1. widescreen support统一下 怕他萌那个diff没点 要不都去掉吧

1. 00:20:330 - 这里改下节奏不用折返滑条了避免让00:21:132 - 在滑条尾巴上 试试这样 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6572396
2. 00:29:955 (3,4) - ^
3. 01:07:014 - 加个圈 和01:12:148 - 保持一致

1. cs3.5吧 过渡好点

1. 00:49:848 (2,3) - 这种ctrl+g换下节奏听起来自然点吧

1. 00:47:923 (1,2,3) - 这里也是bass 00:45:677 - 一下跟一下不跟不如都别跟了
2. 01:05:731 (4,5) - 怎么忽然变近了 放远点
3. 01:26:426 - 这里有一声吧 怎么就一个1拍滑条带过了

1. 00:15:517 (5,6,7) - 放33 353flow会好点吧
2. 00:18:244 (4) - 放416 8那边? 比上一个滑条尾巴高点会好打
3. 00:28:191 (3,4) - 这种还是太近了 滑条后面的圈放远点吧
4. 00:28:191 (3,4) - 感觉ctrl+g下会好打点
5. 00:51:453 - 这里有声鼓 不过要是我的话00:51:292 - 这里会空着 要是要突出人声就不管这个了吧
6. 01:15:677 (1,2,3,4) - 这里稍微放远点吧 前面那么远这里忽然变近太蛋疼了

ZZHBOY wrote:

水摸得 谢谢哈
[General]

1. widescreen support统一下 怕他萌那个diff没点 要不都去掉吧 善，小鱼的等他自己看看

[Normal]

1. cs3.5吧 过渡好点 好像我之前就是这样的……

[Hard]

1. 00:49:848 (2,3) - 这种ctrl+g换下节奏听起来自然点吧 改了，也改了排版

[Insane]

1. 00:15:517 (5,6,7) - 放33 353flow会好点吧 觉得现在也不错，况且还有对称
2. 00:18:244 (4) - 放416 8那边? 比上一个滑条尾巴高点会好打 改了，还有后边的1也改了
3. 00:28:191 (3,4) - 这种还是太近了 滑条后面的圈放远点吧 不好，要是改就跟之前不一样了
4. 00:28:191 (3,4) - 感觉ctrl+g下会好打点 同理还是算了
5. 00:51:453 - 这里有声鼓 不过要是我的话00:51:292 - 这里会空着 要是要突出人声就不管这个了吧 你说得对，是在跟人声所以还是不改了，话说00:51:292 - 空着太奇怪了
6. 01:15:677 (1,2,3,4) - 这里稍微放远点吧 前面那么远这里忽然变近太蛋疼了 不想那么难，就先这样了，以后可能会改……

好 善

1. 可能是我的錯覺，覺得BG有點糊 orz
2. 不考慮加個靜音的sliderslide嗎?

1. 00:41:025 不加nc嗎 較高的難度好像有這個梗 (?)

1. 00:15:838 (6,1) 這個在h裡面不會太遠嗎oAo 後面那個也是 (純粹疑問
2. 00:50:330 (4,5,6,1) 沒包好
3. 00:51:934 (1) 尾巴沒黏好
4. 01:27:228 (2) 覺得可以 ctrl+g

1. 01:17:442 這裡下個note 不要斷掉比較好..

1. 00:15:677 (6) 拉到 00:15:196 (4) 的尾巴感覺不錯
2. 00:26:586 (2,3)、00:27:228 (4,1) 突然好近
3. 00:29:635 +whistle?
4. 00:30:758 這個normal就這麼直接的省略掉好嗎 o_o
5. 00:40:223 這也有個重音，雖然不是鼓但是有拍手聲 (應該是像我下面標記的地方都加上soft-clap)
   
6. 00:43:592 標記的地方+clap
7. 00:45:196 ^
   因為我覺得拍手是這首歌的特色而且前半部也都有跟，所以都跟一下比較好
8. 00:48:966 +個note?
9. 00:51:453 這裡嗯.... 可是你沒有跟大鼓所這裡也不知道該加還是不加
10. 01:02:201 看要不要這段kiai的red tick都上whistle

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:

Good map i lol mod later

Edited:

General

1. Add These to Tags : Gintama ( as i tried to search for the map and no result showed ) Shogun Assassination Arc Ending ( The song actually Used as ending not opening so remove opening from tags ) Fixed~
   
2. Replace the Red Colour with The same colour of Takasugi Kimono's like this: Combo1 : 103,37,87 Nah that is for Kagura lol
   
3. In all Diffs except Pata's insane i see no point from this inherited section 00:57:068 - ( no change from the previous one ? ) so remove it Maybe Not sure what you are talking about, but this is for velocity change for Insane diff. For other diffs I can check a bit.

