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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017년 2월 8일 수요일 at 오후 4:33:30

Artist: Miku Sawai
Title: Colorful. (AnimeVer.)
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags: Saenai Heroine no Sodatekata tv size ending ed
BPM: 153
Filesize: 2393kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.46 stars, 102 notes)
  2. Hard (2.77 stars, 220 notes)
  3. Insane (3.86 stars, 347 notes)
  4. Normal (1.92 stars, 162 notes)


Download: Miku Sawai - Colorful. (AnimeVer.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[mapset]
Easy - me
Normal - me
Hard - me
Insane - me
1st ranked solo mapset
posted
moemoe4

[general]
a lot of missed snares/other hitsounds so i recommend u recheck them

[Easy]
00:21:748 (4,5,1) - could flow nicer imo, http://puu.sh/sgxMH/24dfdee210.jpg
00:32:337 (1,2) - try this
00:35:474 (1) - soft finish? also the shape is kinda x.x
01:06:062 (2) - 01:06:846 (3,4) - some misplaced normal samplesets?
01:24:101 (5) - inconsistent NC

[Normal]
00:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - should share the same rhythm
00:33:513 (3) - finish on sliderend 00:35:474 (1) - soft finish
00:37:239 (5,6,7,1) - hmm flow, would help if u shifted everything to the right
00:39:199 (2) - personal opinion but would be nice if you didnt skip the snare here
00:46:454 (3) - circle 1/1?
00:51:748 (2) - normal sampleset on head
00:56:454 (5) - delete?
00:59:003 (4) - normal sampleset
01:00:964 (2) - finish on end
01:22:141 (2,3,4) -
01:27:239 (1) - hmm these overlaps at the beginning/end might not be very beginner friendly, might wanna check with someone else to be sure tho

[Hard]
00:04:101 (1,2,3,4) - for consistent rhythming
00:37:043 (1) - u can try moving this down (and maybe get blanketed) for better flow

could use some more jumps at certain stressed parts i.e. 00:04:101 (1) - 00:16:650 (1) - 00:35:474 (1) -

[Insane]
00:12:533 (3) - doesnt flow well :x
00:20:376 (4) - move right for better flow
00:35:474 (1) - not sure if intentional but flow would rather want this to be on the left aa
01:20:964 (1,2,3,1) - whys this part spaced out so much compared to the rest of your patterns?
01:22:337 (1) - also rhythm, try not to use so many 1/1s in insane, u want to have a more dense map than hard

