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Critical_Star
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Another Lie
Another Lie
Req mod from my queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/458742/start=120
You can ask for re-mod if this mod doesn't satisfied you :)
Green
00:12:116 (12116|3,12116|2,12311|0,12311|1,12506|0,12506|3,12700|2,12895|1) - you can make it like this http://puu.sh/swhBc.jpg since those sound are starting to low
00:27:700 (27700|2,27798|1,27895|0,27993|3) - well, i hear the two notes at first is low sound and the second two notes is higher. What i mean is, you can make it 2,1,3,4
00:28:674 (28674|1,28772|2,28869|0) - you can make them 2,3,4. they are from low to high pitch i guess.
Collab Orange CS's part
00:57:700 - you can add slow timing here, well between x0.75 until x0.85 then place x1.00 here 01:03:934 - (just a suggestion)
Also, notice me when bubbled. I'll shoot some stars
Critical_Star
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Another Lie wrote:

Req mod from my queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/458742/start=120
You can ask for re-mod if this mod doesn't satisfied you :)
Green
00:12:116 (12116|3,12116|2,12311|0,12311|1,12506|0,12506|3,12700|2,12895|1) - you can make it like this http://puu.sh/swhBc.jpg since those sound are starting to low nice
00:27:700 (27700|2,27798|1,27895|0,27993|3) - well, i hear the two notes at first is low sound and the second two notes is higher. What i mean is, you can make it 2,1,3,4 good
00:28:674 (28674|1,28772|2,28869|0) - you can make them 2,3,4. they are from low to high pitch i guess. rearranged here
Collab Orange CS's part
00:57:700 - you can add slow timing here, well between x0.75 until x0.85 then place x1.00 here 01:03:934 - (just a suggestion)hmm, i not planning to add some sv for now, but i will reconsider thanks!
Also, notice me when bubbled. I'll shoot some stars wow thank you for your support :)
thanks you Liee ;)
pocket-Gao
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pocket-Gao
hi :)

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Green
00:46:402 - 这里LN尾加个note好点
没别的问题

Collab Orange Lv.9
00:27:116 - 加1note
00:28:674 - ^
如果是抓琴音 01:07:441 (67441|1) - 是不是多了

Collab Vermilion Lv.15
00:00:233 - LN move to 00:00:428 - (?
00:18:739 - 2 note ,no other drum sounds
00:46:012 - I think you can change a note with a LN ,refer Harddiff
00:51:467 to 00:54:584 - is too hard than other time ;w;

不看stars 感觉2、3难度跨度有点大，但没别的大问题

good luck~
Critical_Star
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pocket-Gao wrote:

hi :)

Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Green
00:46:402 - 这里LN尾加个note好点 好
没别的问题

Collab Orange Lv.9
00:27:116 - 加1note ke yi
00:28:674 - ^ ^

Collab Vermilion Lv.15
00:18:739 - 2 note ,no other drum sounds fixed

不看stars 感觉2、3难度跨度有点大，但没别的大问题 对，不过我觉得没问题吧，gap <1.5

good luck~
感谢小高~ :)
_Stan
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_Stan
hey cs~ :) 来摸了

|1|2|3|4|

Green Lv.5
  1. 00:27:700 - 根据音调，我认为1243比2134更合适，因为00:27:895 (27895|2) - 这个音明显在音调上比00:27:993 (27993|3) - 高
  2. 00:28:577 - 漏音??
  3. 00:29:551 (29551|1) -如果是抓lead piano这里可能ghost了，如果不是就不管这个
  4. 00:31:986 - 根据音调，我认为这里应该这样会更好更合适
    pic
Collab Orange Lv.9
  1. 00:47:181 - to 00:47:571 - 这一部分我觉得将00:47:181 (47181|1,47181|2) - 改成[34]，00:47:571 (47571|2,47571|3) - 改成[23] 更符合鼓点的打击，而且00:47:571 - 还避免了和00:47:863 (47863|0,47863|3) - 这里的连击
  2. 00:59:941 - 这里的double不是很理解
  3. 01:00:038 (60038|2,60038|3) - 你这里的两个note应该是要表达一个piano一个背景音，那么这里你也需要加一个note才对01:00:817 -
  4. 01:01:856 (61856|0,61921|1,61986|2) - 仔细听这里的1/3是不是放错啦
  5. 01:26:824 - add a note at col [1] 这样会有急促的打击感，而且这里确实有音
  6. 01:35:103 (95103|0) - 我建议这个LN结束在01:36:661 - ，将01:36:661 (96661|0) - 移动到col[3]，这样LN可以和Green难度保持一致
Collab Vermilion Lv.15
  1. 01:01:856 (61856|1,61921|2,61986|3) - 仔细听这里的1/3是不是放错啦
  2. 01:26:824 - 漏音
hope it's will helpful and zici !!!! :) :) :)
加油！ :)
Critical_Star
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_Stan wrote:

