The second The Unforgiven, BAT RANK THIS PLZ
今天是个什么日子233[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
你们别去战, 等3月6号再说
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[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
What384059043 wrote:
anyway, thank you again! i'll be back one and a half years later.
ò_ò really?384059043 wrote:
anyway, thank you again! i'll be back one and a half years later.
384059043 wrote:
anyway, thank you again! i'll be back one and a half years later.
so we need to wait one and a half yearsKei1koh2 wrote:
I love this song~~~~~ so I hope It will be ranked map! good luck!!
no. it should and would probably be like thisOniJAM wrote:
so we need to wait one and a half years
wait, that means this map will stay in bubbled for one and a half years? @_@ oh that's cool
WOOOOOOOOH WOOOOO WOOOOO WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONyu-chan wrote:
That preview point <3
I failed in CPhO Province Contest, as the score required was 94/150 while I got 91/150 (I got something about angular momentum wrong and thus mistakely write a^3 instead of a^4 (I forgot to multiple the length of the level arm at the very beginning of a problem) and lost 9 points). That's ... oh yeah I don't mind it at all now. If you're able to read Chinese you can find the problems and answers here. But thanks to the University Entrance Examination and Autonomous Enrollment, I was still admitted to Peking University and am going to major in computer science or artificial intelligence. No physics any more if I choose to study mathematical analysis instead of calclus, according to the class schedule.squirrelpascals wrote:
so .. how'd those physics olympics go?
You are the first warrior who dares to mod the remapped version. I'll support you foreverwhether you can show me your selfie or not but i'd like have a look at it lol.Hollow Wings wrote:
m4m慢慢求摸吧hhhMarathon
- 00:43:449 (1) - 去掉nc,不解释。00:49:710 (1) - 同理。反正还有很多反正你也不会改。
这一段绝对间距相同但是时间间隔不同当然NCspam
- 03:44:231 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这边还是用note。
和前面异向slider形成对比 不改
- 06:29:438 (3,4) - ds拉大,具体做法大概就是往俩slider两边戳。08:05:983 (2,1) - 同理。
可
- 08:10:210 (4) - 建议反向。
改了
- 15:20:795 (1) - 出界。
4:3界面下testplay时滑条完整地出现在窗口内就不算出界
- 16:55:064 (2,3) - 从这里开始柑橘不跟鼓不是一般的违和,那么明显的鼓点却要跟吉他或者vocal对节奏判定影响巨大。
。。。这首歌被单独拉出来rank的时候就有人提过这个问题了,不过被狗钦点过这节奏没问题,这里权当保留意见了。
- 17:17:045 (3) - 虽然heated但还是建议反向。
改
- 18:24:025 (2) - 建议stack在前面slider的尾,因为你后面也有类似梗而且解决ds问题。note 4跟着放对称位置。
好
- 22:02:150 (5,6,7,8) - 为啥不用滑条。
作为transition(参考副歌第一次出现的最后),和这首歌最后的四个滑条的用处不一样
- 22:08:150 (5,6) - ds弄整齐。
这四个都是不整齐的,逼死强迫症
- 22:17:740 (2,3) - 违和感严重的ds梗,作为第一个变节奏的梗建议snap ds。