megumi maji megami ww gl/
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00:08 Neoskylove: 뭐해얌
00:08 ProEzreal: 겜중
00:08 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
00:10 Neoskylove: ㅋㅋ
00:10 Neoskylove: 모딩좀..
00:11 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
00:12 ProEzreal: 모딩구하느라
00:12 ProEzreal: 바쁜데
00:12 ProEzreal: 어떤거요
00:12 Neoskylove: m4m각
00:12 *Neoskylove is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1122897 Sawai Miku - Colorful.(AnimeVer.)]
00:12 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
00:13 Neoskylove: 님 맵 어떤거
00:13 ProEzreal: 할거 아직 없음
00:13 Neoskylove: 아
00:36 ProEzreal: 일단님
00:37 ProEzreal: Colorful.(Anime Ver.) 임
00:37 Neoskylove: ?
00:37 Neoskylove: dk
00:38 Neoskylove: 아
00:38 Neoskylove: 케타
00:38 Neoskylove: 메타
00:38 ProEzreal: ㅇㅇ
00:38 Neoskylove: 근데 메타는 보통다들 어디서 구하는거
00:38 ProEzreal: 이지부터
00:38 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
00:38 ProEzreal: 잘 찾아봐야됨
00:38 ProEzreal: 00:22:925 (1,2) - 이거 흐름이 완전 정반대인데
00:39 ProEzreal: 왠만한건
00:39 ProEzreal: 넘어가는데
00:39 ProEzreal: 이건 좀 심한거같네요
00:39 Neoskylove: 잠만
00:39 Neoskylove: irc하려고요?
00:41 Neoskylove: 저 흐름 나름 나쁘지 않은것 같긴 한데
00:41 Neoskylove: 일단 생각해볼게요ㅕ
00:41 ProEzreal: 아뇨
00:41 ProEzreal: 완전
00:41 ProEzreal: 나빠요
00:41 ProEzreal: 진짜 말도 안될정도임
00:41 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
00:41 ProEzreal: 아
00:41 ProEzreal: 그건 오바였는데
00:41 ProEzreal: 고치면 솔직히말해서 나머지 잡을게 별로 없어짐
00:41 ProEzreal: 왜냐면 전 그거 하나로 이지는 끝이라서
00:42 Neoskylove: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:42 ProEzreal: 노멀
00:42 ProEzreal: 00:09:984 (5,2) -
00:43 ProEzreal: 거리조금만 띄어놓으시면 좋을듯
00:43 ProEzreal: 님
00:43 ProEzreal: 00:37:239 (5,6) -
00:43 Neoskylove: 오버랩
00:44 Neoskylove: 피했ㄴ어여
00:44 ProEzreal: 노멀 만들떄마다
00:44 ProEzreal: 이런거 보이는데
00:44 ProEzreal: 솔직히말해서
00:44 ProEzreal: 이건 노멀치고도 별로 보기가 안좋아요
00:44 ProEzreal: 슬라가 위로 직진하는데
00:44 Neoskylove: 아
00:45 ProEzreal: 흐름상으로는 6번 서클이 위에 있어야잖아요
00:45 Neoskylove: ㅇㅇ
00:45 Neoskylove: 고쳤어여
00:45 ProEzreal: 이런거
00:45 ProEzreal: 주위하셔야됨
00:45 ProEzreal: 저말고도
00:45 ProEzreal: 다른사람들도 이런얘기 자주해서
00:46 ProEzreal: 01:27:239 (1) - 슬라 모양잌ㅋㅋ
00:46 ProEzreal: 슬라 아트라면
00:46 ProEzreal: 제가 도와드리져
00:47 Neoskylove: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:47 ProEzreal: 01:26:846 (3,1) - 아 그리고
00:47 ProEzreal: 이거 거리
00:47 ProEzreal: 지켜주셈
00:47 Neoskylove: 그거 걍 냅둬여ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:47 Neoskylove: 에러났난여
00:47 ProEzreal: 그럴듯
00:47 ProEzreal: ㄹ너
00:47 ProEzreal: 런
00:50 Neoskylove: 슬라는 걍 냡퉈줘여
00:50 Neoskylove: 나줄에 저절로 고쳐짐
00:50 Neoskylove: 모딩받으면서
00:51 ProEzreal: 아 예쁜거 나왔는데
00:51 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
00:51 Neoskylove: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:52 ProEzreal: 00:08:611 (1) - 여기 강조음을 슬라로 매핑하시다니
00:53 Neoskylove: ?
00:53 Neoskylove: 하드요?
00:53 ProEzreal: 네
00:53 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
00:53 ProEzreal: 하드면
00:53 ProEzreal: 서클로 해도 괜찮을듯
00:54 ProEzreal: 00:21:945 (4,5,6) - 여기 리듬이 너무 복잡한듯
00:54 ProEzreal: 전에 3연타고
00:55 ProEzreal: 그다음에 00:22:533 (7,8,1) -
00:55 ProEzreal: 이런 리듬이 있으니
00:55 ProEzreal: 하드치고는
00:55 Neoskylove: 이런 패턴은 전체적으로 하드에서 많이 볼수 있어요
00:55 Neoskylove: 괜찮아요 충분히
00:55 ProEzreal: 음
00:55 ProEzreal: 제가 봤을때는
00:55 ProEzreal: 00:21:945 (4,5,6) - 여기에서 00:22:533 (7,8,1) - 여기로 리듬전환하는게
00:55 Neoskylove: 어렵게 보일수는 있는데
00:55 ProEzreal: 갑작스러워서
00:56 ProEzreal: 패닉상태가오면
00:56 ProEzreal: 충분히 깨질수 있다고 생각해요
00:56 ProEzreal: 00:22:043 (5) - 이거 하나만 빼도 괜찮아질 수 있다고 생각해요
00:57 ProEzreal: 근데 뭐
00:57 ProEzreal: 원하지 않으시다면
00:57 Neoskylove: 00:22:043 (5) - 여기가 중요한 비트인데
00:57 Neoskylove: 왜빼요ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:57 ProEzreal: ?
00:57 ProEzreal: 여기가
00:57 ProEzreal: 왜 중요합니까
00:57 Neoskylove: 드럼소리 큰데 의외로
00:57 ProEzreal: 거기보다
00:57 Neoskylove: 솔직히 제 귀엔
00:57 ProEzreal: 00:21:945 (4,6) - 여기가
00:58 Neoskylove: 00:21:945 (4,5,6) - 5개 다 중요함
00:58 ProEzreal: 더 크다만
00:58 ProEzreal: 암튼
00:58 ProEzreal: 냅둬도 ㄱㅊ
00:59 ProEzreal: 00:26:454 (2) - 갑자기 3/4로 매핑하시는데
00:59 Neoskylove: 아 근데 인센은 또 다르게 찍혔..
00:59 ProEzreal: 이게
00:59 ProEzreal: 솔직히말해서
00:59 Neoskylove: 그거
00:59 ProEzreal: 필요 없다고 생각해요
00:59 Neoskylove: 잘못넣은거
00:59 ProEzreal: 아
00:59 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
01:00 Neoskylove: 문제는
01:00 Neoskylove: 00:32:925 (2,2) - 이거 플레이어들이
01:00 ProEzreal: 00:34:101 (2,3,4) - 이거 나란히 서있는거 보면 뭔가 재미가 없어보이고
01:00 Neoskylove: 리버스를 읽을수 있으려나인데
01:00 ProEzreal: ㄴㄴ
01:00 ProEzreal: 음
01:00 ProEzreal: 그러게요
01:00 Neoskylove: 00:34:101 (2,3,4) - 이건 상관없을듯
01:00 ProEzreal: 상관없는게 문제가 아니라
01:01 ProEzreal: 다양성이 부족해서 문제임
01:01 Neoskylove: 00:37:043 (1,2) - 얘도 좀 어색한 감이 있는데 어떻게 할지 고민중
01:01 Neoskylove: 00:34:101 (2,3,4) - 다양성이랄까 이거 돌리면 흐름 이상해져요
01:01 ProEzreal: 의문이 있는거면 왠만하면 고치는게 좋을거같은데
01:01 ProEzreal: ?
01:02 ProEzreal: 패턴을 바꾸면 되잖아요
01:02 ProEzreal: 00:32:925 (2,3) - 이거 평행하게
01:02 Neoskylove: ?
01:02 Neoskylove: 평행인데요
01:02 Neoskylove: 복붙해서 거리조절한거
01:02 ProEzreal: 약간 틀어짐
01:03 Neoskylove: ??
01:03 Neoskylove: 왜지
01:03 ProEzreal: 복붙해서
01:03 ProEzreal: 줄이는중에
01:03 ProEzreal: 약간 틀어졌겠죠
01:04 Neoskylove: 00:37:043 (1,2) - 얘는 잡지마요
01:04 Neoskylove: 고쳤음
01:04 Neoskylove: 00:38:513 - 얘도
01:05 ProEzreal: 00:34:101 (2,3,4) - 일단
01:05 ProEzreal: 이건
01:05 ProEzreal: 3번슬라를
01:05 ProEzreal: 컨 j h 해서
01:05 Neoskylove: ㄴㄴ 일단 냅둘게요
01:05 ProEzreal: 아래다 두어도 괜찮아지는데
01:05 Neoskylove: 이 패천 많음
01:06 ProEzreal: 00:35:474 (1) -
01:06 ProEzreal: 이거 거리가 참 애매하네요
01:06 Neoskylove: 그건 동선이 제 맘에 안들어서
01:06 ProEzreal: 00:35:278 (5) - 이거랑
01:06 Neoskylove: 점프 넣었어여
01:06 Neoskylove: 고침
01:07 ProEzreal: 네 그건 알겠는데
01:07 ProEzreal: 강조하는건 좋은데
01:07 Neoskylove: 아니 고쳤음...
01:07 Neoskylove: 점프 더 크게함..
01:07 ProEzreal: 굳
01:07 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
01:08 ProEzreal: 00:40:964 (3,4) - 이건 약간 오버매핑이 됬네요
01:08 ProEzreal: 00:40:964 (3) - 여기 사이에는 딱히 소리가 없는뎅
01:08 Neoskylove: 드럼 다 있어여
01:09 Neoskylove: 확실히 시끄러운 힛사때문에 안들릴수는 있는데
01:09 ProEzreal: 25퍼로 돌려도 아주 미세하게 들릴정도에요
01:09 Neoskylove: 진짜 약해서 그렇지 없는건 아닌듯
01:09 ProEzreal: 노트 없애고
01:09 ProEzreal: 암튼
01:10 Neoskylove: ?
01:10 ProEzreal: 01:00:964 (2,3,4) - 뭔가 좀 안맞아 보임
01:10 ProEzreal: 01:01:356 (3,4) - 여기
01:11 ProEzreal: 약간 마춰주셈
01:12 Neoskylove: 안보임
01:12 Neoskylove: 크게 상관없을듯요
01:12 ProEzreal: 저는 보여서 한말인데
01:12 ProEzreal: 이런거 귀찮아도 고치는게 좋아요...
01:13 Neoskylove: 딱히 맞추고 싶은 느낌은 안드네됴
01:13 Neoskylove: 안드네요
01:13 ProEzreal: 자 그럼
01:13 ProEzreal: 태그에다가
01:13 ProEzreal: ending
01:13 ProEzreal: 이나
01:13 ProEzreal: ed
01:13 ProEzreal: 추가하시면 좋을듯
01:13 Neoskylove: ?
01:13 Neoskylove: 엔딩이구나
01:13 ProEzreal: 엔딩이잖슴
01:13 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋ
01:14 ProEzreal: 님 와이드스크린 서폿
01:14 Neoskylove: zz
01:14 ProEzreal: 체크되있음
01:15 Neoskylove: 그건 있으나마나인데
01:15 Neoskylove: 일단 끌게요
01:15 ProEzreal: 일관성
01:15 ProEzreal: 땜시
01:15 ProEzreal: 그리고 스토리보드 없으면
01:15 ProEzreal: 원래 꺼놓음
01:15 Neoskylove: 와이드스크린
01:15 Neoskylove: 일관성 없어도 랭돼여
01:15 Neoskylove: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:16 ProEzreal: 그런거 가끔씩 봐서 하는말임
01:16 ProEzreal: 00:16:650 (1) - 이런건 거리둬서 강조하는게 좋을듯
01:16 ProEzreal: 인센
01:17 Neoskylove: ㅇㅋ
01:17 ProEzreal: 00:18:807 (2,3) - 담요 부탁드립니다
01:17 ProEzreal: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:17 Neoskylove: 블랭킷을 노린건 아닌데
01:18 ProEzreal: 00:25:082 (3) - 여기는 휘슬이
01:18 ProEzreal: 일부러 하신건가요
01:18 Neoskylove: ?
01:18 Neoskylove: 없는데요
01:19 Neoskylove: 00:25:082 - 머리에 넣은거라면
01:19 Neoskylove: 일부러 한거긴 한데
01:19 Neoskylove: 몸통에는 없는듯하네요
01:19 ProEzreal: 01:13:121 (1,2,3,4) - 이거 리듬보단
01:19 ProEzreal: 패턴이 약간
01:19 ProEzreal: 음
01:20 ProEzreal: 플레이에는 약간 이상할듯
01:20 Neoskylove: 이거 저 플레이할때는 큰 문제 못봤는데
01:20 Neoskylove: 나중에 오는 모딩에 걸리면 고쳐볼게요
01:21 ProEzreal: 님
01:21 Neoskylove: ?
01:22 ProEzreal: bg 1920x1200 짜리 구해보세요
01:22 Neoskylove: 넵
01:22 Neoskylove: 끝?
01:22 ProEzreal: 음
01:22 ProEzreal: 일단은
01:22 ProEzreal: 끝인듯
01:22 Neoskylove: 로그 올려주세염
01:22 ProEzreal: 넴
posted