hey cs~ :) 来摸了

|1|2|3|4|

Green Lv.5
  1. 00:27:700 - 根据音调，我认为1243比2134更合适，因为00:27:895 (27895|2) - 这个音明显在音调上比00:27:993 (27993|3) - 高 我还是觉得2-1-3-4比较好
  2. 00:28:577 - 漏音?? 好
  3. 00:29:551 (29551|1) -如果是抓lead piano这里可能ghost了，如果不是就不管这个 4 这里也有lead piano吧
  4. 00:31:986 - 根据音调，我认为这里应该这样会更好更合适 感觉1-2-3-4这里会比较舒服
    pic
Collab Orange Lv.9
  1. 00:47:181 - to 00:47:571 - 这一部分我觉得将00:47:181 (47181|1,47181|2) - 改成[34]，00:47:571 (47571|2,47571|3) - 改成[23] 更符合鼓点的打击，而且00:47:571 - 还避免了和00:47:863 (47863|0,47863|3) - 这里的连击 ok
  2. 00:59:941 - 这里的double不是很理解 removed
  3. 01:00:038 (60038|2,60038|3) - 你这里的两个note应该是要表达一个piano一个背景音，那么这里你也需要加一个note才对01:00:817 - 我改变single note了
  4. 01:01:856 (61856|0,61921|1,61986|2) - 仔细听这里的1/3是不是放错啦 这里是1/3吧，我听了很多次。看看别人怎么说吧
Collab Vermilion Lv.15
  1. 01:01:856 (61856|1,61921|2,61986|3) - 仔细听这里的1/3是不是放错啦 ^
  2. 01:26:824 - 漏音 ok
hope it's will helpful and zici !!!! :) :) :)
加油！ :)
thanks a lot Stanny :)
Spy
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_Stan wrote:

hey cs~ :) 来摸了

|1|2|3|4|

Collab Orange Lv.9
  1. 01:26:824 - add a note at col [1] 这样会有急促的打击感，而且这里确实有音 有音，可是不是主音
  2. 01:35:103 (95103|0) - 我建议这个LN结束在01:36:661 - ，将01:36:661 (96661|0) - 移动到col[3]，这样LN可以和Green难度保持一致 沒有必要把那個LN延長，這個音確實是這樣的
hope it's will helpful and zici !!!! :) :) :)
加油！ :)
感謝mod :D
Aras
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Aras
yo CS-nya
you can add these to the tag imo :
Setsucom セツコン Ekurearu paradis

here is the source =w= https://remywiki.com/Paradission
Crusts
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Crusts
hi mod from my queue sorry so late

sorry
Orange
00:25:265 (25265|1,25265|3,25265|0,25558|3,25558|0,25558|1,25850|0,25850|3,25850|1,26142|1,26142|0,26142|3) - i think you can add some variety here like |134| |123| and such like that
00:38:025 (38025|2,38220|1,38415|2,38609|3) - i think this should be LN
01:10:947 (70947|2,71142|0,71337|3,71532|1) - ^ for vocal

Vermillion
00:01:889 - add note ? uhh for the piano ? i don't what to call it like you did at 00:05:006 (5006|2) -
01:11:532 - missing note ? maybe add note like orange diff

ok GL
hope can help
no kds pls
Critical_Star
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Crusts wrote:

hi mod from my queue sorry so late np

[box=sorry]Orange
00:25:265 (25265|1,25265|3,25265|0,25558|3,25558|0,25558|1,25850|0,25850|3,25850|1,26142|1,26142|0,26142|3) - i think you can add some variety here like |134| |123| and such like that rearranged a bit
00:38:025 (38025|2,38220|1,38415|2,38609|3) - i think this should be LN to make it simple, i layer all these sound with double, i used short ln in vermilion so i wanted to make it a little different
01:10:947 (70947|2,71142|0,71337|3,71532|1) - ^ for vocal


ok GL
hope can help
no kds pls why not
thanks crust ;)

