twice here - unlike 01:41:004 which does not have the guitar riff
02:36:171 (1) - and 02:38:837 (1) - so on so forth in the kiais (04:29:504 (1) - 04:32:171 (1) - 04:40:337 (1) - 04:42:837 (1) - )
02:40:837 (4) - same as 01:24:837 (4) - so on so forth for any remaining ones in kiai too (04:34:170 (4) - ) yeah
02:45:671 (1) - whistle ok
03:18:171 (3,5) - sudden whistles? Only place here with them the music has different guitar sounds here, so i intentionally put them here to differentiate from the soft whistles
03:21:671 (1,2,3,4) - I find the rhythm here a little odd, the music still tends towards the rhythm of 03:16:337 (1,2,3,4) - though, not really seeing where the start of 03:21:837 (2,4) - lands on actually i think the drummer changed his drumming pattern here, if you listen carefully you will realize the rhythm for 03:22:337 (4,5) is identical with 03:21:837 (2,3)
03:25:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - seems like the whistles here go more with the lower pitch playing guitar, the one not playing the melody, but then the parts after have the whistles folowing that guitar part, I think you should just follow one of them all the way instead good point
04:28:671 (3,4) - more distance between them? ya
04:28:337 (1) - whistle
04:39:004 (1) - ^ added both

Well just trying to make sense of the hitsounding lol, if I am understanding what you are trying to highlight..
Thanks for checking :D
neonat
Good Luck
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
Thanks <3
Shurelia
Whoaa. Good luck.

and gratz.

sick song and map.
Trust
grats! :)
Alheak
hey lfj, just wanted to share some of my concerns after trying out your map

  1. first there's a timing issue with the guitar at the very beginning, i'll try to get GoldenWolf to explain a bit more precisely but in short the guitar is playing at a lower bpm, causing it to be late relatively to the hitobjects and making this part very hard to acc
  2. 00:52:004 (1,2,3,4) - rhythmically confusing to play, you are skipping the strong downbeat, but basically overmapping the barely noticeable guitar slide beginning on a red tick, and it's not consistent with 02:08:004 (1,1) -
  3. 00:21:504 (1,2,3) - this pattern and other ones like this are sometimes mapped with the drop-off stream going either with the flow of the slider or against it, but there doesn't seem to be a deciding factor for that. Considering how differently they feel when they're played i believe you should pick either one or the other but not both, or be more obvious in your choice of flow
thats it from me, good luck
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jonathanlfj
I made some adjustments to the timing at the beginning, lets see if GW has something similar

00:00:348 - 180bpm
00:20:347 - 182bpm
00:21:504 - 180bpm
00:21:670 - 180bpm

00:52:004 (1,2,3,4) - I've swapped around the circle and slider

00:21:504 (1,2,3) - I intentionally change up the direction of the triplet following, because I think going the same direction every time is rather bland. I've used a similar technique in counter clock world, so I think this one is fine.

EDIT: pishi agreed to fix the mp3 so the timing in the beginning, think that will be a better idea than weird timing changes
pishifat
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
Uploaded new mp3, timing should be fine now.

Thanks pishi!
GoldenWolf
On the unedited MP3; this is what I get. It seems weird (and it is), but it sounds accurate to me.
Fun fact; it somehow snaps perfectly down to the millisecond. Maybe just a coincidence though ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

On the edited MP3; it mostly sounds accurate enough, I would say. Slightly too slow for the first 3 groups of notes, but nothing really noticeable while playing, unlike previously. So it's good to go.

<3
Kibbleru
rebub
Battle
I'm glad that all those 100s I got at the start wasn't my fault then lul

#2 still looks fine
neonat
fixed 04:22:504 (1,2,3) spacing and changed position of 02:32:171 (2)
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
Thanks again everyone <3
Monstrata
Nice!

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7ambda

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Nice!

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quite intriguing
Satellite
congrats!
CSLM

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Nice!

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yeah
gz jonathan~
speedrank :v
Lonesome Dreams_old

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Nice!
Lily Bread

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