Normal

00:04:127 (2) - replace with a 1/2 slider emphasising the vocal I think this way emphasizes it better ;w;
00:41:346 (6) - stack it on (5) as it plays better with to the clapping sound Not a big fan of stacking in Normal
00:46:800 (1,2,3) - a suggestion about this pattern, cancel reverses and add a circle here 00:47:442 - stacked on the next slider start and the same thing with 00:48:405 - add a circle stacked on the next slider start it actually sounds good to vocals there Not a big fan of stacking in Normal
01:05:410 (2) - same as the first suggestion Sad..
01:25:303 (1,2) - merge both sliders into only one to ease this part and it sounds abit different than the rest guitar sounds Yeah I merged them but also made a new note there.

Hard

00:48:084 (1) - replace with a 1/2 slider then a 1/1 slider for the word (nai) sounds better imo After trying I found it's really hard to fix it while keeping original pattern..
00:55:463 (4,5) - remove the circle then drag the slider to 00:55:463 - and reverse it In this way the downbeat will be on the slider reverse, which is not kind of something we want.
01:07:014 (5) - maybe looks better if its stacked on the next slider's head as i just realized u did it already here 01:18:565 (5) - and 01:19:849 (5) - xD Ok, this is a good point, though maybe need some small adjustment.
01:27:549 (3) - Ctrl+G plays better imo I don't feel there is much difference tho..

Insane

00:04:127 (2) - same like i suggested in Normal diff a 1/2 slider would fit better But this is use for emphasize the vocal.
00:29:955 (1) - moving this around x456 y52 looks better at that part and it open a space to the 1/1 jumps imo is better It may need some change, but if moving to that place, it's gonna be too large imo..
01:21:774 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe drag this a bit to right and resnap the last note with the same rest of stream spacing Yeah I made some change here.

Done !! Goodluck Thank you and thanks for your star and diff! Please contact me if you don't mind my putting your diff in Creator's word since the set is currently pretty full..

Binguo wrote:

水摸来了 不水不水>w< 欢迎欢迎

M4M 好的~ 如果音效搞定了就叫我啊 ;w;


[normal]
00:32:683 (4) - 坏flow 唉就这样吧，改的空间不算大，也不太清楚怎么改
00:50:651 (4) - 这个位置感觉有点不好 低难度还是放在更明显的地方会更好 这个改了，有道理
00:53:217 (2) - 看上去像乱放的 我也不知道怎么放了，凭感觉了233
01:11:025 (4,5) - 换成滑条吧 或者直接删掉4 因为这样有点难而且我觉得不用太在意人声的 我再考虑一下

[Hard]
00:15:838 (6,1) - 怎么突然跳那么远 重音强调跳
00:26:266 (1) - ↑ 重音强调跳
00:32:683 (1) - 不怂放单点啊 折返多没劲 怂怂怂，bpm不低呢
00:40:704 (2) - 00:41:346 (2) - 这两处是有音乐是有区别的 所以我觉得做出来的应该不一样00:40:383 (1,2) - 应该移动而不是原地点 中线对称的话，除了叠起来只好跳，但其实跳还是不是很好的选择，这样混过去吧……
01:09:902 (1,3) - 叠好 好的（紫花鸽.jpg）

[lnsane]
00:14:073 (5) - 叠在00:13:913 (4) - 或者缩短间距 那样我觉得反而难读了
00:15:677 (6,7) - 1/2滑条 我是觉得那三个音听上去很像于是就stack了……
00:19:207 (5) - 同第一条 近了的话不太清楚怎么放，叠起来就会变得难读……
00:20:651 (4,5,6) - 动起来 动不起来啊…… 三个音像>w<
00:50:651 (1) - 太近了 并且太直了 姑且试着改了一下，有overlap，先就这样改了，后边不行的话再改回来，这个距离和方向问题我也觉得不舒服。

谢谢！ 味道不错！

Azure wrote:

黃書好~~ M4M~ ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з 公主好~ >w< 感谢！

[General]

1. 可能是我的錯覺，覺得BG有點糊 orz 十分顶，求各种BG赞助，不知道哪里找图233
2. 不考慮加個靜音的sliderslide嗎? 我好像借用了怕他萌的

[Normal]

1. 00:41:025 不加nc嗎 較高的難度好像有這個梗 (?) 不NC啦，因为排版上没有突出这两声clap，于是加nc会觉得奇怪的

[Hard]