Gaia wrote:

moemoe4

[general]
a lot of missed snares/other hitsounds so i recommend u recheck them

[Easy]
00:21:748 (4,5,1) - could flow nicer imo, http://puu.sh/sgxMH/24dfdee210.jpg
00:32:337 (1,2) - try this I don't sure about this, I think Now is better.
00:35:474 (1) - soft finish? also the shape is kinda x.x
01:06:062 (2) - 01:06:846 (3,4) - some misplaced normal samplesets?
01:24:101 (5) - inconsistent NC

[Normal]
00:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - should share the same rhythm
00:33:513 (3) - finish on sliderend 00:35:474 (1) - soft finish
00:37:239 (5,6,7,1) - hmm flow, would help if u shifted everything to the right?
00:39:199 (2) - personal opinion but would be nice if you didnt skip the snare herechanged another pattern
00:46:454 (3) - circle 1/1?
00:51:748 (2) - normal sampleset on head
00:56:454 (5) - delete?
00:59:003 (4) - normal sampleset
01:00:964 (2) - finish on endI couldn't hear finish sound.
01:22:141 (2,3,4) - changed another pattern
01:27:239 (1) - hmm these overlaps at the beginning/end might not be very beginner friendly, might wanna check with someone else to be sure thoconsider it

[Hard]
00:04:101 (1,2,3,4) - for consistent rhythming No
00:37:043 (1) - u can try moving this down (and maybe get blanketed) for better flowNo

could use some more jumps at certain stressed parts i.e. 00:04:101 (1) - 00:16:650 (1) - 00:35:474 (1) - fixed only 00:35:474 (1) - , don't need to emphasize others imo.