有道理
- 22:46:010 (1,1) - 不平行啊。
改
- 23:00:433 (2) - 建议snap ds。
后面的ds就这样了 不改
- 23:08:446 (2,3,1) - 果然还是跳太远了,在尾那stack吧。
换向
- 23:21:779 (4) - nc不解释。
这里除了钢琴只剩Bring me the strength of the rising sun,所以节奏跟琴NC跟歌词语义群。这句话还没结束,不NC
- 27:32:395 (1) - 太轻了,调响音量。
改了
- 27:40:770 (1,2) - 建议nc互换。
改了
- 30:24:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为什么这里是滑条,之前却是note,柑橘还是note好。30:49:069 (2,3,4,5) - 及之后的同理。
先保留
- 36:02:516 (1,2,3) - 建议减小ds,安静部分的连打那么大距离有点突兀。
改了
- 图本身是做的不错,可以说对称的梗还挺多也实现的挺好。然而我一开始就被几首歌的大段复制粘贴恶心到了,中间部分一直到后半意外地没啥复制粘贴所以看着还挺轻松,最后一个曲子又有大段复制粘贴又恶心了一下,总之这图看的很火大,毕竟我对称黑+复制粘贴黑,没办法。
所以下一次要做对称脑洞了吗233
good luck
THANK YOU!!!handsome muscle wrote:
前言 deny不说理由也可以 说理由给我涨姿势最好
打了三遍,先在test里试了一遍,找了找梗,然后play了两遍。提的一些地方可能是因为我play时的问题
[General]
包含快速闪光的storyboard,可能需要设置闪光警告(epilepsy warning)
对称做的很漂亮,但是有的地方因为对称让实际难度下降很多。
在rap部分我会选择更多的overmap,因为图本身需要一些爽的点打到中间几首一阵困
一些曲目bpm偏低同时对称多,难免会让人不是100%集中,变速滑条容易坑人 11:58:870 (1) - 38:35:943 (1) - 如这种地方可以先用个短滑过渡下让player听到曲子变化再拉长条曲子的情绪突变所以不适合加任何过渡(坑就坑了吧)
[A LIGHT THAT NEVER COMES]
01:25:449 (3) - 01:29:623 (3) - 突然一松的感觉 不是刻意设置可以跳再大点k
02:05:362 (1) - 02:21:145 (2) - 这段中间的连音有的蓝线下了圈有的就没下空在那里了 比如 02:09:972 - 02:14:101 这段第一个slider尾音在蓝线上 02:05:753 -我没看出有啥问题。。。
02:46:058 (1,2) - 和前面三连一样的音为什么换了 感觉并不好fixed
03:11:101 (1,2) - 这个overmap有点莫名 打的时候感觉也并不好?这个跟鼓
03:19:449 (1,2,1) - ^
[VICTIMIZED]
第一个break后有很多鼓音可以下,感觉这一段在这首歌中不是很平衡。建议加点note。这个鼓我打算作底音,保证跟vocal的滑条同时也跟鼓
rap部分在对称的基础上overmap下^
这段打得还是挺爽的 其实没啥意见(
[BURN IT DOWN]
没东西
[CASTLE OF GLASS]
10:21:092 (1) - 到10:38:314 (1) - 这里你是用音效自创节奏吗?(没事没事,我就问问不是自创
11:16:231 (7,8,1) - 打的时候差点100 这个地方7没有对称也没音,去了吧唔留着,因为ranked的版本就这么下的
[LOST IN THE ECHO]
26:02:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里怎麼就排成一串了,本身节奏感觉这样排不合适,改反向34连都好fixed
27:35:770 (7,8) - rap里这个跳有点突兀,没找到对称或者呼应的,本身倒是不难这里没办法只能跟鼓了
就这样吧 其实想全摸了的 无奈自己太垃圾
谢谢!!-ClariS- wrote:
00:45:536 (1) - 这为啥是个折返不是单点群里讨论过了,塞break
02:55:449 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 为啥我觉得这是渐强的音...感觉应该和前面一样拉大间距其实并没有渐强只是频率变快。往里面走是为了之后的往外面走,有得必有失,有失必有得,嗯
03:36:666 (7,8,9,10,1) - 没有串的感觉了...建议还是全部方向一致改了
03:43:449 (1,2,3,4) - ^没改,这里跟的是合成器/贝斯,方向根据音高来的
05:07:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 前面后面都是对称为啥这里不对称了没梗(。
05:27:090 (1,2,3,4) - 给人一种短滑条后面接1/2跳再三连的感觉fixed
06:56:847 (1) - 这个算包好还是没包好呢...(这个是我有点搞不明白)算包好吧。。。
07:57:938 (1) - ^
08:15:256 (3) - 这个换成大白线单点?
PS:后面见到不少这种节奏啊....故意的?为什么要这么放呢跟rap
11:41:092 (1) - 这个.......好刺激,我喜欢嘻嘻
13:19:081 - 吧这个放掉我觉得挺奇怪的跟吉他
15:18:224 (3) - 不叠上?fixed
15:35:795 (5,6,7) - 这个三角形的形状挺奇葩的(fixed
16:17:795 (2,3) - C+G如何感觉没啥差别。。。
..不行了坚持不下去了(
对称大师强无敌
thanks for modding ;w;Speechless wrote:
[A Light That Never Comes]
00:41:231 (2) - 间距,00:41:362 (1) - 另外我觉得这里也不用 NC?
