2016-11-23 18:28 Ayyri: 00:11:294 - fam these sliders look really tight
2016-11-23 18:28 Ayyri: makes 00:12:583 - these 2 notes look weird too
2016-11-23 18:28 Ayyri: bc the slider is kinda even, then the 2 notes throw off the balance of it
2016-11-23 18:28 Ayyri: n' it looks ugly ):
Disagree, I think these sliders and the notes after are fine. I know I said the 1.6SV after the 2.1 jumps may be a little weird but its not something that is outright wrong imo2016-11-23 18:30 Ayyri: like 00:15:044 -
2016-11-23 18:30 Ayyri: it gets worse
2016-11-23 18:30 Ayyri: bc it's all scrunched up even more
2016-11-23 18:30 Ayyri: esp w/ 00:14:809 - being so close to it
Widened these in fireyrage's mod2016-11-23 18:35 Ayyri: nitpicky, but 00:21:372 - could be blanketed better lo
nitpicky but fixed lo2016-11-23 18:35 Ayyri: n' around 00:20:669 - the hs starts to sound really low compared to the song
I dont notice that2016-11-23 18:43 Ayyri: 00:23:715 -
2016-11-23 18:43 Ayyri: vocal should actually be like
http://i.imgur.com/pyF8RrS.png2016-11-23 18:44 Ayyri: bc you are ignoring the vocal at 00:24:184 - with the longer slider
2016-11-23 18:44 Ayyri: n' nothing is held at 00:24:067 - anyways
You're right about the vocals there, but how it is currently mapped plays a lot smoother2016-11-23 18:46 Ayyri: 00:24:184 -
2016-11-23 18:46 Ayyri: vocal rhythm is weird here too
2016-11-23 18:46 Ayyri: try smth like this
http://i.imgur.com/mIdhrwE.png2016-11-23 18:47 Hiicantpk:
I mapped it like the previous measure because it sounded pretty similar2016-11-23 18:48 Ayyri: 00:27:465 -
2016-11-23 18:48 Ayyri: this doesn't sound right in any case that you have it
Disagreed2016-11-23 18:48 Ayyri: moreover, 00:29:575 - tight slider is very ew
Fixed in fireyrage's mod2016-11-23 18:48 Ayyri: n i don't really see the need for all these jumps
2016-11-23 18:49 Ayyri: when the vocal is being held out in some points
2016-11-23 18:49 Ayyri: but that's kind w/e
2016-11-23 18:49 Ayyri: your style, i guess
2016-11-23 18:49 Ayyri: plus, jumps can kinda get boring
2016-11-23 18:49 Ayyri: so i'd suggest using a bit more sliders during the vocal parts anyways
2016-11-23 18:49 Ayyri: bc you know
2016-11-23 18:49 Ayyri: variation
In my short time of mapping I've been told to map similar sounds similarly, so that what I've done here.2016-11-23 18:50 Ayyri: 00:29:575 - might wanna have some kind of finish sound here
Added a higher volume clap, it works2016-11-23 18:51 Ayyri: 00:33:325 - and 00:33:794 - this jump is weird
2016-11-23 18:51 Ayyri: like
2016-11-23 18:51 Ayyri: 8 is going down
2016-11-23 18:51 Ayyri: then 1 is just at the side of it
Made less weird2016-11-23 18:53 Ayyri: 00:37:426 -
2016-11-23 18:53 Ayyri: i think this is the first spot some kind of a triple would work ok
While you're right, theres too much momentum here from the back and forths to have a triple2016-11-23 18:55 Ayyri: 00:39:184 - red to red slider could work here
2016-11-23 18:55 Ayyri: show the difference in vocal
2016-11-23 18:55 Ayyri: bc the beat at 00:39:419 - sounds a bit weird as a circle
2016-11-23 18:55 Ayyri: when the vocal is doing smth different
2016-11-23 18:55 Ayyri: esp if you're using jumps for the previous vocal
Actually you're right and it makes a neat pattern2016-11-23 18:56 Ayyri: 00:40:825 - and 00:41:059 -
2016-11-23 18:56 Ayyri: in relation to 00:40:590 -
2016-11-23 18:56 Ayyri: this line looks really weird
2016-11-23 18:56 Ayyri: no real reason to have it that sharp
2016-11-23 18:56 Ayyri: looks very cramped like that
2016-11-23 18:56 Ayyri: esp when 00:44:340 - is very spaced compared to that one
Changed in fireyrage's mod / I have sharp angles throughout the map. Made the second case sharp like the first2016-11-23 18:57 Ayyri: 00:46:450 - would make this a bit higher, cuz it looks weirdly close to 00:45:981 -
2016-11-23 18:57 Ayyri: nitpicky, but w/e
2016-11-23 18:57 Ayyri: up to you
Sure why not2016-11-23 18:58 Ayyri: 00:50:317 - remove
2016-11-23 18:58 Ayyri: there isn't any sound here to support this
2016-11-23 18:58 Hiicantpk: Theres nothing at 00:50:317-
2016-11-23 18:58 Ayyri: sorry, sorry
2016-11-23 18:58 Ayyri: meant 00:50:317 -
2016-11-23 18:59 Ayyri: wot
2016-11-23 18:59 Ayyri: wait
2016-11-23 18:59 Hiicantpk: the triplet after?
