Janpai
Janpai wrote:
M4M from your Queue General
- Disable Widescreen? I think this is for the BG but it can resized or cropped into 1366x768 bg resolution is fine, it's a higher resolution 4:3 (and the original size of the image) and the way osu resizes it for other apsect ratios it still looks nice on 16:9. widescreen support only matters for sb, having it on or off won't change anything for this map
- Maybe Regrets for the diff name? cuz in the lyrics the cursed girl seems to be broken
d Sorry for short mod, The map is really well-structured and I'm not really experienced on modding extras xD. No kd if it didn't help. Goodluck! and Merry Christmas!
- 00:02:533 (1,2) - Stack? There isn't enough recovery from the spinner and 00:03:073 (2) - kinda unpredictable under 00:02:533 (1) - tail. 1/4 recovery is fine enough for extra on 110 bpm and it's readable too.
- 00:04:153 (5) - Maybe put it sth like this http://puu.sh/t0bYV/64a851c19f.jpg cuz it has the same sound as 00:05:775 (5) - for consistency second one has a longer 1/3 drum pattern before it though, so they are different in how they will be perceived
- 00:09:559 (4) - Add clap like 00:09:018 (2) - ? drums are very different here, using either of my claps wouldn't fit
- 00:18:208 (2,4) - Ctrl+G? just a personal preference doesn't fit the emphasis and buildup I was going for as well
- 00:19:289 (2) - Extend to 00:19:649 - it plays nicely and follows the whisper sound there I'll consider, but 1/2 seems to better fit that whisper to o:
- 01:38:111 (1,2,3) - I think 01:39:506 (3) - needs more distance than having 1.1 DS cuz high pitched vocals
- 01:41:599 (2) - ^^ prefer to keep the part fully distance snapped, the gaps are 1/1 + sliders so spacing doesn't really matter for how they are perceived and it seems nice for such calm parts
- 04:34:273 (2) - split into circle then slider? for that hmm sound
- 04:39:855 (2) - ^^ don't think they warrant clicks as they aren't really "new "vocals
- 04:47:006 (3,4) - Switch the rhythms? for vocals that would work too, but 04:45:087 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - is already more focused on that other sound and rhythm like this lets me map 04:47:529 - as sliderend to get much nicer emphasis on 04:47:704 - which stands out the most here, without using something like a random 3/2 slider
Qapitol
Qapitol wrote:
YUIKONNU
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Linada's suggestion for diff name seems good
OD8.5? will try 8.7 actually
01:32:529 (1) - Slow down SV a bit? Seems a bit fast, even the other sliders in the map around this point in the song seem slower jump into it is huge and it keeps the momentum going, also emphasizes the vocal
01:37:413 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Seems almost too spaced, idk maybe just me but I'd reduce slightly might consider reducing the first 3, but seems fine actually
01:48:925 (1) - Is there a reason this isn't a flower-like stream for this part? Music seems almost identical in the 2nd and 3rd choruses this one transitions from a much calmer part, I think a stream would feel too sudden
01:52:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - tbh I don't think that these require NCs. Maybe one, if that they work great for vocals and with the pattern, removing nc here looks bad
01:56:250 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
03:31:134 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
03:38:111 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ it just seems excessive to me. U know where this stuff is so I won't put anymore times if you're actually gonna change it lol
05:18:576 (1,1,1,1,1) - Arguably, this could be sliderart instead of just circles, seems like the music supports it kinda, but I also prefer to give players a short rest where they don't have to hold/follow anything
05:34:273 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - And it seems like the opposite for this. Slightly overmapped yeah the ends are overmapped, but it fits the music here so well
Sorry for short mod. Good luck with rank, fun map and great song!
haha woah man
haha woah man wrote:
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00:17:667 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing feels a little high dont think so
00:19:289 (2) - i dont hear a sound that should make this 1/2 instead of 1/3 pretty sure there is something on the 1/2 + vocals o:
00:25:901 (2,3) - this is the only 1/2 overlap in this entire section, i think would be better to space will consider this, but I think it's nice as some kind of "lead into the section"
00:44:041 (1,2) - i think this would look nicer if you used 00:43:518 (1,2) - angle don't think parellel visuals fit here
00:45:436 (1) - remove NC? works well with musical phrases and patterning
01:10:727 (4,5) - use 1.4x like 01:05:146 (6,1) / 00:59:564 (4,5) ? increased a bit, but already adjusted for new sv and small differences are not something that will have any effect on how this is perceived
01:25:553 (1,2) - this overlap looks out of place in context, i think 0.1x is good again yes, should be like the others. fixed
01:32:529 (1) - excessive SV, very shocking. i broke only here and two other spots when i sightread map explained before
01:50:320 (3) - NC? I want it to feel different from the other vocal jump pattern, which is why angles are so different and comboing too
01:53:459 (1,2) - circle in between feels better rip vocal emphasis
01:57:646 (1) - missing clap? yes
02:04:622 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read these as doubles, 0.5x or similar spacing would improve this don't think so
02:42:646 (1) - remove NC? same as the other one
02:44:215 (2) - missing green tick to make the tail quiet? yes, fixed
03:11:599 (1,2) - overlap weird again these are all the same spacing though o:
03:18:576 (1) - same suggestion as before. also blanket isnt perfect same as before, fixed blanket though cause it was noticeably off
03:25:204 (3) - 03:33:576 (3) - 03:36:366 (3) - 03:45:437 (5) - i dont see why no NC here. would carry the theme as before
03:30:785 (4) - missing clap? fixed
03:51:715 (5) - NC here instead of 03:52:064 (1) - fits better imo makes less sense with the song
04:03:227 (1,2,3) - why is only 3rd slider rotated? shouldnt 2 be rotated half as much as 3? yes, idk how that happened
04:11:599 (1) - would be cool / fitting if this was keysounded (04:22:762 (1) - same suggestion) I already tried that, but somehow didn't feel very fitting so I went with normal finishes again
04:14:390 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these are too big especially when compared to kiai i think the building up pattern makes them just fine and lets this instrumental stand out well
04:21:366 (2,3) - improvable blanket tried
04:50:494 (1,3) - mirroring 1 shape in the beginning of 3 would be cool don't like that here, makes the visuals of this part feel less distinct
05:08:111 (4) - if this is supposed to blanket 05:07:675 (2) - its quite off does what it is supposed to do
same NC suggestions as previous kiai - 05:37:762 (3) - 05:46:134 (3) - 05:48:925 (3) - (maybe not 05:49:622 (3) because not symmetrical?)
05:52:239 (2,3) - feels like there should be a circle in between, even if overlap on 3 same as before (vocal emphasis)
good luck
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thanks for the mods!
also fixed drain and put a proper difficulty name