00:48:145 (1,1,1) - 这三个感觉不是太有必要,从 00:50:231 (1) - 这里开始感觉还好一点先留着 我觉得这样挺好的呀(
00:59:101 - 这4个白线还是填上把,可以放1/1滑条跟snare
01:13:971 - http://puu.sh/rzOT6/b6bf4e02c2.jpg 这样下节奏?转盘缩短1/2剩下来的放个circle太坑了233
03:45:601 (1) - 这个转盘是不是应该短一点,否则跟第二首离的太近了fixed
这首歌我感觉所有下在3/4的滑条尾都要消一下音extended sliders根本不怂 就是要不消音
[Victimized]
04:45:406 - 这么点break感觉可以不要这个break带感呀
[Burn It Down]
06:00:120 (1,2) - 考虑一下 blanket,比如 2的滑条尾和 1做不了
07:06:120 - 这么点break感觉也可以不要带感break+1
08:19:756 - 感觉这地方不好空着啊,看上去有点像是为了强行对称跟vocal 不过现在这样的确略怪
09:13:756 (5,6) - 这两个试试看放到 09:14:301 (1) - 的两边去?没必要吧。。。
[Castle of Glass]
10:31:509 (2) - 10:33:731 (2) - 出界了???改了
11:40:536 (3,4) - 接在 11:39:425 (3,4) - 滑条尾后面把?换了个类似的
[I'll Be Gone]
13:48:224 - kiai不想加
15:20:795 (1) - 出界了4:3下playing不出界
[In My Remains]
16:45:411 - 16:52:539 - 16:54:916 - 感觉这地方漏了改了
16:59:668 (3) - 这里感觉应该加个音效的,鼓点听上去应该和 16:59:371 (1) - 是差不多的改了
18:36:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这些地方感觉要放drum或者normal的音效,不能在用 soft了好像现在这样没问题
19:09:767 (6) - ctrl+G?没必要吧。。。
19:36:770 (1) - 这里不考虑放个长滑条吗,钢琴音一直在持续改了 跟vocal
[Lies Greed Misery]
20:07:775 (2) - 这里节奏不太好,音乐根本不是这样的??我听着是这样的呀
20:32:525 (8) - 20:38:525 (6) - NC?改了
吗的怎么还有一半不摸了睡觉去
I found the only marathon is a bit challenging and cannot be enjoyed by everyone so I think an easier marathon will work //me.lol();Nyu-chan wrote:
Why more than just one marathon? lol
not soon cuz the easier difficulty is done /me runRixia Mao wrote:
soon™
new page
384教我上作图课系列Rixia Mao wrote:
soon™
谢谢米舒的摸!Misure wrote:
这好像不太缺摸的样子...
好 总之以后我可以自豪的说我摸过一张40分钟的图
[Marathon]384教授好厉害啊orz
- 不加点audio leadin么
fixed
- widescreen support不开?我这个分辨率下 sb的图都是缺两截
不能开
- 00:04:058 (4,1) - 这组感觉有点近了 这个顺向flow更显得近了 或者1转90°然后尾巴叠到前面那个2上?
感觉有点破坏这里的架构,虽然更好玩一些
- 00:17:623 (2) - ctrl+G? 前面正反flow转换也挺频繁的
这里想根据前面的慢slider保持方向的恒常性
- 00:27:275 (1,2) - 还是叠起来好? 这个白线钝角flow感觉有点突然
fixed
- 00:55:449 (4,5) - 保持前面1-2那样的间距?有点突然减速的感觉...
fixed
- 01:20:231 (4) - 换两个单点?感觉01:20:362 - 这个音表现的不太明显
有道理,不过这里我想玩复制梗
- 01:33:797 (4,1) - 这个感觉有点远了?毕竟后面几组NC都没拉得太远
fixed
- 02:14:753 (1) - 反向?和前面那种做一组
故意加点变化的
- 02:59:362 - 这个部分我突然想到了星爷Asymmetry的瞬间爆炸233 不过还是你这种稳啊
- 03:22:318 (4,1) - 这个角度怎么感觉有点尴尬呢
还好呀
- 03:39:275 (1,2) - 这俩稍微玩个减速?
没必要,扭曲的滑条已经有一种*视觉*的减速效果了
- 06:53:029 (3) - 07:54:120 (3) - 这不包一下么
间距问题包不了了
- 08:10:483 (1,2,3) - 做个等距?或者复制粘贴120度旋转的那种(
(那样子会因为太胖摆不下的
- 08:38:301 (4) - 感觉ctrl+J的形状好些?
好像也不好看欸。。
- 10:34:425 (1) - 10:34:842 (2) - 分别ctrl+G?接前面好一些而且能做成和下一组一样的接note效果
这里是故意逆向的233
- 11:00:953 (4) - 叠到10:59:286 (2) - 的尾巴上?
有点奇怪的样子
- 11:06:370 (3) - ctrl+G好玩一点嗯
好主意
- 11:24:981 (4,5) - 这俩不是一样的我好难受啊111
fixed
- 13:45:224 (2,3,4,5,1) - 感觉这些可以分别反向 好像也挺好的..