1. 00:15:838 (6,1) 這個在h裡面不會太遠嗎oAo 後面那個也是 (純粹疑問 我觉得……行吧？ 整张图的跳大概也是这个尺度的……
2. 00:50:330 (4,5,6,1) 沒包好 这里其实是这么回事，叠了一下然后我也不知道应该包哪个了，于是就包了第一个，我调了一下，总而言之是只能包一个233
3. 00:51:934 (1) 尾巴沒黏好 好的~
4. 01:27:228 (2) 覺得可以 ctrl+g 哈哈另一个mod是说3 ctrl+g，不过我是觉得这种微小的变化影响flow的感觉太小了

[Insane]

1. 00:15:677 (6) 拉到 00:15:196 (4) 的尾巴感覺不錯 三个很相似的吉他我想就这么原地了233
2. 00:26:586 (2,3)、00:27:228 (4,1) 突然好近 唉我也知道，不过怎么改呢……
3. 00:29:635 +whistle? 先试着加一下了
4. 00:30:758 這個normal就這麼直接的省略掉好嗎 o_o 这里在跟吉他啦
5. 00:40:223 這也有個重音，雖然不是鼓但是有拍手聲 (應該是像我下面標記的地方都加上soft-clap) 这里怎么拉回来呢…… 也不想跳太大，有音但是我觉得应该不是特别重，就当是跟后边对比之后忽略掉了吧……
   因为前边没有加所以和原来的情况也一样了
6. 00:43:592 標記的地方+clap
7. 00:45:196 ^ 一开始我觉得clap不明显然后就没有apply，后来想了想还是觉得音效丰富好，就加了，但是还是觉得不太和谐…… 所以最后也没加……
   因為我覺得拍手是這首歌的特色而且前半部也都有跟，所以都跟一下比較好 唉……是啊……
8. 00:48:966 +個note? 诶……为啥？
9. 00:51:453 這裡嗯.... 可是你沒有跟大鼓所這裡也不知道該加還是不加 你说的没错，这里是在跟人声的所以就不加啦
10. 01:02:201 看要不要這段kiai的red tick都上whistle 会有点吵……

就這樣了~~ 謝謝黃書的mod 不客气，也多谢你的mod啦~

• 
  Only 3 combo colours?

• 00:06:052 (1,2) - Blanket?
  00:13:431 (1,2,3) - I don't think normal players will know how to play this. Simplify this using more 1/1 patterns or spreading things out a bit.
  00:35:250 (3,1) - Overlap is not a good idea.
  00:54:501 (1,2,3) - Confusing for beginners. move the beginning of (1) and the end of (3) away from each other.
  01:12:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A little confusing. I would move these patterns so they don't touch each others.
  01:18:886 (3) - This goes off screen. Move this up.
  01:27:228 (7) - Just do two sliders here.

• 00:14:715 (1,2,3) - Doesn't match. Get rid of (1) and move (2) and (3) back.
  [list:1337]00:24:982 (1,2,3) - Here too

• 00:31:239 (6,1) - Here too

• I suggest renaming this to extra.
  00:15:517 (5,6,7) - Space this out for more fun.
  [list:1337]00:20:651 (4,5,6) -

• 
  This is a fun map. I like how fast everything is. I really want this to be ranked.

Streliteela wrote:

[Pata-Mon's Insane]

1. 00:12:629 (3) - 这里不建议用折返，因为白线的位置正好在折返箭头上，这样等于把一个很重的音用折返盖过去了。你前面00:11:827 (3) - 这里的处理就挺不错，所以这里也建议把折返改成note+1/2slider 主跟的是鼓，白线压根就没有声
2. 00:17:763 (3) - 这里也是，白线不建议放滑条尾……建议参考00:21:132 (1,2,3,4,1) - 的下法 大白线也不等于重音啊，这里鼓也不是clap（我加hitnormal的地方），考虑吉他音的位置，这里不clickable完全没问题
3. 00:19:367 (4,5) - ctrl+g? 前面一直是顺时针flow，1那里我也觉得不是非得要跳，所以keep
4. 00:47:923 (1) - 长白线啊orz别放在滑条尾啊orz 这里跟的是吉他．不过这个之后可能改
   后面感觉还行，有点懒看了_(:з」∠)_

OSUjanaiKATSURAda wrote:

[Pata-Mon's Insane]

1. No need for the kiai at the start as it pushes the map to have more than 50% of it Kiai'ed (but if u like to keep it its better to delete the second kiai since there is no acchi muite part and split the last kiai from here 01:11:827 - and start at 01:12:469 - and this should be applied to all diffs anyway) k
   
2. 00:31:399 (1) - move it to x192 y104 or something similiar so its similiar to 00:31:720 (2) - thus creating a better flow imo i don't flow is bad now, and stack is important
   
3. 00:56:747 (4) - rotate it vertically give it the same angle of (3) flows better no need
   
4. 01:10:383 (2,3) - maybe into a slider for vocals ? hmm are you sure you want to say 01:10:383 (2,3) - , not 01:10:544 (3,4) - ?

