Gravey- wrote:

Untick > Song setup > Design > 'Widescreen Support' (Only be used for storyboards) | ok
|1|2|3|4|
[EZ]
00:25:609 (25609|3,25984|0) - Ctrl + G for pattern consistency | nope
01:59:359 (119359|3) - Move to |3| for pattern consistency, notice the next pattern. | ok
[NM]
00:45:671 (45671|3) - Move to |3| to give more expressible pattern such in this part the 2 noted Left - right | Right - left rhythmic pattern as you did. | ok
[HD]
00:42:671 (42671|1,42671|2,42671|0) - Move to the right by 1 column for consistency | ok
Lol i am speechless. . Nice map! Good luck!
You may not warrant this post a kudos if my MOD doesn't helps~ I just can't lmao imo it's all good af the consistency, the pattern arrangement skldsjkldsaljk

Joenen wrote:

Nice map, hope its get even better and get ranked

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hello, request from queue
Column : 1-2-3-4

NM

00:30:109 - make it 2, since this sound is similar with 00:24:484 (24484|0,24484|2) - (just take one sample), i am not taking it as seeing it's snare or drum anything else, but see this as a consistency rhythm with first time pattern | ok
00:32:734 - add a note here, make it consistent like 00:20:734 (20734|3,20734|0,21109|2,21109|3) - (one of a sample) | ok
00:35:921 (35921|3,36015|2,36109|1) - the usage of narrow stair pattern at here inconsistent with pattern in 00:20:359 (20359|1,20546|2) - while at | changed00:20:359 (20359|1,20546|2) - should use narrow stair pattern too but you don't, this not only happen in this part but many of it! | nope, I catch another sound
00:43:421 (43421|1,43515|0) - make them like 00:40:421 (40421|0,40515|1) - | ok
00:44:359 - until 00:45:015 - they have same sound and you make notes at 00:44:734 (44734|0,44827|1,44921|2) - , suggest you to delete them and just make them into break time for a moment | ok
00:48:109 - at here make it 2 and the LN should be start at 00:48:296 - ; 2 because to make it consistent like other pattern | no, it's absolutely started at 00:48:103 -
00:53:734 (53734|1) - consider move this note to 00:53:827 - at the same column since i think 2 note it's not necessary with the sound | no it's a beat here and 00:53:827 have no sound, why I make a note here?
00:57:109 - consider you to make this 2 , i think it's a nice pattern and fit with the song is 2 note 1 note 2 note | no it's good now
00:58:609 - ^ | ^
01:00:109 - ^ | ^
01:01:609 - ^ | ^
01:07:984 - Arrange like this the LN, I think this 01:08:359 (68359|0) - (click after u apply) is a sound that appear sudden and happen a moment and then still continue with the main LN 01:07:984 (67984|2) - and continue with the violin sound | that seems great
01:09:859 - until 01:10:046 - add LN here, just like i do in my screenshoot(this LN take sound "tek tek tek") | For NM , it's not neccesery
01:11:359 - until 01:11:546 - ^ | ^
01:23:171 (83171|0) - make this into a pattern with 01:23:359 (83359|2,83546|1,83734|0,83734|3) - just like you do in 01:20:171 (80171|3,80359|2,80546|1) - | ok
01:29:265 - add a note at column 2, i guess these notes 01:29:077 (89077|3,89171|2) - feel lose a note after it, that they shouldn't be seperated with 01:29:359 (89359|0,89452|1) - | no, I catch the light music sounds here
01:29:921 (89921|3) - move to 1 to make it into a pattern with 01:29:640 (89640|3,89734|2,89827|1) - | no, accroding to the music tone, it's high and put it at col 4 is good
01:30:296 (90296|0,90390|1,90577|2,90671|3,90859|1,90952|0,91140|3) - i can't understand the pattern with the song | it's another music, you can hear it cuz it's so light and high
01:45:671 - add a note at column 3, feel lose connection with the note | ok
02:03:109 (123109|1,123109|0) - this part should be the continue with 02:02:827 (122827|1,122921|2,123015|3) - , feel kinda of it | ok
02:06:765 - add a note at column 1 to make it consistent with 02:08:265 (128265|2,128359|1,128452|2,128546|1) -
02:09:015 (129015|2,129109|1,129296|2) - ^(make it consistent) | ok
02:09:859 (129859|1,129952|2,130046|3) - ^ | ok
02:10:609 (130609|3) - move to 02:10:796 - at same column, feel not get if it 2 2 2 | no, i wanna keep same pattern