换了个摆法
- 13:56:581 (4) - 这距离拉的好像有点远了 略突然 感觉放13:55:724 (2) - 头上就挺合适的
- 14:49:295 (8,9) - ctrl+G?直接逆时针到底
虽然爽了些但是还是不自然
- 14:53:366 (1,2) - 摆个包?
fixed
- 15:27:438 (8,1) - 直接叠尾巴上也挺好的 从某种程度上还能给后面的空一拍做铺垫
卧槽 神
- 16:59:223 (7) - 这个叠到滑条尾巴上?表现一个NC甩出去的效果
会比较难读,而且现在的已经有这种感觉了
- 17:12:440 (1) - 这NC不是很有必要吧 从前面各处NC分布来看
改了
- 18:40:361 (5) - NC?
改了
- 19:46:025 (4) - 19:49:025 (1) - 统一NC
fixed
- 21:11:337 (5) - 离后面略远 这角度更显远 不如和3号叠一起
这附近重新组织了一下
- 22:06:275 (5) - 后半弧度再大一点表现音乐效果更好?也不是一定要包嘛
弧度大的话好像效果也不是很好
- 22:47:933 (2) - 可以NC
nc了后一个
- 25:34:212 (4) - 拐的地方再小点可能更像音符233
调了调
- 27:27:645 (7) - 这用直的就行吧 或者27:26:895 (3) - 似弯非直有点微妙
好
- 27:36:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 从右向左?和前面反过来的
可以
- 27:40:770 (10) - 可以NC强调节奏打击点?
好
- 30:34:819 (1,2) - 这里感觉突然近了 相对于附近排列
fixed
- 35:12:366 (2) - NC?
为了显示出来follow points
- 38:57:372 (3,4,5) - 这个好像有点突然...
还好感觉
- 38:58:657 (2) - 放下面 然后那三个滑条拉开点距离?
fixed
Good luck!
感谢modding!sahuang wrote:
384教我上作图课系列Rixia Mao wrote:
soon™
红色unrankable,黑体强烈建议,overlap一些地方最好改改,略奇怪
HP太低了吧,1和2.5...主难度起码上4啊,我觉得2和5比较好change HP to 2, 3.5 respectively
主难度OD8会好一点?fixed
39:33:373 - 两个diff都是,红绿线volume不同fixed
主要摸nazi和overlap,节奏感觉还好
摸个图和上课一样
18:20 to 19:30[Lite]
- 00:33:275 (4,1) - 这个stack有点突然,尤其是00:33:536 - downbeat,分开比较好。00:40:579 (2,3) - 这个的话到可以,因为没有音的empahsis
想留点顿挫感
- 01:14:753 - 加一个圈?
- 01:48:666 - clickable?
fixed
- 04:16:985 (1,3) - dont overlap
fixed
- 05:32:774 (1) - 这边undermap了吧,明显节奏很激烈,前面最起码用1/1滑条,然后05:34:669 - 这边开始2个1/2会好点
fixed
- 05:44:847 - my fav song of lp
but not mine 233
- 07:15:392 (3,4) - too jb,overlap
not jb, fixed
- 07:16:483 (1,2) - blanket
fixed
- 10:45:536 (1,2) - blanket
fixed
- 13:33:652 (5,6) - 太几把难读,stack
fixed
- 13:44:795 (2,3) - 节奏上是不是2个滑条更好,可以突出滑条头,13:45:652 -
目前这样也没啥问题而且容易摆得好看
- 16:49:569 (4,1) - 换节奏?16:49:866 - downbeat
改了
- 16:56:995 - clickable?
这里是1/4很难摆clickable的
- 19:08:876 (4,1) - 没叠好
- 26:40:395 (1) - 根据26:41:645 (1,2,3,1) - 以及你26:41:395 - 没跟,这个也该删掉
revamp this part
- 27:36:395 (1,3) - avoid overlap?
fixed
- 28:06:395 - 这我觉得滑条头or圈好多了
revamp this part
- 28:11:645 - 28:12:145 - 不map?我觉得可以加圈
强调嘶吼
- 28:59:395 (1) - 去掉NC吧
fixed
- 32:22:866 (2,3,2,3) - 突然不对称
feel the break of perfect symmetry, the pain and sorrow rising from vain, and the warped love of helplessness flowing with the change of piano pitch
- 38:07:443 (6,7) - 换节奏38:07:657 - 强调
fixed
- 38:32:300 (4,1) - blanket
fixed
- 39:12:586 (2,4) - 节奏我觉得也可以斟酌一下,主要是39:12:800 -
这里我觉得最需要强调的是这个39:13:229 - 而不是39:12:800 -
- 39:39:373 - 没音。
fixed
19:35 to 20:35[Marathon]
- 00:54:927 (2,4) - avoid overlap
fixed
- 03:34:579 (3,4,1) - 也别overlap?
fixed
- 03:36:666 (7) - NC
fixed
- 04:06:880 (1,5) - 04:07:511 - 04:07:827 - 04:08:143 (1,5) - clap加上去好一点
fixed
- 04:28:985 (4) - drum-clap?
