Mod from modreq ;d
[Mercury]
00:04:599 (3,4,5) - It would be nice of these 3 circles to have same spacing as 00:02:349 (1,2,3) - as they're essentially the same sounds
00:05:649 (2,3,4,5) - I really dislike those clap sounds on easy and slow parts..
00:07:149 (4,6) - i'd ctrl+g them for better flow and adjust spacing if necessary. It also makes a nice blanket with 00:08:049 (3) - if 6 is placed on (4)
00:41:949 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - my suggestion is to make some sick 2stacks skystar 2012 mapping right here xd since it's the highest difficulty anyways
Another things that i noticed is that the easy parts are way too easy, i'd recommend increasing spacing a bit on them, because compared to the hard parts they are way too easy xd
00:52:749 (4,5) - imo this jump should be larger than 00:52:899 (5,6) - because Ma-Ka happens on these two beats
00:58:449 (3,2) - is there really a need for this pattern to be one of its kind in the whole section with this kind of overlap ;v
00:58:899 (2,1) - blanket it?
[Extra]
00:07:224 - unused beat
00:11:049 (4,1,2) - imo they should have the same shape
00:15:249 (2,3) - This is too close
00:18:399 (1,2) - blanket spacing compared to 00:19:149 (3,1) - bleeds my eyes ;d
00:22:749 (4) - I'd make it a cirlce and 1/2 slider for vocals
00:24:849 (2) - make it 1/2 and add a 2stack after it
00:32:799 (1,2) - slidershape is not identical
00:32:049 (2,3,4,5) - I see no particular reason for this jump to be much larger than any other in the section
00:31:599 (1,2) - also this kinda denies the nature of your map, u usually place circles on the completely reversed flow of the slider
00:40:299 (2) - I'd make it similar to (1) but change appearance to 00:40:599 (3) -
00:51:999 (1,2) - too close
00:51:999 (1) - i''d consider changing shape as it is on the same shape as 00:51:399 (3) - but follows guitar vs vocals
00:54:099 (4,5) - i'd increase spacing a bit here
01:10:449 (2,3) - it isn't perfect blanket but u were close lul
01:12:399 (1,2) - i think the blanket spacing is too close compared to your usual spacing, it's especially unusual for closer blankets in a hard part of map
01:20:799 (1,2) - ^
[Mercury]
00:04:599 (3,4,5) - It would be nice of these 3 circles to have same spacing as 00:02:349 (1,2,3) - as they're essentially the same sounds
00:05:649 (2,3,4,5) - I really dislike those clap sounds on easy and slow parts..
00:07:149 (4,6) - i'd ctrl+g them for better flow and adjust spacing if necessary. It also makes a nice blanket with 00:08:049 (3) - if 6 is placed on (4)
00:41:949 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - my suggestion is to make some sick 2stacks skystar 2012 mapping right here xd since it's the highest difficulty anyways
Another things that i noticed is that the easy parts are way too easy, i'd recommend increasing spacing a bit on them, because compared to the hard parts they are way too easy xd
00:52:749 (4,5) - imo this jump should be larger than 00:52:899 (5,6) - because Ma-Ka happens on these two beats
00:58:449 (3,2) - is there really a need for this pattern to be one of its kind in the whole section with this kind of overlap ;v
00:58:899 (2,1) - blanket it?
[Extra]
00:07:224 - unused beat
00:11:049 (4,1,2) - imo they should have the same shape
00:15:249 (2,3) - This is too close
00:18:399 (1,2) - blanket spacing compared to 00:19:149 (3,1) - bleeds my eyes ;d
00:22:749 (4) - I'd make it a cirlce and 1/2 slider for vocals
00:24:849 (2) - make it 1/2 and add a 2stack after it
00:32:799 (1,2) - slidershape is not identical
00:32:049 (2,3,4,5) - I see no particular reason for this jump to be much larger than any other in the section
00:31:599 (1,2) - also this kinda denies the nature of your map, u usually place circles on the completely reversed flow of the slider
00:40:299 (2) - I'd make it similar to (1) but change appearance to 00:40:599 (3) -
00:51:999 (1,2) - too close
00:51:999 (1) - i''d consider changing shape as it is on the same shape as 00:51:399 (3) - but follows guitar vs vocals
00:54:099 (4,5) - i'd increase spacing a bit here
01:10:449 (2,3) - it isn't perfect blanket but u were close lul
01:12:399 (1,2) - i think the blanket spacing is too close compared to your usual spacing, it's especially unusual for closer blankets in a hard part of map
01:20:799 (1,2) - ^