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Pata-Mon's Insane]

1. 00:47:923 (1,2,3) - 这里也是bass 00:45:677 - 一下跟一下不跟不如都别跟了 之后再考虑下
2. 01:05:731 (4,5) - 怎么忽然变近了 放远点 5不是重音啊
3. 01:26:426 - 这里有一声吧 怎么就一个1拍滑条带过了 那种程度的音完全没必要跟全啊……这里用长滑条更符合感觉

PolkaMocha wrote:

Welcome and appreciated!
[general:]

• 
  Only 3 combo colours? Yes! It's for the main characters in Gintama~

[Normal:]

• 00:06:052 (1,2) - Blanket? Ok~
  00:13:431 (1,2,3) - I don't think normal players will know how to play this. Simplify this using more 1/1 patterns or spreading things out a bit. I think it should be fine, or it's really hard to get some area to map a 1/1 here.
  00:35:250 (3,1) - Overlap is not a good idea. fixed~
  00:54:501 (1,2,3) - Confusing for beginners. move the beginning of (1) and the end of (3) away from each other. I don't think it's really confusing here.. They are not really stacked so should be easy to recognize.
  01:12:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A little confusing. I would move these patterns so they don't touch each others. Here also should be fine...
  01:18:886 (3) - This goes off screen. Move this up. ok~
  01:27:228 (7) - Just do two sliders here. The 4 sounds equal imo.. this reverse fits it personally..

[Hard:]

• 00:14:715 (1,2,3) - Doesn't match. Get rid of (1) and move (2) and (3) back. Theoretically those are downbeats though...
  [list:1337]00:24:982 (1,2,3) - Here too Theoretically those are downbeats though...

00:15:838 (6,1) - Too big of a jump for hard. Put these close together. I don't think so, since for the spread I've already got a light hard.

• 00:31:239 (6,1) - Here too I don't think so, since for the spread I've already got a light hard.

00:32:683 (1,2) - Not a good idea. Use regular sliders.Yeah I know... But how to do that is a big problem.
00:36:212 (5,1) - See this is why those jumps should be made smaller. Because this is the same distance but plays differently, confusing players. In this part the music is less intensive, so it's fine to have this kind of thing.
00:53:217 (2) - x:492 y:152? Good idea!
01:27:549 (3) - ctrl + g for better flow. Hmm... I'll leave it for now.. Since it has almost no difference..[Insane:]

• I suggest renaming this to extra. I'll consider when it's getting more star diff.
  00:15:517 (5,6,7) - Space this out for more fun. *Sigh..* Kind of used to this kind of placement for this kind of sound.. They are similar so I'll just emphasize it in this way.
  [list:1337]00:20:651 (4,5,6) -

01:12:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Yeaaaah definitely rename this to extra lol. ^
01:27:228 (2,3) - Replace this with a spread of circles. Not gonna make it hard in the end though..[Afterword:]

• 
  This is a fun map. I like how fast everything is. I really want this to be ranked. Thank you a lot!!

Pata-Mon wrote:

我没开屙屎，我那难度黄书你看下是不是改kiai的时候出什么问题了？

爱抚神为啥说奇葩啊111111 这明明是标准量产图

edit:

绿线大概删kiai的时候弄错了？
whistle代替drum-finish，我比较喜欢这样，听上去挺好的
00:20:811 (2,3) - 这俩音跟00:20:651 (1) - 以及00:30:918 (1,2,3) - 一致吧，加normalhit有点吵
后面那里好像没必要加normalhit啊

@黄书 开头我那段应该是0.6x sv，00:09:902 - 这条绿线应该在开头红线处0.0帮我改下吧~

yf_bmp wrote:

General

1. 建议改下combo2的color，8bit色的话看上去十分蛋疼，饱和度太高了.. 嗯我自己的diff改了一下

Normal

1. 00:19:688 (4,5,6,7) - 总感觉这里遮挡的比较奇怪，按照我的感觉则是4和5叠或者6和7叠起来更加友好点。要不就抄00:29:955 (4,5,6,7) - 一堆人吐槽，那我就改了
2. 00:50:009 (3) - 折返+sampleset normal 行
3. 00:59:635 (1,2,3) - 这个看上去不等距 改了
4. 01:25:784 (2) - sampleset normal 有道理
5. 01:27:228 (7) - 感觉这个稍微有点突然 这还行吧？

