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Topic Starter
noEnon wrote:
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Heya~ M4M here.
Overall, very nice diff. Just be careful not to map triples where there are no sounds on the blue ticks. Same goes for streams. Good Luck~
General:
- I’m not sure if you’re planning on adding a SB that tells the player which song is playing next, etc, but it’ll be a good idea.
- I suggest using a different difficulty name since “sana” is already the artist. Perhaps a lyric or something that all the songs have in common.
sana:
- 00:05:841 (4) –Since this note sounds different than the previous three and also has a much stronger beat, I suggest adding a jump to put emphasis on it.
- 00:11:710 (5,6) –Perfect this stack here. Not sure if it’s intentional.
- 00:44:164 (1) –Nazi, but for better flow from 00:43:964 (8) – you can move the tail of the slider a bit to the right. Like this:
- 01:19:668 (2,4) –Also a bit nazi, but you can improve the blanket here and then just copy and paste it in this slider’s: 01:19:868 (3) – place and then the sliders’ shapes will still be similar.
- 01:22:268 (1,3) –There are those “tings” sounds on the head of these sliders. To emphasize them I think it would be a good idea to place maybe default soft-hitwhistles as a hitsound on the heads. This applies to all similar cases.
- 01:49:980 (7) –Maybe place a new combo here. Because of the lower slider velocity and also because that different sound on the head of the slider supports it as well, imo.
- 02:41:420 (3) –I listened to this at 25% and couldn’t hear a beat in the background to support this note. I suggest removing this circle. The same actually goes for these as well: 02:32:702 (3,4,5,6,7,8,3,4,5,6,7,8,3,4,5,6,7,8) – I can’t hear beats where the blue ticks are. Perhaps I’m just deaf but rather doublecheck those.
- 02:48:264 (8) –Increase the spacing here. That beat sounds loud so emphasize it more by increasing the jump.
- 03:09:040 –I can hear a beat here in the background but not on the other blue ticks where the triples are, so I suggest a pattern like this instead:
- 03:12:131 –The stream continues onto this tick if you listen at 25%. Probably not necessary to map it out. But just pointing this out if you want to map it.
- 03:14:858 –Same suggestion as here: 03:09:040 – This applies to all similar cases in this song.
- 03:46:760 (2) –It’ll be a good idea to place a new combo here because of the gap between 03:44:796 (1) – and 03:46:760 (2) – meaning that the hp drain will deplete faster for the players.
- 04:28:681 (1) –Remove this new combo. It’s inconsistent with the rest.
- 04:48:574 –There’s a beat on this tick and it feels a bit weird not to map it out.
- 05:32:220 (1,3) – and 05:33:632 (1) - There are twinkling sounds on the head of these sliders and on the circle. I suggest placing that other twinkling hitsound that you had placed in previous songs on the heads of these sliders and on the circle. This applies to all similar cases.
- 07:00:379 (9) –Perhaps place a new combo here to emphasize that twinkling sound.
- 07:20:604 (1,1) –Place claps on these notes as well. It sounds cool
- 08:00:774 (7,8,9) –Move this downwards a bit for better flow to 08:01:023 (10) – and the rest of the stream
- 08:35:807 (5,1) –The distance between these two objects are quite small and players might mistakenly click the circle earlier than they have to. Maybe stack or increase the distance.
- 09:12:425 (2) –Add a bigger jump to emphasize the strong beat more.
- 09:53:316 (3) –Add new combo here for the slow SV?
- 10:15:422 (1,1,1) –Hmm, I don’t really hear any changes in the music to support these new combo’s.
- 11:02:517 (1) –I suggest ending the spinner here: 11:09:645 – and then mapping out the left-over part since it’ll be better to make those beats clickable imo and it sounds as if the spinner should rather end here: 11:09:645 –
Overall, very nice diff. Just be careful not to map triples where there are no sounds on the blue ticks. Same goes for streams. Good Luck~
Topic Starter
@-Nya- will add sb. fixed about nazi, NC, hitsounds mod. but there's all have beat at blue ticks. so no fix. and i can't find good diff name.. ;w;
Hello~
[Sana]
[Sana]
- I want to AR-1 or -2
- 01:25:468 (1,2) - 3/4 slider + 1/2slider more better?
- 01:32:868 (4) - x281 y123 more better flow imo
- 01:38:268 (1) - i like x143 y241 jump pattern w
- 02:01:903 (4) - slider end sound too strong. so changed circle + circle pattern more better much.
- 02:05:364 (6,7,8,9,1) - i think you used ds0.5 more better ? about 01:57:672 (6,7,8,9,1) - 02:11:518 (5,6,7,8,1) -
- 02:24:077 (7) - add clap on slider head.
- 02:38:702 (3,4,5) - i don't like this overlap pattern :<
- 02:40:577 (5,6) - not much this jump pattern. so changed slider ? and this sugguestion placement
- 04:25:152 (2,3) - i want to ctrl+g
- 04:30:622 (1,2,3,4) - why not same pattern ? about 04:24:975 (1,2,3,4) -
- 05:31:867 (4) - ctrl+g ?
- 11:24:942 (7,8) - changed 1/4 slider ?
- 12:14:843 (8) - i want to move x188 y335
Topic Starter
@Satellite All fix about your mod :3 thx!