Aras25 wrote:

yo CS-nya
you can add these to the tag imo :
Setsucom セツコン Ekurearu paradis
here is the source =w= https://remywiki.com/Paradission
lol sure thanks for searching it :)
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2016-12-26 12:30 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2016-12-26 12:30 Kuo Kyoka: irc
2016-12-26 12:30 Kuo Kyoka: link me the map again pls
2016-12-26 12:31 Critical_Star: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128527 BlackY - Paradission]
2016-12-26 12:31 Kuo Kyoka: sby
2016-12-26 12:32 Critical_Star: lol
2016-12-26 12:32 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128527 BlackY - Paradission [Green Lv.5]]
2016-12-26 12:32 Critical_Star: very sb
2016-12-26 12:34 Kuo Kyoka: 00:06:272 - suggestion for balance http://puu.sh/t1fD5/83bf1036b0.jpg
2016-12-26 12:35 Kuo Kyoka: actually pattern lel
2016-12-26 12:35 Critical_Star: 00:40:947 (40947|3,41045|2,41142|1,41239|0,41726|2,41824|3,41921|0,42019|1) -  is it ok for normal?
2016-12-26 12:35 Critical_Star: sure
2016-12-26 12:35 Kuo Kyoka: it's ez
2016-12-26 12:35 Kuo Kyoka: dw
2016-12-26 12:36 Kuo Kyoka: and shit
2016-12-26 12:36 Critical_Star: ke yi
2016-12-26 12:36 Kuo Kyoka: bg is so poor quality
2016-12-26 12:36 Critical_Star: this is best one i can find le
2016-12-26 12:37 Kuo Kyoka: very aji song
2016-12-26 12:37 Critical_Star: do you want to get pero pero
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: yes
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: prprprprpr
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: take this one
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: somehow better
2016-12-26 12:38 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/t1fM0/f818be7cf0.png
2016-12-26 12:39 Critical_Star: thanks meow prpr
2016-12-26 12:39 Kuo Kyoka: 00:20:687 (20687|1,21077|3) - this part
2016-12-26 12:39 Kuo Kyoka: better make it full 1/2 like the previous
2016-12-26 12:39 Kuo Kyoka: because follow only kick now is somehow confused to me
2016-12-26 12:41 Kuo Kyoka: 1/2 till here 00:22:051 - 
2016-12-26 12:41 Critical_Star: 00:22:051 -  can i break here?
2016-12-26 12:41 Critical_Star: ok i added the 1/2 till  00:21:856 -
2016-12-26 12:41 Kuo Kyoka: oh that's fine
2016-12-26 12:42 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-12-26 12:42 Kuo Kyoka: if you break there then maybe 00:21:272 - too
2016-12-26 12:43 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:960 - wub sound on here too
2016-12-26 12:43 Critical_Star: ok
2016-12-26 12:43 Critical_Star: hmm
2016-12-26 12:44 Kuo Kyoka: 00:52:635 (52635|1,52635|0) - move to 34 due to pitch
2016-12-26 12:44 Critical_Star: maybe not , i think i will catch wub + kick here better
2016-12-26 12:44 Critical_Star: 00:48:058 (48058|0,48155|1,48252|0) -  like this one is different
2016-12-26 12:44 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2016-12-26 12:45 Critical_Star: ok
2016-12-26 12:45 Kuo Kyoka: piano part is beautiful af
2016-12-26 12:45 Kuo Kyoka: 01:15:817 - missing a sound on here
2016-12-26 12:46 Critical_Star: taka best
2016-12-26 12:46 Critical_Star: i mean BlackY
2016-12-26 12:46 Critical_Star: oh yea added
2016-12-26 12:47 Kuo Kyoka: taka best
2016-12-26 12:47 Critical_Star: btw 01:25:363 (85363|3) -  this one i moved to 3
2016-12-26 12:47 Kuo Kyoka: 01:24:584 (84584|1) - move this to 3 is better than that
2016-12-26 12:47 Critical_Star: best
2016-12-26 12:48 Kuo Kyoka: 01:46:012 (106012|3,106012|0,106402|2,106791|0,107181|3,107376|2) - same
2016-12-26 12:49 Critical_Star: yep
2016-12-26 12:51 Kuo Kyoka: shit my cat gonna took my lunch
2016-12-26 12:52 Critical_Star: lol
2016-12-26 12:54 Critical_Star: i like your cat
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: 00:07:830 - this part
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/t1gtG/4488c39ec0.jpg
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: for balance i think
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: my cat bitxh
2016-12-26 12:54 Kuo Kyoka: i like my cs mommy more 'w'