Hard

1. 00:15:196 (3) - 这个ctlr+g如何，感觉和接下去三个flow好点 I don't think so.. 这样其实差不多的flow,还没有跳
2. 00:54:982 (3,4,5) - 总觉得这么放缺少点前后关联 改了，不知道为啥之前弄成这样了，以前不这样来着

Insane

1. 这个难度又感觉whistle太少了，后面kiai音效配的太轻 具体一点
2. 00:59:153 (5,6,7,1) - 这感觉挺不适的，直线的时候 半路还停一下 强调后边的滑条
3. 01:01:560 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 改下音量吧 好的
4. 01:22:255 (8,9,10,1) - 我觉得这里全改成钝角flow挺好的，配合前面的串来个不一样的kiai收尾 不是很清楚具体怎么操作

古德拉客 十分感谢！！

1. 开头vocal加点whistle，这样一段没音效在以前可是稳稳dq呀
2. 00:50:410 (7,8) - 可以加点音效，只有第一个圈有音效的三连打起来很憋的
3. 00:51:453 - 个人觉得不跟鼓反而跟vocal很违和
4. 00:56:667 (9) - 音效突然断了？其实这里听起来00:56:586 (8,9) - 这两个用drum更好，达到渐轻的效果
5. 第二段kiai为什么音效那么少，如果是我的话每一节会这样下些whistle http://puu.sh/sSiar/ab5ebd4dfc.png 其他地方可以看着调整
6. 另外finish也非常少，01:12:469 - 01:22:736 - 像这种比较明显的可以加一下，一般是kiai的开头、中间和结尾

1. 开头88%音效的whistle吵死了
2. 全是无规律stack，不得不说整洁度不行

1. 00:18:405 (4,1) - 这两个叠一下更符合音乐的感觉，比起nc，手感比较重要
2. 00:23:538 (4,1) - ^ 后面一样的地方不一一列出来了
3. 01:24:982 (3,1) - 理论上来说后面滑条应该更靠近前面滑条的尾巴，bn test里有这题当时我没答出来很悲剧

Karen wrote:

首先所有diff的00:10:865 - 这根绿线除了sv变化其他属性都要一样，kiai啊音量啊什么的 我的diff都改了

Insane

1. 开头vocal加点whistle，这样一段没音效在以前可是稳稳dq呀 好
2. 00:50:410 (7,8) - 可以加点音效，只有第一个圈有音效的三连打起来很憋的 行
3. 00:51:453 - 个人觉得不跟鼓反而跟vocal很违和 跟着前边的ni a ru的，不加个鼓了
4. 00:56:667 (9) - 音效突然断了？其实这里听起来00:56:586 (8,9) - 这两个用drum更好，达到渐轻的效果 不错
5. 第二段kiai为什么音效那么少，如果是我的话每一节会这样下些whistle http://puu.sh/sSiar/ab5ebd4dfc.png 其他地方可以看着调整 不加了，加了whistle觉得吵，而且这种很稳定的节奏不太希望带入不稳定因素
6. 另外finish也非常少，01:12:469 - 01:22:736 - 像这种比较明显的可以加一下，一般是kiai的开头、中间和结尾 加了

Hard

1. 00:18:405 (4,1) - 这两个叠一下更符合音乐的感觉，比起nc，手感比较重要 改了
2. 00:23:538 (4,1) - ^ 后面一样的地方不一一列出来了 改了
3. 01:24:982 (3,1) - 理论上来说后面滑条应该更靠近前面滑条的尾巴，bn test里有这题当时我没答出来很悲剧 I am opposed to this. No one will actually follow the holding slider to move toward the tail, the cursor should be close to the hititng point, which is the head, and hovering around it when playing this note, so it's definitely reasonable to stack under the head of the holding slider, rather than the end of it.

其他好像都ok，metadata查过的吧 嗯， 查过,应该没问题

Karen wrote:

bubble

pishifat wrote:

normal
01:27:228 (7) - scrubs don't have enough time to read the second repeat:( this or literally anything else would be more appropriate for a normal zzzz
also weird to have OD on this diff the same as 2ha's hard lol. lowering it to 4 would be ok

call me back!!!!

Maboyu wrote:

黃书呀 可改個EASY難度名稱嗎 我改名了 順便連Tags也是~~><

Pata-Mon wrote:

“幸好pishiqat没秒回来recheck，否则难度名都来不及改”？

pishifat wrote:

good thing i waited lol

tutuhaha wrote:

哦哦哦刚刚才看到
恭喜！

jyc-Binggan wrote:

dq plz

Flask wrote:

皇輸啊