from my q
ok the rest is really nice
it's not even close to my mapping style at all but i love how you mapped it (and your hitsounds <3)
take some stars
CoMMUNICATIoN
- 00:10:658 (7) - move this slightly up + to the right to improve the curve? (more right than up)
00:25:002 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - make the curve more consistent here as well
00:49:939 (2,1,2,3,4) - these jumps seem a bit too spaced for how calm this part of the song is. don't decrease it by a ton, just a little to decrease the intensity to match the song
00:53:127 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:56:127 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:00:627 (3) - reverse the direction of the curve?
01:01:377 (1,2,3) - this should be the opposite of how it is now - if you want to make one of the spacings close, it should be the first two notes, because the emphasis is on the third note is higher than that of the first two (you could make them a stack and then the keep the slider where is?). or you can just space them evenly, it works either way.
01:02:127 (2,3,4) - ^
01:03:627 (3,1,2) - you should just space this one evenly imo
01:08:502 (3,1) - spread these a bit further apart
01:10:002 (3,1) - ^
01:12:252 (5,6,7,1) - this doesn't really work since (6) and the beginning of (1) aren't on a beat/sound. i would just delete the circles and extend both the sliders, then move (1) back a tick. (like this: )
01:14:127 (1,1) - put a note between these to get the extra note from the vocals
01:32:877 (1) - just having a slider here doesn't put enough emphasis on the end imo. you could make the slider into a kickslider (shorten by 1 tick) and then put a circle after to make the end more intense?
01:34:002 (1) - i don't think you need a NC here
01:42:439 (2,2) - put whistles on the end of these sliders too? i like how it sounds
01:43:189 (1) - shorten the slider + add a note to the stream to put more emphasis on where the sliderend was
01:46:189 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - you could improve the aesthetics of this by making the curve of the slider and the curve of the stream match
01:49:377 (2,3,4,5,1) - make 2-5 similarly mapped, then make (1) different, because it doesn't have the drum sound. for example, you could do this:
or you could just stack (1) under (5) instead of (4) and (5)
02:01:189 (1) - not enough emphasis on the sliderend :s
02:01:564 (1) - extend this 1 tick for more emphasis on the circle after
02:03:064 (1) - ^ if you do that for this one, make sure to move the circle after it closer
02:58:377 (1) - same as 01:32:877 (1)
03:52:752 (1,2) - this kinda ruins the flow, awkward to play
03:59:502 (2) - kinda weird that the stream starts on the end of this slider, maybe it's just because i hate streams after sliders tho lol
04:15:252 (1) - needs to be moved down + to the right a little to make the curve more consistent
ok the rest is really nice
it's not even close to my mapping style at all but i love how you mapped it (and your hitsounds <3)
take some stars