2016-12-26 12:55 Critical_Star: nice
2016-12-26 12:55 Critical_Star: 'w'
2016-12-26 12:56 Kuo Kyoka: 00:24:778 (24778|2,24778|0,24778|1) - 3 notes?
2016-12-26 12:56 Critical_Star: but still i will take your lunch too
2016-12-26 12:56 Critical_Star: my bad, removed a note
2016-12-26 12:56 Kuo Kyoka: i eat cs prprpr
2016-12-26 12:58 Critical_Star: <!–・”(>0<)”・ –>
2016-12-26 13:00 Kuo Kyoka: oh the rest are neat
2016-12-26 13:00 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128526 BlackY - Paradission [Collab Vermilion Lv.15]]
2016-12-26 13:00 Kuo Kyoka: 00:00:428 - start on here is better
2016-12-26 13:02 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:058 (48058|2,48058|0,48155|2,48155|1,48252|3,48252|0) - this one present for wub sound
2016-12-26 13:02 Kuo Kyoka: but somehow not fit to me
2016-12-26 13:03 Critical_Star: that is fc part
2016-12-26 13:05 Critical_Star: i will send all your suggestion to him later
2016-12-26 13:06 Kuo Kyoka: actually i would like to try this http://puu.sh/t1gTn/545320d527.jpg
2016-12-26 13:06 Kuo Kyoka: but some how hard too
2016-12-26 13:06 Critical_Star: seems fit better to the sound
2016-12-26 13:07 Critical_Star: but i will tell him to see whether if he wanted to cahnge
2016-12-26 13:07 Critical_Star: change
2016-12-26 13:07 Kuo Kyoka: my suggestion always shit lel
2016-12-26 13:07 Kuo Kyoka: but it's his opinion to change it
2016-12-26 13:08 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:467 - hue
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: ye
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: that
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: actually
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: i only fc once
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: and i cant anymore
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: lol
2016-12-26 13:08 Critical_Star: hard
2016-12-26 13:08 Kuo Kyoka: haha
2016-12-26 13:08 Kuo Kyoka: i can;t even fc it
2016-12-26 13:09 Critical_Star: that is also fc pattern
2016-12-26 13:09 Kuo Kyoka: 01:07:343 - add a note for piano?
2016-12-26 13:09 Kuo Kyoka: gg 
2016-12-26 13:10 Kuo Kyoka: 01:31:207 (91207|2,91207|0,91207|3,91402|1,91597|2,91791|3) - 
2016-12-26 13:10 Critical_Star: added to the suggestion
2016-12-26 13:10 Kuo Kyoka: this one feel somehow weird
2016-12-26 13:10 Kuo Kyoka: compare with 01:30:428 (90428|3,90720|0,91012|2,91109|1) - 
2016-12-26 13:11 Critical_Star: hmm
2016-12-26 13:12 Critical_Star: i think he catch other sound here
2016-12-26 13:13 Kuo Kyoka: 01:38:804 - 
2016-12-26 13:13 Kuo Kyoka: 1/8?
2016-12-26 13:14 Critical_Star: ya i think so
2016-12-26 13:14 Critical_Star: i hear 1/8 too
2016-12-26 13:14 Kuo Kyoka: ending was a killer
2016-12-26 13:15 Critical_Star: there is 4 piano sound there
2016-12-26 13:15 Kuo Kyoka: yup
2016-12-26 13:15 Critical_Star: 01:45:233 (105233|1,105233|0,105330|3,105330|0,105428|3,105428|1,105525|0,105525|2,105622|1,105622|2,105720|3,105720|0,105817|3,105817|1,105915|0,105915|2,106012|3,106012|0,106012|1) -
2016-12-26 13:16 Critical_Star: what do you think
2016-12-26 13:16 Kuo Kyoka: basically overdone to me
2016-12-26 13:16 Kuo Kyoka: but meh idk
2016-12-26 13:18 Kuo Kyoka: what about http://puu.sh/t1hk6/905dbc7f17.jpg
2016-12-26 13:18 Critical_Star: i will let him know too
Critical_Star
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Collab Vermillion Lv.15
From KK suggestiion:
- 00:48:058 (48058|2,48058|0,48155|2,48155|1,48252|3,48252|0) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/t1gTn/545320d527.jpg
- 01:07:343 - add one more note for piano? ok
- 01:31:207 (91207|2,91207|0,91207|3,91402|1,91597|2,91791|3) - this is weird compared to 01:30:428 (90428|3,90720|0,91012|2,91109|1) - ok
- 01:38:804 (98804|0,98869|1,98934|2,98999|3) - 1/8? ok
- 01:45:233 (105233|1,105233|0,105330|3,105330|0,105428|1,105428|3,105525|0,105525|2,105622|1,105622|2,105720|0,105720|3,105817|1,105817|3,105915|0,105915|2) - how about this? > http://puu.sh/t1hk6/905dbc7f17.jpg