用soft的会和前面一致,而且符合音乐这里的一个天然的clap,同时和后面的形成比较
- 04:29:617 (1,1) - 加点whistle
k
- 04:42:248 - 这边开始音效建议和前面一样,尤其是04:42:880 (9,10) - 这种没声音啊
k
- 05:10:353 (3,4,5,6) - 有点卡手,这个钝角略坑
k
- 06:44:847 - 这边开始可以不用折返了,这个折返长了点
为了避免被搞事(因为是渐快的)所以改成转盘了
- 07:02:301 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 坑
改了
- 07:21:256 (2,3,4,5) - 这个节奏有点莫名其妙吧,07:21:120 - 07:21:392 - 07:21:801 - 07:21:938 - 07:22:210 - 这几个有音,你好多都跟的没音
改了
- 07:24:529 - 没音
改了
- 07:45:938 - same as mentioned above
the same
- 11:24:564 (1) - 没音吧,这个圈overmap
fixed
- 11:41:092 (1) - 我日
你日
- 12:05:536 (1) - cancel NC
k
- 12:17:897 (1) - 和前面一样,就算有beat也不该和12:18:036 (2,3) - 一样
fixed
- 14:14:367 (6,7,8) - undermap
改了
- 15:09:224 (6,7,8) - ^
^
- 18:28:480 (1) - cancel NC
one by one by one
- 18:58:480 (1,1,1,1,1) - ???
^ origin of this pattern: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/26512
- 21:10:400 (2,3,4) - 间距太大了。。这种21:16:400 (2,3,4) - 差不多了
可
- 21:46:775 (6) - 21:52:775 (6) - NC
改了
- 22:08:150 (5,6) - 意图没什么问题但是还是不要这样overlap
调了下
- 22:44:600 (1,1,1) - 没必要spam
ok
- 25:56:395 - 25:57:395 - 25:58:395 - 25:59:395 - etc 只需要在这些地方NC,其他的完全没必要,看起来也不舒服
- 27:00:895 (3,1) - 27:02:895 (3,1) - 分开一点,尴尬
好
- 28:16:145 (1) - NC没必要
改了
- 29:19:819 - 开始这一段NC也实在是太多了。。建议用前面的方法,不需要spam
这里加NC更方便读图
- 31:43:256 (3,4) - ctrl+G一下?感觉读图更好玩
想在这停顿
- 32:03:506 - 不map吗
特地强调这里的空拍
- 32:14:166 - 这一段我觉得slider特别吵,如果滑条能静音就好了
fixed, plz redl
- 38:59:086 (5,6,1) - avoid overlap
fixed
音效改了别忘记复制,然后回一下前面的摸,美丽
Appreciate efforts spent on this marathon, impressive.Crystal wrote:
全世界 唯你独棒
Crystal wrote:
全世界 唯你独棒
My sight started to blur when I saw this splendid mod. I couldn't appreciate it too much since that's amazingly useful for me.Bakari wrote:
I regret every decision I have made as a beatmap nominator so far.
[General][Marathon]
- Due to flashing stuff like 03:58:038 - I'd enable the epilepsy waning just to be on the safe side.
fixed that
- Are you sure it's not LINKIN PARK? (capytalized) If not, we can check it together, just let me know.
I took a short glance at lp's official website, got into a random news page (e.g. this), and found that they use "Linkin Park". Maybe they'd want a capitalized name for album covers, posters, news headings, etc. where almost everything is capitalized. Thus, both capitalized or not are okay from my point of view.
- 25:37:389 (1) - a break would do better here. Since the spinner feels like a really heaavy overkill. This much spinning in such a long map is a deadly thing.
I reduced the length of spinner sharply so that it won't be a fatal thing for marathon.
[Marathon Lite]
- 00:10:579 (1,3) - perhaps, you could move it to the left in order to prevent the overlap which appears slightly untidy here.
I rearranged the placement
- 00:23:101 (5,6) - might want to increase the spacing here as to be consistent with the jumps before/after this pattern.
that's right
- 01:19:449 (1,4) - consider adding a slight unstack as to increase readability of the pattern? Or maybe rotate it slightly.
umm since I want it to be on Insane level (and what's more, the marathon is marked as Expert difficulty), maybe this pattern is acceptable as it doesn't require too much sightreading skills. In addition, the stack pattern is relatively interesting and quite attractive to me.
