Wishkey wrote:
Yow! From my queue
ExpertI disagree. The same rhythm is used 00:15:500 (4,5,1) - as well. Doesn't need NCing.
- 00:01:500 (1) - can extend this if you want like the other insane+ diffs still has that build up
It's okay like that.- 00:06:000 (2) - NC would fit here, new segment and and all and so it fits with your overal NC pattern
Alright.- 00:08:250 (2) -,00:20:250 (2) - 00:11:250 (2) - I think this is because of hitsound copier but, some of these have a middle whisle and some dont so double check them if it isnt intentional
Alright, fixed.- 00:11:000 (1,3) - could overlap a bit more, just the borders is a bit weird compared to all the other overlaps
It's fine, still readable.- 00:13:750 (6) - this is something that I kinda missed in the next half of the map, you indicated the skipping drums in the sliders but kinda abondend it for 00:23:750 (4,6) - these dunno if its intentional
The Rhythm is consistent. From 00:08:000 - to 00:14:000 - is the same as from 00:20:000 - to 00:26:000 -- 00:31:500 (3,4) - 1/3 comes a bit out of nowhere , would make the end of 3 clickable here for the lead in to the 1/3, could consider NCing it aswell if you want
KuroNeko1509 wrote:
[Sharkie's Expert]
- 00:14:375 (3,5,1,3) - I think your overlaps arent too consistent through out the map, like sometimes they overlap 1/2 or 3/4, where as sometimes its even less than that, so I think you should just go over and move some notes a lilttle so they will look more consistent
I disagree. All overlaps are consistent. In addition, the overlaps that are less consistent are the ones that cover less than 50% of the circle, therefore it is completely readable on first try. Furthermore, with these overlaps, they are not anti-flowish, nor do they have really confusing reading patterns. They are simply overlaps.
Louis Cyphre wrote:
[Sharkie's EXPERT]
00:30:750 (4) - this slider overlaps with hp bar
Fixed.
Smoothie World wrote:
[Sharkie's EXPERT]
- 00:26:000 (1) - Try doing Ctrl + G on this slider. Since it falls on a downbeat, it'd be nice to have a change in the direction of flow.
Which is true, but the Ctrl+G method would create a flow that I'm not really a fan of. Thank you for your suggestion though.
Wivaiien wrote:
[Sharkie's Expert]The reason I did not do a back and forth is because the patterns that do go back and forth, as you explained, goes from 3 snare hits to a bass drum hit + hi-hat. However, the pattern 00:19:000 (1,2,3,4) - is slowed down because the only percussion hits are bass drum hits with hi-hat, and I wanted to emphasis the guitar on the 4th beat of that measure.
■ 00:18:875 (4,1,2) - I for one really dislike speedups and slowdowns on a simple curve like this since they are very easy to miss if you dont pay attention or are just not used to these kinds of movements. How about doing something that makes 00:18:625 (2,3,4) - more loke 00:16:625 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - , as in jumping back and forth? Something like this, to give a basic example of what I mean.
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