EDIT: updated FC part
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BlackY - Paradission [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled

Congratulations!
Critical_Star
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

BlackY - Paradission [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled

Congratulations!
thanks~ :) :) :)
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mod from YaHoo

@chicken
00:47:960 (47960|0,48058|0,48155|2,48252|3) -
00:48:155 (48155|2,48252|3) - those two should be in jack instead of 00:48:058 (48058|2,48155|2) -
00:48:155 (48155|2,48252|3) - those two should be in jack instead of 00:48:058 (48058|2,48155|2) -
01:45:330 (105330|3,105428|3,105525|2,105622|2,105720|3,105817|3) - this still
01:45:622 (105622|2,105720|0) - CTRL+J should fix

@spy
01:36:661 (96661|3,96954|2,97246|2,97343|3,97441|1,97635|2,97830|3,98025|2,98220|3) - really unbalance rearranged
Last edited by Critical_Star , edited 1 time in total.
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Critical_Star wrote:

:)

mod from YaHoo

@chicken
00:47:960 (47960|0,48058|0,48155|2,48252|3) -
00:48:155 (48155|2,48252|3) - those two should be in jack instead of 00:48:058 (48058|2,48155|2) -
00:48:155 (48155|2,48252|3) - those two should be in jack instead of 00:48:058 (48058|2,48155|2) -
01:45:330 (105330|3,105428|3,105525|2,105622|2,105720|3,105817|3) - this still - x
01:45:622 (105622|2,105720|0) - CTRL+J should fix - Above and this one, I want to keep because I made jumphand stream
Thanks for mod 'w'

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... _Lv.15.osu
Sandalphon
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Sandalphon
IRC with cs and nothing found
Let's go .M.
Critical_Star
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irc with YaHao
22:20 YaHao: ok here i am
22:20 YaHao: just realise collab diff, how to irc
22:21 Critical_Star: LOL
22:21 Critical_Star: now u know
22:21 Critical_Star: but i can ask direct to them for your mod
22:22 YaHao: whatever, lets irc first
22:22 YaHao: send me the map via qq can?
22:22 Critical_Star: ok
22:26 Critical_Star: uplopading
22:28 Critical_Star: sent le
22:30 *YaHao is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128525 BlackY - Paradission]
22:31 YaHao: widescreen support in normal
22:31 Critical_Star: metadata should be good
22:31 Critical_Star: closed for all
22:33 YaHao: 00:11:532 (11532|0,11532|1,11824|2,11824|1,12116|2,12116|3,12311|1,12311|2,12506|1,12506|0) - change this part so the player can notice the snaps are changing
22:33 YaHao: 00:12:116 (12116|3,12116|2,12311|2,12311|1,12506|0,12506|1) -
22:33 YaHao: 1/2 trill will work
22:34 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/t7ECa/5a4a425086.png
22:35 YaHao: cool
22:35 YaHao: 00:59:259 - LN?
22:36 YaHao: 01:02:765 - LN as well? then move this 01:03:739 (63739|1) -  to 4th col, make it jack with 01:03:934 (63934|3) -  to emphasize the snare drum
22:36 Critical_Star: think i will leave it as 1/1 layering since i  catch other sound here
22:36 Critical_Star: hmm
22:37 Critical_Star: 01:02:376 (62376|2) -  think i change this as LN then
22:37 YaHao: done
22:37 Critical_Star: http://puu.sh/t7EHp/07c102e261.png
22:39 *YaHao is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128525 BlackY - Paradission [CS vs. Spy.R's Orange Lv.9]]
22:40 Critical_Star: 'w'
22:41 YaHao: 00:46:597 (46597|3) - extend this till00:46:986 - ?
22:41 YaHao: same length with 00:46:012 (46012|3) -
22:42 Critical_Star: yep
22:43 YaHao: 00:46:012 (46012|3) - really unbalance
22:44 Critical_Star: i thought they have the same sound here
22:44 Critical_Star: 00:46:012 (46012|3,46597|3) - 
22:44 YaHao: i copy the wrong timing
22:44 YaHao: lmao
22:44 Critical_Star: :^
22:45 YaHao: 01:36:661 (96661|3,96954|2,97246|2,97343|3,97441|1,97635|2,97830|3,98025|2,98220|3) -
22:45 YaHao: this i mean
22:46 *YaHao is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1128526 BlackY - Paradission [WhiteCS vs. BlackFC Vermilion Lv.15]]
22:46 Critical_Star: ok i let him know
22:49 YaHao: 00:47:960 (47960|0,48058|0,48155|2,48252|3) -
22:49 YaHao: 00:48:155 (48155|2,48252|3) - those two should be in jack instead of 00:48:058 (48058|2,48155|2) -
22:50 YaHao: 00:48:252 (48252|0,48350|0) - and not this
22:51 Critical_Star: noted
22:52 YaHao: 01:45:330 (105330|3,105428|3,105525|2,105622|2,105720|3,105817|3) - this still
22:53 YaHao: 01:45:622 (105622|2,105720|0) - CTRL+J should fix
22:53 YaHao: all good