[Insane]
00:12:533 (3) - doesnt flow well :xI think It's Not bad...
00:20:376 (4) - move right for better flow^
00:35:474 (1) - not sure if intentional but flow would rather want this to be on the left aaChanged other way
01:20:964 (1,2,3,1) - whys this part spaced out so much compared to the rest of your patterns?
01:22:337 (1) - also rhythm, try not to use so many 1/1s in insane, u want to have a more dense map than hard

megumi maji megami ww gl/

No comment= fixed
Thanks for mod!
posted
Hello,

General
  1. Add combo colors.


Insane
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The snare here asks for a ctrl+G, cause on 00:00:572 (3,5) - you have loud beats, that could fit a kickslider.
00:12:337 (2,5) - explain me the difference between those 2 spacing, like 5 is so huge compared to 2, and it's the same beat
00:20:180 (3) - more spacing for clap + voice emphasis pls
00:21:356 (1,3) - 1/4 please ...
00:25:082 (3) - can you nerf the curve ? feels ugy imo here
00:37:043 (1) - rip clap on slider end
00:43:317 (1) - make this a reverse maybe?
really weird spacing in this diff

that's all
gl
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From #modreqs doing m4m.

Insane
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00:01:552 (2,3,4) - While the triple could be justified to exaggerate the beat here, it's not a very strong one, so I suggest mapping this part differently. I suggest deleting 2, and placing a slider on the white tick after 2 that ends on 5.
01:04:101 (2) - I suggest mapping to the vocals here. (2 3/4 sliders) because this part's kinda lame for how intense the song is getting right now.
01:05:278 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 notes isn't very good because the slider moves slower than the player's snapping. I suggest moving 2 here: y:408 x:292 At least somewhere around here, and you'll get where I'm going.
01:27:239 (1) - Since this slider started on a vocal, I suggest ending it off here instead for consistency.


Hard
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01:27:239 (1) - All I have to say about this diff, and it's completely subjective. Just like in the Insane, I suggest ending this off with the vocals.


Normal
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00:07:827 (2,3) - I know this is a normal, but I don't see any reason for this note to not be snapped like the rest are.
01:28:611 - ;)


Easy
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01:28:611 - ;)


I couldn't find much for the easier 3 diffs, mainly because they were already well mapped. Good luck.
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[Easy]
00:09:984 (4,1) - Consider trying to move note placements here, since you don't want to move 4, you can move 1 to look more visually appealing. NC-ing 4 is also an option but it would still look somewhat awkward (you would have to remove the NC at 00:10:376 - if you wanted to NC 4 though)
00:22:925 (1,2) - Small detail, you could make these the same shape (copy paste 1 and reflect it) so that way it's nice an symmetrical
00:35:474 (1) - Maybe use soft finish here? The drum finish doesn't exactly capture the intensity of the transition between the somewhat fast part to the slow part
01:04:886 (4,1,2,3,4) - Maybe try something like in the box below. Currently when the vocals say "mawaru" it doesn't feel very distinct from the previous measure. This would also apply to the second time this verse comes up.

01:27:239 (3) - Would be better to end at 01:28:611 - in my opinion, that's when the vocals end and I can't really hear anything distinctive after that point

[Normal]
00:00:180 (1,2,1) - For here I would try a rhythm like below. Considering that you use quite a lot of 1/2 in the Hard diff it can also serve to balance out the set as a whole. Making 2 circles instead of the slider help further accentuate the drums on those beats.

00:09:984 (5,1) - I still suggest NCing 5 instead of 1 though, the follow points make for an awkward transition
00:22:925 - This section (from this inherited section to the start of the next) feels a lot more dense than the section before it. You may want to balance out the diff a bit by making the section before a little more dense
01:27:239 (1) - Same thing with the ending as the Easy diff

[Hard]
00:21:356 (1,2,3) - I feel that this should have a little bit of a jump to it, it's the transition from a vocal section to another vocal section with heavy emphasis on the downbeat, it deserves a little bit more than the usual spacing that you have
00:22:141 (6) - If possible, try to find a way to make 00:22:337 - clickable. The beat is pretty strong and it feels weird that it only lands on a slider end
01:27:239 (1) - same

[Insane]
00:21:356 (1,2) - Make sure you hitsound the slider end of 1 and 2 with a normal sampleset, this goes for other diffs as well
00:29:003 (6) - Could put drum clap here
00:35:474 (1) - This is kinda just a thing for all diffs that I only am going to point out on this diff and the easy lol, soft finish works better here because drum finish doesn't exactly capture the intensity of the transition
01:02:925 (3) - 01:04:101 (2,3) - Are you sure you don't mean soft whistle? You only use drum whistle here?
01:27:239 (1) - Slider end thing

That's about it, the hard was pretty nice. Make sure you go over your hitsounds again though, there are a few inconsistencies and a few things you could add to make it much more enjoyable to hear~
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Hey

I strongly suggest stack leniency of difficulties other than Insane to be switched higher, as new players are confused when notes stack. default level of 7 is recommended.

[Insane]
00:21:356 - can add one finish here. same to other diffs.
01:03:709 (1,2) - blanket will look better and play better
01:02:141 (1,2) - ^
01:10:768 (3,4,5,6) - make a perfect diamond plz.
01:21:945 (2,3,1) - flow can be improved. explanation: as the box below shows, the absurd change of flow interrupts player's mind.

The solution can be in two ways, one is to break it completely:

the other is to make it smoother:

01:27:239 (1) - can absolutely have better shape ah.

[Normal]
01:27:239 (1) - impov the slider is hard to read. better make the two loops at the start and at the end larger.