Note: 03:41:362 (1,4) - same here.- 01:58:058 (1) - 02:00:145 (1) - these two combos don't really feel necessary. You should be able to take them down as to prevent the spammed feel of the song.
fixed
- 04:00:722 (2,3) - try to Ctrl+G these two, as the sound clearly goes in doubles 1 and 3 being loud and jumpworthy, whereas 2 and 4 are just supporting beats.
That makes sense. And I revamp the part so that it could be more enjoyable.
Note1: 04:03:248 (2,3) - same here.
Note2: 04:02:616 (6) - you don't really need a jump on (6) for the same reason.- 04:06:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Try to use louder hhitsounds to emphasize the main drum/bass line since it doesn't fade away during the stream.
okay
Note: 05:32:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - something similar would apply here. Otherise, this would feel somewhat overmapped.- 04:26:774 (4,1) - misses the jump for the consistency with 04:26:301 (2,3) -
- 04:59:617 (5,1) - 05:01:037 (4,1) - feels like these two needs some jumps to stress the downbeat stuff and the drums.
I must have forgotten to take spacing into consideration.
- 06:54:120 (7) - try a 1/2 slider and a circle to stress the downbeat on 06:54:665 - ? example
That's what I want!
Note: 07:55:211 (7) - same.- 06:59:301 (1,2,3) - you could also work with the drums and 1/2 rhythm here in a more precise way. example
good idea
Note: 08:00:392 (1,2,3) - same.- 08:10:483 (1,2,3) - pretty sure they should use even spacing values to be spaced accordingly. I am sure this was the intended pattern.
fixed this
- 08:27:665 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern gives a lot of tension due to the way it is spaced. Perhaps, you could use lower DS as this part does not require anything that challenging?
So I reduced the spacing.
- 08:38:301 (4) - literally the first time in 8 minutes when such a slider appears. Are you sure you want that shape here? It could feel a bit out of your style, so I'd opt for something like this
fixed
Note: 08:50:301 (3) - you'd have to change this one as well.- 11:41:092 (1) - I love you.
<3
- 14:02:581 (2,3,4,5) - if you select the pattern and Ctrl+g it, it will swap the rhythms emphasizing vocals and stronger ticks better. Give it a try!
I got your point, so I revamped this and the next three parts according to your suggestion.
Note: 14:54:009 (2,3,4) - same here, 14:57:438 (2,3,4,5) - here, 15:02:367 (7,8,9) - here- 16:56:698 (8,1) - minor - the blanket here and around this combo could be improved.
fixed
- 17:28:183 - 17:28:628 - the drums require some kind of some support. Add a circle for each of these beats?
After thorough consideration, I'd keep this as it is. For one thing, a space here makes this section more enjoyable for me. For another thing, I could emphasize 17:27:878 (1) - , and pave the way for 17:28:769 (3,4,5) - . Besides, lyric goes "Set this silence free", so I just want to keep this as it is.
- 17:47:935 (6,7) - minor - not exactlu sure of these currves as they don't really appear anywhere before and feels way too aggressive. Wyh not stick to regular arc-shaped sliders?
fixed
- 18:58:480 (1,1,1) - 18:59:668 (1) - remember I've mentiond excessive comboing feeling spammed? That is also the case here. try to remove these new combos to prevent patterns from feeling spammed.
The color spam is intended to be in line with the lyric, "one by one by one".
- 20:27:275 (3) - the shape here causes some kind of a glitched move, that can be avoided, try a kess aggressive angle here? example
fixed
- 20:30:275 (1,2) - unstacking would keep the flow dynamic and work better here, I believe. example
good idea.
Note: 21:18:275 (5,6) - same?- 21:46:306 (2,3,4,5) - spacing change with no visible warning like a new combo may confuse players and make them think there's some snapping change. Either add a new ombo to warn about the DS change or stick to one DS? Same would happen 21:54:181 (2,3,4,5) - here.
It makes sense. I enlarged the spacing a bit in order to avoid misreading.
Note: I suggest sticking to some DS, just like you did it with 21:52:306 (2,3,4,5) -- 23:59:271 (2,3) - doesn't sound quite right to me, I would rather go with a 1/4 slider for the drums. example Or maybe two circles as the beat on the blue tick sounds pretty strong.
fixed
- 23:59:624 (1,2) - then the same thing like with the pattern above continues. So, the whole thing would be more like this?
umm... I am sure I follow the rap precisely.