EZ

00:23:359 (23359|1,23734|2) - ctrl H them , they should not connect with 00:19:609 (19609|3,19984|0) - just like 00:15:859 | ok(15859|1,16234|2,16609|0,16984|3,17359|1,17734|2) -
00:37:796 (37796|0,38171|2) - change them to LN | ok
00:45:109 (45109|0) - just like NM| it's same with NM already...
00:55:890 (55890|0) - shouldn't this should be place at 00:55:984 - | no it is, it's bg sounds.. the pads
01:27:296 (87296|0,87671|2) - change to LN (until 01:27:484 - and until 01:27:859 - ) | ok
01:39:296 (99296|0,99671|2) - ^ | ok

Critical_Star wrote:

Hai Stan, 不好意思来晚了


General
HP/OD suggestion
NM 7.5 7.5 |ok
this would be much balance for all difficulty

-possible unused hitsound > cymbal whistle.wavok, delete it

EZ

00:37:796 (37796|0,38171|2) - missing LR_Snare Hit
01:03:109 (63109|0) - the long sound end at 01:04:046 - i think is better to end here
01:06:109 (66109|0) - end at 01:07:046 -
01:27:859 (87859|3) - how about http://puu.sh/sxhmn/8cb48505ff.jpg ? it gives another pattern variation here
01:39:859 (99859|3) - same thing u can apply here > http://puu.sh/sxhpX/ac565800d9.jpg
01:45:671 - missing note? sound are pretty obvious here
01:53:359 (113359|1,113359|2) - 01:54:859 (114859|1,114859|3) - 01:56:359 (116359|2,116359|3) - 01:57:859 (117859|3,117859|1) - missing hitsound
02:17:171 (137171|3,137171|0) - maybe make them into 2-3 to differentiate the crash sound here with 02:16:609 (136609|0,136609|3) -

all fixed

NM

00:27:671 (27671|1,27765|2,27859|3,27952|2,28046|1,28421|2,28515|1,28609|0,28702|1,28796|2) - i found a little inconsistency here, i see u follow a short 1/4 sound here but u did not follow the same thing again at 00:30:671 (30671|3,30765|2,30859|1,31421|1,31515|2,31609|0) - < for example, but actually i will suggest to reduce 1/4 here to make it a little more friendly for novice player.
00:35:921 (35921|3,36015|2,36109|1,36671|1,36765|2,36859|1,37421|2,37515|1,37609|2) - ^ for example this part is nice for NM
00:44:359 - would be better to add a note here, can't see any difference sound from 00:44:452 (44452|1,44546|2,44640|3,44734|0,44827|1,44921|2) - also player tend to catch the timing at white line easier
00:50:359 - feels a little off to ignore the kick sound here like 00:50:452 (50452|2,50546|3,50640|2) - , would highly suggest to add a note
01:08:359 (68359|2) - to make it simple for NM, i suggest to end at 01:08:546 -
01:28:984 - there is the same sound u are catching here, better not to miss it
01:31:609 - 01:34:984 - same here ^
01:40:609 - till 01:51:109 - i think that sound like 01:41:359 (101359|3,101359|0) - etc could be reduced to single note. i know it is suitable to use double note but i think it would be better to reduce the note density here compared with HD diff and also here is a calm piano part.
02:06:671 - feels a sudden pattern flow break here, i would had expect a 1/2 note here while playing
02:09:015 (129015|2,129109|1) - how about making them into 2-4? just suggestion
02:09:671 - could add another note here like before

