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00:17:667 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing feels a little high
00:19:289 (2) - i dont hear a sound that should make this 1/2 instead of 1/3
00:25:901 (2,3) - this is the only 1/2 overlap in this entire section, i think would be better to space
00:44:041 (1,2) - i think this would look nicer if you used 00:43:518 (1,2) - angle
00:45:436 (1) - remove NC?
01:10:727 (4,5) - use 1.4x like 01:05:146 (6,1) / 00:59:564 (4,5) ?
01:25:553 (1,2) - this overlap looks out of place in context, i think 0.1x is good again
01:32:529 (1) - excessive SV, very shocking. i broke only here and two other spots when i sightread map
01:50:320 (3) - NC?
01:53:459 (1,2) - circle in between feels better
01:57:646 (1) - missing clap?
02:04:622 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read these as doubles, 0.5x or similar spacing would improve this
02:42:646 (1) - remove NC?
02:44:215 (2) - missing green tick to make the tail quiet?
03:11:599 (1,2) - overlap weird again
03:18:576 (1) - same suggestion as before. also blanket isnt perfect
03:25:204 (3) - 03:33:576 (3) - 03:36:366 (3) - 03:45:437 (5) - i dont see why no NC here. would carry the theme
03:30:785 (4) - missing clap?
03:51:715 (5) - NC here instead of 03:52:064 (1) - fits better imo
04:03:227 (1,2,3) - why is only 3rd slider rotated? shouldnt 2 be rotated half as much as 3?
04:11:599 (1) - would be cool / fitting if this was keysounded (04:22:762 (1) - same suggestion)
04:14:390 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these are too big especially when compared to kiai
04:21:366 (2,3) - improvable blanket
04:50:494 (1,3) - mirroring 1 shape in the beginning of 3 would be cool
05:08:111 (4) - if this is supposed to blanket 05:07:675 (2) - its quite off
same NC suggestions as previous kiai - 05:37:762 (3) - 05:46:134 (3) - 05:48:925 (3) - (maybe not 05:49:622 (3) because not symmetrical?)
05:52:239 (2,3) - feels like there should be a circle in between, even if overlap on 3
00:17:667 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacing feels a little high
00:19:289 (2) - i dont hear a sound that should make this 1/2 instead of 1/3
00:25:901 (2,3) - this is the only 1/2 overlap in this entire section, i think would be better to space
00:44:041 (1,2) - i think this would look nicer if you used 00:43:518 (1,2) - angle
00:45:436 (1) - remove NC?
01:10:727 (4,5) - use 1.4x like 01:05:146 (6,1) / 00:59:564 (4,5) ?
01:25:553 (1,2) - this overlap looks out of place in context, i think 0.1x is good again
01:32:529 (1) - excessive SV, very shocking. i broke only here and two other spots when i sightread map
01:50:320 (3) - NC?
01:53:459 (1,2) - circle in between feels better
01:57:646 (1) - missing clap?
02:04:622 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read these as doubles, 0.5x or similar spacing would improve this
02:42:646 (1) - remove NC?
02:44:215 (2) - missing green tick to make the tail quiet?
03:11:599 (1,2) - overlap weird again
03:18:576 (1) - same suggestion as before. also blanket isnt perfect
03:25:204 (3) - 03:33:576 (3) - 03:36:366 (3) - 03:45:437 (5) - i dont see why no NC here. would carry the theme
03:30:785 (4) - missing clap?
03:51:715 (5) - NC here instead of 03:52:064 (1) - fits better imo
04:03:227 (1,2,3) - why is only 3rd slider rotated? shouldnt 2 be rotated half as much as 3?
04:11:599 (1) - would be cool / fitting if this was keysounded (04:22:762 (1) - same suggestion)
04:14:390 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - these are too big especially when compared to kiai
04:21:366 (2,3) - improvable blanket
04:50:494 (1,3) - mirroring 1 shape in the beginning of 3 would be cool
05:08:111 (4) - if this is supposed to blanket 05:07:675 (2) - its quite off
same NC suggestions as previous kiai - 05:37:762 (3) - 05:46:134 (3) - 05:48:925 (3) - (maybe not 05:49:622 (3) because not symmetrical?)
05:52:239 (2,3) - feels like there should be a circle in between, even if overlap on 3
good luck