Topic Starter
ressurect
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ㄱ다 가 뭔뜻임
[설명란에 외국인없는것 같아서 혼자찍은걸로 간주하겠습니다]
00:37:764 - 힛사 빠진듯
01:15:868 (1) - 굳이 이런 이상한 모양 슬라를 쓰면서라도 블랭킷을 해야 했나 하는 의문이 드네요
02:25:389 (4,2) - 오버랩 피해보세요
03:26:586 - 03:26:949 - 개인적으로 여기 강한 보컬이 조금 표현되었으면 좋겠네요
03:28:949 (4,8,9,1) - http://puu.sh/tuhwP/d888b29870.jpg
04:32:122 - 여기 비트를 굳이 표현할 필요는 없을것 같습니ㅏㄷ
05:03:574 (1,2) - 여기 간격에 비해 05:03:927 (2,3) - 간격이 상당히 좁네요. 좀 어색하게 느껴집니다
05:30:808 (1) - 01:15:868 (1) - 랑 같음
05:41:397 (3,1) - 블랭킷 에러
07:16:222 (8) - 오버매핑 같은데 볼륨이라도 조금 줄여봐여
08:28:884 (5,6) - 흐름이 조금 이상하게 느껴졌네요
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ㄱ다 가 뭔뜻임
[설명란에 외국인없는것 같아서 혼자찍은걸로 간주하겠습니다]
00:37:764 - 힛사 빠진듯
01:15:868 (1) - 굳이 이런 이상한 모양 슬라를 쓰면서라도 블랭킷을 해야 했나 하는 의문이 드네요
02:25:389 (4,2) - 오버랩 피해보세요
03:26:586 - 03:26:949 - 개인적으로 여기 강한 보컬이 조금 표현되었으면 좋겠네요
03:28:949 (4,8,9,1) - http://puu.sh/tuhwP/d888b29870.jpg
04:32:122 - 여기 비트를 굳이 표현할 필요는 없을것 같습니ㅏㄷ
05:03:574 (1,2) - 여기 간격에 비해 05:03:927 (2,3) - 간격이 상당히 좁네요. 좀 어색하게 느껴집니다
05:30:808 (1) - 01:15:868 (1) - 랑 같음
05:41:397 (3,1) - 블랭킷 에러
07:16:222 (8) - 오버매핑 같은데 볼륨이라도 조금 줄여봐여
08:28:884 (5,6) - 흐름이 조금 이상하게 느껴졌네요
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Topic Starter
Neoskylove wrote:
Q
ㄱ다 가 뭔뜻임
[설명란에 외국인없는것 같아서 혼자찍은걸로 간주하겠습니다]
01:15:868 (1) - 굳이 이런 이상한 모양 슬라를 쓰면서라도 블랭킷을 해야 했나 하는 의문이 드네요 전혀 이상하다는 생각 들지않고 흐름상 문제 전혀 없습니다
04:32:122 - 여기 비트를 굳이 표현할 필요는 없을것 같습니ㅏㄷ 표현 하나 안하나 차이는 없으나 표현하는쪽이 더 좋다고 생각합니다
05:30:808 (1) - 01:15:868 (1) - 랑 같음 ^
07:16:222 (8) - 오버매핑 같은데 볼륨이라도 조금 줄여봐여 별문제 없어보입니다
08:28:884 (5,6) - 흐름이 조금 이상하게 느껴졌네요 플레이상 문제 전혀 없다고 느껴집니다
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음 어려운맵은 모딩 잘 못하는데 최대한 해보겟슴니다
[매우아주베리주관적인모딩]
* 어디에 무슨곡인지 제목을 스토리보딩하면 좋을 듯요, 금방 할 수 있고
* 난이도명 Sana -> sana?
* 00:49:364 (3) - 머리에 클랩 00:49:764 (5) - 휘슬 ?
* 00:57:364 - 이거 놓친게 아쉬운데 00:57:164 - 에 서클 00:57:364 - 에 1/2 슬라 어떨까요
* 01:21:868 (4) - 여기가 약간 더 강조됬으면 하는바람,
01:20:668 (1) - 여기서 줄어드는 느낌도 살릴 겸
http://puu.sh/twryE/a36dba1eb6.jpg 이런건 어떠심
01:20:668 (1) - 는 x370 y261, 01:21:468 (3) - 은 01:19:868 (3) - 랑 스택
* 02:14:403 (6) - 스페이싱 왼쪽이랑 비슷하게 맞추는게 보기 좋을듯
02:14:403 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - 를 통째로 잡고 02:13:057 (7) - 머리랑 스택, 02:14:211 (5) - 를 약간 왼쪽으로?
대충 이렇게 http://puu.sh/twpra/d0b3b157cc.jpg
* 02:23:327 (3,4) - 점점 커지는 점프에서 이것만 거리가 줄어서 어색한데 02:23:139 (2) - 를 02:24:077 (7) - 머리에 스택하는건 어떨까요
* 02:26:514 (4) - 음악상 02:25:952 (1,2,3) - 의 점프가 더 커야할거같은데 이걸 늘리시거나 02:26:514 (4) - 스페이싱 약간 줄이시는게?
* 03:07:313 (5) - 컨쥐?
* 03:11:767 (5) - 여기 음이 없는것 같은뎅.. 03:29:404 (6) - 여기도 + 09:31:705 (5) - 11:28:135 (2) - 11:34:150 (6,7) - 여기도
* 03:29:768 (9) - ^ 여기도 약간 애매한듯
* 03:19:677 (1) - 이거 그냥 1/2이 나을듯..?
* 03:48:546 (5) - 스페이싱이 다른부분이랑 비교해서 좀 큰것 같은데 차라리 03:47:653 (1) - 꼬리에 스택시키는건 어떨까요
* 03:57:117 (5) - 드럼 피니시 03:57:296 (6) - 드럼클랩 넣으면 아주 찰질것 같네용
* 04:02:831 (5,6) - ^
* 05:03:574 (1,2,3,4) - 이부분이 다른 비슷한 파트랑 비교해서 04:49:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 04:52:280 (1,2,3,4) - 05:00:751 (1,2,3,4,5) -
난이도가 급감한 느낌인데 http://puu.sh/twsG0/4496a64f10.jpg 이런식의 배치는 어떠심
* 05:05:868 (6) - 약한음이 05:06:045 (7) - 강한음보다 더 큰 점프.. 수정필요
http://puu.sh/twsur/d5f49437ed.jpg 여기다 놓으면 피라미드 완성
* 06:01:091 (2) - 초견이라면 여기서 틀릴듯한데
http://puu.sh/twsS8/f459f5f9a4.jpg 이정도로 줄이는건 어떨까요 노래도 아직 페이드인 중이고 하니
* 06:05:975 (6,8) - 스페이싱 너무 큰것 가타요 특히 06:06:324 (8) -
* 06:25:510 (6,7,8,1) - 음악상 이전 노트에 비해 스페이싱이 줄어야할것 같은데 오히려 늘어나는..?
http://puu.sh/twtel/f368e49530.jpg 이정도가 어떨까요
* 06:25:161 (4) - 123 리딩의 편의를 위해 뉴콤?
* 06:36:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 볼륨 살짝 줄이시는게 어떨까요
* 06:59:536 (4) - 이게 치기 살짝 불편한 위치인것 같은데 그냥 06:59:199 (2) - 랑 06:59:873 (6) - 사이에 끼워넣는게 좋아보여요
어차피 플레이 할때는 와리가리 치느라 06:59:199 (2,4,6) - 이게 삼각형인지 아닌지도 잘 모를듯
* 07:31:390 (1,2,3,4) - 이 패턴에서 아주 틀리기 쉬워보이는데 스페이싱을 좀 줄이시거나 그냥 삼각형 점프 쓰는 걸 추천합니다 저는
* 07:41:940 (1) - 태양님맵때문에 그런가.. 왠지 컨쥐를 해야만 할 것 같은 느낌
* 08:24:269 (1) - 굳이 08:23:774 (6) - 랑 스택 안하신 이유가 있나여
* 09:35:030 (2) - 컨쥐?
