00:16:672 (2,1) - for emphasis at 00:16:839 (1) - you should add higher DS. currently the DS between 00:15:006 (1,2,1) - these is almost the same but 00:16:672 (2,1) - should be more spaced since emphasis
fixed00:21:505 (5,1) - this looks like an unintended overlap. you could either stack 00:21:505 (5,1) - or add a neat overlap like
this nice idea!00:39:838 (1,1) - i dont see a reason to NC these because 00:39:505 (1,2,1,2,1) - as a whole looks pretty much like the same sound. so only a NC at 00:39:505 (1) - is more appropriate imo
ok fixed00:40:672 - 00:40:755 - i kinda disagree that you ignore these sounds because they are pretty much noticeable and it is the highest diff so you should represent the song as good as possible (represent all sounds that the song has if possible).
I think that I am 1/6. It is very difficult so there is no change01:01:089 (2) - i'd rather NC this instead of the previous object because the rhythm changes there (cicrle on bluetick followed by 1/2 slider), so the player gets to know through the NC that smth is different there. 01:01:755 (5,6) - this you can leave in the same combo then
On hold01:04:505 (1,1) - add more spacing in between these (like 3.00 DS). it is the start of the kiai and deserves special emphasis. also it flows better if you have higher spacing because the first object of the kiai has a lot of higher sv.
fixed01:15:005 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - this is a pretty huge flow error (which isnt bad at some points) and it causes missing at the stream (especially when its spaced like that). you can flip the stream like
this and it'd already flow better
fixed01:25:672 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - same thing here basically. here you can try to make it not flow perfectly to emphasize the end of the intense part into the slow part.
here's a possible solution to make a tiny flow error which isnt that huge as it was before fixed01:26:172 - maybe disable kiai and start again at 01:27:505 - till 01:28:838 - ? i think its quite appropriate because the slowpart isnt actually that intense but suddenly after the slow part it gets back to the intensity of the kiai.
ok All Diff changed 01:34:505 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i think these jumps are kind of overdone. this section is almost or actually
is the same music with the same intensity as 00:22:172 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - . i suggest you to nerf it a tiny bit. sure you can make them a bit more spaced like at the beginning (to emphasize the ending) but imo that is a bit too much compared to the beginning
I think this is the best excitement