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General
i think source should be in japanese: 文豪ストレイドッグス and english name Bungo Stray Dogs should be in your tags
01:23:257 - kiai end not snapped
No Longer Human
00:15:680 (1) - it appears a little strange because a nc should be set at 00:15:983 - so i propose to change a little your rhythm
00:40:680 (4,1) - those overlaps seem not quite well, try to rotate 00:40:680 (4) - clockwise 60 degree and stack it's tail to 1's head
00:43:104 (4,1) - ^ but this time maybe a different degree... just make sure those sliders looks like an ensemble, it would look better
00:45:528 (4,1) - ^
00:51:892 (5,6,7) - you have used many 3 streams in the kiai part, but i just hear simple 1/2 beats... I don't get your point
00:59:619 (1) - how about stack with the head of 00:58:256 (1) - ?
01:06:210 (4) - and this stack with 01:06:513 (4) - ?
01:14:771 (4) - looks a little squeeze with 5 and 6. Move it right a little bit?
01:20:983 (4,5) - use a ctrl+g here would be better (for a much bigger jump, at the end part)
Good luck
General
i think source should be in japanese: 文豪ストレイドッグス and english name Bungo Stray Dogs should be in your tags
01:23:257 - kiai end not snapped
No Longer Human
00:15:680 (1) - it appears a little strange because a nc should be set at 00:15:983 - so i propose to change a little your rhythm
00:40:680 (4,1) - those overlaps seem not quite well, try to rotate 00:40:680 (4) - clockwise 60 degree and stack it's tail to 1's head
00:43:104 (4,1) - ^ but this time maybe a different degree... just make sure those sliders looks like an ensemble, it would look better
00:45:528 (4,1) - ^
00:51:892 (5,6,7) - you have used many 3 streams in the kiai part, but i just hear simple 1/2 beats... I don't get your point
00:59:619 (1) - how about stack with the head of 00:58:256 (1) - ?
01:06:210 (4) - and this stack with 01:06:513 (4) - ?
01:14:771 (4) - looks a little squeeze with 5 and 6. Move it right a little bit?
01:20:983 (4,5) - use a ctrl+g here would be better (for a much bigger jump, at the end part)
Good luck