* 09:37:462 (2) - 음악상 09:37:624 (3,4) - 가 09:37:300 (1,2) - 보다 어려워야할것 같은데
09:37:462 (2) - 를 09:36:976 (4) - 랑 스택시키는건 어떠심
* 09:53:158 (2) - 여기선 앞의 09:52:369 (1,2) - 랑 다르게 왕복해야하기 때문에 훨씬 어려울 듯 한데 스페이싱 약간 줄이시는걸 추천
* 11:43:358 (1) - 저라면 앞의 강렬한 단타점프때문에 이것도 무심코 바로 눌러버릴것 같은데
11:43:061 (2) - 랑 살짝만 거리를 두는건 어떨까요
이런식으로 http://puu.sh/twuDW/1b0083699c.jpg
* 11:53:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 여기 볼륨좀 줄여주세효
* 12:14:992 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이거 바로전의 연타 몇개 놓치고 다음 노트 기다리다 hp없어서 죽으면 아주 화날것같은데
12:14:992 (1,2,1,2) - 랑 12:19:744 (1,2,1,2) - 사이에 브레이크 넣으시는걸 추천
굿락
[매우아주베리주관적인모딩]
* 어디에 무슨곡인지 제목을 스토리보딩하면 좋을 듯요, 금방 할 수 있고
* 난이도명 Sana -> sana?
* 00:49:364 (3) - 머리에 클랩 00:49:764 (5) - 휘슬 ?
* 00:57:364 - 이거 놓친게 아쉬운데 00:57:164 - 에 서클 00:57:364 - 에 1/2 슬라 어떨까요
* 01:21:868 (4) - 여기가 약간 더 강조됬으면 하는바람,
01:20:668 (1) - 여기서 줄어드는 느낌도 살릴 겸
http://puu.sh/twryE/a36dba1eb6.jpg 이런건 어떠심
01:20:668 (1) - 는 x370 y261, 01:21:468 (3) - 은 01:19:868 (3) - 랑 스택
* 02:14:403 (6) - 스페이싱 왼쪽이랑 비슷하게 맞추는게 보기 좋을듯
02:14:403 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - 를 통째로 잡고 02:13:057 (7) - 머리랑 스택, 02:14:211 (5) - 를 약간 왼쪽으로?
대충 이렇게 http://puu.sh/twpra/d0b3b157cc.jpg
* 02:23:327 (3,4) - 점점 커지는 점프에서 이것만 거리가 줄어서 어색한데 02:23:139 (2) - 를 02:24:077 (7) - 머리에 스택하는건 어떨까요
* 02:26:514 (4) - 음악상 02:25:952 (1,2,3) - 의 점프가 더 커야할거같은데 이걸 늘리시거나 02:26:514 (4) - 스페이싱 약간 줄이시는게?
* 03:07:313 (5) - 컨쥐?
* 03:11:767 (5) - 여기 음이 없는것 같은뎅.. 03:29:404 (6) - 여기도 + 09:31:705 (5) - 11:28:135 (2) - 11:34:150 (6,7) - 여기도
* 03:29:768 (9) - ^ 여기도 약간 애매한듯
* 03:19:677 (1) - 이거 그냥 1/2이 나을듯..?
* 03:48:546 (5) - 스페이싱이 다른부분이랑 비교해서 좀 큰것 같은데 차라리 03:47:653 (1) - 꼬리에 스택시키는건 어떨까요
* 03:57:117 (5) - 드럼 피니시 03:57:296 (6) - 드럼클랩 넣으면 아주 찰질것 같네용
* 04:02:831 (5,6) - ^
* 05:03:574 (1,2,3,4) - 이부분이 다른 비슷한 파트랑 비교해서 04:49:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 04:52:280 (1,2,3,4) - 05:00:751 (1,2,3,4,5) -
난이도가 급감한 느낌인데 http://puu.sh/twsG0/4496a64f10.jpg 이런식의 배치는 어떠심
* 05:05:868 (6) - 약한음이 05:06:045 (7) - 강한음보다 더 큰 점프.. 수정필요
http://puu.sh/twsur/d5f49437ed.jpg 여기다 놓으면 피라미드 완성
* 06:01:091 (2) - 초견이라면 여기서 틀릴듯한데
http://puu.sh/twsS8/f459f5f9a4.jpg 이정도로 줄이는건 어떨까요 노래도 아직 페이드인 중이고 하니
* 06:05:975 (6,8) - 스페이싱 너무 큰것 가타요 특히 06:06:324 (8) -
* 06:25:510 (6,7,8,1) - 음악상 이전 노트에 비해 스페이싱이 줄어야할것 같은데 오히려 늘어나는..?
http://puu.sh/twtel/f368e49530.jpg 이정도가 어떨까요
* 06:25:161 (4) - 123 리딩의 편의를 위해 뉴콤?
* 06:36:497 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 볼륨 살짝 줄이시는게 어떨까요
* 06:59:536 (4) - 이게 치기 살짝 불편한 위치인것 같은데 그냥 06:59:199 (2) - 랑 06:59:873 (6) - 사이에 끼워넣는게 좋아보여요
어차피 플레이 할때는 와리가리 치느라 06:59:199 (2,4,6) - 이게 삼각형인지 아닌지도 잘 모를듯
* 07:31:390 (1,2,3,4) - 이 패턴에서 아주 틀리기 쉬워보이는데 스페이싱을 좀 줄이시거나 그냥 삼각형 점프 쓰는 걸 추천합니다 저는
* 08:24:269 (1) - 굳이 08:23:774 (6) - 랑 스택 안하신 이유가 있나여
* 09:35:030 (2) - 컨쥐?