Great mapset. Good luck~
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[General]
  1. you missed a space in your song title. it should be "Colorful. (Anime Ver.)"
  2. 00:01:748 - 00:02:533 - 00:04:101 - 00:04:886 - 00:05:670 - dont understand why there are whistles here that are on nothing particular. at the same time you leave out whistles at 00:21:356 - 00:21:748 - 00:22:141 - on that synth which you actually already have hitsounded previously at 00:03:317 - 00:03:709 - ... -
  3. 00:35:474 (1) - drum-finish 00:41:748 (1) - soft-finish. intentional o: ?
  4. 01:01:748 - how about normal-finish here, gives pretty good wooosh-sound imo :D
  5. 01:02:925 - (01:03:121 -) 01:04:494 - (01:04:690 - ) drum whistels here 01:15:474 - (01:15:670 - ) 01:17:043 - (01:17:239 - ) soft whistles here? you sure?
  6. 01:06:062 - hitnormal should be on 01:06:454 -
  7. 01:06:062 - also misses a whistle on sliderhead if compared with 01:18:611 -
  8. 01:20:964 (1) - whistle on sliderhead?

[Easy]
good, nothing to say here
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2) two things here:
    first of all, "sick" circling motion, why is it always rotating clockwise >.< ?
    second its has the most complex rhythm in difficulty making it harder than the kiai time. there are a lot of syncoped sliders like 00:21:552 (5,6,7) - 00:27:827 (5,6) - 00:37:239 (5) - ... - which you almost never have in the [Hard] (most of syncopes there are 3/2+3/2+1/2 rhythms). so i guess this part is too hard or the kiai too easy ~~

[Hard]
good, nothing to say
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this plays so akward. the drum is so loud you cant just mix circles and sliders here without following it. right now 00:00:180 (1) - is on two strong drum sounds, 00:00:376 (2) - on weak drums, 00:00:572 (3) - strong 00:00:670 (4) - weak 00:00:768 (5) - strong 00:00:866 (6) - weak and that makes absolutely no sense and is just weird so play. i suggest you to use something with circle+circle+slider+slider+slider, which allows you to click all strong drum kicks and at the same time it also separates them niceley giving each drum-kick a nice jump-feel. alternatively maybe use something with slider+circle+circle+slider+slider so that all the strong drum kicks are on sliders.
  2. 00:22:925 (1,2) - 00:24:494 (1,2) - how about putting circle first and then the slider? that way the guitar-sound on 00:23:317 - 00:23:905 - would both time be on sliderends with give them a nice feeling. altough i believe you propably wont apply this change, but if you do consider changing this for 00:24:494 (1,2) - 00:11:945 (1,2) - as well so its consistent ...or maybe even then just keep it like that for variety :p
  3. 00:37:435 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g'ed rhythm so the strong drum beats are both times on sliders ? 00:43:709 (2,3,4) - bascially like here
  4. 01:27:239 (1) - slider shape sucks balls D: . either make it like this http://puu.sh/swdNA/9ab5318ed2.jpg and change sv to 0.62 or make sth nice like in the other diffs

[]
good map set
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Hi! Quick check here.

smal

General

  1. No Custom combo colors atm. I think the map could use some milder/lighter colors since it'll fit the bg better.

Easy

  1. No problems here

Normal

  1. 00:21:356 (4) - NC here? Since this is quite an unique segment in the song it can be made clearer with a NC.
  2. 01:27:239 (1) - The sliderend is in the middle of the slider path, this could be problematic regarding the "every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end" RC rule. But I'm no expert on this so.. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Hard

  1. 00:22:337 - this beat here is quite strong. This makes clicking 00:22:533 (7) - also slightly more awkward since players would most likely click on this beat 00:22:337 - instead. Maybe a rhythm like http://puu.sh/swz0v/ec2a7f1e5c.jpg would be more suitable?
  2. 00:33:513 (3,1) - not sure about what this spacing is emphasizing. Since 00:33:905 (1) - is quite a soft beat and the strong beat is on 00:33:513 (3) - 's sliderend. Consider changing the pattern to appropriately map the strong beat?
  3. 00:36:846 (4,1) - quite minor but DS to 1.3x

Insane

  1. Consider increasing Stack Leniency to at least 4 for easier reading on the double taps here.
  2. 00:22:337 (1) - You skipped a beat here on 00:22:533 - which you did map in the Hard difficulty. Consider mapping this as well for consistency sake.
  3. 01:13:513 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe equalize the spacing here. I don't see a reason to space 01:13:513 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - further than 01:13:905 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - .


Short mod, since it's a pretty consistent and straightforward map.

Good Luck o/
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Heya~
M4M upon your request
Metadata
  1. Apparently, the artist prefers her name to be romanized as "Miku Sawai" >>source<<
  2. Eh the title should be "カラフル。(AnimeVer.)" >>source<<
Easy and Normal look totally fine by me. I can be super nazi and nitpick stuff, but i don't think you will like it xd. ee w/e here're some stuff to make this mod look longer.
nazi Easy
  1. 00:00:180 (1,2,1) - deformed triangle is not a good start xdd
  2. 00:16:650 (1,2,1,2) - imo this rhythm fits better. Explanation in the box below
    collapsed text
    Imo the vocal at 00:17:239 is kinda similar to 00:20:376 and should be represented by a long slider. 00:18:219 (2) - on the other hand, has that tiny bit of vocal at 00:19:199.
  3. 00:20:572 (2,3,4,5) - this curve defnitely can be improved xd. ea. make the curvature more constant etc.
  4. 00:35:474 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - idk this may be too repetitive. if you care about this, i'd change 00:38:611 (1,2) - to this
and I have nothing to say to normal lol
Hard
  1. The thing that bugs me is there're no jumps in the kiai @_@. Well, maybe some like 01:09:984 (1,3,4) - but they don't fit too well imo. There're a lot of oppurtunities for jumps like 01:05:278 (1,3) -. I'm just a bit curious about your choice here
  2. 01:27:239 (1) - ay where did the slider art go?
    kinda literally all lol
Insane
  1. 00:14:690 (5,6) - actually this is the only large jump you have and it really sticks out lol. Please reduce it if you can. This is not even repeated on 00:26:846 (4,5,6,7) -
  2. 00:19:788 (1,4) - no jumps on these two? ;w;
  3. 00:21:945 (3,1) - actually it's a bit weird when you consider the DS here. imo the distance should not decrease xd. something like this may be better here
  4. 00:56:062 (2) - ay random jump detected. If there's no reason for the jump here, please delete it ;w;. the diff is not jumpy at all, so jumps really stick out.
  5. 01:05:866 (2,3) - idk imo the jump should be on 01:06:062 (3) - not 01:05:866 (2) - to be consistent with 01:05:278 (1) - and (3) is more intense.
  6. 01:18:415 (2,3) - ^
  7. 01:13:513 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why the distance is not equal lol. They're very similar, so a constant DS should make more sense. 01:12:729 (5) - has already faded out at that point imo; no need to stack there
Should be all
Good luck~
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모딩에 대한 키워드로 저한테 요청해서 왔습니다.