thanks! 'W'
Feerum
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Feerum
Greetings and grats on qualify!

So, i just have a little objection about the Tags.
I can see you got most of the Tags probably from this wiki side.

I think following Tags should not be in the Beatmap:

HAPPY☆LUCKY☆YEAPPY
New York EVOLVED
ULTRA HAPPY MEGAMIX
VISION
超越してしまった彼女と其を生み落した理由
This are complete different songs and most, when not all, are by different artists. The only thing that these song's share is a vocal sample (according to the wiki website)

Have you any other reason why you have these tags? When yes, please explain it to me!
Critical_Star
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Critical_Star

Feerum wrote:

Greetings and grats on qualify!

So, i just have a little objection about the Tags.
I can see you got most of the Tags probably from this wiki side.

I think following Tags should not be in the Beatmap:

HAPPY☆LUCKY☆YEAPPY
New York EVOLVED
ULTRA HAPPY MEGAMIX
VISION
超越してしまった彼女と其を生み落した理由
This are complete different songs and most, when not all, are by different artists. The only thing that these song's share is a vocal sample (according to the wiki website)

Have you any other reason why you have these tags? When yes, please explain it to me!
sorry this is my mistake.. I overlooked it, can you help me to fix the tag :o
sorry for the trouble :(
PANDAAAAAAAA
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BN 常常查看 BN 的图。1-2 月他们会 rank 他们的图。just opinion, ok you can hate me now.
Akasha-
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Akasha-
Let's have a cup of tea
Feerum
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Feerum
Disqualified to fix the Tag mistake.
As soon it's fixed i will re-qualify it directly for you!
Critical_Star
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Critical_Star
fixed :)
Feerum
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Feerum
Tags are fixed, here's the heart!
Akasha-
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Akasha-
new world record

also you forgot to add KONAMI you can kill me now
Aruel
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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

new world record

also you forgot to add KONAMI you can kill me now
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Valentrixe
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Valentrixe
hi

[WhiteCS vs. BlackFC Vermillion Lv.15]
  1. 00:02:376 (2376|1,2376|0) - i don't get it, what're you trying to follow? the synth? the next double should be on 00:02:668 - then, since 00:02:571 - contain no synth, only bass (if i'm right), and you need to add double in 00:02:473 - if you actually following the bass. choose one of them
  2. 00:01:986 (1986|3) - ??? what's this? you skipped all the same sound in 00:08:220 - , you can just use single note to follow the main synth like 00:02:084 (2084|1,2181|2,2278|3,2863|2,2960|1,3058|0) - , and ignoring the idkwhatitscalled in 00:01:986 (1986|3)
  3. 00:02:765 (2765|3) - if you do agree with ^ , then the only reason to add this note is to following the lower synth, which you're not following in 00:02:668 - , so better delete this note, otherwise, add note in every blue line in this section
  4. 00:03:155 - i would be more appreciate if you copy the exact pattern in 00:01:598 - since the melody is actually same. the music itself is repetitive in this part
  5. 00:04:226 (4226|1) - inconsistent with previous stanza
  6. 00:07:148 (7148|1,7343|0) - what are these notes is stand for? ugh
  7. 00:10:265 (10265|1,10558|0) - no significant change in the music but why did you make it different with previous stanza?