* 09:37:462 (2) - 음악상 09:37:624 (3,4) - 가 09:37:300 (1,2) - 보다 어려워야할것 같은데
09:37:462 (2) - 를 09:36:976 (4) - 랑 스택시키는건 어떠심
* 09:53:158 (2) - 여기선 앞의 09:52:369 (1,2) - 랑 다르게 왕복해야하기 때문에 훨씬 어려울 듯 한데 스페이싱 약간 줄이시는걸 추천
* 11:43:358 (1) - 저라면 앞의 강렬한 단타점프때문에 이것도 무심코 바로 눌러버릴것 같은데
11:43:061 (2) - 랑 살짝만 거리를 두는건 어떨까요
이런식으로 http://puu.sh/twuDW/1b0083699c.jpg
* 11:53:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 여기 볼륨좀 줄여주세효
* 12:14:992 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이거 바로전의 연타 몇개 놓치고 다음 노트 기다리다 hp없어서 죽으면 아주 화날것같은데
12:14:992 (1,2,1,2) - 랑 12:19:744 (1,2,1,2) - 사이에 브레이크 넣으시는걸 추천
굿락
아맞다
태그에 마라톤 추가해봐여
태그에 마라톤 추가해봐여
Topic Starter
모딩감사합니다!SLM wrote:
음 어려운맵은 모딩 잘 못하는데 최대한 해보겟슴니다
[매우아주베리주관적인모딩]
* 어디에 무슨곡인지 제목을 스토리보딩하면 좋을 듯요, 금방 할 수 있고 그걸 어떻게 하는지 모르는 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
* 난이도명 Sana -> sana? 굿
* 00:57:364 - 이거 놓친게 아쉬운데 00:57:164 - 에 서클 00:57:364 - 에 1/2 슬라 어떨까요 저는 보컬위주로 잡는걸 선호하기 때문에..
* 02:14:403 (6) - 스페이싱 왼쪽이랑 비슷하게 맞추는게 보기 좋을듯
02:14:403 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - 를 통째로 잡고 02:13:057 (7) - 머리랑 스택, 02:14:211 (5) - 를 약간 왼쪽으로? 전 플레이상 문제가 안느껴지면 점프패턴은 바꾸지 않는 주의이기때문에..
대충 이렇게 http://puu.sh/twpra/d0b3b157cc.jpg
* 02:23:327 (3,4) - 점점 커지는 점프에서 이것만 거리가 줄어서 어색한데 02:23:139 (2) - 를 02:24:077 (7) - 머리에 스택하는건 어떨까요 ^
* 02:26:514 (4) - 음악상 02:25:952 (1,2,3) - 의 점프가 더 커야할거같은데 이걸 늘리시거나 02:26:514 (4) - 스페이싱 약간 줄이시는게? ^
* 03:11:767 (5) - 여기 음이 없는것 같은뎅.. 03:29:404 (6) - 여기도 + 09:31:705 (5) - 11:28:135 (2) - 11:34:150 (6,7) - 여기도 전 다 있다고 생각합니다..
* 03:29:768 (9) - ^ 여기도 약간 애매한듯 ^
* 06:01:091 (2) - 초견이라면 여기서 틀릴듯한데
http://puu.sh/twsS8/f459f5f9a4.jpg 이정도로 줄이는건 어떨까요 노래도 아직 페이드인 중이고 하니 06:00:568 (4,1,2,3) - 모양을 만들기도했고 저는 별로 크다고 느끼지 못하겠습니다..
* 06:05:975 (6,8) - 스페이싱 너무 큰것 가타요 특히 06:06:324 (8) - 이 노래파트가 전반적으로 점프를 크게 잡았기 때문에 별 문제없을거같습니다..
* 06:25:510 (6,7,8,1) - 음악상 이전 노트에 비해 스페이싱이 줄어야할것 같은데 오히려 늘어나는..? 전 괜찮은것같은데..?
http://puu.sh/twtel/f368e49530.jpg 이정도가 어떨까요
* 06:59:536 (4) - 이게 치기 살짝 불편한 위치인것 같은데 그냥 06:59:199 (2) - 랑 06:59:873 (6) - 사이에 끼워넣는게 좋아보여요
어차피 플레이 할때는 와리가리 치느라 06:59:199 (2,4,6) - 이게 삼각형인지 아닌지도 잘 모를듯 별 문제 없어 보이는 패턴인뎅..* 07:41:940 (1) - 태양님맵때문에 그런가.. 왠지 컨쥐를 해야만 할 것 같은 느낌ㅋㅋ
* 08:24:269 (1) - 굳이 08:23:774 (6) - 랑 스택 안하신 이유가 있나여 1/4 슬라-노트에선 0.6ds를 고정으로 거의 쓰고있기때문에..
* 09:35:030 (2) - 컨쥐? ?? 왜죠
* 09:37:462 (2) - 음악상 09:37:624 (3,4) - 가 09:37:300 (1,2) - 보다 어려워야할것 같은데
09:37:462 (2) - 를 09:36:976 (4) - 랑 스택시키는건 어떠심 플레이상 차이점이...없으므로..
* 09:53:158 (2) - 여기선 앞의 09:52:369 (1,2) - 랑 다르게 왕복해야하기 때문에 훨씬 어려울 듯 한데 스페이싱 약간 줄이시는걸 추천 오히려 줄이면 플레이할때 더 뻘밋날 경향이 생길수도
* 11:43:358 (1) - 저라면 앞의 강렬한 단타점프때문에 이것도 무심코 바로 눌러버릴것 같은데
11:43:061 (2) - 랑 살짝만 거리를 두는건 어떨까요 스택해서 문제될건 없고 미스나는건 플레이어의 재량에 달려있는거기때문에..
이런식으로 http://puu.sh/twuDW/1b0083699c.jpg
* 12:14:992 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 이거 바로전의 연타 몇개 놓치고 다음 노트 기다리다 hp없어서 죽으면 아주 화날것같은데
12:14:992 (1,2,1,2) - 랑 12:19:744 (1,2,1,2) - 사이에 브레이크 넣으시는걸 추천 테스트해본결과 hp가 별로 단다는 느낌을 받지 못했습니다..
굿락
@neoskylove 이미 들어가있습니다
위에 모딩에 이거 빼먹었네요 03:51:224 (4) - 꼬리에 드럼피니시 03:51:581 (5) - 드럼클랩
곡제목만 넣긴 좀 그래서 하는김에 다른것도 약간 넣음
이거 맵 폴더안에다가 풀어주세요
widescreen support 체크해주시고
epilepsy warning 은 굳이 안해도될듯
곡제목만 넣긴 좀 그래서 하는김에 다른것도 약간 넣음
widescreen support 체크해주시고
epilepsy warning 은 굳이 안해도될듯
=w=b
02:03 Kalibe: 00:12:493 (10) - add clap?
02:03 [C u r i]: oka
02:05 Kalibe: 00:32:964 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:05 Kalibe: maybe add greenlines with changing volumes?
02:05 Kalibe: would fit pretty well
02:05 [C u r i]: okay
02:07 Kalibe: 00:42:564 (1) - this is like 00:36:164 (1) - but without finish ;w;
02:07 [C u r i]: ;w;
02:09 Kalibe: 01:15:868 (1) - ?