일단 테스트 플레이를 해보았는데 플레이하는 중에 아무런 이상 없었어요.


[공통쪽이예요.]
00:21:356 - 이곳 비트가 밋밋해서 뭔가 부족하다 하는 느낌이 들었어요. 무언가를 추가해보는 건 어떨까 싶어요.

[Easy]
01:27:239 (3) - 다른 난이도에는 마지막 슬라이더에 뉴콤보가 적용되어 있는데 얘만 적용이 되어있지 않네요.

[Hard]
01:13:513 (1) - NC넣기?

[Insane]
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 초반에 약간 애먹는 패턴인가 싶습니다...두개의 슬라이더를 하나로 하거나 하면 뭔가 괜찮아질까 합니다.
00:41:356 (7,8,1) - DS 수정요청 // 00:47:631 (7,8,1) - 이것도?
01:00:964 - 슬라이더 속력이 갑자기 확 올라가는 것을 좀 수정하시면...


01:23:905 (6,7,1) - 밑에처럼?


01:27:239 (1) - 가사의 흐름에 맞춰서 슬라이더 모양을 살짝 바꿔보시는 건 어떠신가 싶어요.




/me 행동불능
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Hey, I'm terribly sorry about being this late, but I'm currently really busy irl ;;

Alright, here's the mod!

[Insane]
Now this is just a suggestion, but you should try to reduce the AR to some decimal AR, 9 seems a tiny bit too high for a map this simple
00:29:199 (1,2) - This sounds wrong to me, the "すく" starts on the white tick, where the first slider ends, but then there's another weird 1/1 slider, which also ends when new vocals begin. I'd also recommend to map a 1/2 reverse slider here 00:30:180 -
00:34:297 (4) - NC?
00:35:082 (10) - NC?
00:40:964 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you listen closely, the beginning of this stream is overmapped
01:13:905 (5) - NC?
01:27:239 (1) - Personal suggestion: make "なのに" clickable by ending the slider earlier and mapping 3 circles, or try circle - circle - slider

[Hard]
Looks mostly fine to me

[Normal]
00:18:807 (4) - I'd split it up like this, sounds better to me
01:11:356 - I'd try to map this beat
01:27:239 (1) - Make the circles at the beginning and end of the slider wider so it's more readable

[Easy]
01:27:239 (3) - Last curve of this is pretty ugly imo

Good luck with your map!
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Lulu- wrote:

Hey, I'm terribly sorry about being this late, but I'm currently really busy irl ;;

M4M Mod placeholder! (Mod should be coming in about 10-12 hours)

Sorry for late, too.
I'll mod your maps asap.

RyoKazuka wrote:

modding after all is applied

Okay.
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Sotarks wrote:

Hello,

General
  1. Add combo colors.


Insane
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The snare here asks for a ctrl+G, cause on 00:00:572 (3,5) - you have loud beats, that could fit a kickslider.change other way
00:12:337 (2,5) - explain me the difference between those 2 spacing, like 5 is so huge compared to 2, and it's the same beatidk, changed other way
00:20:180 (3) - more spacing for clap + voice emphasis plsconsider it
00:21:356 (1,3) - 1/4 please ...thisnk 1/8 is right? fix it others are say.
00:25:082 (3) - can you nerf the curve ? feels ugy imo hereNo, It's okay, I think.
00:37:043 (1) - rip clap on slider end
00:43:317 (1) - make this a reverse maybe??
really weird spacing in this diff

that's all
gl

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs doing m4m.

Insane
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00:01:552 (2,3,4) - While the triple could be justified to exaggerate the beat here, it's not a very strong one, so I suggest mapping this part differently. I suggest deleting 2, and placing a slider on the white tick after 2 that ends on 5.No
01:04:101 (2) - I suggest mapping to the vocals here. (2 3/4 sliders) because this part's kinda lame for how intense the song is getting right now.already mapped?
01:05:278 (1,2) - The flow between these 2 notes isn't very good because the slider moves slower than the player's snapping. I suggest moving 2 here: y:408 x:292 At least somewhere around here, and you'll get where I'm going.I think it's okay.
01:27:239 (1) - Since this slider started on a vocal, I suggest ending it off here instead for consistency.think about it.


Hard
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01:27:239 (1) - All I have to say about this diff, and it's completely subjective. Just like in the Insane, I suggest ending this off with the vocals.same with insane


Normal
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00:07:827 (2,3) - I know this is a normal, but I don't see any reason for this note to not be snapped like the rest are.
01:28:611 - ;)^


Easy
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01:28:611 - ;)^

Battle wrote:

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[Easy]
00:09:984 (4,1) - Consider trying to move note placements here, since you don't want to move 4, you can move 1 to look more visually appealing. NC-ing 4 is also an option but it would still look somewhat awkward (you would have to remove the NC at 00:10:376 - if you wanted to NC 4 though)NC with 2 downbeats.
00:22:925 (1,2) - Small detail, you could make these the same shape (copy paste 1 and reflect it) so that way it's nice an symmetrical
00:35:474 (1) - Maybe use soft finish here? The drum finish doesn't exactly capture the intensity of the transition between the somewhat fast part to the slow part
01:04:886 (4,1,2,3,4) - Maybe try something like in the box below. Currently when the vocals say "mawaru" it doesn't feel very distinct from the previous measure. This would also apply to the second time this verse comes up.No. My pattern looks okay now.