asdfasdfasdf take a quick look on the rest of the map and i found a lot of errors
00:33:934 (33934|1,34129|1,34324|1,34519|1,34713|1,34908|1,35103|1,35298|1,35687|1,35882|1,36077|1,36272|1,36467|1,36661|1,36856|1,37051|1) - this anchor in example,
00:35:687 (35687|1,35785|2,35882|1,35882|3,35980|2,36077|1) - these have different melody with 00:36:467 (36467|1,36564|2,36661|1,36661|3,36759|2,36856|1) - but why they have the same pattern?

and why no hold in 00:42:116 - ?

.. 00:46:597 (46597|3) - should be end at 00:47:376

01:13:285 (73285|0,73285|2,73285|3) - looks like randomly placed triple for me
asfasdfsdf bad stream
i like the jack idea to follow the main synth tho, but this stream need more consistency check

in fact, this diff DOES need more consistency check --
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Critical_Star
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Valentrixe wrote:

hi

[WhiteCS vs. BlackFC Vermillion Lv.15] i am sad u cross me out :<
  1. 00:02:376 (2376|1,2376|0) - i don't get it, what're you trying to follow? the synth? the next double should be on 00:02:668 - then, since 00:02:571 - contain no synth, only bass (if i'm right), and you need to add double in 00:02:473 - if you actually following the bass. choose one of them
  2. 00:01:986 (1986|3) - ??? what's this? you skipped all the same sound in 00:08:220 - , you can just use single note to follow the main synth like 00:02:084 (2084|1,2181|2,2278|3,2863|2,2960|1,3058|0) - , and ignoring the idkwhatitscalled in 00:01:986 (1986|3)
  3. 00:02:765 (2765|3) - if you do agree with ^ , then the only reason to add this note is to following the lower synth, which you're not following in 00:02:668 - , so better delete this note, otherwise, add note in every blue line in this section
  4. 00:03:155 - i would be more appreciate if you copy the exact pattern in 00:01:598 - since the melody is actually same. the music itself is repetitive in this part
  5. 00:04:226 (4226|1) - inconsistent with previous stanza
  6. 00:07:148 (7148|1,7343|0) - what are these notes is stand for? ugh
  7. 00:10:265 (10265|1,10558|0) - no significant change in the music but why did you make it different with previous stanza?

asdfasdfasdf take a quick look on the rest of the map and i found a lot of errors
00:33:934 (33934|1,34129|1,34324|1,34519|1,34713|1,34908|1,35103|1,35298|1,35687|1,35882|1,36077|1,36272|1,36467|1,36661|1,36856|1,37051|1) - this anchor in example, does it really feel hard to play? is just a common stream with LN here so i cant really avoid that
00:35:687 (35687|1,35785|2,35882|1,35882|3,35980|2,36077|1) - these have different melody with 00:36:467 (36467|1,36564|2,36661|1,36661|3,36759|2,36856|1) - but why they have the same pattern? i know but i choose a balance snare stream here instead of catching the melody, this shouldnt be a big problem

and why no hold in 00:42:116 - ? i am emphasizing 00:42:506 (42506|0,42506|1,42603|2,42603|3,42798|2,42798|1,42993|1,42993|0,43187|0,43187|1) - this melody with double here, so i didnt use any LN here

.. 00:46:597 (46597|3) - should be end at 00:47:376 there is another long sound here u can heard till 00:47:571 -

01:13:285 (73285|0,73285|2,73285|3) - looks like randomly placed triple for me it is main melody + kick here u can see i used triple at 01:14:843 - 01:16:402 -
asfasdfsdf bad stream i am really sorry if this stream plays bad for you, at least it play pretty nice for me.
i like the jack idea to follow the main synth tho, but this stream need more consistency check

in fact, this diff DOES need more consistency check -- maybe it have a different note usage at some part since this is a collab diff, where we might used different way to map here
to be honest i can't really find if there is any wrong with it.
Aruel
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Valentrixe wrote:

hi

[WhiteCS vs. BlackFC Vermillion Lv.15]
  1. 00:02:376 (2376|1,2376|0) - i don't get it, what're you trying to follow? the synth? the next double should be on 00:02:668 - then, since 00:02:571 -contain no synth, only bass (if i'm right), and you need to add double in 00:02:473 - if you actually following the bass. choose one of them - I didn't follow drum, I followed main piano and there's definitely has a sound that I followed
  2. 00:01:986 (1986|3) - ??? what's this? you skipped all the same sound in 00:08:220 - , you can just use single note to follow the main synth like 00:02:084 (2084|1,2181|2,2278|3,2863|2,2960|1,3058|0) - , and ignoring the idkwhatitscalled in 00:01:986 (1986|3) - Seems you never read what I intended, I mainly use 2 notes which has just piano, I never 2 note'd on drum in this part as you can see.
  3. 00:02:765 (2765|3) - if you do agree with ^ , then the only reason to add this note is to following the lower synth, which you're not following in 00:02:668 - , so better delete this note, otherwise, add note in every blue line in this section - I didn't agree with mod on above and there's just a synth.
  4. 00:03:155 - i would be more appreciate if you copy the exact pattern in 00:01:598 - since the melody is actually same. the music itself is repetitive in this part - For hand balance and it will be boring if I just use same pattern on above too.
  5. 00:04:226 (4226|1) - inconsistent with previous stanza 00:02:668 - If you mean here, they are liternally different. 00:04:226 (4226|1) -This part has more strong syhtn than 00:04:226 (4226|1) - here. In my personal opinion, even I could feel the difference while playing
  6. 00:07:148 (7148|1,7343|0) - what are these notes is stand for? ugh Should I explain about it? even it isn't ghost note and unreasonable notes?
  7. 00:10:265 (10265|1,10558|0) - no significant change in the music but why did you make it different with previous stanza? - I feel the drum is getting more stronger from 00:10:168 - here.

asdfasdfasdf take a quick look on the rest of the map and i found a lot of errors
00:33:934 (33934|1,34129|1,34324|1,34519|1,34713|1,34908|1,35103|1,35298|1,35687|1,35882|1,36077|1,36272|1,36467|1,36661|1,36856|1,37051|1) - this anchor in example, - I really have no idea why this is an error. Just heavy pattern is an error? Look, there's loooong LN and we have only 3 columns and wants to emphasis the kick and synth both. So I thought and thought again and made this pattern and I ever didn't feel this pattern is awkward and uncomfortable or unbalanced or etc.
00:35:687 (35687|1,35785|2,35882|1,35882|3,35980|2,36077|1) - these have different melody with 00:36:467 (36467|1,36564|2,36661|1,36661|3,36759|2,36856|1) - but why they have the same pattern? I have no idea what I should reply on this mod. I do think that it won't be a problem. No issue on playable and nothing awkwardness and unrankable issues. This is just unreasonable.

and why no hold in 00:42:116 - ? - This one is not my part so I'll leave it to CS

.. 00:46:597 (46597|3) - should be end at 00:47:376 There's sound like dubstep which finishs on 00:47:571 - here with strong bass.

01:13:285 (73285|0,73285|2,73285|3) - looks like randomly placed triple for me - This is also not my parts but I guess CS didn't want to make jack with triple+double. As you can see, when there are many doubles, CS didn't used triple but when there are not many doubles, CS used triple, this is my guessing.

asfasdfsdf bad stream

i like the jack idea to follow the main synth tho, but this stream need more consistency check

in fact, this diff DOES need more consistency check --
First, you MUST not decide that map is bad or not with only your playability.
Second, inconsistency is due to of this map is collab. CS and I have definitely different style and I even think that is the charming point of collab (Can feel which part made by who or who)

I think you should consider what mapper intended before you do a mod.
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Valentrixe
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Valentrixe

Fresh Chicken wrote:

First, you MUST not decide that map is bad or not with only your playability. | i didn't judged it by its playability, i judged it by its consistency
Second, inconsistency is due to of this map is collab. CS and I have definitely different style and I even think that is the charming point of collab (Can feel which part made by who or who) | and yeah when i talking about consistency i didn't compare your part with cs part, i'm talking about inconsistecy in your own part

I think you should consider what mapper intended before you do a mod.
also i find it kinda funny when you said you didn't feel any unbalanced issue in the pattern when the pattern need to press 8 times 1/2 notes in the same lane twice

ah well sorry for bothering anyway, thanks for the reply tho
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