02:09 Kalibe: kinda weird curve :c
02:09 Kalibe: maybe try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7149265 ?
02:09 [C u r i]: 01:15:068 (3) -
02:09 [C u r i]: iwant to blanket this
02:10 Kalibe: u can parallel 01:15:068 (3,1) - instead ;w;
02:10 Kalibe: up to you
02:11 [C u r i]: ;w; oka
02:11 Kalibe: 01:38:468 (1) - finish?
02:13 Kalibe: 02:02:672 (1) - same finish on head
02:13 [C u r i]: oka
02:13 Kalibe: 02:09:787 (5,1) - stack
02:13 Kalibe: 02:10:172 (7,1) - ^ xd
02:15 Kalibe: 02:37:202 (3,4,5) -
02:15 Kalibe: how about
02:15 Kalibe: stacking (3) on 02:36:452 (1) - end
02:15 Kalibe: 02:37:577 (4) - on 332/339
02:15 Kalibe: and 02:37:764 (5) - on 214/159 ?
02:16 [C u r i]: nice
02:20 Kalibe: osu crash ><
02:20 Kalibe: ZZZZzzz
02:20 [C u r i]: lol
02:20 Kalibe: 04:36:269 (1,4) - stack
02:21 Kalibe: at the end pls give me our irc xd
02:22 [C u r i]: XDD
02:22 [C u r i]: i'll give u chat log
02:22 Kalibe: 04:46:633 (1) - 05:12:045 (1) - i like this part
02:23 Kalibe: 05:31:514 (3,1) - stack
02:23 Kalibe: 05:34:691 (9) - add finish?
02:24 Kalibe: 05:35:044 (1) - ^ on end? xd
02:25 Kalibe: 05:42:103 (1) -
02:25 Kalibe: maybe try
02:25 Kalibe: !
02:25 Kalibe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7149394
02:27 Kalibe: 06:00:917 (1,2,3) - u could reduce spacing a bit
02:28 Kalibe: after less spaced 1/1 05:59:521 (1,2,3,4) - u have to play bigger spaced 1/2 :d
02:28 [C u r i]: oka
02:29 Kalibe: 06:09:812 (2) - stack on 06:10:684 (1) - head?
02:29 Kalibe: plays nice
02:30 [C u r i]: i want to place on 06:10:684 (1) - this slider's center
02:30 [C u r i]: and 06:09:812 (2,3) - blankey
02:30 [C u r i]: blanket*
02:31 Kalibe: ok
02:31 Kalibe: 07:41:607 (1,1) - my eyes are bad or they not parallel perfectly? uwu
02:32 [C u r i]: fuk
02:32 [C u r i]: ww
02:33 Kalibe: 08:37:126 (5,1) - swap nc?
02:33 Kalibe: 08:36:795 (4,5) - that polarity might be kinda confusing :S
02:34 [C u r i]: oka
02:35 Kalibe: 09:33:408 (1) - lower volume here aaa
02:35 Kalibe: to 50%
02:36 Kalibe: 10:24:418 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nice
02:36 [C u r i]: \:D/
02:37 Kalibe: 10:54:105 (6) - clap instead of whistle
02:38 Kalibe: 10:56:449 (1,2,3) -
02:38 Kalibe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7149506 ?
02:38 Kalibe: same as you did here 10:24:418 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
02:39 [C u r i]: oka
02:39 Kalibe: and that's all!
02:40 [C u r i]: yeahhh!
02:03 [C u r i]: oka
02:05 Kalibe: 00:32:964 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:05 Kalibe: maybe add greenlines with changing volumes?
02:05 Kalibe: would fit pretty well
02:05 [C u r i]: okay
02:07 Kalibe: 00:42:564 (1) - this is like 00:36:164 (1) - but without finish ;w;
02:07 [C u r i]: ;w;
02:09 Kalibe: 01:15:868 (1) - ?
02:09 Kalibe: kinda weird curve :c
02:09 Kalibe: maybe try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7149265 ?
02:09 [C u r i]: 01:15:068 (3) -
02:09 [C u r i]: iwant to blanket this
02:10 Kalibe: u can parallel 01:15:068 (3,1) - instead ;w;
02:10 Kalibe: up to you
02:11 [C u r i]: ;w; oka
02:11 Kalibe: 01:38:468 (1) - finish?
02:13 Kalibe: 02:02:672 (1) - same finish on head
02:13 [C u r i]: oka
02:13 Kalibe: 02:09:787 (5,1) - stack
02:13 Kalibe: 02:10:172 (7,1) - ^ xd
02:15 Kalibe: 02:37:202 (3,4,5) -
02:15 Kalibe: how about
02:15 Kalibe: stacking (3) on 02:36:452 (1) - end
02:15 Kalibe: 02:37:577 (4) - on 332/339
02:15 Kalibe: and 02:37:764 (5) - on 214/159 ?
02:16 [C u r i]: nice
02:20 Kalibe: osu crash ><
02:20 Kalibe: ZZZZzzz
02:20 [C u r i]: lol
02:20 Kalibe: 04:36:269 (1,4) - stack
02:21 Kalibe: at the end pls give me our irc xd
02:22 [C u r i]: XDD
02:22 [C u r i]: i'll give u chat log
02:22 Kalibe: 04:46:633 (1) - 05:12:045 (1) - i like this part
02:23 Kalibe: 05:31:514 (3,1) - stack
02:23 Kalibe: 05:34:691 (9) - add finish?
02:24 Kalibe: 05:35:044 (1) - ^ on end? xd
02:25 Kalibe: 05:42:103 (1) -
02:25 Kalibe: maybe try
02:25 Kalibe: !
02:25 Kalibe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7149394
02:27 Kalibe: 06:00:917 (1,2,3) - u could reduce spacing a bit
02:28 Kalibe: after less spaced 1/1 05:59:521 (1,2,3,4) - u have to play bigger spaced 1/2 :d
02:28 [C u r i]: oka
02:29 Kalibe: 06:09:812 (2) - stack on 06:10:684 (1) - head?
02:29 Kalibe: plays nice
02:30 [C u r i]: i want to place on 06:10:684 (1) - this slider's center
02:30 [C u r i]: and 06:09:812 (2,3) - blankey
02:30 [C u r i]: blanket*
02:31 Kalibe: ok
02:31 Kalibe: 07:41:607 (1,1) - my eyes are bad or they not parallel perfectly? uwu
02:32 [C u r i]: fuk
02:32 [C u r i]: ww
02:33 Kalibe: 08:37:126 (5,1) - swap nc?