01:27:239 (3) - Would be better to end at 01:28:611 - in my opinion, that's when the vocals end and I can't really hear anything distinctive after that pointIdk, I mapped with downbeat, I 'll think about it,.

[Normal]
00:00:180 (1,2,1) - For here I would try a rhythm like below. Considering that you use quite a lot of 1/2 in the Hard diff it can also serve to balance out the set as a whole. Making 2 circles instead of the slider help further accentuate the drums on those beats.No. I don't want to make 3 clickable notes.

00:09:984 (5,1) - I still suggest NCing 5 instead of 1 though, the follow points make for an awkward transitionNC with 2 downbeats.
00:22:925 - This section (from this inherited section to the start of the next) feels a lot more dense than the section before it. You may want to balance out the diff a bit by making the section before a little more denseSorry, I couldn';t understanded it.....
01:27:239 (1) - Same thing with the ending as the Easy diffme, too

[Hard]
00:21:356 (1,2,3) - I feel that this should have a little bit of a jump to it, it's the transition from a vocal section to another vocal section with heavy emphasis on the downbeat, it deserves a little bit more than the usual spacing that you have
00:22:141 (6) - If possible, try to find a way to make 00:22:337 - clickable. The beat is pretty strong and it feels weird that it only lands on a slider end
01:27:239 (1) - same^

[Insane]
00:21:356 (1,2) - Make sure you hitsound the slider end of 1 and 2 with a normal sampleset, this goes for other diffs as well
00:29:003 (6) - Could put drum clap here
00:35:474 (1) - This is kinda just a thing for all diffs that I only am going to point out on this diff and the easy lol, soft finish works better here because drum finish doesn't exactly capture the intensity of the transition
01:02:925 (3) - 01:04:101 (2,3) - Are you sure you don't mean soft whistle? You only use drum whistle here?
01:27:239 (1) - Slider end thing

That's about it, the hard was pretty nice. Make sure you go over your hitsounds again though, there are a few inconsistencies and a few things you could add to make it much more enjoyable to hear~

I couldn't find much for the easier 3 diffs, mainly because they were already well mapped. Good luck.


No comment=fixed.
Thanks for mod~
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phaZ wrote:


[Easy]
good, nothing to say here
[Normal]
  1. 00:19:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2) two things here:
    first of all, "sick" circling motion, why is it always rotating clockwise >.< ?But really hard to change it....
    second its has the most complex rhythm in difficulty making it harder than the kiai time. there are a lot of syncoped sliders like 00:21:552 (5,6,7) - 00:27:827 (5,6) - 00:37:239 (5) - ... - which you almost never have in the [Hard] (most of syncopes there are 3/2+3/2+1/2 rhythms). so i guess this part is too hard or the kiai too easy ~~fixed some things.

[Hard]
good, nothing to say
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this plays so akward. the drum is so loud you cant just mix circles and sliders here without following it. right now 00:00:180 (1) - is on two strong drum sounds, 00:00:376 (2) - on weak drums, 00:00:572 (3) - strong 00:00:670 (4) - weak 00:00:768 (5) - strong 00:00:866 (6) - weak and that makes absolutely no sense and is just weird so play. i suggest you to use something with circle+circle+slider+slider+slider, which allows you to click all strong drum kicks and at the same time it also separates them niceley giving each drum-kick a nice jump-feel. alternatively maybe use something with slider+circle+circle+slider+slider so that all the strong drum kicks are on sliders.
  2. 00:22:925 (1,2) - 00:24:494 (1,2) - how about putting circle first and then the slider? that way the guitar-sound on 00:23:317 - 00:23:905 - would both time be on sliderends with give them a nice feeling. altough i believe you propably wont apply this change, but if you do consider changing this for 00:24:494 (1,2) - 00:11:945 (1,2) - as well so its consistent ...or maybe even then just keep it like that for variety :pNo. Now pattern looks better for me.
  3. 00:37:435 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g'ed rhythm so the strong drum beats are both times on sliders ? 00:43:709 (2,3,4) - bascially like here
  4. 01:27:239 (1) - slider shape sucks balls D: . either make it like this http://puu.sh/swdNA/9ab5318ed2.jpg and change sv to 0.62 or make sth nice like in the other diffs ?

[]
good map set

CrystilonZ wrote:

Heya~
M4M upon your request
Metadata
  1. Apparently, the artist prefers her name to be romanized as "Miku Sawai" >>source<<
  2. Eh the title should be "カラフル。(AnimeVer.)" >>source<<
Easy and Normal look totally fine by me. I can be super nazi and nitpick stuff, but i don't think you will like it xd. ee w/e here're some stuff to make this mod look longer.
nazi Easy
  1. 00:00:180 (1,2,1) - deformed triangle is not a good start xddIt's okay
  2. 00:16:650 (1,2,1,2) - imo this rhythm fits better. Explanation in the box belowthink about it
    collapsed text
    Imo the vocal at 00:17:239 is kinda similar to 00:20:376 and should be represented by a long slider. 00:18:219 (2) - on the other hand, has that tiny bit of vocal at 00:19:199.
  3. 00:20:572 (2,3,4,5) - this curve defnitely can be improved xd. ea. make the curvature more constant etc.^
  4. 00:35:474 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - idk this may be too repetitive. if you care about this, i'd change 00:38:611 (1,2) - to this
and I have nothing to say to normal lol
Hard
  1. The thing that bugs me is there're no jumps in the kiai @_@. Well, maybe some like 01:09:984 (1,3,4) - but they don't fit too well imo. There're a lot of oppurtunities for jumps like 01:05:278 (1,3) -. I'm just a bit curious about your choice here
  2. 01:27:239 (1) - ay where did the slider art go?lol.....I'll fix soon. maybe
    kinda literally all lol
Insane
  1. 00:14:690 (5,6) - actually this is the only large jump you have and it really sticks out lol. Please reduce it if you can. This is not even repeated on 00:26:846 (4,5,6,7) -00:14:297 (3,4) - make same with, this, I'll think about it.
  2. 00:19:788 (1,4) - no jumps on these two? ;w;
  3. 00:21:945 (3,1) - actually it's a bit weird when you consider the DS here. imo the distance should not decrease xd. something like this may be better hereDs looks randomly because of SV changing.
  4. 00:56:062 (2) - ay random jump detected. If there's no reason for the jump here, please delete it ;w;. the diff is not jumpy at all, so jumps really stick out.ctrl g
  5. 01:05:866 (2,3) - idk imo the jump should be on 01:06:062 (3) - not 01:05:866 (2) - to be consistent with 01:05:278 (1) - and (3) is more intense.No
  6. 01:18:415 (2,3) - ^
  7. 01:13:513 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why the distance is not equal lol. They're very similar, so a constant DS should make more sense. 01:12:729 (5) - has already faded out at that point imo; no need to stack there
Should be all
Good luck~

