moemoe4
[general]
a lot of missed snares/other hitsounds so i recommend u recheck them
[Easy]
00:21:748 (4,5,1) - could flow nicer imo, http://puu.sh/sgxMH/24dfdee210.jpg
00:32:337 (1,2) - try this
00:35:474 (1) - soft finish? also the shape is kinda x.x
01:06:062 (2) - 01:06:846 (3,4) - some misplaced normal samplesets?
01:24:101 (5) - inconsistent NC
[Normal]
00:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - should share the same rhythm
00:33:513 (3) - finish on sliderend 00:35:474 (1) - soft finish
00:37:239 (5,6,7,1) - hmm flow, would help if u shifted everything to the right
00:39:199 (2) - personal opinion but would be nice if you didnt skip the snare here
00:46:454 (3) - circle 1/1?
00:51:748 (2) - normal sampleset on head
00:56:454 (5) - delete?
00:59:003 (4) - normal sampleset
01:00:964 (2) - finish on end
01:22:141 (2,3,4) -
01:27:239 (1) - hmm these overlaps at the beginning/end might not be very beginner friendly, might wanna check with someone else to be sure tho
[Hard]
00:04:101 (1,2,3,4) - for consistent rhythming
00:37:043 (1) - u can try moving this down (and maybe get blanketed) for better flow
could use some more jumps at certain stressed parts i.e. 00:04:101 (1) - 00:16:650 (1) - 00:35:474 (1) -
[Insane]
00:12:533 (3) - doesnt flow well
00:20:376 (4) - move right for better flow
00:35:474 (1) - not sure if intentional but flow would rather want this to be on the left aa
01:20:964 (1,2,3,1) - whys this part spaced out so much compared to the rest of your patterns?
01:22:337 (1) - also rhythm, try not to use so many 1/1s in insane, u want to have a more dense map than hard
megumi maji megami ww gl/
[general]
a lot of missed snares/other hitsounds so i recommend u recheck them
[Easy]
00:21:748 (4,5,1) - could flow nicer imo, http://puu.sh/sgxMH/24dfdee210.jpg
00:32:337 (1,2) - try this
00:35:474 (1) - soft finish? also the shape is kinda x.x
01:06:062 (2) - 01:06:846 (3,4) - some misplaced normal samplesets?
01:24:101 (5) - inconsistent NC
[Normal]
00:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - should share the same rhythm
00:33:513 (3) - finish on sliderend 00:35:474 (1) - soft finish
00:37:239 (5,6,7,1) - hmm flow, would help if u shifted everything to the right
00:39:199 (2) - personal opinion but would be nice if you didnt skip the snare here
00:46:454 (3) - circle 1/1?
00:51:748 (2) - normal sampleset on head
00:56:454 (5) - delete?
00:59:003 (4) - normal sampleset
01:00:964 (2) - finish on end
01:22:141 (2,3,4) -
01:27:239 (1) - hmm these overlaps at the beginning/end might not be very beginner friendly, might wanna check with someone else to be sure tho
[Hard]
00:04:101 (1,2,3,4) - for consistent rhythming
00:37:043 (1) - u can try moving this down (and maybe get blanketed) for better flow
could use some more jumps at certain stressed parts i.e. 00:04:101 (1) - 00:16:650 (1) - 00:35:474 (1) -
[Insane]
00:12:533 (3) - doesnt flow well
00:20:376 (4) - move right for better flow
00:35:474 (1) - not sure if intentional but flow would rather want this to be on the left aa
01:20:964 (1,2,3,1) - whys this part spaced out so much compared to the rest of your patterns?
01:22:337 (1) - also rhythm, try not to use so many 1/1s in insane, u want to have a more dense map than hard
megumi maji megami ww gl/