02:33 Kalibe: 08:36:795 (4,5) - that polarity might be kinda confusing :S
02:34 [C u r i]: oka
02:35 Kalibe: 09:33:408 (1) - lower volume here aaa
02:35 Kalibe: to 50%
02:36 Kalibe: 10:24:418 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nice
02:36 [C u r i]: \:D/
02:37 Kalibe: 10:54:105 (6) - clap instead of whistle
02:38 Kalibe: 10:56:449 (1,2,3) -
02:38 Kalibe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7149506 ?
02:38 Kalibe: same as you did here 10:24:418 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
02:39 [C u r i]: oka
02:39 Kalibe: and that's all!
02:40 [C u r i]: yeahhh!
Topic Starter
waiting for bns! \:D/
[General]
콤보컬러 회색은 그다지 안 어울리는 것 같음
[Sana]
00:52:764 - 강한 음이니까 노트로 놓는게?
00:57:164 (2) - 드럼 따라가다가 여기만 슬라로 놓으니까 00:57:364 - 이 부분이 비는게 약간 어색하네요.
01:59:451 - 이 부분엔 음 없으니까 피니시 제거하는게 나을 듯
03:29:677 (8,9,1) - 전체적으로 3연타들은 스택시키셨는데 이 부분만 이렇게 일자로 늘여놓으니까 어색했습니다. 뭔가 특별한 이유라도 있나요? 그리고 이런 흐름이라면 03:30:040 (2) - 는 차라리 03:31:313 (1) - 에 스택시키는게 나을 것 같네요.
04:11:224 (1) - 뉴콤 세팅이 좀 어색한데 뉴콤 지우고 04:10:153 (3) - 에 뉴콤 넣고 04:11:760 (2) - 같은데에 한 개 더 넣는게 나을듯
07:43:774 (1) - 슬라 끝 소리 약하게 해 주는게 더 어울릴 것 같아요.
08:53:838 - ~ 08:56:447 - / 09:04:273 - 09:06:882 - 빨간 틱에 추가적인 힛사가 들어가도 괜찮았을것 같아요.
12:14:992 (1) - (100, 77)쯤에 놓는게 강조에도 더 효과적이고 흐름도 좋아질 것 같은데 어떤가요??
콤보컬러 회색은 그다지 안 어울리는 것 같음
[Sana]
00:52:764 - 강한 음이니까 노트로 놓는게?
00:57:164 (2) - 드럼 따라가다가 여기만 슬라로 놓으니까 00:57:364 - 이 부분이 비는게 약간 어색하네요.
01:59:451 - 이 부분엔 음 없으니까 피니시 제거하는게 나을 듯
03:29:677 (8,9,1) - 전체적으로 3연타들은 스택시키셨는데 이 부분만 이렇게 일자로 늘여놓으니까 어색했습니다. 뭔가 특별한 이유라도 있나요? 그리고 이런 흐름이라면 03:30:040 (2) - 는 차라리 03:31:313 (1) - 에 스택시키는게 나을 것 같네요.
04:11:224 (1) - 뉴콤 세팅이 좀 어색한데 뉴콤 지우고 04:10:153 (3) - 에 뉴콤 넣고 04:11:760 (2) - 같은데에 한 개 더 넣는게 나을듯
07:43:774 (1) - 슬라 끝 소리 약하게 해 주는게 더 어울릴 것 같아요.
08:53:838 - ~ 08:56:447 - / 09:04:273 - 09:06:882 - 빨간 틱에 추가적인 힛사가 들어가도 괜찮았을것 같아요.
12:14:992 (1) - (100, 77)쯤에 놓는게 강조에도 더 효과적이고 흐름도 좋아질 것 같은데 어떤가요??
Topic Starter
모딩 감사합니다!Dailycare wrote:
[General]
콤보컬러 회색은 그다지 안 어울리는 것 같음 살짝 흰색을 노린거였..
[Sana]
03:29:677 (8,9,1) - 전체적으로 3연타들은 스택시키셨는데 이 부분만 이렇게 일자로 늘여놓으니까 어색했습니다. 뭔가 특별한 이유라도 있나요? 그리고 이런 흐름이라면 03:30:040 (2) - 는 차라리 03:31:313 (1) - 에 스택시키는게 나을 것 같네요. 03:29:858 (1,2) - 에 강조를 주고싶었습니다.
I almost forgot this rip
sana
sana
- using the artist as the diffname is pretty strange
- 00:32:964 (1) - add clap? kinda weird that 00:33:164 (2,3,4) - these have claps while the first one doesn't
- 01:39:868 - the finish sounds too loud
- 01:59:403 (7) - personally i dislike 1/8 kicksliders, 2 circles here would be better to play i think, it's up to you tho
- 02:13:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why do you change the spacings? the vocals sound the same here, especially for 02:13:441 (1,2,3,4) - this
- 02:14:980 (1) - you can make the slider look better, like http://puu.sh/tQKeI/89f52ab56a.jpg
- 02:31:202 (3,4,5,6,1) - flow is a bit bad, how about moving 02:31:764 (6) - this to another place like 259,369?
- 02:52:952 (1) - clap?
- 03:29:404 (6) - this note sounds unnecessary, if you really want to overmap here please add whistle or clap
- 05:10:986 - circle please, very weird here
- 05:23:221 (2,3) - it shouldn't be such a big jump cause there's only vocal on (3)
- 05:30:808 (1) - it looks a bit...ugly, a more simple shape like http://puu.sh/tQL1M/8cc483d193.jpg would be better
- 06:07:893 (1) - ^
- 05:46:161 (2,3) - increase the spacing? at least larger than 05:45:985 (1,2) -
- 06:10:684 - missing finish?
- 08:46:012 (1) - it can be extended to 08:47:643 - or even 08:47:806 -
- 09:53:158 (2,3) - same as 05:23:221 (2,3) -, it's pretty forced
Topic Starter
@Karen All fix! thx for mod :3
Bubbled #1
hey
[General]
ar 9.4 seems a bit too much, it doesnt work with the slower sections and most of the map. 9.2-9.3 might be better
almost all of ur sb elements can be cropped more. i suggest you do that :d
[Love]
00:09:623 - clap instead? sounds like a snare
00:11:449 (4,5,6) - doesnt make much sense musically, 00:11:710 (5) - is clicked on a really weak beat in priority of the white tick. imo you should just make 00:11:449 (4,5) - a 1/2 slider or 1/4 reverse. same for the one at 00:19:797 (3,4)
00:12:623 - dont think u need the clap, i only hear the cymbal here
00:53:164 (5) - clap?