Flower wrote:

Hey

I strongly suggest stack leniency of difficulties other than Insane to be switched higher, as new players are confused when notes stack. default level of 7 is recommended.

[Insane]
00:21:356 - can add one finish here. same to other diffs.
01:03:709 (1,2) - blanket will look better and play betterIDk, I don't want to make blanket,
01:02:141 (1,2) - ^
01:10:768 (3,4,5,6) - make a perfect diamond plz. fixed little bit
01:21:945 (2,3,1) - flow can be improved. explanation: as the box below shows, the absurd change of flow interrupts player's mind.second one.

The solution can be in two ways, one is to break it completely:

the other is to make it smoother:

01:27:239 (1) - can absolutely have better shape ah.

[Normal]
01:27:239 (1) - impov the slider is hard to read. better make the two loops at the start and at the end larger.

Great mapset. Good luck~

S A V E R Y wrote:

모딩에 대한 키워드로 저한테 요청해서 왔습니다.


일단 테스트 플레이를 해보았는데 플레이하는 중에 아무런 이상 없었어요.


[공통쪽이예요.]
00:21:356 - 이곳 비트가 밋밋해서 뭔가 부족하다 하는 느낌이 들었어요. 무언가를 추가해보는 건 어떨까 싶어요.이미 있는데요

[Easy]
01:27:239 (3) - 다른 난이도에는 마지막 슬라이더에 뉴콤보가 적용되어 있는데 얘만 적용이 되어있지 않네요.노말을 지웠어야....

[Hard]
01:13:513 (1) - NC넣기?2다운비트 끊어서 뉴콤을 냈어여. 일단 이지 노말에서 뉴콤보의 일관성을 끊어버리고 싶지 않네요.

[Insane]
00:00:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 초반에 약간 애먹는 패턴인가 싶습니다...두개의 슬라이더를 하나로 하거나 하면 뭔가 괜찮아질까 합니다.다른방법이지만 바꿨습니다
00:41:356 (7,8,1) - DS 수정요청 // 00:47:631 (7,8,1) - 이것도?오버랩을 억지로 피하기 위한 점프입니다
01:00:964 - 슬라이더 속력이 갑자기 확 올라가는 것을 좀 수정하시면...걔가 뭔가 빨라져야 할것 같은 느낌이 많이 딥니다. 일단 생각해보겠습니다


01:23:905 (6,7,1) - 밑에처럼?딱히 별 차이 없는것 같아 보이는데요. 원래 3연타는 스택하던 사람이라 그냥 그대로 두겠습니다


01:27:239 (1) - 가사의 흐름에 맞춰서 슬라이더 모양을 살짝 바꿔보시는 건 어떠신가 싶어요.바꾸긴 핶는데 가사의 흐름에 맞춰서 매핑하는건 너무 어렵....




/me 행동불능이러려고 모딩했나 자괴감들고 괴로워...

Lulu- wrote:

Hey, I'm terribly sorry about being this late, but I'm currently really busy irl ;;

Alright, here's the mod!

[Insane]
Now this is just a suggestion, but you should try to reduce the AR to some decimal AR, 9 seems a tiny bit too high for a map this simple
00:29:199 (1,2) - This sounds wrong to me, the "すく" starts on the white tick, where the first slider ends, but then there's another weird 1/1 slider, which also ends when new vocals begin. I'd also recommend to map a 1/2 reverse slider here 00:30:180 - No, this pattern could be better for play, 00:30:768 (1,2,3) - 00:32:337 (1,2,3,4) - etc....
00:34:297 (4) - NC?x
00:35:082 (10) - NC?x
00:40:964 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you listen closely, the beginning of this stream is overmappedNo, I think they have vocals.
01:13:905 (5) - NC?x
01:27:239 (1) - Personal suggestion: make "なのに" clickable by ending the slider earlier and mapping 3 circles, or try circle - circle - sliderNo, but they don't have any drums.

[Hard]
Looks mostly fine to me

[Normal]
00:18:807 (4) - I'd split it up like this, sounds better to me00:16:650 (1,2) - make same pattern with this
01:11:356 - I'd try to map this beatNo, It makes too long 1/2 terms.
01:27:239 (1) - Make the circles at the beginning and end of the slider wider so it's more readable

[Easy]
01:27:239 (3) - Last curve of this is pretty ugly imo

Good luck with your map!

RyoKazuka wrote:

modding after all is applied

all things were applied
Thanks for mod all
posted
can you try fixing the metadata provided by phaZ and CrystilonZ first?
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thx for reply
01:27:239 (1) - insane: cute now >w<

RyoKazuka wrote:

can you try fixing the metadata provided by phaZ and CrystilonZ first?

and yeah this^^
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