2016-11-23 18:59 Ayyri: i thought i was retarded and linked the wrong timestamp
2016-11-23 18:59 Ayyri:
http://i.imgur.com/7q3hGGH.png2016-11-23 18:59 Ayyri: uH
2016-11-23 19:00 Ayyri: thanks oss
2016-11-23 19:01 Hiicantpk: theres a pa-pi-pi on those three notes
2016-11-23 19:02 Ayyri: ya
2016-11-23 19:02 Ayyri: osu is just being
2016-11-23 19:02 Ayyri: dumb
2016-11-23 19:02 Ayyri: showed it as the measure before lmao
lo2016-11-23 19:03 Ayyri: seems weird you used reverse sliders for 01:00:044 -
2016-11-23 19:03 Ayyri: when you used jumps for much less intense stuff
2016-11-23 19:03 Ayyri: but i guess it's for the build up effect
You got it, curved em though2016-11-23 19:03 Ayyri: 01:02:856 - this stream looks kinda ugly ):
2016-11-23 19:04 Ayyri: weird angled, but makes two L's??
2016-11-23 19:04 Ayyri: angles*
Fixed in fireyrage's mod2016-11-23 19:04 Ayyri: and 01:03:794 - seems weird being so linear
It'd be hard to make these 1/4 sliders look decent if they were curved2016-11-23 19:07 Ayyri: also like
2016-11-23 19:07 Ayyri: 01:07:544 -
2016-11-23 19:07 Ayyri: this kind of curved slider
2016-11-23 19:07 Ayyri: looks weird
2016-11-23 19:07 Ayyri: like
2016-11-23 19:07 Ayyri: unbalanced kind of weird
I don't get what you mean with this "unbalanced slider" stuff2016-11-23 19:07 Ayyri: 01:08:481 - stack kinda messes up the evenness of this
Made all the stacks like this poke out of the end of the slider instead. They're still "unbalanced" lo2016-11-23 19:08 Ayyri: 01:09:419 - probably the most ok slider here
ok2016-11-23 19:08 Ayyri: 01:10:356 - copied and paste slider, same as the other one ):
Its fine as is2016-11-23 19:08 Ayyri: moreover, 01:10:122 - is weirdly placed
2016-11-23 19:08 Ayyri: considering the whole shape of 1 is going towards the left
2016-11-23 19:08 Ayyri: then 2 just goes sharply down
2016-11-23 19:09 Hiicantpk: Its the same sort of pattern as 01:07:544 - just 90 degrees clockwise
2016-11-23 19:09 Ayyri: ya
2016-11-23 19:09 Ayyri: makes it look less bad
This is the sort of flow I was going for here and I feel it works.2016-11-23 19:10 Ayyri: 01:11:294 - could use a 3/4 slider here, to emphasize the vocal that comes in at 01:11:528 -
2016-11-23 19:10 Ayyri: making the jumps stand out more
Theres no vocal on the blue tic a 3/4 slider would end on. I think its fine2016-11-23 19:11 Ayyri: consistency wise, it'd be cool to have 01:14:575 - as a circle
2016-11-23 19:11 Ayyri: moreover, sounds weird that you're using a slider end for the finish-like sound at 01:14:809 -
2016-11-23 19:12 Ayyri: kinda loses the impact of it in the song, by a lot
Having two circles here would ruin the symmetric pattern between 4 and 5, but added a clap to the end of 5 to emphasize the finish-like sound2016-11-23 19:23 Ayyri: 01:15:981 -
2016-11-23 19:24 Ayyri: this is probably supposed to replicate 01:15:044 -
2016-11-23 19:24 Ayyri: but it looks really weird in terms of flow from 01:15:747 -