01:26:468 (4,5,6) - mayb use a sharper angle? unconfortable to use wide angles when most of ur stuff is sharp
01:49:787 (5,6) - sounds like 1/6
01:53:249 - clap
01:54:018 (4) - y use this type of hitsound now? seems inconsistent cos u didnt normally hitsound the piano, and other beats like this had claps 01:52:480 (4) -
01:59:403 (7,8,1) - doesnt seem to be stacked properly
02:41:702 (5,6,7,8) - spacing seems too big, compare this to 02:29:702 (5,6,7,8)
03:06:768 (2,5) - stack?
03:33:495 (5,6) - these sound the same, so u should hitsound them the same way
04:28:681 (1) - doesnt make much sense to put a clap on 04:28:858 (2) - but not here
04:32:211 (2,3,5,8) - these sound like claps not whistles
04:47:692 (3) - idk if u really need this note. it just feels really strange since there is no instrument there, yet it is mapped the same as the beats with drums 04:47:339 (1,2) - 04:47:868 (4,5)
05:00:486 (7) - dont think u need to overmap here, removing this and having it play as a triplet follows the song better
05:09:927 - awkward to skip this for vocals, since u didnt skip the drum on 05:10:986 (6)
05:11:162 - and u should probably try map this too, since the intensity of the music is still fairly high
06:05:800 (5,6,7,8) - for a calm song, the spacing u've used is too big imo.. hopefully u can nerf some of the reall big jumps 06:14:347 (4,5,6) - 06:17:312 (6,7)
06:23:940 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - is there anything in the music that actually supports this?
06:46:265 - clap? the sound is really similar to 06:46:613 (2) - yet u put a clap there
06:55:997 (3) - sounds like a clap too
07:16:053 (7,8) - would b nice if you did something similar to 07:05:267 (6) - for emphasis
08:00:940 (9) - nc for spacing changes?
08:58:730 (6,1) - stack
09:09:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music offers something different here, yet you used a generally standard jump pattern. stuff like 09:09:980 (4) - 09:10:469 (7) - 09:10:958 (2) - 09:11:447 (5) - 09:11:773 (7) - are stressed in the music so if u emphasise these with larger spacing and nc's on each of these it'd play a lot nicer
10:01:211 (1,2,3) - spacing suddenly becomes really small here since slider leniency makes this really easy to land, i'd recommend doing sth else that doesnt disrupt flow
10:08:474 (5,6,7,8) - just use 1/2
u didnt do this before at 09:58:369 (5,6)
10:13:289 (7) - might be more interesting to remove this note and rearrange some patterns since there is no drum here
10:24:418 (1,2,3,4) - enable stacking in the editor and see if u can make this look nicer http://puu.sh/u4Suu/1d2945c892.jpg
10:30:355 (8) - 10:33:480 (3) - 10:35:980 (4) - these extended sliders play really bad lol. all of them skip over a drum on the red tick, so ending the slider there would make more sense. also u have plenty of unique rhythms anyway 10:30:668 (1,2,3) - i dont see the need to make ur own
10:55:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - check this pattern again with stacking enabled
11:19:744 (5,6,7) - these are really weak, so mapping them in the same pattern as 11:19:150 (1,2,3,4) - is :/
11:27:616 (2,3) - see if u can space this better with stacking on http://puu.sh/u4TtQ/1b750530a0.jpg
11:27:616 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this isn't a standard drum roll in the music, they are grouped as triplets. so mayb u could map it like that?
11:34:595 (1) - finish + whistle?
11:38:903 (6,1) - placement could be better. u could stack 11:39:200 (8,9,1) - on 11:38:903 (6) - or do sth like http://puu.sh/u4U7U/b77b698140.jpg
11:48:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - the drum rolls are barely audible so they dont deserve full streams imo. using 1/2s or mixing it up with 1/4 reverses would be more appropriate
11:54:422 (6) - missing clap? at least it sounds like it when playing
11:55:388 - maybe u could add a timing point to increase volume and then reduce the volume at 11:53:606 - to address the change in drum density
ill have to see ur reply to this first
[General]
ar 9.4 seems a bit too much, it doesnt work with the slower sections and most of the map. 9.2-9.3 might be better
almost all of ur sb elements can be cropped more. i suggest you do that :d
[Love]
00:09:623 - clap instead? sounds like a snare
00:11:449 (4,5,6) - doesnt make much sense musically, 00:11:710 (5) - is clicked on a really weak beat in priority of the white tick. imo you should just make 00:11:449 (4,5) - a 1/2 slider or 1/4 reverse. same for the one at 00:19:797 (3,4)
00:12:623 - dont think u need the clap, i only hear the cymbal here
00:53:164 (5) - clap?
01:26:468 (4,5,6) - mayb use a sharper angle? unconfortable to use wide angles when most of ur stuff is sharp
01:49:787 (5,6) - sounds like 1/6
01:53:249 - clap
01:54:018 (4) - y use this type of hitsound now? seems inconsistent cos u didnt normally hitsound the piano, and other beats like this had claps 01:52:480 (4) -
01:59:403 (7,8,1) - doesnt seem to be stacked properly
02:41:702 (5,6,7,8) - spacing seems too big, compare this to 02:29:702 (5,6,7,8)
03:06:768 (2,5) - stack?
03:33:495 (5,6) - these sound the same, so u should hitsound them the same way
04:28:681 (1) - doesnt make much sense to put a clap on 04:28:858 (2) - but not here
04:32:211 (2,3,5,8) - these sound like claps not whistles
04:47:692 (3) - idk if u really need this note. it just feels really strange since there is no instrument there, yet it is mapped the same as the beats with drums 04:47:339 (1,2) - 04:47:868 (4,5)
05:00:486 (7) - dont think u need to overmap here, removing this and having it play as a triplet follows the song better
05:09:927 - awkward to skip this for vocals, since u didnt skip the drum on 05:10:986 (6)
05:11:162 - and u should probably try map this too, since the intensity of the music is still fairly high
06:05:800 (5,6,7,8) - for a calm song, the spacing u've used is too big imo.. hopefully u can nerf some of the reall big jumps 06:14:347 (4,5,6) - 06:17:312 (6,7)
06:23:940 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - is there anything in the music that actually supports this?
06:46:265 - clap? the sound is really similar to 06:46:613 (2) - yet u put a clap there
06:55:997 (3) - sounds like a clap too
07:16:053 (7,8) - would b nice if you did something similar to 07:05:267 (6) - for emphasis
08:00:940 (9) - nc for spacing changes?