- 25:26:448 (1) - I would add some hitsound to stress the music here. Whistle doesn't sound too bad if you ask me.
fixed
- 26:41:270 (3) - the drums go for some kind of intensity increase, so two circles would do better. Besides, the beat on 26:41:395 - definitely asks for a circle. So, yeah, replace the slider with two circles?
That's true and I fixed this 26:41:270 - . But I didn't fixed the next one 26:42:270 (2) - since there's no beat. Hope I've got your point right
- 26:45:645 (6,7) - probably move (7) a bit apart just to make sure players read it as 1/2 and not a 1/4 jump.
okay
- 27:32:395 (1) - split this one into two sliders? example. After playing for twenty minutes non-stop this slider will definitely get players stressed as in they'll keep trying to guess the amount of repeats and stuff.
Quite nice idea.
- 28:45:395 (2,1) - space it frther apart to make sure it is readabe? So that it'd match the previous sliders and their spacing
Looks better now.
- 29:21:319 (1) - I generally feel like new combos in this part are overused. Perhaps, you could reduce the amount of them to make it mor reasonable?
I'd like to, but the spacing gets messed up as there's no clue for note grouping. That's why I think newcombos are necessary here!
- 35:52:566 (1,2) - is there any way we could lower the spacing? this feels like a bit of an overkill, to be honest.
Rearranged those sliders so that it won't be too challenging while still reflect my feelings when listening to this moving song.
- 38:20:943 (5,9,10) - selecting these and hitting Ctrl+G would stress the stronger beats.
Things turn out to be better now.
Pretty good for such a long and relatively old map. I will post stuff I have on lite soon. I'd also use higher stack leniency as to make sure stacks are readable all the time. As they not visible on powerless, for example.Set SL to 0.6 on both difficulties, as 0.7 might break some visual patterns while 0.6 works well.
I guess that wraps it up. That truly was impressive in every possible way.
- Same stack leniency thing. Consider setting it higher for readability purposes.
- 03:40:840 (5,4) - I would rather use 1/2 slider and a circle as there are individual drum hits on white ticks that need something clickable.
fixed
- 04:17:617 (3,4) - minor - you might wnat to fix the blanket here.
okay
- 04:47:932 (3,4) - 04:49:195 (6,1) - are you sure stacks like these are readable for a Lite version. In the 1/2 chain they can be a bit confusing.
yeah fixed
- 11:41:370 (1,1) - since this is a lite version spreading spinners apart so that there is a bit of recovery time after the first one might be a good idea. You might as well remove 11:50:259 (1) - to give extra recovery time after the second one.
Sounds good. And I also removed 11:52:481 - to keep consistency.
- 14:38:367 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+G for the vocals and drums here as well. Should fit better this way.
Rearranged the rhythm. It works better.
- 17:10:064 (3,4,5,1) - so, the overlap here can be avoided. Try something like this
fixed
- 18:02:044 (2,3) - minor - blanketing here could be improved.
fixed
Note: same 26:04:395 (1) - probably in a few more patterns. scan through the set quickly if you are up for fixing it.- 20:01:962 - probably a circle here, or you could try turning 20:01:775 (3) - intos lider.
fixed
- 23:29:472 - end the slider here and then add a speparate circle on 23:30:241 - as this is where the new line starts.
that's right
- 27:02:895 - since the vocals start here this is where I would expect (1) to be started.
okay
- 29:14:395 (1) - gets overlapped with the HP Bar, consider moving it lower?
fixed
Hit me up when ready.
Yeah timing fixed and things turn out to be better now! Great thanks!Sieg wrote:
promised to Bakari to take a look on timings here
everything seems quite decent, tho i would shift few things
190,000 / 229196 -> -6
110,000 / 336120 -> +7
101,000 / 983728 -> -8
97,667 / 1159569 -> 97.720 / 1159563
78,000 / 1331011 -> +5
Thank you again! By checking new combos and break times again, I think I am ready.Bakari wrote:
Doubleposting so that you get a notification that I've posted here.
[Marathon Lite][Marathon]
- 23:30:246 (1) - and I guess we could remove a new combo just to prevent excessive combo usage.
fixed
Almost there.
- 01:19:449 (1,4) - asked around and we still believe these stacks should be slightly moved around. There is a plenty of other things that make this map difficult, so it's better to avoid borderline patterns. Besides, it will match with the rest of the patterns around, like 01:21:536 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - or 01:17:884 (1,2,3) - which give kind of a similar idea.
Probably. So I found a compromise by moving dozen pixels top-left. So is the same pattern occurring at the end of the track.
It was a surprise for me when I checked my phone this morning. Thank you very much!Desperate-kun wrote:
Random check, because I still love this as much as 2.5 years ago!