all fixed

HD

00:29:452 - missing note?
00:32:827 - why not add the 1/4 sound here?
00:34:702 (34702|2) - remove? is just the wub sound here.
00:49:046 (49046|1,49140|2,49234|3,49234|0,49327|1,49421|2,49515|1,49609|2,49609|0,49609|3) - maybe just CTRL+H to make a mirror pattern from 00:43:046 (43046|1,43140|2,43234|0,43234|3,43327|1,43421|2,43515|1,43609|3,43609|2,43609|0) -
00:55:609 - add another note? sound is a little special here
01:39:484 - would be nice to have a single or double note here for kick
02:02:921 - should be double note here too for kick

all fixed

MX

00:43:515 (43515|2,43609|2) - feels a little uncomfortable to catch it with sv here since this is a 1/4 jack. i would have suggest to remove a LN at 00:43:609 (43609|2) - for a better playabilty, but still it is fine for me play either way | same part in diff HD have 3 notes, so MX should keep it same, and I think it's fine, no too much jacks here
00:48:015 (48015|2,48109|2) - here too, maybe remove 00:48:109 (48109|2) - | ^
00:49:515 (49515|1,49609|1) - and so on if u agree | ^
01:15:015 (75015|3,75109|3) - like before, feels a little uncomfortable for me but still your choice to change it or not | ^
01:19:796 (79796|2,79796|1) - shouldnt here to be a break like 01:16:796 - ? it could be nice with a sv break here | there have FX sounds so I keep it, and I do sv at middle of this part. the position you said have continuous FX sounds so I keep and no change
01:25:796 (85796|1,85796|2) - like before if u agree ^ | ^
01:46:609 - how about reduce a note here? triple hit here should be enough | it's right

Critical_Star wrote:

Recheck

EZ
00:44:734 (44734|2) - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast
01:02:171 (62171|1,62546|1,62921|3) - ^
01:08:359 (68359|2,68546|3) - ^
01:09:671 (69671|1) - ^
01:11:171 (71171|2) - ^

NM
00:22:421 (22421|1) - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast
00:44:734 - ^
00:44:359 (44359|0,44452|1,44546|2,44640|3,44734|0) - u missed all the hitsound here, u can refer to your MX diff
00:47:171 (47171|3) - add LR_Kick Hard Fast
00:51:765 (51765|2,51952|2) - add LR_Snare Hit
00:53:265 (53265|1,53452|3) - ^
00:54:765 (54765|1,54952|1) - ^
00:56:265 (56265|2,56452|0) - ^
01:28:609 - till 01:37:609 - maybe at least layer LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast for white tick note
01:58:890 (118890|2) - 02:00:390 (120390|1) - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast
02:01:890 (121890|2) - 02:02:921 (122921|2,123015|3) - ^

HD
00:12:109 (12109|3) - overlap note
00:28:796 (28796|3) - add LR Kick Hard Fast
00:31:796 (31796|3) - ^
00:34:796 (34796|2) - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast
00:36:296 (36296|2) - ^
00:36:952 (36952|2) - add LR_Snare Hit
02:00:390 (120390|2) - 02:01:890 (121890|3) - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast
02:02:921 - here should be double too for kick
02:03:015 (123015|1) - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast
02:06:109 - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast + LR_kick bass
02:06:859 - 02:07:609 - 02:08:359 - ^
02:08:734 - 02:09:484 - 02:10:234 - LR_Drum Hit Echo

MX
00:28:796 (28796|3) - add LR_Kick Hard Fast
00:31:796 (31796|0) - ^
00:34:796 (34796|3) - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast
00:36:296 - ^
01:02:921 (62921|0) - add LR_Kick Drop Wet Fast

u might wanna recheck the hitsound again

thank you so much ! cstar~ REALLY

Critical_Star wrote:

Recheck again and seems fine for me BB

Fresh Chicken wrote:

ok

IamKwaN wrote:

Would you link me the metadata source? As I couldn't find any in your post replying Critical_Star's mod.

IamKwaN wrote:

I guess I should just leave it because I couldn't find anything on the web and seems like this song does not exist in this universe. lol

Congratulations on qualification!