08:58:730 (6,1) - stack
09:09:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the music offers something different here, yet you used a generally standard jump pattern. stuff like 09:09:980 (4) - 09:10:469 (7) - 09:10:958 (2) - 09:11:447 (5) - 09:11:773 (7) - are stressed in the music so if u emphasise these with larger spacing and nc's on each of these it'd play a lot nicer
10:01:211 (1,2,3) - spacing suddenly becomes really small here since slider leniency makes this really easy to land, i'd recommend doing sth else that doesnt disrupt flow
10:08:474 (5,6,7,8) - just use 1/2
u didnt do this before at 09:58:369 (5,6)10:13:289 (7) - might be more interesting to remove this note and rearrange some patterns since there is no drum here
10:24:418 (1,2,3,4) - enable stacking in the editor and see if u can make this look nicer http://puu.sh/u4Suu/1d2945c892.jpg
10:30:355 (8) - 10:33:480 (3) - 10:35:980 (4) - these extended sliders play really bad lol. all of them skip over a drum on the red tick, so ending the slider there would make more sense. also u have plenty of unique rhythms anyway 10:30:668 (1,2,3) - i dont see the need to make ur own
10:55:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - check this pattern again with stacking enabled
11:19:744 (5,6,7) - these are really weak, so mapping them in the same pattern as 11:19:150 (1,2,3,4) - is :/
11:27:616 (2,3) - see if u can space this better with stacking on http://puu.sh/u4TtQ/1b750530a0.jpg
11:27:616 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this isn't a standard drum roll in the music, they are grouped as triplets. so mayb u could map it like that?
11:34:595 (1) - finish + whistle?
11:38:903 (6,1) - placement could be better. u could stack 11:39:200 (8,9,1) - on 11:38:903 (6) - or do sth like http://puu.sh/u4U7U/b77b698140.jpg
11:48:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - the drum rolls are barely audible so they dont deserve full streams imo. using 1/2s or mixing it up with 1/4 reverses would be more appropriate
11:54:422 (6) - missing clap? at least it sounds like it when playing
11:55:388 - maybe u could add a timing point to increase volume and then reduce the volume at 11:53:606 - to address the change in drum density
ill have to see ur reply to this first
Topic Starter
aaaa almost fix! thx for mod :33Pentori wrote:
hey
[General]
ar 9.4 seems a bit too much, it doesnt work with the slower sections and most of the map. 9.2-9.3 might be better fix to 9.3
almost all of ur sb elements can be cropped more. i suggest you do that :d :d
[Love]
05:11:162 - and u should probably try map this too, since the intensity of the music is still fairly high i don't want to put note here.. cuz there is no any sound..
11:19:744 (5,6,7) - these are really weak, so mapping them in the same pattern as 11:19:150 (1,2,3,4) - is :/ i made some shape 11:19:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this :p
ill have to see ur reply to this first
?_? r u gonna do this or nah. http://puu.sh/u5jHQ/78cf59ac8b.png can always be reduced to http://puu.sh/u5jJ6/bba6cbc07d.png. keeping the same width is fine for easy alignment, but u should at least trim the heights[C u r i] wrote:
Pentori wrote:
almost all of ur sb elements can be cropped more. i suggest you do that :d :d
04:47:692 (3) - did u mean to fix this
06:24:637 (1) - should be clap not whistle?
07:05:267 (6) - is a clap but 07:16:053 (7) - uses whistle. should make them the same
09:11:936 (1) - since u already have nc on 09:11:773 (1) - this one is kinda pointless. or u could remove the nc from 09:11:773 (1) - instead
10:01:843 (3,4,5) - awkward flow, try moving 10:02:001 (4) - ? http://puu.sh/u5k7Z/a2079c1892.jpg
10:30:511 - 10:33:636 - 10:36:136 - should add whistles now that u have an object here
11:27:616 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - isn't really mapped correctly either. the beats without sounds are on 11:27:838 - 11:28:135 (2) - 11:28:432 (2) - so u could do something like http://puu.sh/u5kpy/748f1b82d4.jpg, your current rhythm right now makes you click on nothing while having strong drums on the slider end
11:48:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - just use 1/2 or maybe an extended slider. this is the one im most worried about, since there are no sounds on 11:48:927 (2,3)
oke call me back again
Topic Starter
thx for mod :3Pentori wrote:
will be fix sb 1hrs later? wnvm so fast ww
04:47:692 (3) - did u mean to fix this oh sorry i missed it. i want to keep this cuz theres an vocal 04:47:692 (3) - here.
oke call me back again
k
http://puu.sh/u5pD6/35c49ebcaf.zip
http://puu.sh/u5pD6/35c49ebcaf.zip
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10:30:511 - 10:33:636 - 10:36:136 - still missing whistles? zz lol
Topic Starter
lolz fix!Pentori wrote:
10:30:511 - 10:33:636 - 10:36:136 - still missing whistles? zz lol
ok back to #1
Topic Starter
thanks Pentoriii :33
#2
Topic Starter
\:D/
where's #3 ??
Topic Starter
SooN
[Love]
- 01:59:595 (1,5) - Stack a little off.
- 02:48:264 (8,1) - I think the spacing quite small there but 02:48:452 (1) - is downbeat, so I recommend you to move 02:48:264 (8) - to 02:47:889 (6) - or another place that further.
- 07:42:607 (1,2) - How about using 3/4 slider + 1/2 slider or 3/4 slider + two circles? Just like 07:45:274 (1,2) - because they are thesame rhythm so make it consistent.
- 08:35:807 (5,1,2) - The empty beat between 5 and 1 is 1/1, between 1 and 2 it is 1/2. But it seems they are the same spacing and it would confuse player to read it is 1/1 or 1/2. So, how about move 08:36:302 (1,2,3,4) - to 08:35:807 (5) - slider tail?
- 11:29:992 (2,1) - Stack a little off.
- 11:32:219 (1,2,3) - The angle of these objects looks quite lager, so you may move 11:32:219 (1) - downward like x85 y302 or what you like.
- 11:22:863 (2,4) - The beat of these two places seems not really strong, so you don't need to make a large jump here because it looks like overmap. Or you can change 11:22:715 (1,3) - to 1/2 slider as well.
- 11:41:873 (2,4) - 11:41:724 (1,3) - Same problem.
Topic Starter
@Kencho All fixed! thanks for mod :33
Also added the songs name into tags, now looks good for me!
Approved!
Probably my last qualify icon
Probably my last qualify icon
Topic Starter
thx Kencho!! :33Kencho wrote:
Also added the songs name into tags, now looks good for me!
Probably my last qualify icon so sad ;w;
grats Curi !!Kalibe wrote:
where's #3 ??