2016-11-23 19:24 Ayyri: kinda a similar thing at 01:17:856 - , except not as bad
2016-11-23 19:24 Ayyri: but still, very odd
Moved (3) closer to (1) so its slightly easier to transition from the circular flow between 1 and 2 to the straight down of 32016-11-23 19:25 Ayyri: 01:18:794 - again, really strunched sliders that look out of place, and overall, not good aesthetically
fixed in fireyrage's mod2016-11-23 19:25 Ayyri: 01:20:434 - seems weird to have such a big jump from 4 to 1, tbh
2016-11-23 19:25 Ayyri: considering the jumps for 2 and 3 were smaller
I think its fine, also kinda changed in fireyrage's mod2016-11-23 19:26 Ayyri: 01:20:669 -
2016-11-23 19:26 Ayyri: smaller spacing works for the vocals, i guess
2016-11-23 19:26 Ayyri: but like i previously pointed out
2016-11-23 19:26 Ayyri: seems weird compared to the jump from 4 to 1
2016-11-23 19:26 Ayyri: then this smaller spacing
Changed in fireyrage's mod2016-11-23 19:27 Ayyri: 01:25:356 - ):
Why does everyone hate this? I think its fine2016-11-23 19:28 Ayyri: nitpicky, 01:27:934 - unbalanced slider looks off :////////
Made even more unbalanced2016-11-23 19:28 Ayyri: 01:28:637 - 1 -> 2 jump looks weird, and feels weird when you go from 2 -> 3, cuz of the smaller spacing
3 isn't nearly as important, why would I space it the same?2016-11-23 19:29 Ayyri: 01:29:575 - same thing i mentioned for 01:14:575 -
Same solution2016-11-23 19:29 Ayyri: 01:34:262 - having a reverse slider mid stream is ok
2016-11-23 19:29 Ayyri: but having it follow the same path as the stream?
2016-11-23 19:30 Ayyri: can be confusing, and very uncomfortable to play
2016-11-23 19:30 Ayyri: would suggest pointing 5 downwards, or in some other direction, and having 01:34:731 - detached
2016-11-23 19:30 Ayyri: 01:35:200 - same principle here
Fair enough, made it look nice2016-11-23 19:33 Ayyri: 01:35:669 -
2016-11-23 19:33 Ayyri: this is kind of confusing
2016-11-23 19:33 Ayyri: cuz it goes from 1/6 sliders
2016-11-23 19:33 Ayyri: to 1/6 notes
2016-11-23 19:33 Ayyri: and the spacing of the stream itself is inconsistent
2016-11-23 19:33 Hiicantpk: I dont know how else I'd introduce such a sudden change to 1/6
2016-11-23 19:34 Ayyri: like
2016-11-23 19:34 Ayyri: i wouldn't really suggest using a 1/6 stream
2016-11-23 19:34 Ayyri: just sliders
2016-11-23 19:34 Ayyri: bc there's no significant difference in the buildup
2016-11-23 19:34 Ayyri: and the song is slow enough, to where it's awkward to play
Again, I intend to keep the 1/6 here, although I made it more readable with a direction change and a longer 1/6 slider to warn the player.2016-11-23 19:37 Ayyri: 01:37:075 - i know there are drums here
2016-11-23 19:37 Ayyri: but it seems unfitting to follow the vocal too
2016-11-23 19:37 Ayyri: but idk, it'll probably change in placement bc of the stream before
2016-11-23 19:37 Ayyri: it
2016-11-23 19:38 Ayyri: idk
2016-11-23 19:38 Ayyri: just the sudden 1/6 -> 1/4 transistion is weird
Made the triplet a 1/4 repeat slider instead