[Marathon]
01:14:753 (1) - I don't think a repeat slider fits here, because it's a constant sound and it's different from 01:16:318 (1) - etc. What about a slow-SV-slider like this http://puu.sh/tyEql/c61322e3ab.jpg or a single circle?well I came up with a slider of 2.0 SV that would be really awesome!
05:27:084 (1,2) - It seems a bit odd to have that slider without a jump afterwards, because you usually put jumps after 1/4-sliders in this song. What about http://puu.sh/tyEQt/4be4ae3195.jpg ?I got your point so I polished this part for the better.
06:35:036 (1,2) - The rhythm seems weird to me. The red ticks seem to be stronger sounds here, from drums or vocals, so what about shortening these sliders?makes sense. I've shortened the second slider so as to emphasize 06:35:854 - , while still kept the first slider extended.
19:14:512 (6) - Hmm, while the pattern is nice, mapping 19:14:809 - with a slider tail is bad emphasis, because there is a strong beat that should be clickable. Consider to make this two circles instead?That's right. Since I don't want to break the pattern, I revamp this part a bit.
20:02:712 (2) - I think it would be better to stack it on (1), for the vocal emphasis.Nice idea.
20:04:212 (2) - Same as above.
22:02:150 (5,6,7,8) - It would feel better to replace this stream with sliders like 22:01:775 (3,4) - , because the sounds are the same.Fixed this.
23:16:785 (2,3) - Another instance where repeat sliders don't really seem to fit, the sound in the music is pretty constant. So, I recommend you to use a spinner instead here, or a long slider.umm okay
[Marathon Lite]
11:41:370 (1,1) - Constantly changing volume of the spinner sounds weird. I know these are just the timing lines from Marathon, lol, but please remove these here.lol fixed
12:43:592 (1) - Same.
Didn't put so many explanations, because I thought this was going to be a long mod. Turns out it is pretty short regardless of the song lengthIf there's anything unclear please ask.
I can't believe I just modded 1:20h of maps
Call me back after you checked through this!
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG\A_3.png",320,240手摆出的问题,后两行
M,0,340483,,326.6064,444.8
S,0,340483,,1.057806
F,0,340483,342665,0,1
F,0,342665,560847,1,0.9995417
F,0,560847,561938,0.9995417,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG\A_4.png",320,240
M,0,581092,,320.8258,264.7742
V,0,581092,,0.8018065,0.6944522
F,0,581092,581370,0,1
F,0,581370,763314,1,0.9928058
F,0,763314,766647,0.9928058,0
Desperate-kun wrote:
Didn't put so many explanations, because I thought this was going to be a long mod. Turns out it is pretty short regardless of the song length
HootOwlStar wrote:
Quite concerned about the rhythm especially the offbeats throughout the In My Remains part, and how the drags are represented with 1/8 sliders in A Light That Never Comes. Besides the albums might need to be switched since A Light That Never Comes is imtroducex first.
Quite a number of things but I can't get access to my comp just yet. So I'm just pointing out the major ones first so that it will raise some attention.
Timeline: 3-0 4---0 5-0You may argue that the downbeat 17:29:660 - should be clickable, but from my perspective, rhythm can be shown both actively and passively. Clickable rhythms are played out actively by pressing down the button while tails are played by loosening the button. Since this part are more played by singletapping, players could feel the rhythm due to finger movement. That's why I think it is valid.
Movement: D U D U D U (D for down, U for up)
Drumline: X X X X X X
That would honestly be a good idea.Scarlet Evans wrote:
Bonus question, not really suggesting anything: I know it's a little against the spirit, but if the map is dedicated for Std, not CTB, and the auto-converting causes the problems, can't the map be simply ranked for Std, Mania and Taiko, but not the CTB? Or ranked for all mods, then unranked for CTB?
yes because if someone FCs this map in ctb after it gets ranked, they will lose about 2 billion score from their total ranked score, not to mention the rankings would show their scores at the bottom of the ladder as they are negative (less than zero)Scarlet Evans wrote:
So the osu!standard maps rankability strictly depend on how maps behave in the other game modes that they are not dedicated for?
That's what I am glad to see (there should be an option for std-only maps, the same as other modes), since the map is designed only for stdF1r3tar wrote:
That would honestly be a good idea.Scarlet Evans wrote:
Bonus question, not really suggesting anything: I know it's a little against the spirit, but if the map is dedicated for Std, not CTB, and the auto-converting causes the problems, can't the map be simply ranked for Std, Mania and Taiko, but not the CTB? Or ranked for all mods, then unranked for CTB?